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Very well done. Short, but to the point. You filled the criteria of personality and character history in that little space very well. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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June 16, 2005
12:04:49 AM
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Name: Maxx Cynn
Callsign: Cynn
Height: 6'2
Weight: 230 lbs
Eye: Blue (pupil black, rest of the eye is blue)
Hair: Brown (currently bald)
Age: 28
Birthplace: Corellia
Build: Stocky, but well built (in excellent shape)
Scars/Tattoos: Many scars all over his body, too many to count. A large tattoo of a krayt dragon is on his back. Also, a skull on his left bicep and a celtic band on his right.
History:
Born on Corellia while it enjoyed a time of great prosperity, Maxx lived a privileged life. His father was an Imp regent, his mother a loving house wife. But when the civil war broke out, his father was called to active duty and served on the ill fated Executor at the Battle of Endor. While this happened, Maxx was training to become part of CorSec, but was rejected after a training exercise went wrong and Maxx killed a fellow trainee. Because of his father's influence, instead of being executed, Maxx was exiled from Corellia forever. Years later, after serving on various merchant ships, and a brief stint as a bounty hunter, Maxx has decided to join the ranks of the stormtrooper corps.
Personality:
Because of the hardships he has faced over the last decade of his life, Maxx has become a hard man; he's often hard to approach. he has no friends, doesn't not talk about his family, and will follow orders to a t. But his temper sometimes gets the best of him and he has crippled or even killed some who test him. Hoping the Empire could restore some order in his life, Maxx is willing to do anything to succeed in his new life.
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June 16, 2005
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Hey cos, Are there alot of corellians or is it just me. ----------------------- Private First Class HK-47 - Iron Horse Squad
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June 16, 2005
10:41:27 PM
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Promiscuity runs rampant on the home of Han Solo.
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June 27, 2005
9:38:13 PM
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Welcome dt-viper. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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June 29, 2005
2:39:27 PM
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Name: Mark Sar
Callsign: Sar
Height: 6'1
Weight: 203 lbs
Eye: Icy Blue.
Hair: Mixture of different shades of brown.(Not dyed)
Age: 24
Birthplace: Alderaan
Build: Muscular(Not a swimmers body, but not a WWF wrestler)
Scars/Tattoos: Mark has a scar on the back of his right shoulder, when he was caught in the middle of a fight on the planet Tatooine. He has writing on the base of his neck, in a language that few no exist, and what it means.
History: He was born on the planet Alderaan, and worked in the royals' palace. There he helped some of the people with their needs, but he was still payed. When he was 17, the first Death Star destroyed Alderaan, and like many others, Mark was taken captive by the Death Star. He was given a choice, after Princess Leia escaped, die, or serve the new Republic. He chose to serve the new Republic, and was sent to Tatooine for a while, to keep an eye, and make sure the Rebells weren't planning anything too serious. When he got caught in a fight, at the age of 21, he was taken to the planet Coruscant, where he was placed in traing to become a stormtrooper, and serve the new Republic.
Personality: Mark is somewhat outgoing, but is also protective. It is sometimes very hard for someone to win his trust. If he does not trust person, he will do something about it. He has a strong will, and does not have any fear of dieing. If someone really messes with him, his temper can be controlable, but only to a point of not killing anyone. He follows the new Republics orders, as he was told to, and he would not die by them, but probably tortured, until he was concidered trustworthy again. He hopes that the Republic finds him trustworthy, as he believes that they do not concider him scum.
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June 29, 2005
4:11:12 PM
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Hey Sar... buddy... we're not the New Republic bro. We're the Empire. The NR are our enemies. Fix that up in your post, and watch the grammar. Also, don't describe your body as a "WWF Wrestler". Use something else - those people don't exist in the StarWars universe. And (  ) Fix up your post. I don't see how you could have been "captured by the Death Star" if you were on the planet it destroyed... they didn't send down a Task Force before blowing it to dust.
Once you've done that, post again, and I'll reread your revisions.
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July 2, 2005
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Welcome, Night-Bringer ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 3, 2005
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Welcome, Kjaren.
And Sar, buddy, you need to resubmit your bio with my tips above in order to move on. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 6, 2005
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hello i am new to drill squad
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July 6, 2005
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sry i was trying to do something and i screwed up
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July 6, 2005
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thanks ----------------------- that battle was unfair you can't defeat the empire.........plus the emperor was having his nap
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July 6, 2005
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Name: Dinin Tribal
Callsign: Pawn of Dragons
Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 155 lbs
Eye: Blood Red (like color of blood, not darker, not lighter)
Hair: Blood red (same as last)
Age: 17 (most suseptable to emotional outbreaks)
Birthplace: Tattooine
Build: Lean but strong
Scars/Tattoos: He has one tattoo that spans over most of his body. It looks like a mixture of fire and water coexisting in one pattern. It seems to be constantly moving and it's color ranges from blue to red-orange. The color is said to change with his mood, although this has yet to be proven.
History: Born on Tattooine, Dinin grew up living a sheltered life. His parents were merchants of rather high standings, and he was well cared for. But when he was ten, the town he and his parents resided was subject to an Impirial raiding party. His parents were slaughtered by a Imperial Colonel in front of his eyes while he hid himself. When he emerged from the reckage, there were no survivors. From that day forward, he had trained to join the Republic army, seeking the Colonel that had killed his parents. Finally thinking himself ready, he sought out the Imperial Army. Upon finding it, he joined in the hopes of finding the Colonel that had killed his parents.
Personality: Dinin is withdrawn, only talking when it is required. He follows orders to the letter, and keeps his own, preffering to work alone then with a team. Although he is silent for most of the time, if angered, he is a force to be feared. He is not quick to anger, but once his anger has been unleashed, it will continue to burn with an intensity that few can match. He is very secluded in that he makes no friends and puts forth no effort to add to his empty list of such. His trust has been reserved for himself for most of his life, and he has not found a person alive that he finds worthy of it.
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July 6, 2005
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Very well done. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 6, 2005
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Yes good Job ----------------------- DJ
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July 7, 2005
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July 7, 2005
11:17:34 AM
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Welcome to Drill, zhannik. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 7, 2005
11:45:08 AM
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COMPLETED BIOGRAPHY:
NAME: Alexi "Zhannik" Schoultz
CALLSIGN: zhannik
HEIGHT:6' 3''
WEIGHT: 168 lbs
EYES: Black
HAIR: White-Blonde
AGE:25
BIRTHPLACE: Coruscant (Imperial Center)
BUILD: Muscular, but not "bulky muscular"
MARKINGS: A small scar on the underside of his right forearm that is reminiscient of the Imperial Insignia, could be a burn or brand from when he was a child.
HISTORY: Born in the upper echelons of society in the waning days of the Old Republic, Alexi he lost his parents when Emperor Palpatine began his rule. As Loyalists to the bitter end, they were both tried as traitors to the Empire and were executed. Young Alexi was gullable, and was told that his parents wanted to try and assassinate the Emperor to try and restore the Republic to power, so they had to be eliminated, and that he, a young boy, was a good child and loyal only to the Empire. He grew up in the underworld after running away from an orphanage, and picked up the name "Zhannik" there. It is Twi'lek for "Slayer," so he must have had a killing streak of some sort. Zhannik is wanted by the New Republic for 3 murders and other crimes. While drifting among the various cantinas and shady places in the galaxy, he ran into a fellow in the Rim a few years after leaving Coruscant when the Rebels occupied it. That person, a member of the Vast Empire Navy, was none other than Edor Taan, a character who he had run with on Coruscant for a while. Taan persuaded Zhannik that his excellent accuracy with a blaster, superior intelligence, and natural leadership skills were all qualities that the Vast Empire could use, so he signed up for the Army, ready to rebuild his life.
PERSONALITY: Alexi is a fun-to-be-around sort-of-guy. He has a witty streak, and cracks jokes at just the right moments. He is also sarcastic, and works hard to do something, and does not half-a$$ it. When angered, though, he is a cunning and resourceful adversary. Nothing stops him if he wants revenge. He is the type of person you want to be fighting along side, and not against.
(OOC: How was that?)
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July 7, 2005
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July 8, 2005
10:32:48 AM
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nice description and details, your character sounds very insteresting... I wonder what squad you get into... ----------------------- HUnter EMnis
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seriousness with immaturity,
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July 8, 2005
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Thanks.
/me looks around for Cosmic ----------------------- -Alexi "Zhannik" Schoultz
Stormtrooper, Imperial Army,
Loved By Yillis,
Wit, Superior Intellect, and follower of Cosmic
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July 8, 2005
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Very well done. I'm assigning you to Raiders. Check your email for updates. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 9, 2005
11:01:16 PM
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interesting, there getting alot more original. I know its a little late but those were pretty good bios Pawn of Dragons' and Zhannik's
I applaud you
Compared to the last bios I read before these
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July 13, 2005
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Welcome to Drill, Razgriz. Check your email for biography information. ----------------------- Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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July 13, 2005
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Hey Cos and Everybody on Drill Squad!
Cos, you can check my bio again since I corrected it since you replied.
Hopefully I get on HunterEmnis' Squad.
See ya ----------------------- Darkness is one way to Life and the Light leads to death and that is why i am Dark and Immortal!!!!!!!!!
HaHaHa!!!!
Surrender to the Darkness you are weak to resist and Strong to Bask in the dark energy!!!! HaHaHa!!!
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July 13, 2005
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Are you want to be in the squad, or with the person? Well anyway I was wondering do all the noobs post their bios here, or anywhere, or what? ----------------------- Private First Class Zar Mulix
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