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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 1, 2005
2:55:59 PM
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its just a thought -----------------------
y think ur all that and a bag of chips. well i am all that and a bag of skittles so taste the rainbow biatch
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 2, 2005
5:40:23 PM
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Holy hell... Everyone take a chill pill... And I suppose I'll start the story, but if I disapear for a long period of time, assume I'm either dead, or given up on life compltely and am near the same inevitable end...
Right then, it'll start immedietly after we have a basis. Although, I suppose I could use that as a basis... I just need something to start the story out on, a simple idea for why we are there and what we're supposed to be doing, although the story wouldn't be based around that... AND THERE CAN BE A BEACH... Jen, you have to realize, in this story, everything is made up. You have what you make and create, it is completely out of the abyss and dark cellars locked far away in your own mind. Have fun with it. Right, basic structure and we're off... I should be around all right now, except for tomarrow and Friday and up until Saturday night starting from Saturday morning... Its' all good. Rock on... -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 2, 2005
5:54:20 PM
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Yes, I have realized that these are made up. ^^ I have done stories like this except they weren't Starwars based and weren't as neatly planned out. Though I must say, I am as excited as anyone to get this started. It sounds like its going to be very interesting. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 2, 2005
6:14:02 PM
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 2, 2005
7:00:30 PM
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A couple days after Dabrillion, the brass rewards our success there and efforts on the last couple missions by giving us a two week vacation while the navy undergoes resupply and does some refitting of ships that have taken varying degrees of damage over the past couple of battles.
We decide as a squadron to go together to another planet for some r&r, get to know the squadron a little better, bond, all that good stuff. We take one of our ships or maybe the navy lends us one, which ever, that's just minor details.
We go to a planet and book ourselves in at a nice resort like hotel and relax, let the story evolve from there. -----------------------
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu |
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 3, 2005
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 3, 2005
7:19:21 PM
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My let's not get anal about the the spelling now eh? It wasn't crucial to the overall post.
Alright let's get this story started soon eh? -----------------------
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu |
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May 4, 2005
10:00:46 AM
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Alright, I read just a little bit of an old vacation story... This is going to be fun... -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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May 4, 2005
2:08:07 PM
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Wow. I just read the first chapter of the story....it was hillarious!! Very funny Shazam. I was reading it during Adv. Bio and i was laughing so hard. The bot was a very nice touch, I loved it. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!! -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 4, 2005
2:19:20 PM
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 4, 2005
2:21:04 PM
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ya shaz nice start off. but he said no explict sex scenes. he never said no minor sex scenes (just joking) lol -----------------------
y think ur all that and a bag of chips. well i am all that and a bag of skittles so taste the rainbow biatch
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 6, 2005
10:34:29 PM
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Right, just follow my lead with those bits and parts... NOW THEN, remember everybody, those dudes are on vacation... Vacation... Oooo, let the words sooth you. AND, well done everybody with the whole 'writing thing,' lol. Oh, and great job for your first time on this site Jen, keep it up. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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May 6, 2005
11:16:30 PM
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Jen posted right after my post, but it will work I think. Just keep things goin. -----------------------
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 7, 2005
11:00:46 AM
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Hey Jen I am Not that bad u could've put Shaz or jaden but why me?  -----------------------
y think ur all that and a bag of chips. well i am all that and a bag of skittles so taste the rainbow biatch
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 7, 2005
12:27:13 AM
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It was a joke, cuz in Darius's post, he put that you were hitting on me with cheesy lines. I wasn't trying to mean, sorry!!
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 7, 2005
3:39:45 PM
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ok no problem i dun care really but Darius is gonna get it.
hehehe (evil laugh) -----------------------
y think ur all that and a bag of chips. well i am all that and a bag of skittles so taste the rainbow biatch
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 7, 2005
7:12:39 PM
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Good luck man. My character would just snap you in half. lol.
Anyway, let me get something out here. My character is a very sullen man. He takes every serious and doesn't smile much. If you haven't taken hints from a few of Jaden's post, he is also extremely pale. (like myself in real life) To give you what he looks like, he's a lean, muscular tone man. Sandy blonde hair, brown eyes, usually messy apperance but clean surroundings such as his living area and crap, and as I said before: pale. When I get started more on my personnal story, you'll understand more of how his personality is formed. He's just a serious, protective man who, I emphasis on this, doesn't blush when he's embarrassed. I let that one slip this time. He's just a hard-ass former mercenary who got caught in one catyclysmic event that forced him into the Imperial Navy.
Like I said, if I can find time, I explain everything in my personnal story. -----------------------
Feed a womp rat a food ration, he'll want an energy stim. Give him an energy stim, and he'll rip your throat out.
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May 7, 2005
9:08:09 PM
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I'm making everyone just a little more joking than usual, but I'll be sure to get the fair share of action going so its not all like that. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 8, 2005
9:39:15 AM
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Shazam, STOP DUNKING ME!!
Did you really have to post that, Shazam?! Anyway, it doesn't matter. I can take a joke. So, when is the action going to start?
(Oh yeah, I'm going to make a post soon, just watch. I'll get back at you, Shazam...) -----------------------
Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.
   
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 10, 2005
2:03:03 PM
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Hey Darius i like your post and everything but u got a few mistakes,
1. they aren't my friends they are my brothers.
2. they dont like to fight unless they have too they are peaceful.
3. we are not trying to hurt you we are just going to prank you.
4 I am not a NOOB
thanks change it fast before shazam reads or else i am in big trouble -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 10, 2005
10:04:53 PM
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Don't change the part where the guy says," Are you trying to start a war." But yes, change them to suite DJ's imaginary friends, and keep it goin guys... -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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RE: Nazgul Vacation Story Notes
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May 11, 2005
2:11:57 PM
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Thanks shazam for having faith in my mental health and my writing abilities -----------------------
We ride together we stay together Nazgul
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May 11, 2005
2:12:32 PM
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May 11, 2005
5:24:57 PM
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Just to let you know Art, if theres temples out there... Watch out for the Morodins...
Yea man... They're these 15 feet long and several feet wide lizard dudes who secrete fertilizing agent on what they crawl over. It actually works really well and they're was actually a book with Mara Jade and Talon Karde...
Lemme tell you, cause this might be useful once I spring you out into the open guys... Us imperials let some illegal Morodin safari hunting go on so that the guys who ran the organization would give us a split of the prophet cause... Well, much like the gas found on bespin, the plants that are harvested,(once fertilized by a Marodin), is extremely powerful once inserted in with normal blaster packs... In other words, they pack a wallop.
The creatures are pretty intelligent, not sure on too much more like what they speak and stuff, but I know they were smart enough to establish a marketing area and almost make the place succesful before these dudes took over...
Right then, hopefully that's useful...
Rock on.
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*Flash Was Here...*
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May 11, 2005
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May 11, 2005
5:35:54 PM
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I don't think they're really harmful to humans,(thas not a guy in the picture, btw, lol), and for the most part they're just outside the tourist area. I have an idea for how to get us goin, so keep it goin, try to think what can happen on a vacation and incorporate it into the story, you should be fine. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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May 11, 2005
5:58:32 PM
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That'll work perfect for what I had in mind Shaz, thanks. -----------------------
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"The way of war is a way of deception. When able, feign inability; when deploying troops, appear not to be. When near, appear far; when far, appear near. Lure with bait; strike with chaos. If the enemy is full, be prepared. If strong, avoid him. If he is angry, disconcert him. If he is weak, stir him to pride. If he is relaxed, harry him; if his men are harmonious, split them. Attack where he is unprepared; appear where you are unexpected. This is victory in warfare; it cannot be divulged in advance. Victory belongs to the side that scores most in the temple calculations before battle. Most spells victory; least spells defeat; none, surer defeat. I see it in this way, and the outcome is apparent." -- Sun Tzu |
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May 11, 2005
6:14:43 PM
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Np... And I'm setting things up guys, but feel free to create your own conflicts... *Rock On* -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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May 12, 2005
3:23:18 PM
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My character has ventured into the forest area, and is exploring and what not. Sorry I left some of you guys behind, but I had the idea in my mind and just wanted to do it. -----------------------
Jaden Khaar
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May 12, 2005
8:50:06 PM
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Time to start some stuff... You can help me Jaden... -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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