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Jack Nebulax
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 14, 2005 1:51:30 PM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
We were trying to make the story longer, Shazam. I believe earlier you had said that you didn't want it to be a short story, so I made it longer as you had requested.
 
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Arturus
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 14, 2005 7:29:09 PM    View the profile of Arturus 
Uh filler is not what Shaz had in mind I don't think.  Longer as in taking time to develop characters, not longer in terms of posting volume.  Let's face it, the post was filler, accomplished little (it did not develop characters, in fact it went contrary to how most characters act), and really needs to be seriously edited to be of use.

Can we move on and just get the story going again?
 
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu
Jack Nebulax
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 15, 2005 5:57:34 AM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
Guys, I'm really sorry for the way I had acted. I apologize to all of you for that. I was just having a bad day, and I took the criticism way too far. Once again I apologize for my behavior. I will not let it happen again.

And also, I just posted on the story. Nothing much, but hopefully I didn't do anything wrong.
 
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 16, 2005 7:39:58 AM    View the profile of Arturus 
Uh Jack.  Starting to shoot at the guards surrounding us with your arm is really not a good idea, especially since we are all in binds and can't exactly take advantage of the element of surprise.  We do, however, have what gear we hid in our armour.  I know I have a pistol and maybe one or two others hid weapons.  Once we are locked up, standard procedure would be to lock up our gear and weapons, probably at some kind of vault near the detention centre entrance.  This way, they would be in the care of the sergeant or officer on duty who was incharge of the main desk.  A good course of action might be to be put in our cell.  Then once a guard enters, cause some form of confusion in order to gather what few guards there would be (guard at the desk plus a couple on staff to deal with problems, food, etc.) and then get our gear.  We could even tie up and gag the guards and leave them in our cell, whatever method seems fitting and above all, realistic.
 
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu
Jack Nebulax
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 16, 2005 8:11:20 AM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
I was actually planning on waiting until we got into the detention cell. I wasn't going to start shooting them all while we were being escorted away. I had something in mind like what you metioned, Art. I was going to wait and just try to get the stun cuffs loose a little bit, so that once we were in the cell, it would be a little easier to take off and then we'll get back our weapons and kill the guards and storm out of there like you said. Don't worry, I'm not going to screw anything up here by starting to shoot now. I'm going to wait, you'll see.

Just keep posting, guys. We're doing great.
 
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Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.

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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 22, 2005 4:52:59 PM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
Guys, I'm really sorry that I haven't been posting on the story recently. What I'm trying to do is save up for the next story and give it all I've got. I'm trying not to screw up twice in one story, basically. But for the next one, since I have learned from my mistakes, hopefully I'll be able to make some great posts.
 
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Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.

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Senior Chief Petty Officer and Reporter Jack Nebulax (*Formerly and No-Longer a ComNet Spammer*), Imperial Navy and VE Today Staff, Vast Empire.
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[This message has been edited by Jack Nebulax (edited July 22, 2005 4:53:23 PM)]
Arturus
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  RE: "Objective: Resuce on Kessel" Nazgul Story Not
July 23, 2005 6:17:17 PM    View the profile of Arturus 
I'll make a post later tonight to move the plot along to where we are back in space.  If you have something that needs to be done on the planet, do it tonight.  Since we are still working on the wing story, if there is anything else you want to post (possibly even backtracking a bit if necessary), do so by the meeting tomorrow so I can finish off the entire thing Sunday.

Thanks guys, good work on this one.  Some good character building and detailed posts.  Keep up the great work!
 
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu
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