Riqimo
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:19:48 AM
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We have 'groups' for writing that helps keep things organized. People do not randomly jump into stories like that. In addition, they tend to create a character first by going through the excellent "Naval Academy"
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:23:05 AM
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well said doc, it is funny tho. Lets start a zombie empire thread, we could reanimate all of the classic characters, vader, palpatine, all the officers vader killed.....laughs galore, and brains.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:28:24 AM
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Gshlecc, thank you for your support, it is good to know somebody understands.
I feel that Mara was unfairly discriminated against. Unexpected twists make a story more exciting. For example, when it was revealed Darth Vader was Luke's father. What a revelation! Who saw that coming!? Aspects such as these keep any tale fresh and compelling, which is why I decided to carry on with Mara's train of thought, even giving Ibram a hope of regeneration before cruelly snatching it away.
As stated a few pages back, Ibram, when you're killed off, you're killed off. You can't just say you're not dead if you are, we're not playing 'Wars' in school anymore. These are real blasters we're dealing with, not simple sticks and stones.
I reiterate, congratulations on being so cunning and daring Mara, I applaud your killer instinct and hope you decided to either stay on or return. You have my backing.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:32:14 AM
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hey thor,
as fun as it is, we dont get to decide arbitraily to kill someone. now, go thru the acadamy, get some campaigns under your belt, and show your stuff, and maybe THEN they'll let you kill someone. hell, it might even be me. Till then, there are rules and a heirachy we ALL must follow.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:39:18 AM
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That killed off referred to a specific story that was a simulation. You two are excellent writers, but we do not actually "kill off" characters at your level of the rank ladder. And rarely will someone at the top even declare such a thing. As said earlier, stay around, go through the "academy" and then you will get a general grasp of our guidelines. Also, you are welcome to connect to IRC (Internet Relay Chat) and perhaps we could answer any questions you may have there. To connect, you should be able to from here. Or following the instructions here. You both can write well, however ability is not an excuse to disregard guidelines set in place.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
11:44:50 AM
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Gshlecc - I'll kindly ask you to stay out of this one. Remember that you represent Nazgul and I don't want people to be thinking that the group of us are joking about this.
Thorlax - You seem to be at a misunderstanding here. While we are a roleplay club, and we do encourage writers to be creative, you also have to consider the aspect that the squadron leaders (and in this case, some of the Navy High Council) spend quite a bit of time coming up with specific story lines for the works that we write. While minor deviations from these story lines are permissible, most of the time the plot twists are left up to those in charge, seeing as for the most part they know exactly where the story is supposed to go.
On that same note, it's generally an unwritten rule (or perhaps even a written one) that your character is your character, and my character is my character. While you may use my character in your posts, if you can stick to my character's personality, you are not given any permission to kill my character off. I don't know about you, but when I put a few years worth of my time and effort into developing an ever changing character, I don't like to see it all wiped away in the blink of an eye by someone without my permission. However, that's not to say we don't kill people off here, it used to be the practice to kill off people who went AWOL, although that trend has changed more or less to just writing them out of the story.
As for Mara being discriminated against, I don't feel this is the case at all. She blindly jumped into a story that hs been coming together over the course of three weeks, I believe, and killed off one of the characters. She had not gone through basic training, was not a member of any squadron, and basically ignored the standards we have set in place. We're all about having fun here, but that doesn't mean you don't have to play by the rules.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
2:11:43 PM
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ThorlaxTheGreat wrote:Gshlecc, thank you for your support, it is good to know somebody understands.
I feel that Mara was unfairly discriminated against. Unexpected twists make a story more exciting. For example, when it was revealed Darth Vader was Luke's father. What a revelation! Who saw that coming!? Aspects such as these keep any tale fresh and compelling, which is why I decided to carry on with Mara's train of thought, even giving Ibram a hope of regeneration before cruelly snatching it away.
As stated a few pages back, Ibram, when you're killed off, you're killed off. You can't just say you're not dead if you are, we're not playing 'Wars' in school anymore. These are [u]real blasters[/u] we're dealing with, not simple sticks and stones.
I reiterate, congratulations on being so cunning and daring Mara, I applaud your killer instinct and hope you decided to either stay on or return. You have my backing.
Congratulations! That was the dumbest post I've ever seen! You, my friend, just made yourself look like an idiot. Did you do it for teh lolz? Ya know, these two (Mara/Thorlax) are probably the same person
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
5:26:23 PM
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EDIT: I know exactly who the posters are, and they are both pricks.
This is a RL matter, everyone else can just drop it.
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
5:42:13 PM
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Ahh, gotcha. Hope you can sort things out
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RE: Viper Topic
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January 31, 2008
9:21:51 PM
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Regardless, it is not our policy to allow members from outside your squadron to post on your story threads without proper authorization- they will be deleted if ever they resurface.
Furthermore- I'll just ask everyone to ignore any comments by these extraneous members. Do not refer to their posts, do not speak directly to them- ignore them entirely, as if they do not exist. Whenever they post: they will be deleted. Is this unfair? No- they have no business posting here and I further that point by underlining the fact that their own goals have been to induce strife, so far as can be seen.
If either Mara or the other guy wanna join- they can: but they'll go through the training process. If not: I don't wanna hear another thing about 'em from anybody on any thread- they no longer exist unless you make them exist. If they want to be seen: they won't be seen. If they want to be heard- they won't be heard. This is not a democracy. *Scratch*
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 1, 2008
6:53:05 PM
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Namyr
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 2, 2008
10:28:46 PM
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O.O
*steps away and hides behind the couch*
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Zane ZyCrusis
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 10, 2008
8:00:29 PM
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Wow a lot has happened since I last checked this post......
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 12, 2008
6:19:12 PM
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Hey Guys,
I was just chatting with Tomas, and we were thinking that from now on, any sub-plots/main plot ideas that you may want to do should get posted up here first, so as to avoid confusion in the main story.
For example, some people may or may not know that Anden and Sicario are planning to escape the planet via their own means, so theres no need to go looking for them. (I don't mean to single you out Zane, i just needed this for an example.)
So, from now one, any subplots like that, please let us know so we can accommodate them into our own writing.
Keep up the good work guys.
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- Innocence is the cost of Justice
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Zane ZyCrusis
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 12, 2008
6:20:30 PM
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Completely fine, anything I can do to help. Better to help out now than have somebody crashing and burning.
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Anden Beliam
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 12, 2008
10:55:16 PM
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Sounds like a very good plan. I will be sure to do that from now on.
No worries Zane =), should have told you what the plan was when we were talking about it yesterday on mIRC.
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 13, 2008
6:05:42 PM
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Thats not what I meant, well kind of but thats fine Anden.
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Shazam
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 15, 2008
1:54:57 AM
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Think I might peruse your story Also, if you wanna continue to help the Navy out: keep showin up to meetings and turning in those reports- you really help your commanders and the administration figure out where we need to improve by sending in reports, even about the little inconveniences. Also- if you're lookin for an easy way to help us retain recruits: say "Hi" to 'em on their welcome threads- it's much appreciated by both the staff and the recruits when they realize they're not just hangin' out in a cave- other people exist after all! Who knew! Otherwise- just keep rockin, Vipers: I'm really happy with the way you've handled yourselves.
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 15, 2008
5:25:23 PM
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Don't forget Flight 3, reports due in either today or tomorrow please.....and by flight 3 i really mean Zane because Mira is lazy and Rocket has pulled a hoodini....
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Zane ZyCrusis
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 15, 2008
9:28:17 PM
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Turned it in Ibram, Shazam will do.
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Shazam
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
2:47:03 PM
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If you would- welcome your newest member: LCRW Lousy.
(I'd give the man as much crap about his name as possible, but that's just me... I'm just joshin- make him feel welcome, folks.)
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Denethor
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
3:10:21 PM
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Yeah, give the guy some time to at least sit down, then start givin him hell for his name
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Basher
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
3:35:20 PM
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Greetings everyone. I've just been assigned to Viper Squadron and just wanted to drop by and say hey.
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
3:54:14 PM
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Welcome Basher, you'll be in my flight. Flight 3 You'll be assigned as my Wingman.
The other members of your flight are Zane ZyCrusis.He'll say hi at some point.
Mira is being transferred over to Flight 2, and Rocketman is probably going to be dropped if i don't here from him.
Oh btw guys, Lousy is going to Nazgul, not us.
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- Innocence is the cost of Justice
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Zane ZyCrusis
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
4:26:19 PM
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Hey Basher I'm Zane and I am also in Flight Three. Welcome to the Squad man.
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Shazam
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
4:30:09 PM
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*Ducks*
Sorry for the confusion!
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Zane ZyCrusis
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
4:34:48 PM
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Your Fine, I can be a lousy crewman if you want me too, otherwise I try to stay a good *leading Crewman. But you know, everyone has those times. Plus it's good we get to know everyone on the squad I think.
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 16, 2008
10:46:35 PM
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Welcome to the Squadron Lousy and Basher. Look forward to seeing you in action.
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 18, 2008
1:05:08 PM
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Darkhawk
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RE: Viper Topic
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February 18, 2008
10:31:41 PM
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Just so you know, you can ignore my post on your all's story. It won't have any direct effect on your mission for now; I just felt that the Viper thread was the best place to include it.
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