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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 29, 2009
10:31:33 PM
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Yes, please Voren, don't have it happen to long. it gets real old, real fast.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 30, 2009
3:12:46 PM
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It won't. I promise.
I apologize if it is already starting to get old and annoy you. I've just never done anything like this before. Usually, it's been random stuff that me and my friends do, not more serious things.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 30, 2009
3:39:04 PM
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We all start from somewhere. This just happens to be your starting point. I think we all respect and understand that.
Just saying.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 30, 2009
4:58:43 PM
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Synopsis of last post:
Alright so RK is starting to feel alright, but the bacta is wearing off, so he's beginning to feel the pain, yet because of his inner demons he's trying to forget the pain and move on. As well, he doesn't know what to think about his weakness, because regardless of what he was taught, he has always cared. That's when Adenn interrupt's his thoughts and they discover they both follow mando customs(to an exstent) and speak the language. Then after Adenn leaves RK goes back to the shuttle to see if he can find his datapad, and the demons return, yet he's beginning to come to grips with who he really is.
That is all.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 30, 2009
6:41:54 PM
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My post synopsis:
A bit of char dev, my impression after the crash. I also included a debate between staying and making camp as well as leaving. In the end, we got moving south-easterly toward the direction of the monastery (which we don't know is a Monastery at this point in time in my post)
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 30, 2009
11:05:01 PM
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Alright so the story has been advanced now. I had the rest of us walk on until near dark to a safe spot.. or we assume as safe. Meanwhile lucky and Madman have scouted ahead and have found something out of a nightmare.. Vampires.. So the party starts guys. Remember, thes Vampires ARE NOT easy to take down. Theres alot of them out there. So, the more noise and such will bring more around...or, perhaps not.. I haven't decided yet 
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 31, 2009
12:21:28 AM
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Alright, in my last post it was something of a escape from the creatures. I intended on making them highly predatory and aggressive, sort of the impression they gave me personally. Lucky and Madman get there and since the creatures are afraid or sensative to light, which explains there appearance at night, the two look a bit batty.
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October 31, 2009
10:40:41 AM
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Okay, my post towards the end is basically asking for a ghost story, directed to Vor'en. Fitting for the day no?
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 31, 2009
1:01:54 PM
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Sorry IH, but I'm retiring. This just isn't working out for me. I can't post that well and I feel like I'm dragging the squad behind the others by not posting. I have only one choice and that is to retire. Not get moved to Reserves, but to retire. So I'm packing my bags and I'll be out of your collective hair shortly. Its been an honor serving with you.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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October 31, 2009
2:38:45 PM
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Sorry ta see ya go. Take care, and know you'll be welcome if you choose to come back.

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October 31, 2009
3:54:42 PM
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Constantine wrote:Sorry IH, but I'm retiring. This just isn't working out for me. I can't post that well and I feel like I'm dragging the squad behind the others by not posting. I have only one choice and that is to retire. Not get moved to Reserves, but to retire. So I'm packing my bags and I'll be out of your collective hair shortly. Its been an honor serving with you.
You're not a burden Constantine. You dont have to go and we want you to stay. But if you really want to leave, then good luck in the future.
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October 31, 2009
4:31:13 PM
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Sory to see you go Contatntine, but like Saph said, you aren't a burden. post on your own accord. if you can't post, then don't if you can then do. that's basically how it goes.
We'd love you to come back one day.
But for now: "May the force be with you."
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October 31, 2009
11:09:22 PM
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same to you const.
Post summary: The info I found on Vampires from the web.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 1, 2009
12:36:45 AM
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Voren, that was great effort on your writing. However, I am certian int he Star Wars Universe there is nothing on or about Vampires. Or in the least what they are called.
Therefore, Adenn and Voren, you two will need to edit your posts. We have no idea what these things are. So therefore our characters do not know what they are. So Voren, I need you to change your topic in relation to the species called the RakGhoul. They are as close to these Vampires in the SW universe, but not what we are fighting.
Rakghouls were deformed mutants living in the Undercity of the Outer Rim world of Taris. Created by the Sith magic of the Muur Talisman, Rakghouls were meant by their creator, Karness Muur, to be his own army, as he could control them and allow them to use their skills, like the use of ships and weapons. However, without the control of the Muur Talisman, Rakghouls became mindless beasts that traveled in packs of between four and eight and charged towards anything that looked or smelled like food
As for future posts, please go ahead guys. I am going to post and I need those mentioned above to eidt their posts accordingly.
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November 1, 2009
12:59:42 AM
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And to elaborate on what Saphira has mentioned, from the article i t COULD be argued that in fact the Rakghoul seem to be exclusive to the planet Taris. However, to justify this change the Rakghoul were only so abundant on Taris because the Amulet itself was somewhere on Taris and was still managing to turn humans into Rakghouls akin to a plague.
However, Rakghoul's being a mindless thrall-race of exendable and utterly loyal troops, it's possible that while controlled they were stationed in subtle places or even utilized/sent out and when their controller fell, they rapidly lost coherence and landed where ever.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 1, 2009
8:25:08 AM
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sham ba Lu mi lowe! (I will never give up!) May the Scorekeeper protect me and make my hunt worthwhile. TRP/PSC voren-tusserk/2SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/[CPC]  
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 1, 2009
1:15:48 PM
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It's fine Vor'en, we all make mistakes but with your last post it does require minor changes. Rakghoul can be killed by conventional means, however so some of the 'Vampire' references are unneeded. Please, for the sake of the story, may I ask you to edit your last post accordingly? I really appreciate you being able to post consistently, and I'm sure the rest of the team does but these flaws are somewhat confusing to the busy few on the team.
Also, keep up the good work guys - we may be the smallest squad in Wildcard Platoon, but we're really showing improvement.
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November 1, 2009
3:20:54 PM
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A rundown of the meeting for those who do not read the prefect's Report: the halloween Story will finish on Satturday ,it was meant to be a short story. We are to be at the citadel by tonight. Fire Teeam Captains will be removed from the Roster, contrary to popular belief, Fire team Captains are troopers which are only in command of a team for a short period of time ins tory and not considered a third in command. There is also a reminder to let it be known privately if there is a disagreement peetaining to how something is done or other, we have no need for oublic explosions of emotions. That is all for my slight summary of the meeting. Look for the Prefect's Report to be up sometime in the next few hours.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 1, 2009
6:00:13 PM
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Once again guys. NO MENTION of Vampires, wooden stakes, garlic.. anything from what we know in real Life. All we can do is blast them and use what we have. We have no clue what these things are pr the way to effectivly take them down. Now, sense we need to be at the citidal tonight I need people to post. Synopsis: My next post we basicly ran from the vampires and were ambushed in the woods. Saph with luckys help took it down and they find out that just simple blasting and fighting was not enough to take them down. So now we have a couople left to fight off. - OOC:
- Alright, as soon as we kill the vamps off we will make it out of the woods and see the Citidal. Go there and we will have the safty we need for the time being. REMEMBER, the vampires arn't easy to take down. So they can't be killed easily at all.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 2, 2009
12:33:13 AM
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Sorry about my absence today, I edited my post as asked, but I wont be able to post anything till tomorrow. Or later today rather. I'm bushmeat. (tired)
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 2, 2009
2:00:11 AM
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Alright, my post is pretty simply just entering the building and reflecting on the shock of battle. Originally I had written a post between exiting the forest and battling their way over the plains but then I spotted Lucky's post. Fecked myself all up but despite feeling a bit ill, and achy, and tired, I managed to get something done. Enjoy.
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November 2, 2009
3:18:04 PM
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ok, for some odd reason, you expect me to be able to edit posts when I'm not able to read youre messages and edit my posts. In short, I CAN'T EDIT DURING SCHOOL!!!!
If you need a time schedual, here it is:
7:30-2:30 School
2:30- Nothing
(Mondays) 7:00PM - 9:00PM Scouts
(Fridays) 7:00PM - 10:00PM Blues Jam
Plus I'm going away over Thanksgiving and I'm trying to get my Eagle project done in the first three weekends of December.
As you now can see, I got a lot on my mind at the moment. And saying things about vampires insetead of what they really are is the least important thing that's in my mind.
Oh, and by the way: If they are not Campires, then WHY DO YOU KEEP ON REFERING TO THEM AS VAMPIRES!?!?!!?
(I do not want to hear anything about insubordination or any bull like that. I'm not having a good week, or in any case, a good few months)
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 2, 2009
3:30:13 PM
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Voren that rant wasn't needed. We can't solve your problems for you, so get your shit organised, stop crying and only post if you can. if you can't do what you're asked, don't post at all plain and simple.
Now, please don't have another outburst like that, that ain't really mature of you.
if you need to take Leave or Reserves then do it otherwise stop bitching, just report if you're not taking Leave or Reserves and be a ghost. now stop whining and get your shit in order, Trooper.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 2, 2009
9:30:21 PM
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Look, I'm trying to. I'm sorry for that outburst and anything it might have caused. I'm feeling a bit better since that post (No that post did not make me feel better) and I feel like such an idiot.
Once again, I apologize.
And for the record, I wasn't crying. Just a little argumentative, tht's all.

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November 2, 2009
9:44:17 PM
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Alright, it's all good voren, that outburst ticked me ff a it is all. But for the future...Open outbursts aren't needed, if there's something wrong PM us about the situation (no need to go into detail if you don't wish) and just inform us of what's going on, only post if you can find some good enough time when you're not too stressed and can take time to make changes should they be needed.
Posting in busy times isn't required, just keep us informed so that we don't wonder where you're at is all. Good luck in your Eagle project btw.
My point is, we're all busy at some point. I have two papers to write whic are due ina month and need to study for a history exam which I have on Wednesday evening, yet I'm not [or trying my hardest not to] have any of that reflected here or affect me here. This place is for fun and to make friends and for me aswell, when I go on IRC and have had a shitty day by the time I get off I'm happy and all smiles.
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November 2, 2009
9:51:40 PM
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Exactly what Lucky said. We have no idea what you do offline from here. If your busy, tell us here. It's not hard to do, and I just got on and saw your outburst. Just let us know when your busy or cant post. Ask questions here. Btw, try not to send me a messege like that again in PM. I will not tolorate it from anyone. We're all here to have fun. Good luck on your Eagle stuff.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 3, 2009
5:10:27 PM
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Once again, I'm really sorry guys. I guess the reason for me being a little peeved is cause I've barely been sleeping more than 4 hours a night. Last night I finally got to sleep longer and I'm feeling better.
Saph, I'm sorry about the PM. It hopefully wont happen again. For your and my sake.
As for the story, I'm trying my best, but you tell me that they are not vampires, then post on here saying that they are, then you get mad at me and say that they aren't, then you post again and say that they are. It's confusing me.
And thanks. It'll mean that near the end of November and the beginning of December, I'll have to divert my time to the Eagle project.
sham ba Lu mi lowe! (I will never give up!) May the Scorekeeper protect me and make my hunt worthwhile. TRP/PSC voren-tusserk/2SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/[CPC]  
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 3, 2009
5:27:09 PM
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I hae just managed to make sense of what confuses you , voren.
On here, Saph said that they are vampires because well, that was our chosen creature.
But in-story our characters don't know what they are (if that makes any sense)
And so the explanation of your paragraph of confusion.
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November 3, 2009
5:42:09 PM
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And heeeeereee's Private First Class JagoBallium, treat him well and I'm sure he'll return the favor.
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RE: Iron Horse Squad
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November 3, 2009
6:16:38 PM
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Hello Iron Horse Squad. It's nice to finally be out of the academy 
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