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November 27, 2005
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Okay, as for my next post, I figure I'll jump into a Aratech speeder bike and head for my TIE Aggressor along with Gladius, since he landed right by me. Once Gladius takes off, I'll run into the CloakShape pilot, invited her back to the VE, and then reveal the secret my wife's been keeping from me. -----------------------
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November 27, 2005
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November 27, 2005
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yep, leave me behind, but just don't leave and say, "Darius has had a good run. We'll miss him, (dramatic pause), kinda." In one of the posts, I had the Galloway drop to the street, maybe to look for a body. Stick with that, but when you get back to Canton, report me as MIA. When the story closes, I'll probably put in a post after the final report of my sneaky return, with Baits and my wife, who I "negotiated" into the VEN ranks.
btw, didn't Gladius die? So how could he fly? Correct me if I'm wrong. -----------------------
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November 27, 2005
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November 27, 2005
4:27:28 PM
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Hey guys, Toki and I just got the website to work. I really have no idea why it wasn't but it was sending us to some weird page and wouldn't let this one load. Sorry for the complications. I hope everyone (who celebrates it) had a good Thanksgiving! -----------------------
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November 27, 2005
4:49:57 PM
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Yea, Gladius is gone, we've got his body in the back of one of the speeders. We have to get him loaded up onto the ship.
Jack, I'm ganna need more from you on that post, you can't just say someone randomly decided to join the VEN because they spotted you in the sky. Does that make any sense? I would like to understand why this woman decided to abandon her own pirate group to join some fighter pilot in the enemies group. Was she impressed? Did she have underlying reason, maybe relation, to the VEN or Imperials. Did she always want back in and this was her chance? You gotta elaborate man, otherwise I might as well say "They fought" whenevery a blaster gets pulled out. Lets be detailed people, really create some characters. And if you plan on including this women in future stories, add her to the NPC list, Jack. That can be done on WikiPedia or you can do it in the post somewhere in the Navy comnet. Other people should know who this woman is as well.
As for the rest of the story- Gladius is dead and Darius is MIA, so that leaves the perfect number of fighters. Excluding Dimmias, he'll be left on the NR craft to make sure they're flyin in the right direction, but Dj will go on ahead and take Gladius's ship. So Jack, maybe you can use that, just replace Gladius with Dj? That probably wouldn't be so bad. Mind you, we don't just jump out of th atmosphere, we form up and protect the NR craft as it leaves. So, I think we'll have one final battle outside of the Canton and make a race into our own hanger before we run out of fuel so we can jump out. How bout it? -----------------------
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November 27, 2005
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November 28, 2005
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November 28, 2005
2:59:28 PM
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You're fine Jack. It's better now and the name work. But, I think there should at least be some complications when you're trying to get her into the ranks, because she is a current criminal (pirate), and she did shoot at us in the first battle. We can discuss it later when the times come. -----------------------
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November 28, 2005
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November 28, 2005
6:00:17 PM
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I hope i was right in assuming the lights above us were Y-wings..if not, I can always change it. I sorta ended it fro my charcter...but I can alays edit my post and exclude my 'after the mission' part -----------------------
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November 29, 2005
10:15:57 PM
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Well, you can always write on as Jack just did. In fact, that's what I'd like you to do- try avoiding "After the Battle" type things when he havn't actually completed the story because things tend to change. The both of you should be find though.
Jack- Your post was fine. Might I ask why you didn't draw a weapon when someone in a random fighter who was trying to shoot you down earlier landed and began exiting the craft, though? Not trying to be too picky, but that kind of sticks out to me. Of course, maybe your character has that natural trust in his foes... Either way, I'd like you to an include a reasoning for that.
More insight=better understanding.
Btw, for those of you who I've been told are totally in the dark about TIE's and the controls as well as what they even look like, lol, go to-
http://www.theforce.net/swtc/tie.html
Now, I suppose I'll mention that to Sk8 and see if he'd be interested in adding that because it is extremely helpful. Or atleast to the other squadrons maybe. Let me know if it was helpful for you guys at all. I'll more than likely post tomarrow. Good night. -----------------------
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November 30, 2005
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November 30, 2005
4:41:04 PM
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Aiight man, sounds okay. Spose I was tryin to make an example- I want things to make sense... If there's something wrong with mine, lemme know as well...
Btw, reports are due this week, so I spose I expect the by Thursday. And I expect the story will come to an end by this weekend, so...
Lets start discussing story. Art suggest that we be capturued in space or in the middle of a ship transfer... Any other thoughts on that? Or maybe Art would like to further elaborate? -----------------------
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November 30, 2005
6:49:15 PM
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might have to change some of my post after looking over these controls.
Anyways, Maybe just one person gets captured..or thier TIE gets immobilized, kinda like in the 'Rogue Squadren' Game for N64 when they capture that one girl with the Y-wings. They immobalize her TIE and she gets captured. Maybe that happens? or someone runs out of fuel, to far away from the Canton? I dunno. -----------------------
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November 30, 2005
10:16:32 PM
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Is this going to be the topic of the next story, or a cliff hanger that leads to another story? -----------------------
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December 1, 2005
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December 1, 2005
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Yeah, mine needs to be revived to. We'll work something and figure out what the next step is once we finish this. -----------------------
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December 2, 2005
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Well, I have my personal story all laid out. It takes place a few months from now, and it documents the birth of my son, who's name I am still thinking of.
Hmm, I have a competition idea. Everyone submits a suggestion for my son's name, and I give a reward (nothing big, maybe 5,000 IC's) to the person who's suggestion becomes the name of my child.
Note: Only Nazgul members have a chance to win the 5,000 IC's, but suggestions from other members are welcomed, and if one of those suggestions from other members gets picked, he/she will receive 2,500 IC's. -----------------------
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December 2, 2005
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Can someone count the post, I can't do it just this moment... I'll double check them tomarrow anyways- but yea. The story is done and Art will be letting you all know what the next story is.
Have an awesome weekend and get to the meeting if you can.
*Cough* Promotions and medals... *Cough* -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
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December 3, 2005
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Yeah, I won't make it to the meeting tomorrow. I've got a concert I have to perform in and Sunday is always a bad day for me anyway.
I think I'll try to get in one last post, bring some things together and get at least homeward bound. -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
11:42:36 AM
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Alright, I have the details of the next Nazgul story for you. I wanted to make it challenging and different for a change. This will require a slight change in approach as we don't be able to blaze around at will. This story will emphasize charcter development but it will have plenty of action for those of you who like to shoot things *cough Darius cough*.
Initial Details:
Alright, Nazgul squadron is being transferred to another ship (I believe a modified corvette but this hasn't been confirmed) to use as a base for a new set of missions. VEN has continued to be hampered by pirate activity and we are going to try and deal a blow back to them.
We will dock in the modified corvette and leave our fighters. The ship will then deploy into hyperspace. However, to our shock, we will discover that the ship is indeed an imposter trying to disrupt VEN operations. We are captured and will eventually try to break free and take control of the ship.
Now let's get a few things straight right off the bat. First, let's make this more realistic. Rather than just doing some superhuman moves to knock out a couple of guards and get some weapons, let's develop this with some thought and care. We work together as a team with what we are given and we challenge ourselves to write about thoughts, emotions, conversation, and planning in order to succeed in this mission. Last story was great, let's build upon this and take it to the next level (for any of you aspiring to be in the DJO, this can only help your chances).
I know you have some details and more will emerge through the story. I think that you will find this both challenging and a lot of fun.
Shazam, if I missed any details that we were going to give now, please add them in. -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
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Wow guys. This story sounds awesome. I can't wait to start on it.
Unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the meeting either on Sunday. I have my Christmas concert for school to go to. Congrats to all that get promotions and medals. You guys worked hard for them! -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
1:47:40 PM
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O_o
Nice to be back flyboys and girls. Story sounds good, and I'll be around to post on it.
Good job on the last story guys, I read most of it and it looked pretty good. -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
2:02:37 PM
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So I suppose Jaden is with us. Hmph, I'll inform Japheth.
And as for the story, it looks like that'll be alright, but you guys can add a little to it if you'd like. We have some background story going for you guys, so don't worry so much about that. Any questions though? -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
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So far from checking the 1st two pages, I got these totals.
Shazam 19, Darius 13, Jack 8, Tok 3, Trevor 10, DJ 2, Jen 1
Someone check on the 3rd page and add up those totals with mine and we will have the winner.
Thats all. -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
2:16:46 PM
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I can`t make it to the meeting either, I don`t think anyways. Its on Sunday, and Sunday is church day...so. I`ll see what happens.
Can`t wait to start on the new story. -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
2:49:27 PM
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The totals for the story come to this:
Shazam: 27 posts
Darius: 18 posts
Trevor: 15 posts
Jack: 13 posts
Tokijin: 3 posts
Jen: 2 posts
DJ: 2 posts -----------------------
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December 3, 2005
8:31:08 PM
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Well, about the story. Am I going to be with you guys when you transfer, or do I hop into the picture looking for you guys. Because, relating to a timeline here of when and where my character stands, I'd say it's about a week after Shazam last post and i'm still on Nar Shaddaa, if you want, I could add a transition from the current story, going back to the Atrus and being told that they've lost contact with Nazgul, and I could add a little spice in with me getting chewed out by Japheth or something, because you just don't disapear in the military and show back up. It's totally up to you Art or Shazam. -----------------------
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