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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 3, 2008 1:32:16 AM    View the profile of liabin 
Liabin Reporting for Duty
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 3, 2008 2:15:39 AM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Welcome to the Corps, Private liabin.

I am High General Cosmic, Commander of Training (CoT) of the Vast Empire Stormtrooper Corps.

The first thing you need to do to begin your career as a Stormtrooper is to initiate your Basic Training criteria. You can begin that here: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/10263/

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 3, 2008 8:28:30 PM    View the profile of Blue-Leader 
wait... C-3, C-3 is that you?

... didn't Char Nobyl die in your story?
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 3, 2008 11:03:22 PM    View the profile of Rawr 
This is me


And yes ... Char Nobyl did Die in one of my stories ... (Wow, someone reads them? I might have to start maknig them to actaully have Quallity :P)
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 5, 2008 10:08:45 AM    View the profile of Beefnawt 
um Hi

Special Ops sounds fun
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 5, 2008 1:39:02 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Welcome guys. I'll have a new story up shortly.

The current one seems to have died.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 7, 2008 4:59:51 PM    View the profile of Jori 
Here I am. I'm reporting in.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 10, 2008 1:56:39 AM    View the profile of Cursed 
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Private First Class Andar "Cursed" Bacardi reporting for scheduled re-training.


Appearance

Andar "Cursed" Bacardi
Native Language: Galactic Basic
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Black (Genetic Mutation)
Skin Color: White
Height: 6'0
Weight: 150 LBs
Age: 23
Character's Full Name:
Physical Build: Muscular, not overweight, quick
Homeworld: Corellia

Childhood


Andar was born on Corellia some 23 years ago to an extremely poor Corellian couple Jan and Kal Bacardi. During his birth, two other brothers-Jake, and Jack-were born with Andar. Andar's parents were delighted at this, but they were an extremely poor family, so Kal and Jan sent the children off. Andar got it better off than his Brothers, Jake was sent to a Hutt Lord on Tatooine, and Jack was sent-and killed-in the slave marker. Andar was sent to Coronet City, were he his 'Owners' attempted to sell him on Corellia's Black Marker. This failed, as CorSec Troopers came in and busted the deal-his 'Owners' were killed during this engagement. Andar was then sent to an orphanage in Coronet City named Coronet City Orphanage.

Coronet City Orphanage


Andar came to the Coronet City Orphanage at age 5, he has vague memories of his supposed earlier 'Owners' and had hundreds of nightmares while at the Orphanage of them, and their deaths. But when Andar got to the Orphanage he was shown kindness, something that he had not yet experienced yet in his life. The teachers at the Orphanage always talked about the Coronet Academy, and its greatness of how it produces CorSec Officers. Andar remembered about the CorSec Officers that had helped him escape, and he vows to find those Officers today-and thank them for their help.

At age six Andar first went into the Corellian School System. Here he showed prowess in the arts of many things, and during his Gymnasium exercies he always came out first. The teachers at the School though of Andar as a cunning, young, and little boy-this would all change in the next years.

Coronet Academy


Andar remembered what his teachers had said about the academy, and he remembered how the troopers that had saved him wore the badges labeled CorSec. As Andar did not want to become a professor like his teachers had urged him to, he wanted to fight for the planet that had saved his life from slave traders. This is why he joined the Coronet Academy. At the beginning of the years, Andar studied Medical Training, and showed prowess in the 'art' of a blaster. He soon graduated top of the class two years later, graduating a Sergeant-a rank that most had not achieved when coming out of the Academy.

Incident on Corellia, Joining of the Vast Empire


When Andar, and his squadron of CorSec Officers were patrolling Coronet City they encountered some gangsters dealing Spice. Andar called for reinforcements, but it was to late-the gangsters had spotted them. Blaster fire was soon exchanged, Andar sported two kills but the rest of his squad was killed-except for two members, Andar, and Jon Lo. Lost, and saddened Andar headed on the transport Blood to Abrae, were he joined up with the Vast Empire Stormtrooper Corps. The Stormtrooper Corps were rival to the New Republic that the CorSec served, and Andar had had anough of the CorSec.

Personality


Andar is a kind man to everyone-even aliens. Since he did grow up in an orphanage, he met all kinds of alien youngling and made friends with them. But during battle Andar is as serious as a High General on the verge of death, during battle he would risk his life to save anyone in his squad-or a civilian not in his squad-he fights for the right cause.

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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 10, 2008 2:07:43 AM    View the profile of Blue-Leader 
don't know how that got there... just ignore it..
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 12, 2008 12:24:16 AM    View the profile of Rawr 
> : Notice :
> I will be away for the next three weeks.


Cya all in three weeks.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 12, 2008 2:03:13 AM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Thanks for the let-know.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 13, 2008 7:03:34 PM    View the profile of Inyk 
Private Inyk Aineastap, reporting with a hopefully half-way decent Bio(slightly condensed)

== Physical Appearance ==

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Light Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 6ft 4in
Weight: 170lbs
Age: 19
Character's Full Name: Inyk Aineastap
Physical Build: Tall, Somewhat scrawny, appears weak
Homeworld: Corellia



== Background History ==
  Born and raised in Coronet, while growing up Inyk was pushed around in school due to his lack of muscle. As he got older he learned how to fend for himself, making the bullies back away from him and focusing on the smaller and weaker, as bullies do.
At the age of 18, his father, who was an officer in the Imperial Army, encouraged him to join the military. His mother tried to push him the other way, into the fields of science and technology.
  With his curiosity in the military, but love for technology, this was a hard decision, but gave in to joining the Military with the hope of helping creating peace throughout the galaxy; he joined the Stormtrooper Corps as a young, scrawny young man, with a lot of potential



== Character's Personality ==
  Inyk prefers to stay out of other peoples business and likes to keep attention drawn away from him as he doesn’t like being the focus of a conversation.
Inyk keeps quiet, even during a 1 on 1 conversation, due to the thought that he just might learn a few things while keeping his mouth shut. Yet he expresses his opinion if he feels strongly about it.
    By not being to social Inyk does not have to many friends, but he still only considers friends as not just a person you've had a few conversations with, but as a person you have really truly have got to know. With a passion for technology of all kinds, Inyk hopes to operate or repair vehicles or weapon systems.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 14, 2008 12:32:26 AM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Was I supposed to post my bio here too?
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 14, 2008 1:14:43 PM    View the profile of Jori 
Disregard the previous comment. I forgot to log in as Jori. Well don't disregard it, just pretend that Jori said it.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 17, 2008 1:19:42 PM    View the profile of Jori 
When am I supposed to get a training email or whatever it is because I don't know what I'm supposed to be doing.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 22, 2008 10:20:56 PM    View the profile of Wrex 
== Physical Appearance ==

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Tan
Height: Six feet, One inch
Weight: 180 pounds
Age: 20 years, 4 months
Character's Full Name: Rex Williams
Physical Build: Lean
Homeworld: Coruscant


== Background History ==
Rex was a bright young boy, adept at many things throughout his childhood. He was brought up by parents who were both politicians in the local city government. Because of this, he was exposed regularly to different alien species and many different types of speech, allowing him to become multi-lingual. His young mind adapted to this and he was soon babbling away to his friends at school's in several languages in one sentence to impress them. This led to him becoming the ringleader of a group at school and as he grew up, this soon became his own gang.

He soon turned from a babbling child of 8 trying to impress his friends to a babbling teenager of 16 trying to keep an illegal deal from going bad. He had come to resent his parents and their constant worry. He only had eyes for the crime scene with it's offer of fast money and quick action. However, that action is what almost killed him.

It was like any other night in Rex's new, fast paced life. He had left his house after another fight with his parent's. He had met up with some of his "friends." Now he was on his way to a small, cramped alleyway shoved next to a seedy bar in a bad part of the city. He had approached the darkness of the alley with caution, leaving his friends to keep watch at the mouth of the alley. His contact was another human, a much older one at that. The man's features were hidden in the gloom of the alley, but Rex could see the man was extremely tall, being at least three clear inches taller than him. This did not sway Rex's confidence, however, as he knew he was a talker and a good one at that.

"You Rex?" the man said in a hurry. His voice seemed higher then it should have been and quivered slightly. Rex noticed this and was slightly concerned. My contacts never act this way. He had shrugged it off after that without much thought. He was sorry he had.

"Yeah, I'm Rex. You have the "goodies?" Rex said, using the slang he had created himself for the volatile munitions in the man's crate. He was part of a large weapon smuggling ring on Coruscant, mainly smuggling blasters and military grade rifles to crime lords across the city. How he had come to know these crime lords and their smuggling contacts, Rex can not remember. All he knows now is that he wishes he had never come to know them.

The man nodded and opened the crate, revealing a small stash of thermal detonators and several small hand blasters.

"This it?" Rex said, surprised at the small amount of weapons the man had brought.

The man nodded again, then quickly looked down at the crate as if expecting something. Rex noticed this odd behavior and turned to check on his lookouts at the mouth of the alley. "Clear?" He said, his voice almost choking the now increasing gloom of the alley. It was late night and even the lights of many shops and bars could not penetrate the darkness of the alley. He received no response.

He called out again, only this time he stopped mid-call. He heard a new sound, growing closer, louder, becoming an incessant whine...

"Cops. Damn, you set me up!" Rex yelled, turning to face the contact. To his surprise, the man had left, surprisingly silent for a man of his stature, but had left the crate in his haste. Rex quickly looked in the crate again, straining his eyes for the blasters. He knew the thermal detonators would only bring him more grief, as he did not know how to properly use them.

Finally, one caught his eye and he quickly tested it by firing it at the wall of the alley to see if they actually worked. The shot rang out, louder than Rex had anticipated, and a glowing white hole appeared in the metal of the building. By now, the whine of the police had become louder and he could faintly hear orders being given by foot units. It dawned on Rex that he was facing more than he could handle. He knew how to point and shoot a blaster, which might help if he was facing one or two rent-a-cops. However, by the sound of the many sirens Rex could tell that he was being chased by at least four groups of police. He quickly put the blaster in his belt and started to run as fast as his feet could carry him.

He burst out of the alley into the brightness of the streets, like a first ray of light from a newly risen sun. He looked behind him in time to see the first of the police coming down the opposite street, leaving him with little time to spare. His heart pumping and his mind racing, he struck off for home and what little protection it offered.

Hours later, covered in dirt and assorted other unidentifiable garbage, he quietly entered his house through the front door. His parents, surprisingly, were in bed. Rex thanked whatever higher power there was for making it home alive and well, vowing from that moment forward to separate himself from crime.

After several more years of study and countless hours perfecting his speaking techniques, he finally decided that a life in the Vast Empire Army would be a welcome change from the world of politics.


== Character's Personality ==
Rex is easy to trust others, often leaving potential strangers with his life in their hands. He also is able to easily manipulate those with weaker minds due to his years of work volunteering for and dealing with politicians and his short term in organized crime. He is a fast talker, often creating lies that can get him into trouble later.

Rex can also suffer from slight dementia, though this is rare and has only occurred once when Rex was ten years of age. A psychologist later determined this was due to a lack of development to a miniscule part of the brain, which led to the episode.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 22, 2008 11:06:03 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Very well done.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 27, 2008 1:30:49 PM    View the profile of Jori 
== Physical Appearance ==

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Red with a hint of yellow
Skin Color: Light tan
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 220 lbs.
Age: Unknown
Character's Full Name: Jori Lekrif
Physical Build: Lean
Homeworld: Iridonia


== Background History ==
Jori grew up the son that wealthy parents dreamed of. He was mildly athletic, but also intelligent. Interested in the things the wealthy were supposed to be interested in. But inside, he hated all of it, but he loved his parents and wanted to please them. Because of that he grew up with all of the hate bottled up and when he reached adulthood he let it all loose and left the planet to an unknown destination. He returned from that unknown place many years later to discover the Empire had taken over the Republic. He joined to find out just how good a government they really were, but his suspicions were proven false when he saw just how much the Empire cared about its soldiers compared to the way the Republic just sent more and more clone soldiers into the war.

== Character's Personality ==
Fun loving and joyful while relaxed, but completely focused when duty arises. Extremely loyal to the Empire. Wary of strangers but very trusting of friends. Patient. Kind and considerate to those he deems worthy. Unfortunately, very vengeful.

== Skills ==
An accomplished martial artist. Familiar with most weapons though not any projectile weapons. Higher than average strength and stamina, able to regulate bodily functions, like controlling heat loss, blood flow, and breath and heart rate, and, very rarely, shut down his entire body for up to two minutes. These abilities are due to the journey he took when he reached adulthood. On that journey, he practiiced techniques that he gained on said journey, thereby gaining some control over his body.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 27, 2008 2:15:21 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Good bio. I'd like to comment on a few things, and then you can decide whether or not you want to edit some parts of your biography.

1) How can you be proficient with every weapon in the galaxy? The galaxy is a pretty big place... infinite, in fact. Every civilization has its own weapons - some primitive while others are not. In this saga, most weapons are created from a "general blueprint" for projectiles, sluggerthrowers, etc., but not all are the same. Each civilization could have added a unique feature for firing the weapon, wielding it, etc.

If you are going to continue to say this, I would like you to provide me with an in-depth description of how your character is able to accomplish this feat.


2) What do you mean by "regulating body functions"? The only thing I know about Zabrak's is that they have two hearts. To me, being able to regulate the functions of your body/shut down your body are astounding abilities. If you continue to use this, I would (like in the paragraph above) want you to provide an in-depth explanation of how your character is able to do these functions. If you found this on a website, give me the website.


I want descriptions of these unusual abilities/feats because I need to verify that what you're saying in your biography is legit and reasonable for your character. If someone (a Human) came along and said that he has the ability to fall into some type of hibernation trance, then I need to know how that person does that in detail.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 28, 2008 12:00:25 AM    View the profile of Jori 
Does that fix it?
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 28, 2008 5:13:49 PM    View the profile of Bach254 
== Physical Appearance ==

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color:Pale
Height:6'4
Weight: 215
Age:18
Character's Full Name: Brandon A. Bachman
Physical Build: Built
Homeworld: Corsucant


== Background History ==
Brandon was born on Corsucant 18 years ago. He grew up with a poor family, with six siblings, he being the oldest. His father and mother both died when he was 14, leaving him to raise his younger siblings. About a year after his parents' death, he had to travel to Tatootine, where he supported his siblings by working on fixing fighters and old droids. He soon became an expert and dreamed of one day having his own shop back home. Finally when he was 17, he opened his own shop. One day while working in his new shop, an Imperial Recruiter came, and asked if he would like to join the Imperial Army as a storm trooper. He glady accepted, and left his shop and family to his younger brother Ryan, for him to take care of.

== Character's Personality ==
Brandon A. Bachman is a strong-willed, hard-working man, ready to tackle any task at hand. His main goal in life, is to be in charge of creating new ship ideas for the Empire.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 28, 2008 6:01:10 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Good starts guys. Check your ComNet inboxes.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 29, 2008 7:49:40 PM    View the profile of Blaster998 
Blaster998 reporting for duty sir.
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 29, 2008 9:58:27 PM    View the profile of Blaster998 
== Physical Appearance ==

Species:Human
Native Language:English
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Brown
Skin Color:White
Height:5 ft. 8 in.
Weight:110 lb.
Age:19
Character's Full Name:Blaster Crete Schwartz
Physical Build:Stron and Thin
Homeworld:Bespin

== Background History ==


Blaster got his name from his grandfather which got his name from a blaster. Blaster's life wasn't bad. When he was two his mother was shot by a rebel because she was helping a Storm Trooper with his wounds. His father was an Imperial Soldier at the time Paplatine was living. When a battle was going on Tatooine between The Empire and Rebels his father brought him along to show him how to use weapons against the Rebels.

While teaching his son about the weapons his father was shot by the same Rebel. Wathing his father's death he took the blaster his father held and shot down the Rebel. After the intense battle his Uncle Mort a general for the Empire took him in for five years.

  He taught Blaster how to use a weapon a carefully and swiftly. At the age of fifteen he left and fended for himself. Once he led a group of people against a small Rebel Platoon and won amazingly. Four years after the fall of the old Empire he joined the Vast Empire for what happened to his parents.

== Character's Personality ==
  Blaster is mostly happy unless someone mentioned something bad about him, or his family. He would draw his blaster, but then would remember what happened to his parents. He would then draw back his blaster then apologise. Any time he sees a rebel he shoots him.

== Extra Info. ==

Strengths:Speed, Weapon Use, and Fighting Skills

Weaknesses: Dark Memories, Blasts in the stomach and back, and Meele Weapons
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 29, 2008 10:58:41 PM    View the profile of Blaster998 
Excuse me Cosmic Sir I found some flaws in my characters old bio. so i had to change some things. Please forgive me about this. I just hope you can except this bio.

== Physical Appearance ==

Species:Human
Native Language:Basic
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Brown
Skin Color:White
Height:6 ft. 8 in.
Weight:130 lb.
Age:19
Character's Full Name:Blaster Crete Schwartz
Physical Build:Strong and Thin
Homeworld:Bespin

== Background History ==


Blaster got his name from his grandfather which got his name from a blaster. Blaster's life wasn't bad. When he was two his mother was shot by a rebel because she was helping a Storm Trooper with his wounds. His father was an Imperial Soldier at the time Paplatine was living. When a battle was going on Tatooine between The Empire and Rebels his father brought him along to show him how to use weapons against the Rebels.

While teaching his son about the weapons his father was shot by the same Rebel. Wathing his father's death he took the blaster his father held and shot down the Rebel. After the intense battle his Uncle Mort a general for the Empire took him in for five years.

  He taught Blaster how to use a weapon a carefully and swiftly. At the age of fifteen he left and fended for himself. Once he led a group of people against a small Rebel Platoon and won amazingly. Four years after the fall of the old Empire he joined the Vast Empire for what happened to his parents.

== Character's Personality ==
  Blaster is mostly happy unless someone mentioned something bad about him, or his family. He would draw his blaster, but then would remember what happened to his parents. He would then draw back his blaster then apologise. Any time he sees a rebel he shoots him.

== Extra Info. ==

Strengths:Speed, Weapon Use, and Fighting Skills

Weaknesses: Dark Memories, Blasts in the stomach and back, and Meele Weapons
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 30, 2008 12:18:46 AM    View the profile of Blaster998 
Heres the corrected Bio. Cosmic Sir.

Yes Sir I understand.

== Physical Appearance ==

Species:Human
Native Language:English
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Brown
Skin Color:White
Height:6 ft. 8 in.
Weight:130 lb.
Age:19
Character's Full Name:Sam Crete Schwartzz
Physical Build:Stron and Thin
Homeworld:Bespin

== Background History ==


Sam got his name from his grandfather.Sam's life wasn't bad. When he was two his mother was shot by a rebel because she was helping a Storm Trooper with his wounds. His father was an Imperial Soldier at the time Paplatine was living. One day on Bespin while Sam was at home with his grandpa his father was fending off rebels on a outer rim planet. His father was defending a base for the Empire. Sam's father was shot, and his uncle found out.

When Sam heard what his uncle said he was furious. His uncle decided to train him for five years. Sam decided to go with his Uncle Mort for five years, and hoped to find the Rebel that killed his dad. He swore revenge on that Rebel. Mort knew it was goin to be tough for Sam, but he knew Sam could do it.

  He taught Sam how to use a weapon a carefully and swiftly. At the age of fifteen Sam left and fended for himself. Once he led a group of people against a small Rebel Platoon and won amazingly.After that aming victory against that small Rebel Platoon he found that Rebel that killed his father. He could tell it was the same Rebel because Mort's description. He to his Blaster, and shot the Rebel down. He stool wasn't happy though because of the death of his father, but he knew he would find a way to find a way to take down the Rebels. Four years after the fall of the old Empire he joined the Vast Empire to take down the New Republic for what happened to his parents.

== Character's Personality ==
  Sam is mostly happy unless someone mentioned something bad about him, or his family. He would draw his blaster, but then would remember what happened to his parents. He would then draw back his blaster then apologise.

== Extra Info. ==

Strengths:Speed, Weapon Use, and Fighting Skills

Weaknesses: Dark Memories, Blasts in the stomach and back, and Meele Weapons
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 30, 2008 3:17:41 PM    View the profile of Blaster998 
Heres A Better One I Hope

== Physical Appearance ==

Species:Human
Native Language:English
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Brown
Skin Color:White
Height:6 ft. 8 in.
Weight:130 lb.
Age:19
Character's Full Name:Sam Crete Schwartzz
Physical Build:Stron and Thin
Homeworld:Bespin

== Background History ==


Sam got his name from his grandfather, and his  life wasn't all that bad. When he was two his mother was shot by a rebel because she was helping a Storm Trooper with his wounds. His father was an Imperial Soldier at the time Paplatine was living.  On a rainy day on Bespin Sam and his grandfather were playing around happily, while his father was on a gloomy outer rim planet name Cotholia. His father was leading a group of brave Imperials with his brother, and Imperial General Mort. That Rebel scum that killed Sam's mother killed his father. As soon as Mort found out, he sadly went to go tell Sam.

  When Sam heard what his uncle said he was furious. Sam said to his uncle " Uncle Mort I want you to train me for five years even if their harsh. " Mort decided to take him in for five years like Sam wanted.

  Mort taught Sam how to use a weapon carefully, swiftly, and silently. At the age of fifteen Sam thanked his uncle, left, and fended for himself. Once he led a group of people against a small Rebel Platoon, and won, after that amazing victory he found the same Rebel that killed his father. He could tell it was the same man because of Mort's description. He took his Blaster, and shot the Rebel down.  Five years after that day he decided to join the Vast Empire in honor of his father, and to restore peace to the galaxy that the New Republic destroyed. " In memory of my father I have joined the Vast Empire to restore peace to the galaxy ", said Sam.
== Character's Personality ==
  Sam is mostly happy unless someone mentioned something bad about him, or his family. He would draw his blaster, but then would remember what happened to his parents. He would then draw back his blaster then apologise.

== Extra Info. ==

Strengths:Speed, Weapon Use, and Fighting Skills

Weaknesses: Dark Memories, Blasts in the stomach and back, and Meele Weapons

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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic July 31, 2008 1:47:18 PM    View the profile of Blaster998 
hey every body
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic August 7, 2008 6:46:02 PM    View the profile of Raam 
Private Raam reporting for duty,sir
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  RE: Hellgate Squad Topic August 7, 2008 7:03:57 PM    View the profile of Raam 
== Physical Appearance ==

Species:Human
Native Language:English
Hair Color:Brown
Eye Color:Brown
Skin Color:White
Height:6 ft. 8 in.
Weight:200
Age:20
Character's Full Name:Raam Thaddeus Badegen
Physical Build: Wide and Strong
Homeworld:Corusant

== Background History ==
Raam was named after his father who was immensly proud of his son.Raam raising stable and very good, Raam dads sent him to a rich school and got a modest education and took part in various sports, from a young age his dad taught him combat skills( Shooting, close quarter combat). This continued for most his life until his entire family was killed by a rebel, Raam swore revenge and vowed to aide in the destruction of every last rebel.

== Character's Personality ==
Raam is mostly calm and peaceful unless provoked in w.hich he shall get mad but then calm down and apoligize

== Extra Info. ==
Well educated, Fit
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