Rema ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Post Number: 858 Total Posts: 1056 Joined: Oct 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 9:53:55 AM | |
Let DD take the Raiders along with us.
Oh, and you DO know Raz is a DJ.
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+ Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
"Only Trust your Allies as much as you can Predict your Enemies."
"Do you expect me to talk?" "No Mr. Bond, i expect you to die."
"Luke, I am your Fasha."
To Nom Anor, a truly superior Yuuzhan Vong.
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FlyingKnight ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant Post Number: 614 Total Posts: 773 Joined: Jan 2004 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 10:47:30 AM | |
I would really dislike being in the DD I like the idea of Rizzit being a leader. ----------------------- Lance Corporal
Frank "FlyingKnight" Carter
Raider Squad
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Rizzit ComNet Veteran [VE-ARMY] Captain [VE-DJO] Initiate (IN) Post Number: 1470 Total Posts: 2356 Joined: Mar 2002 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 1:28:00 PM | |
I forgot Raz was in the DJ Rema. Thanks for pointing that out. ----------------------- First Lieutennant Rizzit
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
PC/1LT Rizzit/3SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE[OPE][OTH][EW1][RCoD][CRoM][CoH][OPA][SoA][SoS]
Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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Rema ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Post Number: 858 Total Posts: 1056 Joined: Oct 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 1:33:28 PM | |
psh, what does Rizzit know about leading a squad. ----------------------- + Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
"Only Trust your Allies as much as you can Predict your Enemies."
"Do you expect me to talk?" "No Mr. Bond, i expect you to die."
"Luke, I am your Fasha."
To Nom Anor, a truly superior Yuuzhan Vong.
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D-13 ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Gunnery Sergeant [VE-DJO] Dark Jedi Knight (DJK) Post Number: 545 Total Posts: 688 Joined: Nov 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 2:23:38 PM | |
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Rizzit ComNet Veteran [VE-ARMY] Captain [VE-DJO] Initiate (IN) Post Number: 1470 Total Posts: 2356 Joined: Mar 2002 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 3:54:37 PM | |
My take is that we should keep this thread focused on Chapter 8 and leave your little jokes and whatnot to a lounge thread. Oh, and Rema: I think I know quite a bit if it got me where I am today! ----------------------- First Lieutennant Rizzit
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
PC/1LT Rizzit/3SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE[OPE][OTH][EW1][RCoD][CRoM][CoH][OPA][SoA][SoS]
Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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Talon ComNet Overlord [VE-ARMY] High General [VE-DJO] Dark Jeedai Master (DJM) [VE-VEHC] High General Post Number: 1490 Total Posts: 2197 Joined: Feb 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 20, 2004 7:10:09 PM | |
Aye. Please keep it free of clutter. ----------------------- OO/GN Sierra "Talon" Taurus/HC-3/VEHC/VE[BC][IOC][LoC][SoS][BM][CDS][MSM]
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Shazam ComNet Member [VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 2nd Class (PO2) Post Number: 650 Total Posts: 3599 Joined: Jun 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 3:34:56 PM | |
On our Navy story, is there a limit to where we can head off to? I thought I might take my wingman to the outer reaches of the battle, maybe Chip could come rescue us or something... *Shrug... ----------------------- *Flash Was Here...*
My Real Bebop: (=A=) |
Talon ComNet Overlord [VE-ARMY] High General [VE-DJO] Dark Jeedai Master (DJM) [VE-VEHC] High General Post Number: 1490 Total Posts: 2197 Joined: Feb 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 3:46:06 PM | |
It begs the question, "Why?" You have to think of the battle strategically. If you peeled off for no reason, you'd have every comm line buzzing to get your arse back into the fray. ----------------------- OO/GN Sierra "Talon" Taurus/HC-3/VEHC/VE[BC][IOC][LoC][SoS][BM][CDS][MSM]
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Shazam ComNet Member [VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 2nd Class (PO2) Post Number: 650 Total Posts: 3599 Joined: Jun 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 3:50:09 PM | |
Dunno, maybe we could get chased out, I'm not talking miles out into space where we're almost touching planet side... I'm talking evade distance, like get far enough from the battle that you are simply fighting your single opponets but you arn't so far from the battle you can't get back in a flash. ----------------------- *Flash Was Here...*
My Real Bebop: (=A=) |
LoneWolf ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant First Class [VE-DJO] Dark Jedi Knight (DJK) [VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant (2LT) Post Number: 931 Total Posts: 1076 Joined: Sep 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 4:02:16 PM | |
I'm just curious as to how your having this work, it looks like you got this story up according to time seeing as how the navy is the first to weaken up the planet and the army is going to go in after and take it for our own. so does that mean the DJO will be activated in a sequence somewhere within this idea, or will you simply call them later once the plot reaches a certain point? ----------------------- Lonewolf/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=A=)(=SA=)(=JCPA=)(=SCPA=)[SRC][VC:Ebony]
CM/DJK LoneWolf/Sith/Eagle Sect/VEDJ
"With each kill, I grow wiser, with added wisdom, I grow stronger..." -Artemis Entreri |
Japheth ComNet Marshal [VE-DJO] Krath Templar (KT) [VE-NAVY] Rear Admiral (RAD) [VE-VEHC] Rear Admiral* Post Number: 1197 Total Posts: 2138 Joined: Nov 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 5:13:09 PM | |
Shazam: Note also that though the squadron may not have a full member compliment, the other spaces are filled with NPCs. Your writing sort of makes it sound like there aren't many people in the squadron, but there are a full 12.
That goes for the Navy as a whole, in fact. The Navy IS having some problems with members, but it still able to field several squadrons of fighters. Other squadrons currently being deployed include Sting, Nemesis and Venom Squadrons (which, if we ever get enough recruits will be activated after Viper and Aegis) as well as several wings of NPC squadrons that I cannot, at the moment, come up with good names for.
:P ----------------------- Rear Admiral Japheth Cappadocious, Krath Templar
Naval Commander in Chief, Captain of the mSSD Atrus
Headmaster of the Dark Jedi Order Academy
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HM/KT Japheth Cappadocious/DC-3/Krath Order/Elite Griffen Sect/VEDJ/VE |
Fallen Angel ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Gunnery Sergeant [VE-DJO] Sith Adept (AD) Post Number: 874 Total Posts: 2470 Joined: Jul 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 21, 2004 5:40:23 PM | |
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Kuroishi ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant First Class Post Number: 589 Total Posts: 946 Joined: Apr 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 8:28:20 AM | |
One question: What flight of Kaph will Daishi be a part of for this mission? ----------------------- Kuroishi Wraith VEA
Daishi Raptor VEN
Assistant Writer Why Project Copyright Infringment
Ich bin hessliche amerikaner.
Nehmen mir zu dein frauen von vernunftig preis tugendhafte.
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Fallen Angel ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Gunnery Sergeant [VE-DJO] Sith Adept (AD) Post Number: 874 Total Posts: 2470 Joined: Jul 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 11:46:34 AM | |
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Argon Viper ComNet Expert [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Major [VE-VEEC] Senior Writer Post Number: 1789 Total Posts: 1789 Joined: Apr 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 12:09:21 AM | |
Another question. Can we hurry up get the flyboys to disable something? I don't mind boarding actions in the middle of a firefight, but until we get to that point, I'm stuck discussing philosophy. While that may be interesting to me, I'm quite sure it's not what you guys want to hear ----------------------- Argon Viper
Sergeant Major/Senior Writer, VE Today
IW COL Argon Viper{ret}
Fallen Angel and Proud of It!
"History is on the move, those who cannot keep up will watch from a distance, and those who get in our way will not watch at all" - Grand Admiral Thrawn
"Condemnation does not liberate, it oppresses" - Carl G Jung |
Talon ComNet Overlord [VE-ARMY] High General [VE-DJO] Dark Jeedai Master (DJM) [VE-VEHC] High General Post Number: 1490 Total Posts: 2197 Joined: Feb 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 2:40:31 PM | |
Enlisted do not get saluted.
Enlisted do NOT get saluted!
ENLISTED DO NOT GET SALUTED!
That is all. ----------------------- OO/GN Sierra "Talon" Taurus/HC-3/VEHC/VE[BC][IOC][LoC][SoS][BM][CDS][MSM]
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Argon Viper ComNet Expert [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Major [VE-VEEC] Senior Writer Post Number: 1789 Total Posts: 1789 Joined: Apr 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 4:17:11 PM | |
Saluted? Yeesh, people seem to salute like water in this club... I save that for the times when I actually have real respect for someone. At least when I salute, it means something ----------------------- Argon Viper
Sergeant Major/Senior Writer, VE Today
IW COL Argon Viper{ret}
Fallen Angel and Proud of It!
"History is on the move, those who cannot keep up will watch from a distance, and those who get in our way will not watch at all" - Grand Admiral Thrawn
"Condemnation does not liberate, it oppresses" - Carl G Jung |
Japheth ComNet Marshal [VE-DJO] Krath Templar (KT) [VE-NAVY] Rear Admiral (RAD) [VE-VEHC] Rear Admiral* Post Number: 1197 Total Posts: 2138 Joined: Nov 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 4:55:56 PM | |
Daishi, Flight 3 has only a flight leader, so that'd probably be the best place. Its lightest on members, ----------------------- Rear Admiral Japheth Cappadocious, Krath Templar
Naval Commander in Chief, Captain of the mSSD Atrus
Headmaster of the Dark Jedi Order Academy
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Rema ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Post Number: 858 Total Posts: 1056 Joined: Oct 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 22, 2004 6:26:22 PM | |
hmm. I knew i was forgeting to put that in..... ----------------------- + Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
"Only Trust your Allies as much as you can Predict your Enemies."
"Do you expect me to talk?" "No Mr. Bond, i expect you to die."
"Luke, I am your Fasha."
To Nom Anor, a truly superior Yuuzhan Vong.
TRP/ASL/CPL Rema/2SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR][OPE] [AM-B][AM-S][AM-P][IH][SoA] |
Shazam ComNet Member [VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 2nd Class (PO2) Post Number: 650 Total Posts: 3599 Joined: Jun 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 23, 2004 4:53:16 AM | |
I don't beleive I'm fully aware of the definition for NPC...
In other words, I have no idea. ----------------------- *Flash Was Here...*
My Real Bebop: (=A=) |
chipmunk man ComNet Member [VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 2nd Class (PO2) Post Number: 930 Total Posts: 2064 Joined: Oct 2002 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 23, 2004 6:35:34 AM | |
An NPC is a character in the stories that is not actually in the Vast Empire. Like when you made up that Jedi guy for the writing competition, he was made up, a non-player character. I made up that Til'c guy for my stories, there is no real Til'c in the VE, so he is a non-player character. ----------------------- "The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits." -Albert Einstien
"You tell 'em I'm coming, and Hell's coming with me! You hear? Hell's coming with me!" -Kurt Russel in Tombstone
"People like you are the reason people like me take medication." -Cool T-shirt
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Shazam ComNet Member [VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 2nd Class (PO2) Post Number: 650 Total Posts: 3599 Joined: Jun 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 23, 2004 8:42:34 PM | |
Oh... I was wondering who that guy was... ----------------------- *Flash Was Here...*
My Real Bebop: (=A=) |
Fallen Angel ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Gunnery Sergeant [VE-DJO] Sith Adept (AD) Post Number: 874 Total Posts: 2470 Joined: Jul 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 12:46:46 AM | |
I was just wondering if I'm the only one who has issues with the post after post of preparations. Cant we just get to the Dominiom and get our orders without worrying about Music and that crap? This isn't a competition where post counts get you a better score. This is our history we are writing, and it should be something we can look back on and take pride in. I don't know, maybe I'm regarding the chapters with too high a value, but it seems to me that the more "clutter" we put in the line, the more confusing the storyline and the more crap we have to wade through to get the REAL story. ----------------------- Senior Sergeant Jikkyo "Fallen Angel" Nimiichi
Assistant Squad Leader (ASL): RAIDERS SQUAD
AS-3/ASL/SSGT Fallen Angel/3SQD /1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA /VE /Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [BoA]
TRN /UNI Phoenix/Training 1-3/VEDJ /VE/Lopen
"Me? I always tell the truth...even when I lie. So SAY GOODNIGHT to the badguy. It's the last time you'll ever see him. Watch out there's a bad guy comin through." Tony Montana |
Ramon Stonefish ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Major Post Number: 382 Total Posts: 617 Joined: Apr 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 2:54:52 AM | |
I think part of it is we're waiting for the Navy guys to get the hell on with it and give us a target. ----------------------- Ramon Stonefish
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Talon ComNet Overlord [VE-ARMY] High General [VE-DJO] Dark Jeedai Master (DJM) [VE-VEHC] High General Post Number: 1490 Total Posts: 2197 Joined: Feb 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 3:47:25 AM | |
No, this is the typical "I don't know where to go with the story, so I'll write filler" bit. ----------------------- OO/GN Sierra "Talon" Taurus/HC-3/VEHC/VE[BC][IOC][LoC][SoS][BM][CDS][MSM]
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Ramon Stonefish ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Major Post Number: 382 Total Posts: 617 Joined: Apr 2001 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 8:24:38 AM | |
Riiiight. Game on. ----------------------- Ramon Stonefish
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Rizzit ComNet Veteran [VE-ARMY] Captain [VE-DJO] Initiate (IN) Post Number: 1470 Total Posts: 2356 Joined: Mar 2002 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 9:49:31 AM | |
Quite honestly Tal; if they don't know what to write: why write in the first place. On a regular story, I'd tend to overlook it. But this is a very important story. ----------------------- First Lieutennant Rizzit
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
PC/1LT Rizzit/3SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE[OPE][OTH][EW1][RCoD][CRoM][CoH][OPA][SoA][SoS]
Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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Fury ComNet Overlord [VE-ARMY] High General [VE-VEHC] High General* Post Number: 1578 Total Posts: 2397 Joined: Jun 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 9:59:44 AM | |
I think I said it succinctly enough already: "Board the damn ship." ----------------------- PRF/HG Fury/VEA/TADATH/VE [SCP][PoC][SotE:HC][SotE:VEA][IOC]
Prefect - Stormtrooper Corps
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Rema ComNet Member [VE-ARMY] Sergeant Post Number: 858 Total Posts: 1056 Joined: Oct 2003 Status: Offline | RE: Chapter 8 : Notes | April 24, 2004 3:59:54 PM | |
hmmm
/me invisions a post saying "We got in, flew up, got out."
I supose. ----------------------- + Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
"Only Trust your Allies as much as you can Predict your Enemies."
"Do you expect me to talk?" "No Mr. Bond, i expect you to die."
"Luke, I am your Fasha."
To Nom Anor, a truly superior Yuuzhan Vong.
TRP/ASL/CPL Rema/2SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR][OPE] [AM-B][AM-S][AM-P][IH][SoA] |