Kadann
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Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
5:48:22 PM
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You all know what a biography is and you should probably already have one. What we're going to do is look for the best five biographies in the VE.
What you will need to do is complete your biography in your roster profile. To get to where you can edit your profile, you'll need to go to the VE roster and click on a division you are a member of. From there, you'll see a link on the left hand side that says 'Edit Profile'.
You will have one week to complete your biography. Once you have completed your bio, you'll need to post a reply on this thread saying "My biography is done". Once you have done that, you will be entered into the competition. You will need to post a reply by the end of the day on Sunday, May 22nd. Any submissions after that time will not be accepted.
After the one week for biography creation, there will be a one week period to judge all the biographies entered. After that week, I will announce the winner of the competition at the VE meeting on Sunday, May 29th.
The criteria for judging will be based on the following:
- Factual/Continuity (33%)
- Creativity (34%)
- Detail/Completeness (33%)
These are what must be included in your biography in order to be accepted as an entry:
- Name
- Callsign
- Age
- Species
- Height
- Weight
- Hair Color
- Eye Color
- Reason for joining the Empire
- Place of Birth
- Any Marks/Scars
- History (This is where your creativity comes in)
-- Family
-- Training
-- Prior Experience
-- Character Skills
These are the rewards for the best biographies:
1st Place: 1,000,000 ICs
2nd Place: 700,000 ICs
3rd Place: 400,000 ICs
4th Place: Theta-class T-2c Personnel Transport
5th Place: BD-3000 "Betty" Luxury Droid
Enjoy! ----------------------- Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
Head of the Vast Empire High Council
HHC/GM Kadann/HC-1/mSSD Atrus {EE}{MoH}{TT}{SY4}
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
6:27:35 PM
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Sir, I just have one question: How can I separate each paragraph from the rest? I have it like that when I type it, but when I look at my profile when I finish, it doesn't come out like that. It never has. Please help me, sir. Because once that's sorted out with, I'll be done. ----------------------- Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
     
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Petty Officer 1st Class Jack Nebulax, Imperial Navy, Vast Empire .
XO/FL/PO1 Jack Nebulax/Nazgul 5 (2-1)/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN /VE (=A=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B]
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Magistrate Jack Nebulax, Planetary Governor of Rallos, Imperial Directorate (http://www.directorate.net/)
PG/MAG Jack Nebulax/Rallos/Cantrell/Diadem
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Admiral Jack "Zax" Nebulax, Commander of Wing I (Nemesis Wing) of the Auroran Defense Fleet (ADF)
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Kairo
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
6:32:49 PM
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I had the same trouble. Type < p > without the spaces and you will get spaces on the roster.
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Squad Leader
*DarkDragoons*
SL/SR.SGT Kairo/2SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [CDS][BoA][CoR]
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Cosmic
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
8:36:19 PM
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The Profile Editor on the Roster works with HTML commands. I use:
<.br>
<.br>
(without the .) because I can control exactly how many line-breaks I want.
Also, Kad, anyone (meaning AHC staff) can do this as well, right?
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
CoT/BG Cosmic/HCA-3/SL/3SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CDS][IH][GS][LM][SoS][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC]
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Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
SL/KPR Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK]
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Kadann
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
8:57:44 PM
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Yes, this competition is open to anyone.
The biography uses pure html, so if you wanted to format it for new lines and stuff, you'll need to use the html tags stated in previous replies. ----------------------- Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
Head of the Vast Empire High Council
HHC/GM Kadann/HC-1/mSSD Atrus {EE}{MoH}{TT}{SY4}
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JR
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 15, 2005
9:00:56 PM
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My bio is done. ----------------------- Senior Seargent JR Iron Horse Squad
SSGT/JR/1SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR]
"And the battles just begun. There's many lost but tell me who has won." -> U2
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 16, 2005
1:46:30 PM
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And don't forget to spellcheck the bio. You wouldn't want to lose out over something that's creative but looks like you didn't take the time to read it over, now would you? ----------------------- PRF/HG Fury/VEA/TADATH/VE [SCP][PoC][SotE:HC][SotE:VEA][IOC]
Prefect - Stormtrooper Corps
Administrator - Imperial Center
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Jack Nebulax
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 16, 2005
2:35:49 PM
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[This message has been edited by
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Raziel
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 16, 2005
4:03:52 PM
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is this:
http://www.vastempire.com/main.cfm?cfid=22206&cftoken=47741822&ref=meetingLogs&id=70&yr=2002
The last time we had a bio comp?
3 years on i guess mine could do with updating . . . ----------------------- + Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
PL:A/1LtRaziel/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/{EW1} (WoS1) 2x(VP:1) {IG} {CDS} {BoA} {PoC} {BC}
Assistant Squad Leader - Squad4 Wraiths
"Computer games don't affect kids; I mean if Pac-Man affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to repetitive electronic music." Kristian Wilson, Nintendo, Inc, 1989.
"God does not play dice with the universe" - Albert Einstein
"Who are you to tell God what to do with his dice?" - Bohr
"God does not play dice with the universe. He plays an ineffable game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of any of the other players [i.e. everybody], to being involved in an obscure and complex variant of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules, and who smiles all the time." - Terry Pratchett
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 17, 2005
2:16:17 PM
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*blows the dust off his bio*
*cough*
I am not sure but it's been a while. I suppose I could spruce mine up a bit. ----------------------- Kuroishi Wraith VEA
Daishi Raptor VEN
Assistant Writer Why Project Copyright Infringment
Ich bin hessliche amerikaner.
Nehmen mir zu dein frauen von vernunftig preis tugendhafte.
"And the sound of many heads hitting many solid objects was heard throughout the land." me
Avatar by scientist computer graphics subdivision of Clan Wombat.
"It's not what I'm on it's what I'm NOT on."-far as I know me
"Now equiped with Swiss Army Lightsaber!"
5/13/2005-My journey to the Darkside is complete
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Cyanus
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 17, 2005
6:37:52 PM
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*glances at the rules*
You're on. Bio complete.
I will win, muahahahaha. ----------------------- ASL/SSG Cyanus/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/VEA/VE[BoA] [ES1][BC]
CM/DJK Cyanus/Krath/Lion 1-6/VEDJ/VE[VP1]
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"History belongs to those who have the will to forge their own path." -- Cyanus
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 17, 2005
6:38:51 PM
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That was....difrent. ----------------------- *DarkDragoons*
TRP/PFC Shakey/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA [LoR]
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Willtconq
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 17, 2005
7:15:42 PM
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Cy, if you think your's is that good, then i might take a look at it, and maybe steal some ideas. ----------------------- -(William the Conquerer)-
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 19, 2005
12:45:52 AM
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I have completed my bio. Its alright I suppose, but due to newly found information about my "old home planet" it caused me to have a different background.
Hope you enjoy it. ----------------------- Colonel TJ
Raider Squad
Sith Guardian TJ
{CDSx2}{ES}{CM GW}{LoCx7}{MSM}[IOC]
"Conquer fear, and you will conquer death."
*Joined December, 1999*
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Kalron
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 20, 2005
3:46:20 AM
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Angel
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 22, 2005
11:26:34 AM
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bio complete...well the condensed verson is. ----------------------- =[Arrogant Elitist Fire Team Captain]= Iron Horse Squad
FTC/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle 1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]
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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
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Eviscares
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 22, 2005
11:59:53 AM
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ready ----------------------- Iron Horse Squad
Take me out
To the black tell 'em I ain't coming back
Burn the land
And boil the sea
You can't take the sky from me
Who dares wins!
TRP/PFC Eviscares/1SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR]
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Sniping101
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 22, 2005
9:09:53 PM
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Done!
jsut thought of a cool idea for one now, but its too late to put it into effect, so i'll do it once the competition is over. ----------------------- TRP/SSG Sniping101/4SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR][IH][BoA]
"Next time I hide something, I'm packing explosives around it. Explosives shaped like silver bananas! Stops thieves, monkeys and monkey thieves in one fell swoop." - Kang the Mad
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Zafo
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 22, 2005
11:08:55 PM
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Completed.
Damn, its 12:09 Monday morning. 9 Minutes late, All I'm gonna say is I just got home, please accept my bio into the competition. ----------------------- ~ZaFo
*DarkDragoons
+ Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
TRP/CPL ZaFo/2SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE
~Keep on Rocking in the Free World
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 23, 2005
1:11:06 PM
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I know it's late, but I'm done. It got a little hectic last night and I couldn't get the post in. Sorry. Please accept it ----------------------- Feed a womp rat a food ration, he'll want an energy stim. Give him an energy stim, and he'll rip your throat out.
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Kadann
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Biography Competition Entries
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May 25, 2005
10:43:20 PM
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Here are the valid entries that I see for the biography competition.
- JR
- Jack Nebulax
- Cyanus
- TJ
- Kalron
- Angel
- Eviscares
- Sniping101
- Zafo
If you do not see your name, you didn't follow the rules.
I will be judging these biographies with the rest of the HC throughout the week and will announce the winners on Sunday during the meeting. ----------------------- Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
Head of the Vast Empire High Council
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 26, 2005
2:22:44 PM
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Jack Nebulax
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 28, 2005
2:39:08 PM
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DJ234
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 28, 2005
2:41:53 PM
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Hope you Win Jack ----------------------- We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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FL/PO2 DJ234/Nazgul 9/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN/VE (=*A*=)
Gaming Reporter/G-Rep DJ234/G-Reporter: 3/Gaming Division/VE/VET
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 28, 2005
2:45:16 PM
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Kadann
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Biography Competition Results
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May 29, 2005
3:51:47 PM
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The biography competition is now completed and I have tallied up all the scores from each of the biographies. Over-all, the biographies were all good; and I'd like to thank all those who participated by awarding each of you 2,500 ICs.
Here are the results for the competition:
1. Angel
- 31 - Factual/Continuity
- 33 - Creativity
- 30 - Detail/Completeness
- 94 - Total
2. Cyanus
- 30 - Factual/Continuity
- 32 - Creativity
- 28 - Detail/Completeness
- 90 - Total
3. Zafo
- 27 - Factual/Continuity
- 25 - Creativity
- 25 - Detail/Completeness
- 77 - Total
4. Eviscares
- 26 - Factual/Continuity
- 23 - Creativity
- 25 - Detail/Completeness
- 74 - Total
4. Sniping101
- 26 - Factual/Continuity
- 25 - Creativity
- 23 - Detail/Completeness
- 74 - Total
6. Jack Nebulax
- 26 - Factual/Continuity
- 18 - Creativity
- 23 - Detail/Completeness
- 67 - Total
7. JR
- 23 - Factual/Continuity
- 16 - Creativity
- 16 - Detail/Completeness
- 55 - Total
8. TJ
- 23 - Factual/Continuity
- 15 - Creativity
- 13 - Detail/Completeness
- 51 - Total
9. Kalron
- 23 - Factual/Continuity
- 15 - Creativity
- 8 - Detail/Completeness
- 46 - Total
If anyone has any questions about your score, feel free to email me and I'll be happy to answer them. ----------------------- Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
Head of the Vast Empire High Council
HHC/GM Kadann/HC-1/mSSD Atrus {EE}{MoH}{TT}{SY4}
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 29, 2005
4:20:59 PM
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Congrats Angel (and of course to the rest of you too guys)
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Iron Horse Squad
Take me out
To the black tell 'em I ain't coming back
Burn the land
And boil the sea
You can't take the sky from me
Who dares wins!
TRP/PFC Eviscares/1SQD/1PLT/COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR]
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5:47:30 PM)]
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Willtconq
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 29, 2005
4:59:51 PM
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Congrats to everyone. ----------------------- -(William the Conquerer)-
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
XO/FL/SPO Willtconq/Kaph 5/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN /VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B]
Rep|Int/Rep Willtconq/Rep:3/Reporters-Interviewers/VET/VE
Wm/Rep Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE
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Jack Nebulax
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 29, 2005
6:55:43 PM
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[This message has been edited by
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7:00:43 PM)]
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Willtconq
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RE: Biography Competition
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May 29, 2005
10:52:25 PM
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sorry Jack, but in most competitions, placement goes as: incase there's a two person tie, they both competitors are considered to be both the place they're in, and the place after. So in this case, they are both at 4th place and 5th place. ----------------------- -(William the Conquerer)-
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
XO/FL/SPO Willtconq/Kaph 5/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN /VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B]
Rep|Int/Rep Willtconq/Rep:3/Reporters-Interviewers/VET/VE
Wm/Rep Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE
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