Jaden
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 13, 2005
11:41:07 AM
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What would you have in mind sir? -----------------------
Jaden Khaar
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"No good deed goes unpunished" -Murphy
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 13, 2005
5:14:55 PM
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I'll help too, I have some ideas and I know where you're going.
Also, I like to apologize DJ, if I offended you in any way. See, the problem was, went I was writing, it was midnight and I needed to get to bed, so I couldn't finish the way I wanted it to. I hoped I fixed some things straight in the last post. And, stop trying to get back at me, because from what you've hopefully noticed, I'm gonna turn it right back at you or stop it all together. Don't forget to write in 3rd person.
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Feed a womp rat a food ration, he'll want an energy stim. Give him an energy stim, and he'll rip your throat out.
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 13, 2005
5:27:40 PM
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Technically he doesn't need to write in third person. When I say don't write like your the charcter, just write the charcter, you can still write first person, because you make up those events anyways... Am I incorrect in this idealization...? -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 13, 2005
6:34:24 PM
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Well, I see it the same way. You can write your character from any POV that you want, and 1st person is fine. DJ is doing good with his grammar, and is improving all the time.
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 13, 2005
6:56:56 PM
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Thank you Jaden i am very pleased with your compliment
i also like the stiry your doing right now
also shazam i apologise if i did anything wrong in my last post i just thought i can put something fun in my life u guys have all these cool traits in you character like jack he got a robotic arm you are just cool i am a nobody so if i offended you i am sorry
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We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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Jaden
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
12:29:05 AM
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Naa, your fine, just keep getting your character built up, and keep readin. Remember the spell check thing when you post. Try and copy and paste your post, run it through word, do a spell check, and paste it back on the VE. It's easy, and it saves a lot of movement of your eye muscles and squinting when you are looking for mistakes.
The story is really comin along guys, which is way cool. I will be at Shazams for a good time, so you can catch me on IRC or something.
And my story, The Heresy, is going to be moving very fast, so keep up with it and post comments and suggestions and what not if you guys want. It will probably be finished in a month or so, because it really has a lot of things to do with my character.
See you guys around. -----------------------
Jaden Khaar
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
6:24:37 AM
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
8:01:12 AM
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and then we will gain respect and prove to be better above all squads. -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
10:35:41 AM
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You know, maybe in time when we get another squadron... (no jinxing aloud...), thas a fact... Then we could probably have the elite squadron competition again (ESC) of course. I remember we failed every year to reach the top in that, so maybe that's where we can really improve. Always wanted to be the Elite Squadron. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
10:41:24 AM
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what do you got to do to be the Elite Squad -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
10:54:49 AM
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Off Topic so I'll post in it the Nazgul Thread, find it there... And I think theres a website for it... -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
2:46:33 PM
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Well, back to the story... Like I said, it's doing great. Everyone is doing a great job. Like with Jaden's posts, we're gearing up for action soon. It will be fun, so keep it that way. Good luck, everyone. -----------------------
Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
   
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 14, 2005
4:31:10 PM
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Well damn, now I can't do anything because no one posted. Get out there and post guys...It should be a pretty easy thing. The enemies are coming to the city area, and everyone who is at their posts will wait until they are within range, then attack. Just read the posts that Shazam and I made, and you should get the gist of it.
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 15, 2005
7:17:43 AM
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Jaden
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 15, 2005
10:15:47 AM
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It's fine Jack, but everyone else, get out there and post. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 16, 2005
8:06:51 PM
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Ok, I was going to post but then I got confused by Shazam's last post. Why did he take a touble take, why was he signaling for someone not to move? Can someone explain this? -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 17, 2005
8:21:55 AM
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OH, to Exira. He didn't know she was there, forgot she was there at all... A double take when is when you look at someone and don't notice anything out of the ordinary and then you suddenly look back realizing what you saw. Shazam was just realizing Exira was there un-armed so he was trying to tell her to stay there...
Get posting guys, we're starting to lose pace here. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 17, 2005
7:25:30 PM
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Kickin'. Thanks for clearing that up. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 21, 2005
9:42:22 AM
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Wow Jaden that last post was.... Nice
why would you put yourself in such a serious position are you trying to get yourself killed -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 21, 2005
10:30:07 AM
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Shazam, should we gather some gear together and go into the forest to finish them off? We could get to the temples that way too...
Just a thought, let me know. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 21, 2005
11:33:59 AM
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That sounds fine man. Guys, don't be bashful here, go on ahead and do stuff... Don't be afraid to post something that's 'out there', or a sudden attack or what not. Have fun, be creative guys, just get posting so everyone else can... Have some fun now. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 21, 2005
6:14:35 PM
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
3:00:43 PM
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I really liked Jens last post it was exciting -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
3:19:41 PM
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Yeah, I guess it was. Still, good job to everyone. Unfortunately, we lost Jaden to Aegis Squadron. A great person with extreme writing talents will no longer be serving Nazgul Squadron. Which means, at the end of the story, we'll have to say that Jaden was transfered to Aegis to avoid any confusion. -----------------------
Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
4:13:03 PM
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No not Jaden any but jaden well at least there is an upside. i am flight 3 leader.
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We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
7:15:02 PM
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
7:34:35 PM
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Congrats Jack now u got to do it in real life hope it goes well -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
7:41:00 PM
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You guys have been doing absolutely awesome this entire time, so lets keep it goin and I'll keep trying to get some rewards for ya. Just awesome, keep at it and get the new recruits addicted as well. Rock on. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 22, 2005
7:43:59 PM
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Shaz i dont need any awards i just like to write you don't have to do that you know -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 23, 2005
1:27:45 PM
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Um, question. Did you guys forget all about little ol' me while writing. What happened after I blew a decently big hole in the place. If I missed something that happened, clue me in here.  -----------------------
Feed a womp rat a food ration, he'll want an energy stim. Give him an energy stim, and he'll rip your throat out.
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