Clear as crystal. Ironicly though, i wont be able to write in the story for a few days due to my semestor finals tomarrow, and i will have my hands full. Sorry.

Ladies and gentlemen, it's that time of week again. Get those reports in. Otherwise you'll be AWOLed. I'd rather have a report of "no activity" than no report at all.
 
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SC/WO1 Chipmunk Man/Aegis 1/Phoenix/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=A=)(=SA=)(=*MA*=)[LoC][MC:1]x3[LSM][VC:B]

"I know what you're thinking, punk. You're thinking, 'Did he fire six shots, or only five?' Well to tell you the truth, I've forgotten myself in all this excitement. But being this is a .44 magnum, the most powerful handgun in the world, and will blow your head clean off, you need to ask youself one question: 'Do I feel lucky?' Well, do ya? Punk!"
-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

Hey, ah, Templar, just a note about all your posts and something in your last one. Don't use * in them. It isn't really nesessary. You don't see authors using them in real books. Also, we generally don't have fights with our own people on our own ships like that. The likely hood of two stormtroopers, blocking a path and drawing a blaster on you, is minimal to none. Unless their NR agents trying to take over the ship. But, that is even less likely.

  Also, as a note to everyone. Let's try not to make many useless posts about preparing to go in later stories. All you should have done before we boarded our transport is say what your character packed and maybe a reference to going to the simulators. You could make an extra long post about going shopping, but it is generally prefered that you don't extend it out into three more posts. The story is about that mission. Granted, character development is good, but you can do that without adding too much filler. The main reason for that is so other people can get the story going if need be with out having to wait for you to finish doing whatever it is your doing. So, in my opinion and to summarize all this, you can do a lot of things that don't have too much to do with the story, as long as it is done in one or two posts.

  This can all be trumped by above authorities, but on the Army side of things with writing, all of this is true. And there isn't much of a difference between the divisions. I will hopefully have enough time to do a post tonight, but if you don't see it, I got caught up with homework and such. And, sorry for the late report Chip. I was waiting to see if I got any reports from my flight.

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=Aegis-Squadron=
Senior Crewman Hunter

FL/SCRW Hunter/Aegis 9/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=)

Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.

It's ok Templar. That was all just for future reference. All you have to type is < i >, connected of course, to start it, and < /i > whenever you want to end italics. It should look like this.

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=Aegis-Squadron=
Senior Crewman Hunter

FL/SCRW Hunter/Aegis 9/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=)

Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.

Its time for another check up from the wing commander!!  *Dull applause from audience signals a pie in the face...*  "No...  No, that won't be necessary..."

Well then, I shall review what is expected and what I should obviously be asking for.

Chip- We'll be expecting a report from you on how your groups doing, assessing it's weaknesses and strengths of course.  We'll be needing to know the status of everyone in your group- if they're on leave, when will they return...  And certainly but not least- and problems that have come up or questions in general. 

Aegis- How are things through your eyes?  I'd like to know as well as your squadron command crew.  If there are any questions or problems, you can always contact them.  By the looks of it, Hunter is going to be your quickest reply, so go on ahead and post your queries in this thread. 

How bout your story?  Dunno- you tell us!  Part of a story is being able to communicate with eachother in a manner that will overall benefit the group.  You coordinate in the hopes of creating some problem, whatever its complexity, and then solving it in a realistic, yet entertaining manner.  A lot of good advice out there, it's always up to you guys to take it though. 

For my own word as a writer in the VEN- I look a lot at characters and how they work together.  Are you actually exhibiting who your person is?  Are you showing the same sedulous research with your freinds and colleages?  Truly, many things will not happen on a daily basis in the Navy- however: lots of things happen in the SW Universe.  Anything can happen, just make sure you have a good reason, lol.  That's all I got for now; keep 'rockin.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Howdy Shaz. I've got a list of people to be AWOLed, I'll include those in my squadron report this weekend.

Also, I'd like to get together with Hunter to talk about planning the plot line for our story. I don't have access to IRC at the moment (/me curses the campus network, again), would we be able to talk via AIM instead?
 
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SC/WO1 Chipmunk Man/Aegis 1/Phoenix/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=A=)(=SA=)(=*MA*=)[LoC][MC:1]x3[LSM][VC:B]

"I know what you're thinking, punk. You're thinking, 'Did he fire six shots, or only five?' Well to tell you the truth, I've forgotten myself in all this excitement. But being this is a .44 magnum, the most powerful handgun in the world, and will blow your head clean off, you need to ask youself one question: 'Do I feel lucky?' Well, do ya? Punk!"
-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

No, not at all, Templar. That list is the people who did not send in reports last week. They may yet save themselves if they manage to send in a report this week. If I still don't have one from them, they will be gone.
 
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SC/WO1 Chipmunk Man/Aegis 1/Phoenix/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=A=)(=SA=)(=*MA*=)[LoC][MC:1]x3[LSM][VC:B]

"I know what you're thinking, punk. You're thinking, 'Did he fire six shots, or only five?' Well to tell you the truth, I've forgotten myself in all this excitement. But being this is a .44 magnum, the most powerful handgun in the world, and will blow your head clean off, you need to ask youself one question: 'Do I feel lucky?' Well, do ya? Punk!"
-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

Hey Chip. I can talk on AIM. Just give me a time to be on after  8:30 PM EST, and I should be able to get on. Wow, I ended with a preposition... Anyways, my nick is Benrsch1. I'll also be sending you a comnet message about some of the ideas I have for the story.
 
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Senior Crewman Hunter

FL/SCRW Hunter/Aegis 9/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=)

Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.

Geth is Yillis in the Army, and he's usually on IRC, you can talk to him there.
 
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-(William the Conquerer)-
King of PPC
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
SC/MCPO Willtconq/Kaph 1/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B][SV]
Wm/Wm Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE

Crap, Dorry about missing the report, school started and things are really effed up in RL, report will be in soon today. I couldn't get online much last weekend
 
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Aegis Squad

*coughs*
There is a reason why Comnet has its very own spellchecker
 
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Aegis Squad

Well, then I guess you'd better make fixing things a habit before a commanding officer points them out to you in the future, which is way worse.
 
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-(William the Conquerer)-
King of PPC
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
SC/MCPO Willtconq/Kaph 1/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B][SV]
Wm/Wm Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE

Hi, I'm been recently assigned to this squadron

Tomorrow night would be better for me. So Friday at 9 PM EST?
 
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=Aegis-Squadron=
Senior Crewman Hunter

FL/SCRW Hunter/Aegis 9/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=)

Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.

Well I was thinking about posting. then my report card came in the man... ong story short I don't know if I will be as active as i was for while. Not till presidents week at least (Im off the whole week.)

Also...Welcome to Ageis squadron spacespeed9! *Puts his hand in a "Black Power" sigh and walks away.