Also sorry sirs, I couldn't help myself. I felt the need for speed as Than has so been begging for and had to post on the Mortain project.

Than, I disabled the Lance Frigate ship and had two NPC's killed, as you requested, with a third in tow, we just need people to finish it off and then move to the CR90. I hope this is what you were looking for. I told you I haven't quit, I'm just not as active as you would like.

It should all be quick kills from here on out. I'll post as needed. Thanks everyone for being patient with me.....

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FM/LCR/Etan Evnstar/Kaph/Flight 3/Atrus/off/VEN/VE/Aviation cetificate

Well Etan, the post was done well, but there are some mistakes you need to fix:

1)It was Will who said he didn't know much about the Lancer. My character actually knew a lot.

2)Just because the Shields dropped doesn't mean that the ship is disabled. I literally put a step by step plan in my last post on how we would disable it.

3)All cool on the NPC killing thing except you need to change "Kaph 9's" number designation to another since the Kaph 9 slot is already taken up by Skylla (my personal NPC which I've been putting a lot of character development into).

You also need to know that the CR90 has already been destroyed. I know there was no mention of it in your story post, but your post in this topic suggests you believe it is still in the sky.

It shouldn't take much to manipulate your post so that everything is consistent. But thanks for posting and I am happy you are working to get this Story done quickly. Bringing the Shields down really helped with that effort (even though your plan was originally more ambitious). I also apologize if some of my comments may have hurt. Part of my job is to "be the bad guy" when it is necessary.

Everybody

I may be late for hosting the meeting. I am going to be shooting projectiles at high speeds from an air cannon at my friends house (I know, amazing, I actually do have friends ).

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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

I think you need to be PO2 to write the SA, Etan.
 
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|WO2_Demonic/Reserves| (=*A*=)(=*SA*=)(=*ee*=)(VC:B)(MC2)(VEB)(DSM)(LoM)[SWC]{O1}-=TOP PILOT=-
SENIOR SERGEANT, SQUAD LEADER/ASSISTANT COMMANDER OF TRAINING
WARRANT OFFICER, 2ND CLASS
Communications Technician
Part time Webmaster Guy
"DICTATOR DARR"
Clearly Canadian!

Well, Etan. You do need Petty Officer 2nd Class to take the senior aviator's, and that comes from higher up than Than. Darr was just letting you know.
 
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FM/CRW Casca "Black Curse" Phennir/Nazgul Squadron 2-7/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF OFF/VEN/VE[VC:B][BWC]
SDJ-75-13

Etan, anyone can tell you that you need to be a PO2 in order to take the SA.  That is just a common piece of knowledge that does not require someone of any special rank to tell you.  In fact, you could have just looked it up on the VE wiki under the Naval Academy section.

There is no chain of command for giving basic information.  That would make VE the most inefficient bureaucracy possible.  Now relax and do a little research for yourself before you complain about things.

That's all.
 
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu

"Ultimate excellence lies not in winning every battle but in defeating the enemy without ever fighting." -- Sun Tzu

Clearly Canadian!

Yes Etan, your further elaboration after editing made it a better post over all.

As a note to the tension that broke out in this topic today, I am glad that Darr told you the PO2 thing because I over looked it.
 
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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

Okay, sorry guys. You are right in what you have said. Thank you for your explanations

It's just sometimes there does seem to be so many people trying to correct me on everything I do.

I have actually looked through the Archives, story boards, and personal histories and felt like telling everyone where they made mistakes, misspelling and syntax errors. But haven't.

I'm a really good editor. Just, not as good with my own stuff. You know the saying," You can't see the forest for the trees are in the way."

Once again, sorry, I don't know what PO2 means and haven't found it on the wiki site or anywhere right now or even really tried. All I have really been trying to do is write some halfway decent stuff to keep up with you all....
 
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FM/LCR/Etan Evnstar/Kaph/Flight 3/Atrus/off/VEN/VE/Aviation cetificate

Don't change it Etan. Dredj was moved to your position when he came back. It works out well having you in the Kaph 7 slot now for the story.

As for the PO2 thing, I hate to be critical but you reduce your chances of getting a promotion if you ask for one.
 
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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

Yeah, listen to Etan's post above and ignore my last post about position changes if you have read it already.
 
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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

Okay, is there anybody out there?

Not only was I the last to post on the Mortain project, but, one of the first things I was taught, was to post here first to let the rest of the squadron know what you are up to.

I always check here first before I do anything. And, I post if nessessary. Please don't tell me that Lance Frigate wiped everyone out but me.

I can't do this alone. Up till now I have only been feeding off of the storylines you have presented. Come on, Hellkite at least my old buddy???

So now, editing this post so I don't have to post again, I see Than has had to grab the flag and use his NPC Skylla to further OUR story. On the plus side, I see we have more post than the Nazgul squadron. On the minus is, WE could have more.

Sorry, but I get a little competitive when I'm supposed to be a part of an ELITE SQUADRON. When does the elite part start? Too many of you have shown me how good you are in ONE posting. How about trying two or three? This squadron is the best. Your posts are way better than mine when you read them. But if you don't continue to move the story along then what are they worth.

I know I have little reason to talk when I can be absent for a week. But, I try to make up for a week before and after I go. Some of you have been absent from the beginning.

Anyways, I'm not a leader here. Just a FM. At first I was intimidated by how good everyone was, and now, I'm discouraged by how everyone is.

Maybe, everything I am saying is uncalled for. But, I would rather be intimidated than discouraged.

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FM/LCR/Etan Evnstar/Kaph/Flight 3/Atrus/off/VEN/VE/Aviation cetificate

Yeah, sorry about that. I just got your PM today about it. Though if you meant from that one VE meeting, then I guess I didn't get that I was suppose to pass the word along. Again, sorry about that.

I've been nagging about posting for the whole rut (I've also kept posting during the rut).  I must say that the squadron is doing better. Everybody on the roster has been posting for about the last 2 to 4 weeks now. Not the best amounts per week, but better than it was. Though I can understand why you would want to kick it up a notch before the ESC. I'll send some PMs to a couple of the old Kaph members, that have army accounts, about the ESC. I'll also e-mail others who have left recently.


 
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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

Well now leave took a little longer then I expected and I see once again I am without a home. I will thank you for putting me in reserves instead of AWOL as that is bad news. So let's get geared back up for the ESC and such
 
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Will said he would be back in early June. Aristoc said he would probably be able to come back.
 
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EXO/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=MA=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV][MC:1][SWC]{VB}

--Temporary SC of Kaph

Never under estimate the power of stupid people in large numbers, unless you have a lot of cookies to throw in opposite corners to distract them.

In for a pound in for a ?? Oh heck I can't remember the old saying. I'm in..
 
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