Abstinance
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Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
6:31:39 AM
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Name: Kangeh Roo
Callsign: Abstinance
The Callsign was assigned during basic, where it was soon learned that Abstinance had abstained from any sexual relations due to living far from town.
Age: 17
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 70kg
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Hazel (colour changes with mood)
Reason for joining the Empire: We have the bigass, triangular, Star Destroyers.
Place of Birth: Ciutric
Species: Human
Personality:
Kangeh likes to laugh and have fun, he doesn't care about a lot of things, and doesn't mind being told to go out and kill somebody/blow something up. He is a loyal friend, but don't cross him. You won't have a need for friends if you do.
History:
Name: Kangeh Roo
Callsign: Abstinance
The Callsign was assigned during basic, where it was soon learned that Abstinance had abstained from any sexual relations due to living far from town.
Age: 17
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 70kg
Hair Colour: Dark Brown
Eye Colour: Hazel (colour changes with mood)
Reason for joining the Empire: We have the bigass, triangular, Star Destroyers.
Place of Birth: Ciutric
Species: Human
Personality:
Kangeh likes to laugh and have fun, he doesn't care about a lot of things, and doesn't mind being told to go out and kill somebody/blow something up. He is a loyal friend, but don't cross him. You won't have a need for friends if you do.
History:
Kangeh grew up on a farm, far from any urban centers, and from a young age was forced into slave-like labour by his father, who was too poor to buy any droids to help with the work. The death of his father early in his life was traumatic, but also ended him being forced to work day, after day, with very little in the way of time to do things that he wanted to do. Shortly after this, at the age of 11, he discovered the holonet, and became hooked on Stormtrooper Sims the way that Druggies are hooked on Drugs. His curiosity about Stormtroopers led him to learn how to field strip weapons, clean and fix them, using commonly found things, like paperclips, and he learned Stormtrooper tactics, ranging from the most basic offensive tactic, to the most advanced Defensive tactic. When he couldn't take living on the farm anymore, he lied about his age and got into the Stormtrooper corps, quickly becoming an above average recruit, as he was in top shape due to his work on the farm, and was knowledgeable about weapons, and tactics.
Well, that's about all that you need to know about me, if there's anything that I should add, please let me know.
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Keef
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
6:33:22 AM
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good good, still think ya need more history.....but ya get that....oh yeah make sure you join jester aye mate.....if Merrick will have you ofcourse lol -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
6:42:10 AM
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Aye it could use a bit more substance. And how did I know that would be the reason for your callsign. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
11:26:27 AM
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Yeah, could use a little more beefing up. Check out KnightWind's biography if you can't already. I don't expect you to write something as long as his, but his is just to show you that you could make the story flow just a bit more.
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
11:33:24 AM
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Hey what about mine Cos? Mines like 8 pages. A little more history would be nice, along with a few personal details, but that's your choice. Hope to see you in Lancer. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
12:00:59 AM
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Yes, but he wants to use good writing as an example.
Not bad Abst. I think you can do alot more with the "isolated farmboy" part of it. It should make for some interesting views on the Empire and the war.
Oh, and may want to take "ass" out of your post  -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
7:45:05 PM
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Yes, but he wants to use good writing as an example.
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
8:43:46 PM
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1: This is 
2: Haven't I told you before to stop hiding behind people? -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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May 31, 2005
8:47:50 PM
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sorry if they beat me to the punch shakey. -----------------------
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Merrick
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 1, 2005
2:56:58 AM
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Get out of my newbies post dammit. Go spank each other in the privacy of an irc PM for christ's sake. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 1, 2005
3:03:31 AM
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another addition to your's, Merrs ? |
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 1, 2005
3:48:34 AM
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indeed he is, one of my school friends and dont you touch him....he is ours.... -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 1, 2005
6:37:01 PM
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I'll place him in Jester once he fixes up the bio. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 2, 2005
5:18:06 AM
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thx Cosmic...really apreate your line of work mate -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 3, 2005
8:08:43 AM
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Right, I've fixed my bio, and would like to thank everyone for their feedback, and I'd also like to request a transfer to Jester.
Thanks for this in advance Cosmic. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 3, 2005
10:26:48 AM
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Heh, good humor. :P
I'll place you in Jester. Congrats. -----------------------
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 3, 2005
10:40:36 AM
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Also, make sure that you take out all those squares. Try using microsoft word to type your bios on. Also, before you post use preview to make sure everything is the way it should be.
Next one better go to Lancer Cos!
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RE: Abstinance's Bio
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June 3, 2005
8:46:50 PM
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dude listen to me....i was told that it is a bug in comnet....
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