Just posting here to say Hi, I am a new recruit.

Physical Appearance
        Homeworld: SS Vanguard
        Age: 27
        Species: Human
        Native Language: Galactic Basic Standard
        Gender: Male
        Skin Color: Tan-Caucasian
        Height: 6'8
        Weight: 190 lbs
        Hair Color: Dark Brown
        Facial Hair: None
        Eye Color: Dark Brown
        Scars: None
        Tattoos: None

  Physical Description
  Athletic build,has a slight hunch stature. Fingers on both hands are longer than the average Human.

  Personality
  Pros: Always Honest,a team player, patient, & not easily angered.
  Cons: Anti-Social, stubborn, always honest, & a daredevil.
  Overview: Is relaxed about most things, he tends to stay quiet unless his opinion/voice is needed, & he has a lack of self-preservation, meaning he will do anything, regardless of the risks.

  Character’s Background
Flensor was born aboard the SS Vanguard, his parents were spacers who worked aboard a Imperial cargo ship. After his birth, his mother resigned and his father transferred to a shipyard in Coruscant as a cargo loader. He lived a normal life as many other kids, except he was anti-social, instead of hanging out with his friends he stayed home and read books about ships. Flensor received his nickname after a week of going through unlucky events. The word Flensor comes from the world Sakiya, it is a bird who has been rumored to cause bad luck onto the person who looks at it. When he was old enough he became a mercenary, he had a contract to protect the SS Vanguard throughout it's voyages.

He had preformed escort sorties for the SS Vanguard for nine years,and planned on preforming more throughout the years.
But, his plans were drastically changed. As usual, Flensor was escorting the SS Vanguard from point A to point B. But, this time, instead of hauling cargo, the Vanguard was smuggling slaves to a mining outpost. Flensor was always unaware of what the Vanguard transported. During the voyage, a Imperial patrol stopped the cargo ship and their escort, Flensor. When the patrol discovered the slaves, all of the crew aboard the ship was arrested, and Flensor. He had lived up to his nickname, again.

Flensor was sent to court like the rest of the crew, but instead of going to prison, the Judge ruled that Flensor was to enlist in the Starfighter Corps. If he does not enlist he shall be sent to prison and kept there for sixty-three years. Obviously, Flensor went with option one and enlisted in the Corps. He is currently awaiting training from the Academy.

OOC:

Note: For the Pros & Cons I purposely placed Always Honest as a Pro and Con, and I couldn't fix that weird spacing in the second paragraph of the bio.

ID Line looks good, Flensor, and I appreciate your quick work on the bio.  You MIGHT want to flesh out the particulars a bit more fully: he really had no idea that the ship carried slaves?  Was it the first time they were doing that?  Was he misled about its cargo?  If he was just criminally negligent, then has he learned his lessson (i.e. is he more inquisitive about jobs and/or distrusting of people)?  In other words, it would be very useful to your fellow writers to include more of the why and how of his experience, so they know more of who he is based on his past.  Other than that, though, it's looking good.  Post a link here to your character's wiki page, and you'll be ready for the next Chapter of training! 

-WO2 Trykon

Nice job, Flensor!  You're clear to move on to the next Chapter.  Keep up the good work, Crewman!

-WO2 Trykon

Flensor’s Report:07/11/2011

Activity:
Number of Posts: 1
Pay per Click: None
Any Contributions: None

Upcoming plans:
Planning on increasing post activity and possibly create a Cert post.

Questions/Suggestions:
None

Crewman Flensor
Flight Member Raptor Squadron
TRN/CRW Flensor/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Shield/PLF Cappadocious/TF:TH/3Flt/SC/VEN/VE

Promoted to Senior Crewman and awarded the Star of the Academy congratulations. Your new assignment is Nightshrike Squadron, A-4.