Nah, don't be sorry, its bug. Not your fault, but I need you to go to the Imperial Store again. Trying buying something again. Okay?

You still need to tell me about how you would use the item. :P

Reporting for Duty!
Name: Ror Nadon
Race: Ithorian
Age: Twenty
Home World: Ithor
Lanuages: Basic, Ithorese, and Huttese
Height: 1.6 meters
Eyes: Black
Skin Color: Brown
Hair: None
Disticition (race): Curved neck, two mouths
Distiction (personal): White spots on skin

Bio: Ror Nadon is a Ithorian who is considered an outcast from his race for being violent and favoring war over peace. He left Ithor when he was sixteen and went to Coruscant and wondered from job to job there for four years. During this time he had lots of small time adventures, such as the bar fight where he found three local, rebels boasting about the storm troopers that they killed. After hearing this he flew into a rage and beat one of them to death and took the other two down. Another adventure was when he volunteered to go infiltrate a local gang and imform them about their movments. After three months of infiltration Ror was uncovered as a informat and several assassins were hired to end him. Killing the first one he ran off and found a squad of patorling storm troopers. With their help he went and raided the meeting of the gang's head, thus bringing it down. During the raid Ror killedfive men, one with his bear hands. After this, unknown to him, he was recommended to be recurited for the Imperial Storm Troopers. Three months later a messenger came to him with a note of recuritment...

Personality: Cruel and viloent, Ror is unlike just about all in his species. Being exiled at the age of sixteen he grew to hate the ideal and culture of his people. He loved the Empire a lot, thinking it rightous and a strong force. He does mask his love of cruelty and hate well, appearing to be a normal kind fellow but when it comes down to it his true colors show like a rainbow after a rain shower.

yeah but we could always go with....its the future so they must likey have the the tech to modify armor...... that always works, and besides we could go with me not wearing armor....that would make an interesting story challange...so yeah there are plenty of ways of playing off that problem

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Ok you did well by doing that. But that you need to  do now is post on our story hellgate closed doors.

Good bio you've got there Bath,
As for the story, Closed Doors is finished, sit tight, I'm gonna post a new story in a few hours time,

Bathlar wrote:Ok, going now. But what are the rules/guidlines for posting in a story? Im kind of new to this.

No mention of the Force/Jedi/Sith in your stories. (Due to our time line). You can just take a look at everyone's post and get a fairly good idea on what we're looking for in a post. It's suggested that you post in the third person instead of the first person (for simplicity sake), but write with whatever method's comfortable for you.

ithorians are jedi and good at blending into there enviroment  your white suit can't do that

i know but we will rise agian and the galaxy will pay for what they have done to us

what do i get for anwsering polls

reporting to the topic as told

Name: Doriana Serena Mariana Eritus Emeritus
DOB: Y9 D12 BBY
POB: Coruscant
Hair color: Blonde
eye color: blue
height: 6ft 1in
weight: 127-130lbs
Race: human
Age: 33
Mother: Amirianna Energa Dei Emeritus(deceased)
Father: Derick Geraldine Sorine Emeritus(deceased)
Brother: Apollo Davido Sereno Babi Emeritus
Sister: N/A

She was born after her mother went into labor 5 days earlier in a medical facility near their parent's home on Coruscant. Her father worked but took time off after her birth. She was born after 5 hours on Y9 D12 at around 12 am.

Her parents were both workers until one day when they got into an accident over the city. Both were killed and she was left with her brother to tend for her. She was about 9 when this happened, so she stood at the funeral house and cried when they buried her parents. To tell the truth, she wasn't really happy with them leaving her and was quite upset about it.

Private Hartigan Reporting for duty Ma'am !!

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Character Name: Hartigan
Occupation: Stormtrooper Corps
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Eye Color: Bright blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown, slight hints of grey
Height: 184 cm.
Weight: 198 lbs.
Marital Status: Single
Species: Human
Birthplace: Corellia
Family: Unknown

Physical Description:
Hart is an imposing man when he needs to be. He is solidly built, and keeps his body toned with daily workouts.His hair is a dark brown, His eyes, bright blue and smiling, are always wary and watching. In most light, they glow with an iridescence. He is quick to smile, revealing perfect teeth. His smile is disarming in its sincerity, and never given in deceit. When Hart smiles, it is genuine.

Background:
He was born on Corellia, an orphan. He was found a home after spending time at an orphanage but his foster parents were abusive. He was 7 when he finally fought back ramming a kitchen knife into his foster father's leg while he was being beaten. Hartigan has returned to the orphanage and his foster parents were sent to prison, much to his satisfaction. He stayed at the orphanage for another 3 years, moving from home to home before an elderly couple came by and took him from the orphanage.

They stayed together for 8 years, loving every second he spent with his new parents and their pet Betie. He dreamed of being a soldier in the Imperial Army and his foster parents supported him, helping him study until he enlisted as a Private not having a sponsor to become a commissioned officer...

Personality:
He's warm and friendly he Is very loyal to his friends, but suspicious about meeting people for the first time.Hates snakes with a passion.Hart keeps mostly to himself. He still possesses in him the hardness of the orphan, and believes that anyone should be able to stand alone before being allowed to be part of any group. He doesn't see weakness as a reason to call for help and believes that the best way to improve is to find opponents who are better. However, he is also a peaceful person and will not pick a fight.

Form of Dress:
Hart's normal day-to-day dress, is a pair of leather pants adorned with buckles and straps that seem to serve no real purpose, but look very stylish. He wears a high-necked jacket of black leather over a shirt of Malastare rayon, also colored black. His black boots come to just below the knee. Over the whole thing, he wears a heavy black cloak.

I applaud your post Hart, but we're gonna need to work a bit on this. k?

When you post, be sure to use a spellchecker like MS word, or Open Office. If you don't have any of those, then feel free to download Abi Word: http://www.abisource.com/download/

Next thing, start you sentences with a capital, and make sure make use of the full stop. Comma is your friend.

Wow, welcome Jango!

I see you got started on your biography.
Unfortunatly, your character must 17 years of age to be in the stormtroopers.
Also include your character's personality and a bit of his history,
How did he end up in the Empire?

Feel free to post on our current story: Mission Objective 911
http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/9674/
And I'm glad you're here as well

Guys, guys,
You need to continiue posting on the story, dont think one post will be enough to get you in a squad.
I need to see dedication to Hellgate in order to know that you lot will be dedicated to your future squad.

Now Lamel,  I'll PM Cosmic, as I'm quite aware of you dedication in the VE.