Kanderin Draken
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Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
2:53:13 PM
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Myself and Tanus decided this would be a good idea, considering our squads are basically working together. All talk about the competition should be really placed in here, its just a place that the two squads can communicate freely, without having to pester each others real squad topics.
Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VENow! This is it! Now is the time to choose! Die and be free of pain, or live and fight your sorrow! Now is the time to shape your stories! Your fate is in your hands! - Auron, FF X
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
2:59:10 PM
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Good idea  Also this way, we aren't PMing lots of people aswell 
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Tanus Solvona
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
3:15:17 PM
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I'll let Blackjack know where to go for squad discussions regarding the comp will be. Also, I put up our first post, so they can get ready and raring for the story.
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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
3:40:20 PM
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Behold  The forest that Absolut has just worked its way through, the black pipe is what they are currently wading through. Soon however, they will arrive here (and this is where I got snazzy)  As I tried to caption, myself and Tanus have decided that candy squad will intercept Absolut as it attempts to enter the complex, and a gunfight will ensue. I did both of these maps because although what we are doing and what places look like are clear in my head, they may not be so clear for everyone else. This is so everyone knows where we are and whats going on. I hope. Some people never appreciate an artists work  . Any questions, send them this threads way.
Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VENow! This is it! Now is the time to choose! Die and be free of pain, or live and fight your sorrow! Now is the time to shape your stories! Your fate is in your hands! - Auron, FF X
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Tanus Solvona
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
3:46:04 PM
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Garryll, there is a 350 word minimum, and your post doesn't look like it makes the cut. Can you please make it slightly longer?
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Garryll Gates
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 14, 2008
4:10:29 PM
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Certainly. I wasn't aware of the minimum.
BlackJack Squad-Sergeant, Heavy Weapons TRP/SGT Garryll Gates/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath  He, who heard the sound of thy holy trumpet, and took not warning. He hath clearly wandered too far from the word of God. Your hour has come. Let's get it on, Big Boy. It's time to get back on the path. I love having the moral high ground. You make a great target up there - Han Solo No, what you have are bullets, and the hope that when your guns are empty I'm no longer be standing, because if I am... you'll all be dead before you've reloaded - V from V for Vendetta Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof.- V "In three" "What happened to in five?" "I just ran out of patience." -Clone Captain Ordo and a Clone Commando
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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 15, 2008
9:42:56 AM
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Rizzit wrote:=* I normally do not do this, but I have honored a request that it get done. For a post to count it must be a MINIMUM of 350 words long and MOVE THE STORY ALONG in some way/shape/form. Posts that do not meet this requirement will still be counted as part of the story but will not appear in the official post count. Also, ANY form of quote-posting will be deleted no questions asked (unless it is one line or two).
* This story is all NPC characters which means they can die. When a character dies, your story moderator will insert a new member for you. In the meantime you have 11 other characters to control from the same squad so have fun with that! Make things real but don't make them superhuman: I don't want to see anyone posting on god-mode.
Follow those two rules, and you should be fine
Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VENow! This is it! Now is the time to choose! Die and be free of pain, or live and fight your sorrow! Now is the time to shape your stories! Your fate is in your hands! - Auron, FF X
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Garryll Gates
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 16, 2008
7:42:04 AM
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BlackJack Squad-Sergeant, Heavy Weapons TRP/SGT Garryll Gates/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath  He, who heard the sound of thy holy trumpet, and took not warning. He hath clearly wandered too far from the word of God. Your hour has come. Let's get it on, Big Boy. It's time to get back on the path. I love having the moral high ground. You make a great target up there - Han Solo No, what you have are bullets, and the hope that when your guns are empty I'm no longer be standing, because if I am... you'll all be dead before you've reloaded - V from V for Vendetta Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof.- V "In three" "What happened to in five?" "I just ran out of patience." -Clone Captain Ordo and a Clone Commando
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 16, 2008
5:19:20 PM
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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 17, 2008
2:55:28 AM
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Heh, Rizzit's thermal detonator plan messed my idea up pretty bad, but we'll work around it. Absolut are heading for the roof to get supplies, Candy squad should be following them. Tanus and Gio, Ill leave where you catch us completely up to you.
Why I'm at it, I'd like to give you Blackjack guys invitations to our squad meeting this Sunday. Since everything I have to report will only really be focused on the competition, I see it as a good chance to get everyone together and throw ideas back and forth, hopefully improving our working as a team.
If you're interested, it's at 2pm CST in #wraith, an hour before the VE meeting.
Good job at sneaking up on us in the last few hours by the way, we're virtually neck and neck now. 
=================Army=================== Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]=============Special Operations================ ~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VE===========================================
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Jennabelle
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 17, 2008
6:04:07 AM
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yes, quite the surprise. though what's more surprising is the sudden death of Alema, don't worry, no revenge path this time, although if you guys want the revenge path, well, Alexis will have to stay alive then.
-=Wraith PRIDE=- *HeavyWeapons * TRP/LCPL Jennabelle/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/Tadath "Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force. " -Darth Vader "Remember, Remember, the fifth of November" -V "So do all who seeks to live, but that is not for them to decide. All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you." -Gandalf the Grey
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Tanus Solvona
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 18, 2008
11:28:21 AM
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Uh, Garryll, who were you posting for? None of our NPCs even have those names. If you wouldn't mind, I'd like you to edit the post and use names that we actually have  . Other than that, no worries. Good post.
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TX-47
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 18, 2008
1:57:25 PM
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So what batch of names do we have? 
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Giovanni Bryden
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 18, 2008
2:00:24 PM
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The list is here. You belong to candy squad, for the time being. Pick one name and stick with it. http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/10566/
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Tanus Solvona
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 18, 2008
10:40:12 PM
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I want to point out that you CANNOT post for someone who is a higher position in the normal squad than you. (i.e. i can post as anyone, Gio can post as the ASL and lower, etc.)
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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 19, 2008
2:38:43 AM
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Sorry about the absence yesterday guys, had to pick Helena up from the train station, and a party on the night pretty much took up all my time. Good News -
Wraith and Blackjack story - 36 posts
Iron Horse and Jester - 24 posts
Paladin and Raiders - 14 posts
Well in the lead in that stakes, well done everyone. And in terms of Wraith vs Blackjack.
Wraith- 20
Blackjack - 16
Pretty much neck and neck.
/me runs off to post
=================Army=================== Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]=============Special Operations================ ~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VE===========================================
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Garryll Gates
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 19, 2008
7:24:20 AM
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BlackJack Squad-Sergeant, Heavy Weapons TRP/SGT Garryll Gates/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath  He, who heard the sound of thy holy trumpet, and took not warning. He hath clearly wandered too far from the word of God. Your hour has come. Let's get it on, Big Boy. It's time to get back on the path. I love having the moral high ground. You make a great target up there - Han Solo No, what you have are bullets, and the hope that when your guns are empty I'm no longer be standing, because if I am... you'll all be dead before you've reloaded - V from V for Vendetta Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof.- V "In three" "What happened to in five?" "I just ran out of patience." -Clone Captain Ordo and a Clone Commando
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Aeos
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 19, 2008
8:43:58 AM
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Quote:Pick one name and stick with it.
I just want to mention that we do not encourage you pick to pick one name and stick with it  We like to see that everyone participating with more than one NPC, save except for the whole ASL/SL thing Tan mentioned.
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 19, 2008
4:32:36 PM
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Thanks Aeos, Gio! I've got catching up to do...

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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 26, 2008
2:51:43 PM
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Just a heads up to Wraith and anyone else that might be interested. I apologise for the lack of motivation in my posts as of late, im really suffering with my posting ability right now, and im not quite sure as to the reason apart from that I'm very, very tired.
I am keeping the posts up however, and we will all still put in an impressive stint for the last few days of the competition. Good luck everyone.
=================Army=================== Senior Sergeant Kanderin Draken -=Wraith PRIDE=--=Assistant Squad Leader=-~ W i l d c a r d P l a t o o n ~ Wraith Squad Motto: When staring in the face of death we see our reflection ASL/SSGT Kanderin/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoS]=============Special Operations================ ~Phantom~Phantom Lead Xephilus Sekine/Alpha Squad/Alpha Team - 1/VE===========================================
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Jennabelle
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 31, 2008
3:14:32 AM
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you know, Kand, I'm having the same problem too right now, a bit, as you see my posts aren't quite the understanding ones as Gio has got my latest post mixed up that I'm arrogant and shot me to death. I'll have to ignore the death and write another post to clear the confusion.
Anyways, I want to request that Alexis stays alive for the entire competition, if that is at all possible to Kand and Tanus, plus Rizz. I might need her for a development story I'm about to write for Jenny.
-=Wraith PRIDE=- *HeavyWeapons * TRP/LCPL Jennabelle/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/Tadath "Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force. " -Darth Vader "Remember, Remember, the fifth of November" -V "So do all who seeks to live, but that is not for them to decide. All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you." -Gandalf the Grey
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Kanderin Draken
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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July 31, 2008
4:54:05 AM
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Unfortunately, Alexis will be staying dead for the remainder of the competition, it was something myself and Gio agreed on.
I don't mind you using her in personal stories through, the timeline of the VE doesn't stay constant, and said story can take place before Alexis departed for the mission.
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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August 1, 2008
10:33:32 AM
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Alright, my apologies to those that I promised I would end the competition today. Something has come up and I wont be able to get the post churned out to the standard I want.
I will however get it done and posted by tomorrow, so anyone else that wants to throw some last minutes posts in has the ability to do so. Just in time for the rewards meeting as well 
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RE: Wraith And Blackjack: NPC Competition Thread
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August 2, 2008
3:37:47 AM
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I'm a bit sorry for the trouble this has made on Gio, I was a bit angry for the sudden news of her death since she was a great NPC and all (kind of reminds me of Jenny a lot).I deserved the death since I killed off quite some people without permission and I'm sorry if it's caused all of you, especially Kand a lot of pressure or pain, for I hate to put that on a person for my arrogance, you could put my act as.
Anyways, apologies aside, I would like to say to TX-47 that I don't mean to post after you have held your place, but there isn't much time till the ending and I would like to push it to the climax as high as it would reach so that the ending will be as spectacular, if everyone can get my meaning.
And, Kand, don't worry about the ending post, I'm sure we can all wait for it to come out, as long as it does during the week, but I thought Rizz was doing the ending post.
-=Wraith PRIDE=- *HeavyWeapons * TRP/LCPL Jennabelle/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/Tadath "Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force. " -Darth Vader "Remember, Remember, the fifth of November" -V "So do all who seeks to live, but that is not for them to decide. All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you." -Gandalf the Grey
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