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Trykon
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  RE: SCTP discussion thread
July 15, 2012 12:59:49 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
It's on the wiki: 3+ posts, total should be 1000+ words.  I'll also be looking at quality, which isn't something that can easily be distilled into a grading rubric.  Try to make this story the best of your VEN career, to date.  I'll be looking for a maturity OOC (realism, psychological depth of the characters, etc.), more than I'm looking for anything specific IC.
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  RE: SCTP discussion thread
July 15, 2012 1:05:17 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
I'll try my best. I have, however, noticed that my writing in the past posts have sort of declined. This is a chance to really get my writing up to par. I've got all week, so it shouldn't be a problem.

How about this: I work on all of the posts, then post them all at once at the end of the week. Sound good?

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July 15, 2012 8:04:11 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
Okay, here we go:

My ship is the LCR Courage.

The First Officer is Vagen Eosel.

The Helmsman is Ysanne Samasl.

The Chief Engineer is Xela Fendar.

The Chief Gunner is Kol Yandeer.

The Coms Officer is Dev Mishima.

The Chief Medical Officer is Padrin Praan.

And my "meet the crew" story is here.

I am now working on the final post for that, should be up in an hour or two.
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  RE: SCTP discussion thread
July 15, 2012 9:47:32 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
Final post is up!  Its really a case of love it or hate it!  Please let me know what you think (and, if necessary, warn me to never do that again!).

Also, I have begun work on the wiki page for the new NPC introduced in that story, my Second Officer, Farnish Quinn.
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  RE: SCTP discussion thread
July 16, 2012 1:39:46 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Truly a love-it-or-hate-it moment (don't worry, I loved it).    You're clear to begin your SCFE, Serpent.  Do Story Prompt B, with both surprises.

And, Echelon, the SCTP is for your character, IC, but it's also for you, OOC.  And YOU, Finbar, need to have confidence.  Don't give disclaimers, buddy!    You can do this!  if you want to hold back, and post them all at once, that's fine; just take your time, and do the work.  But if you're going to have the position of ship captain in the VEN division of this club, you need to believe in yourself.  We need captains with vision, and maturity, who can write their own ship's plots and storylines, with very little supervision, which will then become official club canon.  Show me you can write entertaining, character-driven stories, which fit within the shared setting of the VE: "realistic" Star Wars fiction.
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July 16, 2012 8:15:01 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
Prompt B, both surprises!  No problem, Trick!  I shall begin working on that over the next few days and aim to have post one up by the weekend!
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July 20, 2012 7:06:55 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
I have finally began my SCFE!  The first post is here.

I expect to have the second post up next week some time, but I am away next weekend so it might be a while longer before I finish.
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  RE: SCTP discussion thread
July 20, 2012 7:53:19 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
I've got my first post written, but not up...don't expect the entire thing before next weekend. Awfully busy learning my lines, and Crest is pressuring me to post army wise. But I guess I could post that post now...though, it does need some editing.

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July 31, 2012 9:57:58 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
Well overdue I know, and I am sorry.  But post 2 of my SCFE is now done!  Just one part to go, and I intend to have it up in the next week.
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July 31, 2012 10:43:06 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Good to see!  I'll read it ASAP!  Echelon, how about you?
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August 1, 2012 8:20:40 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
I've had one post written for awhile, I just haven't posted it. I've been busy with the ESC in the Army, but I think I can take a small break from that soon and finish up my Navy stuff.

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August 4, 2012 7:55:13 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Alright, posted the first post, and wrote the other two today.

My SCFE is done! Awaiting grading, sir.

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August 4, 2012 10:08:47 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Detailed comments are on the story thread itself, Ech, but in short: you pass.  Well done.    Now get to work on the last few steps of the SCTP!

Serpent, can't wait to see your finale!
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August 4, 2012 10:21:55 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Trykon, it says that I need to create a wiki for the ship I'm taking commmand of, so what ship am I taking command of?

I know it'll either be a CR90 or DP20...but the name?

PS: I do like the Chaser...

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August 4, 2012 10:26:03 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
After your performance, I'm pleased to announce you've been provisionally chosen to command the CR90 Stonewall.  Complete your coursework satisfactorily, and the ship is yours. 
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August 4, 2012 10:30:14 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
"There is Jackson standing like a stone wall. Let us determine to die here, and we will conquer. Rally behind the Virginians!"

Stonewall Jackson! Most brilliant general of the Civil War (not the English one, Serpent) until his own troops accidentally shot him...

I feel like during a battle, I should write some NPC saying, "There is Rhycus and his ship standing like a stone wall. Let us determine to die here, and we will conquer. Rally behind the Vast Empire!" :P

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August 4, 2012 10:36:25 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
I'm glad you instantly got the reference/like it.  It was Drac's idea, if memory serves, to assign you there.  So you can thank him. 
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August 4, 2012 10:45:23 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Trykon, I basically copied the Defiance's wiki page for the Stonewall's but I switched out the information. Is that okay that I used your template?

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August 4, 2012 10:52:50 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Of course.  Happy it was useful.    Just make sure to build on that base, and make the page your own, you know?
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August 8, 2012 9:30:30 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
So sorry that this took so long, but I had promised myself that I would finish the SCFE before I went to South Africa, and I have done so!

Please have a read and see what you think!

(I also have a lot of wiki pages to finish and update, but alas this work will now have to wait until after my holiday).
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August 8, 2012 9:40:19 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
An impressive finale to a great SCFE, Serpent!  Have a good trip, and we'll see you when you're back to finish up the final details of the SCTP. 
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August 9, 2012 9:58:32 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
Okay, I still have a day before I get on my flight, and since its 18 hours from Japan to South Africa, i would rather sleep!  So it is that I shall not go to bed tonight, and instead stay awake for the 24 hours leading to my flight.

Translation, VE and SWTOR marathon!

I've been doing some wiki work.  I've updated the wiki page for the Courage and then completed to Advanced level the 5 NPCs I want to take with me to my actual command.  They are as follows:

The ship itself, the LCR Courage.

The First Officer, Vagen Eosel.

The Helmsman, Ysanne Samasl.

The Chief Engineer,  Xela Fendar.

The Chief Gunner, Kol Yandeer.

The Coms Officer, Dev Mishima.

I will be leaving Dr Praan and the Second Officer, Farnish Quinn, behind for the Academy to use.  They and 8 other NPCs will be done to a Basic level later this evening (meeting the 10 NPC requirements for Ship Captain Training Program Section IV).

Anything else I should be doing during my battle to stay awake?
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August 9, 2012 10:44:37 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Good luck!  I know that battle well!

If you like, you can start on your Shakedown Cruise story... looks like that's the final thing before you make SCAP! 
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August 10, 2012 10:57:18 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
I can begin work on it now, certainly!

However, I need to be clear on something first.  The Skakedown Cruise is with my actual ship, not my training vessel (the LCR Courage).  I know my actual command is going to be a CR-90, but was it named yet?
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August 10, 2012 11:10:06 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
If I'm correct, it'll be the Defiance.

Here is the Navy roster, and above the CR90 Stonewall (my ship) is the vacant Defiance.

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August 10, 2012 1:00:00 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
Good call Eche, thanks for noticing that!

I'll be writing offline, and I doubt I'll have the first post done before I leave.  So I'll use the name Defiance, and if I need to change it before posting I suspect I shall have ample time to do so!
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August 10, 2012 1:37:36 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
I guess I should start mine too, since I haven't done anything...

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August 10, 2012 3:35:43 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
This is another place where the SCTP isn't very clear.  I like the idea of you guys ending the program with the shakedown cruise of your first proper command, so, yes: Serpent will command Defiance (my old boat) while Echelon has the Stonewall.  Good luck to you both, and remember, this is the last writing assignment of the SCTP, where you have much more freedom than in your SCFE: show you have what it takes to be a captain, IC and OOC.
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August 16, 2012 1:13:41 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Alright. One question. For the Shakedown Cruise, it says we need to have a post with combat system testing. Does that actually have to be testing, or can it just be combat in general?

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August 16, 2012 1:17:16 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
I'd like you to incorporate a weapons test, yes.  But, for example, during my shakedown cruise the test was interrupted partway through with more combat, so anything is possible. 

Remember, the specifics of most Academy courses are there to test you OOC, as much as IC: can you write a compelling story, where parts of the plot are dictated by someone else?  I know you can, Ech, but I'm just reminding you of the principle.    Even SCAPs are going to be writing with other VEers.
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