Sayah
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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March 15, 2007
9:36:39 AM
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I can only hope for Lazarus syndrome... -----------------------
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"And we are here as on a darkling plain
Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight,
Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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March 15, 2007
11:23:56 AM
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Sayah... I told you what to do if you wanted to advance the story. You are going to have to wait a long time, for me to have time.
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"You think you can run this ship better?"
"Yeah."
"Well...you cant!"
Serenity
"Did you know the New Republic dont like to be shot at? Worked that out for myself."
Firefly
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Raigen
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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March 18, 2007
12:08:17 AM
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Ok...this is the message I sent to jag.
Gotta job for you. Want you to do the entire part where we infiltrate the cargo bay. There will be at least 60 if not more NR in the hanger. 30-60 more that come to aid. There are 3 bulk frieghters attached to the transparisteel wall and one correllian gunship. Two Katarn class boarding shuttles will drop out of hyperspace and try to dock with the cargo bay. That's 100 troops. You and Sigh will give me cover fire while I seal off the gunship and freighters. Then seal off the first katarn ship as it boards. The other katarn will then(expecting the first katarn to unload and then immediatly undock) come in and collide with the first. Once the gunship is sealed off, the 5 battle droids will arrive and seal off the entire cargo bay(this is after all NR in the bay are killed. Then I will take over. Ill give you a promotion and a ribbon if you make the post legnthly and well written. Take your time.
If anyone does this...They will get a promotion and a [BM:G]
...since sayah is the only one here...you will probably get it. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 24, 2007
4:49:10 PM
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Jag-Platoon Commander
Sayah-Platoon Commander
Etan-Squadron Commander
C3PX2-Squad Commander
Rogue-Company Commander
Dhar-Platoon Commander
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 24, 2007
5:27:48 PM
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Hallelujah!!! How many black masses have you attended recently? -----------------------
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"And we are here as on a darkling plain
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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Raigen
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 24, 2007
5:39:47 PM
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None...You're in Red Company Sayah. For that comment...you're in charge of sixth platoon. that makes jag fifth. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 24, 2007
6:02:25 PM
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How much did your soul cost?   -----------------------
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 24, 2007
6:12:24 PM
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33,000 euros! -----------------------
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Sayah
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 25, 2007
10:07:56 AM
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220,000 credits! -----------------------
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 25, 2007
10:11:33 AM
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wowowow relax, I noticed my name as a company commander, I don't have the time for a storynet for at least the next month or two. -----------------------
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Eat a hearty breakfast men, for tonight we dine in hell -King Leonidas, 300
Clearly Canadian!
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Jag Fel
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 25, 2007
10:45:08 AM
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And... I'm in reserves... so no writing posting in anything for me. -----------------------
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April 25, 2007
11:22:45 AM
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reserves?! -----------------------
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"And we are here as on a darkling plain
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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April 28, 2007
5:02:50 AM
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Yep, that's what I said. I just keep all the Eclipse stuff im my sig cause I like it  -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 9, 2007
10:04:58 PM
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yAY! another post. -----------------------
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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Raigen
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 10, 2007
2:52:14 PM
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That's what I'm here for. How about following my lead and posting?
If you havn't noticed, they are no longer using katarns, instead they are using bulk cruisers.
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Sayah
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 10, 2007
3:58:01 PM
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Will do ASAP. Tomorrow? -----------------------
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"And we are here as on a darkling plain
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Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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Raigen
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
1:00:20 PM
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Do you realize how long this story has turned out, that's pretty good. It's twice as long as a squad or squadron story. Let's wrap this one up and start a new one.
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
1:08:40 PM
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It may be twice the size of the usual stuff, but is it off the same quality? -----------------------
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Raigen
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
1:19:40 PM
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That depends on the individual. Some of the more recent posts have been very good.
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
10:12:19 PM
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Okay, I want this story finished before the new chapter. Reason, it's gotten old and no one is participating. If you want to say something, post soon.
The next story will not be as I had planned. Since this IS a criminal story, Let's make it criminal. We are going to hold up a shipment of valuable crystals or something else along those lines.
THIS IS A MESSAGE TO ALL IN THE VAST EMPIRE
If you want to join this next story, post here or look for the next topic that I will start. Anyone can join without commitment to the campaign.
I'm thinking of having the last story move strait into the next one. We will probably link the gray hawk(Raigen's freighter) directly to the gunship and have that ship and the corvette will be used to capture and take a Thrawnist Imperial Customs corvette. We will take hostages, we will make demands, and we will all come out a bit more satisfied with ourselves. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
11:01:04 PM
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Listen up to what Casca is saying. Etan along with C3Pxo is back in the game here. I'm gonna post tonite along with trying to finish my Senior Aviator's Exam.
My buddy Ray asked me to step in and try to bring some resolve to this whole conflict of interests.
I'm going into the story and either shooting or ripping the arms off of anyone who gets in my way. Got it. Well get it. There is no need to post here for much longer. Your either with the program or without. See ya in the story.... -----------------------
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Sayah
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 12, 2007
11:45:30 PM
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I'm out of the VE (and off the computer) until Wednesday so I'll post then. Casa, can you clarify? -----------------------
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"And we are here as on a darkling plain
Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight,
Where ignorant armies clash by night."
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
11:57:50 AM
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Etan has closed the door the NR are coming from. That has to be the main accessway. What he's done is cut off over a hundred troopers who will simply find the second easiest access...Which is indeed, the one that goes past the computer terminal. Jag will meet up with etan and have to blast through three platoons. I will post on all of this. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
12:28:42 AM
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Etan, can we integrate the personality matrix from your protocol droid into an astromech droid? Just for when you are flying in the invasion.
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
6:09:49 PM
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Either that or if we really don't need him any more, he can just hide somewhere like the original C3po and R2 did in Episode IV.
Then I or we can, mostly me can worry about retrieval later. Me and him have personal communicators anyways, so I can always keep tabs on him. He knows how to take care of himself, and is usually more useful to anyone captured than destroyed, so I don't have to worry about that, if you know what I mean. Also, I have a security override on him that prevents him from leaking useful information about anything he has previously done to anyone but me. So lemme know. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
6:17:48 PM
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I meant for an astromech in your fighter. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
6:32:16 PM
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Oh, yeah cool beans man. And then his shell? Retrieval later? I'm just trying to figure out how I should proceed with the story.
If it wasn't for him, couldn't I have just repelled down to the hanger bay to join you. And I'm just trying to get a visual of this, but if the NR troops have access to where I'm at now, wouldn't they also have access to the computer terminal and a line of sight firing advantage on the hanger bay, thus meaning us and our plans of flight.
I guess maybe I'm getting a little confused. Remember, I haven't been here in a while. Just give me a quick synopsis of what you think I should do and I'll take it from there. Cool? -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
6:38:11 PM
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Well...actually, you need a rope long enough to repel three or four stories. And there isn't that much of an advantage without a high precision rifle and perfect vision or a scope. Those troopers won't be able to access the computer because your droid was smart enough to leave a nice little effect that only let's him shut down the security system. Jag is currently on the second ramp leading up to the second landing. You are on the third landing looking down at the third ramp and second landing...All the NR will enter on the second landing. Where you and Jag will simply ambush them. Simple as that. -----------------------
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
7:22:37 PM
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I got you Ray. Thanks for the update. I'll take it from here, just give me a little bit. I really only got back online to finish my SA but as always I check to see what's going on in the comnet. My mother exhausted me today with her incessant talking. God, that woman can go on and on about nothing forever." And your aunt so and so, had a hang nail that she just couldn't bear anymore and when she stopped the...... BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH."
But, it's Mother's Day and I love her very much. So I listened patiently and waited till I got home to pull the hair I barely have from my chemo out with tweezers. Just kidding everyone. Not about my mother, just the hair thingy.
I'll post either later or late tonite when I get my brain unscambled or sometime tomorrow. Sorry, it's the best I can do right now Ray.
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RE: Criminal Story Thread
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May 13, 2007
8:27:03 PM
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And well, I couldn't leave you hanging Ray. I went ahead and posted some to let you know where I was going. I'm not finished yet. I have some edit /add-on to do to that last post.
At least, this way, anyone else can continue on with their part of the story except Jag's character. He can too, but only let him get in position. Let the fighting begin when I add-on and we can all go from there. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to control anything, I'm just tired and instead of leaving anyone hanging, I thought I could at least let my intentions be known and everyone could post accordingly. There are preparations to be made in the hanger bay to be done, if I'm not mistaken.
You did say you wanted to move this story along??? Signing out for tonite. -----------------------
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