BV
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RE: Drill Squad
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June 12, 2006
6:49:28 PM
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YEAH!! Welll..... YA MUTHA!!! And ya Know WHAT else!?!?!? YA FACE TOO!!! HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA.She's a maniac, MAniac on the floor. And she's Dancing Like she's never danced BeeForrre!
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Leon
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RE: Drill Squad
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June 12, 2006
7:13:53 PM
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Look man, you gotta stop being stupid, I was trying to help, but if your not gonna accept it, thats fine with me. Your not gonna get anywhere in the VE if you keep acting like that.
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Jakireth
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June 13, 2006
12:03:51 AM
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A textbook example of how drug usage is affecting our country. -----------------------
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Leon
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June 13, 2006
12:36:19 AM
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LMAO, I was waiting for someone to say one of those slick comments, thanks Jak I appreciate it, and i'm suprised I: managed to keep my self from cursing. YAY!  -----------------------
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BV
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June 15, 2006
2:02:49 PM
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 SRRY Overreaction but no that's natural energy, I'm not high  I'm just one of those guys who gets a kick out of that stuff, no reason to get POed
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Leon
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RE: Drill Squad
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June 15, 2006
2:09:30 PM
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Well I was helping you out not making fun of you next time please don't do that. -----------------------
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BV
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June 15, 2006
2:10:42 PM
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BV
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June 15, 2006
2:12:25 PM
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Plus this way we get into a fight so iget to get in more poo |
Leon
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June 15, 2006
2:16:25 PM
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Sorry man i'm not gonna waste my time with you. Just cut the sarcasm, it's really annoyoing.
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Trix
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RE: Drill Squad
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June 15, 2006
2:46:22 PM
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Lets get back to the topic at hand "Drill Squad" -----------------------
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Leon
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June 15, 2006
2:47:13 PM
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Thanks Trix -----------------------
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BV
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June 16, 2006
2:32:21 PM
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you seriously need to lighten up. but besides that, how do you get that picture in the left hand box? ANd does anyone know where Cosmic is!?!? |
Leon
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June 16, 2006
2:39:41 PM
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It's called an Avatar. You can get it by either uploading one or you just click profile at the top of the screen and pick one from the selection they have. -----------------------
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Atrick25
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June 16, 2006
11:02:35 PM
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Sorry to butt in on Army matters but......
PWNT!!!!!!
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June 16, 2006
11:24:32 PM
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I'm here. Sorry, life's been busy. -----------------------
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June 16, 2006
11:28:31 PM
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Not a bad bio. Could use more detail storymode wise, but it has a good outline.
Watch the indentations, however. You don't have large enough paragraphs to indent those that you did. Either create longer paragraphs for your indentations, or align all text to the left.
Also, getting hit by a blaster bolt on your arm will not "daze" you in anyway. Just like a bullet - you get hit, you feel pain, but you don't get knocked out or "dazed" really. You're able to keep going if you need to.
I'll place you in a squad. Watch the grammar/syntax more. -----------------------
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BV
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June 17, 2006
6:05:24 PM
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 you go into a daze or become dizzy or lightheaded when you go into shock resulting from a wound. Med facs dude medfacs. By the by sorry 'bout calling you Cosmo. I was new...er. |
Leon
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June 17, 2006
6:07:19 PM
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lol BV don't worry about Cosmic is a nice guy, and congrats on getting your bio passed. Hope you make it into a squad soon. -----------------------
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BV
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June 17, 2006
6:08:37 PM
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Thanks. Congrats on the promo! |
Leon
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June 17, 2006
6:11:08 PM
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???? How'd you know I got a promo? -----------------------
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BV
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June 17, 2006
6:13:37 PM
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Looking about half-way up the page, your rank changed to Lance Corporal. I'm a genius like that. Take a look yourself. |
Leon
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June 17, 2006
6:14:57 PM
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oops lol. I'm stupid like that sometimes. -----------------------
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BV
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June 17, 2006
6:35:38 PM
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 Speaking of stupid, how do you get an Avatar? |
D'har Leth
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June 18, 2006
9:18:59 AM
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At the top of the page it says "ComNet." Under that it says "VE HOME." Next to that, it says "New Posts." Next to that it says "Profile." Click "Profile." This brings you to your profile where there is a dropdown menu from which you can select an avatar.
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Leon
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June 18, 2006
6:31:16 PM
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yea you are D'har, and by the way BV congrats on making it to Jester. -----------------------
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Phenix
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June 20, 2006
9:22:13 PM
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I look forward to writing with you, BV. Feel free to ask me any questions you might have in the Jester room or send me a PM. I'll be glad to answer anything, because I still remember my super n00b days...in fact, I might still be a newb lol.
EDIT: Aha, not a n00b...novice
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June 21, 2006
5:26:50 PM
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Drill squad has recently undergone maintenance. Thus the reason for the low head-count in the Squad.  -----------------------
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BV
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June 23, 2006
11:01:46 AM
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hey phenix, could you tell me about that story /character development page? |
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June 23, 2006
7:00:59 PM
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Name: Mike Zenima (Private)
Age: 20 years old
Hair Colour: Dark Brown Hair
Eye Colour: Green Eyes
Height: 6'2
Weight: 130 lb
Physical Features: Mike has one scar across his chest from when he was little, he got into a fight and a small boy cut him with a vibro Knife leaving a scar upon Mikes Upper Chest.
Personality: Mike is a easy going adult that enjoys training hard, learning new skills, improving on things he is not good at. Mike Zenima finds it easy to get on with his fellow Imperial collegues and acts the same around all people of the Galaxy except he is tough and strict when it comes to keeping order in the Galaxy.
Appearance: Private Zenima wears the standard Stormtrooper Uniform, a white battlesuit to protect from blaster bolts, a white utility belt and a E-11 Blaster Rifle is always in Mike's arms.
Background/History: Mike was born on the planet of Dantooine where he grew up peacefully at the start of the Galactic Empire. He knew nothing about the Old Republic nor did Mike want to. His childhood was active as Mike ran about through the grass plains on Dantooine until one day he came home to find his mother had been a traitor to the Empire.
Mike had always been a great fan of the Empire and took justice into his own hands and killed her by using a Blaster Pistol and placing three bolts in her upper chest causing Mike's mother to decease. His Mother had always been mean to Mike since Mikes father died during the Clone Wars, strange as it was Mike had built up the anger withing him and eventually could not take anymore and killed his only mother.
As the news of the Murder spread throughout the town Mike lived in, people avoided Mike as he went past them doing his usual business until one day a boy decided to attack Mike and try kill him for what Mike had done, as the fight progressed Mike was slashed with a Knife resulting in a scar forming on his upper chest. As the boy fighting Mike noticed this, he ran as fast he could away while Mike travelled back to his house.
Soon After Mike reached the age of sixteen he lef Dantooine to join the Imperial Engineering Academy where he studied engineering and got a degree in Engineering. Although Engineering had not been a interest of Mike he proceeded to the Imperial Army where he currently undergoes his training.
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Private Zenima, Skilled Warrior, Trained Legionaire
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Trix
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June 23, 2006
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Hmh, you got it very nice down. but emotion, emotion, emotion. Mike couldn't have killed his mother like that, perhaps if he had a unhappy childhood yes. Also, where is the father? How did it affect him? And I don't think people would annoy Mike, they would rather avoid him. *shrugs*
Think of your characters. Everything is fine, but your content lacks motives. Mike might have been a surporter of the Empire, but there must have been more bad-stuff between his mother and him to make him kill her. Also, why would a child kill their mother before turning 16?
It lacks emotion to me  But good none the less, also just remember to add height and weight as well and you are good to go. -----------------------
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