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JMac
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
October 27, 2003 5:51:32 AM    View the profile of JMac 
All right, I just posted the beginning of a story in the Storynet.  Everyone has been whining about lack of Naval Activity, so here is your chance to prove that you actually care.  In addition, the member with the most good posts will be rewarded 100,000 ics from my pocket.
 
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JMac
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 12, 2003 5:27:04 AM    View the profile of JMac 
Right now it appears that only Chippy and Shazam, two Crewmen, are the only two people in the Navy besides Daishi, that are showing any real activity.  Come on now, there are more then 3 people in the Navy, we haven't gotten that small.  Start posting!
 
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LoneWolf
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 12, 2003 1:38:49 PM    View the profile of LoneWolf 
as thrilled as i am to see such activity the one thing i will say is this... THEY ARE POSTING TOO FAST! j/k really i've been busy and i keep trying to catch up but thier pace is fast, i think i'll just post a few more times but i'll mainly keep to myself. good job though.
 
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Kuroishi
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 12, 2003 1:55:38 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
What can I say when the creativity juices start flowing in my brain I can be a bit of a posting madman.

Though for some reason I have trouble coming up with plots on my own.  Not that I can't do it, it's just that it's harder for me to.
 
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 13, 2003 5:27:55 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
    On your last post...  When you  came to pick us up.  Damn.  I read out of, I can't remember what book...  But if you tape two blaster packs together, they charge and explode.  I was ganna create some boobie traps...  Chips last post was magnificent.  Must say.  Used alot of intrigue in there.  Very interesting.  Daishi, you seemed to have taken control of your character again.  That's good. 

Later,

-FMJR
 
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Kuroishi
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 13, 2003 6:08:36 PM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
I can't remember the title of that book either but I figured it was time to get the hell off planet, we'd spent too much time doing the ground pounder's jobs for them and there is still a battle brewing in space.
 
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 13, 2003 6:32:46 PM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
Oooh, wait till I get going. I have an interesting little idea that should throw a twist on why my character joined the VE. Heh heh. What's funny is that Lonewolf is right. I write these long posts on notebook paper, then try to post them, and someone has changed the story! 

Hey Shazam, you're doing real good. Keep up the good job, man.
 
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Shazam
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 13, 2003 8:02:25 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
    I think, what I've really started to appreciate is the deeper meanings to all of our characters...  They really seem to be developing.  Can see some attitudes...  No real genre mixtures happening yet...  But I can definetly sense some stuff.  I was also thinking of linking myself with your story Chip.  But I'm not sure that we should bring this up just yet.  Maybe I'll mention Sarah a bit later.  But for now we better get through this little battle. 
    One thing I beleive we've really overlooked...  Is that JMac and a bunch of guys are still down on the planet...  They were in search of Daishi before we were...  So maybe we should tie something about that in as well...

-FMJR
 
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Kuroishi
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 14, 2003 8:38:04 AM    View the profile of Kuroishi 
Ah but I took care of that.

In one of my recent posts I had a commtech pass the order for all forces to leave planet because a VSD was coming in to rain firey death on the rebel instilation.

Problem solved.

Also I personaly commed Warmaker letting him know I'd been recovered and was awaiting orders.

Aside from being a Rear Admiral my character actually has no authority to do anything.  So whoever is in charge of this fleet can be pleased or angry with me ordering thier ships around.
 
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JMac
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 14, 2003 11:25:01 AM    View the profile of JMac 
yeah, well, unfortunately my commlink was off so that it wouldn't give my position away, so I had some fun.
 
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Shazam
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 14, 2003 11:39:46 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
    Also...  Before I post on the story...  I need to get set up so I get sucked in on a tractor beam...  Just thought of it...  And I also wanna use my to blaster packs blow up idea... 
 
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chipmunk man
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 18, 2003 6:28:38 PM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
Shazam, I don't have time at the moment to write a post, so I'll tell you here. We can't kamikazi the planet. Note Kuroishi's post.

 
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Shazam
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 18, 2003 7:10:02 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
    Shit...  Blanked my mind...  Lol...  Give me a sec...  I got a better idea.  We'll ram a ship!  Lol.  I don't think we can capture a rebel ship...  So we'd better destroy it...
 
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JMac
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 19, 2003 4:51:11 AM    View the profile of JMac 
You want to ram a ship with a TIE?  You might as well have a fly ram a bear, it just won't do any good, and it will be suicide.
 
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[This message has been edited by JMac (edited November 19, 2003 4:51:39 AM)]
chipmunk man
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 19, 2003 6:06:47 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
No no, I get what Shazam is saying. Ram the Rebs with the CRUISER we captured! Sweet! Probably against regulations or something, but hey, might tick the Rebs off a little. Cool idea, Shazam.
 
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  RE: Naval Story/Writing Contest
November 19, 2003 12:28:35 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
    I thangyou...  You thought I wanted to ram it with a tie?  You insane...  nm...
    *me goes back to prepping the ship...
 
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