marcus oredius
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new
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July 2, 2006
2:16:24 PM
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ok 1m 30 years old a little big for the cockpit type of person. 
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Jack Nebulax
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RE: new
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July 2, 2006
2:51:49 PM
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[This message has been edited by
Jack Nebulax
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DJ234
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RE: new
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July 2, 2006
9:22:20 PM
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Welcome to the Vast empire.
no one's ever too old to join.
Ha Raigen missed your chance to be the first one ----------------------- Aegis Squad
I think war might be God's way of teaching us geography~Paul Rodriguez
If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the result of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy, for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat. If you know neither the enemy nor yourself, you will succumb in every battle.
- Sun Tzu
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XO/FL/PO2 DJ234/Aegis-5/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN/VE (=A=) (=SA=) [VC:B]
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Atrick25
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RE: new
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July 2, 2006
10:09:08 PM
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Welcome to the VE! Enjoy your stay! ----------------------- NazgulSquadron
FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~
Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)
Why does Darth Vader want cookies?
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marcus oredius
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RE: new
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July 3, 2006
6:52:39 PM
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now what do 1 do. being a newbie is sort of fun but it would be better if i had some directions.
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Shiric
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RE: new
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July 3, 2006
7:11:51 PM
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Feel free to start your own bio, just click on the avaters in this post to get a more specivic idea on what to include in your character's history.
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Atrick25
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RE: new
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July 3, 2006
7:17:33 PM
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You must wait for your training officer, Shazam, to come post in this thread. But you could get started on a bio. That includes things such as:
Physical Desription such as Eye Color, Height, Weight, and Real Name. (You can include other things too like your Species, languages spoken, planet born on, and any distingushing charecteristics.)
Historical Facts which is the history of your character and working up to him joining the VE.
Any other information you wish to include.
Hope this helps. ----------------------- NazgulSquadron
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~Leading Crewman Atrick25~
Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)
Why does Darth Vader want cookies?
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marcus oredius
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RE: new
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July 5, 2006
9:39:41 AM
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hey my name is marcus  aka 0smail (samuel)
bio of my character.
Marcus was born in the imperial center but not in its housings but in the slums . as the slang goes I was invisible for a long time . the creatures there were different than any other me being human mostly bothered them why had my mother gave berth to me there I do not know dont remember her. I had basic training before my teens and some other training.
the day I was 18 0mperial years I saw the ad. ever since Ive looked at it. it was like a force feild a magnetic anomaly pulling me to it. at nights 1 would wake up and go look at. I had become obsesed withj the ad.
days turned to months . months turned to years when I looked 1 saw I was 21 and no life . then 1 decided I would leave the invisibility and return to my people and honor my self in their presence. so I got out of the bed took nothing with me and moved out walked all the way to the nearest recruitment center . and entered a booth here I was at home...
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RE: new
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July 5, 2006
12:34:04 AM
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marcus oredius... like marcus orilius the roman emperor?
anyway welcome the the empire recruit. story posts are this a way-> and lounge posts are that a way => and stupid posts are right here <= where ever you see my name
welcome ----------------------- Raigen vs. Them
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Atrick25
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RE: new
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July 7, 2006
7:35:01 PM
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Things to make it better:
Check for grammar and spelling. Running it through a word processor usually helps.
Write out small numbers like "1" (one) "2" (two) and so on.
The physical descriptions I mentioned before.
Maybe switch to third person writing? It's easier that way.
Add more details to you're history. It's good for a base, but expand on it. Tell of you're childhood, you're training, how you felt, etc. It's good to have details.
And as Shazam would say...
Rock on! ----------------------- NazgulSquadron
FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~
Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)
Why does Darth Vader want cookies?
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Shazam
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
9:26:27 AM
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Howdy- I'm the commander of Training and thus- you're trainer. As of right now you are a part of our academy family, better known as Venom Squadron. There is a thread on the Main ComNet for communication between Academy members you may use if you so choose. Anywho, you are currently in Flight School, a latter part of Basic Training- from here we will prepare you for a squadron. The process takes a little under a week if you stay consistant, but you need to be trying or it could take longer.
Right off we're going to create your character- follow the link below to be taken to Flight School. From there read Chapter 1: Character Creation and then post your bio on this thread. I'll critque it then; perhaps look at some other bios around here.
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I see you've already started on one, which is righteous, but I'd still like you to take a look at that site so you can get some ideas and all see what's mandatory. Everything Atrick mentioned is correct- when he says expand I would like you to focus primarilly on why your character joined the VEN. He just wanted to get out of the slums and prove that he could be honorable like the Coruscant higherarchy? Also, you like to put the letter 'o' in place of the letter 'I' for a lot of things. You may want to work on that  So- get those corrections made and let us know- we'll be glad to help you from there. Rock On.
http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29
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CMDR/LtC Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]
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marcus oredius
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
12:43:47 AM
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firstly OUT of CHaracter I would like to say that Im turkish and use a turkish keyboard we have two sets of i's
a) i
b) 1
please post which one is ok
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Jack Nebulax
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
12:45:19 AM
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
12:47:20 AM
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a) because b) looks like a 1 one ----------------------- He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
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marcus oredius
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
12:53:06 AM
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thank you
another question
when we buf from the imperial center shop what happens do we gain any pofit from it as it waits in our possesions or can we use it in someplace
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
12:59:44 AM
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The Imperial center shop sells stuff that your character "owns" when you buy something it shows in your bank under possessions, I personally use what I buy in my posts, you will not hear me use a weapon that I have not bought. ----------------------- He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
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marcus oredius
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
1:07:31 PM
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how do you use it in the posts
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Rogueboy
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RE: new
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July 8, 2006
1:10:39 PM
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lets say i bought two SH-9 pistols, I will say my character pulled dual SH-9s and ....blah blah blah ----------------------- He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
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