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TRN /CRW C-3PX2 /Train'n Sqd , Not Placed /No Wing /No Ship /Train'n Flt /VEN /VE /(aviation certificates) , No Medals

Name: Etan Evnstar
age:29
Height:6'10"
Weight:195 lbs.
eye-color: dark-brown-almost black
Hair-color: Long flowing multi-colored brown with colors ranging from blonde to pitch black
Home world:
Piloting style: yet to be seen?

Physical description:

Etan is a well built Wookie with only one real distinguishing scar. A well -placed sword cut across his left ear has made,not so much a change in color but, a rift in his hair, that oh so playfully gives his appearance a more human-like quality. On more than one occasion, while on leave, females from all other species have wanted to run their hands through his long soft hair and play with him like their own personal toy. Which, of course, was to Etan's personal pleasure.

Emotional history:

Etan is a well tempered being, especially for a Wookie. Having grown up in a varied environment, Etan has learned to adjust well to all sorts of conflicts. I.E. He knows he's big. He knows he's strong. Why exploit that and not just live well knowing his strengths can and will get him out of most situations.

History:

To be a Wookie means to survive. And survival was what Etan was best at. His Grandfather was a General during the Clone Wars. His father was a pirate/mercenary/trader.

At the age of five Etan was sent to family friends to stay while his father was on business. Etan, named so by his surrogate family, learned to develop a Soloist attitude at a very young age.

Often times he would be recruited to go on trading missions with his human uncles Hans and Lans.There he was used as a decoy for their covert operations. Many a times they were boarded and inspected, by the Empire and then the Rebellion. Allot of their trade was to even bigger factions than them, i.e. the Hutts and so forth.

Etan played the part so well. As a young Wookie he excelled at being innocent. He would cry out at natural intervals in the conversations between his uncles and the inspection teams. Therein they were able to extract their trade. Weapons, medicines food and etc., were all traded by his uncles.

By the age of ten Etan had learned to fly. Uncle Hans had taken him in hand and made him an efficient pilot by any standard.By the age of fifteen Etan had become an accomplished pilot, flying blockades to take the heat of his uncles, who had more precious cargo.

It was not so long ago that Etan made his fated flight. His uncles had very important business they weren't allowed to discuss. They trusted Etan to deliver weapons to his worst enemies. The Wookie slavers.

It was at the age of twelve, that Etan was on a "trading mission" with his two uncles that he first encountered these so-called slavers. They caught him outside the bar his uncles were conducting their business in, and tried to capture him. He thinks the name of the bar was Yoder's, but, that's neither here nor there. Two were killed while one was wounded and the last two he evaded till his uncles were finished conducting their business.

Man, they weren't to happy when they came out. The last two slavers were never to be seen from again, either.

So Etan figured he had a handle on this. He had dealt with slavers before, and had precious cargo they had already contracted to buy. However, those slavers weren't so smart. They had a leak to the Empire and the mission was botched. Given a choice between giving weapons to his hated enemies and the Empire, Etan chose the Empire.

Imprisoned for a little while, Etan was soon approached by a wookie mediator who gave Etan the choice of prison or working for the Empire. Etan chose properly.

Given his size the Empire would have rather had Etan join the Stormtroopers. However, given his flight knowledge and knowledge of the underground, they thought it best to employ him in a Naval intelligence sort of way. Therefore, Etan is enrolled in the Naval Academy.

To be continued.

Grammar, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.?

Thanks Cleaf, for all your advice.

I wasn't finished with my bios yet. It was just a rough start.

I like the  way we can go back and re-edit  almost  forever.

Sorry about  the Historical character  reference. You have to realize I'm a huge Star Wars fan, and that kinda crinked my whole story. Guess I'll have to  start over.

Once, again thanks for all your advice.  Here I  go again.
 
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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand. 

To whom it may concern,

I guess this means you Cleaf, sir. But, it applies to anyone who will answer.

I don't like the way I've started and would like to start over again with a new name and angle.If that is possible?

I saw C-3PX2, and his profile and thought it was really cool. You said we couldn't be high profile STAR WARS figures. However ,he is an extension of the C3PO series. Can I be his kinda counterpart? Maybe a R280zx?

It's just I don't like being like everyone else. If so, I will need some help with some research. However, I have a good story base.
 
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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand. 

Yes sir,

That was the whole idea.

I realize droids are limited in capabilities. However, I thought this could be an advanced droid, with advanced thinking, just as C3PX2 is. Maybe not as smart as him, but if you watch R2D2 in the Revenge of the Sith, he almost has human like qualities.

This droid would not just be an assistant pilot but be able to completely pilot any starship immediately upon interfacing with it.

The R280ZX would be limited only by it's bleeps, blips and whirls which any protocol droid would be able to translate. And I still, as storyteller, have the power to narrate.If you really have watched all of the Star Wars movies you would see how even a simple R2 unit like R2D2 has the capacity to think and control it's own destiny.

I think I'm up to it, but I will need help.

Also I see the AEGIS squadron has a character development post. If I could start my new character and develop it there for the help and research I need, that would be great.

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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.?

Etan, Aegis has been temporally closed down. But i'm sure you're welcome to post any character develpment storiesh here or a separate topic in the story boards after you graduate.
 
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-(William the Conquerer)-
Elite Squadron Commander
King of PPC
"Lives are created to be ended, just as rules are made to be broken." -- Unknown, probably me
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Etan that's a good question and I am not sure. You can change thins under profile but not your name. If you e-mail Kadann and ask him about changing your name he owns the site.
 
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EFM/CPO/Cyleaf Aehait/Kaph 2-6/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=*A*=)(=*SA*=)[BWC]

Yeah, thanks Shazam.

I had already nixed the R2 programm after I thought about what Cyleaf, and Wiltcounq had said about it being so difficult.

I do think, that with more experience, I could pull it off.

My R2 unit would replace all existing droids, and be the most advanced droid ever. However, at this time and age, I think I should just stay to the basics.

I am having some difficulty with what I consider to be a good story line. But, I'm not ready to ask for help yet. Lemme think some more.

#1 You have to understand, please, I don't like being like everyone else.#2 I have looked at alot of profiles and man they were all good. I just want to be just as good.

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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.

Thanks Cyleaf,

And that was probably the best advise so far. A Wookie eh, How about the language barrier?

I had an angle on being a human raised by Wookies ,but, not a wookie myself, mmmm?

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Thanks again Cyleaf,

Check out  my  updated profile  now and  tell me if it's a good start.

Also, two more things, Do you remember the name to the wookie homeworld, and how do I message Jaden to ask for the info you were describing?

And sorry for mispelling your name so much.

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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.

I think I accidentally messaged you twice, but once again to re-itterate, thanks man Wookipedia is awesome.

Garet,  your the  coolest

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Grammer, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.

Okay, I think I finally did it. I'm still not happy with the final story, but I want to get through with this as much as you do me.

I was so P.O.ed earlier I had spent an hour finalizing my BIOS and when I hit edit somehow I was kicked off the site and had to start all over again.

Like I said, I'm not completely happy with this BIOS, but, will it do for now. Just to move me on to the next step.




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Grammar, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.

Just wanted to stop in and say nice bio Etan, it's good and original. Keep up the good work and you'll be in a sqaud in no time.
 
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EFM/CPO/Cyleaf Aehait/Kaph 2-6/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE/(=*A*=)(=*SA*=)[BWC]

Deleted narrative. It wasn't conducive to the subject at hand. What I was trying to say is, hope you don't mind the intro to my maneuvers. A very short story further explaining my role here. And my experience or lack thereof.

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Grammar, mechanics, punctuation, spelling, diction, effectiveness in the science, and larger elements are the facts at hand.

Let us just take the simple maneuvers that I have just used in my last story line. #1 a barrel roll: is where a simple ship completes a series of rolls to elude the attacking ship or ships i.e. The beginning of the Revenge of the Siths. # 2 the Immellman, where as a defending ship does a slight roll and then a total bear up and around as to end up on the rear of the enemy. Lemme know if this is sufficient
 
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