Aelin
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July 24, 2011
2:53:49 PM
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Crewman Aelin Traxona reporting for duty! I'll go ahead and save you the trouble of waiting for a bio:
Physical Appearance
Homeworld: Timbra Ott
Age: 32
Species: Human
Native Language: Galactic Basic
Gender: Female
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 133 lbs
Hair Color: Azure Blue
Eye Color: Azure Blue
Scars: One on back
Tattoos: None
Physical Description
Aelin is a slender woman with naturally blue eyes and hair inherited from a distant non-human ancestor. She has a thin but long scar running diagonally down her back as a result of a victim's attempt to defend himself. When off-duty, she wears either her standard-issue flightsuit or a jumpsuit retained from 'the old days'.
Personality
Aelin has a dispassionate, professional attitude towards everyone and has little empathy for either her enemies or her allies. Essentially, she's a sociopathic gunman with a love of order. That attitude, combined with her strong sense of self-preservation, often puts her at odds with... well, pretty much anyone with empathy. Despite what her previous experience as a rebel assassin would suggest, she is a very by-the-book Imperial who doesn't take crazy chances or pull suicidal stunts if she can avoid it. She hardly ever laughs, and can't stand overly cheerful people. She values the chain of command, if for no other reason than it keeps her teammates alive and useful.
Background
Aelin was raised by her two parents in the harsh urban environment of Timbra Ott. Her parents were lead assassins in the mercenary faction, and trained her in the same profession. By her ninth birthday, she was already accompanying and assisting her parents in field missions involving hunting down and killing rival faction members. She quickly learned to feel no remorse for the slayings, because as her parents explained to her, the enemy consisted of "soulless killers" who "would do the same to you in a heartbeat". Her mother's explanation of their motives became the driving force for her career: "There are people out there who don't want us to create peace and order. It's our job to show them they're wrong." Her worldview was significantly altered during an assault on the enemy base. where members of her team robbed and murdered relatively innocent bystanders. If Aelin had been more empathetic, that would've made her realize that her teammates were no more than "soulless killers". Instead, she simply decided to join a force much more capable of restoring order, and, in her eyes, less focused on personal goals: the Empire. She sabotaged her faction's efforts, stole an old beat-up Z-95 Headhunter, and fled. She found the nearest Empire-aligned world and applied for a position in the army. After less than a year of service she was discharged for abandoning critically injured members of her squad. While leaving the base she ran into a ex-navy pilot who, after hearing her story, recommended she try the Navy next. Soon afterwards, the fledgling New Republic caused the collapse of the formal Galactic Empire. While she worked as an independent mercenary, she studied Imperial tactics and regulations, becoming more and more convinced of its ability to ensure order. She stumbled across the Vast Empire during one of her jobs, and, remembering the pilot's suggestion, she applied for the Starfighter Corps. She was by no means the most skilled pilot, but her rigid adherence to standard flight maneuvers and protocols earned her a place in the Naval Academy.
ID Line: TRN/CRW Aelin/A-3/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Shield/PLF Cappadocious/TF:TH/3Flt/SC/VEN/VE
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Trykon
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RE: Newbie
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July 24, 2011
11:25:36 PM
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Welcome to the Vast Empire Naval Academy, Crewman Aelin. My name is Warrant Officer 2nd Class Wyl Trykon, and I'll be your Training Officer (TO) while you go through the Academy's Orientation program. I'll be around to help get you acclimated to life in the Vast Empire (a process we call, "Basic Training"), the most important part of which is learning how to role-play as an Imperial character (a starfighter pilot or junior officer aboard a capital ship) in an ongoing, collaboratively-written story. If you choose to serve in the Starfighter Corps, these skills will be taught in a program we call, "Flight School," and if you choose to serve in Fleet Command as a junior bridge officer aboard a capital ship, you'll learn these skills in a program called, "Command School." But with all that said, Training is fairly straightforward, and very quick. Heck, with your first post here on the Naval Academy board, you've already completed Imperial Initiation, (well done) and you've already got a bio up which indicates you've chosen Flight School. Nice initiative, recruit! Since you seem to have found the Academy wiki pages, let's talk about your bio. It could use some more details. For personality, is she a [url= http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociopathy]sociopath[/url]? And you can't just say she went from rebel assassin to model Imperial - we need to see how such a transition is possible. Flesh it out a little more, and get your ID Line together, and we'll move forward. If you need further guidance, please send a Private Message with your questions to "Trykon" here on the ComNet, or go to the Naval Academy channel on IRC, which is #VENA, and make an inquiry of any staff member. Good luck with your training, Crewman, and again, welcome to the Vast Empire. Sincerely, WO2 Wyl Trykon, your TO Useful Links: • An overview of what exactly we do here in the VEN • The Vast Empire Naval Academy wiki page • The wiki page for Basic Training • Flight School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3 • Command School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3 • How-to-create-a-wiki-page Tutorial • Java-based IRC chat
SCAP /WO2 Wyl Trykon/CR90 Defiance/TF:B /2Flt /FC /VEN /VE XNT /WO2 Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR]/(=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AC Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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Aelin
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
12:39:34 AM
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Updated the first post with bio and ID line. And yes, she's a sociopath, but I'm planning on having her 'thaw out' a little bit over time. Wiki page: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Aelin
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Trykon
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
12:56:16 AM
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Make sure the ID Line is on that wiki page, and then you're clear for the next Chapter.
SCAP /WO2 Wyl Trykon/CR90 Defiance/TF:B /2Flt /FC /VEN /VE XNT /WO2 Wyl "Trick" Trykon /PLF Cappadocious/VENA /VEN /VE [SoA][SoV][BWC][NSM][E][NAR]/(=*AE* =)(=*SAE* =)(=*TG* =)(=*SCFE* =)TRN/AC Trykon/DJO/VEDJ
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
5:11:24 PM
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Post looks good, Aelin, but a bit on the short side. I'm passing you, but in future we could use more description of the various maneuvers involved in a dogfight. You're clear for the final Chapter: send a sample report to me and Atrasin via PM so we know you know how, and then post a copy of it here for reference.
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Aelin
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
5:17:13 PM
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Aelin’s Report: 7/25/11Activity:Joined the academy, created wiki page and bio, posted on Raptor story Upcoming plans:Get placed in a squadron and start writing posts; work on my wiki page and backstory; appease Command Questions/Suggestions:Just one: will I be placed in Nightshrike or Regents? Crewman Aelin Trainee TRN/CRW Aelin/A-3/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Shield/PLF Cappadocious/TF:TH/3Flt/SC/VEN/VE
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
8:02:44 PM
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Crewman Aelin Traxona has passed Flight School and has been promoted to Leading Crewman and placed in Nightshrike Squadron, Beta Flight, 4th Fighter, aka Nightshrike 8.
CNT/1LT Rorran "Slasher" Gorma/PLT Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE TFC:B|SCAP/1LT Rorran "Slasher" Gorma/ICF II Fearless/TF:B/2nd FLT/VEN/VE [IC1][SoV][CBV.][MC:1][MC:2][SoL][GWC][SWC][BWC][NS-1][LSM][=*IM*=][=*SWC*=](=*A*=)(=*SA*=)(=^ME^=)
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RE: Newbie
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July 25, 2011
8:42:27 PM
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Congratulations! Report in to Nightshrike, and get postin'! 
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Atrasin
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RE: Newbie
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July 26, 2011
6:03:05 AM
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belay that order.
Aelin, you are on hold until Stormz and i have a discussion with you.
CNO|COMD Atrasin|ISD Iron Duke|TF:A|1Flt|VEN|VE [=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][=*TG*=][=*Eng*=][=*BO*=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)[LSM][VC:B][DSM][VC:S] Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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