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January 2, 2006
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Shazam, I'll be getting in more posts, just to let you know.
And, another thing, when's the new story going to start? I've been trying to get in a personal story for over a month now, and I have it started already. I'd like to finish it before the next mission. -----------------------
Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
   
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January 2, 2006
10:45:39 AM
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Hmmm.... Well, the deadline for this story is this weekend... So, considering we'll be planning a new story from Sunday night to Wednesday.... You'll have four days. Will that be enough? I mean, we don't just take a hiatus although maybe we should plan a vacation one of these days... Lemme know. -----------------------
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January 2, 2006
11:47:59 AM
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January 2, 2006
2:34:27 PM
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So you'd like to put you down as semi-active status when I report? And DJ, your going to come back up to full activity then? It's weird having to address it this way, but I made it up myself, so I can make problems with it... 
Oh well- anyways, I'd like everyone to get in there and tell us about your near-death experience. Kind of ironic to have the life-support just cut out on you when you just got done doing it to the enemy only moments ago, is it not? This story is almost done, so I spose it might as well start talking about the next mission.
Now, we're lookin at three or four days of down time for story creation. That's the most I'm ganna allow. I can tell you right now that there will be basically no time at all in between this mission and the next one. It will be immedietly there-after and really= an emergency. We'll be going off to do the mission we were originally intended to do, except we'll be late. Thas right kids- more pirates. But we'll be takin them out in fighters this time- the navy way if you will.
So, I suppose I suggest everyone look over that site with the cockpit details and such. Make sure you know what it looks like and how you can describe flight. If you have any questions, just bring it up here and we'll do our best to answer them. That site is:
http://www.theforce.net/swtc/tie.html#cockpits
Thas all I got for now. Btw, I got a Theta-class T-2c Personnel Transport for the squadron. I'll see if I can get it added to our posessions. We still gotta get that actual carrier for our fighters, lol. Man- that was a long time ago too. I'll look into it. Keep rockin.
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January 2, 2006
2:44:26 PM
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Here are the specs of the ship you wanted Shazam.
Strike-Class Medium Cruiser:
Class: Cruiser
Corporation: Loronar Corporation
Hyperdrive: x2/x12
Sublight: 80MGLT
Weapon(s): 20xTurbolaser
10xTurbolaser battery
10xTractor beam
10xIon cannon
Length: 450m
Hull (RU): 752
Shields (SBD): 1,600
Crew: 2,112
Passengers: 340
Cargo: 6kt
12 fighters
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January 2, 2006
2:56:29 PM
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January 2, 2006
9:38:25 PM
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Which reminds me- reports are due starting this week everybody. Thas right, send it to your FL, XO, and SC... I like that... Anyways.
Now, I think we need to brainstorm a bit for this next mission. Its not the story necessarilly that needs work, but the features of the story. I realize that space flight isn't the best area right now, but I'm ganna try to facilitate those who need it. That means we add more to the battle than just 'flying around.' We give detail. Are there asterioids, satelites, space stations, heavy debris areas? Maybe points of planetary sheilding. But then, maybe we need to establish a planet first. It needs to be imperial controlled of course and preferably a semi-wealthy one. About medium class. We could always make one up, but I'd like to find one in existance for the rest of the VE's sake. Any ideas? Lol.
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January 3, 2006
9:40:06 AM
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I know this isn't my area or anything, but how about Cepany. You can find info on it in the controlled systems section. I've done a lot of work on what the terrain and weather and animals are on the planet with my Army character, but as far as I know, you guys could do whatever you like with the space surrounding it. Asteroid belt on one side. Planetary shields, etc. Also, Cepany is a great place for pirates and smugglers, so you can add that in too. Just a thought. -----------------------
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January 3, 2006
5:05:55 PM
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That fits the description perfectly, thankyou. Where is that post thread with the information you spoke about, btw? I don't really explore the rest of the comnet very often. And, if you would be so kind, can you give us a quick description of the people and maybe where the system itself is in the universe? Lol, jumped a little in that request. Anyways, we're just trying to establish what type of characters and background we can create. Any other ideas we should maybe review though? -----------------------
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January 3, 2006
5:51:35 PM
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Hey, if Hunter's suggestion doesn't work, why not try my homeplanet, Aurora Prime? It's Imperial-controlled, sort-of wealthy, and has a defense fleet that would side with the Vast Empire any day. Sure, no shields, but there could always been an asteroid belt. -----------------------
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January 3, 2006
8:08:48 PM
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Doing this as my Army name, because I don't feel like changing right now.  This is Hunter. Anyways, One of the places you can look for information about what I've done with the planet, is under the storynet, Planetary Wildlife. That probably won't be much help to you, but it's there. Also, a good description of the planet's terrain is under the controlled systems, and the posts that I've done about it are mainly in two places. Both of which are Army stories. Unfortunately, you can't look at those... I can surmize it as best I can here. The people are not really happy with Imperial rule. They've been known to make riots at such. There is a large underground resistance, but they have gone into hiding and are gathering their forces. Smugglers and Pirates like the area, because they can hide in the mountains and like to use the bars as recuitings areas and information swapping. Cepany also attracts a lot of tourists.
Cepany has a lot of water, meaning oceans and such. A few of the water fronts of Cepany have been worn by the crashing waters hitting the rocks. These rocks are made of high crystal deposits, which the natives mine and use as one of their main forms of income. They have even created a few whole cities made out this crystal right on the oceans front. They are well advanced and will probably have satelites, planetary shielding, and other things floating around right above the atmosphere in orbit. One last thing I think you might be able to use is that Cepany sometimes have horrible storms. Lots of lightings, high winds, hail, rain that is going so fast it will leave bruises if it hits your bare skin. Might be able to use that some how by flying in it.
Cepany is located in the Rheagent system, which also has the VE's capital planet. Unfortunately, all the VE's planets, like Tadath, Cepany, Lotiath, don't exist. Most, if not all, are made up. I do know where in the universe we supposedly are though. I'll edit this tomorrow with a link to a universe map and tell you where to look on it. I'd do it now, but I'm on the wrong computer. I hope this helps some. Not sure what I could really give you. Oh, and if anyone knows that some of this is wrong, please correct me.
Edit: Like I said I would above, here is the link to that map. Tada . If the link doesn't work, tell me and I'll fix it. Anyways, once you click on that, off to the left it says maps. Click on Galaxy. Then click on Galaxy again once you are in the next window. A big map that is orangish should appear on your screen. Now, on the left hand side, near the middle of the map, you should see the Spar sector and the Albajeck sector. Right above those is Rattatak and next to that is G'rho, farther up is Codian moon. The VE's systems are above Rattatak and G'rho and to the left of Codian moon. You'll see the giant gap of space on the map. We're in that area. So, Cepany is around there. Now, any of the HC can say I'm completely wrong, but I'm pretty sure that's where it is. I figured this out from things they've said and information on the comnet... I could have misread though. I hope that helps.
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January 4, 2006
3:39:49 PM
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Alright, making my appearance again. I'm back from a looong leave, and thanks for that phone call lastnight Shazam, it made me wanna come back.
I'm sure I can just jump right in on the story, cause shazam told me everything I needed to know.
See you guys around, and whom ever my FL is, don't expect any reports from me.
I'm....you know....too lazy...  -----------------------
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January 4, 2006
3:42:33 PM
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January 4, 2006
3:51:12 PM
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Just a little notice: My report will be a day late this week. I`m travelling tomorrow, and don`t have time today.
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January 4, 2006
4:56:30 PM
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That might be alright Jack, but we gotta make sure we have the plot developed before we can pick destinations and such.
Jaden- You ganna send them and it'll be every Thursday. Message Center or E-mail- I don't care.
Hunter- Would you say that the locals would rather have the NR in control or do they just not like outside rule period?
Anyone else got anything they would like to add- the story is just about done. Thas right, everyone get in those post. I suppose we're in a bit of a dead spot unless someone wants to get Art sucked in by the Tractor beam? Art's got his own idea he's ganna throw in there for you guys and then Jen or myself can make the final plot move. Mind you, I have more word to spread about the people in this group, so do as best you can.
And here's your results thus far in my semi-neat fashion.
Competition Results Thus Far:
Members Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Total
Shazam 3 7 2 12
Arturus 5 3 1 9
Trevor Evenson 7 7 1 15
Jaden 0 0 1 1
Jen Knight 3 1 0 4
Darius 3 3 1 4
Tokijin 4 3 1 8
Dj234 0 0 0 0
Jack Nebulax 5 5 1 11
Crimson Phoenix (Not Participating in this competition)
That's it everybody. I'm sure you can see a spot or two where you can move up a place... Go for it. The race is a close one and there's not much room to add, so you'll have to be creative to get things to fit. However, we'll make just a little more room for you guys as the end. The best to you all.
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January 4, 2006
6:14:42 PM
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They just don't like outside rule. That whole, they like feeling their superior type stuff. -----------------------
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January 4, 2006
6:36:38 PM
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January 4, 2006
10:10:51 PM
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I`d imagin that getting them in at any time would be good..lol, but thats just my assumption.
Yeah..that is a pretty close race....I`ll just have to do my best to hold onto first
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January 5, 2006
3:34:25 PM
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Report in. I'll see you guys around this weekend. Shazam, check your message box, I sent you the report, and some other stuff in there too.
Sorry I jumped in on the story so late guys, I just got ungrounded, but now I will be back on everyday in full force.
Good to be back. And also, Nice writing Trevor and Toki. You guys are good. -----------------------
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January 5, 2006
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January 6, 2006
1:13:25 AM
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Thank you Jaden .
Alright...report will be sent in later today to whoever I have to send it to, And when someone else posts, I`ll try to get in another. Lets get this story wrapped up before Sunday  . -----------------------
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January 6, 2006
3:27:14 PM
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Yea, no broblem Trev. Um, I'll just be reading up on how about the interface in the TIE interceptor.
See you guys around this weekend. -----------------------
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January 7, 2006
1:11:47 PM
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Well- I'm kind of hopin Art will make the last post for me- I'm kind of limited at the moment. I'll be back Sunday night though- so, hold on until then. Get what you can in and you should have your last story movement. Keep rockin everyone.
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January 7, 2006
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January 8, 2006
7:06:43 PM
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Well, I've posted the final plot turn of this story... However, if someone would like to add one more for the character developement of the captain we only so for a short while.
I would like that strike-cruiser we were just on to explode as the boarding party is getting to it. Everyone can talk about that and then our final plot twist once they're aboard the ship. Read carefully and post in a sensible manner. If anyone finds mistakes with eachother's post, don't be afraid to clean them up. Thas about it for now- you may post until the story is up on Wednesday. Rock on. -----------------------
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January 9, 2006
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January 9, 2006
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Yeah....that is a MAJOR plot change.....
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January 9, 2006
6:06:05 PM
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What can I say- the story evolves. Take this opportunity to explore your character through grief or confusion... Do as you wish.
Got two things we need to work out, guys...
We've been given a superb planet to post about and I would really be disappointed if we couldn't figure out how to get every aspect of it into this next story. How can we get ourselves in the atmosphere and then back out to space? Or maybe space, atmosphere and then back to space? Something has to draw us to the planet. I also like the idea of us getting delayed somehow by a storm on planet. Lets use absolutely everything we can people. Give us your ideas. Lets hear 'em. Anything cool you've been waiting to use? Just think about it for a while and lets get all the ideas done before Wednesday. The first story post for the next mission will be on Wednesday. You can continue to post on the story until that first post...
Speaking of characters and such- another part of the Wing Steps we've been putting out to improve the efficiency of the Navy and overall well being is to get squadrons better understood. That basically means that everyone should know how to speak about the character's they involve in their post before they go on ahead and use them. So, what I'd like everyone to do is get three or four simple questions that pertain to your character and how they act. Doesn't have to be very detailed, no need to ask 'Where am I from?" Just- how do I act, what would I do if this happened? We're trying to asses how well you understand people's characters is all. Does anyone have a problem or would like to comment on it? If not, I ask that they be completed by Thursday- sent through your reports. They must be sent in your reports, nothing else. So I suppose if you don't report this week your going to be having some problems :>. Thas about all I got for now... Keep rockin. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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Darius
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January 10, 2006
10:02:52 PM
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Time to finish this story up now. If I'm not mistaken, we're starting the next one tomorrow night. So between now and then, get your final post in.
btw, this one had turned out to be a great story, excellent work and keep it up! -----------------------
All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men to do nothing. --Edmund Burke
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Trevor Evenson
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RE: Nazgul Topic
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January 11, 2006
6:18:46 PM
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I agree with Dar. This one was pretty darn good.
I guess it wraps up tonight...And I`m still in the lead! Yay for myself.
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