If you need to post your bios, do so now.

And yes, if you require help, you will get assistance. You will get constructive criticism anyway.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Ok Cosmic....here goes nothing

Antifarea, third planet of the Anirealm system.Dark, vast and full of danger, AntiFarea has become a haven for smugglers, wanted men, and the AntiLite Market. It seemed that AntiFareas destiny was to be the heart of a vile rebellious beast. Order was obsolete on this dank planet. Its inhabitants traveled from every inch of the galaxy, which included places I never heard of. It would be this very place where evil came to hide their troubles then leave to create more.
I was just a little kid, no more than twelve and had been living on the streets for nearly four years. I can still remember waking up each morning to the site of radiation filters, changing their cycles and releasing the poisonous gasses into the air by the gallons. It was about that time each morning that I would start my self-appointed job. It had taken me three years to get it down right but I was finally one of the best pickpockets in the neighborhood where I lived. I had my fair share of close encounters and my fair share of punishment for my crimes. To me, taking a few Antilian credits didn't seem as horrible as everyone else made it seem. There was more money slipping through the presidents' hands than any Galactic Bank in and around our solar system. It was hard keeping up with current events. Something was always changing; weather it was a new president promising peace and order, or even a new set of laws to follow. In either case the people never believed or followed much of the laws. The new presidents were usually paid to just sit there and if they opened their mouths they would have to worry about talking anymore.
I had just finished buying myself something to eat that morning, with the money I got from my latest pawn, when I turned the corner and came face to face with Xelqin. Xelqin never liked his name, on the streets he was known as KnightAura because he seemed to drift in and out with the radiation currents. We had always thought that he was some kind of species no one on AntiFarea has heard of, even though he looks perfectly human. He on the other hand had always tried to get me killed or worse, arrested because he thought that if I were gone he would take over the neighborhood. His intentions never made much sense to me.
I was never the one to act like a leader because that city meant nothing to me. The children that lived in our sector followed me mainly, I thought, because I had a meal almost everyday. We ended up making a small gang, KnightAura managed to include himself but I didn't care. They seemed desperate, and did everything they could to keep together. I remember a couple of times when KnightFire and KnightMare would break into the confinement area that was built by the "police"(members of the AntiLite market who are paid to keep anyone and anything out of their business) to rescue some of the kids on our block. The crimes were small, such as pickpocket the wrong person, steal some Antilian Jurdice (a tasty snack on our planet), or wonder off into a bad sector that most stayed away from. Whatever the case may have been, the Antilites punished us anyway. That's how things worked for us. We would steal, get caught, then escape. That was my way of life, until one normal day for me turned into one an unlucky day of events.

Dont kill me to badly.
KnightWind
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

Thanks alot Cosmic.

I didn't know if I should have continued the bio or not, but this sounds good enough for me. I'll see where I need the corrections and then I guess that will make me one step closer to going up ^

KnightWind
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

The way you ended it was good. It'll make for some very interesting character development stories.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Awesome Bio Knight, I loved it.  And is that Vincent from FFVII in your avatar?  Because I don't think that I have seen that particular one before...
 
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Squall Lionheart
Lance Corporal
*DarkDragoons*
+ Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
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TRP/LCPL Squall/2SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR] [EWI]

Emerging from the darkness of the room, the sunlight shining brightly over head, he understands that his time was well spent and the he must not feel sorrow for moving on because he will be doing great things one day...


I'm in Lancer.
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

 
  Name: Darr-Rann
 
  Age: 21
 
  Gender: Male
 
  Place of Birth: Corellia
 
  Physical Description: Blue eyes, Dark blond hair, 5'11", Strong build, Has scar running down beside his left eye from a fight with a New Republic officer, Has a Imperial logo tattoed on his right shoulder.

 
  History: Born on the planet of Corellia, he was a supporter of the Empire (The galaxy needs a powerful government). He despises the Rebels and their brutal tactics (Destroying the Death stars and a third of the fleet, barbaric). He joined a republic resistance but then later joined the ranks of the Imperial Stormtrooper Corps. He quickly completed his basic training and recieved his LoR. He is planning to become a Combat Medic, and is hoping to join the Lancer Squad, to fight along side his friend Yillis, who recruited him to the Corps.

  Personality: He Is usually even tempered, but will fight Republic Soldiers and those who appose the empire with a passion. He is friendly to other Imperials and is dedicated to his career.

 

Just an update...

Working on Drill's site. Coming along nicely methinks. I'll put up a url to show you guys how the site is coming along once I get everything in order.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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A definate improvement over the last. The one thing I did notice was this:

"Instead of just fleeing to forests that she usualy flees to, she flees into the galaxy with it's milion stars and planets that graces Earth's nights on daily basis."

Other than that, it looks good. Great job.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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thanks, i corrected the mistake

Don't kill me for dropping in guys I just wanted to say hi.
Welcome everyone who enters Drill, Cos is a  cool SL

KnightWind
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

On forums like these I like to use astrics (spelling wrong I think) *, to indicate actions.

*Proudly flaunts his novice post ranking*
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

Name:  Tay'Ren Vai

Height:  2m
Weight:  100 kg
Eye: Brown (dark)
Hair: Brown (dark)
Age: 23 standard years

Physical Features:  Tay'Ren has the traditional scarring of a Zabrak male on his face.  His horns peek out from his shaved head, and his eyes seem sunken from his experience.  His skin is pale, grayish, and seems to sag from his face.

Personality:  Tay'Ren is silent and stoic, preferring to act rather than talk.  Due to the underlying racism of the Imperial ranks, he avoids other people for fear of their hatred or dislike.  He likes combat, if his training is any indicator, and does not shy from a fight, as his training record shows.

History:  Tay'Ren comes from Iridonia, and his family were a line of well-to-do merchants. He grew up comfortably, without having what people would consider "a lot," his parents would not allow extravagance, but he had what he needed.  He was happy, safe, and most importantly, sheltered from the racism of the new Empire.  He had two brothers, whom he idolized, but they ended up as fighters and delinquents and later fell in with the Rebellion.  They were both killed within months.  He learned to hate the Rebels after that.

From the time he was six, he went to a mostly human school and did not get along well with the human students, learning anew of the racism some people felt.  He fought often and was sent to a military school.  It was slightly less than orthodox and he thrived there, where he was encouraged to fight to settle his problems.  He did, and he gained the respect of his teachers, both for his willingness to take his problems head-on, and his penchant for having excellent grades in any and every class he took, from strategy to combat training.

Due to his grades and test scores there, he got a free ride to the Planetary Army Training Academy.  He stayed there for months, progressing quickly through the ranks of Officer Training.  His fellow Zabrak, whom he had not associated with due to his schooling, loved and respected him as an officer.  During his third year at the Planetary Academy, he was drafted into the Imperial Academy.  He lost his chances of being an officer on Iridonia, (if he had graduated, his commission could have been commuted) but he felt serving in the Imperial Army was the type of honor he could give it up for.

Sir Cosmic...i dont wish to seem pushy but  inever recived an e-mail for the squad u will be put in...forgive my rudeness sir...*salutes*
 
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all the enemies i have slain have not been in my name, but the norm of the emporer LONG LIVE THE EMPIRE

Very good, Tay. Well done.

And sorry about that, Trooper512. Thought I had done that a while ago.

Think I'm losing my head here. :P I'll place you in a squad immediatley.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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