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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
July 10, 2005 9:54:31 PM    View the profile of zar mulix 
what do you mean? And i probably dont know th answer to that anyway. Oh yeah and Jak is there anything else I should know about wrting a spec story?
 
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July 11, 2005 1:39:56 AM    View the profile of CJ 
OOC: This is my first
Medic Training
Advanced First Aid

CJ moved quickly down the hall, he didn't want to be late for his training. He approached the door and entered it to find a man sitting down. He must have been the training Captain. CJ walked up, saluted and sat down on a seat. The room was cold and lighten up by only a single yellow glow from the wall.

"Now" The Captain started. "We will begin today's training in a simulation room right behind me. You will be using an E-11 blaster armed with fake bolts of light and you will also be wearing an electronic vest. Now what will happen is there are two injured men around in this forest simulation. You will start off at you camp and go find them, once you find them, treat with this" The Captain held up a small glass container filled with a liquid CJ was familiar with from his basic training. "Then bring them back. Simple you might say, but this is where the vest comes in. There will be rebel drones floating by, and if you are hit more than twice your vest will turn your E-11 training blaster off and the simulation, terminated. You have five minutes to successfully treat and bring back the two men without dying. Now, have you got any questions?" A few moments of silence was broken by the Captains words. "Very well, get into your vest, get you weapon and enter the simulation". CJ clipped on the tough vest and picked up his weapon.

Suddenly a door opened up in front of him to find a forest like planet. CJ stepped through the door and entered, he saw a flag and a crate of some sort. He stepped forward and then heard a clank behind him, and then suddenly a he heard a voice. "Your time starts now" That was all CJ needed to know. CJ moved quickly forward studying the landscape, it looked so real. He held his hand of his trigger jumping cautiously as he jumped over a fallen tree. Then a swooping sound made him look to his right, a drone was heading straight for him. The drone fired a light bolt at him but he was too quick, rolling down as he dodged the fire, then the drone shot again. CJ ducked, just missing another bolt and then he fired twice, but they both missed. He groaned, rolled and fired another two, one missing but the other had a direct hit! The drone fell and CJ started to run toward what he thought was a groan and he was right. A pale man lay wounded in the leg, breathing lightly. CJ new exactly what to do, he just looked back in his mind to the basic training. He pulled out his container, poured a drop of the liquid on the man's wound and then put it away, then to break the silence he heard a swoop and then he saw a drone. CJ quickly got out his E-11 and fired missing the drone, now it was the drone's turn to fire, CJ expected that so just before the drone fired he moved himself and the man out of the way, missing the bolt, then CJ shot three bolts at the drone, and will relief, all hit and the drone fell down. "Four minutes remain" Thundered a voice which triggered CJ to jump up and carry the man to the camp which he thought was the right way. CJ walked as fast as he could but of corse he would have to carry the man over trees and rocks nearly stumble all the time.  Finally he reached the flag and put the man down on the crate. "Injured man two has been successfully treated and taken to the camp. Injured man 1 remains" Shot out a voice.

CJ gave a slight smile as he turned around and ran through the forest. Suddenly a drone swooped past and fired while it was moving. CJ quickly rolled, jumped and shot back twice, one hitting, but the drone didn't fall. CJ groaned and fired back two times again having them both the drone, causing it to fall into the dirt. "Ha!" CJ couldn't help but saying it, he felt unstoppable as he ran through the forest. "Three minutes remain" Came the voice again which made CJ stumble on one of the fallen drones he had shot earlier. "Damn, I don't have time for this" CJ mumbled as he got up and continued to run until he came to another drone, but CJ didn't slow down, but shot five bolts having three hit it before the drone could even fire one. CJ decided to run left now and he did so until he found the other injured man. "Two minutes remain" Came the voice as usual while he pulled the container out and put a drop on the wound, then he put the container away, picked up the man and ran back toward the camp and when he finally arrived he placed the man on the crate and then sat down to hear a voice again. "Congratulations, you have completed your training with one minute and twelve seconds to spare" Then suddenly the door opened and CJ got up and walked through it. "Good job private" Congratulated the Captain. "You've done well. Now please enter this room for some target practice"

CJ saw a door open so he entered to a room with some drones and weapons. "Choose your weapon and activate the drones, you can set them on moving or non-moving, shooting or non-shooting" said the Captain as he left the room. CJ walked over to the weapons rack and chose out his favourite and original, the E-11 blaster rifle. Then he walked over to panel and selected four drones, moving and shooting. CJ got into position and then across the room four drones sputtered to life and began to fire light bolts about one per five seconds. CJ used the average roll and dodge trick and then he leaned back and fired multiple shots, hitting two of the drones before ducking again, then open fired hitting the remaining two.
Hours had passed now so CJ turned off the drones, put away his weapon and exited the room, passing down the hall. CJ hadn't had much training before and he didnt have much today, but it was a good start he thought.



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Fear over Peace.
Anger over Honor.
Power over Justice.
Darkness over Light.
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July 19, 2005 4:58:01 AM    View the profile of Revan666 
Sharpshooter Training
Assignment One

While Training at the Academy, Tony notices that his instructor is carrying an assignment folder. Tony looks through the sims sniper rifle scope and shoots a Rebel Officer right in between the eyes. He pauses it and looks over at his instructor.

His Instructor says, "this is your first assignment on training. It deals with the simulator. Read it thoroughly once or twice before starting the assignment."

Tony goes over to the sim restarts it and enters ASSIGNMENT 1. The sim accepts and starts up the level. Tony starts out near a Laat Gunship, that has been shot down. He sees 3 squads of Rebels that splitted up that went North, East, and West. He then sees a ramp that covers the grounds that the squads just went. It has well enoughcover that I can see them and they can't see him. He goes up the ramp and goes to the North. He then pulls out his sniper rifle and lines it up and attaches the Silencer attachment. He Lines up again and fires at one of the trooper's chest. The Trooper falls over dead. No one notices. He fires at another trooper but it wasn't a trooper it was the Rebel Squad Leader. He fires at the others. The others fall over dead with a bullet in each other's chest.

He walks over to the Western Squad and looks at them with a smile on his face and Says, " This is too easy, whoa wait a minute. If this is too easy that means that the next squad is either better or is ready for me."

He lines up, looks through the scope, sets it for rapid sniping and rapidly snipes every one in the heart. He goes over to the Eastern Squad to see that they have turrets that are that Detect Enemy Motion. He lines up and hopes he lives throught this mission. He Lines-up and fires rapidly. The squad was hit in both heart and shoulder twice. When the Squad Leader died, the turrets self destructed. He went over to the Far North part of the Area and saw 30 Rebel Companies. He looked in his scope and thought  i should get some heavier weapons like his Anti-Armor Sniper attachment with Silencer. He lined up fire 10 times and all 30 companies fell to the floor dead like a doorknob. He walks down to see what was left and found 30 snipers and A senator untouched by the explosions. He got up the Ramp loaded his Sniper Rifle. He sniped the 30 snipers right between the eyes and The Senator was shot right in between the eyes also. He advanced until he saw 50 Heavy Rebel Soldiers locked and Loaded. So he threw out 3 grenades that looked like holo-emmiters. He then sniped all 50 with 5 bullets because they all lined up in 5 rows of 10. He advanced until another 50 soldiers and a Rebel Officer. He loads and throws 6 grenades and gets out the Anti- Armor Sniper attachment with Silencer. He fires four and they are all dead when he looks. He looks at his objectives and says all but one, to assasinate A General. He finds the Balcony and looks down to find the General training. Tony waits for the session to be over and then snipes the General in between the eyes. He returns to A gunship that has orders to pick him up and return to the academy. Then the screen says assignment 1 completed. He Looks over to see Squad Leader MaraJade telling him he did a good job and will go back to his quarters to await further instructions.

I've saved this story onto my hard drive. In the future, if you still want Sharpshooter, we'll take it out. In the meantime, come see me for specialty selection. Sharpshooter is not an acceptable field to start out in. I apologize for this, seeing as how this wouldn't of happened had I not been on leave. I'll try and correct this matter with you, and again: I apologize for the mishap!

--Rizz

 
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Darkness is one way to Life and the Light leads to death and that is why i am Dark and Immortal!!!!!!!!!
HaHaHa!!!!
Surrender to the Darkness you are weak to resist and Strong to Bask in the dark energy!!!! HaHaHa!!!
[This message has been edited by Rizzit (edited July 19, 2005 9:07:53 PM)]
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July 21, 2005 1:29:28 PM    View the profile of Jakireth 
Make sure to let everyone know what your story is really about, just typing it at the top of your writing doesnt do it all, you actually have to include that subject the most in your stories. This message in no way means to belittle your writing, its actually very well written, but everything can be up for improvement.

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August 14, 2005 4:50:07 PM    View the profile of Revan666 
Heavy Weapons Specialist
Level 1: Part 1

Revan was on his way to the Academy to start his training to become a Heavy Weapons Specialist with his backpack full of Electronics and wiring kit, small tool kit, weapons diagnostic interface datapad, weapons repair kit. He goes up to the Receptionist and tells her that, " I'm here for my training." She replies with " Your Name and Rank?" He said to her, " Name Tony Kerea, Callsign Revan, Rank Private First Class." She sends him down the Northern Corridor and to the right and the third door on the left, Room Number 308, Heavy Weapons Spec Training. He Entered the room and looked around and saw the Sim, equipment lying around that is used in the Sim and out in the field, and an Elderly Old Man who looked to be in his 60's.

He asked the man about the room and who is he? The man replied, " I am your instructor that has train over 50 men in my days." Revan told the man, " What am I going to do today in the Sim?" The Instructor told him that he is going to do Fire Support for his squad. The Instructor was saying, "Your equipment is....." When Revan told him that he had his equipment. Then the Instructor told him that his weapons were going to be a selection of 2 Heavy  Blaster Rifles, 2 Pistols, 2 types of Grenades, and 2 Vibroblades/ Melee weapons of Revan's choosing.

Revan chose the E-11/H Heavy Blaster Rifle and the  T-27A2 BlackJack Riot Supression Rifle for the Blaster Rifles. Next, The  WW-41 CryoBan Grenade and the Mk 1 Fragmentation Grenade for the Grenades.  Then, the 2 Enforcer Heavy Slugthrower Pistols for the Pistols. Finally, the Melee Weapons, the Treppus-2 Vibroblade and the  Controller Force Pike. He had equip them to the holsters of his Stormtrooper Armor. He then enterered the sim platform and put on the Sim Visor that was attached to his Helmet.

THe Instructor then told him his objectives, "First, rally the allied forces to go to the defensive barriers to provide cover to defend against an Rebel Regiment. Then, Provide Cover fire to get the Forces inside the base to assemble and come out sweep the remain Rebel Forces away. Before doing the Second Objective raise the alarm so the forces inside will assemble and be alert of the Rebels invading. Then, tell some of the Troops to throw grenades along with you and the rest of the troops providing Fire Support. Once, you drive the enemy back so long the main forces will come out to defeat the invasion. Okay there's your assignment now go at it"

Revan entered the Sim. He looked around and saw enough men to suppress the enemy back enough. He told the men to get to the barriers and throw some grenades until they closed in enough to shoot there rifles and pistols. The men assembled and were waiting for the Rebels to come. Revan told 3 men to wait for his signal (which was a whistle) to press the alarm to alert the men inside the Base. Revan told 50 men out of the 500 men on guard duty to keep throwing grenades at the enemy while the rest keep on firing their blaster rifles. Then, he, himself sets up his line of Fire and grenades. The Scouts told Revan that the Rebels were within 10 Kilometers of the Base. The men readied their grenades, the Scouts went into the base to ready for the alarm to be set off. Revan saw the Rebels move in and the distance from the Rebels to the Base was a Half of a Kilometer away.

The men were ready and then out of no where a beam of red from an Xwing hit with in 5 meters of the men. Then the Xwing was shot down a kilometer from  the backside of the Base by Anti-Air Turrets that were not in the front of base because of random attacks by Rebels. Revan then saw the First few men of the Rebels and told the men to fire the grenades. Revan threw his 2 types grenades. He threw 5 out of 10 grenades for each type. He saved them for the Middle/End of the Battle. He ten told the men to get out the Rifles. Then, told the specific 50 men to keep on throwing when you see them within 100 meters.

Revan pulled out the T-27A2 BlackJack Riot Supression Rifle to stop them dead in there tracks he fired the grenade launcher that was on the rifle 4 times and reloading it 3 times. He then Fired the 100 bullets that took down 100 men by chest shots that went through the armor of the Rebels. He then reloaded the clip 4 times, before pulling out his Heavy E-11 Blaster rifle. He shot down another 100 and 20 guys before giving the signal. He whistled, the 3 men hit the 3 alarms. the 4 scouts went around waking up the officers and the main troops rooms. the Main forces were being assembled. While Revan and the men were going against another regiment and 500 men from the first regiment. The Main forces were ready with their rifles. Revan whistled again and the 3 men told the main forces to come out. The main forces were a total 10 Regiments, 3 Companies, and 5 Battalions and including the 50 officers. They came out shooting and sweeped the 100 men from the first Rebel Regiment and the other half of the Second Regiment. the Main Forces went on to the 5 Rebel Bases and conquered the 5 Rebel Bases that were holding the men that attacked us. Revan was pulled out and was congradulated for his time in the Sim and completing every last detail of the Objectives. The Instructor told him to go home and relax until the next Simulation.

Please Reply if needed any editing in this or comments about it.

Comments: Allright, well it has promise. You can move on to your next story!
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"My kills are my life and to attack the enemy from every which way. The enemy's reinforcements and main forces run in fear." Revan 666
[This message has been edited by Revan666 (edited August 17, 2005 4:01:53 PM)]
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August 18, 2005 4:16:25 PM    View the profile of Jakireth 
Story line is good Rev.
I'm just so glad you finally did something, meh.

 
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August 18, 2005 4:42:50 PM    View the profile of Revan666 
i was posting and chatting and starting my spec with Rizzit that must say that i have done something instead of "finally done something" Jak (not to insult you Jak)
 
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"My kills are my life and to attack the enemy from every which way. The enemy's reinforcements and main forces run in fear." Revan 666
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August 19, 2005 12:57:44 AM    View the profile of Revan666 
HWS
Indirect Fire Ops
Lvl. 1: Part 2

Revan was sitting at home on Tatooine and saw that he was about 3 minutes late for the training session. Revan got up and went to the garage. Got on his Barc Speeder and went to the Shuttle Station and got a ride to Tadath. He told the Secretary he was here for his Training she said go right ahead. He went to Room 308. On his way there he met his commanding officers, Rizzit, Raziel, and Kadann. He saluted fast and went in the room. He went in and the Instructor looked at the clock and said your 30 minutes late. Revan said that he totally forgot the day and the Instructor said, " Its okay, Everyone makes mistakes and forgets things."

Revan asked, "What is my Mission today?" The instructor told him about Indirect Fire Ops. He said what equipment am i using. The Instructor said an Emplaced Elite Heavy Turret, a E-11/H Heavy Blaster Rifle, 2 DC-15s Pistols and a PT-212 Vibroblade. He got into his armor and equiped the weapons and slid down the Sim Visor. He got in the Sim and was told his objectives.
The Instructor said, " Rally the troops to the Turrets and barriers until your defenses and the main troops are ready to attack their main base. You are placed on a hill on the right flank with an emplaced turret. There will be a suprise in the middle of the battle they have an advantage on you that is sly move but not sly enough. Listen to your com and fellow troopers. You must destroy all vehicles and kill 10,000 of the 100,000 enemy men. That is all Revan you must suceed your the Enemy will take over Tatooine."

Revan said to himself, " I must defend my Planet and the troops who will triumph. And i hope the men there have some training or better training than me."

Revan enter the Sim and Ended up on his home planet and said this is where i live and I won't let them pass. He rallied the men to guns and barriers. He told them to shoot and listen to the com. The men were all positioned. Revan saw 50 AT-AT's and 25 AT-ST's. He had to defend them from missiles and other vehicles. Then the Com said tminus 10..... tminus 1, Begin. Revan got to his turret and fired at the men and the Tanks coming and the Speeder bikes. He had half of the vehicles destroyed and half of the men killed, he surpass the limit of 10,000 men. He told the men to keep firing when the Orbital Sensors jammed his and the men's sensors. It went black.  He heard the com say, "point: 24, axis 1: 30, axis 2: 08, and Vector 18" He turned the turret to the vector, the point, and the axis. He fired 5 shots and heard, " Confirmed Kill!" Revan had the same thing over and over. He heard "Confirmed Kill" every 5 secs.

He repeated the attack and then he heard, " Commence attack on Rebel Base at Point 49, Axis 1 and 2: 50, and Vector 100," "I repeat Converge at Point 49, Axis 1 and 2 50 and Vector 100," "Revan hit the Satillite and hit the Factory, Generator, and the Command Center." Revan hit all the points and killed 3/4 of the Enemies army. He then heard, "Sensors up in 3...2...1...." He then saw the Base of the Enemy. Revan then heard, "Revan get on your Speeder and rally the main forces and the forces out there to the enemy's base."

Revan hopped on his speeder and rallied the men towards the base. He heard the Com say, " Your in charge of the men today and go kick there butts now Private First Class." Revan got excited and charged toward the enemy and got off his speeder and started shooting at the remaining enemies. He then got Demolitions to blow the main door open and went to the officer's tower at the enemy's base. They charged in and Revan had his pistols ready. He drawed his Vibroblade and told the men to ready their vibrobayonets/Vibroblades. The men charged for the Glory! (Kote!). Then Revan got Word that the Commanding Officer of the Rebels stationed there was escaping.

Revan told the men to round up the officers and kill the remaining soldiers. Revan got to the Turret which was a dual rocket turret and he aimed it at the Officers's X-Wing. He shot 4 rockets and the X-Wing crashed. He checked it out and captured the Officer and was told to go back to the Base.

Then the Sim shutted down and He got out of the Chamber. The Instructor told him he had sucessfully completed his mission and told him to bring his sniper rifles next time. Revan saluted and exited the room. He walked back Saluting Rizzit, Raziel, Kadann, Talon, Jakireth, MaraJade, Fury, and Cosmic who were all in the Meeting Room discussing important matters. Revan went outside and saw an Tie Bomber that was just sitting there. The note on the wing said, " This is a 1 time thing Revan, There is a Pilot in there that will shuttle you home and return to here for the today only." P.S. The Shuttle Station is Closed down.

Revan hopped in and was taken back home to relax and set up for next time.

Reply for Comments, Edits, and for me to move on to Level 2.

Comments: These reply notes are annoying me Anyways, good story: and this brings you to your second level. I must apologize for this being late edited, but things have been rather hectic for me as of late (the past month)
 
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"My kills are my life and to attack the enemy from every which way. The enemy's reinforcements and main forces run in fear." Revan 666
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August 20, 2005 3:28:22 PM    View the profile of Jakireth 
Combat Engineer-L1,S2
Electrical Systems

    The cool air rushed rapidly through Jakireth's hair, and the fading light from the above star seemed to distract him, straying away from the task at hand. Night was falling, and the intense light was being replaced by the eternal blackness of night.
    Jakireth looked around and caught a glance of the training building before it was lost behind a tram barrier. For some reason beyond his comprehension, the second phase of his electronics training was taking place outdoors, a good forty kilometers away from the newly-built training center. He sighed, perhaps this meant his demolitions work would be done inside a cardboard box. A short laugh escaped his lungs, it was apparent that humor was never a big part of his day. This was soon reinforced by his immediate boredom as the tram sped away from the next station.
   
After what seemed like forever, the vehicle came to a much slower speed, eventually bringing itself to a full stop. Again, Jakireth scanned the surrounding areas. The tram had brought him to an outdoors battle simulator, obviously taking place at night. Wonderful, Jakireth thought, they'll have me repairing electrical equipment half-blind. Now that really takes some skill.
After a long series of noises caused by hydraulic clamps and docks, the tram's hatch slid open. It revealed a moderate sized room containing two large blast doors, eight lockers against the left wall, and two other soldiers amidst the equipment. One of the soldiers, the taller one, spoke up:

"I thought someone else would be joining us tonight, you might want to put your things in the assigned locker and equip your gear.""

Jakireth looked back, smiling slightly, "I'll be sure to do that. Any idea they have us out here tonight?" He shot a look at the blast doors.

"Who knows... It's supposed to be part of this new program the Empire is designing for Stormtroopers. Making the training environment more realistic or something..."

"At least we wont have that sun burning down on us, its been way too hot lately. Not to mention, I've become accustomed to the darkness of night..."" Jakireth replied slowly, nostalgia of his past career weighing his words.
The soldier nodded, and Jakireth made his way to a locker. Inside he found an electronics kit, two ration packs and a stealth-suit. It seemed they were shedding themselves of the Stormtrooper armor for tonight.

    As the blast doors opened, everyone took a moment to appreciate the climate. The air outside was remarkably cool, and the blazing humidity from the day had fortunately disappeared with the sun. As they stepped out onto the rocky gravel laying a path to the simulation field, Jakireth's expression changed. He was no longer here to enjoy the chilly embrace of night, but rather to complete this course professionally, and to the best of his ability.
    When the path came to an end, the three soldiers were standing in front of a wire durasteel gate. The three exchanged glances and were greeted by a friendly voice emitting from a speaker placed above the entrance. It was clear and concise, giving only the most important information:
"Combat Engineer training session two, Electrical Systems. Your mission is to effectively repair and operate the damaged Imperial gun turrets, eliminating Rebel forces firing upon you. This is a LIVE FIRE exercise! All rounds are capable of injuring you. This has been arranged to correctly prepare you for missions on the battlefield. Good luck.""
The wire gate slid open slowly, almost trying to create a menacing feel to the start of the simulation. Upon their first steps into the field, it was apparent that this was not going to be easy. More importantly&it was going to be a long night&

    "Training session beginning in three..."" the speaker announced the countdown loudly, and all three soldiers were waiting, "two..."" they all exchanged glances of approval before the last number was stated and... "one!""
    Immediately, every soldier broke in a different direction, attempting to scan the field for the disabled turrets needing repair. Jakireth knelt down behind a steel barrier in close contact with a tree, trying to peek around the corner without being noticed. As he did, 12 rounds flew past his head and he darted back to the safety of the barrier. He swore under his breath and began searching through his electronics kit, looking for anything of use. Luck wasn't with him that night though, everything in the kit was needed to repair those turrets, and there was only one thing he could do.
    Jakireth (with much difficulty over the the subsonic whisper of rounds escaping their respective barrels) removed one of his ration packs from the pouch on his suit, tossing it high into the air on the right side of the barrier. Not even two seconds after it was thrown, the pack was ripped to shreads from the simulator fire, and Jakireth was on his way to the next area his saw that might provide cover.
    To his dismay however, the pack contained four chocolate chip cookies...his favorite. Only me& he thought.
   
Jakireth's reminiscence of childhood thoughts were soon interrupted by the next series of rounds, and he spotted one of the damaged turrets about thirty yards away. His adrenaline kicked into overdrive, and he took off in the turrets direction. Sprinting was never so difficult: running distances with simulated Rebels firing at your tail...

As he ran through the wooded area, small arms fire following his every move, Jakireth spotted the smaller of the other two soldiers, it seemed he was still in search of a turret. Jakireth ignored him and focused on the task at hand. A rather large task to say the least. As he jumped over a barrier surrounding the turret, he was finally able to see the problem with the Imperial devices...
   
    It was obvious that the Imperials that designed the program were working towards getting more soldiers to be innovative. The basic systems that would normally power the turret were fried, and the kits supplied to them weren't compiled to repair the systems in a normal way. Jakireth sighed and removed a plasma cutter from his kit. He then proceeded to carefully rid the turret of the twisted and contorted metal that was blocking the way to the power conduits.
    After removing the last piece of durasteel, the plasma tool gave a hiss as it was shut off, replaced by a large set of pliers. Jakireth was finally able to start removing the useless power circuits from the turrets internal systems, and he did so with steady hands. If he made one wrong move in this situation, the entire conduit could explode in his face, and that would definitely ruin the day.
    Jakireth continued to split a variety of wires, all of which were connected to the turrets main power in some way. He then clamped two split wires together, one running from the underground power core, the other relayed to the weapons systems. Each wire was at least 5 inches in diameter, so they were easily grasped in his hands. The downside to the size of the wires however, was the energy potentially surging through them. Fortunately, until the main connection was put together, the power was purely kinetic.
   
    When the two wires were properly prepared to be bonded, Jakireth removed an electronics clamp and attached it, holding them in place. Next, he removed the Imperial version of electrical tape from his kit, thoroughly wrapping it around the large wires. Once the tape was fitted around them, it almost seemed to meld and create a permanent connection.
    The turret sprang to life; sparks flying in nearly every direction&including the area Jakireth was standing. He darted away, almost being singed by the embers released from the turret.
   
His main objective was completed, and all he really had to do was sit and wait for the others to do so as well. Jakireth sat down behind the turret, live rounds still flying in its direction. To past the time though, he removed his last ration pack and sat eating until the two soldiers had fixed their respective turrets as well.
After he had polished off the food provided for him, a voice sprang from the speaker near the gate. It was hard to hear due to the distance between them, but Jakireth made the words out well enough:

"This simulation is now ending. All objectives were completed successfully, congratulations.""

Jakireth stood up, still a little paranoid of the rounds that might be coming in his direction. Fortunately this wasn't the case, and he was able to make it back to the equipment room in one piece.

Comments: Allright very good. Nice touch by having the story take place while you're under fire. Good work!
 
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"Faithful to the end..." Raiders squad motto


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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
August 29, 2005 1:29:36 PM    View the profile of Revan666 
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Level 2 Story 1
Precision Range Shooting

Revan was at home get his equipment like his grenades and rifles/sniper rifles. Revan always wanted to use his new sniper rifles since the day he bought them and got them from his parents' will. He got on his speeder and the moment he got on he was called to the academy. So he got his range finders, rifles/ sniper rifles, grenades, communication devices, and his personal 4 pistols. He got to the Shuttle Station and took it to Tadath and went inside the Base. He told the secretary he came and went to the room.

He saw the Instructor waiting preparing for Revan's Arrival. Revan Enter with his Armor, Ammo, Weapons, and Grenades all in his Pack and Duffle Bag. He puts down Sim Visor gets out 4 DC-15s holsters them, the DC-17 with all attachments, the LJ-90 Sniper Rifle, his Grenades, the Two Vibroblades, his comlink, his Range finder, His binoculars, and his Whisper Subsonic Slugthrower Sniper Rifle. All holstered and he was in a Katarn Clone Commando Armor with Imperial Modifications.

He asked the Instructor, "Is that enough weapons and a heavy armor. The Instructor told him, "Don't forget about your E-11/H Blaster." Revan Holsters his E-11/H Blaster Rifle. He gets in the Chamber and Salutes.

The Instructor told him, "At Ease Soldier", and here are your objectives, you and 20 men including Sharpshooters are going to enter a Shooting Range to get the Hang of Shooting with the Guns they have and yours. Then you are going to get in 4 Laat Gunships to take you and the men to the Base you were on last time.

But this time your attacking and ambush a Regiment of Rebel Rookie Soldiers marching to your Base ok. You are supposed to have the Artillery of AT-STs Ready and the 5 AT-AT's that are standing in a Field in front of the Forest. Along with the 5,000,000 men there standing by the Artillery along with the ARC troopers that along with you for half the battle then they go to destroy a Hangar and Armory to weaken the Rebel's Supplies. The Men with you at the beginning will peg off most of the Men going through the Main path while the 5 other paths will meet the artillery and the men in the Field.

You will have to be quiet so they don't signal the base for anything. You are going to signal the time to jam their sensors half way through the battle so the ARC troopers can safely make their way to the First enemy base ok. Then you and the 20 men will escort the ARCs in Laat Gunships to the Other bases and make the Rebels follow you on ground to the Field and ambush them on the Main Path and make them pay for Resisting the Empire's Rule ok. Then tell the Artillery to attack at first sight of rebels along with the Troops

Next, Get the Troops to surround them and push them back to the Center HQ so you can capture the other Bases to bring in more men from the academy you build next to the Bases that will increase your men from 5,000,000 to 10,000,000 and increase artillery to double of each. Then Converge to the Main Base ok. Then Shoot down all Fighters with the AAGuns on the Bases.  Call for 5 more Artillery of each one and call for Bomber Support from the Fleet above.

Then Converge again and again until the Main Base is taken and other Bases ok and don't let them get past the Field and plant bombs in the Main Base. Also, don't let the Vanguards get to the Artillery or bye AT-ST support ok or the Bases you capture ok. That is All Trooper.

Revan Stepped in with all equipment on and activated the Chamber. Revan then was put in the Firing range to get a hold of his Rifles and grenades he had. He had got his array of weapons and got a hold each one and got close to the bull's eye for the first time with sniper rifles. He then went to the Grenadine Range. He unleashed his grenades he had to see what each one did and their effect radius/damage radius. He then went to the to the Pad with the men and hopped on the Gunships and went to the Base that was 200 km away.

They got to the field and hopped off they got men in the artillery and men assembled by the Artillery and got the 20 men and the ARC troopers to the Ambush Point also himself and had everyone ready and their orders. Then out of nowhere a scout told Revan about the Rebels are coming and an Orbital Cannon is Ready to fire at the Ships coming to the Atmosphere or ships with men to retreat to another planet.

He got the Orbital Cannon Ready for anything and told the scouts to hide in the Trees and snipe along with the main group there. He then went to get his grenades ready when the Rebels were in firing range and he told them to fire. He was picking them off like he was on the Range firing at them. He got the Men their to fire faster and more deadlier than ever. He was just nailing them along with the team there. He then was told jamming sensors operation ready and he signaled the Sensors to jam ASAP.

The Sensors kicked in and the ARC troopers charged to the first base they got to and noticed it was heavily fortified. Revan and 10 men went to help the ARC troopers and they got there and got the base defenseless. He got inside and got a slicer on the main computer. The Slicer had access to send commands to the other Bases. Revan told the Slicer to send a fake command from their Commander Skywalker to tell the Rebels to attack the Imperials down the paths ASAP all men now.

Revan grinned and told the Men to attack the Main Hangar and Main Armory. The two were demolished with out the Rebels Knowing. He had moved the men to the 25 bases surrounding the Main Base of the Rebels. Once they got the bases surrounding he got the men to get the building commencing. Within minutes the bases had 10 million men trained and stationed at the Forest Entrances to the Field. Also, 50 artillery units set up and ready to attack.

Then he told all Imperial Units Converge on the Main Base ASAP. The Men had killed all the Rebels coming to the Base of the Imperials and charged to the Enemy's Base. With in Minutes the Base was captured. Then a report of 1 last base 1 km away and millions of Transports were launching. Revan Called in Bomber Support and the Orbital Cannon to demolish as many transports as possible until the men got there. Revan, the Men, and the Artillery got there attacking the Fleeing Transports.

They killed the Rebel Officers and took over the base. The Men got to the Guns and Fired upon the Transports/X-Wings and Y-Wings leaving.  Revan took the Main One and fired upon the Ships. Revan discovered that the Rebels were holding a Fortress that guarded the Citadel of Siegen. Then Revan got to the Citadel and took the Guns There to attack the ships from the Citadel and closer to the Rebel hangar and Landing Pad. Once all the Ships were destroyed and artillery was built.

Along with more men getting trained to overcome the Rebels last spot. City of the Siegen 2. The Men and Revan went there conquered all the men at Siegen 2 surpassing what the objectives were placed for the mission. Revan had Victory on his Screen and the Sim shutdown. The Instructor told him that he went over the limits and got him better at being a turret man and great at Precision Shooting.

Revan Exited with his Pack and Duffle Bag. He saluted to the commanding officers in the Meeting room and in the Hall. He Exited and saw the Shuttle Station had a new vehicle to shuttle people. He paid 500 credits to the Shuttle station to ride the New Vehicle. He went inside the Hangar and saw it was an Old Republic Assault Ship for the Public and the Nearby Imperial Units. He got on and was taken back home. He relaxed after putting away his stuff and took a nap.

Comments: I think you need to realize the difference between training and a mission: but good work nonetheless.


 
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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
September 3, 2005 4:24:29 PM    View the profile of Hellra 
Level 4: material manipulation
You will learn how to use all the materials around you as efficiently as possible. This will improve your construction/fortification skills.
Skills earned:
    -weld metals
    -shape most materials
Story 1: Materials Science

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Hellra lazily tracked her finger across the datapad, her eyes barely following the slow movement. Her head was nestled in the crook of a large branch, in a large tree miles away from the academy.

Hellra sighed and gazed around her. It was a wind-still night with the atmosphere static and thick, a sure sign of a approaching storm. She unconsciously formed pictures of the grey-clouded sky, beams of the crescent moon could barely slip through the tight-knitted cloud formations, casting small whimpering shadows of the objects gracing the vast lands.

"Damn Specs, good grief, its irritating" she mumbled to herself as she nestled her neck back in the crook of the branch. The datapad glowed a faint blue and white light, illuminating her face. Her usual mischievous eyes were frowned displaying unusual maturity and seriousness.

She was studying the science of materials, but in reality she didn't have a clue what it was about. There were thousands of types of materials. And they were covering only the important ones.

"Ok, so sand and ground is good for scrubbing hardened food and blood from stuff, and durasteel is good for building...bluddy useless crap of information," grumbled Hellra as she shifted her weight to be more comfortable on the rough texture of the tree.

She has noticed one important factor in her time at the academy though. Most lessons and army related objects could be divided in two categories: Natural and Artificial.
She quickly jammed her datapad in her slung bag before she proceeded to her speeder.

Next day

Groggily Hellra walked down the corridors to her class. Her usually messy hair was even messier then usual as she barely had time to comb her hair properly. She broke her alarm for a third time this month. Her stomach was hollering at her for skipping breakfast when she hasn't even had dinner.
If her classroom had a swinging door she would have slammed it open, but she impatiently had to wait her time as it hissed open in a painfully slow manner.
"You are lat---" started Giant in his usual robust voice.
"No need to spell it out, I can read time" she snapped angrily. For the first time in a long time Hellra let her temper get hold of her. 

She stomped off to her usual desk even ignoring Den's greeting on her way.
Giant didn't say anything but continued his lesson and increasing the intensity of boredom in the class. For the first time Hellra didn't even try to listen what her lecturer was droning on about. She just wanted to get out of this hellhole they called the Academy. She wanted to get out of the white armour she was forced to wear.  She wanted to get rid of her Stormtrooper insignia on her clothes. She was sick of this place.

She wanted to go into space and just be the free bird she was before she joined the Vast Empire. Now she was a Raider, once a Lancer, a stormtrooper trapped in some silly armour doing some silly Specialties classes and tests.

With a sudden shock she realised what she was thinking and pushed her anger back. Guiltily she glanced at her lecturer, she might as well make the most of this.
For a while she hasn't been thinking of this. But her time was drawing to an end in the Vast Empire; it depended on what will happen.

She just hoped for her own sake she would survive the guilt because she didn't intend to make friends. Hellra shook her head clear of these very disturbing thoughts and tried to concentrate with a greater determination.


"NOW, only certain material is only used for certain purposes, for example durasteel is one of the most common used metal to build buildings with," rumbled Giant.
Hellra sighed in boredom. She really wanted to get this over and done with. She could feel tiredness creeping up on her.

"Your test today will be theory, if you have studied and listened as you should have, this won't be difficult at all then, reorder the type of materials displayed on your test in the correct groups and give an example of where it can be used on what. Your test begins now!"

Hellra sighed again and looked at her test.

1.Place materials under the correct groups and tables.

Hellra stared at all the materials she had to place&


Wood
Durasteel
Rubber
Plastic
Sand
Bone
Glass
Steel
Copper
Aluminium
Concrete&.


The list seemed forever to Hellra, and her impatience was thin, but started filling out the answers out anyway. She quickly drew up an table in which she grouped and listed the materials.


Metals
   
-Durasteel                                                 
-Steel                                                                           
-Copper
-Aluminium

Ceramics
-Glass

Polymers
-Rubber
-Plastic


Biomaterials

-Wood
Bone


Composites
        Concrete


Hellra sat up; she stretched herself and continued with more intensity then ever.

Question2. Define 4 materials named in the above question and what they can be used for

Hellra stared dumbfounded at the question. She really didn't understand the logic of asking such easy question. But then again everything always happened the exact opposite of what she thinks.

Wood : Most commonly material, used for making rough and primitive bridges.
      Durasteel: Used to enforce buildings
    Sand: Good use for blinding enemy, cleaning, and providing as obstacles to a
              floods, or enemies.
      Copper: a good conductor for electricity and heat. Could be used in forts if light
                    is needed. Also to be used in electronical devices and objects
    Aluminium : A light type of metal, usually used for fast vehicles, if needed
                          to build a quick fortification it is easy to carry and use since it
                          weighs so light.



The list of questions most similar to the first one continued, Hellra rubbed her eyes tiredly, on the verge of falling asleep. Her almost electric blue eyes drooped as she folded her arms to form a pillow for her head. She was at least finished with this part of the specs, or she hoped she was.

"Next up, the practical exam!" shouted Giant, although there was no need to shout.

A few minutes later  feet shuffled in the classroom as chairs scraped against the floor, a clear indication that the exam was finally over. Hellra trudged on her way out sleepily. But froze in her tracks as Gaint called her.
"Hellra a moment" coughed Giant.
Hellra stayed behind ignoring Den's curious glances, not really caring what Giant would say.

She felt the weight of a large hand settling on her shoulder.
She looked up to find her self-staring in the steel grey eyes of Giant. Her reflection glistened coldly back to her.

"I don't want you ever to throw an attitude, don't blow things for your self" said Giant in a unusual eerie voice. Hellra's eyes widened slightly. Before she could protest she found being herself pushed out of the classroom in the direction leading to the outsides of the academy.

Hellra shrugged it off, her previous fury, temper and frustrations also gone, though it still didn't lift her mood. She noticed the winds rippling through the uncut grass, and trees leaning with the wind, leaves twirling from the branches to the ground.

She stopped abruptly; the only reason she stopped was because the people in front of her stopped. She stretched her neck trying to see what was going on if front of them.
She noticed that Giant was standing between small heaps of what like to her rubbish and several beams made of different materials.

"I want each of you to take a pile, and start sorting the objects out. Quality beams on the left, rubbish on the right. I offered the army some help today with this, since they are preparing some stocks for future fortifications." said Gaint, he gazed around for a few seconds.
"Well, GET TO IT PEOPLE!" he shouted angrily. It was a good idea to follow his order because if looks could kill they would all be sitting on the other line of life.
Helrs trudged to the pile nearest to her and started sorting it out. The first beam she picked up was made from wood, and was definitely going to the rubbish pile, huge chunkc of wood just seemed to vanish creating large black holes in the beam. It was clearly to long in the water.

The next beam she picked up was a plain steel bea, covered with almost bronze-coloured like spots. Pieces of rusts seemed to peel of the sides. She shook her head dragging it towards the rubbish; clearly it was also to long in the water as it has started rusting.

Hellra shovelled her hand deep in the pile just grabbing at something in randomness. Her hand closed around a first full of copper wires. The type used for electronical wiring. She inspected each individually. Some of them could still be used, others not. The danger with rusted metal was, if you cut your self open it could cause some serious infection, and it would be a bad investment for the buildings it would be used on. Stable building required quality materials, and not some rusted beams.

She picked up another beam made of wood, clearly of good quality. But was it the right type of wood to use on fortification? She inspected it closer. Most wood that was dark was heavy weighted while the lighter coloured beams were light. Making it easy to carry.

She dug her hands back to the pile, she felt her hand closing around something soft and elasctic...rubber. She bought it up to inspect closer. It was defitly going to the rubbish pile. Once rubber started tearing it was useless because it won't stop tearing.

Hellra continued sorting through the pile a bit more before she could finish. She quick;y rid the area of her presence by returning to her barracks. Hellra grumbled as she passed the kitchens and sniffing the wonderful food scents that emitted from it. Two hours till lunch. 


NOTE: Sorry for all the edits, i really have to read it through CAREFULLY next time. I have reread this spoec about twenty times now.

Comments: Very good work, this isn't the easiest topic to work with though. See me on IRC though, there is a couple notes I'd rather pass on in person.

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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
September 10, 2005 12:18:56 AM    View the profile of Revan666 
HWS
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Level 2, Story 2
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Revan woke up and got changed into Uniform. He then put on his Imperial Modified Commando Armor. He gets his Range Finder and other items. He then goes to his Speeder to ride to Academy, since he had a message on his WristCom.  He then got to the Shuttle Station and hopped on the Assault Ship. He got off on Tadath and went over to the Main Gate of Tadath's Academy. He saw Fortresses and Outposts guarding the Academy. Revan looks at turrets, troopers, and Snipers pointing at him with their weapons. He pushes a button on the Inter-Com from the outside to go in.

The Secretary asked, " Hello, State Rank, Squad, Name to come in."

Revan Replied, " This PFC Revan666 of Raiders-Multi-Environment Infantry Requesting Permission to come in madam."

The Secretary looked at her computer terminal and said, "Access Granted, Revan666."

Revan went in the gate and through the Door to the Academy. He went straight to door 308. He opened the door with his Key Card. He walked in with his equipment and his Imperial Modified Clone Commando Armor. He sat down on a chair right beside his Instructor's Seat. He looked around and saw a note.

The Note said, " Revan, I will be back in 10 minutes when you arrived today. Checking what is the objective is today and getting an update for the chamber. Well Get prepared with Range Finder, Sniper Rifles, Pistol, Grenades, etc."

Revan prepared himself for the objectives; he got his rifles, grenades, four DC-15s and 2 Vibroblades. When out of nowhere from behind and spooked Revan from his Armor to his Skin coming off of him. He calmed down from the Fright and talked to his Instructor.

He said to him, "So how many men am I going to kill today, or what is the objectives?"

His Instructor Replied, "Many kills for the first and the objectives are a bunch."

Revan pulled out his Data-Pad and uploaded the objectives.
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Objectives of Range Finding & Advanced Vector Calculation
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                    Objectives and Details
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Tell Men to Set Up Gun Emplacements. Find the Range of each Emplacement Suggestion, and find the Enemy Spec Ops at the Forest Edge setting up an ambush for you before they get to you. Then, Set up enough guns to take down the vehicles coming this way to invade the base here. Get in a gun yourself and fire from long-range at Enemy Vehicles. While, the whole entire base ready to come out and sweep what is left of men, vehicles, tanks, etc.

Then go for their Main Base after the Two Outposts and Two Fortresses there guarding it. Then Set up there Academies, Factory, Turrets, Guns, Long Range Anti Infantry and Anti Air. They will dispatch 50 Y-Wings and 20 X-Wings when you set up to mess up your plans totally. Then go to the Main Base that has their Hangars and 10 factories. Have our Spec-Ops infiltrate the Factories and Hangars so you can take them over and then to the Main Base.

While in the Main Base, Kill all who resists you and the men. You will be in command of the troops and Vehicles. Don't worry there is our Reinforcements of our Troops Near their Main base. Call them in to overwhelm them. If any of the officers escape your attack tell our Orbital Cannons to fire at will at the Insignificant Rebel Officer. Go to their Command Center and Capture their Commander. Put him in front of the base and Set up the Firing Squad of Heavy Weapons, Snipers, Grenades, and also our Turrets/Guns; for all to see! If any other officer is there kill him ASAP!
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Bonuses/Weapons/Enemy Units
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Bonuses: Capture Officers, Kill 1,000,000 men; Get the Info from their terminals for their Ultimate Weapon (The Sky-Walker Cannon I).
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Weapons: Sniper Rifles, Projectile Weapons, Grenades, Charges, Blaster Rifles, and Blaster Pistols.
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Enemy Units: Rebel Heavy Armor Tanks, Rebel Spec-Ops, Rebel Soldiers, Rebel Officers, Rebel Captain, Rebel Commander, Rebel Tank Pilots, Rebel Turrets, X-Wings, and Y-Wings.
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Reinforcements/Our Units
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Reinforcements: 10 million of each Imperial Troopers, Snipers, Spec-Ops, Shock Troopers, AT-ATs, AT-STs, and AT-PTs.
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Our Units: AT-ATs, AT-STs, AT-PTs, Troopers, Snipers, Pilots, Guns, Turrets, Tie-Bombers, Tie-Fighters, Spec-Ops, Shock Troopers, and Officers.
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The Instructor coaxed him over to the chamber and said, " Go in as soon as the update has been installed."

Revan put down his Sim Visor, and Replied, "Ok Sir!"

The Instructor seen it installed quickly; He then coaxed Revan in the Chamber and Closed the Chambers doors, and said, "Remember your objectives!"

Revan gave him thumbs up and put his data-pad attached to his WristCom. Then he was back where he was last time. He walked over to the men and got them into position. He pulled out his Range-Finder. He scanned the area and got the men to plant the guns where he pointed. He then got his gun up and then he ordered the men to scan the area for Rebel Spec-Ops. Then Revan pointed them out, fired at the Spec-Ops and they fell over dead. He then scanned the area for the Enemy Heavy Armored Tanks and Men. He alerted the men to fire at the tanks from long-ranged scopes on the guns. He nailed the first few but the Rebels were not noticing that they were being attacked. But just in case he signaled for Jamming Sensors Operation.

Within Seconds the Rebel's Communication and Sensors were jammed. Then he told the men to fire furiously and to hammer them. He kept on firing at the Tanks at Long-Range with his Range-Finder on his Armor. He spotted a thousand tanks coming. He blew over 500 tanks and 500,000 deaths of Troops. He then signaled for the Main Forces to sweep with Turret Support. He then signaled 5 AT-STs to come out and support the Main Forces and the Turrets. He called for the men to wipe them out and go to the other side of the forces but do not go past the other forest edge. He got to the other side with the men in the Guns. The Forces Strike at the Fortresses beyond reach of the Outposts. The Fortresses were taken over. Then the men proceeded to the Outposts, which were all too easy to capture.

Proceeding within 100 meters of the Rebel Command Center. He called in the Reinforcements to clear it out. Within Minutes the Center Fell along with the Spec-Ops taking over the Hangars and Factories. They got to the officers and captured them and the Commander. The Captain escaped from them. They Got to the Guns and started firing. The Captain to the Most Heavily Armored Tank. He took it to the Forward Command. Revan got in A Anti-Tank Gun and Fired at the Tank but it didn't blow up. It Stopped at their Forward Command. Then He got in an AA gun. He waited with the others and then out of nowhere their Forward Command emptied its men and Officers into Fighters and Capital/Command Ships.

With all the half of the fighters/ships coming toward Command. The other half of fighters and Ships fleeing. Revan called the Cannons to destroy the fleeing ships and fighters. Then he called in Bombers to bomb their Forward Command and the Fighters to help get rid of the Fighters/Ships. He told the Guns to hit them with everything you got with precise accuracy. Revan took them down precisely. Then He saw the Rebel Captain's Frigate coming to bombard. He told all available forces and guns to focus/converge on the Frigate. The Forces and Guns Fired at the Frigate for 2-½ hours until it dropped to the ground before the Command Center.

He and the men scoured the Frigate for Survivors but there was none. He accomplished the 1 million kills bonus and was going for the Terminal. He hacked in and got the info. He reported back at base with all forces without a scratch, except a few were injured. He sent all injured to the Med-Bay. He set up the Forces for the Firing Squad to fire at the Officers and the Commander. He had all bonuses completed and all but one objective: To Kill off the Enemy Officers and their Commander. He told them to fire in, "3&2&1," then the Squad fired at them and Revan killed the commander with his Sniper Rifle. He reported the info to his Officers at the base and then he was told, "Mission Complete"

The Sim shutdown and was told by the Instructor a Successful Mission. He packed up and left. He left on the Shuttle and left for Tatooine.

THE END

Comments: Looks like we're improving, but I'd like to see more of the actual mission/training...kinda extend on from what u have. Good work though...it still passes!

 
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November 19, 2005 9:03:11 AM    View the profile of Marka 
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Level 1: Story 1: Basic Electronics/Wiring

A blinding light dominated Marka's vision as he opened his eyes. The lights were off, though the sun shone through the windows, illuminating the room. A quick glance at his clock showed that it was 09:00, two hours before he had to be at training. It was his basic electronics and wiring course today, something that, despite seeming relatively boring, could prove to be very useful. "Hell, it could even save my life one day" Marka thought to himself. So, with that, the newly appointed Fire Team Captain rolled himself out of bed, his feet feeling the warmth the sun had left on the floor. Lately, he had made it a habit to start his day with a solid seventy-five push-ups. It kept his body in shape and made him feel better, providing a better attitude to each day and its trials. Today would be no exception, especially when the tedious workings of wiring had to be conquered.

Ten minutes, seventy-five push-ups and a nice hot shower later, Marka found himself bored. Training wasn't for a while yet, and there was very little to do, so he figured he would go for a walk, to take in the surroundings of this place he now knew as 'home'. So off he went, his C3POD softly playing into his ear.

------------25 Minutes Later------------

After a considerable walk Marka decided to head on over to training, even though he would be extremely early. He had done enough sight-seeing to know that it wouldn't vary much if he kept going and it seemed that more and more people were filling the halls. Every corner turned revealed a new face. It was really starting to get crowded. "Ok, way too many people, need to get to training now" Marka thought, his pace increasing considerably.
  A few more corners and the eager trooper found himself looking down at the female receptionist. She was a professional looking woman, her brown hair pulled back in a tight ponytail. Glasses with an almost invisible frame graced her face.

"Can I help you?" she asked happily.

"You may be able to; I am here for training, although I am pretty early." replied Marka, "Is there any way I can start my training now?"

"Ah, you must be Marka; your instructor said you might be early. He has prepared something rather special for you. Down the hall, third door on your left. Have fun" the receptionist said, a look of mischief coming across her face.

Upon reaching the training door, Marka began to wonder just what he had in store for him. It couldn't be anything life threatening, it was only training. He slowly knocked on the door, and was quickly greeted by a short, bald man with a moustache. It took effort to suppress the laugh that had found its way to the young stormtroopers lips. A grin came across the instructors face.

"Ah good, you're here. So...are you ready?" the funny little man asked, looking rather excited.

"Yes, I am" responded the young Raider.

The instructor turned, and walked back through the doorway, Marka following closely. The room they entered was rather large for a training room. It was relatively lifeless, the walls an almost blinding white and three desks of a cold grey metal lined the far wall. There seemed to be a gap in the wall leading from the ground to near the ceiling behind each desk. "That's interesting" Marka thought. On the desks were datapads, one for each table.

"Ok, pick a table, any table, find the problem, fix it, and move on to the next table. Understand?" the instructor asked. He seemed impatient, like he wanted to get to the training part.

"Yeah" replied Marka, accompanied by a quick nod.

"Good...you have two hours. Good luck"

The door shut, leaving Marka alone with three desks, three datapads and two hours to figure out what the twist was. Time was ticking away, so he chose the leftmost desk. The datapad upon it was on, he could tell from the very faint humming sound, but the screen was dull and inactive. Obviously, he needed to get the screen working again, so he reached for his tools. After doing some heavy fiddling, he managed to find what he thought were the correct wires. He managed to get something working, though it wasn't the screen, it was the desk. It had moved up the wall about a metre.

"Yeah, ok now that is just plain wrong" Marka grumbled hastily, observing the two wires he had put together, "must be what he was grinning about..."

After careful work, the student managed to fix the screen to the datapad, moving on to the next desk. This datapad had a section of wiring completely mixed up at the back. This worried Marka, afraid of the repercussions of his mistakes. This one was much more difficult to tackle than the previous one. All different wires had to be switched into the exact places, or the table would shoot a metre upwards. "Red one in there......blue one there" Marka began to mutter. Suddenly, the table shot up, his hand still holding a thin green wire. This spastic jerk upwards forced two wires out of place, creating a three metre gap between the desk and the ground.

"Oh come on, you can't be serious!" Marka yelled in frustration. He was dangling from the table, looking particularly foolish. With great effort he pulled himself on top of the desk, squatting over the datapad. Replacing the loose wires and switching the mixed ones, the datapad activated, a message coming across the screen saying, "COMPLETE!" Despite completing the second task, the table did not descend. It stayed put, completely inactive. Annoyed, Marka leapt from the table, rolling towards the third and final datapad. This one read, "Mistakes...don't make any! This desk can be fixed." he stopped, wondering what that meant.

"Half an hour left, get a move on soldier!" commanded the instructor from an unseen place.

The now angry trooper followed some wires to the underside of the table. There hung three of them: green, blue and red. At that instant, a beeping sound came from the datapad on top. He observed the new message which read, "Cut a wire, any wire, but before you do listen to me carefully; if you cut green, we shall be mean. If you cut blue, we will all blame you. If you pick red, you will end up dead. Now pick!" It was a trick...of some sort. Sweat trickled from every pore on Marka's body, making him extremely uncomfortable. He went back to the three wires. He knew one of them had to be cut, but he couldn't decide which.

"Ok," he said calmly, "death seems the most daunting consequence of failure, which is all the more reason for it to be the one to cut... I think."

Deciding upon the red, Marka retrieved his wire cutters and proceeded to cut the selected wire. Seconds after it was cut, the instructor barged into the room.

"Well done my boy! You are the first to have done this......never mind the fact that you are first to attempt it. Congratulations, I look forward to working with you again!" he chirped with approval.

A blank expression dominated the face of the soldier. His eye started to twitch, and his fists clenched. There was a considerable amount of rage building inside him.

"You passed! What do you say to that son?" asked the over-joyful instructor.

"I think I may have to ki.....thank you....sir." With that, Marka turned and left the room.

[OOC: This was my first, sorry if it was boring]

Comments: Well, it was intresting to say the least. I think your the first trooper to threaten their character with death in their first specialty story. You didn't skimp on details either. Good work! Oh, and don't worry about it being boring. This particular one can be sometimes.

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November 23, 2005 5:27:55 AM    View the profile of Marka 
Combat Engineer

Level 1: Story 2: Electrical Systems

Once again, Marka had finished his morning exercise and had his shower with time to spare. The sun shone brightly into the room once more, its rays reflecting throughout. This time, however, he decided on skipping the scenic route and headed straight to training.

"Oh I hope this isn't anything like the last one..." he thought as he reached the familiar reception desk. He began remembering the ridiculous moving desks present in his last training session. He couldn't imagine what he would have looked like hanging from a desk, but it didn't appeal to him at all. Apart from this, Marka also remembered his instructor, the funny little bald man who found the whole thing amusing.

"Ah, hello there Marka, early again I see," the receptionist said calmly, "the instructor is waiting for you. The room opposite the one you had so much fun in last time." A smirk came across her face, showing her obvious delight in the events that took place last time.

Upon reaching the door, the young Raider was almost afraid to go in, wondering if there would be any more unwelcome surprises. He found he had no choice when the instructor opened the door and ran into him.

"Oh, hello there young fellow! I was wondering when you would get here! Come, come, follow me inside" said the instructor, his disturbing enthusiasm never failing.

Into the room they went, this time, instead of being blinded by the bright white walls, they were engulfed in darkness. Marka walked a few paces then ran into something soft. He recognised it to be the instructor and quickly stepped backwards. A sudden burst of light temporarily blinded him. It seemed that the small instructor had spun around and turned on a torch, its intense beam obscured the vision of the soldier greatly.

"Do you mind... you are shining that right in my eyes!" he said angrily.

"Oh, yeah, sorry. Here," replied the instructor, handing him the torch, "you are going to need this. Ok so, you gotta search this room for something to fix. You have two hours of light on that, so if it runs out and you haven't finished well then I guess you fail. Off you go then!"

With that, Marka brought the torch up so its light hit the wall opposite him. It revealed nothing but a blank grey wall. He searched the walls thoroughly, checking if there were any strange desks around. Alas, he found none, but did manage to spot a small piece of paper on the ground. Once he picked it up, his face changed from that of curiousity to annoyance as the door shut quickly. It read:
"Now, you have to get yourself out of here. Your torch only had an hour in it to begin with, so I guess you have about fifty minutes to get out. Have fun!"

"Of course, should've seen that coming" Marka thought as he hastily searched for something that would let him out. Nothing appeared until the light fell upon the door that he entered through. To the right was a small keypad, it didn't look like it was active.
  "Why would it be active?" he once again thought. He carefully reached for his tools, hoping he didn't drop one in the darkness. He began to fiddle around, finding it extremely difficult removing the casing of the keypad while trying to keep the torch in place. He managed to remove it however, though his temper was considerably shorter now. A mess of wires of many colours curled around each other to form an extremely confusing maze. Red, blue, green, yellow, black, grey... all woven together like a pit of snakes all tangled up. They were all in the wrong place, save one. The young Raider knew this because he had actually spent some time studying the night before, in particular the workings of various styles of keypads. It seemed the long hours and thumping headaches would pay off. Firstly, he attempted to untangle all of them, so he had some idea which wires he was putting where.

----------10 Minutes Later----------

After the exhausting process of sorting through the jungle of coloured wires, Marka began to re-arrange them in the correct positions. After three wires were fixed, he stopped. Remembering his previous lesson, he deliberately made a mistake, connecting a yellow wire into a red port. Nothing happened. "Oh thank the Emperor for that!" he thought. He had expected something ridiculous to happen, like for the keypad to blow up or shoot toxic darts or something.

"Forty minutes" said his instructor over the speaker system calmly.

Within five minutes of this announcement, Marka had finished wiring the door, and the keypad came to life. He replaced the casing, but realised he needed the codes to get out.

"Can I have the codes please?" he yelled, ready to leave.

"No. Open it yourself soldier!" responded the instructor excitedly.

A look of frustration and pure anger came across Marka's face. His mouth tightened, his eyes widened and his fists clenched. His anger subsided however when he realised he knew exactly how to get the door to open. The casing was removed with great speed this time, as he was used to operating with a torch. With the casing now vacant, he looked for the correct wire. It was right at the top of all the wires, its bright yellow colouring jumping out at him. Marka quickly removed a small section of the cover. Once he had done this, he removed the door function wire, a thin, dark blue one, from its port and violently cut it in two. A small spark emitted from the end, giving off a small amount of light. He visualized a diagram in his head, one from the book he had studied the night before. The explanation clearly stated that he had to fuse the two sets of wires together. So, with his mini plasma torch in hand, the young PFC began morphing the blue and yellow wires together.
    After five minutes the two wires could now be considered one, and the doors flew open, the light from outside bringing a beautiful new life to the darkness of the room. They looked a tad awkward though, so the Raider quickly wrapped some Imperial duct tape around the point of fusion. Moments after he did this, the instructor waddled into the room.

"Can I go now?" asked Marka, his frustration only beginning to subside.

"Yes, I suppose you can," the instructor replied, switching on the lights with a small remote in his hand, "see you again soon."

After his eyes adjusted to the new light Marka strode back to his room, eager to rest. It had been a stressful training session, just like the last. He assumed the next one would be just as bad.

COMMENTS: Well, It is a tad longer than I expected from ya, which is always a good thing. I'm passing this story, moving you forward to level two. Good work.

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"Duct tape is like the Force. It has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the universe together"
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December 13, 2005 7:43:50 PM    View the profile of Darr-Rann 
MEDIC TRAINING STORY #6
FIELD SURGURY, BY DARR-RANN




Darr-Rann grumbled, muttering in a half-asleep state.
"Shut up R2..." He said, burying his face in his pillow. The droid continued to beep, ignoring it's master. Darr-Rann finally snapped.
    "Dammit R2, shut up!" He yelled,  getting up from the bed. After a few moments, he sighed and turned to face the droid. "Sorry about that, thanks for waking me up."
    The droid simply beeped and proceeded to the door to fetch Darr-Rann's breakfast. Darr-Rann reached over and took up his datapad from a nearby table. He flipped through his day plans.
    "Field surgery with Instructor Tyan't." He smiled. "This should be interesting, less books, more hands-on."
    He got up and got dressed. Then he proceeded over the the bathroom to shave. He stopped for a moment, looking at the reflection. The scar... a reflection of the pain he had inside of him. That scar had been earned a long time ago, in a fight he wouldn't soon forget. Ever since that day, he had been changed...
      After he was done, he walked back over to the drawer by his bed and opened it, taking out one of the twin DL-44 Heavy blaster pistols that sat inside. He put it in the holster at his belt, making sure it was secure. He then withdrew two throwing vibrodaggers, sliding them into concealed pockets in his jacket.
      Suddenly R2-Y7 entered the room, beeping as it held the breakfast tray out before it. Darr-Rann took the tray and sat down. Brushing his hair out of his face, he began to eat. He flipped on the holoprojector he had sitting at the end of the room, he set it to the speeder races. Darr-Rann had always been a fan of speeder races, having made friends with one of the speeder gangs of Corellia, his homeworld, when he was young.
He had even raced with them before, the highlight of his career being victorious in the year's final race when he was fifteen.
      Darr-Rann grimaced as one of the racers hit a wall, the front of his bike shattering, sending the unfortunate racer spinning out of control. Rescue teams rushed to stop the bike and put out the flames, the racer staggering over to the med teams.
      "Race today..." He said to himself. A set of the students at the academy were having a race, most of them medics, but a few engineers and a communication specialist were also competing. The vehicle crewmen were invited, but they seemed to think themselves to be "Beyond their level of skill." Darr-Rann snorted. He reckoned that they were just afraid to compete. When he had finished he set down the empty tray and got up.
      "Better head to field surgery now. Later R2." He said to his droid, which beeped compliantly and moved to collect the tray.

*

As Darr-Rann walked through the halls, looking around at the different classes. There was a good set of medical instructors in the academy, it was unfortunate that so few people decided to take the path of the medic these days. It was a important position, but many squads didn't even have a medic, relying on basic medpac training to help them survive.
    "Hey Darr!" A familiar voice called out from up ahead. Running over to him was Tal, his fellow medical student and friend.
"We're going to simulator room B3-15, I just saw the notice on the door."
    Darr-Rann nodded and turned to walk with him,
    "So, Tal, you gonna compete in that race tomorrow? Some of the guys are even thinking of putting some credits on the line."
    Tal was silent for a moment, then spoke.
    "I dunno... I haven't raced since..." He was suddenly silent, but Darr-Rann knew what he referred to.
    Earlier in their training at Tadath, one of their friends, Jessica, was murdered during a ride that she, Darr-Rann, Tal, and their other friend, Jeff, were having. What made it even worse was that it was Jad Cedaan, his brother, who had killed her.
    Darr-Rann felt a rush of fiery rage burn inside of him. Jad had taken many from him, including his fiance Sarah... He had sworn to avenge her...
    They walked up the stairs to were the simulation rooms were located.
    "B3-10... B3-11... B3-12... B3-13... B3-14... Ah! Here it is." Tal said, opening the door, and they walked inside. Jeff waved at them, and they walked over to the station were he stood.
    "Hey Jeff, what happened to your hand?" Darr-Rann asked. Jeff looked down at it then shrugged.
    "I cut it on something." he said. The cut looked pretty severe, but before he could enquire further, Instructor Tyan't walked into the room, and everyone fell silent. The limped slowly, his leg obviously injured. When one of the students asked him what had happened, he simply responded.
      "Nothing, nothing... Well, you'll probably hear eventually." He sat down, biting his teeth together from the pain. "Today we're doing one of your most important classes. Commonly on the field of battle you are forced to operate on a fellow trooper without the fine medical facilities of the Vast Empire, right on the field. Field surgery is a difficult, extensive course, which will take a great deal of dedication and determination. It is at this point many students decide to transfer to a less demanding course. If any of you do not think you can handle the high pressure, the intense moments, the moments that determine if you have what it takes to practice this field, then you should leave right now."
      He pressed a button on his desk, and the doors at the end of the room opened up, the screen on the same wall reading "Simulation Loaded". They walked inside to were the simulation chairs were. He sat down, Tal and Jeff sitting in the chairs to his side.  He pulled the facial mask over his head, and the simulation began...

*

The experience of the simulator was unlike Darr-Rann had ever had. He had heard that the Vast Empire had invested a great deal of money in it's simulation equipment, but when Darr-Rann walked down the Medical tent, he saw just how expensive this hardware must have been. He could feel, smell, hear... The face mask's helmet scanned the brain, responded with signals which tricked it into believing in this false reality. It was a strange, because he knew he this wasn't real, yet it seemed so...
    "Darr-Rann!" Jeff said, making a gesture for him to come over. He and Tal stood beside a portable operating table. He walked over, when the ground shook, a large booming sound echoing out.
    "Was that an explosion?!" asked Tal, looking running to to entrance. But he was stopped, as two stormtroopers walked in, carrying a third, injured stormtrooper on a stretcher. The man was screaming, covered in blood. Darr-Rann was sickened to see that his armor had been penetrated many times by shrapnel. They set him down on the table, and then the troopers ran out to rejoin the battle.
    "The inexistent battle..." He corrected himself.
"Um... I mean, this tent can't actually get hit or anything?" he said aloud.
    "If you think so..." Tyan't's voice came out of nowheres. He was clearly viewing their progress at his desk. Darr-Rann shook his head and got to work.
    "Alright." He said, taking the role of leader without argument. "We need to be careful removing this shrapnel. Remember, clean the wound with an anti-infectant after removing it, then stitch the wound. Any open cuts without shrapnel that don't need any internal surgery, use your laser cauterizers.
    He got to work, examining a large piece of shrapnel lodged into the troopers stomach... He carefully started to remove it, closing the cut in the stomach with his other hand. When the piece was removed, he set it aside and applied anti-infectants. He then proceeded to cauterize a large but non-lethal cut. Suddenly another set of troopers ran in, carrying with them a man who's left arm looked like a shred of meat. He nodded to the other two, and rushed over to the man. He took out a sedative, and applied it with a hydrospray to the man's neck. He then took out his cutter, and brought it to the wound...

*

Many patients later, they were all working on one patient, who had taken a slugthrower sniper rifle bullet to the chest. It was a delicate operation, for the bullet was lodged into the man's spine - without proper treatment he would likely never walk again, and if they improperly performed the surgery, not only would he never walk again, but he would probably never do anything else ever again either.
    Jeff passed him a surgical knife, which had been cleaned in the small cleansing tank that sat with their other supplies. He made an incision...  successfully. He handed the knife back to him. Tal carefully held the cut open, and Darr-Rann took out a piece of equipment for removal, and Jeff stood ready with the medicine that would have to be applied quickly to the damaged part of the spine, to help heal it and, hopefully, reduce the risk of paralyzation.
    Darr-Rann made his move... He had a hold on the bullet...  Carefully...
Carefully...
    The bullet came out, and Jeff quickly applied the medicine. Darr-Rann put the bullet aside, and moved back to stitch up the wound.
    "Dammit this isn't easy..." Tal said, sitting down, breathing deeply to control his stress. Darr-Rann and Jeff brought him over to another table, were other medics (simulated ones) tended to the post-surgical patients.
    "Don't rest too long, we'll probably have another one coming..."
    "Speaking of which..."
Another man was brought in, who was bleeding from many vibroblade wounds. They got to work cleaning and closing the wounds, but the man was protesting.
    "MAKE IT STOP!" he let out a scream. "IT HURTS! MAKE IT STOP!!!" He screamed at the top of his lungs, flailing around on the table.
    "Tal, help me!" He said, holding down the man's arms. Tal did the same with the legs, while Jeff continued to close the wounds. The man continued to scream incoherently.
    Darr-Rann applied a sedative drug, and the man slowly calmed. When they had finished closing his wounds, Tyan't's voice sounded out again.
    "Good job, that's the lot." Suddenly the world went dark...

*

Darr-Rann took off the mask, getting up and stretching his legs. It was odd, it seemed like he was
standing the whole time, but he had actually been sitting in that chair.
    "Alright, you can go." Tyan't said, waving them goodbye. When they were outside of the class, they started talking.
    "Well... that was something." Tal said, "Those chairs are really cool."
    "Did you see how Tyan't was limping? I wonder what happened.
    "I dunno." Jeff said quickly. "We better get our speeders, the race is starting in an hour." Darr-Rann and Tal ran off to the speeder hanger, not noticing Jeff took a detour. He entered his room, taking out the vibrodagger that lay underneath his bed. He cleaned the blade of the blood that stained it's keen blade.
    "Next time..." He said, sliding the blade into it's case and pocketing it...

Alright, it's not as long as I wanted it, but here's my field surgury, finally, after a long specialty dryspell. Tell me what you think.
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December 15, 2005 2:12:56 PM    View the profile of Tallanvor 
First attempt

Combat Engineer
Basic Electronics and Wiring
Level 1

The desk officer went into the back, the automated door swishing closed a few seconds after he had cleared it. Tallanvor leaned on the cool metal surface of the desk, resting his chin on his hands. After a moment, he began humming a nameless tune while he waited for the officer to return. Casually, he glanced around the hall, noting the positions of doors, desks and cabinets offering cover should the need arise. He rested his eyes a moment on a cleaning bot that was headed his way. Not seeing anything out of the ordinary, he returned his gaze to the neatly ordered stacks of data chips and crystals shelved behind the desk.

The door swished open again to admit the desk officer. The man strode through, his issue boots clicking on the black polymer floor covering. He carried a small box in his arms.

"Here it is, Private, arrived this morning," he said, a cheerful grin playing across his features. Tallanvor paused a moment and a thought flashed across his mind. Does this guy just enjoy his job, or is this a parting gift from an old friend?

"Thank you, sir," said Tallanvor taking the package from the desk where it had been placed, "Do I need to sign anything?"

"Thumbprint here, please Private," said the desk officer, offering Tallanvor a datapad showing a small, fluorescent green square on the screen. The Vast Empire Private complied, pressing his left thumb into the square, feeling the surface give way slightly. The pad beeped, and the desk officer nodded absently.

"Thank you, all done," he said turning to put the pad on a shelf on the back wall of his small alcove.

"Thank you, sir," Tallanvor turned smartly and headed back to the Raiders bunk room.

When he arrived, he found the barracks empty. He had heard that the squad were of to some card game in the bar today, which suited Tallanvor just fine. Until he got to know his way around Army life a little better he had decided he would keep himself to himself.

He walked swiftly over to his bunk and sat down on the edge of it, feeling the material rumple up a little under him. He set the package on his footlocker and began to examine it carefully. Looking to see if it had been opened prior to its arrival in his hands, or for any other unpleasant surprises. After a few minutes, he was satisfied and carefully unsealed the small box. Within lay a bundle of data-wafers and two data-crystals. Tallanvor picked them out and removed the clear, vac-press wrapping that coated them and looked through the wafers. Examination guidelines, and a workshop timetable were printed in bright blue across the dark, matt surface of the wafers. The first workshop was tomorrow, 0800 start.

I'll get to that one, thought Tallanvor as he reached into his breast pocket for his datapad, the cro-tab making a sharp contrast to the silence of the barrack room. He picked out the first of the two data-crystals and slotted it into the pad, the mechanism making a slight click as he pressed it fully home. The screen lit up in blue, titling the crystal as Imperial wiring regulations, 31st edition. Pulling the crystal, he set it next to the box on his footlocker and inserted the other, Electronic Engineering, 4th Edition, by Bolat and Wesker.

A little light reading for my off-duty periods, thought the Private, dryly.

He set the second crystal next to the first and took the packaging over to the re-cycler sited at the far end of the bunk room, almost opposite the door, and set the box and vac-press wrapping inside and press the cycle button. The waste was whisked away to be re-processed, probably into more boxes and vac-press wrapping, thought Tallanvor. He stopped by the small drinks station on his way back to his bunk and picked up a polymer cup of water. He set the cup on his bedside table and fluffed up the pillows a little, and settled back to read Electronic Engineering.

The next morning, Tallanvor sat on a small metal stool in Training Workshop 7, shifting uncomfortably on the hard surface. At the head of the class, Major Grick stood, holding up a black, hinged desk lamp to the class, the wires hanging loose with the insulation removed. As he indicated the wires, he began speaking.

"Stand Imperial design, based strongly on the designs of the Republic before it, indicates that all electrical devices require three wires, a live wire, carrying a negative charge, a neutral wire, carrying a positive charge, and an earth wire, to carry away any excess charge safely in the event of a surge or short. You can see here the colors which indicate these wires. Black for live, red for neutral and green and yellow for the earth. Do not confuse these colors as you may get a shock, and in the wrong place such a shock can be deadly as while standard, small devices such as these use only a one hundred-ten volt potential difference with a current of only a few milli-amps, larger power sources such as military generators, and public sub-stations generate in excess of six hundred milli-amps, which is enough to cause your heart to stop if applied for more than a couple of seconds," he paused to set down the lamp and pick up an imperial-issue power-pack, "This is a standard power pack for remote device operation. You can see the contacts are colored red and black, the same as the wires I showed you just now. There is, however, no earth contact. This is where this device comes into play," the Major held up a large spike, insulated for most of its length with a pair of nuts screwed on to a thread at the blunt end, "an earth-spike. Useful for earthing remote devices operating from the larger cousins of the power pack I just showed you. Smaller items such as a portable lamp or flashlight need no earthing as the required current is too minimal to cause any more than a light tingling sensation should it short out. Now, on to your task for today. Knowing what I have just told you, and what you know of basic circuitry from the introductory course you sat last week, I want you to wire up the four lamps you have in front of you to set up a perimeter one meter squared on your desk. All lamps should be the same intensity. You have thirty minutes, begin."

Tallanvor looked at the equipment in front of him, a power pack, and four lamps. One lamp at each corner should work, and since he wants the same intensity I'll wire them in parallel, he thought as he started moving, laying out the design in his head. The power pack took position in the centre of the square, with the lamps at the corners, and trailing wires into the power pack. All the lamps were wired individually to the pack, creating a parallel circuit. Ten minutes into the time, Tallanvor finished crimping his connections and flicked the switch on the side of the power pack. The four lamps blossomed into life, lighting his square with equal intensity. He raised his hand to signal Major Grick that he was ready for inspection.

The Major finished advising another of the students at the front of the class, and walked back the two rows to Tallanvor's bench. He looked critically at the contraption assembled on the bench before him.

"Good work, Private," he said, "Well done."

Days of workshops, and nights of reading passed. Tallanvor learned more of circuitry and wiring, basic electronic components and composition of circuits. How voltage related to current and resistance, and the use of resistors in circuits. Finally, he faced his last challenge.

"This," began Major Grick, strutting across the front of the classroom, holding up a small device so that everyone could see, "is a standard Imperial comm-link. The ones on your benches are broken. You have sufficient components in your dollies to build another two comm-links. You also have a soldering iron, and a multi-meter. Your task is to repair the comm-link in front of you to a state where it can send and receive signals. I don't care how it looks when you are finished, as long as it works. You have one hour, begin."

Tallanvor looked at the compact device on the polymer-coated workbench in front of him. Small and cylinder-shaped, with a bank of readouts and buttons on one side.

Okay, he thought, First check the power pack.

Sliding open the cover, he removed the small power cell from the comm-link and tested it for charge with the multi-meter. The dial stayed resolutely at zero no matter how fine Tallanvor dialed the resolution.

"It can't be that easy," he muttered, putting a freshly charged cell into the unit and trying the switch. The lights stayed dead and Tallanvor removed the cell with a sigh. He took up a small screwdriver and set about dismantling the casing.

A few minutes later, the circuit boards from within the device lay on his bench, connected by thin multi-colored wires. The speaker/microphone was still attached to the inside of the case, laying at the top end of his bench, the power cell, now out of the case again, was on one side, disconnected for now. In turn, the Private tested each of the components within the simple circuit for resistance. On of the resistors had blown. Tallanvor looked over the trays on his dolly and pulled out a new resistor. He de-soldered the blown component and put in a new one. Knowing from the power cell that there were multiple failures, he tested all the other components, and found that one of the micro-wafers that controlled the frequency had a solder short between two of the contacts which, from the provided diagram, should not be there. Carefully, he removed all the solder from the area and reconnected the pins to the board without shorting them.

Tallanvor looked up at this moment to check the chronometer on the wall. He only had a few minutes remaining.

I hope that's the last of them, because that's all the time I have, he thought with a grimace.

Quickly, Tallanvor re-attached the power cell by means of crimping on a pair of connectors to the ends of the red and black wires. The lights on the readout board came alive, and he tuned it to the test frequency - a comm-link in Major Grick's hand.

"Private Tallanvor sending test signal," he said into the microphone and waited, hoping.

"Signal received, Private," came Major Grick's voice, "You are dismissed. You will receive your results shortly."


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I caught a few typos, but I doubt I've got them all :P
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Heavy Weapons Specialist 101
Precision Range Shooting

Rogueboy woke up two minutes prior to his alarm, shutting the thing off, Rogueboy stayed at his bachelor apartment six blocks down from the academy, he preferred it to the cramped quarters of the barracks and this way he could take his light morning jog. Rogueboy took his shower, put on his imperial boxers, made his breakfast, taking his standard Storm trooper armor; Cheech began to clean it with Gleen. On his way out of his apartment Cheech passed by his landlord named Graan who was a Huk and resembled something similar to a cockroach, his manner was equally unpleasant. "Alex it appears that this month's rent is due." Cheech sighed. "Graan how many times must I remind you, you can't charge me this months rent until the month is over." Graan gave a snappish reply. "Well I can charge you last month's indoor parking fees for that nasty Tauntaun of yours, disgusting creature that it is." Alex smiled knowing how much Graan hated him and his Tauntaun, reaching into his storm trooper belt Cheech snatched out a handful of credits and paid Graan. "Now will you leave me alone for the rest of the month?" Graan cautiously counted out all the credits, satisfied he walked off but not before saying. "Yes, Yes, but I will be back next month." Alex muttered under his breath. "Don't remind me, I wonder how much exterminators would charge to kill you." With that pleasant thought in his head Rogueboy walked down into the garage to spend some quality time putting fodder and exercising his Tauntaun which was named Alyssa.

Cheech arrived at the Academy with ten minutes to spare before his final exam; he decided to talk to his buddy George about the latest party that he missed because of finals. Quickly finishing up his discussion Alex walked to the shooting range, when he arrived he saw a man wearing an officer's uniform, Alex introduced himself. "Private First Class Gorjan, reporting for duty sir!" The man looked stern but answered in return. "Drill Instructor Wojtek, at ease soldier." Rogueboy relaxed a little and assumed post watch position. "Well PFC Gorjan looks like your ready to begin heavy weapons 101 final. Follow me." Cheech followed the stern but polite instructor to a section of the shooting range which was equipped with many medium-heavy weapons Wojtek noticed Rogueboy's wandering eyes. "Don't worry we won't be using all of these today. What you will be using today is the MRB-10 medium repeating blaster." Alex recalled from the manual what was said about the MRB-10 it had a magazine load of fifty, could be rotated between auto and semi, it fit well with both experienced and inexperienced gunmen, easy to use, long cool off time easy to overheat, immediately Rogueboy knew this was going to be a breeze, he preferred semi, it helped his accuracy. "Are you ready to begin?" "You know it."

Upon answering the instructor's question Cheech set up the MRB-10 on the tripod which stood in the middle of the safety line, quickly checking the magazine making sure it was full, as well as switching it to semi. Wojtek came on Rogueboy's comlink. "The final exam's rules are simple your accuracy cannot fall below 70% as well as you can not shoot any friendlies inside the area. Good luck and may the force be with you." Alex took a deep breath; this is it he told himself, now or never.

Targets immediately popped out of nowhere and started to take cover, Alex could see a couple of them were storm troopers, Cheech took another deep breath and started taking aim at a rebel scum and fired pegging the holograph in what would have been his throat, remembering what his father told him about accuracy. "Take your time; as long as they don't know where you are you have all the time in the world." Rogueboy meant to listen to his father this time. Unfortunately for him his instructor came on the comlink. "I may have forgotten to mention that there is a time limit of one minute for each level." Alex sighed and muttered a few curses but began to pick up the slack. Taking another rebel out with a head shot, Cheech soon started hitting the rebels wherever he could taking off limbs if the holograms weren't careful enough to take proper cover, within seconds the first level was completed, Rogueboy so far only missed one shot, which was going for one of their heads until he ducked at the last second.

"Are you ready for the next part of this exam?" Cheech was furious about that missed shot and answered a little louder than he wanted to. "YES!!" Wojtek was taken aback by the ferocity in his answer, considering he only missed one shot. The training simulation began, the ground was covered by tall slim trees, Alex was wondering who would try to take cover in such thin underbrush when he saw the first hologram, Kaminoans began taking cover behind the trees with hardly anything sticking out, wishing for a scope Cheech prepared for the worse, taking shots at a toe if it was sticking out which would make the Kaminoan bend and Rogueboy would fire another shot severing its head. Soon enough all the holograms were dead. "Well done Alex, you scored an average of 76% one of the better scores. Congratulations you passed the first part of being a heavy weapons specialist, report in tomorrow at 0700 to begin heavy weapons 102." 


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Heavy Weapons Specialist 102
Level 2: Fire Support Tactics

It has been a few months since Rogueboy finished Heavy Weapons Specialist 101 and started training for 102 which was appropriately named fire support tactics.

    ERRR! ERR! ERR! ERR! Alex jumped out of bed, grabbed his DL-44 blaster from under his pillow, realizing it was only his clock he quickly shut it off, heart pounding he quickly took several deep breaths to try to slow his heart down, accomplishing this he went to go take his shower. Today was the day of his final; Drill Sergeant Wojtek mentioned having a little surprise for them, while taking his shower Cheech wondered what it could be? Was it a skirmish? More holo's? Or something more twisted? Time would tell, finishing up his shower Rogueboy followed his routine, eating his breakfast which consisted of grain nutrients, some blue milk, and a fruit, than he began vigorously cleaning his Storm Trooper armor with Gleen, than Cheech began to clean each and every one of his guns. Finally he began to dress himself, putting on his Tuff 1 Combat suit, over this he put his Barabel Microbe armor over and on top of all this his standard Storm Trooper armor, Cheech stood up and looked himself in the mirror, it hurt his eyes which it was designed to so that snipers would be hard-pressed to hit him, putting on his helmet he was about to walk out when his data-pad signaled an urgent message.

INCOMING TRANSMISSION
PRIVATE FIRST CLASS GORJAN, ALEX,
This is regarding your final, you are to wear your best armor, bring in your weapons if you do not have any contact the armory immediately, your final will be at 1600 it will be a live fire exercise.
END TRANSMISSION


    Alex looked at the time off of his data-pad he had two hours, he went to his foot locker, put in the code and opened it inside was where he kept all his tools of the trade, looking over his small collection he started grabbing weapons he felt he might need:

C-22 Concussion Grenade X2
Flash Bang Grenade X2
Nacht 5 Smoke Grenade X2
Smoke Signal Grenade X1
Medpac X1
Rations X3
Kylan-3 Heavy Blaster Pistol X1
MRB-10 Medium Repeating Blaster X1
ESPO Grenade Launcher X1
Grappling Gun X1
Power Pack X5

Setting everything aside Rogueboy began equipping himself, power packs, grenades, rations, medpac, and the grappling gun went along the belt, the Kylan went into the holster along his right leg, the grenade launcher was slung over his back along with the repeating blaster, ready for war Alex went to the academy.

    When he arrived he received another message from Drill Sergeant Wojtek instructing him to head to the briefing room, when he arrived he looked around, the briefing room was a circle, filled with chairs and in the middle of the circle was the holotable, Alex also noticed there were only a few students, taking a seat next to George, Cheech asked. "You have any idea what's going on?" George jumped at the sound. "Jesus Christ! I didn't see you sit down, no I have no idea and neither does anyone here, but we're all very curious." A few more students entered the room. A while later Alex looked at his data-pad it read 1600 and sure enough the briefing room door opened and in strode the Drill Sergeant. "Alright ladies and gentlemen, this is going to test you whether you're capable of being troopers are not. We are going to assault a small rebel outpost which has a small amount of security, we will be meeting up with other squads which consist of a med squad, a sniper squad, a combat engineer squad, and a communications squad, maximum benefit we will assign two from each squad as a unit, your units will be headed by officers in training, if you survive your to write a thousand word report on what you and your team contributed towards the battle and grade the rest of your squad mates. Should anyone decide not to go I have the right to fail you, now to start making squads." Wojtek than proceeded to call out names and squad colors and to hand them said color Vast Empire insignias which they attached to their shoulders. "Alex and George, you will be the heavy weapons for gold squad." They were handed gold Vast Empire badges which they attached to their arms, they were than directed to the space docks where they boarded a Delta-Class DX-9 Transport, and there they met the rest of their squad. Squad gold's commanding officer was a woman, she was average height, had light red hair, dark eyes and freckles, she approached Alex and George. "You must be the heavy weapons specialists?" she said while glancing at the blasters strapped to their backs, George spoke first. "Yes we are ma'am, may we ask who our commanding officer is?" The officer blushed. "Sorry I forgot to introduce myself, Lance Corporal Trina, and what are your names?" "My name is Private First Class Alex." "And mine is Private George." Trina glanced at each of them in turn, than gave them orders. "Gold squad will be sitting in that corner over there." She pointed at the closest corner, where already there were eight people strapped down in their chairs. "I will debrief you while we fly." George and Alex went to go sit down and wait.

    The plan was simple the rebels had a mining outpost on the planet of Lotaith, gold squad would prevent anyone from fleeing, meanwhile red and blue would infiltrate the outpost and either kill or capture all the rebel scum.

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    As they landed some of the troopers showed sign of nervousness, repeatedly checking to see the power packs in their weapons, looking over their tools, pacing with restless looks on their eyes finally they reached their landing zone, the three squads dropped off, blue squad taking the point, their sharpshooters at the fore looking for enemy troops waiting to warn their counterparts, sure enough one of the sharpshooters reported a target down with no alert being raised, gold squad quickly ran towards the cluster of rocks and began to set up. Rogueboy dug himself a foxhole in record timing, setting up his repeating blaster, he glanced around the combat engineers started digging a trench, George set up a foxhole just like him, the snipers climbed rocks and picked their vantage points, the communication guys took spots in the trench along with the medics, and Trina picked a spot along side them, they were ready. Five minutes later they could hear blaster bolts and screaming coming from the inside of the complex. The front doors burst open and Alex's repeating blaster sang out striking three rebels, one in the chest killing him, another in the leg, and the third tearing off his ear. The first wounded fell down in a heap, one of the snipers picked him off, the third man took cover behind the doors and pulled out his comlink, after a little while he stuck out his head to see how many of them there were and George removed it, soon after another wave of rebels came around, this time expecting gold squad, they began taking cover behind rocks, Cheech was firing until his blaster overheat, pulling out the pin from his concussion grenade he threw it at a small group of rebels hiding behind the same rock, while doing this he exposed himself and one of the rebels took a shot, pain exploded in Alex's chest he fell back and than he looked down and saw a hole in his plastoid armor  putting his finger in it he realized his Barabel armor absorbed the blast, he was mad and pulled out his grenade launcher, firing at clusters of rebels until he ran out of ammo picking up his MRB-10 he saw George take a glancing shot to the head, he fell down in his foxhole. "Medic! We have a man down!" Cheech pointed to the foxhole, one of the medics quickly sprinted towards the foxhole, slung George over his shoulder and ran back as fast as he could, in the meantime Alex was laying down some cover fire. Inside his helmet he heard Trina's voice giving orders to the medic. "Take him to the LZ and see if they could help him." The medics ran off with George on a stretcher, not long after voices came on the comlinks. "It appears the outpost is empty, we have an estimation of casualties, allies and foes alike, we have ten out of thirty-three members down with blue squad taking the brunt of casualties six, red squad taking four, and gold squad one casualty. The estimated suspects killed are within the sixties with ten taken as prisoners."

    The flight back towards Tadath wasn't easy turns out of the ten casualties three were critically wounded and seven dead, George being one of the critically wounded, he was in a comatose and would need to be rushed towards a hospital, when they arrived at Tadath Alex followed the medics to bring the dead and injured to emergency entrances, realizing there wasn't much he could do for him he decided to write messages to George's parents telling them of his condition. Finishing that Rogueboy went to go see Drill Sergeant Wojtek, stepping into his office Cheech looked at the man who became like a father to him over the last year. "Lance Corporal Trina tells me that you did extremely well, as a matter of fact she recommends that I allow you into heavy weapons 103, so congratulations soldier, I would also like to remind you of that thousand word report, I would still like to have it."


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January 14, 2006 2:29:26 PM    View the profile of Darr-Rann 
I now have the proper levels to go by, and it seems my preivious stories are scattered about the levels. I'm going to write from the first level up, skipping stories I have already completed.
 
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April 11, 2006 7:36:37 PM    View the profile of Darr-Rann 
Due to only having the proper list of stories later into my career, the writing of my different specs is kind of chaotic. I'm going to start writing them from the beginning now, skipping any I've already covered.

Note: I wrote the first part of this story months ago. You may notice some differences. The new stuff begins halfway through the second page.

Medic
Level 1, Story 1
Injury Screening and Diagnosis



Darr-Rann woke up early, jumping out of bed and quickly getting dressed. He powered on his R2 unit, which beeped with surprise that it's master had managed to wake up on his own. After shaving and grabbing his medkit, he walked out the door. Once he was outside, he headed over to the speeder garage. Grabbing his, he took it outside and sped off. Weaving between trees, he sped up as fast as he could, hitting a ramp that had been set up for races. He flew out through the trees, coming back down in the clearing that followed. He sped along the course, grinning. He had practiced whenever he could for the upcoming race. The Vehicle crewmen were constantly bragging about how much better they were then everyone else at racing. He was going to try and prove them wrong.

Suddenly he spotted something up ahead. He had just a few moments to brake and shut off his speed before he hit the wire, his vehicle flipping, throwing him to the ground. swearing and rolling to his feet, he quickly drew one of his heavy blaster pistols and looked around, searching for the one who placed the trap. He spotted someone in green armor darting through the trees. He swore and put away his gun. Whoever it was, it was too late to pursue them. Darr-Rann walked over and sliced the wire with one of his vibrodaggers. He walked over to his speeder to find it had recked against a tree. He swore again and took out his comlink. He activated it, only to find it had been broken in the crash.

"Dammit..." He said, throwing it away and walking down the trail. The day seemed like it would be a good one until now. He took a quick glance to his watch to find that he only had two hours to get to class. "Shit, shit, shit..." He said to himself, running down the track as fast as he could. He arrived at the tadath base in an hour, to his relief. He started to proceed towards the barracks, to get his stuff from his room. Suddenly glass shattered and what looked like a person went flying out the window. The man hit a ledge a floor below. Another person looked out the broken window, then withdrew into the room.

"That's my room!" He thought to himself, quickly running inside and up the stairs. He barged into a room which was on the floor with the ledge were the man fell, shoving aside a man who had been looking at his datapad. He opened the window, going through it and walking over to the injured man. He looked down into the man's face and recognition instantly swept over him. "Instructor Tyan't!"

He picked him up, and carried him inside. Already medteams were rushing over to them. Darr-Rann lay him down on a stretcher which the medics brought forward.  He turned around to see a man in red armor, wearing a visored helmet, standing on the roof of the building. Before he could do anything, the man was gone.

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"I can't believe someone would attack Instructor Tyan't" Darr-Rann said to Jeff and Tal as they sat in the lunch room, their class having been canceled for the day so administration could find someone to fill in for the old medic.

"Who'd want to hurt him?" Tal said, "It doesn't make sense." Darr-Rann nodded. "What do you think Jeff?"

"I dunno." He said. "Hey Darr, you say someone set a trap for you on the track?"

"Yeah. Someone wearing green armor. Hey, come to think of it, the guy I saw on the roof, his armor was red. If its the same person, why would they change armor?" Darr-Rann said, in his mind trying to piece together the situation.

"It was probably a rival racer.'" Jeff answered quickly. "Anyways, are you going to race now?"

Darr-Rann nodded. "Yeah, luckily that wasn't my good speeder, so it's okay. Still, sucks to lose it though."


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The next day, the administration had found an instructor for the course and they were called to class. It took place in a large room with a multitude of tables and diagnosis screens. They gathered to the front of the room, where there were desks and chairs facing the front of the room. Once they had all been seated, the instructor brought up the notes on a screen mounted on the wall behind him.

"Okay, injury screening. Injury screening is a skill you will commonly use on the battlefield, as it is the process of distinguishing and diagnosing how a trooper is hurt and the seriousness of the wounds." Said the teacher, switching the data on the board.

"The first thing we will discuss is the basic forms that injuries come in. On the battlefield, the most common injury in today's combat are burns, usually focused in the form of a blaster wound. A blaster wound has a small radius, but is deep and can be seriously life threatening. Any shot that hits a trooper in a vital area will usually prove to be lethal, therefore most of the blaster wounds you will treat in mission will be minor in danger, with the occasional critical condition wound." He pressed another button, then continued.

"The next most common wound type you will find is the tearing and slicing of flesh. This will usually happen when a squadmate is stabbed or slashed by an enemy's bayonet or vibroweapon. These wounds produce the greatest number of lost limbs. Cuts can be cauterized, bandaged, or sewn, depending on seriousness, scale, and placement of the wounds. This type of injury is also caused by shrapnel and slug rounds, so be careful to make sure of the cause of the wound so that you do not seal it's cause in a wound by mistake."

"Our next type of wound is bludgeoning. Fractures, bruises, and other wounds that are caused by blunt-force all fall under this category. These wounds are among the hardest to treat, because they are nearly always internal and leave no opening to treat them. If you think saving a bleeding patient is hard, try saving an internally bleeding patient." He switched the slide yet again, presenting new information.

"And then there is poisoning. Poisoning is one of the hardest forms of injury to identify, as you must take a blood sample and diagnose it using your chemistry training. You then have to give the trooper the antidote - if it isn't too late already. Many times you will see an ally die just because it was too late to administer the cure." He shut off the screen, walking over and picking up a small vial on the desk.

"This is the STC's 'standard non-treatable chemical solution', which is a friendly way of saying mercy drug. It quickly and painlessly kills the subject. If you ever have a trooper too injured to save, or you have to fall back with a patient which you cannot recover from the battlefield who will soon die, this is your option." He held it for a few moments, making sure his students understood the seriousness of it.

"Okay, now I want you guys to begin some practical stuff. Using the notes I have provided, I want you to identify the wounds of different 'patients' and decide if they can be saved." He pointed towards the tables, which projected holograms of different wounded stormtroopers.

"You have fifty minutes, upon which time you will be "called back" and your patient will die. you may begin now."

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Darr-Rann examined his patient. The trooper was obviously the victim of multiple blaster wounds, yet he could not distinguish how lethal the wounds were from glance. Carefully, he took off the torso and shoulder plating of the man's armor and put it aside. He then took out his medical kit and removed it's handheld scanning unit.

"Shit." Darr-Rann said as the results listed on the screen of the device. The shots had all partially damaged some of the trooper's vital organs, having burned deep through the armor. He examined each wound, trying to find to find the level of lethality of each of them.

"Damaged blood vessel from the heart, that needs to be treated quickly." He thought to himself, switching to the next analysis. "Seriously punctured lung... but is it treatable?"
He continued to run checks, measuring the area of the hole and its rate of growth.

"Each breath he takes is widening the hole..." He shook his head, a feeling of dread filling him. He took the small metal cylinder that represented the lethal dose, placing it over the patient's mouth. The screen at the end of the room showed that Darr-Rann's patient had been mercy killed.

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Darr-Rann stepped out of the class, deep in thought. He had been forced to kill a soldier out of mercy. What if the same situation happened in a real mission? Would he be able to kill his squadmate just as he killed the simulation? He would only be able to find out when the time came.

If this story is approved, then level one is complete, as I previously wrote the other two


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Level 1: Electrical systems
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This isn't going to be a good day, Daminga thought to himself as he climbed out of bed.  His alarm had been going off for fifteen minutes now. 

"Just shut up!" Daminga yelled at it.  It began to beep louder, as it was programmed to do if he tried that sort of thing. 

"Alright you piece of crap, I'm up," said Daminga as he pushed himself up out of bed. He began to get dressed in his usual casual clothing when he paused in the middle of pulling his shirt on.

Wait, what day is it?

He walked over the calendar on the wall of his bedroom and glanced at the date.

Shit! It really isn't going to be a good day now.

On the calendar, marked on that day, was his first day of training for his specialty as a combat engineer. After changing into his uniform, he headed out his door and down the hall toward the exit.

As he was walking out the door, an officer passed by.  Daminga just walked past, not seeing him.  The officer, however, saw him. 

"Hey Private, who'd you drill under? He fail to instruct you how to salute a superior officer?"

"No sir. Sorry sir," said Daminga as he snapped to attention.

Idiot! You think you're worth saluting. You look like you've never been in even a bar fight much less a firefight. Who gives a rat's butt about you? thought Daminga.

"That's better.  Where are you off to in such a hurry anyways?"  asked the officer.

"Training, sir.  Basis electronics and wiring," responded Daminga. 

"Really, well you just in luck.  I'm the instructor of that class.  You can follow me there."

Oh, good. This is going to be fun, thought Daminga as he rolled his eyes.

When they reached the classroom and walked in, Daminga noticed there were about 25-30 other students there already waiting. They all were seated behind large work desks with various equipment on them. He headed for an open chair in the back.

"And where do you think you're going, Private?"  asked the instructor.

Daminga turned around and stared at him for a moment. Then walked up to the front of the class where there were plenty of seats left open. He pulled one out from under its desk and sat down.

"Right here sir."  He replied with a tiny bit of sarcasm. 

"Good.  Now let's begin class shall we?"

Daminga could hear snickers behind him and could feel his ears starting to burn.

"Alright, As you all know, this is basis electronics and wiring. By the end of today you'll know how to repair anything from field com links to basic generators."

As the instructor droned on about the wiring of the standard helmet comlink, Daminga began tinkering with the equipment on his desk. He had been up to this for some time when he noticed that someone was trying desperately not to laugh out loud in the middle of class. As he turned around to see what was so funny, he nearly jumped out of his seat. He hadn't noticed but the instructor had finished giving his lecture and was standing behind him.  It wasn't until one of the other students couldn't hold his laugh any longer that Daminga noticed.

"Well, our little know-it-all has finally joined the group."

"Sorry sir. I was ju," Daminga said before he was inturputed.

"I really don't care Private. Now I have gone over everything for this class and I believe that you were goofing off the whole time!" The instructor was getting anger now. He face was turning a light shade of red.

"But sir, I alr"

Again he was interrupted, "I don't care for what you have to say about the issue Private! You are going to take the test just like everyone else! Am I understood?!" The instructor was yelling now.

"Yes sir," said Daminga.

As the instructor finished handing out the tests, Daminga glanced down at his.

This isn't going to be hard. Ok, number 1...If the radio is disfunction in that you can recieve but not transmit messages you should....B. Remove the transmiter cables and switch the cables to allow you to transmit a distress call if needed.  This is way too easy

Daminga continued to finish the exam at he glanced over the numours parts of the broken down radio lying on the table in front of him.
*Two Hours Later*


Daminga pushed his seat back and walked up the instructor's desk, placing his test upon the pile with the other students'. The instructor just gave his a cold scowl.

I have no idea what's your problem with me man, but I'm having a horrible day as it is, Daminga thought to himself as he walked back to his chair and sat down. After what seemed like forever, the instructor began calling out names of the students. As he reached Daminga's, he paused.

He sighed and called out, "Gurfta, Daminga, PFC." 

Daminga pushed himself up from the chair and walked up to the desk. 

"Well, either you cheated.  Or, you know what you are doing somehow," said the instructor as he handed the test over to Daminga.

On the top of the first page, by his name, Daminga saw the word PASSED in red ink.

"Sir, I know what I'm doing," replied Daminga. 

Before the instructor could say anything else, Daminga was already out the door and headed for the Raider barracks.

Comments: Well, you certainly have an intresting take on writing specialty stories. I like your whole story right up to the part where you skipped the entire exam. I don't need to know every detail, but I'd like you to include a few details on what you actually did to pass your exam. I'll need you to fix the two hours later part. Keep everything else.


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Raiders
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And when he gets to Heaven,
To Saint Peter he will tell,
"One more soldier reporting sir,
I've served my time in hell."
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Trix
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May 21, 2006 9:03:17 PM    View the profile of Trix 
Level 1: Cover Tactics

Trooper will learn the basic skills required to provide heavy cover for their squad. They will be trained to use basic weapons emplacements to drive back enemy troopers.

Skills Earned: -suppress and drive back enemy troops with turret and emplacement fire (requires level 4)

Story 1: Fire Support Tactics

Trix yawned lazily as she looked through the glass panels leading outside. Her mind snapped back when the lecturer's voice pitched several notches into the air at a random student.
"Right class, let's move to the Sims, where I will elaborate with examples you will play out your self." Muttered the teacher as she straightened her self in self-composure.

Growing up in high society have its drawbacks to Trix, and one of them was she has never in her life held a weapon, never mind firing it before joining the Empire. It took them several minutes of walking between the various halls and corridors before they reached their own destination.  As soon Trix strapped her self to one of thr many SIM seats, the scenery around her changed abruptly.
Before them were a 30 meter square by square sand patch in which stationary self-repairing robots with durasteel plates as armour stood as targets.  At the edges of the sand patch laid several boulders that Trix supposed was to use as cover.
A small shriek escaped her mouth earning her few glares. One the faces stared at her mockingly though.
"Never bin in a Sim have ya?" asked the human male. Trix regarded him with disdain as she composed her self within nanoseconds. She gave a curt nod of acknowledgement before directing her eyes to the lecturer. From the corner of her eye however she could see the male's scrutinizing glance and shrug.

"Fire Support tactics compromises of keeping the enemy's fire of your fellow trooper's back as well as weakening them before attacking. Would anyone care to tell as to how one can make use of grenades in Fire Tactics?"

A hand shot in the air, the same guy who spoke earlier with her.
"If you are trapped for instance or something, you could make use of a smoke or flash grenade that could blind your enemy temporarily and then you can let the guns loose on them or throw a proton grenade or some other explosive in their midst which will break the organization among them."

The lecturer nodded with appreciation,
"Couldn't have said it better my self Mr. Nexkin-"
For a moment Trix froze.
Nexkin?!?
That was her family name. Trix turned her head slightly pretending as if she was studying something behind the male. Nexkins were found only on the planet of Adari, and there already so little humans who inhabited the planet. His features didn't resemble the traditional Nexkins at all. Before she could conclude her discovery her name was called out.
"Ms. Trix&ah, interesting, Another Nexkin, how odd. Ms. Nexkin, would you be so kind as to assist me in our next demonstration?"
The two Nexkin's eyes met each other, both reflecting shock and curiosity. Trix broke the contact first and hastened to the front.
"Lets get started, Trix, I want you to help the sim characters defeat the sim rebels. When she is done the rest of you will follow. Take note, your performance marks whether you will pass this class or not."

Sighing Trix walked to the sand patch. She suppressed the small yell when the scenery changed again. This time the pleasant sun was replaced by murky rain and overturned grounds filled with small craters of some sorts. She looked around wildly for her fellow troopers, but found none except a glass-like panel bordering the one side of her vision. She supposed they were standing behind it viewing her. Scowling she picked her way about through the small hills.

"This SGT Garit, we need cover. These damn rebels don't quit it, head east from where you are right now. Keep walking; there should be a few men if any is still alive. Take command and give cover."
Trix lost her wits yet again at the tiny speakers when it sounded unexpectedly. Cursing she followed the voice's command and changed her direction.

It took a few minutes of jogging and aching legs before she reached the undermanned squad in the turret, She dropped down on all fours when she realised how close they were to the enemies were. The men nodded to her, and then pointed to the E-WEB, which pointed in no particular direction. A few of them had their rifles with them as well grenades. Trix snuck a glance to the small battle raging between the Imperials and Rebels. The Imperials were trapped in a large crater with huge boulders as cover, which got blasted to smithereens one by one. They couldn't back out of the crater since it would lead them into open field, and trying to escape by the front would be suicidal.

She quickly found a solution and in a manner of minutes the men and she was their posts. She grasped the E-WEB quickly and directed it to the ranks of the attacking rebels. Chaos broke out as their ranks suddenly dropped to the ground, dead when the E-WEB went loose on them. The surviving rebels looked shocked at their fellow troopers before they tried to run for cover. Coincidently the only cover was the boulder that the Imperials were currently using. One of the rebels started flinging a grenade to the boulders in hope of cleaning out a space for him self to hide, but before he could take another step blasts hit the ground in front of his feet. Trix smirked at this. Her plan was working. Instead of aiming the rifles at the enemy, she directed it to block whichever path they may take to go into cover, therefore forcing them into the open grounds and then let the E-WEB do the work.

Many minutes later Trix stepped out of the Sim room. The lecturer looked at her with a smile.
"Well done, you passed with a high mark"
Instead of grinning or muttering thanks to the Lecturer Trix simply smirked.
"Of course I passed" she muttered confidently not noticing the glares of distain thrown her way by those who heard her arrogance.

Trix was about to leave the room, prepared to forget the whole day when her fellow Nexkin walked passed her. Who was he? She tried to reason that there are a lot of people with same family name, but her gut feeling felt otherwise about this particular Nexkin.

I'll pass it. The grammar needs a tiny bit of tweeking here and there, but over all that was all right. I would have liked a bit more length about the training. Maybe another simulation besides the first with a different scenario. I would have shown you know a bit more, but this was quite good as is. Good job.

- Raider Squad -

TRP/PFC Trix/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE
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May 21, 2006 11:04:25 PM    View the profile of Trix 
Level 1: Cover Tactics

Trooper will learn the basic skills required to provide heavy cover for their squad. They will be trained to use basic weapons emplacements to drive back enemy troopers.

Skills Earned: -suppress and drive back enemy troops with turret and emplacement fire (requires level 4)

Story 2: Indirect Fire Operations

The buzzing of an alarm has never in Trix' till recently comfortable life managed to wake her. And today was no exception, so it was with a lame excuse she hastened to her desk when she finally reached her class.

The instructor glanced at her with expressionless eyes. Trix didn't flinch however as the instructor growled an order for her to take a seat. Her haughty attitude has gained a somewhat infamous reputation among her fellow classmates. The same applied to the other Nexkin that went by the name of Zac. They were the two outcasts of the class. Trix sat down tiredly, not even bothering to keep her back straight. Back on Adari she would be punished for slackening her stature, but she wasn't on Adari, and the Army didn't care about these small formalities.

"I do not like wasting my time in a class room on theory. What I say will be repeated once. Now indirect fire basically weakens the enemy, making small or huge dents on their systems which could ultimately lead to casualties, demoralization of enemy, damage to equipments and weapon systems. When you left the last class, you were assigned to read through the datapads giving to you. Ms. Nexkin continue where I left off"

Trix stood up without second thought. She knew it would be a waste of time arguing, and secondly, he didn't seem to someone to be messed with. His uniform's buttons seemed to clinging to their assigned positions as his robust torso heaved up and down when he breathed.

"Three common types of Fires are: suppression, destruction and neutralization. Destruction puts and end to the specified enemy for good. Neutralizations last temporarily, while suppression limits the ability of the enemy. Ther?"

"Mr. Nexkin continues!"

"To get to the point, there are two ways to go about Indirect Fire, one, to focus and identify target. Two, to predict where the target is, the latter requires efficient extreme insight since quick thinking will be needed, there is also a---"

"All said is done, move out to Sim room-12D, and step on it!
The students rushed from the classroom silently to their next destination. On their way Trix was taken aback when one of the girls from her class attempted conversation with her.
"Ms. Ah, Nexkin?" she muttered as she copied their previous lecturer's voice.
Trix arched her eyebrow annoyed. The girls seemed familiar though, #.
"Why. Are you talking to me?"
The girl regarded her for a few seconds, all laughter were gone from her face now, replaced dead set seriousness.
"That's what normal people do. They talk. Heck, I bet you don't even know I share a room with you"
Trix glanced at her surprised for a second before composing her self again. Familiarity explained.
"And that is suppose to be of any significance to me?"
The girl sighed frustrated at Trix' lack of social skill to communicate on friendly matters.
"My name is Zani in case you want to know."
For a few seconds neither spoke,
"Well?" asked Zani as the silence grew.
"Well what?"
"Your name?"
Trim's arched another eyebrow.
"I would be really surprised if you don't know," she muttered with the same air of arrogance.
"In any normal conversation first spoken between two normal people, humans, they introduce them selves. No talk"
Trix' looked at her truly dumbfounded.
The girl just wont quit this tampering
"Whatever, Trix, now go talk to someone else"
Zani stared at her confidently.
"You just pretend to be cold and tough, so shut it rich girl."
Ouch
The comment hit home. Zani said it in all her sincerity without a trace of mock. Trix scowled.
"Whatever"

"You there in the back, shut your yaps and get in the damn room!"
Grudgingly Trix did as the instructor ordered.
Trix still couldn't contain her surprise when the Sim room changed scenery abruptly when she strapped the devices and chords to her head and body. Her soft scream was drowned out luckily by the blaster and grenade explosions, which suddenly surrounded them. The Instructor didn't have a problem however raising his voice above the noise.
"Everything I said will be applied here now. If you die, you fail. Get going. Your datapads should be updated with a map of your destination as well as goal. I will be keeping tabs on you through the cam corders. Get going!"

The class rushed off to their different locations. Trix however preferred to hasten. It was unfitting for a Lady to rush. She didn't come far through her carefully picked steps before she fell flat face to the ground. Literally growling she picked her self from the mud. 

It was a tedious short journey she had to make, but due to her inexperience with dirt and mud she found her self-incapable going at the speed, which her class mates were going with. It was not long before she through her ComLink, Nexkin report back to the Instructor. His mission finished, scowling with new determination she sped up.
After several gruelling minutes of hard marching voices sounded. She supposed it was part of squad assigned to her lesson for her command.

Calmly she walked up to them, finding relief that sims couldn't express their emotions about dirt or disgust. They were neatly nestled in a small fortification on ground lever. Along the sides of the ditches were hidden barbwires as well as trigger active grenades and explosives should a enemy make it to their location. The once green fields were barely recognizable between all the various craters and scorches and rubble of levelled buildings. 

The soldier handed her a macrobinoculars. She quickly found the target he was pointing at.
" We need to get them out there alive, but their Fire Support has destroyed all their means of escapes.
"Lets see," Trix zoomed in on the moving rebel forces down a hill through small bushes of marches. She quickly traced their path backwards by means of taking the road that seemed most natural to pick out. She followed the designated path, which were about a little more, then a hundred yards away from Imperials who held them off, but were trapped by the long distance fire range Turrets. Finding the jackpot she glanced back at the soldier.
"Their backup arrives the whole time from two turret towers. Our people can't move because if they do the Turrets will blast them, they have managed so far uphold the waves of rebels sent to them, but they will soon tire. We don't have the equipments to get rid of the Turret Towers, they both have shields, but we can buy time. We will simply neutralize it. I saw the rebels among marches. Meaning their ground is unstable, if we can tip that balance further to bring one turret down or unearth them so much it could halt their fire and action for several minutes up to an hour.

Trix quickly explained them her plan. It didn't take them long to get in positions to put the plan into action. The men had their sniping rifles ready to pick out each rebel soldier who would shoot if the Imperials moved into the open. Trix had a missile launcher at her disposal. With silent count of three she aimed and fire towards the first Turret. The missile hit the ground neatly a few yards away from the Turret. She didn't wait for the mixture, dust and rubble to settle down to find out if her plan worked. Another silent count down took place when she aimed and fired again. Slowly the foggy dust started to settle around the area where the turrets were located. The men around her has already begun disposing of the rebel waves that were each time repelled by the trapped Imperials.

Much to her surprise the purple hue, which surrounded the turrets, were. Their shields were damaged. With a glee Trix aimed again and fired. A second shot followed. The loud thundering of the two buildings collapsing sounded through the air. The trapped Imperials were finally free to reach them.

"Good work Ms. Nexkin. You passed," sounded her ComLink. Trix smirked.
Of course she passed.

I'll pass this one as well, but the grammar was a little worse than the last one. Try to take a little bit more time with each of these when you do them and read through it once or twice checking for little things. You understanding of the actual material is good, so you are still able to pass.

- Raider Squad -

TRP/PFC Trix/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE
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Aphamos
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May 27, 2006 5:38:22 PM    View the profile of Aphamos 
Fire Support Tactics
Heavy Weapons Training

Aphamos shot open his eyes and pulled his sheets off of himself.  He sprung out of his bed and ran to the bathroom.  He turned the faucet handle, breaking if off.  Throwing the broken piece to the corner of the room, he splashed the cool water into his face, trying to wake himself up.  It didn't work, and the thoughts of what he had just seen were still in his mind, bashing his skull from the inside.  He tried again, pushing his cold hands into his face; working hard to get rid of the agonizing pictures that had just formed in his mind; pictures of people dying, burning.  DAMMIT.  Go away, GET OUT, he thought to himself, Where are they coming from.  This wasn't the first time he had had the visions; he had met with various councilors across the galaxy and none of them could help him.  They kept coming back--never leaving him alone. 

                                                                                                    ---------Four hours later---------

Aphamos sat on the floor beside his bed, crouched, waiting.  He glanced at the clock on his nightstand; it was six in the morning.  His eyes left the clock as he stared back at the floor in the exact same spot he had been looking for the past four hours.  He sat still, unwavering, the horrid visions of four hours past still haunting him.  He tried to forget, tried to erase them from his mind, but they wouldn't leave.  The loud buzzing noise of his alarm sounded, filling his room now, fighting back his thoughts.  Aphamos didn't move, he was a rock, immune to all things.  He closed his eyes, breathing in and out, clearing his mind of everything.  His alarm stopped, and he looked up at his clock again.  It was now half past six, and he remembered that he had training in the morning.  He stood up, making his way to the door.  He put his shirt and pants on, looking at the mirror next to him.  Bah.  It's good enough.

Aphamos exited his quarters and headed towards the simulation room.  Today was the first of his string of training sessions, and he wasn't to enthused about it.  He kept his head down as he walked, not in any mood to converse with others.  He passed one of his squad mates, Daminga, who stopped to talk to him.

"Morning Aph," he said, "Great day today isn't it?" he added in a sarcastic tone.  Aphamos looked up and faintly smiled just to signal to Daminga that he was alive.  He kept walking and finally reached the simulation room.  He entered the room, immediately snapping to attention when he saw his squad leader, Darr-Rann waiting for him.  Darr-Rann returned the salute, and pointed to the seat in front of him.  Aphamos walked over to it and sat down, his eyes open, yet inside, he was still asleep.  Aphamos looked up at Darr-Rann, who took a seat and pulled out a piece of paper.

"Well, this is what I have to read to you, trooper." he said.  "But seeing as how you are still asleep, and I don't feel like reading the damn thing," he took the paper and ripped it in half, "we won't read it."  Aphamos let out a small smile and straightened himself up a bit, the thoughts now gone.  "Your first objective is to make your way to and secure point A until reinforcements arrive.  You will plant explosives there and make your way to point B. You will secure point B and repeat that same process.  Lastly, you will make your way to rendezvous point C where you will be picked up.  Understood?"  Aphamos did not answer.  Just before Aphamos could open his eyes, he felt a frigid splash on his face.  His eyes immediately opened and he jumped out of his chair. 

"There you go trooper." said Darr-Rann.  "Feels good, doesn't it?  Now that you are awake, you need to pick the weapons that you are going to use.  For your blas-"  He was cut off by Aphamos, who already knew what he needed.

"A-280 blaster rifle, three frags, four explosives packs, and a vibroblade." said Aphamos.  Darr-Rann nodded in approval, and pointed to the simulation chamber.  Aphamos nodded, stood up and saluted his squad leader.  he walked over to the simulation chamber and stood in front of it for a moment.  Here we go again.  He stepped inside as the opening behind him closed.  The chamber activated as a claw came down over Aphamos's head.  He shuddered, feeling a bit uncomfortable; he felt as if the hand was going to suck all the life out of him.  Regaining his senses, he looked forward and closed his eyes.  The helmet reached his head and slid on.

Aphamos opened his eyes to a small room.  He looked outside to see a muddy landscape, stormtroopers and droids littering the area, blaster fire coming from every possible direction.  Quickly walking forward to the rack of weapons in front of him, he picked up his blaster rifle.  He placed his vibroblade and his grenades onto his belt, also slinging his explosives belt around his neck. 

Aphamos entered the battlefield.  Voices and commands of various types were being thrown everywhere, yet no one was listening at all.  "Trooper, over here!" yelled a soldier to Aphamos.  He ran to the stormtrooper, still examining his surroundings.  It was a a wide valley, yet the edges weren't high.  It was raining, huge puddles of mud everywhere, the trenches in the center flooding, creating watery graves for the dead.  The droids were approaching them in waves, never stopping. 

"GET DOWN SOLDIER!" yelled the stormtrooper.  Aphamos dove to the side and the turret fire went over them, knocking down three troopers behind them.  "Ah, this looks like a cozy moment for introductions," the trooper yelled over the constant screams and splattering of the gun fire.  My name is Epson Duar, your commanding officer in the field on this beautiful day.  Now lets move!"  Aphamos followed his leader the top of the hill where three other stormtroopers were crouched to avoid getting hit. 

"Alright, stay down." said Duar.  "We need to make it to the objective point without meeting any resistance.  Once we get there, hold the area until we get some reinforcements, then rig it with the explosives.  Lets move!"  Aphamos crouched down and started on his way to the objective point.  He could make it out in the distance, a small, white building almost identical to the one he had come out of.  He continued along the muddy hills towards the building, soldiers constantly being chopped down by enemy fire. 

Aphamos looked to the other side of the valley.  The rain was fogging up his vision, but he could still make out what he saw.  "GET DOWN EVERYONE!" he yelled at the top of his lungs as he pushed the trooper in front of him to the ground.  The squadron of troopers met the ground as a rocket whizzed past their direction.  "WE'VE GOT ROCKET TROOPERS AND SNIPERS ON THE FAR LEDGE.  LETS GO!" he yelled as the squad members got up again, this time in an all out sprint to their destination. 

They were finally on the ridge above their objective point, no resistance around them.  "We're here.  now here is the plan." said Duar.  "Red One, and Two, you two will go in to take the area using whatever means necessary, while  Red Three, Aphamos, and I will stay here to give you cover fire.  Understood?" Aphamos nodded.  "Now on my mark, Red One and Two, you will run to the base.  When you are within ten yards of the base, start making noise to get their attention; then we will begin our fire."  Aphamos and Red Three crawled to the top of the hill where they could see the objective point and the enemy movements.  He aimed his rifle at the head of one of the droids, and waited. 

"Three, two, one, MARK." whispered Duar.  The two troopers silently made their way to the enemy's point as the leader aimed his rifle at a droid.  They were in range now.  Aphamos was restless, but he knew that it was crucial that he wait.  Come on already.  Dammit, don't make me lose my shot.  The troopers finally started to scream; all the droids around them turning to their direction.  Aphamos pulled the trigger on him rifle, stunning the droid.  He fired again at another droid, then another, knocking them down one by one. 

He looked up to the other side of the trench as a droid ran to a turret.  Aphamos quickly aimed his rifle at the droid, and just as the droid got in, fired, destroying it.  He pointed his rifle back at the enemies near the base, firing a flurry of blaster bolts in their direction, stunning four more droids.  The two stormtroopers were immediately cut down as a turret opened fire in their direction, taking some droids with it as well.  I don't know why we didn't do this in the first place.  Aphamos pulled a grenade off of his belt and threw it in the direction of the droids who were still busy with their current situation.  The area next to the base erupted into a muddy and wet explosion, taking almost all the resistance with it. 

Aphamos got up from his position and walked up behind the droid using the turret, smashing its head in with the butt of his gun.  Oh crap, wasn't suppose to do that.  Aphamos ran to the center of the objective point, firing at another droid on the ridge.  He gave the signal for his squad members to come down from the ridge.  He looked back in the direction that he had come from.  The stormtroopers were advancing now; they had cleared up the resistance in that area and were pressing on. 

"Nice kiddo, but lets not play hero anymore." said Duar in a sarcastic tone.  "Alright, lay out two explosives packs each oh the walls."  Aphamos walked to one of the walls, opening his pack and emptying out all of his explosives on the walls.  It's not like I will be needing them later.  He walked back to his leader.  "On to the next one.  This time, we enter through the other ridges where the turrets are.  These two troops will be replacing Red One and Red Two." he said while pointing at two new troops who had joined them.  "Lets move people."

Aphamos followed his leader into one of the trenches.  It was like an obstacle course; stepping around all the corpses and droid parts, keeping down at the same time.  They finally reached what faintly resembled a path to the top of the ridge.  "Be careful, we don't want any broken nails or severed heads." said Duar.  Aphamos slowly walked up the path.  He glanced at his armor; it was now brown and wet.  He smiled to himself, looking up to see that he was close.  At least they wont see me now.  He reached the top of the ridge, diving into the mud again, not wanting to take any chances.  He scanned the area.  No one.  Well, for now.  He squinted as he looked forward, trying to map out the area.  He noticed two unmanned turrets not to far ahead of him.  he looked down into the valley again.  Just below the turrets was the second objective point, heavily guarded with droids.  What a dandy place to put a turret

He looked to the other ridge and saw a droid on its knee, staring straight at the stormtroopers.  Aphamos knew what it was, but continued to stare in its direction.  He heard a faint wisp in the air as a stormtrooper beside him fell to the ground, dead.  "WE'VE GOT SNIPERS!  GET DOWN NOW!" yelled Aphamos.  He dove to the ground in front of him, his body seeping into the mud of the ground.  Now no one could see him.  He closed his eyes; he was safe?he knew it wouldn't last long?but for now, he didn't have to worry. 

He snapped back to reality moments later when he heard a huge yell.  He got up, looking over to the other ridge for the sniper.  He couldn't see it anymore; his spot being replaced by rubble.  Aphamos looked at the valley; the stormtroopers were pressing even further now.  Aphamos got up off the ground, his squad mates doing the same.  His squad leader got up and started to run towards the turrets.  Aphamos followed, keeping in mind that this next part wouldn't be so easy.  They reached the turrets and immediately hit the ground again, not wanting to be spotted by the enemy.  Aphamos looked down at the objective point.  he could see the small room again, the area around it being flooded by droids.  He picked out the ones with rockets and gave the numbers to his leader.

"We need to take the ones with the rockets out first, then use the turrets to knock the rest out." said Aphamos.  Duar nodded, signaling to the troopers to get into positions. 

"Red One, Two, and Three, you three will take out the rocket troopers first." ordered Duar.  Aphamos and I will use the turrets to take out the rest of them.  Fire on my mark, and make this as silent as possible."  Aphamos walked over to the turret and examined it.  He had seen things like this before in his other trainings, but had never actually used one.  He stood behind it, grasping its handles with his hands.  He carefully aimed it at the mass of droids, knowing that his aim didn't have to be perfect in order for the shots to count. "Three, two, one, MARK!" said Duar as he ran to the turret.  Three bolts of light left the troopers guns, striking the only three rocket troopers. 

Instinctively, Aphamos pulled and held the trigger on the turret, a huge, never ending outbreak of shots being sent out, hitting droids everywhere, splattering the mud under them.  Aphamos turned the turret, the blasts eating everything in their path.  He noticed a droid on the other trench, crouched and aimed directly at him.  He didn't have enough time to turn the turret into its direction and fire.  He took out the last of the troops and leaped to the side as a huge green bolt of fire left the droid's gun and me the turret, exploding it.  Aphamos got up, aimed his rifle, and fired at the droid, destroying it.  He  ran down the ridge to the base, aiming his rifle again and firing.  His squad mates quickly followed him, no resistance in their way. 

"Lets slap on these explosives and get the hell out of this place." said Duar.  Aphamos walked to the back of the objective point, trying to act as if he was strapping on the explosives.  The last of the stormtrooper forces had arrived, the entire area being emptied of droids.  Aphamos looked forward towards the last checkpoint.  So damn close I can taste it.  "Alright, lets go, we're almost there.  This is the easy part." 

The squad resumed their journey, this time through the valley itself.  Aphamos could see the faint resemblance of what he hoped to be a transport.  Aphamos's sight immediately snapped directly in front of him as the ground under a stormtrooper exploded, the trooper shooting behind the line.  "WE'VE GOT MINES!" warned Aphamos.  "WATCH YOUR STEP!"  Aphamos looked forward.  They were now only twenty yards from the transport.  Wouldn't it be perfect, he thought to himself, if you die right now, right when you are about to succeed, you just blow up.  He looked up and could see more transports coming closer, some on the verge of landing.  He stared hard at the insignia of the dropships that had just come in.  Shit.  Droids

"MORE DROIDS COMING IN!  GET TO THE SHIPS FAST!" yelled Aphamos.  He sprinted to the dropship as the blaster fire started up again.  He looked at one of the droid gunships as the battle droids were dropped, some being cut down with blaster fire.  He entered the ship with Duar as his other squad mates made it in as well.  He watched as stormtroopers started to get cut down again, the violence taking the battlefield once more.  The ship rose up in the air and the familiar voice rang out again.

"SIMULATION COMPLETE."

Comments: GREAT WORK! (A little long though, but still really good for your first story.) Keep it up!
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Aphamos opened his eyes, as if he had just woken up from some sort of slumber.  The visor covering his head moved up again as the door behind him opened.  He turned and walked out of the now dark room.  There was no one in the simulation chamber; the entire room was quiet.  He exited the room and made his way back to his quarters.  his head was high now, nothing could stop him.  He wasn't tired at all, and the visions had gone.  He closed his eyes and thought of the one thing that cleared everything in his mind, that one word.  Perfection.

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Raiders

War is cruelty. There's no use trying to reform it, the crueler it is the sooner it will be over.
--William Tecumseh Sherman--
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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
June 1, 2006 10:18:46 PM    View the profile of Aphamos 
Indirect Fire Operations
Heavy Weapons Specialty

Aphamos looked over at the clock resting on his nightstand; he had looked over every five minutes since he had woken up.  It was six in the morning, and his training started at six forty-five.  He couldn't remember what he had done; how it had happened.  He was asleep, and the next thing he knew, he was out of his bed, lying on the floor.  He recalled having the dreams again, as he had had every night for the past week.  His entire body was cold and wet and he couldn't get himself to stop shivering.  He looked back at the time.  Six o' five.  Should ring any second now.  He stood up and stretched out his legs and his arms.  The buzzing noise of the alarm started, hammering nails into Aphamos's head, one by one, each more painful then the last.  It was the only sound in the entire room; a ripple in the calm water.  He pressed the snooze button, the sound finally coming to an end, the silence retaking its rightful place.  He walked over to the bathroom, staring hard into the mirror in front of him.  His eyes were blood red, perspiration all over his body, slowly dripping onto the tile floor.  He looked back at the clock behind him; the time being ten past.  Walking over to the shower, he turned the water on and adjusted the temperature to the highest setting.  The water flow started, the soothing sound calming Aphamos.  Water vapor started to rise up to the top of the room, spreading its warmth.  he opened the shower door and stepped in.  The water burnt his skin, but he could not feel it.  His body was numb, his senses acute, aware of all his surroundings.  He started to wash himself, rid himself of a layer of filth that was creeping on the outside of his body. 

He turned the water off and stepped outside of the shower.  Taking his towel, Aphamos started to dry himself, taking to mind the fact that he didn't have much time before his training started.  He threw his towel down and put his clothes on, hurrying so that he wouldn't be late.  He ran out of the room, turned, and continued down the hall to the simulation room.  Right when he was about to turn the corner, he stopped, realizing that he was going the wrong way.  He had received a message saying the his training would be held in the other simulation room on the floor above him.  Swearing to himself, Aphamos turned and headed towards the stairs down the hall.  He raced up enormous staircase up to the next floor and ran down the hall to the simulation room.  Turning the corner, he saw his destination at the end of the hall.  He slowed down a bit as he reached the door, looking down at his uniform, trying to get off some of the dust.  Dammit, it's wrinkled.  He sighed to himself and entered the room, snapping to attention as he saw Darr-Rann, his squad leader.  Darr-Rann returned the salute, directing Aphamos to sit in the chair in front of him.  Aphamos took a seat, looking at the table in front of him.  There were three projections on the table, each of a different weapon. 

"Well," said Darr-Rann, "I can see that you are awake today, so we are going to jump right into it.  Your mission is a very basic one, no real twists or turns.  It will be divided into three stages, each stage a different weapon and a different environment.  Your objective will be to advance or hold the area for a set amount of time.  Once you have completed your objective you will be transported to a different environment and be given a different weapon.  Your resistance will vary depending on the environment and the weapon that you are using."

"I'm guessing that these are our weapons." said Aphamos as he pointed to the holograms on the table. 

"Ding, ding, ding, we have a winner." replied the squad leader n his patented sarcastic tone.  "The first weapon, or the one to the farthest left will be the weapon for stage one.  It is a Merr-Sonn PLX-2M Portable Missile System, or just a plain old rocket launcher if you prefer."  Aphamos examined the weapon as it turned in the projection.  "It has three firing modes: an unguided manual mode, and two homing modes.  One will home in on the magnetic emissions from speederbikes and such, while he other one will home in on the infrared heat signatures, allowing it to fire upon landspeeders,  airspeeders, and even small, low flying spacecraft.  The modes can be accessed through the control pad on the side of the weapon.  Your resistance will include walkers and speederbikes."  Darr-Rann stopped for a moment to stare at the weapon.  "Looks cool doesn't it?" he added.  "Now, lets see, this one is your average heavy turret.  You will experiment with both stationary and mobile turrets.  Your resistance will be large waves of troops, both average infantry and rocket troopers.  Yeah, this one isn't as cool as the last one.  Now, your last weapon will be a mobile packered mortar gun.  In this case, it will be stationed on a vehicle.  Your resistance will include troopers, this time behind different obstructions."  He took a deep breath, then exhaled.  "Did you get all that because I'm not starting over?"

"Yes Sir." answered Aphamos.

"Well good then.  Step right in, and good luck."  Aphamos stood up and walked to the simulation chamber.  He pressed the control, the door sliding open.  He walked inside the chamber and looked around, already knowing what he was going to see.  Alright, just close your eyes, and relax.  He heard the mechanical arm come down, placing the device on his head.  A shiver went down his spine; he had never gotten used to that feeling.  Moments later he opened his eyes, his vision meeting the inside of a small transport ship.  Bah, come on, I was expecting something better then this.  Aphamos stood up and looked outside the viewport.  The ship was about to land on what looked like the only flat, clear land in the entire area.  A huge, lush forest spanned the entire area in front of the ship, various trails branching off each other, leading deep into the woods.  Aphamos turned as a stormtrooper approached him.

"Get your equipment on trooper." said the stormtrooper.  "Intelligence has told us that various waves of troopers, walkers, and speeders are approaching our position, and fast.  We need you out there pronto."  Aphamos nodded and headed towards the back of the ship.  He stumbled on his way, which meant that the ship had finally landed.  Walking into the storage area, he saw his armor on the wall.  Alright, how are we going to do this?  He stepped towards the armor.  Okay, open this like that, put this on, then that, put this on your shoulder, and there you go.  He smiled to himself, impressed that he could man the weapon without breaking a limb.  He turned around and exited the ship, entering the new environment.  Looking to his right, he saw a huddle of stormtroopers creating their plan of attack.  He looked behind him to see a huge building with various structures on it.  On the very top was a satellite emitting out a beam that spanned across the entire battlefield.  Shield generator.  Stormtroopers, speederbikes, and walkers were pouring out of the building; turrets were being planted, and troopers were heading to the battle.  Aphamos walked over to the huddle of stormtroopers.

"Aphamos," said the stormtrooper he had seen in the ship moments before, "you will find a position and aid us with fire from there.  Find somewhere safe, and remember, one shot, then you move.  Understood?"  Aphamos nodded and started scouting the area for a position.  Dammit, there has got to be somewhere that they can't see.  I need someone else to make this work.  He looked back at the structure behind him and gave a signal to another rocket trooper that was heading his way.  His eyes kept scanning the area around him.  He walked forward until he reached the area where the trees met the flat land, the other trooper following him.  He peered through the endless shrubbery looking for a suitable location.  Crap, they are close, he thought to himself he finally found what he was looking for.  I'll stab them in the sides, move, then get them from the behind

"You get on the other side, parallel to my position here." said Aphamos.  The trooper ran to the other side and positioned himself according to his orders.  He walked forward, the troopers doing the same, until he reached a small underbrush where he could hide.  He walked into the bush and positioned his weapon towards the rebel advance.  "Trooper, fire when I do at the same walker.  Chop their walkers up first, then we take the speeders.  Once you shoot-", the rebels were almost in range, "-move to a different position.  Once you fire, if they fire back at you, I will fire next, and vice-versa with me."  Aphamos looked at the rebels, who were now in range.  He pressed the homing command on his control pad, then directed it to home on the magnetic emissions from the walker. He slowly aimed his weapon at the approaching walker.  He quickly checked behind the walker for any other resistance.  Two speeders were coming in slowly, followed by more walkers and infantry.  The walker was now in range.  I'll see you in hell.  He pulled the trigger, a bolt of fire whizzing from the font of the weapon, looping in the air, and landing on its target and exploding.  Aphamos looked to the other side as another bolt of fire met its target also, the same sight repeating itself. 

Aphamos ran to the tree next to him and positioned himself so that he was out of the walker's range.  He shot his head out to get a look at the walker's actions.  The machine turned its head towards Aphamos.  Aphamos shot his head back in and closed his eyes, holding his breath.  The vehicle started to fire at the tree.  Aphamos could feel the shots as they hit the tree, some shots missing the tree and barely missing Aphamos's leg.  FIRE ALREADY.  The firing suddenly came to a halt; Aphamos waited a moment before he stuck his head out to see what the problem was.  The walker was turning its head to aim at the other stormtrooper.  Oh crap.  Aphamos quickly aimed his weapon and fired, the shot hitting the same place as last time.  The rocket had triggered another explosion on the vehicle; small explosions starting up.  The entire machine finally erupted into a colossal flame and tumbled to the ground, sending sparks out in all directions.  Aphamos looked at the rebels; the speederbikes were now in range.  He ran forward and dove in another set of bushes, not wanting to be seen.  He aimed his weapon at the oncoming machine and fired.  The shot hit the speederbike, the vehicle shooting out into a flame, taking the troopers next to it as well.  The same thing happened to the speeder next to it, killing a large number of troops. 

Aphamos ran to the tree in front of him, taking cover as the blaster fire started up.  Aphamos looked at the rebel advance and saw a landspeeder coming in his direction.  Cut their legs off, then take whats inside.  He aimed his weapon at the vehicle and fired, the shot knocking out the repulsorlift on the left of the vehicle.  Moments later the repulsorlift on the right was knocked out, the ship now immobile.  Before the troopers inside could get out, Aphamos had changed his weapon setting to home in on their heat signatures and fired, killing the rest of the troops there. 

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What the heck?  Aphamos shook his head and closed his eyes before he looked around.  He opened then to find himself inside a trench.  He stood up and closed his eyes again, not believing what he had seen.  Snow.  Snow?  You have got to be kidding me.  He looked down at his armor.  Well, at least I'm dressed for the occasion.  He glanced at his surroundings; other stormtroopers were around him in the trench, with turrets on both ends.  Aphamos walked out of the trench and to the turret closest to him.  Pulling his binoculars off of his belt, he looked forward to the other side of the area.  Now where are they going to come from?  He finally saw the rebels; they were forty yards away and quickly heading towards the Imperial encampment, a mixture of both large waves of infantry and walkers.  Aphamos placed his binoculars back onto his belt and turned to meet a squadron of stormtroopers who were being assigned their commands. 

"Red Three and Four, you direct your fire on the walkers and other vehicles." said one of the stormtroopers.  "Aphamos, I want you in that turret."  He pointed to the turret that Aphamos had been by just moments before.  "You will give us cover fire while we go in.  Good luck soldiers."  Aphamos moved back to the turret and got inside.  He put his hands on the handle bars and turned the turret to one side, then to the other.  Alright.  This shouldn't be any different from an e-web.  No, not at all, he though to himself, doing whatever he could to make the experience seem easier.  The enemy troopers were now in firing range, Aphamos readying his aim.  "On my mark Aphamos.  Three, two, one, MARK!"  Aphamos opened fire on the rebel troopers.  An enormous mirage of fire came from the turret, each shot shaking the handle bars of the weapon.  The enemy soldiers were being knocked down masses at a time, the stormtroopers finally beginning their assault.  The walkers had seen Aphamos and had started to fire on him.  Take as many of them out as you can.  Aphamos knew that he couldn't push it in this mission; he needed to pass.  He kept his fire going, keeping his eyes on the damage gauge on the turret.  The gauge was almost to its peak and the power core was on fire.  Yeah, I better get out of this thing.  Aphamos let go of the handles and dove out of the turret as it exploded, taking out two stormtroopers.  Aphamos stood up and made his way to the vehicle behind him.

"You!" he yelled, pointing at a stormtrooper.  "You pilot this thing and I'll get into the gunner.  Get me close to them so we can do some damage."  The stormtrooper ran to the fighter tank and got inside as Aphamos got into the turret.  He fired two shots at the ground to test the guns capabilities and spun around while the stormtrooper drove them to the front lines of the battle.  Aphamos aimed the gun at the rebel line and fired, killing five of their troopers.  He kept firing as the pilot drove the tank across the enemy lines, knocking down troopers one by one, taking the wave down.  The enemy's walker fire never hit the moving tank, the pilot maneuvering in and out of their range.  I wonder what this one does.  Aphamos aimed the gun directly at one of the walkers and fired the secondary weapon, destroying it on impact.  The vehicle turned as Aphamos started his second round of fire, this time taking more hits from the growing rebel guns.  He fired the secondary at a group of rebel troopers, sending their bodies airborne.  Their vehicle was on the verge of explosion as Aphamos and the pilot leaped out of it.  The fighter tank exploded, sending fiery debris in every direction. 

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"Aphamos, Aphamos, are you okay?" asked a voice.  Aphamos slowly opened his eyes, squinting because of the change in light.  Another environment change.  What do we have this time?  Aphamos stood up to find himself on a small island, dropships landing troops and vehicles behind him.  He nodded at the stormtrooper, still in a daze because of the environment change.  Shallow water surrounded the island; to the north was another island like the one he was standing on.  He pulled out his binoculars so he could get a glimpse of the activity on the second island.  It was infested with rebels making their positions and getting dug in.  Aphamos put his binoculars back down and headed towards the group of stormtroopers behind him. 

"-Understood?" said the stormtrooper.  "Oh, yes, Aphamos, you will man that mortar gun, Red One, you will pilot it.  Once you get halfway to the enemy, stop and strafe from side to side so their rockets wont hit you.  Aphamos, try to hit the rebels behind their cover.  They have set up small fortifications to hide behind, so concentrate your fire on those.  Our troopers will swarm the shoreline and take it.  Good luck troopers."  Aphamos walked over to the vehicle, getting inside the gunner's seat.  The stormtrooper entered the pilot's seat, starting up the vehicle and driving it to the water.  The water was a gray, murky color, small creatures could be seen swimming through its thick mass.  Aphamos looked back at the rebels as the vehicle came into range.  So how does this thing work?  I just push this and-  He pressed the fire button on the handle bars, a huge bolt of fire coming from the gun at a slow velocity, flowing through the air until it reached the ground, creating a small explosion.  The blast took two troopers, but was merely a test shot.  Cool.  Now I just have to learn how to aim the damn thing, and we're set.  Aphamos aimed the gun at one of the rebel fortifications, raised it, and fired, the shot sailing through the air and hitting the ground, right on target, taking out three of the rebels behind the cover.  He aimed the gun at the mass of troopers emerging from the sea wall behind them, having to take to account the fact that they were moving.  He positioned the gun and fired, knocking down four more enemies.  The blaster fire had finally started as the enormous wave of stormtroopers met the enemy. 

"SIMULATION COMPLETE." rendered the mechanized voice.

Aphamos sighed to himself as the mechanical arm raised itself, the door behind him opening.  He closed his eyes, having to adjust to the new lighting again.  Sometimes I think these things are actually real.  He walked out of the simulation chamber to find no one there, the room silent.  He exited the room and walked back to his quarters, wanting to get some rest.  He looked at the time.  Seven fifty-five.  Well, that was fast.

Comments: GREAT WORK! Nice to see you're improving more and more each story (and I don't only mean by length). Your stories are a pleasure to read, like very few others that I do get a chance to read. Incidentally, if you'd like to have Darr train you in your specialties that is an option (seeing as you like including him in your posts). Anyways, good work!

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Raiders

War is cruelty. There's no use trying to reform it, the crueler it is the sooner it will be over.
--William Tecumseh Sherman--
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Aphamos
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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
June 9, 2006 9:43:03 PM    View the profile of Aphamos 
Precision Range Shooting
Heavy Weapons Training

Aphamos woke by the sound of his alarm.  He looked over at the time, surprised by the fact that he had slept that night.  Six thirty.  Damn.  Training.  He crawled out of his bed and stood up, stretching his stiff arms and legs.  He smiled to himself.  I needed that.  It has been a while.  He had not gotten a full nights rest in two weeks, either not sleeping at all some days or waking up in the middle of the night because of his visions.  They had stopped for the time being, Aphamos concentrating hard on clearing his thoughts at all times, relaxing, letting the flow take over.  Walking over to the sink in his bathroom, he turned on the water and splashed the crisp, cool water into his face, fully waking himself.  He looked up at the mirror, the water slowly dripping into the sink.  Yeah.  I need to shave.  It had been days since he had treated himself to a nice shower and shave; he had been promoted, and therefore put into a new, more rigorous line of training.  He dried his face with a towel and walked back to his room, sliding into his uniform.  Walking to his door, he looked at the mirror beside him, straightening his badge and swiping his hands over his outfit to remove some of the lint.  Stupid thing. Always gets so dang dirty.  He looked over at the clock for one last time, this time shocked at what he was looking at.  WHAT THE HELL!  SEVEN TWENTY-FIVE!  Oh crap

He ran out of his room and into the hallway, almost tripping himself while turning.  Which building was it.  Ah, come on, not now, don't forget now.  He stopped, searching his mind for the room he had to report to.  He remembered the clock that he had just looked at moment earlier, and the fact that he now had less than five minutes to report to his room.  He noticed his squadmate, Daminga, walking past him.

"Heya." said Aphamos.  "I'm in a bit of a situation now, so just answer quickly and DO NOT ask.  Pick a number between one and ten."  Daminga stared blankly at Aphamos, not believing what he had just heard come out of his partners mouth.  He continued to stare, the silence beating Aphamos in the head.  The trooper finally held up four fingers, a smile spreading across his face.  "Okay, thanks."  said Aphamos while running forward and turning the corner.  Even, which means the simulation room right-  He turned another corner, -here.  He stepped forward, the door sliding open.  He instinctively snapped to attention, expecting to see Darr-Rann in the room waiting for him.  Aphamos looked around the room, not seeing anyone.  You have got to be kidding me.  ARE YOU SERIOUS?!?  He turned around and re-entered the hallway, switching his pace into a full out sprint.  He ran to the stairs, jumping three steps at a time, pushing people to the side so they would get out of his way.  He reached the next floor, bumping into a woman who had just turned.  The woman fell, a stack of items dropping from her hands onto the cold, metal floor. 

"Oh, shit- I mean, I'm really sorry Miss-" he said, looking at her name tag, "Ridal.  Miss Ridal.  I was in a hurry, and I-"  He came to a stop, looking at her face.  Her eyes glistened in the light, her face like glass; untouched, flawless in every way.  "I-I-uh-"  Aphamos quickly helped her pick up her stuff and stood up, wanting to get away as quickly as possible.  He flashed a small smile and turned, walking in the direction of the simulation room.  He stood in front of the door, taking one last look at the lady, the angel, who was also staring at him.  He stepped forward and entered the room at last.  His attention was a bit delayed due to the state that he was in; his mind was still on the girl.  Darr-Rann returned the salute and pointed to the seat, Aphamos walking over and falling into the chair.  He looked at the desk in front of him, three holograms projecting up from it.  They were projections of three different weapons, by the looks of it, two rifles and one light blaster pistol.

"You are late." said Darr-Rann, his voice cold, stabbing Aphamos like a knife.  Aphamos new that it was unacceptable to squad leader to be late, and was disappointed at himself.  Dammit, what was I suppose to do?  Knock her stuff over and leave her?  The woman's picture took over Aphamos's thoughts again, the image mesmerizing him.  Just don't say anything...  He stared away from his squad leader, not being able to full-on stand Darr-Rann's gaze in these situations.  "Your mission today is very simple in terms of what you need to get done.  Doing it could pose a challenge.  You will be placed in a random environment and be given three weapons which I will describe in full detail later.  You will be given a fire team of two other stormtroopers.  You will make your way through the environment, your objective being to successfully infiltrate the rebel base and take out the leader, who will also be described later."

"The point of this mission is to be as discrete and precise as possible.  To further this, you will be given a limited amount of ammunition for your weapons.  Your first weapon-", he pointed over to the hologram on the left, "-will be an E-11 Marksmen blaster rifle.  A brother of the standard issue E-11 blaster rifle, it has been manufactured for more versatility and also for its more advanced scope.  The next weapon you see-", he pointed to the weapon in the middle of the screen, "-is an LJ-90 Sniper blaster rifle.  I'm sure you can image what that does, but in case you can't, it's a really long gun with a really good scope.  Have fun with that one.  Now," he pointed to the last weapon, "this is a DH-17 light blaster pistol.  It shoots things that hurt." he added blandly.  "Two smoke grenades and one explosive pack will also be at your disposal, as well as a vibroblade.  Make a note of the fact that you will FAIL this mission if you are spotted and the rebels send relay to the base warning them of you."

"Now, this leader.  An imaginary man by the name of Talis Felg.  A rebel leader who the Empire suspects of leading various raids on Imperial territory.  Ah, yes, his picture."  He pushed a button on the table, an image of a man shooting out from the projector.  He looked normal, no distinct facial features, black hair, brown eyes.  "Handsome, isn't he?  Well, he has to die.  You will take him out and proceed to a rendezvous point with a transport ship.  Understood?"  Aphamos nodded and walked to the simulation chamber.  "Good luck trooper."  He took a deep breath and pressed a button on the side of the entrance, the door sliding open.  Stepping in , he immediately closed his eyes, the door behind him closing, shrouding him in darkness.  The sound of the mechanical arm broke the silence.  He fought back a shiver as the helmet took its place on Aphamos's head.  Breath in, breath out, breath in, bre- 

He opened his eyes, his vision meeting the trunk of a tree.  Great place to start off.  He stepped back, looking around at the forest the surrounded him.  Turning around, he saw his teammates waiting there for him, searching the area for resistance.  He looked down at his armor, surprised at what he was seeing.  Ooh.  Camouflage.He turned again and raised his hand, giving the signal for them to move forward at a slow pace.  He started walking, knees bent, head shooting from side to side, looking for enemies.  The top layer of trees blocked the sunlight, letting only faint beams seep through.  Aphamos looked down at his weapon, adjusting the strap of his sniper rifle at the same time.  He looked forward, trying to find his enemies.  Hearing people's voices, he came to an abrupt halt, raising his fist to signal to his allies.  He looked to the right, three rebel troopers approaching his position.  He dove to the ground in front of him, landing in an small bush, his teammates doing the same.

Shoot, or let them go, shoot, or let them go?  I'll shoot.  He looked back at the enemies who were coming closer and closer, muttering amongst themselves.  "Yea, he got shipped out a couple weeks ago." said one of the rebels.  "They didn't want him I guess.  It's too bad, isn't it?"  They were finally in range.  Aphamos stood up and sprinted towards the rebels.  One of them turned, his face instantly meeting the metal end of Aphamos's weapon.  Aphamos quickly aimed and fired at the second rebel, the shot hitting him in the neck.  The last rebel instantaneously hit the ground from the stormtrooper's fire.  That was easy.  Well, seeing as how they were practically flirting with each other.  Aphamos chuckled at the immature thought, moments later regaining his composure and starting his mission again.  He walked back to the two other stormtroopers, this time wanting to make a plan.

"Here's how we are going to do this." he said, checking to make sure that there weren't any surprise attacks.  Red one, you will take the top right, or southeast position.  Red Two, you will take the position behind us, or the area in the north.  I'll be here in the southwest, or right position.  When we meet resistance, I will set off beeps on the headset."  He triggered the sound, a recognizable beep filling Aphamos's helmet.  "The first beep will be for Red One, the second for Red Two, the last one for me, and so on.  When you hear that sound, you will get up and move to another position, distracting the enemies.  When you hear lower-pitched sound, you will fire.  Understood?"  The stormtroopers stood up and walked to their positions, signifying their acceptance.  Aphamos walked over to his position, reaching for a clip of ammunition from his belt.  His fingers hit his belt, his hand now feeling around for some type of cartridge.  What the hell?  They only give me one clip?  Damn.  He crouched down again and raised his hand, signaling for the stormtroopers to continue.  He walked to towards the south, his feet making a crunch as he stepped on the leaves and branches.  This just keeps getting better and better.

Aphamos held up his hand again, commanding his allies to stop.  He had done this every minute or so to scout the area for enemies.  He looked forward, scanning that area as he doubled back, seeing three rebel troopers walking straight towards him.  He frantically looked around, trying to find a place to hide.  He threw himself in the underbrush next to him, trying as hard as he could not to make a sound; even the slightest movement would fail him.  The rebels' voices grew louder and louder, the sound of their footsteps increasing in volume as well.  The rebels were now only feet away from him, still walking, one headed on a course straight onto Aphamos.  Step on me.  I goddamn dare you to step on me.  Just see what wi-  Aphamos sprung up as the rebel's foot hit his armor, taking out his vibroblade and spinning the rebel,  wrapping his arm around the rebel neck and putting the knife beside his throat.  The remaining rebels had their blasters out and pointed at Aphamos's head, yet hesitating to shoot.

"PUT THE GUNS DOWN!" yelled Aphamos.  "PUT THEM DOWN NOW, OR THIS GUY WON'T HAVE A THROAT IN A FEW SECONDS!"  The rebels kept their weapons up, still pointing in the same direction.  "OH, YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME THEN?  MAYBE THIS WILL HELP YOU A BIT."  Aphamos took the vibroblade and moved it to the rebel's arm, holding the tip on the rebels flesh and pushing the blade in, blood oozing out of the hole, the rebel erupting in gut-wrenching screams.  Aphamos stopped pushing, half an inch of the blade in the rebel's arm.  "IS THAT BETTER?"  The rebels still held their guns up, their hands shaking violently.  "YOU WANT MORE?"  Aphamos had had enough.  He plunged the blade in even further, not playing games with the enemies anymore.  They slowly put their weapons down, their partner's screams of agony persuading them.  "THAT'S BETTER NOW."  He took the knife out of the rebels arm and put it back to his neck.  Gotta make this good.  He quickly pierced the rebel in the neck with his blade and threw the corpse at the second rebel.  Pulling out his blaster pistol, he fired a shot at the last rebel while he was pulling out his comlink.  He aimed again, this time at the last rebel alive, and fired, hitting the rebel in the eye.  That works.

Aphamos looked around for the other stormtroopers, who had just realized that their ally was being attacked.  "Lets be a bit more sharp there next time, shall we?" said Aphamos, sarcastically.  He pulled out his datapad, a map of the area on the screen.  We are close.  Just a bit further.  Now how are we going to get in?  He looked forward towards the position of the base.  The area in front of him was filled with trees, therefore blocking his line of site.  He turned, looking at the corpses on the ground.  He walked to the bodies, trying to find something.  He looked at the third rebel, recalling the fact that he had taken out his comlink.  He picked up the comlink, thinking of his next move.  The idea finally hit him.  This is going to be great.  He put the comlink to his helmet and spoke.

"HQ, HQ, do you read me?" he asked.  The voice over the intercom signaled back.  "We've got trouble HQ.  A huge Imperial force is approaching us-"  Aphamos paused for a moment.  "-From the south.  A force is approaching us from the south.  Various waves of infantry as well as walkers and maulers.  Requesting assistance pronto." 

"Your name please?" asked the voice.

"Uh-"  Aphamos ran back to the body.  "Greg Rets.  Identification number 1423OI."

"Rets...aren't you supposed to be stationed in the north sector of the base?" asked the voice, the voice sharper, mor accusing this time.

"Yes, but another squadron in the south called in asking for backup, so I went to assist them.  Hold on-"  Aphamos paused again, putting up his best act for the next part.  "My God, they are coming.  They are almost in range.  My God, we aren't going to make it, they are too big.  We-WE NEED HELP NOW.  THEY ARE CUTTING US OFF.  WE CAN'T HOLD FOR MUCH LON-"  he turned the comlink off and threw to to the ground, shooting it with his blaster.  Bravo, bravo, encore!, he thought to himself as he raised his hand, giving the signal to move forward again.  He could feel it.  They were slowly nearing the base, the faint outline growing larger and larger.  Aphamos could see the making of what appeared to be a wall, yet only spanning to the top of the trees.  Now how am I going to get past that.  He stopped, hearing voices again.  He looked around, trying to find the source of the voices.  They were coming from in front of him, three rebel troopers walking towards the base, probably heading to the south end. 

Aphamos aimed his blaster rifle at the head of the trooper on the right.  Have to make this quick and perfect.  Perfection.  He pulled the trigger on the blaster rifle, a red bolt of light shooting out ad hitting the rebel in the back of the neck.  The soldier fell to the ground, dead, as the other two rebels turned and aimed their guns.  Aphamos quickly moved his hand, aiming the gun at the head of the next troopers and fired.  Nothing came out of the tip of the gun.  He pulled the trigger again, nothing emerging from the tip of the blaster.  Oh, God.  GOD!  He swore to himself and threw the blaster on the ground, telling the other stormtroopers to fire.  Quickly strafing to the side, he pulled out his blaster pistol and fired at the rebel, no shot leaving the barrel of the gun.  He threw the weapon at the rebels and ran to cover, making it to a tree as the enemy soldiers were finally cut down by the other stormtroopers fire.  Aphamos ran out of his cover to check to see if the resistance was gone.  he let out a huge breath, an enormous weight being lifted off his shoulders.

"Off to the base we go." he said, walking the last twenty yards until he reached the base.  Finally arriving there, he examined the wall in comparison to the height of the trees.  I think I can make it.  Lets see though...  He walked over to the tree closest to the base, gripping his hands on it and starting to climb.  Reaching the top, he looked over to the inside of the rebel base.  It was scarcely populated for the most part, a few guards scattered across the area, as well as a huddle of rebels in the center of the base.  Aphamos took out his binoculars, scouting the group of rebels in the center.  There he is, alive.  But we can change that.  He put his binoculars back onto his belt, planning out his jump to the top of the wall.  Okay, just...just don't die.  He bent his knees a bit, moving his feet into correct position.  Three, two, one- oh don't close your eyes.  He leapt to the top of the wall, silently making in on top of the metal structure.  Scouting out the area again, he jumped to the roof top of another building, taking out his vibroblade.  He slowly crept to the guard, and once behind him, stabbed the rebel in the neck, slitting his throat.  Aphamos caught the corpse in the air, slowly placing the body onto the building.  He looked out to the group of rebel troopers, at the same time, taking and reloading his sniper rifle.  He aimed the gun at the group of rebels, finding and centering in on his target.  Don't mess up right now

"HEY!  HEY, WHAT ARE YOU DOING?  HEY, GET OFF OF THERE!  WE'VE GOT TROUBLE!" yelled one of the rebels.  Aphamos pulled the trigger on his rifle, the shot hitting the rebel in the back of the head, the leader's body going limp, falling and hitting the ground.  He quickly dropped his sniper rifle and looked down at the rebel soldiers.  The soldiers around the leader were all standing in shock at what had just happened.  Now how am I going to get out of this one.  Hmm, haven't used these before.  He pulled a smoke grenade off of his belt and threw it directly in front of him.  Moments later, the entire area erupted in smoke, the thick gas nullifying all of Aphamos's sight.  Great.  Now the jump.  Might as well try it.  He closed his eyes, taking a deep breath as a bolt of light missed his helmet.  He ran toward the edge of the building, leaping off the edge at the last moment.  The world stopped for a moment in Aphamos's head, all he could hear was himself breathing in, out, in, and out again, his heart pounding in the chest.  He snapped to the real once his feet hit the ground, his hand instinctively moving to his belt for another smoke grenade.  He kept running, dropping the grenade on the ground as he ran to the rendezvous point. 

The area behind him erupted in smoke as Aphamos neared to the flat land that lay in front of him.  A blaster bolt whizzed past his head, the shot coming from the behind.  Dammit, so damn close.  NOT NOW.  He couldn't feel his legs anymore, his entire body now numb from all the movement.  He kept running though, stopping for nothing, no one; an aura of energy protecting him from everything.  It seemed like an eternity later that he reached the ship.  He leaped into the machine, the ship immediately taking off.  Aphamos rested his head back and sighed, letting out a breath that had been deep inside of him since the beginning of him mission.  He closed his eyes again and let go...

Opening his eyes, he stepped out of the simulation chamber, that mechanical arm already off of his head.  His eyes snapped shut, then faintly opened because of the light.  Glad to see that no body stayed...  He walked to the door, pressing the button on the wall, the exit slipping open.  The moment he stepped out, he bumped into her again.  Oh, GOD.

"Hi." he said, staring around to see if anyone else was near.

"Hi." replied Miss Ridal, not wanting to give more of an introduction that he did. 

"I'm Aphamos.  Er...Aph.  Or Aphamos, or whatever you feel like calling be..." he spat out stupidly.  He was having talking, his words now divided into an unorganized series of letters. 

"I'm Rachel.  What do you do here?" she replied.  They started to walk, slowly, yet gradually getting used to each other until they were gone, walking in what ever direction the halls led them.

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July 7, 2006 4:08:45 PM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
Rogueboy woke up, his head groggy from the previous night; too much drinking and brawling he frequented the Axis Bar & Cafe. Axis was a rather rough place to drink, most of the people that went there were patrons, but there always was the random tourist who thought he was tough. Rogueboy stood up and started checking himself in the mirror for any damage; he had a black eye, and a deep scab on his left hand which was in the form of a small circle, the tourist had burned his hand with a cigarette when he had him in a chokehold.

Rogueboy picked up his PDA and checked his schedule for the day; he had a heavy weapons class in an hour, plenty of time Rogueboy thought to himself as he got ready to take his shower.

Rogueboy left his small house, using his keycard to close the blast doors, the neighborhood he lived in was fairly seedy and no protection was too much. Rogueboy went to his V-35 and began the ten minute drive to the academy.

When he arrived at the academy Rogueboy took a while to bathe in the beauty of the academy's architecture and extensive gardens, the obstacle courses were hidden in the back. Rogueboy walked through the front doors, which opened with a slight hiss, walking pass the receptionist droid Rogueboy head towards the classrooms in the North wing.

C-22...C-24...Ahh C-26 Rogueboy was the last to enter the classroom, not long after the drill instructor entered.

"My name is Wociech (pronounced Voitek) and I will be your teacher for this class. This class is Fire Support Tactics, normally it's a form of target practice but I feel like being mean, everyone to the armory."

When they reached the armory Wociech used his keycard to open the door. They entered the armory, and Wociech began his lesson.

"Ladies and Gentlemen, these are going to be the blasters we are going to use in this lesson, I know you all passed basic but never the less I will walk you through it. The S-11 is a blaster commonly used by law enforcement, but it is open to civilians, it stuns your target making them unconscious for a few hours, there is no permanent damage."

"Everyone arm up and meet me on obstacle course seven."

Rogueboy grabbed one of the blasters and followed Wociech, there were about twenty other "students" about half of them were human and the other a mix of Twi'leks and Besalisks. Wociech decided to make his final speech.

"Alright pay attention. I' am going to break you guys up into teams, you half on that side of the course." Wociech pointed north. "And you half are on that side." Pointing south. "Remember guys cover your flanks, don't hesitate to shoot each other remember their only stun guns, try not to hit your own team-mates. When the horn sounds begin."

Rogueboy was chosen to go north, as he was walking with his team-mates he started looking around for good places in which to take cover. That tree would leave me exposed on the left, that rock is too small, that foxhole isn't deep enough, those bushes would stop people from seeing me but offer no protection. Finally the squad reached the designated wait area, a few seconds later a loud horn sounded.

Rogueboy ran as fast as he could running towards those bushes hoping to get there before anyone else did, he arrived and lied down on his stomach using the shrubbery to block anyone's view of him. Wasn't long before the sounds of blaster fire interrupted the tranquility of the obstacle course, Rogueboy waited patiently, not moving not making a sound, the excitement of the situation made him want to take a piss but he wasn't going to let that give away his position. Two minutes later a figure came bursting out of some trees and into the small clearing Rogueboy was watching, it was a Besalisk carrying two S-11s. Rogueboy fired grazing the Besalisk's leg which went numb, causing him to fall; Rogueboy fired another shot making sure he wouldn't get up anytime soon. Immediately after a bunch of stun shots fired from the right tore into the shrubbery miraculously missing Rogueboy by mere inches, Rogueboy dove behind the tree that kept the left side exposed. Rogueboy stuck his head and arm out and fired off five shots, not knowing if he hit or missed and than took cover. There was the sound of someone running through grass, the tree shook as something hit it, and the sound of heavy breathing. Shit there's someone on the other side of the tree. Rogueboy quietly began sneaking around the tree trying not to make any noise, he behind the other trooper who was peering around the other side of the tree. Why give him a chance. Rogueboy stunned the man right in his back.

Rogueboy surveyed the area, satisfied that there were no more people lurking around he began cautiously walking, taking every pain to keep off the paths, to not make a noise. Rogue was walking in the woods about five feet from a path when he heard two voices.

"We haven't found anyone yet."

"Shut up, do you want to get stunned because you can't keep your mouth shut?"

Rogue chuckled when he realized they were his team-mates, he snuck up behind them and grabbed them by the shoulders; they both jumped and fired ahead of them.

"Don't ever do that again!"

"Will you shut up, you just gave away our position, what's the rest of the squad like?"

"Me and Larry here split up from the squad; we went right while everyone else went left."

"Guess where we're going?"

"Left?"

"Exactly."

The three troopers started the two minute walk cutting across trees and rocks, when they reached the leftmost of the oversized obstacle course it was pandemonium, there were "casualties" on both sides but from the looks of it the south team won that battle, Rogueboy counted the bodies on both sides. North had lost the seven other men and South lost five making it a total of seven, which meant three on three. Larry pointed towards the right where there was some movement, Rogue motioned to the two others to take cover but it was too late and a hail of stun shots were fired at their position, the other trooper was hit and fell down unconscious. Rogue dove inside a foxhole, while Larry dove behind a tree. The enemy stopped firing; Rogue slowly raised his head and saw three men standing up about fifty yards out, two of them taking cover behind a rock and the third one behind a tree. Rogue looked at Larry who in turn looked at him, Rogue pointed to himself and raised his gun, than he pointed towards Larry and made a running motion with two fingers, Larry looked out from the tree and saw a fitting rock, he looked back at Rogue and nodded. Rogueboy raised three fingers and began counting down. 3...2...1 Rogueboy stood up in his foxhole and began spraying at the three men; Larry in the mean time sprinted towards the rock and took cover behind it. Rogueboy seeing that his job was done lowered himself in his foxhole while blue lasers rained down in his general direction. Than there was silence, which was split by a voice.

"Hey Rogueboy, I got two of them but I need some help on this last one."

Rogueboy sighed at the idiocy of the trooper, but never the less got out of the foxhole and sprinted towards the right of the enemy's position, while Larry was on the left. Rogueboy was approaching the opening side of trooper when he chose to dive as round the bend and fired taking the-would be stunner by surprise with no fewer than three shots.

The horn sounded and Wociech came out onto the obstacle course, congratulations you two, you will receive your marks in a few days time, now help me wake up these lazy troopers."

 
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July 15, 2006 3:11:36 PM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
Rogueboy was at the academy getting ready for his next test, he was nervous artillery was never one-hundred percent accurate even less so in his hands. Rogue began looking over his notes; in big letter he read,Never Fire at ninety degree angle in zero wind. Just than Wociech walked in. "Alright ladies and gentlemen, today is the big test day." Those words rang out. "I will be calling you one by one in alphabetical order. Josh Arang, you're first."

I can't believe I've been waiting for over an hour and a half in that time fifteen people were called, and ten of them came out with sad looks, or even tears. A woman just walked out of the training room a big grin on her face, Wociech followed looking very unhappy. "Alex Gorjan." Rogueboy got up and went into the room, the room was dark, with white walls, and a chair in the middle of it, further examination revealed a terminal in the corner.

Wociech approached the terminal giving instructions to Rogueboy. "Alright, have a seat, I understand you are a PFC correct?" Rogueboy nodded and than followed with a. "Yes Sir." Wociech eyes slightly widened. "Good than maybe you won't be as bad as the rest of these losers. You ready?" Rogueboy grinned. "A Raider is always ready." Wociech pressed a button and a helmet was lowered from the ceiling, it fit Rogueboy's head like a glove, and than the screen went on.

Rogueboy was riding gunner in a HAG (Heavy Assault Gun) the objective was simple, there were two NR laser batteries set up,  one PX-10 assault vehicle, and a small radar jammer. The driver to the HAG accelerated driving off a dune and getting some serious airtime, the driver's voice came over the comlink. "We'll be arriving within firing range in exactly two minutes and twenty-three seconds." Rogue grinned, I love it how they're so exact, now lets try not to muck this up too badly.

Rogueboy was looking at the scanner that was coming in from the latest intelligence, the driver of the HAG was just outside the range of the NR laser batteries, the HAG's high-impact energy launcher could outrange the batteries, as long as the wind was with higher than fifteen miles per hour and blowing in a favorable direction, which it was neither. Rogueboy pressed the comlink's talk button down. "Alright pilot, take us in, I was you to drive in a zigzag pattern, all the while heading towards the batteries, keep it around eighty kilometers, this way I can fire and hopefully you can still dodge." The pilot's voice crackled on the comlink as he gave out the orders to the copilot.

The HAG sped up, Rogue was ready, adjusting the angles and amount of power to be used, just than an oversized laser cannon blast missed the HAG by less than a meter, the HAG sped up riding at sixty kilometers, closing the distance between itself and the batteries, another blast of cannon fire landed nearby kicking up sand, Rogueboy returned fire; even though the batteries hadn't come into view as of yet, and the targeting computer hasn't spotted the threat. The HAG's energy launcher spewed out a load of bluish fire which passed over its target and hit the sand. One of the batteries came into view, Rogueboy unloaded with the twin-blaster cannons, killing the NR troops that manned it. "Pilot take us on the other side of the cannon, this way we can use it for cover and still fire at the other batteries." The pilot drove the HAG alongside the battery, using it as a shield from the other batteries. The targeting computer picked up the other battery, there were three NR troops manning it, Rogueboy adjusted the angles and power to match the computer's readings, Rogue watched as the battery fired a shot that hit the battery the HAG was using for cover; it exploded and sent shrapnel into the sand dunes, a little bit of shrapnel hit the HAG causing no damage, but rocking it nonetheless. Rogueboy waited for the rocking to stop and than pressed the launch button, on the terminal firing the energy launcher for the third time, the bluish glob hit its target, sending shrapnel and corpses in every direction.

Rogueboy grinned at himself for the hit, knowing it would be bonus marks for getting the whole squad with the gun. "Pilot take us to the tank's last known position." The pilot's voice came over the comlink. "Yes sir." The HAG drove for about five more minutes, reaching the tracks where the assault vehicle's last known position was. "Follow those tracks pilot." The HAG followed the tracks for only a few seconds before a black speck came up on the horizon, Rogueboy used the targeting computer to enhance the vision and confirm that it was the PX-10, confirmation was given and the targeting computer began the auto aiming procedure.

READINGS; ANGLE: 20 DEGREES, POWER 50 000 JOULES.

That can't be right, that would mean I would be firing at a deflated angle...that damn shrapnel. Rogueboy started doing some mental calculations figuring what would be the proper angle and power amount, if I use a forty-five degree angle, and fire at forty thousand joules, I can go five hundred-meters, the target is about half that and closing, I'll use around seventeen thousand joules. the PX-10 fired its medium blaster cannon and hit the HAG's shields, sending the HAG off course and rocking it violently, when it was stable enough to not screw up Rogueboy's calculations he pressed the fire button, the shot fell short about five meters. "Pilot take me, as close as you can." The pilot obeyed the orders without question, dodging shots from the medium blaster cannon, Rogueboy fired round after round of blaster cannon into the PX-10 with little effect, using energy launcher, Rogueboy fired at a one-eighty degree angle at the maximum amount of joules, it was a direct hit and the PX-10 erupted in flames.

SIMULATION FINISHED

The helmet was raised back to the ceiling, Rogueboy stared around bewildered, fearing that he failed the test, spotting Wociech at the terminal in the corner with a grim look on his face staring back at Rogueboy for at least a minute, finally Rogueboy spoke up. "Did I fail? I didn't destroy the radar jammer?" Wociech's face gave away no emotion as he gave his judgment. "You did not destroy the jammer because you already took out the defenses, therefore there was nothing to stop you, so instead of waiting for you I finished it prematurely, you'll get your marks on you datapad, have a good day."

 
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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
July 27, 2006 7:13:53 PM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
Rogueboy was sitting in class going through one of the manuals as his instructor droned on about one of the epic battles fought during the clone wars, Rogueboy already knew the whole story he was fascinated with history and enjoyed the grizzly parts of it. The manual was about weapons, pistols and rifles to be exact he had an exam coming up; the precision range shooting was not to be taken lightly rumors were heard of instructors giving their students faulty guns on purpose. The class ended, and Rogueboy hurried to the mess hall for lunch, after a meal he hate too fast and didn't taste anything; it was back to studying, after an hour he headed towards the exam class, which was outside and by appointment only. Wociech was standing outside under a canopy next to a rack of guns, Rogueboy approached him. "Good afternoon, sir." Wociech's demeanor was unreadable. "Good afternoon, Private First Class Rogueboy. Today you have a difficult day ahead of you, you will learn to hit your target from varying ranges using various pistols, your targets will not be moving and therefore should be simple to hit. On the rack you will see a KK-5 light blaster pistol; you will pick it up and wait for my mark at the line." Wociech pointed at the diagonal line less than two feet away. "On my mark holographs will begin appearing and you must shoot them down. Any questions?" When no questions were being asked Wociech stepped to the side, Rogueboy picked up the KK-5, it was a light pistol made of lightweight materials and it felt too light to be a real gun, but Rogueboy knew better and while it might take a few shots to bring someone down it was still a deadly weapon in a skilled user.



Rogueboy stepped up to the line inspecting the pistol, nodding towards his instructor to show that he was satisfied, Wociech blew a whistle and holographs began appearing at a constant rate, Alex fired the KK-5 tearing through holographs of New Republic soldiers, it took three torso shots to kill a holograph, one headshot, and five "other" shots. Twenty holograms later and a smoking KK-5 Wociech blew the whistle telling Rogueboy to put the pistol down, which he did gradually. "Alright amateur, you've shown you could use a light blaster pistol, now I want you to go over there and pick up the Stormtrooper Two Carbine, and a pistol of your choice." Rogueboy went to the rack and picked up the rifle; it was jet black and medium weight, Alex was able to hold it one handed but would not be able to fire it accurately like that. Rogueboy looked over the rack stacked with pistols, DH-17...DL-44...IM-44...KK-5...Q2S5...DC-15S...DC15S I'll take it Rogueboy thought to himself as he picked up the handgun and put it in his holster. Wociech walked up to Rogueboy and gave him and encouraging pat on the back. "You will walk through Ghost town, which is what we like to call this part of the training; you will "kill" all holographs, but be wary for there are "innocents" don't hit them. Ready?" Rogueboy nodded his head. "Head North until you find the town and clear it." "Will there be any traps along the way?" Wociech grinned that evil grin of his. "Not allowed to tell you, but I would keep my eyes open, this is supposed to simulate an actual hostile environment so tread lightly and watch out for the rampant Rancor." Rogueboy's face paled, at his tenure in the arena he had fought many monsters and a few creatures, a Rancor was placed again twenty men for an even one to one at the bookies.



Rogueboy walked through the heavy flora, heading due north, he climbed to the top of a nearby tree and pulled out his pair of field macro binoculars and looked to the north, about fifty meters further there were a few buildings, each of them about two stories tall, made of wood, and had a balcony. Rogueboy climbed down from the tree and proceeded his slow cautious walk towards the town. When Rogueboy arrived it was as Wociech said it would be; a ghost town, there was not a soul in sight, just than a holograph popped up at a window in a split second Rogueboy turned his carbine and fired hitting the holograph in its forehead, a holograph appeared to the window on the left, Rogueboy aimed the rifle but paused before he fired; the holograph was a woman holding a baby child, a slight hiss behind Rogueboy made him turn and a holograph appeared of a man holding a woman and a gun pressed against her skull, Rogueboy fired hitting the man's hand and another shot at his head, a few seconds passed the seconds turned to minutes, Rogueboy lied down on his stomach and faced the only building where nothing came out of yet, five minutes passed until the door creaked open a horde of New Republic soldiers appeared, Rogueboy fired his carbine until he ran out of ammo and than pulled out his pistol and began firing, the holographs all disappeared and sweat began to drip down Rogue's forehead, the helmet was hot even though it had it's own air conditioning. Just than a beep came from Rogueboy's comlink, he pulled out his comlink and pressed the button to ok the message. "Private First Class Rogueboy, where are you?" It was Wociech. "I'm at the Ghost town like you told me to sir." Alex could hear the fury in Wociech's voice. "I told you to clear the town, are there any more holographs left?" Rogue winced at himself. "No sir, I do not." "Well than you better get your ass here now than."



Rogueboy double timed it back at base, where he saw Wociech drinking a coffee talking with a few other instructors, he spotted Rogue and waved him over. "Well Private First Class you get marks for your shooting skills but if I could I would take marks off for insubordination, fortunately for you I don't mark that, you know how it is you'll get your marks within the week, you might want to take a shower before you go, you smell worse than a bantha's rear end, have a nice day Private First Class."


 
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  RE: Raiders' Squad specialty Stories
August 8, 2006 8:18:59 PM    View the profile of Darr-Rann 
Communications Level One, Story One.

Installation, Utilization, and Operation of Communications Equipment

By Darr-Rann


Length, three-three and a quarter pages. Two pages of spec, on and a quarter of char dev.



Darr-Ran stood at the doorway, allowing the retinal scan to identify him. The door slid aside, the automated voice of the computer management system welcoming him as he walked into his mini-armory. Darr-Rann's accommodations were quite extravagant, a palace. Housing in the core systems Vast Imperial planets was almost impossible to buy. Like most people, his housing was rented from the     
government-ran Impericare program.

He payed for it with money inherited from his father. He was surprised to receive anything from the man who had disowned him as a son years ago, much less millions. Maybe his father regretted casting him out. Maybe he felt guilty about it. Darr-Rann shook his head. His father, his brother, he tried to forget the family conflicts which ruled a good part of his life. Their dead now, I'm still alive. I'm not going to dwell on things that passed.

He paused. He wouldnt forget those who he lost along the way. Sarah, his first love. He had moved on, but he would never be able to get over her loss, not entirely. Of his friends in the imperial resistance, only Keith remained. He would keep up their fight against the republic. Also, Evani, who since basic training had been his closest friend within the empire. He felt guilty for her death, but he knew she would want him to keep on living, and fighting.

Darr-Rann selected a Mynock silenced pistol, and a holster to clip to his belt. Today he was beginning his new specialty. He had finally left the medical program, opting for communications technician instead. He never liked the medical arts, but was forced into it by his father. It seemed like the practical   
course to take when he joined the Corps, but after serving in the empire for a time, he realized it wasn't what he wanted to do.

He had always been interested in computer technology, but never had access to it. His father believed it to be a distraction from his studies, and only allowed him to use the devices for the purposes of academics. When he left the medic profession, he decided to take up communications specialist, the beginning on the path towards becoming a "Slicer", a specialist who infiltrated enemy computer systems.

It wasnt easy to learn the use of computers after so many years of no access to them. Luckily, Kal had been on planetary leave at the time he had decided to take up the program, and had been able to tutor him in using a computer and some basic techniques. Now he was going to have his first class.

He picked up his datapad. It was a basic high-end commercial datapad, good, but nowere near as high in quality as the one he would receive in the comn tech program, and even worse compared to the computers slicers built. Still, it would do for the meantime.

When he reached his garage, he hopped on his speederbike, turning on the engine. He sped  forward, heading out of his property and towards the training academy.

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Darr-Rann opened up the classroom door, walking in and looking around. The room was empty except for one man who sat at the end of the room, behind the desk. He could see he wore the uniform of an instructor, and had the a rank insignia marking him as a Gunnery Sergeant. He walked up to the desk.

"Sergeant Darr-Rann, reporting for course on of communications technology." He said. The instructor looked up. Then let out a small grin.

"Most of the students that begin this thing are privates. This is certainly interesting." The instructor said, looking down to what Darr-Rann though to be a list of the students in the course.

"My Squad is currently on leave from duty, which leaves me time to take the courses and certify, sir." Darr-Rann said.

"Your a squad leader?" The instructor asked.

"Yes sir. Raiders Squad sir."

"Well," The instructor said, "As long as your in my classes you will be treated just like any other student, is that clear?"

"Yes sir." Darr-Rann said. The instructor dismissed him and he took his seat.

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When the other students had arrived, the class began. The Gunnery Sergeant, who identified himself as Instructor Matthews, got up from behind his desk, carrying a metal case with him.

"This is the omninode communications set." He said, opening the case. The device was roughly backpack sized, with shoulder straps. "This is the most commonly used communications in the corps. Can anyone tell me the advantages of using one of these sets?" A student raised his hand.

"It's easier to establish an uplink to command frequencies at longer range, sir?" The student asked.

"Dont question your own answer. If you know it, don't sound like you aren't sure, just give me the answer. Yes, thats one advantage of using the set. Anyone else?" Matthews said, looking around. Darr-Rann thought for a moment, then raised his hand.

"Yes Sergeant?" The instructor asked. The mention of his rank drew attention from around the room to him. The squad leader ignored it and answered.

"It can be used to set up private and encrypted communications. The communicator can be set to generate a random encryption set using it's encryption software, or an encryption set can be downloaded it. That encryption set is then downloaded to datacard and uploaded on to the squad's radios. Basically, any chatter on the pre determined frequency by the squad on their radios will be encrypted, basically coming out as gibberish on any radio without the encyption set." He paused for a moment, then continued. "Also, the communications are harder to detect because they are in a shorter range and have a weaker electronic signal then a standard communications structure or ship to planet transmission, sir."

The instructor stood there for a moment, thining over Darr-Ranns words. "Impressive, student. These sets are great for keeping your inter-squad talk between the squad, and away from your enemies. This course is Installation, Utilization, and Operation of Communications Equipment. Your going to learn how to set up and use one of these." He said, picking up the pack. He began to point out the individual parts of the set.

"This is the management computer. This will be your tool for managing your communications. If these computers ever fail, you'll find another panel below that with the old-fashioned manual adjustments." He flipped it around. "Against your back is the service panel. If you ever have a hardware difficulty with your pack, you can pop this thing open and take it apart." He pointed to the top. "This is the antenna. This thing will give you range. Generally, you wont need to extend the antenna more then a couple of  centimeters out of the pack unless your squad plans on moving a fair distance away."

He proceeded to explain the operation of the pack. "To turn it on, flip on the activation switch here. It will take a short time to power on mind you. Here at the computer panel you have a few options. The random-encryption software can be accessed here, as well as frequency detection and management software. Basically, there are programs for all of the tasks you need this thing for in here, and all are fairly simple for you to use once you learn how communications devices function.

"As I said before, you have your manual adjustment panel down here. These dials control frequency strength. These dials can choose a pre-set encryption, although that probably wont work if the computer isn't. And these switches over here choose the frequency type." They took about an hour to go into real depth about how the set functioned. Finally, the instructor decided they were ready.

"Time to take your practical exam."

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Each of the students was in a room. The rooms were small, only a couple of meters between each wall. Each had a table with a disabled communications set and a toolset.  The students had been locked in the rooms and given a three hour time limit. They would have to reassemble the disabled set, activate it, lock on to the frequency of the receiver outside of the door, and radio it the order to unlock using a basic encrypted frequency. If they didn't manage this within the time limit, they would fail the course.

Darr-Rann looked at the tools on the table, and then at the radio set. He put on a pair of static-resistant gloves and got to work. The computer hardware, the control panels, the antenna, and the battery pack, and the base of the set lay before him. He shrugged. "Might as well get to work..." He muttered to himself.

He picked up the base, then look out the antenna. He took a moment to locate the receiving piece in the
base, then placed the antenna to it. He took out a few of imperial-regulation x headed screws and his multi-type screwdriver, and secured it to the frame. He closed the base for a second and pulled the antenna open and closed, making sure it was put in right.

When he was satisfied, he picked up the battery, as he would need it installed to test the rest of the components. He found the slot for the battery, and placed it inside, using more screws to hold it in place. He took the computer hardware pack and slid it into the slot which it was to be held, then secured it as well. He took out a set of power-transfer wires and plugged them into the battery, then the computer set. He finally took the control panels. He placed the panels down onto into the openings on the other panel of the base, setting them so that they panels stuck out of the pack. He secured them in place finally. He took some more power wires and plugged them in from the battery to the panel. Then he took computer input/output cables and wired them from the hardware to the control panels, then closed the case.

"Please work." He said to himself, flipping the activation switch. The screen flickered on, and the words "Loading..." displayed on the screen. A few moments later his options flickered on the screen. He went to the frequency menus, then set it to the frequency the instructor had told him. He found one device releasing a small amount of output. He picked up his comlink.

"Password. Three. Fifteen. Three. Four. Thirteen." He said into the comlink which he had linked to the set. Nothing happened. After a short burst of swearing, he went and checked his set. Nothing is wrong... Why isn't it working?

He took a few moment to think then sighed when he realized the problem. He opened the encryption menu and activated the pre-programmed set. He activated the comlink again.

"Password. Three. Fifteen. Three. Four. Thirteen" He said. The door slid opened and he grinned. He hoisted the pack over his shoulder and walked out. The Gunnery Sergeant sat at a table, looking at one of three packs that already sat on the table. Fourth Out... Thats not bad for a first time. He set down the pack.

"I've finshed sir." The instructor looked up for a moment, then nodded. "Just leave it on the table. It has your name label on it, so I'll look it over and will probably have your resaults for you later today.

Darr-Rann walked out the room. It had been a good start on his path towards becoming a communications specialist.


Great Job Darr. I know I stepped into your Wildacrd specs Rizzit, but you've been really busy. I doubt you'll really mind. Keep up the good work Darr. I look forward to reading your next one, even if I'm not grading it.


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