jossum grray reporting in for academy detail.......

Awe, excuse him, he has an uncontrollable bowel syndrome...  *Cringes*  He'll never be the same.

But anywho- this is the message I usually give to new recruits and I hope it'll include everything you need to know for right now:

Howdy there- I'm the training officer (TO) of the Vast Empire Naval Academy (VENA). Our staff, the VENA-S, is composed of trainers and operators, all who can be seen at the following website:

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=VENA_Staff

Now that you've posted here on the ComNet, you've actually completed the Imperial Initiation (II) phase of Basic Training (BT). BT's second phase is called Flight School (FS), which is made up of two chapters and an exam. The first chapter, and probably the most important aspect of our system, is that of Character Creation- the bio. In order for your character to exist in our club, our universe if you will, you need to create them in written form, detailing their stories, their personalities and the physical aspects that we may be aware of with a glance or perhaps things we can not see with the naked eye. Either way, you're going to tell us how to describe you're character in a more detailed fashion than you're probably used to, but that's part of the fun.

So, if you'll follow the link below, you'll be able to see the entirety of Flight School, the portion of BT I was referring to above. BT is, essentially, training and thus, once you've passed through it, you're going to be placed in an Active Squadron, in 'Active Duty'. So, depending on how well you do here against the recruits currently training here, you'll receive a rank at the end of your training and receive certain recommendations or promotions. You'll want to go to Chapter 1- Character Development. So, lets get off to a good start and get you goin- Rock On!

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29
 
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WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

Phoenix Wing Commander and Training Officer

My suggestion would be to put your bio in a format similer to what Evil_Clown has in her second post in this topic: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/7971/

It makes it easier to read and understand, plus it looks a bit cleaner.

Welcome to the Navy
 
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The VEN`s #1 writer as of ESC `06

Name:Jossum Graay
Age:21
Race:Human
Sex:Male
Height:5'8"
Weight:190lbs


Physical Description:

I have a scar on my right wrist from when i was a young boy its about 2 inches long and went all the way too the bone. Allow me to illaberate. Me thinking i was so strong i tried to lift a Ion Thruster,(part of the TIE engine) and it sliced me like a hot knife in butter it was bad but it cauterized it so it didn't bleed.

Im more on the muscular side having done physical work all my life.My brown hair is cut short and always in proper order to fit into the Emperial dress code.I have light brown eyes, that tend to change to green when my blood is pumping.

Personality:

I seem like a jerk when I meet people at first, but as time goes on people tend to warm up to me.I have a really passive spirit and not to many things bother me.But that doesn't mean when the big guy in the room needs to be put in his place that i wont do it.

  I'm a natural pilot and born aviator at least i think so.My Quick reflexes and smarts in and out of the cockpit keep me on the edge.Although i am only 21 i hold avast knowledge of all fighters there systems and maneuverability.I hear that my flaw is I tend to think that because i know so much, that I'm the best and that makes me a little arrogant to danger, so i usually get my self into sticky situations. I depend alot on my friends to help me in my personal life, Friends are important to me, and i put my life on the line for any of them.

History:

I was born to Avalio and Donor Grray on the industrial planet of Balmorra. I started building weapons components for the chin mounted laser cannon on the AT-AT when i was 10, while every other 10 year old was welding slabs of armor to the hulls that made the kids make fun of me cause I was the smartest 10 year old in the factory.

    Later I moved positions to Starfighter weapons development because i excelled in making AT-AT weapons, and helped invent the SFS Laser Cannon on the TIE/LN Starfighter,(that is the standard Emperial Starfighter)it went strait on the fighter after a short test period i think it was like 2 days. I also helped develop the idea for ejection seats on the TIE fighter, though really no one uses them really,But they are on there.

  I had done all of this by the time i was 15. When i was 16 my father who had worked in the plant his whole life fell from a building platform and was killed,that was the point in my life when i decided to switch to the platform and follow my fathers footsteps.I began Building TIE fighters at 17,it came natural to me and I seemed to know where everything went without being shown.Later on that year i became Lead Platform Enginier and was in charge of making sure every TIE was perfect and in ready to fly/fighting order. I never lost a pilot to malfunction, and that inspired me to want to fly.

  Saving my money i bought a small Starfighter and began to study basic flight maneuvers,which i mastered rather quickly. Not being able to go far out of the Balmorran space I quickly became uninterested in Fighter building and joined the Emperial Navy to see the universe and fly much faster in a ship that i have loved since i was a young boy.


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