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Maverick Leonhart
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  Maverick's Bio
January 12, 2006 9:08:18 PM    View the profile of Maverick Leonhart 
Physical Appearance

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Jet Black
Eye Color: Orange-Red
Skin Color: Slightly tanned
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 205 lbs
Age: 32
Full Name: Maverick James Leonhart
Physical Build: Muscular, Fit, Well-Built
Homeworld: Coruscant


Talents/Skills

1) Blade Specialist
2) Small Arms Expert

Biography

His parents having died when he was young, Maverick has been left on his own since he was a child. Moving to the planet Byss at the age of 15 with the promise of paradise, Maverick was enslaved by Palpatine along with millions of others. Laboring on Byss for years had its toll on him. He could feel himself changing, wether it be from the long days of labor or from the Dark Force Energy that the planet was smothered in. The labor made him stronger, while the Dark Force made him despise all things good.

After many years of labor, Maverick finally managed to stow away on a Stormtrooper transport as it was about to leave the planet. When the ship was in orbit he heard a loud explosion, which turned out to be the Super Star Destroyer Eclipse II crashing into the planet, causing the Galixy Gun to fire, destroying the planet. With nowhere to turn, Maverick desided to go back to his homeworld of Coruscant to find his brother Kiner Leonhart.

While searching, he met a bounty hunter named Deagu Sin. It was from Deagu that he learned how to be a bounty hunter. He learned not only how to weild a blaster, but he also learned how to weild a sabre. From then on he became a bounty hunter himself. He became a feared name across the planet, wearing similar armor to that worn by the legendary bounty hunter from the Clone Wars Jango Fett.

His name was known on every part of the planet. There was nowhere you could go where the name Maverick didn't strike fear into the hearts of everyone. Kiner learned of this bounty hunter but always thought that his brother could have never become something so ruthless. Then one day he came face to face with the bounty hunter. Kiner found out that day that the Maverick he knew had died on Byss and that this Maverick wasn't the same person that he had known. Even though he couldn't manipulate the force, the Dark Side had corrupted him. His bounty that day was his own brother, but as he went to strike Kiner down, something inside him kept him from doing it. Wether it was his love for his brother or the last gleam of light in his heart that kept him from doing it, no one really knows. He left Coruscant in search of a new path to follow.

It was on the fourth moon of Yavin that Maverick learned what he truely wanted. He wanted to become a Jedi, but not a light Jedi. His ultimate goal had become to destroy the Jedi due to his distaste in all things good. He gave up his bounty hunter status to join the ranks of Stormtroopers so he could work his way up and become a Dark Jedi and make his ultimate goal a reality.

Joining the army of the Empire as a Private, his plan is now to fight his way up the ranks to reach his ultimate goal and kill all the light Jedi.
[This message has been edited by Maverick Leonhart (edited January 12, 2006 10:15:12 PM)]
[This message has been edited by Maverick Leonhart (edited January 14, 2006 12:08:20 AM)]
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 13, 2006 2:29:21 AM    View the profile of Hellra 
No jedi or force stuff allowed, you can delete that., but apart from a few errors in you bio your writing seems pretty decent in comparison to some stuff ive seen coming from recruits.

Its better to type your posts and other stories in Word, the spell checker is pretty nice to use, or you can use the Comnet's own spellchecker,
 
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 13, 2006 4:20:10 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Good bio. One of the better ones I've seen.

Good potential.
 
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 13, 2006 4:48:47 PM    View the profile of Angel 
Then of course theres the small little problem that no one (outside the HC and themselves) really knows the VE Dark Jedi exist...
 
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 13, 2006 5:09:53 PM    View the profile of Talon 
I'm willing to allow being tainted by the Dark Side (aggressive behavior, etc), but your character wouldn't really know it's an effect of the Dark Side. You mentioned him wearing something close to Jango's armor... just remember that would have pissed off Boba and he would have hunted you down and put a blaster bolt in you. Also, if by "sabre" you mean lightsaber.. no. They were almost a lost technology at this point in the Star Wars timeline.
It looks like you're setting yourself up to become a Dark Jedi. That's a good goal to set, but don't lock your character in to it. Not everyone makes it.

That said, not a bad bio. Better than mine when I first started out. You show some promise. Just keep working to better your writing and we'll see about getting you a robe and training saber.
 
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 14, 2006 12:06:01 AM    View the profile of Maverick Leonhart 
Thanks. And what I meant by sabre was just your basic swords. Not lightsabers, but more like the broadsword and swords like that. I knew I should have been more specific on that point.
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 14, 2006 4:13:45 AM    View the profile of Talon 
Understood. I figured there might be a chance that you meant a sword, I just wanted to cover my bases.
 
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  RE: Maverick's Bio
January 14, 2006 10:50:20 AM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
good bio much better than mine, ive been telling myself I would get around to it.....sometime.
 
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