Hunter Emnis
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 10, 2005
4:59:31 PM
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ah, don't we pity you :P joke, I wonder why we are still posting on a topic that was supposed to be dead long ago.... -----------------------
HUnter EMnis
"Combine self-hate with pride,
a leader with a follower,
seriousness with immaturity,
smartness with idiocy,
merciful with relentlessness,
a friend with an enemy.
Combine two opposites,
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zar mulix
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 10, 2005
9:57:57 PM
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yeah, but we continue to do so, and some random noobs like ze094 and some other guy.....well I guess noone was interested in your story.
Shame it was pretty long complex and full of details...oh well -----------------------
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Hunter Emnis
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 11, 2005
6:15:42 AM
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Say new zar not noobs, I never liked that world really, and I never understood why it was so bad to be a noob, so you're new who cares??? People use it as a diss O.o getting back to the story topic though, it isn't full of detail as i have never wrote it before, I just had an outline, and maybe it was a bit complex but not much -----------------------
HUnter EMnis
"Combine self-hate with pride,
a leader with a follower,
seriousness with immaturity,
smartness with idiocy,
merciful with relentlessness,
a friend with an enemy.
Combine two opposites,
and in the middle, |
zar mulix
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 11, 2005
11:43:53 AM
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well it seemed pretty thought out when you told me and anyway i didn't mean "noobs" as a dis, I just didnt want to say new people or something, too long and I guess I'm just used to saying noobs... -----------------------
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"When the big man jumps, the world shakes in terror"- Zar Mulix
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ze094
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 18, 2005
6:46:16 AM
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Hunter is wierd that's all. He never liked the word n00b. It's wierd since he says it all the time, or newbs. Is there a difference between those two? -----------------------
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zar mulix
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 21, 2005
8:51:54 PM
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i dont think there is, pronunciation is the same and means the same thihg I mean -----------------------
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"When the big man jumps, the world shakes in terror"- Zar Mulix
"Experience does not exist, nor does it have value, for it is just a word used to describe our past errors."
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Lukas_Yuy
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RE: The Orginal Draft of Emnis
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July 24, 2005
11:53:47 AM
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Guys, I don't see any point to this topic what so ever. It seems like you guys are just spamming, but Hellra and Jak have been giving advice/criticism to you Hunter. Now let me give you some, you need to modify your story for it to make sense. When someone gives you criticism/advice, you might want to take it because that is what makes you a better writer.
If you modify your story and make it longer, go ahead and edit it. -----------------------
Name: Lukas Yuy
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