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jag fel
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December 7, 2006 3:37:18 AM    View the profile of jag fel 
Etan what are you doing?

Were on the battle station you sayah and the others take the bridge. me and  Raigen do other things.

Plus Riqimo isnt in the story he just posted cause of what Raigen done.
 
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December 7, 2006 9:44:08 AM    View the profile of Sayah 
I know that I am definitely not takling orders from Etan.
 
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December 7, 2006 1:32:03 PM    View the profile of jag fel 
Then make decisions together!
 
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"Im going to make him an offer he cant refuse"
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December 7, 2006 2:12:55 PM    View the profile of Sayah 
duh..tell him that
P.S. shOUT AT HIM NOT ME!
 
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December 7, 2006 2:18:57 PM    View the profile of jag fel 
I wasent SHOUTING just dont argue please.
 
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December 7, 2006 2:44:40 PM    View the profile of Sayah 
ok then...
 
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December 7, 2006 3:04:58 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
Ok Sayah..there are no droids, they never came onboard. go back and edit your post, type something like...suiting up and watching the fifteen b1's whic btw oly about 5 will survive so I would't advise bringing them onboard. I'm doing it because they are expendable. I bought them back when they were worth about 400 each.

Etan, no hanger, I gave the instructions, just follow those. There are hundreds of NR onboard have fun with them, just remember that the station is about to be filled with dense fog so that we can sneak up on them. No more than two kills per post guys, I want quality, not quantity. And if you can, use your heads. There are hundreds...we are outnumbered. So use secrecy. Sneak up behind bpeople and knock them out. Be silent. Gunshots should be kept to a minimum so we don't alert them.
 
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December 7, 2006 3:33:01 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
I accidentily posted the same post a bunch of times. So I am going back and editing each one. Etan and sayah...remember...This is not a target practice or a funhouse. Halos is your commander. Listen to him and get to the bridge. Work together...maybe you ca get some kind of expirience from this to use in your squad stories.
 
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December 7, 2006 11:29:18 PM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Sorry everyone, somehow I got lost. I didn't read after the fighting we were all going through amongst each other.. Let me Edit and get in the fight.

But, one point I did make is Sayah, you gotta relax man. Use that anger in the mission against our enemies not each other. COOL BROTHER?

Anyway my bad.
 
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December 8, 2006 10:00:53 AM    View the profile of Sayah 
understood. Let's get to the bridge.
 
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December 8, 2006 3:00:58 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
Sayah. It's a battle station. You can fire all you want. It's heavily armored. And you should be down the hall from the armoury. Just me and Jag are there. Your group and mine are following different paths.
 
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December 8, 2006 11:50:40 PM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Yeah me and Sayah got that but where is our leader Halos Bok?

Sayah is clearing the way and doing a damn good job of protecting a droid he doesn't even like and working with me while Halos is currently awol. And I'm not even trying to be mean. Just stating the facts.

I mean hell if we are gonna do this let's do it. Not only that but what happened to some of the other characters that we originally started out with. And why can't we let a new character in like Rigmo for extra dialog. if they want to be say a small private under say you or Sayah or Me?

Hey, not trying to bitch. It's just always been my philosophy that the more the merrier. And with only four of us posting,Well?

I'm fine with that it makes the posting easier, but?
 
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December 9, 2006 1:55:22 PM    View the profile of Than Sion 
I am sorry if you find my obligations to the Navy a problem. Contrary to popular belief, that is the place where my official rank and position comes from. AWOL is based off of your activity in your corps. Check the roster, I am still active. 
 
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December 9, 2006 11:52:08 PM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
That's cool, and I'm sorry I didn't mean all that like it sounded.

I too am in the Navy. I am trying to post on three different boards and have just finished my Aviators Exam. It gets a little overwhelming.

However this was the first story I have committed to and have given up on other stories to post here. So once again sorry for the inferances. I am using this story, thanks to Raigen, as a casting off, story for me, and just want it to be great.

If you don't have time to post here, can you at least relinquish command to say someone like Sayah and be a NPC.

Although, I think he is overly destructive, I think he has earned it.

Let us Know?
 
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December 10, 2006 3:07:29 PM    View the profile of Than Sion 
If my activity on this story isn't able to go up this week, we will see if we can make an arrangement of some kind with Raigen.
 
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December 11, 2006 11:16:58 PM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
No, No, don't be like that Than. your last post was great. Just check in and guide us, man???????????????????

I mean I wrote that either before I read your post or if even before, welcome back we need you.

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December 13, 2006 2:15:46 PM    View the profile of Sayah 
Can someone post?!

 
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December 13, 2006 3:21:36 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
Story is on pause, for christmas and the fact that I am grounded. Go post n your squad stories or something, I cant get on for a while.
 
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December 13, 2006 4:45:15 PM    View the profile of Than Sion 
You just got to love parent's .
 
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December 13, 2006 4:57:42 PM    View the profile of Sayah 
aw man...
 
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December 13, 2006 5:42:10 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
What you CAN do, is go back and make more posts about the way to the bridge. You wernt supposed to get there that fast!

Or go back to those really short posts and expand.
 
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December 13, 2006 5:53:22 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
There is a problem with Thans post about the lift. We're on the top level. Its a giant ring, and you guys are on like, the opposite side of the bridge. Its about three fifths of a kilometer away from you guys and you need to take the single halway on the outer edge where most of the enemy is. The inner core of the station, the pillar in the middle of the ring. Is sealed off, and probably filled with 200 troopers at the least.
 
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December 14, 2006 1:12:12 AM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Hey, I agree, how about we all take a vacation until the New Year.

I think we all have enough to deal with. Not ot be mushy anything but LOVE YA ALL>

See ya after the 1st?

TTYL. Etan

But when we come back I'm gonna kick some ass , not yours but in the story.OKAY
 
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December 14, 2006 9:45:23 AM    View the profile of Sayah 
"LOVE YA ALL>"
wtf?
 
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December 16, 2006 1:00:14 AM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Okay well then f--- you all it don't mattter to me Sayah. I'm just trying to get in the Christmas spirit. Talk to ya all later. man. I got ya Ray on the enlarging your post thing.

I agree, we got everywhere to fast. Sayah is like a robot killing everyone in a pinch.Let's go back and re-edit.

Sayah, your great man. Just try to intro more story and less killing.

See ya after XXXXXX_MAS.
 
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December 16, 2006 1:57:23 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
OK, here are some stats from the story.
name-------------words-----posts-----avg-per-post
Etan-Evnstar------4064-------23------176.7
Raigen------------3771--------10-------377.1
Than-Sion--------2903--------6-------483.8
Sayah------------2392-------31-------77.2
Jag-Fel-----------2177--------13------167.5

Words:
Etan
Raigen
Than
Sayah
Jag

Posts:
Sayah
Etan
Jag
Raigen
Than

Avg:
Than
Raigen
Etan
Jag
Sayah

Go even out those scores. Edit short posts to make em longer!
Im changing up the positions on page one based on this info.
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December 16, 2006 2:25:23 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
Than promoted to Second Lieutenant
Etan promoted to Lance Corporal

Anyone in the criminal story, Im giving promotions for every three NPC bios. Must be 1000 words long and include a past, present, reason for joining RDA, and description
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December 17, 2006 12:46:58 AM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Aye, Aye CAP'N CRUNCH -THE NUMBERS. Just kidding Ray.

I gottcha. After looking at all that, it's hard to believe I wrote the most words, but then when you see how many posts I made compared to better writers like you and Than it's not that hard to believe.

Let us further say, that the story goes no further until? say after the first of the year and we ALL clean up our post upon your further inspection? Deal?

And I believe, it's you and me Sayah he is talking about fixing the numbers? We post the most but have the least to say. Come on man, I know we can do better than that.

Plus, what do you mean about a non charachter player bios? And a 1000 words? Isn't that a little harsh?

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December 17, 2006 11:43:38 AM    View the profile of Raigen 
Me and Jag are working out our parts. But really, Than and you all need to lengthen that whole thing, you got there too fast. Or you can talk amongst yourselves and maybe plan out some kind of conflict within the bridge. EX: A platoon of NR try to rush the bridge.

 
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December 17, 2006 1:54:32 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
NPC's as in characters that arent yours. They exist butt arent your main character. And the bio for them must be 1000, because it tells everyone what they are about. Well, that is a bit long, make it 450 words.

Now, At the end when we are all through with the droid cruiser, Ill enter you all into the RDA and maybe youll get some ribbons or something...Ill have to think some things up.
 
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FM/SCRW Raigen/Nazgul 3-11/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=) [VC:B]

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CC CO SC/SMar Raigen Tei-Yehn/Task Force 1/Eta Squad/2nd Platoon/Red Company/1st Battalion/KBcC Helsa/OFF/Army/RDA(O)
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