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RE: Raider Squad
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January 19, 2006
5:59:04 PM
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I did a post as well I just noticed something, I speak in paragraphs instead of skipping lines, should I be skipping lines?
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 19, 2006
6:16:21 PM
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You need to break your writing up into paragraphs, and space between the paragraphs. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 19, 2006
6:40:08 PM
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ummm not what I ment, I was referring to when my characters talk, should I break up the discussons? because I do it like this Jack said, "So Jill what's up." Jill responded with. "Nothing." I'm asking if I should do it like this.
Jack said. "So Jill what's up?"
Jill responded with. "Nothing." -----------------------
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January 19, 2006
6:59:28 PM
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hmm... Like this
This
The man walked over and said "Hello." He then took out a sword and cut the person he was talking to in two, blood spraying everywhere "Wow, this is such a bad example." Said the man who was watching.
Would go like this
The man walked over and said "Hello." He then took out a sword and cut the person he was talking to in two, blood spraying everywhere.
"Wow, this is such a bad example." Said the man who was watching.
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 19, 2006
7:08:03 PM
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crap.......should I do it from now on or should I attempt to edit my posts? -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 19, 2006
9:35:29 PM
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Start from now on. No need to go back and edit. Plus, spacing it out helps with length  -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 25, 2006
9:38:14 AM
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I don't have much time to write this week because of exams (so I am on Away status), but get writing guys. There hasnt been a new post for a while. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 25, 2006
8:55:45 PM
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lol i would love to but i have no idea where to take my info from bill to (as in what he said) i was hoping someone else would take it to the next level and mention what i got from him -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 26, 2006
2:48:21 AM
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I will try and get a post up soon, but I cant promise anything. My birthday on the 28th and my party on the 27th (tomorrow) so I will be pretty busy. Also, it is Australia Day today. I will still try. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 26, 2006
12:42:04 AM
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I wish you a happy b-day Marka. As happy as one can be anyways. Well I'm back from my semi-leave, and I hope to jump back in the story line quickly. I need to get T1234 in the story anyways. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 26, 2006
1:43:51 PM
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Happy birthday marka -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 26, 2006
8:36:42 PM
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happy birthday to u, happy birthday to u, happy birthday dear..........Marka yeah thats it happy birthday to u  -----------------------
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January 27, 2006
7:42:42 AM
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I got a new post up on Wolves. It wasn't much, but it should do to get you all in the combat mood. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 27, 2006
9:14:01 AM
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hey Slick i noticed a little problem with your post, I'm out in the woods burying what's left of Bill after torturing him and gathering Intel, possibly such as where the other base is, infiltrate the wolves by "buying" some slaves or find the people who employ the slaves. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 28, 2006
12:44:27 AM
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We can probably still fit that in there, like, you came back and told Slick about it before you all left. However, you probably should have posted it. I will try and incorporate it into mine though. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 28, 2006
1:17:16 AM
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You killed Bill? Bastards.
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 28, 2006
2:53:34 AM
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Okay, I really would like to be getting on with my specialty, but I think I'm not supposed to write a new one until the last has been graded. It's now been over a month since I posted it and it hasn't been looked at. Can I just get on with the next one? |
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January 28, 2006
4:40:41 PM
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lol our specialties are supposed to be graded? woops -----------------------
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January 28, 2006
4:53:00 PM
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I just continue to write anyways. Stories take a long time to get read. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 30, 2006
2:40:05 PM
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Go aheah and get to work on your next spec story Tallanvor. It was graded, and you passed. No one wrote it down though. So you're good to go. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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January 30, 2006
4:18:01 PM
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ummm hesitant to ask but what about my stories? -----------------------
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February 4, 2006
9:57:02 PM
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Never hesitate to ask. If you need something then kick me, Darr, and Marka into action. I'll get on it Rogue. I'll ask Rizzit the next time I see him. If any of you guys need anything... just ask. You all know my e-mail, and I check here. It's my job. -----------------------
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February 4, 2006
9:59:35 PM
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RE: Raider Squad
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February 5, 2006
7:01:42 AM
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Yeah, if you ever need any help, that's what we are here for. However, dont come to me if it something to do with computers lol I am hopeless when it comes to technology. Most other matter, whether personal or proffessional, I will give whatever advice I can. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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February 5, 2006
10:44:18 AM
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when I said hesitant to ask its more I was afraid the answer, and it was more of a joking tone of voice since I dont hesitate to ask the dumbest of questions -----------------------
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February 9, 2006
2:14:39 PM
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Post, people! -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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February 9, 2006
5:41:15 PM
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I dont think I'm any good at writing this story thing, mainly because I don't know where to take the story, I mean I have time every week to get a post up just like I said where do I go? If I was in control of the whole story (believe me I'm not asking for it) but it would be much easier to get a post up. That and the fact of what others expect would be nice. -----------------------
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February 15, 2006
10:02:20 PM
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Alright I just finished up Wolves. Darr will be deciding on the next mission. Even I won't know what it is until it's posted. So be sure to wish him luck on it everyone. -----------------------
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RE: Raider Squad
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February 17, 2006
12:00:27 AM
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Well... good luck Darr. I am going to say now that I will make up for my lack of quality writing towards the end of that mission. Life has pretty much gotten back on track lately, so I should be good again soon. -----------------------
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February 17, 2006
2:31:29 PM
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Wow... I'll get to work on that then. I wish I got to post again on wolves, but I've been sick as of late. -----------------------
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