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Trykon
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
June 27, 2012 5:20:42 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Ew, yeah, something happened to the banner when it got emailed.  Can certainly send you a bigger one, no problem.

In general, though, that looks great!  So exciting to see it comin' together!

Looking at the background, though, on my computer at least, I think maybe the four visual elements in the corners (the three star destroyers and the shuttle-and-2-TIEs-escorting-tableau) should be moved toward the center a little more, so they're visible on smaller screens?  Shall I make an adjustment and send that to you, along with the bigger banner?
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
June 27, 2012 5:37:02 PM    View the profile of Drac 
You might also want to use English rather than Latin. Just a thought.

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 24, 2012 7:46:11 PM    View the profile of Skarr 
BUMP

How has this been coming along folks?
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TRN/AC Vexus/Lopen/VEDJ
(WoS1)

"May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't" General George Patton
"A leader leads by example not by force." Sun Tzu, The Art of War
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 24, 2012 11:40:07 PM    View the profile of Hades 
I took a look over this thread and, although you've chosen your images -- or so I've gathered, correct me if I'm wrong -- here is a great source of concept ships and what-not, as well as several awesome sci-fi scenes. There are a few Star Wars images, sporadically posted, but just thought I'd give you a heads up in case you hadn't seen it -- not to mention it credits each artist, so you won't be hard pressed to find the original owner of the image.

Well, there's my 2 cents

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 25, 2012 1:12:28 AM    View the profile of Hades 
Also, I must one up you all and present you with..

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TO | CPO "Hades" | PLF Cappadocious | VENA | VEN | VE


[MC1] [CBV] [CAR] [BWC] [HNS] [SWC]
{INTER} {SfrM} {XenMA}  (=*SWC*=) {AFM} {HypM} {0Gee} {INFL}

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 26, 2012 8:52:19 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Tonight's insomnia project: playing around with a free online website creator.  Here's the result: http://willtrichon.wix.com/vastempire.

Obviously, that's nowhere near "done," but the program Wix is simple enough that I can, in fact, do all the work myself.  I don't really know what I'm doing from a technical/code perspective, though... Raziel or Kadann (or anyone who knows about such things): if I basically make a whole website using Wix, can you then just copy and paste that code to redo vastempire.com and vastempire.com/main?
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
August 7, 2012 4:06:15 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Update:

Stefan Morrell (No relation to Hunter, that I can tell.  Hehe.), a talented digital artist, has granted me, as a representative of the VE, permission to use his beautiful planetscapes.  If you look at The Vast Empire, his paintings are the ones I used to represent Tadath and Abrae. Now we officially have permission to use his entire library of images, provided we don't alter the works and we duly credit him wherever they're used.

Check out an alternate view of Abrae, and a different view of Tadath as well.

(If anyone has objections to these images, feel free to voice them.  But, at least from my perspective, they're pretty close to perfect for the two worlds.)
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
November 2, 2012 12:15:57 AM    View the profile of Skarr 
Bump. With the Disney buyout, Star Wars is on everyone's mind again. We may need this new main page quickly.
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[CDS] [ES2] [IH] [RoT] [CRoM] {RES} (VT) (ECA) (WtR) (HeS) (HoS) (3.1) (1.1) (1.2) (A5) (AS-2)
TRN/AC Vexus/Lopen/VEDJ
(WoS1)

"May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't" General George Patton
"A leader leads by example not by force." Sun Tzu, The Art of War
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
November 26, 2012 2:16:00 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
Raziel wrote:Going to need:

A higher res banner
To learn how to do drop down menus in html5
To make my stylesheet compatible with current homepage
To do the styles for all the different homepage requirements

http://www.nottingham.ac.uk/~ppxrr/veweb/

has anyone got any time or hosting space? (my space will be gone soon)

The above is quite simple, but will work well as a template for us to work on to try and natch the wix site (lthe code on that is just horrific and I don't know how it could be integrated)
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
November 26, 2012 2:22:44 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Wow, that banner IS chunky.  I can shoot you higher-res versions of everything, Raz.  Give me a day or so, though; a bunch of work came in all at once.

Image manipulation, and securing permission from artists to manipulate their images, are the things I am more than happy to provide.  The other stuff, though, I can't help with.  Anyone have hosting space?
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
November 26, 2012 2:49:37 AM    View the profile of Maroy 
I've got my own webserver I'm willing to loan. I don't have FTP or similar set up yet, but I could do it pretty easily if necessary.

I took a closer look at the Wix code and I'm pretty sure I can at least mimic its basic functionality, if we're going for something like that.
FL/MCPO Maroy/C-1/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/ISD-II Halcyon Warrior/TF:A/1FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1]
[This message has been edited by Maroy (edited November 26, 2012 9:35:09 AM)]
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
December 6, 2012 9:38:27 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Something else I think might be good to add: http://rpgrating.com/.  It's a simple system for defining specifically how much (if any) adult language, sex, and violence is permitted in your rpg, which links back to that simple, informative site.  I think that the VE in general would be a 1-1-2 on this scale, while the DJO might be a 2-1-3?  Sound about right?  Does this seem like a useful thing to have on the new main page, somewhere?
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
December 6, 2012 10:37:53 AM    View the profile of Skarr 
I actually really like that idea, Tryk. And your ratings do seem about right as well. That would help a lot for people who get on the site, not knowing exactly how far they can go.
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(WoS1)

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
December 6, 2012 10:39:15 AM    View the profile of Jegora 
Osk would be 4-4-4
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
December 6, 2012 3:09:35 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
What's that, Jeg?  Gratuitous cursing, fornicating, and graphic torture/murder descriptions required
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 12, 2013 4:49:16 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Aeos and I are working on a professional-style rebranding/advertising/marketing campaign for the VE.  She's in school for design, advertising, and marketing, and I've been working professionally as a copywriter, copy editor, and content strategist for a couple years.  We're very excited about our initial brainstorming sessions, and we think we can design an effective recruitment drive, that'll bring new members to the club...

...but the whole effort will be for naught if we don't improve the website.

Now, over the course of this thread, I've made it clear that I favor a reboot of the site, with new content and layout and, well, everything.

But I realize that such an ambitious change is easier to propose than to implement.  As evidenced by the length of time that's gone by since this thread started. 

So I'd like to offer another proposal, more modest in scope, that will tide us through the interim as we keep working toward an updated site:

Can we just rewrite the content on vastempire.com/main to eliminate all the spelling and grammatical errors, and then move that content to vastempire.com, thereby eliminating the flash intro launch page?  Those would be simple, easy changes.  And they would increase the likelihood that anyone directed to www.vastempire.com (by a recruitment drive) would actually check out the ComNet and club, rather than being dissuaded by the launch page and typos and ancient testimonials from long-gone members.

Kadann, gracious and wise sovereign of all things VE, the couple times we've been able to speak via IRC you've expressed your support for the idea of a website overhaul, in general.  This modified proposal (of just an editing pass and then a copy/paste job) would be a much quicker way to do things, and wouldn't require anyone else but you.  Please, your Supreme Moffiness, let us at least do the poor man's version of a site update.  We're begging you. 
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 12, 2013 5:54:34 PM    View the profile of Aeos 

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Aeos
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 12, 2013 5:59:40 PM    View the profile of Avalar 
Time to join the party of worshippers in order to make this happen!

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 12, 2013 7:08:03 PM    View the profile of Skarr 
Yes! If not a full overhaul, just some content updating. Please Kadann!

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 12, 2013 9:06:20 PM    View the profile of Kami 
Jumping on board the grovelling bandwagon. Would love to see this happen and some new blood on the site!

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 13, 2013 8:37:41 AM    View the profile of Havock 
/me feels the Force compell her to grovel.

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 13, 2013 11:10:04 AM    View the profile of Garryll Gates 
Grovelling will help?


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Bloodfist in the Osk Company
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 5:14:20 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
I've had another play with the wix site, just messing around with content.  That's upset all the design and formatting, so ignore that for the moment, but have a look at the changed copy: http://willtrichon.wix.com/vastempire

I think there're some promising things there.  The new crawl is much more succinct, and I like the tagline: "VastEmpire.com: the Star Wars galaxy, 'from a certain point of view.'"  I think the value proposition (that's the 3 paragraphs on top) could stand to be more concise, but I'm zeroing in.
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 5:28:21 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
I think that looks great, and the three paragraphs look fine!

I do wonder if the opening crawl could be cut down a little though.  Otherwise I think this is another of your masterpieces. Trick!

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 5:30:43 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Hehe, thanks.  Believe it or not, that version of the crawl is significantly cut, compared to what was up before.  But I've always struggled with brevity. 

UPDATE: Editing the styling a bit.  More legible font, and made the keywords bold, which really makes the shorthand messaging more clear.
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 9:59:28 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
Trykon wrote:I've had another play with the wix site, just messing around with content.  That's upset all the design and formatting, so ignore that for the moment, but have a look at the changed copy: http://willtrichon.wix.com/vastempire

I think there're some promising things there.  The new crawl is much more succinct, and I like the tagline: "VastEmpire.com: the Star Wars galaxy, 'from a certain point of view.'"  I think the value proposition (that's the 3 paragraphs on top) could stand to be more concise, but I'm zeroing in.

Cricky that's slow to load.

Let me know what you want as font types etc and I can mirror in plain CSS on the simple site.

Will await word from Kad before putting too much effort into this though.
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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 11:03:30 AM    View the profile of Aeos 
I havent done coding in years, so I'll stay out of this technically :P Tryk, will have your stuff ready to you hopefully next week, only managed to get some started this week :S

I really like the direction of the visual style, the subtle simplicity of the social media buttons on the left. I'd drop the left table containing the Vast Empire and Star Wars logo and tid bit down as it doesn't balance the hierarchy of information quite. Social media buttons like and tweet buttons are a bit cramped, but not the focus of what you're looking at right now, so we can come back later to that.

I think what I love about this, especially the main page is the lack of scrolling I have to do. The information is available smackbam upon loading.

Will we have a News page?  Just asking A new Page, or side tab of News also provides new viewer with a short insight into the spirit of what we do here. At most a side bar, or a separate page, but I think it could definitely intrigue people more seeing tid bit of news such as

OOC:
"Successfully infiltrated Correlia, but lost thousands of able soldiers in the attempt. Several individuals have been noted for their valiant efforts in suppressing the rebels into submission."


Or:
OOC:
Space Campaign infiltrating the Core is a slow process at this time due to  supply lines being cut to Kuati, one of our most important shipyards."


Or:
OOC:
For years of recognized service to our community and contribution to the campaign, Sergeant Duimpie(Link to bio on wiki) has been promoted to Senior Sergeant.



Random prolly incorrect info, but it tells a story of itself, like a live feed. Not sure if this is something you can work with Tryk. Feel free to ignore.


Usually not a fan of background images as it looks fine for the first few weeks and then the viewer becomes a bit fed up with, but going to minimal would be too corporate, not too mention this is a great picture.

I don't know anything about coding, but is it possible to have something in which there are various backgrounds? Like say, 5 or 6, and every few days or weeks it changes? Instead of SW space scene, have a SW ground scene featuring some AT-At's, unless it's a manual commitment one needs to have. Not sure what your thoughts would be on the feasibility of this Tryk and Raz, as it depends on whether what you're doing here is to be  static. If it's static then the above suggestions would definitely require more manual input in terms of weekly or bi-weekly updates or something. Not sure how it usually goes.



There's not much useful commentary I can add though any more than the above, but it's looking awesome so far guys. Well done!

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 11:43:51 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
Requires PHP or Javascript.

PHP is already enabled on the server, so I imagine that's what Kadann is already using to change the Comnet logo.

There's no point fiddling the Wix page too much if you want the page to be integrated with the main site.

http://www.wix.com/support/forum/html5/other/other/can-i-host-a-wix-site-on-1

Weebly, for example, allows you to pack up your site to a zip and modify it and export it to another domain.

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 12:30:04 AM    View the profile of Aeos 
Aaaah, I didn't really know that of Wix. Hehe, understood. We have to do what's needed right now and what is practical. I only made the above suggestions as it was in my head, but as I said, if it's not feasible, then we ignore it and stick to what is possible and do-able now

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  RE: Main Page Content Revision
July 16, 2013 3:24:27 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Nothing like new visuals to prompt responses!    Compare the four or five posts since I updated the wix site to the general lack of notice after I posted only edited text (on October 7, 2011 on this thread), for evidence of the power of visuals.

But as I've said, my proposal right now is the very simple, two-step site update:

1.) Replace the content on www.vastempire.com/main with some version of the shortened, typo-free copy on the Wix site.
2.) Move the updated content from www.vastempire.com/main to www.vastempire.com, thereby eliminating the flash landing page, and letting us lead people to www.VastEmpire.com directly in any promotional materials.

As for the bigger project - a proper site overhaul with new visuals, layout, UX, etc. - I know Wix isn't the way to go.  I've kept fiddling there only because it allows me to more easily show you guys my thoughts, rather than trying to articulate them in clunky prose.

Raz, I'll look at Weebly.  And for fonts, I think we could go one of two ways.  Either a the nice easy-to-read sans serif for the body text, and a slightly more stylized (sci fi-ish) typeface for headings (like what's on the wix site now), or else a more "literary" font like Garamond or Georgia for the body text, paired with a thick sans serif reminiscent of the Star Wars logo typeface for the headings.

Aeos, I absolutely would love to have a rotating set of background images (featuring at least the two main divisions, if not also some appropriate to DJO and Osk), but that's something more easily added to the new site after other details are settled, I assume.  The image I came up with for the wix site is good because we can use it (we have fractalsponge's permission to use his ship models), but there are other artist's renderings we have permission for too, like landscape paintings from Stefan Morrell.  All the social media stuff is a mess, primarily because I was working with Wix pre-sets... that's the sort of thing actual custom coding is going to be much better at organizing/designing.  My point in including it was just that: to say we should include it.    And lastly, Aeos, the functionality of my envisioned overhauled site would mirror the current set-up of our site: when you AREN'T logged in, it shows the short explanation of what the VE is (the 3 paragraph value proposition) and the Star Wars-style crawl, but when you DO log in, the content changes to be mostly updates from social media and the ComNet, and yes, a News ticker. 

That basic set-up of the current site - of one set of content for newcomers and strangers, and another set for logged-in members - seems sound.  The trick for us will be improving the system whereby "News" may be posted to the main site, either by increasing the number of active members who may post things as news, or by working out a more efficient system whereby divisional leads may share important ComNet news and/or VE Today-style articles to the main site.
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