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Cosmic
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 16, 2005 11:16:13 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Both are good. You'll be placed in squads shortly.

Congratulations.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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Jack Nebulax
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 17, 2005 2:17:26 PM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
Thank you, O Great Cosmic!
 
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Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
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Kadann
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 17, 2005 2:53:48 PM    View the profile of Kadann 
Jack, if you are going to be in the Army, you will need to make posts with your Army character for Army business.  It doesn't make much sense for your Navy character to answer for your Army one.
 
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Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 17, 2005 4:04:40 PM    View the profile of TX-973 
I am very sorry, Lord Kadann. I forgot to switch over to my Army name when I posted. Please forgive me, sir.
 
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Private First Class TX-973, Vast Empire Army
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Petty Officer 2nd Class Jack Nebulax, Vast Empire Navy
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 27, 2005 4:26:36 AM    View the profile of Eviscares 
I hope its ok like this

Name: D'kaleth al bek
Callsign: Eviscares
Age: 18
Height: 5'9''
Weight: 68 Pounds
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Physical Traits: Scar at the side of his neck
Reason for joining the Empire: If you are from a family where service is tradition, than you don't get much of a choice. Luckily D'kaleth was really happy about the fact that he could join the Stormtroopers.
Place of Birth: Coruscant
Species: Human
History:
The Al Bek Family has been a family of military service over generations, disregarding who currently held the Power in his hand, the Al Bek served in his ranks and always were top notch. It wasn't that much of political conviction but for the soldiers creed. If you carry the name Al Bek it's something to live up to, at least in the eyes of your family, and so D'kaleth was trained from his child days on. When other children played hide and seek, young D'kaleth learned about squad tactics and great battles in history. At the age of 14 the inevitable happened, D'kaleth ran away from his home in a rush of teenage rebellion. From this day on he lived in the Underground of Coruscant. From his present point of view it could be considered a good extra training, but back then it was like hell. In the first two month, he saw and experienced everything his parents ever warned him about, but then he came in contact with a grup of youngsters called 'The Shadow Blades'. They were a small group and earned their living mostly with courier runs and some illegal tournaments. In one of this fights D'kaleth earned his nickname, and later callsign Eviscares, and the distinct scar alongside his neck. It was a bloody fight to death with a member of a rival gang called 'The White Fires' and the bets were definitely against D'kaleth. To boost his chances he took a whole lot of steroids that made him a half crazy killing machine. It was this rage that saved his live, but he payed for it with a serious addiction. Whilst the fight he received a cut to the side of his neck, the wound was bloody, but not that severe, so the match went on and young D'kaleth took on his enemy. Not only did he slay him but he disemboweld the poor right in the middle of the arena. As he awoke from his intoxication he was held captive in a small chamber. Not knowing what was going on, weak and frightened he began hitting the iron door big. After half a day, the head of the 'Shadow Blades' entered just to tell Eviscares that he had won, but because of his serious rage was now considered too dangerous and had to walk his way alone from then on. A couple of days later, when the wound at his neck was healed, he was turned adrift. What seemed to make his situation worse in reality was his salvation. One day when he was roving on the streets he saw his mother and decided to take his best shot and try to get home. When he first talked to her, she didn't recognize him, as he was dirty, his hair grown long and his clothes ragged and dirty. But when he called her by her mothers name, she understood that the beggar he was talking to, was her son. It turned out that the Al Bek at first searched for their son, but then gave up when they didn't find him after a year. As he came home, his father at first didn't believe him, and thought that he was only someone impersonating his son. In a long interrogation, D'kaleth had to prove that he really was the person he said he was. In this long father-son talk, he told his father everything even about his addiction. Shocked that his son had fallen this far he decided that it would be best if D'kaleth needed help and admitted him to a clinic for addicts. After two years of therapy, D'kaleth was ultimately clean and stable enough to start his training  with the Troopers.


 
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Devils
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 27, 2005 9:25:39 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Very good. That's what I like to see.

I think you have a typo with your weight. Did you mean 168 pounds?

Other than that, it's an awesome biography. Well done. You'll be placed in a squad immediately.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 28, 2005 2:25:27 AM    View the profile of Eviscares 
Thanks sir, I'm glad you liked it.
Considering the Weight there must've been a problem with my converter. It should read 133 Pounds.
 
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Devils
You've got a face-to-face with your
Devils
You've got a race to race with your
Devils
You've got to find a place among your
Devils
You cannot replace your
Devils
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  RE: Drill Squad
March 31, 2005 11:22:19 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Cosmic had to run in a hurry, but at the same time wanted to make sure that this trooper got some recognition. Therefore he asked me to place a short welcome for him here. We have a very special new recruit fresh out of training that has not only completed the training in record time, but has also managed to be very active in the time he's been with us. Everyone, let's welcome PFC_Fury not only to the corps: but to Drill Squad as well. PFC_Fury, as you well know: stay active and have fun! I'm not Cosmic, so I don't have his official list of things you're supposed to be doing. I know you're supposed to get working on a bio in the near future, but he'll tell you more about that when he contacts you by e-mail. Enjoy your stay here in the VE! Oh, I've taken the liberty of placing you on the roster as well.
 
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 1, 2005 12:47:07 AM    View the profile of Japheth 
Welkome to theee Vast Empiiire, ye dog!

Avast and yarrrrghh!
 
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The Dread Pirate Japheth
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 1, 2005 1:40:45 AM    View the profile of TK-112 
Arrr! wtf Heth?
 
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 1, 2005 3:18:34 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Welcome to the Corps, Private. Be sure to check your email often for updates and further instructions.

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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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[This message has been edited by Cosmic (edited April 1, 2005 3:18:55 PM)]
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 2, 2005 10:47:33 AM    View the profile of Squall 
Private First Class Fury?  Are you Jokin?  Thats against the CoC's isn't it?
 
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Squall Lionheart
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 2, 2005 4:24:25 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
No more than it is for me to tell you to shut up. Again, this "Fury" is not the same Fury as the Prefect that was kidnapped. He's an impostor that eventually will be changing his name.
 
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 4, 2005 11:36:30 AM    View the profile of Squall 
Whats your problem?
 
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Squall Lionheart
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Cosmic
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 5, 2005 6:17:40 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Squall, the whole thing was a joke - April Fools.

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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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[This message has been edited by Cosmic (edited April 5, 2005 6:18:07 PM)]
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 9, 2005 1:24:01 AM    View the profile of Kiara Blackstar 
Name: Kiara Blackstar
Age: 20
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Hight: 1.7 meters
Weight: 64.5 kg
Identifying Features: Multiple black ink tattos on arms and back, 3 cm scar over right eye, 14  cm scar on right fore arm

Background:
I come from the Corporate Sector Athority world of Bonadan. I am an orphanand I grew up in the factory cities where I learned how to survive. At the age of twelve I found my first blaster pistol and soon had it torn apart and put back together. I found a love for all weapons and at the age of sixteen was running with a group of pirates in CSA space. During a difficult raid we were forced out of CSA space and into an Imperial patrol. I abandoned the rest of the pirates and landed on a planet in the Kalamith sector. I started working as a civilian weaponsmith and triner and decided to join the Imperial Army as a place where I could focus my talents. I love weapons that force you to look your victim in the eyes.

Personality:
I am partialy organized, sarcsatic and vicious. I do what needs to be done, but I do it the way I see fit. I enjoy being brutal and cruel when it serves a useful purpose.
 
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Peace is a lie. There is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory my chains are broken.

                                        -Code of the Sith

'Hokey religions and anchient weapons are no match for a good blaster at your side.'
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 9, 2005 1:34:02 AM    View the profile of Angel 
wow. I'm impressed.
 
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-=Arrogant Elitist=- Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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Sith Knight
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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 9, 2005 1:46:59 AM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Not bad at all.

I'll have to decide which squad to place you in now. :P
 
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 27, 2005 12:01:26 AM    View the profile of Ranger38 
Name: Toman Jerter
Callsign: Ranger38
Age: 19
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 160 lbs.
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Green
Blood Type: A+
Physical Traits: Has a long scar down his right leg, from the knee to his ankle.  He recieved it in the spice mines when a spice spider attacked him at the age of ten.  He barely escaped alive.

History:
Born on the mining world of Kessel, Ranger38 was born into a world of slavery.  His parents had been criminals, and sentenced to work in the spice mines.  He was born deep inside one of those mines.  One of the administrators took care of him until the age of five, then they decided that young Toman was old enough to work the mines.  He worked grueling hours, and soon harbored a deep hatred for everyone.  At the age of thirteen, Ranger38 led a revolt in the mines.  It was a massacre on both sides.  While the battle was occuring, Ranger38 apprehended a shuttle, and escaped.  With no idea where he could go, he headed to Corellia.  There he joined with a pirate gang, and spent the next four years of his life as a pirate.  Until one fateful day they tried to hijack an Imperial Corvette.  A great battle ensued onboard, and Ranger38 was apprehended.  As he was brought to the ships captain, he killed two of his four guards in hand-to-hand combat.  The captain, impressed by this show of strength, took the youth under his wing.  He served under the captain for two years learning all their was to know about Imperial life.  At the age of nineteen he went to Imperial space to join what he had come to love.

Personality:
Has a deep hatred for almost everyone.  He rushes in without thinking, and often times gets in over his head.  He has a sense of humor, and likes to joke around with people he likes.  He is very well disciplined from the time he spent with the Imperial captain.  He has a fond love of weaponry, and uses them all with expert precision.  He learned several different fighting styles during his time in the Kessel mines, and is unriveled in hand-to-hand combat.  Because of this he has a cocky attitude, and a smart mouth.
[This message has been edited by Ranger38 (edited April 30, 2005 3:33:43 PM)]
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 27, 2005 12:42:56 AM    View the profile of Angel 
I'm impressed....but I think you'd find some hand-to-hand rivals in the DJO and Army here
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 29, 2005 1:37:50 PM    View the profile of Ranger38 
Thank you Sergeant.  I'm quite sure that I will find a good number of rivals.  Perhaps I will be a match for many of the regular Army troopers, but I doubt I would fare so well against a Dark Jedi.  As for battle experiance I have only faced criminals, pirates, and Imperial Navy Security forces.
 
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TRP/PFC Ranger38/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1REG/VEA/VE[LoR]

"The call of battle will be my salvation."
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April 29, 2005 7:49:32 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
According to your dates (passed years), your character should be 19, not 18.

And Angel is correct in the above post. You will have rivals - most likely in the Dark Jedi Order. My personal character, Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth spent much of his life training under a martial arts master (Wu Tan), and excels in unarmed combat.

I'm very impressed. The flow was awesome, but grammar was actually pretty decent, so I'm happy there, and I couldnt ask for more on the detail: not too much, not too little. You hit the nail right on the head.

I've been planning on using several exceptional character biographies as examples for the future recruits, so, if you don't mind, I'd like to use yours (fix it up a little of course - get the years right to match your age).

Well done. You'll be placed in a squad as soon as I can figure out which one will work.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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  RE: Drill Squad
April 30, 2005 3:36:05 PM    View the profile of Ranger38 
Ah... you have a very sharp eye General.  I did not notice the mistake of my age.  It has been remedied.  If you spot any other problems with my bio, please let me know.  As for using it for future recruits... anything I can do to help sir.  Use it all you like.
 
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TRP/PFC Ranger38/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1REG/VEA/VE[LoR]

"The call of battle will be my salvation."
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 1, 2005 1:49:11 AM    View the profile of Shakey 
Jen Lagien,or known to everybody else as Shakey.She inhabitted this nickname when she was run across by a squad of stormtroopers.She was in the middle of a forest in an unnamed planet.They had a heck of a time moving her seeing as she was 18,6'7",and was equiped with two bone daggers.

Name:Jen Lagien
Age:21
Hair:Black
Eyes:Faint Yellow
Physic:Several rather ugly scars along the sides and a rather deep scar running down her back.A strange tatoo that looks to be like a sword with an up turned slivver of a moon turned through it(this is on her back).

No further information availible in data bank.

Beep-New file entry from subject Private Shakey.

I was 14 when it happened. I suddenly felt like I woke up. There I was, stranded by myself on a deserted planet known as Jankar V. I didn't remember anything up to that day. All I knew was that I had to survive, and I had to find understanding. I wondered the woods for a good three days looking for food, food that didn't have to be killed. At one point I gave up and decided to try my luck chasing rabbits. I of coarse failed, but in the process discovered the twin bone knives that had been up my sleeves. I also discovered  my innate ability with them. I then continued to wonder the forest until I reached a shaggy hut. The hut was owned by an old mystic named Jahana. Jahana welcomed me into her home and fed and clothed me in simple apprentice robes. She said that she there was nothing she could do but send me to the surface or to a near by encampment. I asked if there was anything she could read from my mind or something she could see in my future. She took one long look at me and I felt this pressure on my whole body and then it stopped and a horrified look came upon her face. She said only  one thing, 'Darkness'. From there I went to the encampment which turned out to be a slaver encampment. I had a large tussle with them and killed two of their men before I was knocked unconscious. When I awoke I was on a Hut vessel somewhere outside of Coriscant. I had been sold to the Huts as a servant girl. That of coarse didn't last long. It was a human that started it actually. A passing bounty hunter decided that he just had to try to put a hand up that tiny skanky skirt I had been clothed in. Some how my daggers hadn't been taken away and they suddenly found themselves imbedded in his testis .The hut took it as funny and decided to make it a trial: Who ever could get a hand under that skirt could have the slave girl. That of coarse was a bad idea. After about the tenth dead contender the hut was very upset. He sold me to a trader on Tatooine.I was boarded on a small smuggler ship and shipped off in a cage to my new owner. I was a body guard to him for about four years. After his death I inherited the trade/smuggle ship that was actualy quiet nice. I went into the trading business until one day in hyper-jump I blacked out. When I woke up I was in an unnamed desert and got picked up by a passing squad of storm troopers.

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New Entry Found-Warning from Shakey

Oh, and as for the idiot in commander that will get the bright idea that the whole army needs this information, well let's just say I hope you don't have use for a few fingures.
[This message has been edited by Shakey (edited May 1, 2005 11:29:12 AM)]
KnightWind
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 1, 2005 1:33:34 PM    View the profile of KnightWind 
Good day to all that read this.
My name is KnightWind. I have been traveling for many years in search of my true calling in life and its time to realize that I have found it. To serve as a part of the Empire to help and protect all that is just and in need of order within the universe.
I was born and raised most of my life deep in the heart of AntiFarea 3, a very cruel and unforgiving city. Until the age of 12 I was blinded unaware of how unique my existence would become within life itself. I was a rouge, traveling from place to place without much care for anyone but myself. That is until I accidentally boarded shipping fraters and ended up stranded on the capital of our system Anirealm. It was there that I was captured by the Empire and brought before the Council for my "disrespect for authority". I was later sentence to imprisonment for the next 5 years of my life. Until one day, I was granted an alternative. The warden, also know by inmates as "The keeper of the keys" suggested that I enlist into the Empire and show my forgiveness with honor and loyally to all those above me.
I knew that I had no other choice. This was the only way that I could try to make a name for myself. Being imprisoned for 5 years made me realize that the only person who could save me was myself. I wanted to become powerful I wanted to prove to everyone who stood before me that I would someday lead them and make this place better, orderly.
To this day I cannot forget the time I spent thinking, learning, and understanding exactly what I needed to do.
I took my step forward and started my path to leadership.
My motto that has kept me going all these years has been "You must follow, before you can lead." And I will do so. Everyday is a constant learning experience. I hope to learn much from my superiors and to one day teach those under me.

Statistics:
Name: KnightWind
Age: 17
Height:6 foot
Weight:195
Hair:Brown
Eyes:Hazel

Cosmic
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 1, 2005 2:37:40 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Better Shakey, but the spelling still needs work.

Knight, I'm going to let you redo your bio. The story is fine, just work on fine-tuning your grammar and spelling.

The biographies are not just for you to "graduate" from Drill. These bio's are for others to see who and what your character is like, and it also gives the Squad Leaders the chance to look at your writing skill (which happens to be our primary activity).

Practice makes perfect, so keep on working on it. I'll give you a few tips:

1) For a longer story such as yours, think the story through before posting. Make sure you don't leave any sentences/situations just hanging. In other words, tie up the loose ends.

2) Use Microsoft Word or any other software that has spellchecking capabilities.

3) Proof read your bio aloud to yourself. If sometime sounds wrong, it probably is.

4) Actually write out numbers instead of typing in the digit. Write "five" instead of "5". Exceptions to this are certain names, ship designations, and identification numbers. (ie.: C-3PO, R2-D2, Yavin IV, etc.)
 
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 2, 2005 11:47:01 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
AWOL Check

All in Drill report here.

The exception is Aobee due to some real life issues.

You have a week to report in. If I don't see a message from you within 7 days, you'll be processed and turned into Bantha fodder.
 
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TK-112
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 3, 2005 7:18:31 AM    View the profile of TK-112 
I am soooo not in drill, but i'll report in anyway.



 
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 3, 2005 12:49:09 AM    View the profile of Kairo 
  We need the manure. The VE garden is looking a little pathetic. When was the last time someone watered these things? Oh well, not like we need it to be pretty around here. 
 
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  RE: Drill Squad
May 3, 2005 1:18:23 PM    View the profile of vint 
im guessing this is where i put my dudes profile.
age: 25
sex:male
eye color: blue
hair color/length: jet black/short
tattoos/scars/ect.: an imperial insignia tattoo on calf
short history.
graduated from kildan academy(its a small one)
to be a ground soldier, though ive been told that i am force able.i was born on Returb5.
i wish to serve the emperor(and kadan)
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