Name: Tharin Droma
Callsign: Tharin
Height: 1.8 meters
Weight: 495 kilograms
Eye: Blue
Hair: Black
Age: 25
Birthplace: Coruscant

Other: There is a scar that extends from just below his eye to his chin; He has a tattoo on his upper right forarm of an eagle holding a snake in it's talons.
Personality: An ambitious man; Willing to do whatever it takes to advance within the Imperial ranks. Strong, and soft spoken. Friendly, and approachable.

History: Tharin was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, as the youngest child of the Droma family. His father was a weapons expert in the Imperial army, and being such, Tharin also learned a little about firearms. Although, He was a normal child. He played, and had an active imagination. Sometimes he would play as a stormtrooper blasting away at hordes of Rebellion scum. Tharin grew, and on his eighteenth birthday he was given a gift in a bought scholarship to Academy. His mother and father put him on the transport, after graduation Tharin designed ship models for the Corellian ship systems. This job was uneventful, and not what he wanted, after a number of years working for Corellian ship systems he joined the Empire's Army.

I have to do some up grading on my bio so i will repost with the appropriate changes...

Name: Austin Musser
Rank: private first class
Eye color: Light grey
Hair color: Stark white (obviously dyed)
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175
Gender: male
Age: 16
Scars: 1
Home planet: Totooine
personality: harsh but friendly

        i was just a little boy when the rebels recruited my parents, they said that they would be octant was 10 years ago. Ever since then I have been in many riots and juvenile activates. At the age of ten I had the blood of another spilled on my hand, that was the day that I became who I am now, an emotionless being. I got the scar on my left eyes the same day, I was fighting my friend because he wasn't doing what he was supposed to, so I old him to stay were he was and that I would be back. Ten minutes later I come back with an ice pick and stab it into his spine paralyzing him instantly, and then I killed him. That was six years ago, now I am a proud trooper in the empyreal army doing what I love most...killing the rebel scum...the reason I joined the army was to find my parents and extract vengeance for leaving me to fend for my self. I vow, with this blaster I shall show no fear...long live the empire.
 
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Lancer squad new recruite

This is my character's bio, it probably has a lot of mistakes so plz tell me.


Name: Hunter "Emnis"
Birthplace: Tatooine
Age: 20
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown

Hunter's parents were not well known but his father died before he was born.  His mother left her home country of Naboo and visited a friend on Tatooine alone.  On tatooine she died giving childbirth.  Her friend took Hunter in and when he was about six his gaurdian took him to the marketplace, where was separated and kidnapped.  He was forced to work under a Hutt in a blaster factory in which he got his finger chopped off in a factory accident and had to be replaced with mechanic durasteel.  When he was about 16 Hunter had stolen a  DC-15S blaster pistol to toy with in his free time.  However, when his supervisor found out Hunter was beaten and scheduled to be traded away the next day.  That night, Hunter snuck into the factory stole some credits and ran away.  He decided to take a shuttle to the planet of the factory's best costumer: coruscant. There he wandered around and became a civilian of the empire.

 
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HUnter EMnis

*Note to self*

Place Hunter_Emnis and zar_mulix in a squad.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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[statement]
Kote,
Vode an.

See the fied post below

[End statement]
 
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[Statment in Mandalorian]
Kote, darasuum kote.
Vode an.

[Statement]
Negitive, Droid is not a Race selectible in the appliaction.
Affirmitve, Third Person on storys, put biograph on Drill sqaud spot.
[end statement]
[question]
can i put some of the infomation in madnalorian?
[end question]
[second question]
is this not the drill sqadr board?
[end question]
 
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[Begin ID-Line]
TRP/PCF HK-47/3SQD/2PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA [LoR]
[End ID-Line]
[Statment in Mandalorian]
Kote, darasuum kote.
Vode an.

[Begin HK-47 Fixed Biography]

Type: Assult Droid Mark II
Class: Commando Type 2
Callsign: HK-47 (B)
Creation Palce: Corellia
Weight: 500 kilograms
Height 5 Feet

Skills:
Sharpshooter
ARC
Advanced Map Reading
Land Navigation
Patrolling
Small Unit Tactics
Resupply & Foraging
Combat Search & Rescue
Special Reconnaissance
Counter-proliferation
Counter-terrorism
Security Assistance
SERE (Survival, Escape, Resistance, and Evasion)
Unconventional Warfare
Hostage Rescue
Direct Action B (sabotage, assassination, infiltration)
Psychological Operations
Clandestine Entry
Civil Affairs
Shuttlecraft Pilot
Airspeeder Pilot
Starfighter-Pilot
Glider Operation
Forgery/Digital Manipulation
Strategic Operational Planning

Languge Spoken:
Galactic Basic
Droid
Mandalorian
Jawa
Tusken
Twilek
Wookie
Transdoshen
Imperial Droid
Sith
Huttese
Rodian
Bothan

A self-sentient killing machine, HK-47 was far more than an ordinary combat droid. Created four thousand years ago, he came equipped with a devastating arsenal of high-powered weaponry, a ruthless and single-minded pursuit of his termination targets, and a pre-programmed disregard for all organic life. This Hunter-Killer model is one of the most dangerous assassins in the galaxy.
And yet, he was also a protocol droid.

The incongruity did not go unnoticed, even by HK-47. For a time, his memory was partially wiped, and he could not piece together his history. He knew that he just wanted to blast a few "meatbags," but the droid wasn't sure exactly why he wanted to do that. Or how he came to regard organic life as "meatbags." Or why he was so well equipped to gleefully dish out violence.

Known History:
Created on Corellia, During the Time of the Clone Wars. Activated on:
Colne Wars Day One
Objective Was Protect Master from Trandoshens on Corellia
Mission Failed
Master Was killed By Trandoshens while HK-47 Was attacking.
Hk-47 went into hideing.
Reactivated on Empire Day
Fixed and Used former Masters Shuttle to get to Imperial Recruitment Office on Courasant, but the system was under imperial lockdown.
Starship reported crashed on tattione on Imperial Day 23.
(Error Gap in Memory after Crash until time around the Battle of Endor)
When he awoke he found himself in a jawa sandcrawler's junk box. He was pissed, not to be in a sandcrawler but to be in a junk box. He killed all the jawas drove the sand crawler to the imperial recruitment office and sold the sand crawler and joined to empire under the vast Empire Army. During training he decided to get rid of the (b) in his name, he was now called HK-47 , he has two goals 1) get into ARC 2) Meet and Destroy the anceint HK-47 unit
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During his training he fixed many system purges and discovered many things, He was Really created by Corellian Rebels to be a Commando Assult Droid, but was captured by ray sheilds, his memory was purged and he was sold to his (former) master. He has been programed to have a mind, but no soul which makes him a perfect battle droid.
[End Fixed Biography]


 
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[Begin ID-Line]
TRP/PCF HK-47/3SQD/2PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA [LoR]
[End ID-Line]
[Statment in Mandalorian]
Kote, darasuum kote.
Vode an.

(ill just say this without the begining and ending crap, i am not just trying to be the doids from kotor, HK-47 was a good droid name from a good droid {but that would be cool} im just some droid, my history is sketchy because of memory gaps from crashes, bugs in the programing, ect.)
 
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[Begin ID-Line]
TRP/PCF HK-47/3SQD/2PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA [LoR]
[End ID-Line]
[Statment in Mandalorian]
Kote, darasuum kote.
Vode an.

dodging ion grenades


 
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=[Arrogant Elitist Fire Team Captain]= Iron Horse Squad
=[  Winner: Biography Comp 2005  ]=
AS-2/FTC/SSG Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] [WM] {BoA}
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CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete:
The Angel of Death has returned...

Looks like HK and Angel are getting along. Maybe he'll fit in Iron Horse.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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An assassin droid and a Dark Jedi isn't a good combination. I'll prolly end up absorbing all the energy from his power cell after 20 mins of [statement] [question]



 
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=[Arrogant Elitist Fire Team Captain]= Iron Horse Squad
=[  Winner: Biography Comp 2005  ]=
AS-2/FTC/SSG Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] [WM] {BoA}
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CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete:
The Angel of Death has returned...

Seeing as your a droid Private in the Vast Empire Stormtrooper Corps, and I your superior officer, your decision in where I place you in this matter is pretty irrelevant, yes?
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Last chance to get your bios in!

I'm going to send you one email, seeing as your not checking the ComNet, to remind you or your bio entrees. You need to get it done or get the boot. You're being evaluated.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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*Note to self*

Rommel/Hunter need squad assignment.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Name: Alasse Wzalsin
Eye color: green
Hair color: black
Height: 5'6
Age: 17
Physical Features: Tattoo of a black heart on her right shoulder.
Personality: Friendly to most but maintains a cold attitude towards her enemies.
Background:
Alasse Wzalsin lives alone with her father. Her mother died when she was five. Her father always wanted a son and seeing as she was the only child in the family, her father treated her like a son. He taught her to fight, to talk back, to be more like a guy than a girl. She was a tough person, fending off bullies for others at times. Her father always wanted his own child to be part of the Stormtrooper Corps to fight and thus, here she was. In the Drill squad and all ready to go on to create a successful career.