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Evani
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  Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 3, 2006 1:23:38 PM    View the profile of Evani 
"So where are we going again?"
Evani yawned tiredly as she trudged with Jenny down the Dragoons ' barracks.
"Shh, we don't want to wake the rest of the squad," muttered Evani slightly agitated. It was 4 AM the morning. With her nocturnal habits she wouldn't normally be weary this time of the day, but they returned from their mission yesterday, and she was still in bandages.

"So, where are we going again?" asked the twilek in a hushed voice this time,
"To the Raiders, going to pick up Slick, thought it would be nice for you to train with old timer Lancers" replied Evani as they stepped outside the barracks. As the door hissed close Evani risked raising her voice.

"I've wanted to spend the first few hours of the Simulator alone with you to see how well you progress, and how we can improve you there where its needed," Evani quickly slipped through another long corridor which blazed with light. Jenny stayed quick on her heels.

"Best timing ever Hell" muttered Slick tiredly while rubbing his eyes with his fists. Through the windows beams of suns shimmered through clouds and trees illuminating the corners untouched by the artificial light.

After they shared a quick breakfast Slick and Evani lead Jenny to one of the many simulator rooms found in the academy.  As they stepped inside a technician aged in his late teens was already situated at the consoles ready to assist them. 

"Your name?" asked Evani while she seated her self lazily in one of the stairs

"Lance Corporal Jess, Sergeant" answered the technician stiffly as he jumped to a salute.
"A Lance Corporal? Well, the twilek at my side is a Lance Corporal as well, Jennabelle, and the grump here is Sergeant Slick, former Squad Leader of Lancer Squad, the formidable Raiders, and now Squad leader of Wraith." Said Evani gesturing to Slick and Jenny.

"So what do you have in mind Sarge?" asked Slick curiously after a few moments. Evani jumped up from her daze and bolted to the consoles' side.
"I've went through some logs of the simulators that was designed here, one I really liked was that of Senior Sergeant Cyanus, it was training sim for Raiders, ended in bit of disaster though" muttered Evani oblivious to the rest of the room's nervous glance as she continued.
"What he designed is amazing, I'm hoping to run my squad through it some time," answered Evani excitedly, her eyes glittered like that of a child who was about to receive candy.
"Mind telling us?" asked Slick dryly yet inquisitive.
"Operation Gemini Storm, but I'm only using a part of the sim, its originally designed for squad use" beamed Evani, her expression turned solemn however as she faced Jess. The trooper raked his hands through his mud brown hair.

"Jess, your rank inspires distrust in me, I do hope you refrain from going rookie on the console" muttered Evani sarcastic as she handed him a disk and the log of the previous time the simulator was activated"
"Won't do, why did you hand me logs of you, Slick and Jenna?" he asked curiously. Evani rolled her eyes.
"This sim requires it, read the raiders log and dish I gave you, it should be explained there," answered Evani.

In mere minutes they were strapped in their chairs, with various wires connected to their head and arms.
"By the way, Ev, I left Darr a note to join us when he has the time," muttered Slick hastily to Evani,
"Heh, I did the same with Zafo, so it should be cool, Jess, find their logs while we are in the sim, then they can jump in straight away should they join us" ordered Evani to Jess, Jess grumbled a reply but it went unheard by Slick, Evani and Jenny as a heavy darkness suddenly replaced their vision.

"Where are we?" asked Jenny puzzled. Evani blinked.
A grey sight met her eyes. The surface was just there, yet it was untouchable, with a odd mist that disappeared in the unseen horizon.
"Jess, a bit of life please" ordered Evani through her ComLink.
"Kay" he replied through the tiny voice box. No sooner minute droplets of water fluttered down on them. Slick looked at her with a puzzled glance. They were in standard Stormtrooper armour; Evani was equipped with her trademark weapons, a DC-15 blaster pistol, her dagger and lastly her most prized weapon; two whips. One tucked in the side of her boot, the other clipped to her utility belt. The latter she found in a pit fight on their mission to Utapau. It had the ability to spike it self by the push of a button.
Tiny shadows appeared through the mist, slowly gaining a bit of colour. Evani didn't experience the simulator often and each time a scenario was build it turned out magnificent.

The raindrops increased both speed and size, the shadows were tiny bushes, but to there surprise skulls formed as well, with a few shallow graves, and tombs.

"This Jess kid has issues," muttered Slick sighing.
"Yeah well, teenagers, what can I say?"
"You are a teenager"
"Shut up"

Their conversation were broken as Jenny made the first move.
"Whatever happens, we work as a team, we don't order each other round, we make suggestions and we come up with ideas, you will find that weapons you are equipped is the weapons you prize most" muttered Evani stepping forward as well, a twig snapped under her Stormtrooper boots.

With the snap another three shadows appeared. Slick and Jenny looked up alert. Evani smirked.
Silently they waited for the misty shadows to form an identity. Jenny gasped.
The distinct form of a twilek appeared against the raining sky.
It was like standing next to a mirror. Their group against an exact replica of them, and both armed.

Evani looked at her counter part, they both bore the same smirk. The same whip that dangled from Evani utility belt, were clipped at her clone's side.
"What's the mission of the sim?" asked Jenny with a dry throat.
"Kill them, and then continue the next phase, remember they fight their counterpart only" answered Slick with a strange glint in her eyes.
"How did you know?" asked Evani slightly surprised.
"I managed to sneak a glance at your holopad before we strapped our selves in" Evani gave a small nod, satisfied with the answer. Their clones stepped forwards. Slick counter part had his weapon raised already. Evani stole a glance at Slick. He had his weapon raised as well.  Evani's eyes narrowed, and the remnants of her smirk returned.



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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 3, 2006 9:49:23 PM    View the profile of Slick 
"Alright Jess. Let's get this thing going." said Slick as he frowned at his counter part.

Within moments the area went black. It quickly came back, and their copies were no where to be seen. As the light rain fell against his armor, Slick quickly glanced around. A light fog flowed slowly across the ground, and swirled at their feet. Tombstones stood all around, as well as several mausoleums. The atmosphere was decidedly creepy, and Slick frowned. He was not looking forward to fighting in this garden of stone. He looked around at the other two, and couldn't help but grin. Evani wore the same determined expression she always had, while Jennabelle just looked seemed ready to get this over with.

He started to check out his gear. He was almost sure that little punk at the board had messed with it somehow. To his surprise everything was in order. He slung his E-11/L across his back, and sheathed his vibro-bayonet. He unholstered his DL-54 blaster pistol, and grinned. NOW he was in his element. He glanced at Evani, and twirled his hand to signal he was ready. She nodded, and they headed into the cemetery.

The rain was barely falling, but it was enough to make the ground soft. He could feel his feet sink into the mud, and he was happy that this was a simulation. He HATED cleaning his boots. They passed by several of the tombs, but still saw no sign of their counter parts. Keeping his eyes open, Slick was looking for the slightest sign of movement in the fog. As they walked he thought he could her muffled talking in the distance, but couldn't be sure. Shaking his head he glanced at the other two troopers. They were looking out into the graveyard, and he could see that both of them were poised for action. He gave a small laugh, but knew that he was the same way. He stopped in front of one of the tombs, and shook his head slowly as he read the inscription.

"Real cute." he said slowly.

Evani came up beside him. "What's cute?"

"Listen to this. 'Here lies Aiden Branson, sergeant of the Vast Empire, loving friend, and husband'. That's cute Jess." he said into the comlink as Evani and Jennabelle laughed behind him.

Before he could retort a blaster bolt hit a few inches from his face. He quickly dove back behind one of the tombstones, and looked around it. He could see his counter part standing there with a raised eyebrow, and a cocky grin. The clone fired another shot, and ran off into the gloom. Cursing under his breath Slick stood back up. Remembering the cocky grin on his clone's face, he turned to Evani.

"Do I really look like that when I grin?" he asked. She nodded and laughed softly.
 
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 4, 2006 11:08:56 AM    View the profile of Darr-Rann 
Darr-Rann looked around the simulated Environment - It certainly was impressive. The shallow graves and skulls were a bit disturbing, but he could see it was a well made simulation. He noticed that he was wearing his black Katarn Commando armor as he saw the visor's display, a quick glance down at his hands confirmed the theory. He also carried his Electrostaff, A280, and a set of throwing knives; He grinned, impressed. Closing his eyes, he focused on the sounds; He could hear the rain coming down, washing over everything. He could also hear blaster fire off in the distance. Opening his eyes, he stepped forward in the direction of the fight, but was stopped by a blaster shot that just barely missed his face. He turned to face a exact duplicate of himself. The armor, the weapons, everything.

"Alright..." He said, drawing his electrostaff. The other did the same. They circled each other for a few moments, analyzing any possible threats or advantages. Suddenly the clone moved, kicking a rock up at Darr-Rann's face. The trooper dodged it, but in the duration the clone made it's move, leaping forward and bludgeoning down with it's staff like a club. Electricity cackled with a almost wrathful sounding delight as the two's staffs met, both pushing forward in an attempt to take the other off balance.

Darr-Rann swore as he nearly took a blow to the head. "Dammit, he knows everything I do." They clashed again and again, and Darr-Rann's arms soon became sore from all the battering. Rolling behind a tombstone, he drew his A280 and opened fire upon the clone, causing it to seek shelter itself. The repugnant smell of Ozone filled the air as the two fired upon each other unrelentingly.

Darr-Rann decided he had enough of the blind shooting. Crouching down, Darr-Rann started going over his stealth training in his head. He slowly snuck out from behind the tombstone, taking low, short breaths in an attempt to make less sound. It was hard to walk over the rocks without making alot of noise though, and once or twice he had made enough of it that he was afraid he may be caught, by stepping down too hard or slipping. He wasn't exactly quiet as he'd like to have been, but the copy didn't seem to hear him. Grinning, he drew two of his throwing knives, wielding one in each hand. He leaped at the clone, stabbing down. Just at that moment he realized that if he hadn't seen any activity out of his opponent, he would be alert. He also realized that he would fool his opponent into thinking they had the element of surprise. With a sudden movement the clone spun around and  tackled him, causing Darr-Rann to drop his knives as he staggered back.

"This is going to be alot harder then I imagined..." He thought to himself as the clone's fist met with the face of his helmet, cracking the visor.

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Slick
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 5, 2006 12:04:33 AM    View the profile of Slick 
Turning towards the others, Slick said, "Well I found mine. I need to go catch him. The best of luck on your search ladies. I'll see you on the other side."

With that said he took off into the cemetery. He could hear his counter parts footsteps, and raced to catch him. Since the two of them were in the same physical condition, Slick was gaining no ground. The rain was falling steadily now, and visibility was getting worse. He could see the rough outline of his clone up ahead in the distance. They dodged and weaved through the headstones as if they shared some sort of eerie dance. As he rounded one of the mausoleums he stopped dead in his tracks, as the cathedral bells sounded.

The heavy sound of the bells cut through the gloom as if it were bright daylight. A massive cathedral stood before Slick, and seemed to taunt him. It was of a Gothic style with stone gargoyles glaring down at him from their ever-watchful posts. The building itself was of a blackish-grey stone, and it seemed to radiate power. The stained glass windows depicted scenes of death, and darkness eternal. The two heavy oak doors were painted black with blood red words etched upon them, but in a language he didn't know. And one of the doors was standing wide open. He raised his pistol, and approached the doors.

He mounted the steps to the cathedral, and he could feel his adrenaline rushing through his body. His eyes were narrowed, and he felt the age old blood lust coming upon him. It was moments like this that he lived for. Never knowing if you were going to live or die, knowing that each breath might be his last. Upon reaching the top of the stairs he leaned against the unopened door. He leaned over, and quickly glanced around the doors edge. Seeing nothing he slowly stepped out, and took his first step into the room.

Black colored pews lined the room on each side. A dark red carpet lay directly under his feet, and stretched to the front of an altar. Torches burned brightly along the walls, and no artificial light could be seen anywhere. Black banners hung from the walls showing depictions of horror. Men and women changing into beasts, and monsters that even Slick couldn't describe. He began to wonder if this part of the sim was designed especially for him. As he passed each pew he would quickly turn to face it. Bracing his right hand with his left, he quickly aimed. Seeing nothing he spun on his heel, and faced the pew on the other side of the room. This happened until he reached the center of the room when he felt movement behind him. Spinning he dropped to one knee in time to see his counter part bearing down on him.

Before he could fire off a shot the clone was upon him. The clone gave out a kick, and sent the pistol flying. Slick launched himself at his opponent, and the two crashed to the ground. The clone's pistol was thrown into the pews, and they proceeded to roll around, each trying to get the upper hand. They broke apart, and they both went for their rifle's. Seeing this his clone went for his bayonet, and before Slick could fire the bayonet slammed into his rifle. The clone went for his rifle only to find Slick kicking it out of his hands. The Wraith squad leader raised his boot for another kick, and the clone rolled around him. Muttering a curse, Slick turned in time to see the clone retrieve his bayonet from the rifle. Reacting quickly Slick pulled his own. The two glared at each other from across their hellish battlefield. Hatred filled their faces, and each knew that one of them were to die here. They rushed each other in that moment, the torchlight filling their eyes as if with hell fire. Slick held his bayonet in a classic mid-guard, while the clone held his own in a low defense. The blades flashed as the two men met, and sparks flew as the blades slammed together. Each of them put their weight behind the blades, and snarled.
 
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 5, 2006 4:59:11 AM    View the profile of Jennabelle 
OCC: doing this in accordance to slick's first post, but adding on because of the second. Enjoy.

Jenny chuckled a bit too at slick's confusion of his own grin as she checked her gear. She had chosen the DC-17M Interchangeable combat system, which was basically the GAR clone commandos' choice weapon, no needed for the anti-tank rounds so she took them out, the second weapon she chose was the Treppus 2 vibroblade, a standard vibroblade used by stormtroopers, the third was the XV 7 Vibroblade, a great edged blade for military purposes. Also she got her armor, standard, plus the utility belt with all her chosen weapons, no grenades.

Skipping all the weapon details, Jenny quickly got behind cover near two tombstones, both with her parents' names on them.

"Damn, Jess, quit it with the names, those are my parents, idiot!" Jenny cursed as she heard Jess yell in surprise or anger, the only thing Jenny heard was "what the hell, it's the program, damn it!"

"Jenny, forget about it, he's just a stupid teenager that's lost&" Slick encouraged as he kept up fire on his clone, which did the same.

"I'm getting tired of this shit, always trying to predict your own moves and overcoming them again and again." Jenny commented, taking shots at her clone, which got a pretty good place one that almost hit her. "Oh shit!" She added while hugging the gravestone. "Damn Bitch!"

"That thing just copied you again&." Hell remarked while placing a well aimed shot at her clone, which flicked off the tombstone and the clone smiled while pinning Hell down with shots.

Slick ran off to find his clone, which took the pinned down enemy as a signal for retreating, Jenny heard slick's voice over the gunfire:

"Well I found mine. I need to go catch him. The best of luck on your search, ladies. I'll see you on the other side."

The other two clones also ran off in the same direction, but to different paths, Jenny and Evi followed their individual clone, said goodbye quickly and went off.

Jenny's clone went off inside a mausoleum, closing the heavy doors behind her. It looked a lot like Jenny's parents' house when Jenny was a kid. But there were memories etched on the wall of Jenny's childhood. I wonder what I'll find in here. Jenny thought as she went inside.

"Oh my god... It's my parents; those are my goddamn parents&." Jenny said, amazed at the sight of two graves, right next to each other, gravestones near them etched with their names.

"Well, well, well, Jenny, you're in your parents' graves, won't it be nice for the traitor parents to see their honored daughter dead, they would get revenge&." Jenny's clone teased, smiling and grabbing Jenny by the neck with a vibrobayonet at her neck. Jenny felt herself spoke the same words.

"You damn bitch, get off me or I'll send you to them in hell." Jenny herself retorted as she tried to break herself from her clone's hard grip.

"Always learn from where your weakness is, remember Jenny, your weakness is never showing people your weakness, that's the true one, Jenny, you hated a women's touch on you, you desired men too much and your grip breaking techniques are lacking." Jenny's clone hissed, as she kissed Jenny's cheek.

Jenny took that as a distraction, as she shot a few into her clone's arm. Her clone fell back and Jenny holstered her DC-17, taking out her vibroblade and vibrobayonet, the clone doing the same, both wearing a smile on her face, and a wound on their left arm.

"Damn, what the&" Jenny exclaimed as she saw the bloody bayonet that Jenny's clone has, "Oh, now it's going to get ugly, yeah, I'm going to mess you up!"

The two attacked each other with the same fierceness, each trying to get the other's advantage, each trying to overwhelm the opponent. Jenny felt the fight would go on forever, until her opponent snapped herself back out and kicked her bayonet away, it landed near the steps going down the way to her parent's grave. Jenny took a punch in the mouth and was pushed to her limits, as the clone forced the blades on her neck.

what a hellhole you landed in, Jenny, how are you going to get yourself out of it? Jenny thought, shaking her head, staring at the same shaking head of her clone.

 
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March 5, 2006 10:42:23 AM    View the profile of Evani 
For a moment they stopepd their battle, only to study each other. Jennyand her clone disappared in the building of some sort through the mist.

Evani cocked her head to the right as she stared at her copy curiously. They both wore the same storm trooper attire, the weapons at their sides. The clone imitated the cock. Both their eyes narrowed.
In a distance the faint sound of an electro staff clashing with one another sounded.
Rannik

Evani gripped her whip tightly and deactivated the little spikes curling around the lash.
She wanted the fun to last. The clone made a step forward.
"So are you going to fight or not?" the copy asked challenging, her voice cracking the same way Evani's voice did when under light strain. Evani's eyes widened a bit. Was she really that foolish?
"Don't challenge me, and never challenge your opponent," replied Evani calmly.
"But you are me, or am I you?"

"Enough of this chit chat!" Evani stormed forward, her fists raised in front of her face. But before she could close to her opponent, a whip curled around expertly around both fists, stringing them together, while the whip-end tauntingly slashed across her face in a final gracious coil. Evani's glare deepened. She tugged her arms, but lash of the whip were so tightly held she could barely move her arms except when stepping forward.
For a moment her clone smirked.
"Gonna kill me? You and I both know we don't kill easily," said Evani as she tried to buy time to come up with a plan.
"You were willing to shoot one of your own men because he didn't have courage. So are you sure?" asked the carbon copy.
Dammit, she's distracting thought Evani when Arzano's face surfaced to her mind, it was however interrupted again, this time by something more positive, an idea dawned her.
Ignoring the clone's question she stormed forward, the lash of the whip immediately loosened, loose enough to make it able for her to draw her DC-15 pistol. The clone jumped back several paces in order to tighten the lash again. But to late, Evani's pistol aimed at her, her wrists still tied together.

"So, like you said, you and I both know we don't kill, or were you just bluffing?" asked the clone, she flicked the dark blond hair out of her face. She bought her head back again, not worried about dropping her guard.
They were alike, and their conversation kept Evani from pulling the trigger. Evani's glare deepened if possible. Her clone knew she had the upper hand mentally, her eyes iced with it, while Evani had the upper hand in the battle, a battle rage seemed to storm in her azure eyes.

Just like Evani did earlier, the clone suddenly made her moved, she tugged Evani with all her might to the ground knowing Evani won't shoot. The pistol flew from her hand and scattered away through the mist as it clattered over the cobbled stones. Without wasting time Evani scrambled in the direction the pistol flew, ignoring the cuts and bruises her hand attained as she crept over the sharp rocks and thorns. Dimly the form of the pistol began to appear again. She could hear her clone gasp as she sprinted in her direction. Her own gasps echoed in her mind while small sweat drops formed on her head. The cool miss was ice cold, and she could feel her hands starting to freeze as it skimmed over the wet ground, grass groups and mud. Her pistol took more form as she closed in on it, just like her opponent did.
Come on just a but...MORE! she screamed at her self while her hand stretched to the pistol. Her duplicate halted at Evani feet, Evani heard her hastily drawing her own DC-15. Her fingers closed around her own. In less then a second Evani turned her self around and aimed the pistol to her clone, only to be met with the barrel of the clone's pistol. Supported by resting on her one elbow Evani's hand twitched, her finger curling tightly around her pistol, aimed to the clone's face as well. 

"Now's the question, who will back down first?" said the clone muttering Evani's thoughts out loud.
"We won't," retorted Evani angrily. Her finger tightened. She saw her clone's hand twitch as well.
They would both die, they both refused to back down, their pride not able to accept it. That's why they would die.
"I guess our questions are answered, we do kill easily"
Their azure eyes met again, then Evani pulled the trigger, just as the clone pulled.


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March 12, 2006 3:36:42 AM    View the profile of Jennabelle 
"Well, Jenny, any last words before you join your parents?" Jenny's clone murmured, chuckling at Jenny's pitful state of trying to block with one hand, staring at Jenny with that same stare that Jenny used to have when she was about to kill her enemies.

"Yeah, always look where the other hand is going!" Jenny remarked loudly before taking her fist and punching it into the duplicate's stomach, letting it drop the vibrobayonet and clenching its hurtful stomach.

Jenny quickly got up as she speedily assaulted with her vibroblade onto her clone, which also got up and blocked the blade's swift attack, backing up from the impact. Jenny and her duplicate once again continued attacking each other, blades swiftly and accurately trying to narrow it through the weak points and killing the opponent.

"Very nice, but this will go on forever unless you can find your way through your weakness, this is for training, Jenny, training&. training& " The double commented slowly and every word seem to wander into her mind, reminding her of what her training with her parents and the stormtroopers, how it brought her so much training in the skills of melee and ranged weapons, both getting what she wanted, her murderer's deaths.

"Yes, those murderer flashes through your eyes, every one of them on these walls, echoing the silent or violent deaths they enjoyed, they await your arrival, Jenny, they----" The clone continued as Jenny quickly punched her in the mouth, giving her a hell of a mouth job.

"Stop your lecturing, I'm sick of it. Let's get to fighting!" Jenny said angrily as she raised her blade once again and went to swing her blade onto the enemy when a swift kick from the duplicate brought her away and near the steps, her vibroblade swinging between the two graves and landing, her vibrobayonet nearby.

"Why continue, you look very tired and restless, this battle has worn you down like it has with your parents, and I know what you think because it's what I think&." The double whispered in that odd voice that echoed through Jenny's mind.

Jenny got back up as she sheathed her vibrobayonet nearby and took out her rifle, firing a few shots to silence the talks of her clone and to let it dodge, grabbing its vibrobayonet on the way, until it went behind a statue of Jenny's father, which was lecturing about something to an image on the wall. Jenny heard it sheath both the vibroblade and the vibrobayonet, taking out its rifle. Jenny decided it was a good time to get her vibroblade, which was still lying there near her parents' graves.

She ran from cover to cover, roll from here to there, taking fire from the duplicate and closing in on the vibroblade, as she got to the vibroblade and rolled, taking it along with her, it managed to get a hit on her back, missing the spinal cord and hitting her left shoulder, to her great luck. Jenny quickly took cover as she looked at the wound. nice, the son of a gun managed to get my left shoulder, man that stings, I hope it doesn't hit any major artery&. Jenny thought as she looked at her armor, which was pretty dented with blaster shots.

"Get yourself together, Jenny, you can do it, just ignore that crazy girl's words and fight her, you know what to do, just do it." Jenny muttered to herself, focusing on every part of her training, exploring the weaknesses, and finding solutions, until she came up with a perfect plan. "Well, I think I'll force her into close combat with a rifle and see if I end up getting hit right where Freje's medallion is, then I'll kill her, perfect& let's do it." She added, kissing the medallion, as she got ready to face the double once again.

 
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 12, 2006 2:35:44 PM    View the profile of Evani 
It was instinct. Evani rolled reflexively to her side even before her eyes opened from her stretched out position on the rubble.
Wait, rubble? the gravestones were gone. The mist were replaced hot steam, pouring from the air it self. Lava was pouring around her in dark rivers of molten rock. She just died in the simulator,
"Very sweet Jess, you sent me to hell, I wonder why..." muttered Evani dryly.

However, she and her clone were at it again, alive again. Evani bolted into a battle stance, her dagger clutched tightly in her right hand. Once more their eyes met. This time their battle would be unvoiced. The only sounds would be their armaments clashing, and the screams of the one dying at the other's hand.  Evani managed to steal a quick glance at her surrounding. Judging from her early childhood studies at various academies on Tadath she guessed they were on Mustafar, or a planet resembling Mustafar. Huge factories dimmed silently through the distance, waving with the heat emission, as it rippled on the horizon.  They were situated on a cliff, a factory of some sorts perched on the rocks far beneath them. The skyscrapers it possessed maundered through the magma tributaries.

The clone stepped backwards, nearing her self closer to the edge, another invitation for Evani to attack.

Her clone gripped the whip with a twitching hand. Neither moved, both waiting for the other. Evani dodged. The whip lashed past her fast as her clone extended it with a flick of a button when she lashed it.

Evani dodged for a second time as the whip kept lashing again and again to her.
"Dammit!" yelled Evani in frustration as she jumped back. But to late, the whip curled tightly around her left wrist, breaking it in the process as the clone pulled.
Evani gritted her teeth as she stifled a shriek at throbbing pain that imploded through her arm. The clone kept tugging at the whip again and again. Each time worsening the damage done to her wrist and each time making her convulse in reaction.
With a cry Evani bought her dagger down on the whip. Just as the duplicate pulled at the whip again, Evani's dagger sliced through the slim whip end of the lash severing it from her hand. The whip whisked back towards its owner unexpectedly catching her off guard for a second.

Ignoring constant throb of her wrist Evani darted forward, making full use of the second her clone was lost in.  But before Evani could struck with her dagger the clone's eyes snapped back to attention. Suddenly the azure eyes seemed so artificial. It was a mere reflection, all reflections were found in something breakable. Evani was bent on shattering this reflection.

Evani kept storming forward, her dagger poised like a snake in the air. The clone stormed forward as well, she dropped her whip, and it clattered to the hot ground beneath them. The hilt tipped down the edge of the cliff as it rolled, and then fell. The lash snaked and rattled over rim following the hilt shortly. All the details however were thrown to the wind as Evani stormed. She had a goal, and this was to rid get rid of her carbon copy.

The clone skilfully stopped Evani assault as she caught Evani's wrist. Before Evani had the time to react, the clone locked both of Evani's arms and pulled her over her back, over the edge. Evani shrieked in surprise as she found her self in nothing but air, free falling for a few hundred meters.  While her body were at obeying the laws of gravity, Evani 's thoughts were jumbling around in attempt to avoid death. The wind whipped into her face, small rocks and other dust particles carved into her skin.

Hastily she curled her self in a tight ball to reach the both of her whips. She drew her self back into almost stretched position, and directed her head first to the ground. Constructions and more skyscrapers were now dangerously looming up at her. If she fell in the wrong position she would end up smacked in a gory pulp of blood as an alternative of being smouldered to ash.

With the unnatural reflexives she was gifted with Evani barely managed to steer her self through the durasteel bars and gaps of the skyscrapers. Her coordination however failed her at the last moment, her already incapable arm accidentally smacked against one of the hauling poles, shattering the bones instantly. The whip she clutched dropped to magma as Evani screamed. Her will to survive were stronger then the pain however and over rode it.

She managed to grab the last bit of sanity in her mind, through the explosive pain that seared in her arm, and lashed her remaining whip at the nearest possible situate to grasp.  Miraculously it curled around one of the durasteel hauling rods tugging her to an immediate halt. Evani closed her eyes tiredly as she hung suspended by the whip, a few meters away from death.
Now to get on ground she thought to her self as she looked down to the dark crimson lava with its onyx covers of molten rock.

 
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 26, 2006 5:01:52 AM    View the profile of Jennabelle 
"Come on, Jenny, get up! Get up and fight me!" Jenny's clone yelled in desperation, as she reloaded her rifle with a new clip.

"Yeah, well, I'll just have to believe in myself!" As Jenny said those words, it hit her, like a big flashback right on the scene.

The night of her parent's deaths, there was one thing that her mother said before she was stabbed and killed by the assassins, the same thing she said her mother had said in her last words. It came to her in a tidal rush, a wave of self-confidence, belief and faith, it all came. Finally! It has come! My morale will be much lifted and I will be more confident in myself! Jenny thought happily, as she got back to reality.

Jenny quickly raised herself from her odd flashback stance and switched back to her regular stance, she was nearing the left stairs, all she had to do was to endure one more of her double's rifle blasts and Jenny would be able to intiate her plan. Jenny waited until she heard her duplicate almost done reloading, then she started running, faster and faster, upon the steps of her road to victory upon the clone. Her clone had shot again and again, but against what seems to be a fast enemy, Jenny remembered, she would lose in trying to get an accurate shot on him or her. man, am I learning to beat my own double with my own weakness or what? Jenny thought to herself questionably and smiled, as she reached the bottom step with only a shrapnel on her lower arm, which looked like it didn't went too deep.

"Well, Jenny, not bad, not bad at all. I'd say you could take some hits!" The duplicate commented angrily, reloading as she walked down the steps to where Jenny was, while the clone examined Jenny's wounds and remarking, chuckling, "A shrapnel on your lower arm, a rifle blast on your left shoulder, left arm stabbed with a vibrobayonet, bruised face. I'd say you're just about ready to die."

"Maybe I should be the one saying that you're going to die, a punched-up mouth, a bruised stomach and a blasted arm, what a shame." Jenny responded quickly as she raised her rifle and aimed at her double's heart, but before she could shoot, her duplicate aimed and quickly took a few shots at her heart, which accurately hit the medallion.

Perfect, my plan is working, now to get rid of my clone once and for all. Jenny thought to herselfas she prepared to kill the clone.

 
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  RE: Drill Simulation(Character Devlopment)
March 26, 2006 5:01:59 AM    View the profile of Jennabelle 
"Come on, Jenny, get up! Get up and fight me!" Jenny's clone yelled in desperation, as she reloaded her rifle with a new clip.

"Yeah, well, I'll just have to believe in myself!" As Jenny said those words, it hit her, like a big flashback right on the scene.

The night of her parent's deaths, there was one thing that her mother said before she was stabbed and killed by the assassins, the same thing she said her mother had said in her last words. It came to her in a tidal rush, a wave of self-confidence, belief and faith, it all came. Finally! It has come! My morale will be much lifted and I will be more confident in myself! Jenny thought happily, as she got back to reality.

Jenny quickly raised herself from her odd flashback stance and switched back to her regular stance, she was nearing the left stairs, all she had to do was to endure one more of her double's rifle blasts and Jenny would be able to intiate her plan. Jenny waited until she heard her duplicate almost done reloading, then she started running, faster and faster, upon the steps of her road to victory upon the clone.

Her clone had shot again and again, but against what seems to be a fast enemy, Jenny remembered, she would lose in trying to get an accurate shot on him or her. man, am I learning to beat my own double with my own weakness or what? Jenny thought to herself questionably and smiled, as she reached the bottom step with only a shrapnel on her lower arm, which looked like it didn't went too deep.

"Well, Jenny, not bad, not bad at all. I'd say you could take some hits!" The duplicate commented angrily, reloading as she walked down the steps to where Jenny was, while the clone examined Jenny's wounds and remarking, chuckling, "A shrapnel on your lower arm, a rifle blast on your left shoulder, left arm stabbed with a vibrobayonet, bruised face. I'd say you're just about ready to die."

"Maybe I should be the one saying that you're going to die, a punched-up mouth, a bruised stomach and a blasted arm, what a shame." Jenny responded quickly as she raised her rifle and aimed at her double's heart, but before she could shoot, her duplicate aimed and quickly took a few shots at her heart, which accurately hit the medallion.

Perfect, my plan is working, now to get rid of my clone once and for all. Jenny thought to herselfas she prepared to kill the clone.

 
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April 3, 2006 9:27:50 PM    View the profile of Giovanni Bryden 
"First day back and already they've got me doing..." Giovanni muttered profane things under his breath. It wasn't his place to complain.  After all, he had been gone for a good long time settling family matters back on Coruscant. With the recent death of his father, it was up to him to set his mother up nicely and make sure she was looked after. 

The death of his father hadn't hit him as hard as he thought it would have.  Sure he was grieving, but he knew his father had led a full life, and had been a loving provider for him and his two younger siblings.  It was his younger brothers he worried about. Without a father figure they could stray to a life of crime on the lower levels.

"It's not your problem let me deal with them" her mother had told him. She was probably right.

So he set off for Tadath, much like the first time, with nothing with him except the same tattered old duffel bag.  This time he docked with the Orbital Platform and made sure to check in on his apartment before touching down on Tadath. His things were the same as he had left them. His worn stormtrooper armor in a pile on the floor, and a new set in a box at the foot of the bed.

A hiss at the door brought in a rush of compressed air from the outside. It was a courier.

"Holomessage for Sargent Giovanni Bryden," he said in a low voice, as if trying not to disturb the man who had his backed turned to him, and was looking under his bed for his belongings.

"Yeah, that'd be me. Just put it down anywhere." The man set the holopad down next to his stringed instrument.

Another hiss let him know the man had exited his room, as he found what he had been looking for. He pulled the mahogany box out and deactivated the lock with a combination of seemingly random numbers. In the box were the few medals he had accrued, and what few credits he hadn't stowed in his bank account. He left the medals alone and took the credits, closing the box and setting it on the table next to his bed. He changed into his black shirts and gray slacks, and left the room.

His dogtags rattled as he ran for the next shuttle down to Tadath.  He had missed the army life.

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"Come to Simulation room A-103," the holopad had said. It didn't say who it was from.

"First day back and already they've got me doing..." Giovanni muttered profane things under his breath.

"Gio, is that you?" said a familiar voice behind him. It was Kairo.
"How have you been?"

"Can't complain. How are things with you Kairo?"

He responded saying things were ok. He asked if i wasn't too busy. I responded that i was headed for one of the simulation rooms, but that if i remembered correctly the bar was on the way.

"Alcohol before a simulation? You never learn do you..."

"I guess not," Gio replied in a low tone.

"Let's go see what your squad is doing in the simulation room" said Kairo. He must not have had anything better to do at the time.

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The two entered the room to see the technician hacking away at a terminal. He could count at least 4 different bodies sitting down with wires strapped to their heads, arms and chests, and another 4 empty chairs.

The technician hadn't noticed them come in and was startled to see the two men approach him.

"SGT Bryden, reporting for duty." The technician saluted him, and showed him to his chair. "I've had a simulation ready for you sir, I think you'll find it quite challenging." Giovanni merely chuckled.

"Interesting..." was the last thing Kairo said before Giovanni's senses were flooded with light from all directions.

The first sense he controlled was smell. He smelled urine and soot and some kind of smog. His sense of hearing kicked in next. He heard shuttles exiting and entering the atmosphere miles above him. A cool wind rustled his clothes as his vision came to him. He was on some familiar planet. The warm glow of the evening sun washed over his face and slightly warmed his face through his helmet's visor.

He was on Coruscant.


 
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April 8, 2006 8:53:21 AM    View the profile of Jennabelle 
"What a waste, you could have done so much to help the Empire, but you just couldn't beat a clone of yourself, what a shame." Jenny's clone relaxed her rifle as she got closer to examine it.

At this moment, Jenny quickly got up and holstered her rifle, taking up her vibroblade and vibrobayonet, swiping them both on the shocked and surprised duplicate's left arm, which was cut off with a pool of blood dripping from it, it screamed from the wound, its rifle laying on the pool of blood.

"Why don't you try saying that again, you son of a gun, or are you too tangled up in your own cut-off arm." Jenny said confidently as the double took out its own vibroblade and attacked the confident Jenny, who blocked and responded quickly and faithfully, guided by her belief and attacked on her teachings and instincts.

"Congrats on giving me a nice dismemberment, I hope that you would get one too." Jenny's clone said, pushing Jenny's vibroblade away and quicking slashing down upon Jenny's left arm, hoping to also give Jenny a dismember, but Jenny dodged and continued to attack, trying hard to weaken all strong points of her duplicate's defense and strengthening the weak points.

"Well, are you feeling the pressure, huh? Why don't I help by cutting off one of you legs?!" Jenny yelled in desperation as she took her vibrobayonet and swiped it so the double's right leg came off and it feel to its knees, groaning in yet another pool of blood.

"Wait!" The clone yelled in yet the same wave of desperation and said, sighing and clutching the dismembered leg with the non-dismembered arm: "You had a bad past, it wasn't meant to be, but it just was there, for you to change." At this point it coughed a bit, then continued: "I know the real person behind this and if you want I can tell you. It was the person least expected to betray you. Your ex-boyfriend, Ian Fredrickson, cousin of your present boyfriend and Freje's."

"I killed that man, he's dead, I don't like much talking about it, but I found out after I killed his personal bodyguard, the idiot was hiding with a gun to Freje's head in his little home nearby, with police setting up a blockade near it. I got in just in time, the police was about to shoot when I shot first and killed that stupid guy who was messing with my sister." Jenny finished quickly before the double added, preparing to take a shot with the clutched rifle upon Jenny's neck:

"A perfect shot, with a sniper rifle, the stuff that comes into the same rifle brand that we both have. I know you had permission to take the shot. Ian was about to throw Freje out the window, was he?" Jenny nodded and continued listening to her duplicate's words, staring concernly at the rifle and figuring out the clone's plan, readying her own blades:

"Yes, I guess the Imperials must have known your parents publicly, directly or politically. Big influence they were, rich as hell, I would have loved to be their daughter. Then that one rainy night, they were murdered by those assassins, hired by Ian, the perfect setup for a rebellion in one of the imperial's great political family. You must have loved killing him, but would have loved to kill him directly, wouldn't you?"

At this one moment, the cocking and firing came at Jenny as if a vision but it was her clone's plan, to kill Jenny while distract her, but the rifle brand made Jenny pay attention to her enemy's right arm, which had reached for the rifle lying in the first pool of blood, clutching it and quickly aiming it at Jenny. The plan was perfect, but not as perfect as Jenny's. Die! Jenny thought happily as she dodged in what seemed to be slow motion, quickly and leaving only a scratch on her neck, never penetrating the layers below.

Jenny quickly threw the vibrobayonet at the clone's right arm, which hit its right hand pulse point, pinning it to the ground. She then executed the stab which finally killed her clone, by stabbing in the heart, the same point as her enemy, the same cold stab in which she dealt her ex-boyfriend, Ian, as a finishing move.

After that, Jenny holded up the medallion in her left hand, which was hanging by the bloody bayonet, pulled out from its pulse point on the double's hand, which was blurting out blood like a small fountain. The medallion given by her sister, Freje, holding her ever greatful award and graduation from her college, holding that same belief in which Jenny herself had. The rifle blasts only leaving a mark in the center, the perfect spot for a hole, a hole in the center of a perfect circle, the circle of a targeting range. That one, the one thing that Freje still persues. Her dream to work her way into the imperial stormtroopers. Jenny thought, finished and on to the conversation that her clone had not, she explained:

"I finished him, Ian. A stinging blow to the same spot you have, that I didn't have. What saved me was this, you know what it is, you know what it means to me, and now it's finished." Jenny took the vibroblade out and her double fell, still smiling the same smile that she smiled. But in Jenny's mind, that was her ex-boyfriend's smile.

OCC: This is it. Enjoy!
 
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