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Rizzit
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  Prefect Story Notes
April 10, 2005 10:44:33 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Okay everyone let's post the notes for the story here instead of using mass OOC: remarks. This is a very important story, and I don't want to see Fury's name shamed by you guys: so let's make sure we do this one right. I dont want filler posts: there will be no card playing, dice rolling, holochess playing, just sitting down and talking on the way down to the planet.
There will also be no packing posts. All your gear is packed, we just need to take off.

I want to see good, quality posts. I won't be checking over posts before you post them or anything like that. But please: write with care and be as specific as you can be. I may ask you to change something, but no more than that. Again: we're doing this mission for Fury. It's a really big mission, so don't blow it. Don't make me, or more importantly: Fury ashamed of you.

But hey: we should be able to not only accomplish this mission but have a lot of fun writing it. Do good work, and make your superiors proud.
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
Angel
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 10, 2005 11:54:02 PM    View the profile of Angel 
Rizz...where's Bob?
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 9:32:18 AM    View the profile of Rizzit 
For some odd reason: Cy's looking after him. (No, Cy is not in the story. It was brought out earler that Bob was hangin' with Cy) Far be it from me to seperate the two, but if you want to bring him along with us: just write him in like he was there. We're still on the Dominion, and I never specified who was in the room. However, this is who's included

-All of IH
-All of DD
-All of Wraiths
-Merrick, Rizzit, Kiara, and Frog
-Bob (optional)
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
[This message has been edited by Rizzit (edited April 11, 2005 9:48:45 AM)]
Kairo
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 11:22:27 AM    View the profile of Kairo 
Don't mind this. I had a stupid question.
 
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[This message has been edited by Kairo (edited April 11, 2005 12:24:56 AM)]
Angel
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 6:28:05 PM    View the profile of Angel 
erm...I know you like to move quickly Kairo, but in a 250 word post you moved the entire mission waaaay forwards. As far as I know we aren't on a time limit here...so i was thinking maybe we should slow it down a little and develop the story, rather than the usual 2 pages and done that has become the standard of Army storylines lately...

One more thing. Bimissari is NOT under an hour jump away from VE space. We're almost in the unknown regions, close to Bakura and Endor. Bimissari is an outer rim world...ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE GALAXY click on SE quadrant and click on the area around Tammar
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
[This message has been edited by Angel (edited April 11, 2005 6:51:55 PM)]
Kairo
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 7:21:43 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
Angel, Rizz said for us to move out in his post, so I figured he wanted us to get one the transport. All I did was get us to the hanger and on the transport. Rizz said he didn't want any filler posts. I saw him on IRC after I posted it and he said it was fine. I really didn't move us that much farther. And people. I have spoken with Rizzit on how we were getting to the planet. All the squads were going to be moved to the planet on the transport, not Dominion. Plus our equipment was going to be drop shipped down to the planet, and we would then land near them and get inside our vehicles. So, um, Rizz, which way are we going to do it now, since there have already been two posts which have differed from the original idea?
 
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Senior Sergeant Kairo
Squad Leader
*DarkDragoons*

SL/SR.SGT Kairo/2SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [CDS][BoA][CoR]
[This message has been edited by Kairo (edited April 11, 2005 8:12:58 PM)]
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 8:27:01 PM    View the profile of Squall 
Well, I can go ahead and edit my post so that we are not going to be directly moving from the transport in the AT-ST's, we could use that way where the Lambda class shuttle has that big barge, and drops the AT-ST's off in that.  Either way, let me know so that I can edit my post up.
 
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Squall Lionheart
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*DarkDragoons*
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Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 10:02:05 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
I said: to move out. That means get off the dominion. I'm going to side with angel on this: While the story is on a time limit: we are not (in real-time). Even though we're in a rather-large transport: we still need to target several nav bouys along the way. (For those that dont know a nav bouy is a hyperspace jump point.) We can't make a direct jump to Bimmisarri. I am going to commend you for your work at posting, but please remember that we don't want a story showing no failure. That's just unrealistic. Stories should show as much realism as possible, more so important ones. Squall: I'm going to ask that you delete your post. Squall, if you want to catch me online we can work out a way to edit your post as much as possible. We're already on-planet that's okay. But I wanna stretch our timeframe out a bit further than 42 minutes. I'm sorry to make you do this, but there is a pretty high standard set for you guys here. Kuroishi: we gotta talk too! You're in tanks, not walkers.

I'm going to ask that until this mess gets straightened out, that NO ONE post on the story
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
[This message has been edited by Rizzit (edited April 11, 2005 10:34:09 PM)]
Angel
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 11, 2005 10:30:23 PM    View the profile of Angel 
oh Dai, you're in Tanks with IH, not the AT-STs with Dragoons aren't you?
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 12, 2005 3:11:23 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
1)  Wouldn't we drop the Tanks and Walkers at the same time?

2) Did I say we were riding the Walkers?

I'm pretty sure if you read through what I posted while I may be a bit unclear that we're reffering to the over all operation but that is what is happening in my post.

You did say use the time to plan tactics.
 
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Kuroishi Wraith VEA
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Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 12, 2005 3:16:51 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Sorry, I thought you were referring to the vehicles you were riding in. My bad.
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 12, 2005 3:25:52 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
I cleared it up a bit, I think.  My fault for poor word choice.

Hopefully my squad will start trickling in here eventually.
 
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Kuroishi Wraith VEA
Daishi Raptor VEN
Assistant Writer Why Project Copyright Infringment
Described as Psychoticly Depraved
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Nehmen mir zu dein frauen von vernunftig preis tugendhafte.
"And the sound of many heads hitting many solid objects was heard throughout the land." me
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"It's not what I'm on it's what I'm NOT on."-far as I know me
"Now equiped with Swiss Army Lightsaber!"
Angel
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 12, 2005 3:45:19 PM    View the profile of Angel 
nvm.

I thought you said you were riding in the walkers sorry. 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
[This message has been edited by Angel (edited April 12, 2005 3:46:42 PM)]
Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 12, 2005 11:34:42 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Okay guys. You're good to go. From now on: if you're unsure of something, please check with someone. Once more I apologize for the small delay of story. The hyperspace jump has now increased to 17 hours.
 
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
[This message has been edited by Rizzit (edited April 13, 2005 9:33:57 AM)]
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 11:07:55 AM    View the profile of Angel 
That's still rather short. Sorry to nitpick, but a cross-galactic jump would have at least 4 legs since none of the major tradelanes run that way. Also it would take days, possibly as long as a week, to make this trip.

Sorry for the nitpicking again, I'v just had realism pounded into my skull a few too many times by scary dark jedi.
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 2:13:26 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Angel: take it up with Kad. Kad's the one that provided the timeframe.
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
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Army of the Vast Empire
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 4:48:35 PM    View the profile of Angel 
/me shuts up.
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 7:40:55 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Kairo: can you edit the post a bit. 90% of it is good, I just need you to change EVERYBODY moving out to just you and me moving out. I believe I said: "Let's go do some scouting around." Just so we can do a quick sweep of the surrounding area to get an idea of where we're heading. Cause like you said in your posts: we have to protect the tanks, not follow them. Plus, Squall's buddy needs some more practice time. I'd like to slow things down just a bit more than usual story progress (referring to real time, not story time). That way there's time for character development: plus, gives us a chance for a real story (not to mention more activity)
 
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Army of the Vast Empire
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 8:04:09 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
Sorry about that. I'll change it. I can do that really easily.
 
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*DarkDragoons*

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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 9:57:45 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
I'll try to restrain myself but it won't be easy with how boring and slow it is at work.
 
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 9:59:18 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
I'm not talking about going THAT slow
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 13, 2005 10:21:27 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
Fortunately for you there is only about 25 minutes left in my shift.

Tommorrow I have only classes.  Friday, Saturday, and Sunday I probably won't write.

Fortunately I'll have a few projects to start slowing me down here shortly.
 
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Kuroishi Wraith VEA
Daishi Raptor VEN
Assistant Writer Why Project Copyright Infringment
Described as Psychoticly Depraved
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Nehmen mir zu dein frauen von vernunftig preis tugendhafte.
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"It's not what I'm on it's what I'm NOT on."-far as I know me
"Now equiped with Swiss Army Lightsaber!"
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 14, 2005 7:50:22 AM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Kami, do you mind waiting for Kairo and I to get back to our base before you move everyone else to the enemy base? Currently: we're off scouting. We're almost back to base. So...a few changes need to be made accordingly. Talk to me more on this if you can.
 
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Major Rizzit BlackHeart
Wildcard Platoon Commander
Army of the Vast Empire
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Everything expressed truly from your heart and soul is as pure as gold in the minds of anyone who listens!"--Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 14, 2005 9:11:45 AM    View the profile of Kami 
I knew you didn't want to push the story along so I kinda have everyone in transit. We can drive along for a little longer...admire the view or something?

I dunno
 
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 14, 2005 12:50:22 AM    View the profile of Angel 
Just curious as to why you two went out scouting...alone...
 
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=[Arrogant Elitist]= Iron Horse Squad
TRP/SGT Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/1SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE/Tadath [LoR] [RoM] [BC] [CDS] {BoA}
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=[Dark Knight of the Sith]= Eagle Sect
CM/DJK Jikkyo "Angel" Nimiichi/Eagle =1-1/Sith/VEDJ/VE/Lopen [VP:1]

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Fallen....only to rise.
Risen...only to fall.
The circle is now complete.
The Angel of Death has returned.
Kairo
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 14, 2005 1:43:41 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
I don't know exactly, Rizzit was the one started it. Probably to see if there were any imcoming forces that saw us land.
 
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Senior Sergeant Kairo
Squad Leader
*DarkDragoons*

SL/SR.SGT Kairo/2SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [CDS][BoA][CoR]
[This message has been edited by Kairo (edited April 14, 2005 1:44:33 PM)]
Rizzit
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 14, 2005 5:32:27 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Wow...he hit the nail on the head. Yeah, basically to see if anyone had seen us land.
 
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 15, 2005 1:25:52 AM    View the profile of Cyanus 
Bob isn't with me. I'd know if a Guardsman is following me, fool.
 
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 15, 2005 8:51:20 AM    View the profile of Otto Vox 
Just because I've been out of the loop for a while: who the hell is Bob?

Oh and Rizz, I think it would've been funny if you'd put that Zafo and Gio were the ones in the wobbling AT-ST. All I could think of when reading your post was this:

"Well, Gio and Zafo I'm assuming got started to give Squall an idea of what he's doing wrong."

Rizzit rolled his eyes. "Heck, anyone can tell when the walker's ready to fall over you're doing it wrong."

"Actually... Squall's in the good one."




But I guess that's just me.
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  RE: Prefect Story Notes
April 15, 2005 9:20:04 AM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Quote Originally posted by: Cyanus

*Just got recruited by Bob the Royal Guard on a mission behind enemy lines* Well, guess somebody has to keep an eye on him. No telling what he'll do to get back at the hunter for hurting him badly. I bet I'll reach Fury before you all even finish your first sabacc game.

Hmmm....between that and *Cyanus stops talking with Bob to glare at Rizzit. and other such IRC comments, I assumed he was with you. My bad: thought he was with you.
 
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