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RE: Drill Squad
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February 21, 2005
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Revelation has been removed.
Aobee, wake up.  -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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February 21, 2005
8:05:18 PM
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My Profile:
Name: Raistlin Majerus Sadow
Age: 20
Height: 6'0
Hair: Brown, short, but styled.
Eyes, Light blue
Description: At 6'0, Raist is tall by human standards, but pales in comparison to other species in the galaxy. Despite his stature, Raist is rather agile, althought lanky. While he looks weak, his strength is hidden.
History:
Parents were murdered by the Rebellion. Raist became a mercenary at an early age, honing his skills with a blaster. As he got older, he joined the Imperial Academy and graduated at an unheard of age of 14. He commanded a few Escort Carriers before deciding that he preferred fighting on the ground to fighting in space. He enlisted with the Stormtrooper Corps.
Fav Weapon: Twin Blaster Pistols
Fav Melee Fighting Style: Echani
Fav Hand-to-Hand Fighting Style: Teras-Kasi.
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RE: Drill Squad
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February 21, 2005
9:38:08 PM
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you;ve been playing KotOR II havent you...  -----------------------
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CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
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RE: Drill Squad
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February 21, 2005
10:04:01 PM
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Well done.
At the request of Senior Sergeant Afyon, I will place you in Dark Dragoons when a spot is available (which should be shortly). -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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February 24, 2005
8:46:05 PM
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Aobee is going to be absent for a while. Has some real life situations to deal with. I am keeping him in Drill until he returns. -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 1, 2005
7:08:40 PM
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Here is the brief biography that I am to post in order to advance from drill.
Kormal Fa'ah is the son of Rebel freighter runners. Though he was under their protective care for over 15 years, he never saw much of them due to their busy schedules that involved smuggling goods for the Rebellion. This led to a life-long hatred for the Rebels that seemed insatiable.
He grew up on Ryloth, living alone in a manor payed for by the will of his grandfather on his father's side. This was a catalyst for a very independent nature except for a few orphanned Twi'leks whom he allowed to live with him as a substitute for real relatives. By his account, they were his relatives.
When Kormal hit the tender age of sixteen, he grew tired of the seemingly endless boredom on the planet, Ryloth. He opened the bank vault belonging to his parents, and with the funds jumped ship to Imperial Center. It was harder then he imagined, however.
It took five years, but Kormal Fa'ah has managed to become a stormtrooper. And his ambitions are high.
Kormal Fa'ah is a Twi'lek and, thus, has no hair. His skin is a light aquamarine, and the designs surrounding his lekku are in a circular, swooping formation, and are a dark shade of orange. He has no scars of any sort and no tattoos as well. His eyes are a deep pool of forest green. His face is long and mildly narrow. He is somewhat lanky and gangly, being of a more lean body type than a stout one. |
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 2, 2005
12:19:47 AM
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Well done. Although there are some things you should watch for in your writing "He has no scars of any sort and no tattoos as well." Should be "He has no scars or tattoos of any sort" or other variations of this. "As well" should have been replaced by "either".
I'm placing you in Raiders. -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 2, 2005
11:47:56 AM
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woot!
Of course I JUST re-wrote the squad story for the 3rd time to account for changes...
/me goes back and stars editing again. -----------------------
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CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
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BIO for JUSTICE
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March 9, 2005
4:33:00 PM
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eyes-brown
hair-black
age-65 standard yrs.
Justice has no distingusihing marks.
Justice was born in Vjun. This is a planet strong in the dark side. Justice's father abandoned him at birth. Justice has a pretty good temper, but does not like foolishness. He has joined the empire because he wants some adventure, even though he is growing in years.
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 10, 2005
12:57:37 AM
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ah, 65? -----------------------
Iron Horse Squad
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 10, 2005
1:10:57 AM
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Old man
How could what amounts to a senior citizen join the corps, hmm? And how the hell can you keep up with physical training? Anyways, it sounds like a challenge. Good luck, and...don't break any bones.
Guess our recruiters are getting desperate for manpower, or blind.
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 10, 2005
6:04:27 PM
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Not a bad bio, but I'm going to have you revise. While you're at it, really consider how you want your character to be.
Writing:
1) The vast majority of our activity revolves around writing, and that means writing well. Don't make your sentences so choppy, get them to flow more smoothly.
Character:
1)Cyanus has a point. It would be pretty difficult for me to see how an older man at the age of 65 would be able to keep up with the rest of the younger men and women in training. You'd be on a level playing field mentally, but due to your character's age, physical training will undoubtably take a toll on your character's body - possibly even slowing down a squad during a mission. If you want to continue with this older character, by all means do so. It would be a first that I've seen in The Vast Empire to have a 65-year-old Private. You must always keep in mind the age of your character in stories. Your character, for example, probably won't be marching for a mile, dodge enemy fire, and hurl himself into a ditch.
Anyway, consider what I have said before revising your biography. -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
8:18:24 AM
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Full Name: Sarius "TX-973" Dar'fell
Eye Color: One red, other green/blue mix
Hair Color: Red/black mix
Age: 28 Standard Years
Distinguishing Marks: One scar across right side of face, numerous battle scars on right arm (mechanical right arm)
Bio: Sarius "TX-973" Dar'fell, born on Aurora Prime, graduated from an Imperial Army Academy on Corellia at age 13, earning the callsign "TX-973." After hearing from his friend, Jack Nebulax, that the Vast Empire was the best organization in the galaxy, Jack recruited TX-973 into the Army, since Jack served in the Navy. Currently, TX-973 is in Drill Squad and is waiting to be placed in an active squad after his training is over.
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TX-973, Vast Empire Army
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
1:47:04 PM
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Cant serve the Army and the Navy at the same time Jack. Have to come up with a different bio. -----------------------
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"I'm the sheep that got lost, Madre." - John W. Creasy
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
1:58:09 PM
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Is that a little better? I changed my name to make it seem like I'm not Jack and I revised the bio. -----------------------
Private First Class TX-973, Vast Empire Army
TRP/PFC TX-973/Drill/Storm/Phoenix/Dragon/Osiris/VEA/VE [LoR]
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Petty Officer 2nd Class Jack Nebulax, Vast Empire Navy
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
2:00:24 PM
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I dont think they have an Imperial Academy on Corellia. It was never officially a part of the Empire, the Diktat has always been the government until it ceded into the Republic during the Centerpoint Crisis.....although I may be mistaken. -----------------------
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CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
"I'm the sheep that got lost, Madre." - John W. Creasy
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
2:01:31 PM
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I thought there was an Imperial Academy on Corellia. At least once, especially during the Empire's reign. -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
3:26:47 PM
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During the Thrawn Era? -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
3:35:34 PM
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Hi
I'm Eversor, i have black hair and brown eye, i'm 20 years old and i want serve the Empire. What can i do? |
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
3:40:09 PM
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i have forbidden my history!
History: I come from Nar Shadda, i was a policeman of this planet , when i was 19 years i went to Coruscant for enroll in the Army because i want to serve the Empire. I study in the academy and my experience help me often. Recently my parents were killed by a Hutt and i want the revenge.
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
4:11:31 PM
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What I meant to say when I was 13 I graduated from the Imperial Academy on Corellia. Since my character is 38, that means there is a 25-year gap. -----------------------
Private First Class TX-973, Vast Empire Army
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Petty Officer 2nd Class Jack Nebulax, Vast Empire Navy
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
4:41:59 PM
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I still don't think the Empire ever ruled over Corellia. In fact, the Empire didnt even exist for 25 years. Luke was like...16-18 in ANH, and he was "conceived" while the Old Republic still officially stood
Oh and dont ask me how Obi-wan went from Ewan McGregor to Sir Alec Guiness in 18 years... -----------------------
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"I'm the sheep that got lost, Madre." - John W. Creasy
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
7:05:26 PM
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Jack..Jack...the army? -----------------------
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- Squall Lionheart
- Lance Corporal -
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+ Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 13, 2005
8:21:43 PM
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Eversor, where are you from?
And TX, once you get everthing in order (bio wise), rewrite it with your revisions for clerification.
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 14, 2005
6:38:40 AM
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i come from Italy -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 14, 2005
2:22:21 PM
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Yes, Cosmic. Should I send it to you in an email, then? Or should I post it here?
(Darn it, forgot to switch to TX-973 again!)
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Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
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Jack Nebulax, Planetary Governor of Ullyr, Directorate Network (http://www.directorate.net/)
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 14, 2005
4:16:15 PM
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Coming from a wealthy family, Bronx Yillis really had no worries. That is no worries until the Rebel Alliance bombed his home city. Yillis was out flying around in his X-Wing at the time but when he got back he broke down. He knew that the rebels must have done this massacre because of the obvious sloppiness and how it wasn't thorough like the Empire. It would have made no sense for the Empire to bomb their own city either. Yillis vowed revenge on the rebel scum, and knew the only way was to join the Stormtrooper corps, because even though he knew how to fly, it wasn't his passion. Yillis took whatever funds he could find from his house and packed his E-11 blaster rifle and his M-434 DeathHammer Blaster Pistol and packed both his R2 Astromech Droid's away in his T-65B X-Wing Starfighter and headed off to the Stormtrooper Training Facilities on Tadath to see if he could get in. He did and is now currently resides in Drill Squadron, trying to live up to the standards of past legends, wanting the next order that comes from his superiors so he can serve the Empire to his fullest ability.
Physical Description:
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown, Short
Age: 24
Scars: Left Leg (childhood accident)
Tattoo: Imperial Insignia on Right Shoulder. (Received after seeing the rebels destruction of his home city)
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 15, 2005
7:01:42 PM
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Eversor: Okie doke. Good start on the bio, but it's a little choppy. Try adding just a little more detail into your background. The purpose of this biography is to let others know who your character is and where he comes from.
TX: Just post it here.
Yillis: I'll place you in a squad. -----------------------
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 16, 2005
1:40:00 PM
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I come from Nar Shadda, where i was a policeman. Two years ago i indagated about the sale of drugs on this planet. i arrested four important person of the exchange (a criminal organization), and for this motive i went, under false name, with my family to dantooine. One years ago the Exchange founded we, killed my family and captured me. They want to bring me at Nar Shadda, but during the voyage i escaped with a rescue ship and i landed in Tatooine. In this planet i worked like a bartender for 6 months and with some friendships i went to Coruscant. There i enrolled at the Empire Academy because i believe the Empire can clean Nar Shadda from the Exchange, therefort i can revenge my family. -----------------------
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TX-973
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[VE-ARMY] Private First Class
Post Number: 8
Total Posts: 9
Joined: Mar 2005
Status: Offline
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RE: Drill Squad
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March 16, 2005
2:24:18 PM
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**Revised Biography of TX-973**
Full Name: Sarius "TX-973" Dar'fell
Eye Color: One red, other green/blue mix
Hair Color: Red/black mix
Age: 28 Standard Years
Distinguishing Marks: One scar across right side of face, numerous battle scars on right arm (mechanical right arm)
Bio: Sarius "TX-973" Dar'fell, born on Aurora Prime, graduated from an Imperial Army Academy on his home planet at age 15, earning the callsign "TX-973." After hearing from his friend, Jack Nebulax, that the Vast Empire was the best Imperial organization in the entire galaxy, Jack recruited TX-973 into the Army, since Jack served in the Navy. Currently, TX-973 is in Drill Squad and is waiting to be placed in an active squad after his training is over. TX-973 can't wait to serve actively in the VE Army.
(Hope this one's good enough, Cosmic.)
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Private First Class TX-973, Vast Empire Army
TRP/PFC TX-973/Drill/Storm/Phoenix/Dragon/Osiris/VEA/VE [LoR]
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Petty Officer 2nd Class Jack Nebulax, Vast Empire Navy
XO/FL/PO2 Jack Nebulax/Nazgul 5 (2-1)/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN/VE (=A=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B]
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2:24:42 PM)]
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