Darien Crowe reporting for duty

Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: red
Skin Color: pale white
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 200 pounds
Age: 19
Full Name: Darien Crowe
Physical Build: Muscular but not ripped sort of toned
Homeworld: Correllia


Talents/Skills
Computers
Demolitions
Security

History: unknown because of amnesia

Personality: Dry sense of humor and relatively moderate temperment.

How about Corellia?

Private Connors reporting for duty

apearence:tall skinny light weight and pale

Race:human

language:basic

home-world:naboo

skin color:white

build:skinny

hair color:black

weight 130 pounds
Private Connors reporting for duty



ill redo the bio tomarow i just wanna get started on my basic training

ok i edit it what do you think now?

ok thanks

how do you like the revision?

Ok im just gonna redo the back story and everything tom i dont have the time now

Species: Human
Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Purple
Eye Color: One green one yellow
Skin Color: slightly tanned
Height: 5'10''
Weight: 140
Age:21
Full Name:Joe Irwin
Aliases:Joe
Physical Build:Average
Homeworld: Ord Mantell


Talents/Skills: Amazing marksman, but is known to pass out and wake up not knowing anything from the past few hours. Also is a known suffer of schizophrenia

OOC:

Will work on the history when i have time to, however im going to be fairly busy this week as i have alot of tests in school

Physical Appearance:  Of slim build, Daesha, was the odd man out of her family from the very beginning.  From Twi’lek standards she has a very plain face, but to other races she’s mildly pretty though can’t compare to the usual Twi’leks seen everyday.  Her skin is a medium purple that makes her light blue eyes stand out, and is her most interesting feature.  When she smiles it’s a full smile that shows all her teeth and extends to her eyes.  Being slender she has a smaller chest then most Twi’leks and lacks most of the curves.  She tends to prefer to dress in darker colors and cover most of her skin.             

Native Language: Rylothean
Hair Color: None
Eye Color: Light Blue
Skin Color: Purple
Height: 5’10
Weight:135
Age:19
Full Name: Daesha’Tarkona
Physical Build: Willowy
Home world: Ryloth


Talents/Skills:
Excellent Hand to Hand Combat skills
Trained to use Twi’lek Wrist Vac
Trained to use specially made Temple Blade Gauntlets
Heightened Agility
Heightened Eyesight



History:  Of being normal appearance of Twi’lek opinion she wasn’t lavished with nice clothing, gems, and precious metals like her older sister.  Instead she was expected to help her brother on the farm where her parents raised Rycrits and Munch-fungus.  Once she came of age and her parents realized that they would gain nothing from her from marrying her off they sent her to the Goddess Temple to gain an education.  There she was taught basic classes and to worship the Goddess Kika'lekki.  Though believing in the Goddess, Daesha could never obtain the religious obedience that the priestess had and was soon sent to be trained as a Watcher.  She excelled do to her extremely keen eyesight, years went by and she was called back to the temple.  The High Priestess had a vision, immediately Daesha began training in hand to hand combat, then to blades, and then to the Wrist Vac.  On completion of training Daesha was presented with Bladed Gauntlets and was instructed to stay in the temple only to be called out when her skills were needed.  Shunning this idea and wanting to see other planets, Daesha quickly went out and joined the Stromtrooper Corps.

Bio
Physical Appearance

Language:Basic
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Cyan
Skin Color:Jade
Height:2.46
Weight:210
Age:16
Full Name:Emilly Hellshock
Physical Build:Muscular
Homeworld:The Rift is all she remembers


Talents/Skills: Incredibly skilled with drones and melee but has below average marksmanship
skills.

History: As a child Emi was abused by everyone for being different. Anything they could find that was slightly abnormal they would torment her about.
One day they went to far and Emi snapped she murdered all of them. Unfourtonatly at the age of 14 she was moved to The Rift a prison facility  for the mentally dangerous
.  To stop escapies there was a strict no communication policy. As she grew up to the whispering in her ear telling her to end it, and the screams from down the hall she hatched a plan. At the age of 16 she was the first being to not only escape The Rift but to also fly it and kill the whole crew. At the age of 18 she was sitting down in her private quraters in The Rift when a dark figure stepped out.Before she could say anything she was stunned and woke up 14 hours later to find herself in a  interrigation room. After doing a few 'jobs' for that mysterious figure he offered her a job of a lifetime. She took it and was promised a clean slate as soon as she joined...

OOC:

brilliant i know xD

Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: red
Skin Color: pale white
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 200 pounds
Age: 19
Full Name: Darien Crowe
Physical Build: Muscular but not ripped sort of toned
Homeworld: Correllia


Talents/Skills
Computers
Demolitions
Security

History: Not much is known because of amnesia, but he was born on Corellia and he remembers nothing beofre he turned 13. As of the age of 13 he was living with thieves and worked with them until they threw him out for stealing from the leader.(He's lucky he wasn't killed) He was kicked out at the age of 17 and he lived on the streets by himself until he joined the Imperial Army at the age of 19. (He was told by the thieves that his eyes were red when he was found, but a holo he had with him showed him with blue eyes. He doesn't know the reason they were red accept for the fact that the thieves told him that he was found beside a dead thief with blood on his hands and in his eyes.)

Personality: Dry sense of humor and relatively moderate temperment. Will kill when told to do so.

Bio
Physical Appearance

Language: Basic
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Cyan
Skin Colour: Jade
Height:2.46
Weight:210
Age:19
Full Name: Emily Hellshock
Physical Build: Muscular
Home world: The Rift is all she remembers


Talents/Skills: Incredibly skilled with drones and melee but has below average marksmanship and somewhat poor eyesight
skills.

History: As a child Emi was abused by everyone for being different. Anything they could find that was slightly abnormal they would torment her about. One day they went too far and Emi snapped she murdered all of them. Unfortunately at the age of fourteen she was moved to The Rift a prison facility for the mentally dangerous. To stop escapees there was a strict no communication policy. As she grew up to the whispering in her ear telling her to end it, and the screams from down the hall she hatched a plan. At the age of sixteen she was the first being to not only escape The Rift but to also fly it and kill the whole crew. At the age of eighteen she was sitting down in her private quarters in The Rift when a dark figure stepped out. Before she could say anything she was stunned and woke up fourteen hours later to find herself in an interrogation room. After doing a few 'jobs' for that mysterious figure, she offered her a job of a lifetime. She took it and was promised a clean slate as soon as she joined...

Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: red
Skin Color: pale white
Height: six feet
Weight: two hundred pounds
Age: nineteen
Full Name: Darien Crowe
Physical Build: Muscular but not ripped sort of toned
Home world: Corellia


Talents/Skills
Computers
Demolitions
Security

History: Not much is known because of amnesia, but he was born on Corellia and he remembers nothing before he turned thirteen. As of the age of thirteen he was living with thieves and worked with them until they threw him out for stealing from the leader.(He's lucky he wasn't killed)
He was kicked out at the age of seventeen and he lived on the streets by himself until he joined the Imperial Army at the age of nineteen. (He was told by the thieves that his eyes were red when he was found, but a holo he had with him showed him with blue eyes. He doesn't know the reason they were red except for the fact that the thieves told him that he was found beside a dead thief with blood on his hands and that he had overdosed on a stim that was unstable and it affected the pigment of his eyes.)

Personality: Dry sense of humor and relatively moderate temperament. Will kill when told to do so.