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January 9, 2007 5:17:34 PM    View the profile of Tnepres 
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You've read it on #Serpent_Cove's Topic.  You've heard it while eavesdropping on story planning conversations.  You've heard people talk about how excited they were about it.  And now, it's here!  StarCraft:Trial By Fire is a story by post set in the Starcraft Universe after the original game that leads into Brood War.  An Introduction has been posted soon.  It's easy to join.

Notes:

1. Just because this is not a squad mission does NOT mean you are exempt from making quality posts.  Not chatspeak, no L337, no stupidity.  Standard English is recommended.  I can not stress this enough.

2. Garet will help moderate this story a bit. 

3. No knowledge of Starcraft is needed as much will be explained.  It is advised you wiki Starcraft if you are unsure of details.

4. No posting on the story until further notice.  The introduction is there for simple reading while the final details are finished.

5. A post on the selectable character types will be up soon.


For now those are the rules.  Updates will happen and notices will be posted if there are any.  For now, if you are interested you many post below to say it.

Garet, you don't have to but if you want to, go ahead.

Credit for the Intro and the Terran intro goes to Garet.




Update #1: January 10, 2007

Below is a character creation guide.  It is very vague as I didn't have much time.  More will be added later, such as protoss pilots and zerg units.  Below is a link from which the information was extracted from.  It is highly recommended you use the information below to pick a general idea of what you want to write as and then looked into it further by going to the link below.

http://homepage.mac.com/cheethorne/conversions.htm#starcraft

Terran:

    The Terran Dominion has a wide variety of specializations for it's men. 

Infantry:

    Regular army men deployed on the everyday battlefield.  They were standard armor and have standard equipment so there are some variants.

    Marines(Privates):

    Armor 
        Weight- 60 pounds
        Reasonable Mobility
        Performance Enhancing Drug Injector

    Usual Weapon: Gauss Rifles



    FireBats(Corporals):

    Armor-
        Basically, an enhanced, heavier version of the marines armor equipped to support the trooper's flamethrower.

    Usual Weapon: FlameThrower



    Medics:

    Armor-
        A lighter version of the armor equipped with medical equipments.  White in color.

    Usual Weapon: None


    Ghost(Specialists):

    Armor-
        A lighter and stealthier suit.  It is equipped with a huge amount of special features.  Only troopers with at least a slight telepathic sense can be Ghosts.

    Usual Weapon: C-10 Canister Rifle
            (Newly added, some ghosts have more enhanced guns that have multiple functions such as grenade launching, lockdown capable(the ability to lock down mechanical objects), sniping and anti-armor.)


Pilots:

    The Dominion possesses several vehicles and ships that need piloting.

    Goliath  A mobile walker equipped with dual machine guns and anti-air rockets.
    Vulture Speeder Bike- A speeder bike, fast and has the ability to lay mines along with some minor weapons.
    Arclite Siege Tanks  A tank, in short.  It contains the special ability to switch to it's secondary cannon, and while bracing itself to the ground delivers long range heavy fire.
   

    Ships-
    Wraith Fighters- General fighters equipped with burst lasers for ground, and missiles for air.
    Drop Ship- an unarmed or poorly armed armored transport ship.
    Battlecruiser  These are huge ships, manned by an equally huge crew.

   



Protoss

    The Protoss military contains advanced technology and provide highly advantageously powerful armor and weapons.

    Zealot:

    The average protoss warrior.  A relatively medium armor that has leg enhancements and plasma shields.  Each arm is armed with a psiblade.

    Dragoon:

    A four legged shell that resembles an animal.  Veterans or injured Protoss who wish to continue fighting but lack the physical condition needed to continue reside in a metallic shell controlling the dragoons every move.  The dragoon is armed with a phase disrupter cannon.

    The Templar Caste-

    High ranking Protoss rarely engage in hand to hand fighting.  Instead, some decide to lend their strength through the practice of psionic magic such as calling electrical storms.  Their armor is light as they refuse to wear anything that may disrupt their psionic energy.

    Archons-

    Two templars may give up their life to merge into a weapon of distruction.  Engulfed in energy field, the Archon uses heavy psionic blasts, acting as a demolitionist.

    The Dark Templar Caste-

    Fomerly banished brethrens of the Protoss, they have now joined the fight against the zerg.  Their new technology introduces the shadow warriors.  These are armed with powerful warp blades which surpass the psiblades in strength.  However, their armor provides less protection though they make up for it with a personal cloaking system.

    The Dark Archons-

    The creations of these powerful entities were once outlawed though times of stress has forced the Protoss to suspend these laws.  The Dark Archons do not attack directly but rather use powerful mental abilities such as the ability to briefly control another being.  (Archons and Dark Archons are not recommended as they are unintelligent and serve just as a weapon.  Of course, if you are comfortable with the concept, I don't object to it.)
       

The Zerg

The Zerg swarm has incorporated many species since it's rise.  It's swarm consists of the most deadly and feral of beasts.

Zergling- Small, quick and deadly.  Though they are not the mosty enduring, they can easily tear troopers to shreds with their two deadly foreclaws. 

Hydralisks- They consist the bulk of the swarm army.  They are highly volatie, armed with deadly claws as well as the ability to shoot poisonous spines from their carapace.

Mutalisk- Fast-flyers.  They breed special glave worms which they shoot out at incredible speeds as an attack.  These worms break off into smaller pieces, hitting things nearby as well.

Guardian- Slow by powerful.  Resembling a flying spider, the Guardian bombards the ground with toxic spores.  They are borne from mutalisks.

Devourers- Also born from mutalisks, they can shoot out clouds of toxic spores that corrode the armor of enemy ships.

Lurkers- An advanced breed of the Hydralisks, they dig into the ground with their claws and then shoot a row of subterranean spines.  These rip through unsuspecting enemies, killing them.

Ultralisks- Heavily Armored Melee Units.  They resemble biological tanks, able to endure a seemingly unreal amount of punishment.  They are armed with huge kaiser blades on their forearms which they use to rip through metal and flesh alike.  They also to trample anything smaller than them.

Defilers- non combat support.  They can secret certain poisons that help their allies or hurt their enemies.  They are also cannabalistic, preying on other Zerg to recover their health or energy.

Queens- Troops that help hives  in growth and production.  They can spread parasites, shoot out eggs at speeds that destroy things instantly which then hatch into broodlings and also slow enemies down with a powerful sticky green goo.

Overlords-  They are commanders of small swarms and also provide transport.  They hover over enemies, detecting what is usually invisible to the naked eye.


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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
[This message has been edited by Tnepres (edited January 10, 2007 5:16:37 PM)]
[This message has been edited by Tnepres (edited January 11, 2007 5:13:07 PM)]
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January 9, 2007 6:47:13 PM    View the profile of Rayden Shiong 
I am SO in.
 
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January 9, 2007 8:45:21 PM    View the profile of Krius 
wow I just read the intro and all I have to say is that I'm in. Good intro guys its awesome.
 
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January 10, 2007 5:17:22 PM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Update 1 is up.  I didn't have too much time, more will be added later.  For now, start planning.
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 11, 2007 10:52:50 AM    View the profile of Leon 
Yea I think I'm most likely going to be a Protoss. Which characters, I dunno yet, still gotta decide which one is the coolest I might be able to get a post out today if you guys can post. (Tnepres) What ever I'll see, and is there a bio you want us to create? I mean it would only make sense. Just lemme know later on IRC or something.
 
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January 11, 2007 5:15:45 PM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Added Zerg.

As for bios, you may do one and post one here if you wish.  It is not a necesity as I am confident in everyone's writing ability.  Because of this, if you are comfortable with introducing your character through the post like a book would, be my guest.

If you have questions or if you wish to be something that i have not listed in the character creation, PM me or catch me on IRC.  Garet is allowed to answer your requests as well.
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 11, 2007 7:05:17 PM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Post will be up in a couple of minutes.  You guys are free to post now, and if you're fast enough, before I do too.  If you are Terran, I would ask Garet for his ideas cause i think he has an idea for the storyline. 
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 11, 2007 8:56:19 PM    View the profile of D'har Leth 
I'm in.  I think I'll be marine.
 
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January 11, 2007 9:30:41 PM    View the profile of Yoder 
Im in as long as you don't require to long of posting. I'll be the first ghost, since I love stealth.
 
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January 11, 2007 10:24:30 PM    View the profile of Rayden Shiong 
If possible I should like to be an Infested Terran like Kerrigan. I don't want to have my own brood or anything, but if one were to play as the Zerg I'm sure they would like to be somthing that isn't a mindless Zerg creature, like a Zergling.
 
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January 11, 2007 10:31:25 PM    View the profile of Garet Daimun 
Right, that's what you'd have to be. You'd have to be someone like Duran (if you've ever played the game's campaign). Duran was an Infested Terran who spied on the UED for Kerrigan.
 
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January 12, 2007 12:38:45 AM    View the profile of Rayden Shiong 
yeah, sorry. I forgot all about Duran XD Haven't played in awhile.
 
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January 12, 2007 8:08:17 PM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Mindless isn't that boring to play =).  I might do some posts in a zergling or something's point of view.
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 12, 2007 10:32:11 PM    View the profile of Rayden Shiong 
From what I know they have no PoV, lol. I mean, their animals, meaning that they more then likely can't really "think", but rather use instincts.
 
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January 12, 2007 10:34:56 PM    View the profile of Garet Daimun 
I think Raiden's right. They're controlled by the overminds.
 
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January 13, 2007 9:27:08 AM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Yea, he is,  They're under cerebrate/overmind/queen/overlord control.  When theyre not, they are in chaos, especially with IQs of 2s and 6s.
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 13, 2007 9:43:27 AM    View the profile of derf96 
is it like old starcraft. or is it like starcraft2
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January 13, 2007 9:54:57 AM    View the profile of Garet Daimun 
THis pretty much takes place at the end of StarCraft/the beginning of Brood War.

And anyone interested in playing as Terran, e-mail/pm who you're going to be, I'll write the intro post on Monday or Tuesday.
 
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January 13, 2007 10:16:07 AM    View the profile of Tnepres 
Bah, was just going to tell you to ><.

Well now that that's done.  Anyone who wants to use protoss are free to post, choose a side, introduce your character, whatever.

Zerg are good to post as well.

As for posts, a little review:

400 word min, 500 word recommended.  It's alright if you do something under, just dont make it a habit.  Make your posts well thought out.

READ PAST POSTS BEFORE POSTING!  I don't care if some posts are 7 pages long.  Writing here is not a right, if you're going to not read the other posts and post something that completely messes up the story line then i'll bite your head off ><.  If you post a long post, you can post a summary on this thread if you feel like being nice.  In case others don't have time to red it.


 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
Happy Holidays! Cause Wraith is going to leave you others in the dust for the HSC
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January 13, 2007 10:23:46 AM    View the profile of derf96 
im going to be the zerg! zerg are so cool!
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January 13, 2007 11:45:39 PM    View the profile of Rayden Shiong 
Hm... well, I've made y decision.

I.Will be. A Zergling.
 
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January 14, 2007 10:52:30 AM    View the profile of Tnepres 
/me stamps approval with glee.

This will be interesting...
 
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In the brightest light,
We find darkness...

-=Wraith Squad=--=TRP=-
TRP/PFC Tnepres/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE[LoR]
Memoirs of a Withered Soul- Compendium of Short Stories on Talstorin's Background/Story of Talstorin and Durandal( out now- read it on army story board)
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im going to be Infested Terran like Kerrigan so cool. fun
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