Aeos
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Army Biography Competition!
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April 6, 2008
4:52:07 PM
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Rightio. This is a small mini competition Riqimo and I host…well I host it and Riqimo sponsors it:P We are hoping this the first of many to come  Especially with 25 million ICs are up for grabs. Well, it starts right now, and you have a week to compete and write and wiki. Depending on many things, I’d like to announce the winner at the next meeting on Sunday, well me or any of the available Platoon Staffs. Rogueboy, Riqimo, Darr-Rann and I will be the judges of you’re biography. You will be judged in the following criteria’s. -30% Chronology/Coherency -50% Creativity -10% Spelling/Grammar -8% Wiki(How well is it put together,) -2% Linked in forum signature (preferably with the name in the ID line) Bonus points:-5% Art( Some illustrations would be nice,) -5% Wiki details(Any extra details I.E: Story participations, medals, awards, etc) --------------------------------------------------------------------------- What are the prizes to be won? We’d like to give everyone here credit for competing, so even if you don’t win, you can still earn you’re self some fine money. It will go as follows:-1st Prize: 2 Million ICs -2nd Prize: 1 Million ICs -3rd Prize: 700, 000 ICs -1000 ICs for those who competed -5,000 ICs for those that make above 50% -50,000 ICs for those above 75% -500,000 for those above 90% Who knows, there might be an bonus prize depending on how much we’ve been impressed  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Darr-Rann has been nice enough to throw a quick tutorial together about how to wiki a profile page, and creating it. Feel free to throw a PM at either Darr-Rann, Riqimo, Rogueboy or me if you struggle with something. Follow this link: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/9975/We’d like to see the following information,:the specifications highlighted in yellow just indicates you don’t have to fill it in or it doesn’t apply for the Army. - OOC:
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*spec: *rank: *position: *squad: *squadron: *flight: *wing: *platoon: *company: Phoenix Company *battalion: Dragon Battalion *regiment: Osiris Regiment *division: Stormtrooper Corps *Homeworld: *age: *species: *gender: *skin: *height: *weight: *hair: *facial: *eyes: *scar: *tattoo: *cyber: *affiliation: Vast Empire *nick: *fightingstyle: *profession:
*Personality *History
*Anything else that you’d like to include about your character. Like pet peeves, or the manner in which he dresses, etc.
Please take note that we only accept entries that has been placed on the Wikipage. When you’ve finished, please post on this topic, the link of your Wiki Profile in the OOC box. Please remember we are still a PG-13 friendly site, The VE Axiom is there for a reason: http://www.vastempire.com/main/ref/axiom/ I expect however it's unnecessary to mention this, but for the sake of officialness I just did. May the best trooper win. Good luck, and remember we’re still here to have fun PS: All credits to Riqimo for sponsoring the prizes as well as setting out the basic criteria.
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Ken Alibek
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
1:32:43 AM
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- OOC:
- http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Ken_Alibek
I'm pleased with my page so far, so I'll go ahead and throw my hat in the ring! LET'S DO IT!
 Lance Corporal Keneka Alibek Trooper, IronHorseSquadTRP/LCPL Ken/1SQD/1PLT/1CO/1BN/1RGT/Tadath/VEA VE Wiki page
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
5:55:18 AM
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 ow...i guess we navy people can't join in?
Just as well really, because i could run all you Gropos into the ground with my profile :P
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Ken Alibek
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
6:44:43 AM
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Ibram Tyrol wrote: ow...i guess we navy people can't join in? Just as well really, because i could run all you Gropos into the ground with my profile :P
Make yer own, zoomie :P
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
2:56:26 PM
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-Paladin- TRP/PFC Gimp/1stSQD/2PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA California Love
Eclipse
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
5:23:24 PM
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Heavy Weapons Specialist
He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
Eat a hearty breakfast men, for tonight we dine in hell -300
A man, can be an artist, at anything food, whatever... it just depends on how good they are at it. Creases art is death... he's about to paint his masterpiece -Man on Fire
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Luckystar
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
6:10:37 PM
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specter1000
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 7, 2008
9:24:15 PM
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  To Embrace the Darkness is to bring About the Light... TRP/CPLspector1000/1SQD/2PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE [CoS] [EW:2]
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Dante
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 8, 2008
9:14:49 PM
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http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Dante
Here goes nothing...
TRP/CPL Dante/2SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE*HeavyWeapons * "Nel mezzo del cammin di nostra vita..."
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 9, 2008
9:29:13 AM
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- OOC:
- http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Crimson
Not quite done, but i like it so far
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Verkur
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 9, 2008
6:31:01 PM
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Jester Squad//StormPlatoon// TRP/LCPL Verkur/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[CoS] * DM turns the gas on max, locks all the windows, turns off the ventalation system, leave the room, and locks the door behind him * Verkur|jester wonders why DM left the room DM- You'll figure it out when the gas pushes the air out of the room Verkur|jester- Ah * Verkur|jester waits patiently
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Alater
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 9, 2008
7:13:55 PM
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This is so not fair on those of us with 100+ posts that haven't kept up. Got tons of ribbons and such to keep up with. Well, I spent most of today updating, will be up soon.
ASL/SGT Alater Osted/2ndSQD/2PLT/1CMP/1BAT/1REG/VEA/VE/Tadath [EW1] [ES1] [SoH] [[VUA-Eclipse]] [ROC:HW] [AS-6M] [IG] [RoM] [BC] [LoS] [AS-1Y]  "That light at the end of the tunnel is not Death, it's me, and a train." -Alater
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Aeos
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 13, 2008
3:08:37 PM
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heh.
Bit of bad news people.
I thought it was best to announce the winner in the following or Sunday. Both Doc and Rogue was on leave, Rogueboy is still. So I dont feel like have two people judge this competition, Doc returned, and he's still a bit slow in getting his hamster wheeel started again, but we'll get there.
But I'd like to mention, I've seen some great biographies here, and I'd like to encourage a bigger number to enter the competition.
Until then, I'll see you lot in the channels 
PA/PSG_Aeos/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath
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CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
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RK
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 13, 2008
7:45:12 PM
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- OOC:
- http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=RK
there it is. It's not much and I am still working on editing it, but it should be good enough to enter the competition.
EclipseSquad
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Aeos
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 13, 2008
7:53:45 PM
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You dont really know how to read guidlines and rules do you?
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RK
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 13, 2008
8:01:28 PM
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I read them I don't know what I did wrong
EclipseSquad
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Alater
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 15, 2008
9:20:33 PM
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- OOC:
- http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Alater_Osted
Note linked in sig not once, but twice :P
ASL/SGT Alater Osted /2ndSQD/2PLT/1CMP/1BAT/1REG/VEA/VE/Tadath [EW1] [ES1] [SoH] [[VUA-Eclipse]] [ROC:HW] [AS-6M] [IG] [RoM] [BC] [LoS] [AS-1Y]  "That light at the end of the tunnel is not Death, it's me, and a train." - Alater
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Riqimo
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RE: Army Biography Competition!
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April 22, 2008
8:58:18 AM
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Alright, much thanks to Aeos and Darr for grading these bios, now for the rewards: First Place... we have a tie Ror Nadon and Alater, both shall recieve 2,051,000 ICs! Third Place, Luckystar751,000 ICs Congrats to the top three. The others that will receive ICs are (these all recieve 6,000):
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