Welcome to Page f of this topic Ari!

I'm your Drill Instructor Sorry if I took a bit to respond to this.
Please put up some details about your character on this topic.

Afterwards, please feel free to post on our current story:
http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/9674/

Hartigan, well done, very big improvement on your previous post, I'll try and get you placed as soon as possible, dont disappear.

Lucius reporting

Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: White
Height: 176 cm ( 5'9")
Weight: 166 pounds ( 75 Kilos)
Age: 21
Full Name: Lucius Armett
Physical Build: Athletic
Homeworld: Dantooine

Talents/Skills

Stealth
Melee Weapons Proficiency
Surveillence

Welcome in Arra, nice to see more people coming in.

alright, now that i have a format...

Physical Appearance: Arra is tall, and strong... However he does not give out an aura of fear... He is always wearing a comical smile, or smirk.

He has long  blond hair... about 5 inches in length.

When not in uniform, wears White a short sleeve shirt and black sweatpants...

Native Language:Basic
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color:Caucasian
Height: 5'7
Weight: 150 pounds.
Full Name: Verren A,(Arra) Jorin
Physical Build:Medium.
Homeworld: Theyfarra

Talents/Skills: he has good reflexes, is very good at fencing.
is Moderate with ranged weaponry.

Background History: Arra as he was always referred to as... grew up on the Metropolis of Theyfarra... he spoke the basic language... but he had to learn a bit of other languages to Trade and survive...

After growing up, Arra worked for a mining company in the Churba sector, with his brother... who was later killed by Rebels

Making the decision to become a trooper, and combat the rebels, he now gives his loyalty to the Vast Empire.

Personality: Arra is a humorous person... laid back, always willing to help you... if you are a friend.

Private Jasmine Yavimaya
Callsign :      V E N O M

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: White
Height: 6'1
Weight: 180
Age: 27
Physical Build: Athletic
Homeworld: Chandrila


Talents/Skills
- Can hack meduim secruity systems
- Can repair droids and other robot types
- Memory is high class level
- Point woman in every scouting or search mission


Background
Jasmine Yavimaya was recruited by the academy because of her memory. at the age of six she was left accidentally by her parents in the Coruscant festival. Suprisingly she went back to their lounge and waited for her parents there. This was the time when her parents noticed that she can memorize landmarks or any distictive markings in an area creating a visual map on her head. She trained in the academy without excelling in any weapons or melee combat. She graduated at the academy with just basic knowledge in handling weapons and arms but she was outstanding in reconnaissance and logistic subjects.

Private Sniperwolf

Native Language: Wookie
Hair color: Dirty Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
skin: Golden tan
height: 7'9"
weight: 544 lbs
age: 21
Full Name: Barr'k Oran
Physical build: Muscular and Slim
Homeworld:Kashhyyyk
Markings: Slash above right eye form a vibroblade
Personality: Cold, but Barr'k lightens up as he gets to know you. After that you will find he is very funny and compassionate

Talents/Skills:

Barr'k was part of the special ops section of the Kashyyk army.  Barr'k has many extremely well developed skills such as: marksmanship, espionage, melee combat, and completing any and all orders given to him. After 5 years of devoted service to the army and special forces sections, Barr'k decided to join the Vast Empire in hopes of fulfilling his long time desire to destroy the Rebellion.

Hi every one that came in getting up to date here. See you in the story.

Private DoomBlade reporting for duty. I'm here, and ready for action.

HooRAH

Physical Appearance

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: Medium
Height: 6'0
Weight: 185
Age: 20
Full Name: Jearen Malix
Physical Build: A generally typical build.
Homeworld: Rylos 4


Talents/Skills

Blasters, Vibroweapons, and thrown weapons.

Generally he's fairly quiet and broody. When he does speak he does it in a gruff no nonsense manner that makes you wish you hadn't asked him to speak.

{Private Jearen Malix exited the transport ship with his rucksack slung over his shoulder. He looks around the landing bay with a scowl, and seems very focused on his purpose. Other recruits piled off the ship, but none had Jearen’s look. Compforce trained the young man to be a killer and a few small battles had hardened his heart beyond measure.}

{For the past two months the Compforce Battle groups had been waging a guerilla war on New Republic forces on Rylos 4. A Platoon of men had been charged with the task of infiltrating a Republic Prison, and rescuing an Imperial Commander who was to be interrogated. Malix was simply a soldier doing his duty for the Empire, but his actions that day made him something of a hero.}

{The plan was to take out the heavy blaster nests guarding the main gate, bull their way in with a speeder truck, blast their way into the cell block, retain the prisoner, then exfiltrate. Malix was with the nest group, and the ten men made their way towards the gate under cover of darkness. One of them was spotted and all hell broke loose. Two E-webs began ripping and scorching the earth all around the soldiers. Five of them were killed outright, two wounded, and the remaining three managed to take cover behind a small knob of earth.}

{The alert was now sounded, and there was little hope the speeder truck could bust through the gate without being disabled by the brutal rapid shots of the E-Webs. Malix broke cover and armed a grenade. One of the spotters saw him but it was too late. The grenade sailed into their position and was detonated on impact. Pieces of men and twisted metal flew from the nest as Jearen hit the ground in a belly crawl and slithered towards the hole.}

{The Republic troops in the opposite nest took pot shots with small arms, as the E-web bore down on the advancing speeder truck. Malix hit the selective fire on his rifle and shot several bursts as he approached the remaining gun. One of the men went down. The other was trying to split his attention between the insane man, and the cry cooler of the E-web. Malix let his rifle fall to his side and dove into the nest drawing his Vibroknife. Within seconds both men were eviscerated, and the nest had been pacified.}

{It was only a matter of time before his Compforce unit was disbanded, and the troops were used to swell storm trooper ranks. To him this was a step down on the ladder, but it was his duty to serve the Empire in whatever capacity they saw fit. Who knows, he might even be able to teach them how to shoot.}


OOC: Do we need to break out our PHBs and draw up stats on our toons?

Thanks Homeskillet

Nice biography Leon, but absolutely no reference to the Force please, you'll have to change that thing about your dad being a dark jedi.

Rping in the 911 section. I figured I was pretty much done in here after I posted my bio.

Private Kalor_Alros

Physical Appearance
About 6'0 (2 M) tall, 170 Pounds. Black hair, closely cropped, and ice blue eyes.

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Tanned
Height: 2M (6'0")
Weight: 170 LBS
Full Name: Kalor Venar Alros
Physical Build: Average, slightly muscled
Homeworld: Coruscant

Talents/Skills:
Vehicle operation
Stealth
Blasters/Firearms

Background History:
Kalor grew up on the streets of Coruscant, long before venturing out into space. He fell in with a group of gang members, and excelled at the gang lifestyle. He quickly rose through the ranks, becoming a lieutenant in one of the more vicious gangs, before a particular job went badly. He was forced to flee, in a stolen freighter. He was dropped off on Tadath. He spent a week there, wandering the streets, looking for employment. He saw a recruiter from the Empire, offering enlistment packages, and signed up immediately. His life in the Imperial Army had just begun.

(sorry for vagueness, I'll add a bio that grows with the character)

Personality
Quiet, Cold and calculating. Aboslutely loyal.

Xander “X-Ray” Raibaux (Ray-bo)
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 25yrs
Born: 17BBY
Home Planet: Concord Dawn
Languages: Basic, Rudimentary Mando'a
Ht: 6’ 0”
Wt: 205’
Hair: Black
Eyes: Hazel
Parents: Shay and Antiochus Raibaux
Siblings: None

Appearance:
  Xander is a young man of medium build.  He is lean and muscular from many years of intensive farm labor.  His dark hair and hazel eyes give him a haunted look. This is countered by the almost constant grin on his face, and easy going nature. He has a Mythosaur tattoo on his right shoulder.

History:
  Xander Raibaux is the only child of Shay and Antiochus Raibaux of Concord Dawn.  They, like many other s on CD are farmers.  Xander spent a happy childhood doing chores, and generally learning to become a farmer like his father.  This was a life he happily aspired to.  Then came the Battle of Endor.  The Raibaux family was extremely patriotic. They loved the Empire, and in turn, the Emperor.  His death hit the family, and most centrally young Xander.  He, as many young Concordian boys had a Mandalorian hero-worship. This was fed by the closely followed exploits of Boba Fett.  With the death of the Emperor, Xander wanted to avenge his death, and protect his family, home and way of life.  He joined the Vast Empire Stormtrooper Academy and looked forward to serving the Empire for years to come.


****HEADED TO DRESHDA******
****RETURNED, AND CONFUSED****

Good biographies, X-Ray, Laugh, both is real people with realistic aspirations in life, and etc
You know what I mean,
Laugh, I love the personality you gave your character, not very appealing in character, but most definitly different and refreshing,

Same goes for you backgroun X-ray,

Post on this story pleasE:
http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/9889/page/0/

Physical Appearance

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Skin Color: White
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 120lbs
Full Name: Wedge Bathlanna
Physical Build: Slim Athletic
Homeworld: Yaven

Talents/Skills
As far as blasters go, I am a very good marksman. I also have a vast knowlegde of blasters used by both the rebelion and the empire.

Background History
I was born on Yaven during the Jedi uprising. While I was still a young boy, about ten, my parents were killed during the Jedi uprising. I saw both of my parents die that night and have had a strong vendetta against all Jedi since then. I was sent to live with my uncle, who was an Admiral in the Imperial Navy. My combined hate for the Jedi and my uncle's influence I decided to join the Imperial Forces. Having enjoyed shooting blasters since I was a young boy I joined the Corps.

Personality
I am a generally funny guy who is always trying to look at the bright side. I'm a laid back guy but won't shirk responsibility. I can be very serious when the time calls for it, otherwise I joke around a lot.