I want to have some fun with a Raiders post. Make it a bit exciting for a change&.



Footsteps echoed through an empty hall that seemed to have a very bored atmosphere to it. Outside the building the sun blazed in full glory while the sun-bees hummed in a dull tune, intensifying the level of dullness and sleepiness in the barracks. The footsteps halted for a second. A young human female teenager seemed to hesitate as she stood in front of the door labelled: Raiders Barracks. Her shocking blue eyes darkened, with a swipe of her hand she tuck her stubborn dark strands of blonde behind her ear. She shifted weight to her right leg, her white storm trooper armour didn't have that gleam it used to have when she wore it the first time, now small scars and blast marks seemed to scorch the white on several targets around, especially on the back. The newly promoted Corporal narrowed her eyes as she seemed to study the door, but in reality she was trying to glare a hole right through it. If looks could kill, the durasteel door would be melted.

Hellra sighed and hastily tapped the security code in to gain access through the door. The door gave a soft hiss as it opened, before it could even open fully she slipped through widening gap, the occupants of the room didn't notice her enter, their concentration fixed on the present sabaac game at hand. She crossed her arms and leaned against the doorframe. A few minutes seemed to pass and the sabaac players just finished their game. In the back ground a ComLink beeped, and a holo tv were blaring throughout the room.

Hellra raised her eyebrows at the lax atmosphere that hung in the air. She trudged over to the remote that rested on the couch. The blaring sounds died away slowly, the sabaac players still didn't seem to notice her presence. She gave a soft cough, two heads snapped up at the sound, clearly surprised at the new presence in the room. Revan and Napleon gave a nervous grin at their Fire team leader. Her face carried a scowl, and she didn't look pleased at all. The stood up to greet her, immediately towering over her small frame. It didn't intimidate her at all.

"Where are Jak and Raziel?"
"Jak went off somewhere I think, something about a new recruit, and Raziel I think have some paper work," answered Napleon slowly.
"And that explains your lack of activity?" she directed her glare to Napleon's nervous stature.
Silence answered her question. She fixed her gaze on Revan,
"And your excuse is&" 

Revan opened his mouth to answer her but a high-pitched sounded through the air emitting from Hellra's ComLink. She rolled her eyes and sighed before answering it.
"Yes?"
"Hell, its me Jak, Private First Class Marka would be arriving at our barracks, about now, give him a warm welcome to us, and&be nice, you don't seem to be so friendly in the past weeks."

"Yes, Jak, is it the guy from Coruscant?"
"Yes, gotto go, be there in a few hours" Jakireth answered before cutting the connection. Hellra dropped her hand on her blaster pistol holstered on her waist.
"While waiting for the new guy, Rev your excuse?"
Revan hesitated a second before opening his mouth to answer her, but before a word uttered from his lips, a knock like sound came from the door.
"Oh good grieve!" yelled Hellra as she strode over to the door, and slammed her first on the panel in order to open the door. Before her stood man, who seemed to be in his late teens, or early twenties. Tattoo's graced his face right underneath his eyes; she didn't bother to study what it was exactly.
"Come in, you might as well hear the lecture" she said in an abrupt voice. His brown eyes lit up in curiosity before he stepped through the door. His two braids swung on the rhythm that reached down from his ears.

She turned towards Napleon and Revan. They studied the new Raider with an intense gaze.
"Guys, meet Marka, new Raider obviously. He shows some promise, I read through his folder," Hellra motioned her hands towards Marka,

"Mark, meet the guys, ok well half of them, this is your fellow troopers, Napleon and Revan. I'm Hellra, and your SL is busy, and you obviously met Jak. Down to business,"
Hellra inhaled some air as she trudged over to a nearby window, she stared through it, her eyes caught several squads busy with drills, or cleaning their equipment. She narrowed her eyes.

" When you signed up, you should have expected to be active, even if it is cleaning the rifles. Jak and Raziel and I do tolerate late reports easily, we expect it to be presented to us once week. If you go on leave NOTIFY us, if you are active in the rest of the VE, we don't mind, if you are NOT active in the SQUAD, we do mind, lack of activity results in AWOL, you get sent back right back to Drill squad, or out of the storm troopers, I don't know, I don't care, but bottom line, you are OUT of Raiders, Understood?" her blue eyes were darkening as unreleased frustration seemed to rage in them. She clenched her fists before unclenching it, and then repeating the process again.

The troopers including Marka nodded silently at Hellra,
"Good, get your reports ready,"

She turned her back and strode towards the door, before exciting. She wasn't sure if she got the point across, but at least she tried. The door closed with a soft hiss leaving the three Raiders alone in the room.

OOC: I am sure you guys are getting the point&hopefully. The only ACTIVE Raiders that stands out to me, is, Jak and Raz and I&
Bottom line&
Pick it up people&

And now to work something out for that comp post, Im gonna incorporate Marka in the story ppl, if you don't mind, &having a bit of a writer's block at the mo with the comp story.

EDIT: I really don't like this post, the flow wasn't that fluent, I should do something about&.





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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

Aww, come on Jak, i dont think i was to harsh, i was merely trying to make a point, and i wasn;t going off on Marka :P
I was just feeling very inspired at that mo. And, no i dont get reports, i ws just trying to get my point across I just being squad mom
 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

Nah don't worry you wouldnt have known, never worry about asking me anything about this place.

Basically every week i'd just like to know what you've been up to and if there's anything you want to see from me

Fridays is the usual day, and CC it to Jak
 
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+ Advance Recon Commandos {ARC} +
PL:A/1LtRaziel/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/{EW1} (WoS1) 2x(VP:1) {IG} {CDS} {BoA} {PoC} {BC} {GRoM} {SoS}
Assistant Squad Leader - Raiders
"Computer games don't affect kids; I mean if Pac-Man affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to repetitive electronic music." Kristian Wilson, Nintendo, Inc, 1989.

"God does not play dice with the universe" - Albert Einstein
"Who are you to tell God what to do with his dice?" - Bohr
"God does not play dice with the universe. He plays an ineffable game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of any of the other players [i.e. everybody], to being involved in an obscure and complex variant of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules, and who smiles all the time." - Terry Pratchett
CM/DJK Raziel/lion 1-5/Krath/VEDJ/VE (WoS1) (VP1) (VP2)

Raziel, Jak, we have to talk on IRC soon, il be sending both of you a Comnet PM about what is about. Or meet me on msn or something.
 
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--Corporal Hellra--
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FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

Coolies, ill help with the graphics if needed.
 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

00C: This is non official posts, its just a welcome message to the guys, looks like im making a habit of this :P



Hellra raised her eyebrows in amusement at Revan, Napoleon's and Marka's sabaac games.
"You cheated! I saw how you slipped that card from you sleeve!" yelled Revan slamming his fist down on the table. The accused target simply glared before he protested against accusation.
"I did not!" yelled Napleon back. Marka's face didn't seem to know whether it should frown, or raise its eyebrows at them. He slowly set his sabaac cards on the low table and backed away.

"You did to!"
"I did not!"
"You did!"
"Enough you moron!" yelled Napleon pulling his blaster pistol from its holster. Revan clenched his fists,
"I .did .not. Cheat."

Hellra sighed pulling out her own blaster pistol. She hated it when Raziel and Jakireth weren't here. At least then she could have someone to talk about strategies for the squad or something. The two fighting objectives didn't notice her sudden movement. She carefully aimed at Napleon and pulled the trigger. Napleon's blaster pistol spat from his hand, and slammed in the wall behind him. Smoke raised from the black object used as weapon to normally kill those who opposed its owner. Hellra thanked her practises for her new targeting skills. Back when she was a Lancer, she could barely shoot a tin can that stood in front of her. At least she could shoot at short range, though her long range still needed some work.

"Ah, ah, no weapons boys" she said before continuing to finish her report. Revan and Napleon looked at her and back at each other, before flying into each other's hair. The sounds of fists connecting with bones and other body parts sounded through the barracks. Hellra shook her head; she didn't feel like conjuring a report up right now. She placed the paper block beside on her on a side table before pushing her self out of her chair. She patted her head to make sure if her bandanna was still securing her hair back.

"Coffee, or something stronger for you?" she asked to Marka.
"Coffee is cool, thanks," muttered Marka while studying the fight-taking place. A barely audible knock came from the door. Hellra also seemed to hear it because moments later her voice rang out.
"Mark, get the door!"
Marka got up from his squatted position on the floor and strode over to the door. Crimson eyes met his eyes as the door hissed open.

"Hellra, its for you!"
Hellra set the coffee tray with the steaming coffee down on the table beside her half-finished report. She strode over next to Marka and crossed her arms. She scowled slightly before dropping the scowl. Why did she have to be so damn short?

"PFC Smithyboi05 reporting to Raiders"
Hellra grinned slightly; another Raider was joining their ranks.
"Welcome Smith, reports are due each weekend in Raziel and Jakireth's boxes before Sunday. She said, she grabbed him by his shoulder and steered him in.

She sighed as she stared to Revan and Napleon still fighting.
"Great, how am I supposed to break this up?"
"Well, you kinda gave the go-ahead to them, " muttered Marka. Hellra looked up to him, a lopsided grin stretching over her lower jaw.
"Ya, true, but its good character building, not to mention, they need the exercise, since they don't attend the drills so often" she replied. She gripped her blaster pistol and set it to stun before shoot in to the minds of their fight. It gave the desired effect, and put the fight to stop. Napleon and Revan stared at her blankly, each sporting new bruises across their faces.
"Meet the guys Smith" she said before strutting off towards her coffee.

 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

Private smihtyboi05 salutes to the Raider squad before pulling up a chair.


In these reports i have to send to Raziel and Jakireth,
do i have to send them through email?

 
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Private smihtyboi05 reporting for duty

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yes, through email smith, just ckick on raziel or jak s avaters, and then youll their email. gtg, tracher doing rounds, supposed to be sleeping
 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

what do ya need?
 
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Wildcard you better hide your face, cause Storm is gonna rock this place.

Corporal Yillis
-=Lancer Squad=- -=ASL=- -=Moonbeam=-
ASL/CPL Yillis/2SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [WM]
Rep/GameRep Yillis/GameRep: 6/Gaming Division/VET /VE

there should have been a page telling you what to do when you signed up or an email telling you what to do, check your email, post a hello message on the (Navy) academy, get on IRC, etc. etc.

you're in the Navy so I don't know exactly what that entails.
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TRP/SSG Sniping101/4SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR][IH][BoA]

Storm you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.

" (I) Is always hatching plots against newlyweds; I mar the beauty of virgins and cause their hearts to grow cold"

Is there anyway for me to get brung into a storie and how i can get involved now.

and i just want to say 2000 replies !!!!!
 
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TRP/PFC smithyboi05/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [LoR]

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.:':.:'.RaIdErS TrOoPeR.':.:':.
Private smithyboi05 reporting for duty

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Ok , sorry about the grammer , I am trying , but I'm  still getting used to the writing.
 
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TRP/PFC smithyboi05/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [LoR]

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.:':.:'.RaIdErS TrOoPeR.':.:':.
Private smithyboi05 reporting for duty

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No , i don't think so , explain it a bit please.
 
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TRP/PFC smithyboi05/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [LoR]

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.:':.:'.RaIdErS TrOoPeR.':.:':.
Private smithyboi05 reporting for duty

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Here you go Smith : Stormtroopers academy-manual-specs

Anyway...
 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P

He is usually the guy who manages the spec sheets and stuff, and judges your spec stories. Anyway, contact me on MSN: [email protected]

GTG, busy with plat story post. Then some background researching on a few stuff, maybe just gather the amterials for a new site. and other loads od crap.


 
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--Corporal Hellra--
- Raider Squad -
FTL/CPLHellra/2SQD/1PLT/1CMP/1REG/1BAT/Tadath/VEA[LoR][ES2C]
Storm, you better get your ass in gear, cause Wildcard's gonna make it hot in here.
The world is about me, it revolves around me, take that in mind... :P