Name: Austin Musser
Rank: private first class
Eye color: Light grey
Hair color: Stark white (obviously dyed)
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175
Gender: male
Age: 16
Scars: 1
Home planet: Totooine

        i was just a little boy when the rebels recruited my parents, they said that they would be octant was 10 years ago. Ever since then I have been in many riots and juvenile activates. At the age of ten I had the blood of another spilled on my hand, that was the day that I became who I am now, an emotionless being. I got the scar on my left eyes the same day, I was fighting my friend because he wasn't doing what he was supposed to, so I old him to stay were he was and that I would be back. Ten minutes later I come back with an ice pick and stab it into his spine paralyzing him instantly, and then I killed him. That was six years ago, now I am a proud trooper in the empyreal army doing what I love most...killing the rebel scum...the reason I joined the army was to find my parents and extract vengeance for leaving me to fend for my self. I vow, with this blaster I shall show no fear...long live the empire.

Greetings everyone.

After a very long journy I finally return home, disproving the belief of my death.

(I hope I was missed?-random thought)
 
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In the darkest of night he stands alone
Watching, waiting, learning.
Before you realize it your already stone
Your heart as cold as the ground.
He stands over you, cleaning his silent blade.
The knight grows tiresome
He must find new game.

Unless he isn't out of drill this still doesn't need to go here,but I geuss I'm being a grump today.
 
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*DarkDragoons*
TRP/PFC Shakey/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA [LoR]

Welcome, Jennabelle, to Drill. Check your email - you have a new message from yours truly.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Name: Howmi Juseal Martin
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Place of Birth: Tatoonie
Hair Color: Brown
Eyes: Dark Blue
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 188 lbs.
Specialty: Trooper

Bio:

Howmi was nothing special.  He had no marks, no distinguishing features, aside from a slight accent. His voice was rough. His voice had the sound of an typical moisture farmer of the "southern regions", however, his tone and manner of speech held a tinge of education.

His hair was a ragged mess of brown.  His eyes were the only thing that stood out; Dark blue, darker than the seas of Mannan.  Those eyes, in contrast to everything else about Martin, were amazing.  They didn't shine, they didn't sparkle, but they were like windows to the everlasting spectacle that was Howmi Martin, though he himself did not know what was in store for him.

Howmi's future would be one of both pain, and suffering, but his past, like everything else about his present self, was plain and drab as the white sheets hanging on a primitive line to dry.  He was raised by his father, as his mother had abandoned them both shortly after he was born.  He and his father worked hard on the dessert planet of Tatoonie, working on their moisture farm, and tending a junk store.  They would find broken blaster and such and repair them, selling them for a good chuck of change.  They actually got a droid to tend the shop after a time, when they had learned enough to repair the droid's servos and memory core, and get its blaster operational.

Howmi left the farm after a time, saying good-bye to his father and getting a worker droid for him, so that he wouldn't be a man short on the farm.  The droid was nothing special, and couldn't handle any difficult tasks, but it would have to do.

He joined the Imperial Stromtroopers... Howmi was 18 years old.

Yeah... I just read a new e-mail... said not to post from MS Word.... Opps. Time to copy and paste from MS Word to Notepad, to here. Haha!

There we go... should be good now.

Very well done. I loved your use of technology - it fit perfectly. The only things that I saw that really stood out were:

1) What Angel had said above: Do not compare your accent with 'French'. Stay away from any "Earthy" terms.

2) In your character stats, your hair color is Dark Red, but in the bio itself it says your hair is brown. Might want to pick which color you want to use.

Awesome job.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Okay, I took out the "Earthly" words. So I should be good now.

Name: Jennabelle

Nickname: Jenny

Rank: Private First Class

Eye Color: Green

Hair Color: Blond

Age: 20

Height: 6.7"

Weight: 110 lbs

Physical Features: there is a tattoo of my favorite band: the Aerosmith, on my rear end, there is a scar of when I disobeyed my parents so my mom scratched me with her long nails reminding me what happens when I disobey my parents, and there is a tattoo of the Galactic Civil War on one of my arms.

Sibling(s): a sister

Birthplace: Coruscant

Background history: a tough, friendly person born to a family involved in war, my father was a staff sergeant for the Empire Stormtroopers (trying to get promoted to Sergeant first class) and mom is a teacher teaching from the invasion of Naboo to the Galactic Civil War.
I grew up learning about the whole history of the Galactic Civil War, how *spoilers for Episode III* Emperor Palpatine/Darth Sidious and Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader betrayed the Republic and used the clones to wipe out the Republic. So now I'm here to sign up for the Empire to fight to bring order to the galaxy.

 
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"Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force. "

Name: Marcus Nerva
Age: 18
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 165 lbs.
Hair Color: Dirty Blond
Eye Color: Hazel
Physical Traits: Small scar near his left eye from his childhood.
Place of Birth: Corellia
Species: Human

History:

Marcus had a very normal childhood, more violent if anything.  His father, a Corellian merchant, had been a fighter when he was younger and was very good and almost won the title match for the Corellian system.  Growing up, Marcus and his older brother both wanted to be like their father.  If they both weren't studying for school, they were training to be fighters.

But as time went on Marcus grew more and more attracted to the armed forces, while his brother continued with fighting.  Marcus loved the idea of doing something as an organized team and being able to actually accomplish something.  Throughout the rest of his schooling he started studying the equipment and tactics of the Imperial army.

Now that he has finished his school Marcus joined the Imperial army enthusiastically.  He hopes to become a career soldier and make his parents proud of him.

Name: Jennabelle

Nickname: Jenny

Rank: Private First Class

Eye Color: Green

Hair Color: Blond

Age: 20

Height: 6.7"

Weight: 110 lbs
Physical Features: there is a tattoo of my favorite band: the Yodaman (pronounced Yo-Da-Man, meaning you're the man, it's a made-up band that came to mind when I was watching "The School of Rock" movie), on my rear end, there is a scar of when I disobeyed my parents so my mom scratched me with her long nails reminding me what happens when I disobey my parents, and there is a tattoo of the Galactic Civil War on one of my arms.

Sibling(s): a sister

Birthplace: Coruscant

Background history: born to a family involved in war, my father was a staff sergeant for the Empire Stormtroopers (trying to get promoted to Sergeant first class) and mom is a teacher teaching from the invasion of Naboo to the Galactic Civil War.
I grew up learning about the whole history of the Galactic Civil War, how Emperor Palpatine/Darth Sidious and Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader betrayed the Republic and used the clones to wipe out the Republic. So now I'm here to sign up for the Empire to fight to bring order to the galaxy.

About Me: Present day, I'm a realist who places a high value on trust and loyalty. People notice that I'm passionate about my views and that they can count on me when I make a personal commitment. I'm tough in terms of my dad but in terms of my mother I'm loving and friendly.

 
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"Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force. "

Good bio. Interesting.
 
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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*salutes* sir cosmic, may I post my bio with current updates so I may inform all the new recruits of who I am and also for my own benifet of helping me understand my charicter more?