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SCTP discussion thread
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July 1, 2012
7:30:14 PM
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- OOC:
- This thread is reserved for discussion between midshipmen (trainees going through the Ship Captain Training Program) and their training officers.
Ship captains (SCAPs) are the lifeblood of Fleet Command. Roughly analogous to Squadron Commanding Officers (SCOs) in the Starfighter Corps, SCAPs are OOC club leaders, responsible for generating quality stories IC that will be incorporated into club canon. SCAPs have much more power within the club than flight members or junior officers, and therefore much more responsibility - hopefuls for the position have to prove themselves worthy to wield that power, and capable of honoring that responsibility. Now, in some ways, SCAPs have more flexibility than SCOs in terms of when and how often they post, and they certainly aren't required to post more often than other members of the Navy. But guess what, midshipmen: you aren't SCAPs yet. The SCTP is designed to test your suitability for command, and so you will be tested. You have to convince your training officer (and the NHC) that you're capable of posting high-quality, lengthy stories with some consistency and frequency if you want a ship of your own. Because if you simply can't do that, ever, then you're not right for the SCAP position. So get to it, midshipmen. The training materials can be found here: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Ship_Captain_Training_Program
SCAP /LT Wyl Trykon/SMC Surprise/TF:B /1Flt /FC /VEN /VE CNT /LT Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR][HNS][DSM][SWC][1NS][VC:B][LoM][VC:S][NC][GWC][VC:G](=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AD Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 1, 2012
7:31:59 PM
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Echelon, you've been assigned to the same Warden-class I trained on: the Duty. Serpent, you'll be on the Courage. Questions, PM me or post a note here. Both of you should subscribe to this thread, too. Get to it, midshipmen!
SCAP /LT Wyl Trykon/SMC Surprise/TF:B /1Flt /FC /VEN /VE CNT /LT Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR][HNS][DSM][SWC][1NS][VC:B][LoM][VC:S][NC][GWC][VC:G](=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AD Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 1, 2012
11:04:41 PM
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Command line updated as per first part of the training. Moving on to the next part when I get home from work!
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July 2, 2012
10:17:18 AM
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Okay, got some stuff done! Firstly, fixed that slight oddity in my new command line so it now reads "LCR Courage". Secondly, I have created my first NPC, Vagen Eosel, the First Officer of the Courage. Visible here. Further to that, I refined the Blank NPC Naval master copy (which I developed a few months back during a tidy of the Navy's NPC wiki page). Visible here. Also, a quick question if I may. The NPCs that we develope for this, can we take them with us to form the backbone of our actual commands (ie, can Vagen Eosel later be my XO when I have command of my corvette)?
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July 2, 2012
10:22:04 AM
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Aw darnit. I could have used that template. Also, you didn't have to flesh out the wiki page yet (it only had to be Basic), but hey, I think you have to do it eventually, so why not get it out of the way now!
I made my communication's officer, Dak Coven, but I'll share him once I use Serpent's NPC template...
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
10:44:38 AM
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Alright, here is my first NPC, Dak Coven. Since this page is Advanced level, Trykon, will I still have to embellish it further on?
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
3:05:49 PM
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Glad to see the activity, midshipmen. Serpent: Nice initiative, on the wiki page template. It looks good. As far as whether you'll get to use these NPCs: yes! That's the whole idea: the NPCs you make during the program will serve as your bridge crew/command staff when you're granted your own command. Eventually, you may have PCs of other club members stationed on your ship(s), but starting out, your crew will mostly be NPCs. Echelon: Looks good. And yes, the NPCs all need to have detailed wiki pages by the end of the Program. If you prefer to do "Advanced Level" pages for each one, as you create them, then you won't have as much work to do later.  A note: The SCTP is essentially in version 1.0 right now. It was in Beta when my predecessor Slasher rolled it out, and I went through it. By the time you guys graduate from the program (which I'm confident you will), I'd like to update it to version 2.0, so that the questions you're asking now have answers on the wiki pages for the program itself. If you see ways of doing that while you're doing the program - ways to clarify the copy, or things to add to the pages - please let me know. Also, scattered throughout the Navy Story Board, there are examples of how I approached the exercises of the SCTP. Not that I'm the best example, mind you; it's just that I'm the only example, so far, of someone who's completed the SCTP. One other thing: Ellesmere, you're on notice. We've kept you on the roster as a midshipman for far too long. Start doing the work assigned in the program now, in earnest, or I'm afraid I have to cycle you out.
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
5:35:26 PM
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To get an overview of the process, I went through all the pages of the training programme.
Section 1 talks about beginning a story about the training cruise of the the Warden-class ship. I am writing this now.
Section 4 talks about the Shakedown Cruise story, (with specific naming convention (Ship Name): (Callsign): Shakedown Cruise).
Are these the same, or are they two separate stories? If separate, is there special naming convention for the first story?
Sorry to be a pain with the questions, I am just determined not to screw this up!
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
5:44:37 PM
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Separate stories, but no naming conventions before your SCFE. First week, you're required to post to your regular story AND you're required to start a new story, featuring your new NPCs (and, it shouldn't START with a training cruise. Rather, it should be your PC and your NPCs, BEFORE they get assigned to your Warden-class ship for a training voyage). For you, Serpent, your "regular story" is whatever you're doing as XO of the Halcyon Warrior (right now, that's The Blockade). The idea is to prove you can post to multiple different stories, concurrently. That all clear?
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
5:50:18 PM
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No problem sir! One meet-and-great story, complete with awkwardness for my character and NPCs alike, coming right up!
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 2, 2012
7:25:43 PM
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I have now began my first story about the LCR Courage. You can find it hereThis is just the first post. I plan a few more, just touring the ship and meeting the crew, with a lot of CD interaction between Serpent and his new XO.
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July 2, 2012
7:43:10 PM
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 5, 2012
8:27:38 AM
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Hey Trick! I just sent my weekly report to Drac, but I sent it to you too, as I believe that is part of the SCTP.
And Eche, love the Light Cruiser pics!
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 5, 2012
8:43:01 PM
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Okay, just to keep this page up-to-date with what I've been doing: First, my ship, the Courage. Now made on the wiki and available hereAnd my crew. Chief Helmsman Ysanne Samasl is hereMy Chief Engineer Xela Fendar is hereMy Chief Gunner and Weapons Coordinator Kol Yandeer is hereMy Chief Sensor Officer and Communications Officer Dev Mishima is hereAll of these have appeared in my first story post about the Courage. For my 'introduce an NPC from his/her point of view' post (in part 2 of the SCTP) I have prepared my Chief Medical Officer, Doctor Padrin Praan, available hereThis will all be fleshed out a bit once I have more time!
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 5, 2012
9:05:14 PM
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Yeah, I guess I should get my wiki pages up to while I have free time....
I'm always a step behind you Serpent. 
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July 5, 2012
9:58:04 PM
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Here is my XO Elbatt Andia. I didn't do so well with the writing on the page, and I promise not to make any more "really intelligent" NPCs. 
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July 6, 2012
8:24:32 AM
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My second officer, Harvo. He has an intermediate wiki page.
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July 7, 2012
3:00:43 AM
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Just to keep you appraised Trick, but I think I have fulfilled the requirements for SCTP part 1. I did a post for the current story The Blockade today, and already did the first part of my "meet the crew" story earlier this week. Plus I created wiki pages for the crew. Anything else?
In fact, I am fairly proud of my activity recently. In the last week or so I have posted twice to The Blockade, once to my VENI story, once to Heart of the Fleet run-on story, twice to a CD story, once to my "meet the crew" story, and did a certification! That's 8 career posts in 8 days!
(This is all to make up for my woeful lack of activity in May/June)
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July 7, 2012
7:14:47 AM
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Awesome job Serpent!
I shall be going over to a friends house today, so I won't be able to do anything. 
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July 9, 2012
10:17:32 PM
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Second post of my "meet the crew" story is up. I shall now begin working on my third post for it, which I believe is the "NPC post from a new crewman's standpoint" post.
The crewman will be my Chief Medical Officer, whose arrival I forshadowed in this latest post.
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July 14, 2012
1:00:35 PM
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Okay, so I've done all of the wiki pages that I will need to do for my training program. Elbatt Andia, my Executive Officer. Harvo, my Second Officer. Dak Coven, my Chief Sensors/Communications Officer. Pash Tolod, my Chief Helms Officer. The post about him will be up soon. Libnor, my Chief Weapons Officer. Gren Rudemo, my Chief Engineer. Kole Wes, my Chief Medical Officer.
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July 14, 2012
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I'll expand on their ranks and positions section, but for now I need to post!
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July 15, 2012
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3 post of my "meet the crew" story is now up, and as promised it is from the point of view of my ship's new Medical Officer.
I decided that he would be really quite annoyed to be posted to such a small ship, a way of introducing some more tension to crew interaction!
I think that completes Section 2 of my SCTP.
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July 15, 2012
9:58:33 AM
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Alright Trykon! I'm awaiting your confirmation to begin my SCFE!
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July 15, 2012
11:47:52 AM
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Do me a favor, midshipmen, and post once to this thread with links back to all wiki work and posts you've completed so far. It'll make clearance for the SCFE come much faster! 
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July 15, 2012
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Elbatt Andia, my Executive Officer. Harvo, my Second Officer. Dak Coven, my Chief Sensors/Communications Officer. Pash Tolod, my Chief Helms Officer. Libnor, my Chief Weapons Officer. Gren Rudemo, my Chief Engineer. Kole Wes, my Chief Medical Officer. That's all of the wiki work I've done. And here is my story. 
MS/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/Warden-class light cruiser Duty/TF:TH/3Flt/VENA/VEN/VE
TO/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/PLF Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
[SoA] [NAR] [CAR] [MC2] [BWC] [HNS] [MC1] [SWC] [1NS] [LoM] [VC:B] [=*ENG*=] {VehM} {SfrM} {HypM} {Astr} {LogS} {Shut} {Gunn}
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Trykon
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[VE-DJO] Adept [VE-NAVY] Lieutenant
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 15, 2012
12:12:35 AM
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Echelon, a couple minor corrections for you:
1.) Abrae doesn't have "many factories," civilian or otherwise. It's Navy HQ on Cap station in orbit, and the old HQ complex on the surface, housing VENI in "The Tower" and VENA in "The Fortress," and not much else. I like Elbatt Andia otherwise, and he could even be "from" Abrae, if you really want, but his dad's background needs to be changed slightly. I'd suggest Tadath or Cepany or Lotaith for his workplace.
2.) Libnor's backstory needs a little refinement. Deserting the New Republic because they have a high crime rate is a little extreme, and it doesn't make a lot of psychological sense, when the VE then imprisons him, and he still joins them when he's released from jail. Clean up the reasons he joins. I like him as a character, and you can use him, but the vast majority of Mon Cals don't like Imperial factions; justify why he's in the VE.
Other than that, you're clear to begin the SCFE. Congratulations! 
SCAP /LT Wyl Trykon/SMC Surprise/TF:B /1Flt /FC /VEN /VE CNT /LT Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR][HNS][DSM][SWC][1NS][VC:B][LoM][VC:S][NC][GWC][VC:G](=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AD Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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Echelon
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 15, 2012
12:23:53 AM
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Alright, I fixed those too things. Andia is from Tadath, and I made Libnor's parents rich, corporate, Imperial sympathizers.
So what prompt will I have for the exam?
MS/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/Warden-class light cruiser Duty/TF:TH/3Flt/VENA/VEN/VE
TO/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/PLF Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
[SoA] [NAR] [CAR] [MC2] [BWC] [HNS] [MC1] [SWC] [1NS] [LoM] [VC:B] [=*ENG*=] {VehM} {SfrM} {HypM} {Astr} {LogS} {Shut} {Gunn}
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Trykon
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 15, 2012
12:48:12 AM
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Prompt C: Distress Call. Good luck, Midshipman.
SCAP /LT Wyl Trykon/SMC Surprise/TF:B /1Flt /FC /VEN /VE CNT /LT Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR][HNS][DSM][SWC][1NS][VC:B][LoM][VC:S][NC][GWC][VC:G](=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AD Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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Echelon
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[VE-NAVY] Warrant Officer 2nd Class
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Total Posts: 546
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RE: SCTP discussion thread
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July 15, 2012
12:55:17 AM
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Awesome, that's the one I wanted!
So, what are the grading guidelines?
MS/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/Warden-class light cruiser Duty/TF:TH/3Flt/VENA/VEN/VE
TO/WO2 Rhycus 'Echelon' Bandoran/PLF Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
[SoA] [NAR] [CAR] [MC2] [BWC] [HNS] [MC1] [SWC] [1NS] [LoM] [VC:B] [=*ENG*=] {VehM} {SfrM} {HypM} {Astr} {LogS} {Shut} {Gunn}
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