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Kami
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  The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 1:06:36 AM    View the profile of Kami 
I wasn't sure where to put this, so the lounge will suffice. As some of you are aware, I have gone back to university this year after four long years of suffering in the hospitality (an industry that slowly chips away at your sanity until you have no faith left in humanity).

Going back to full-time study should have been difficult. I admit it was a bit of a shock in terms of the lifestyle change, and yes, I'm no-where near finishing so there is the chance that I'll still crumple and find myself plonked behind a coffee machine somewhere. But what I've noticed lately is that most mature-age students (and even school leavers) struggle with their writing ability. This is particularly evident when they're abruptly asked to produce essays/reports/stories that ultimately determine a final grade.

To get to the point: I have had little to no difficultly in adapting my writing style to the guidelines provided. Sure, some of this could be natural ability, but I am personally convinced that my capacity to write well is the result of practice. One of my tutors even recently remarked that it seemed like I'd "spent years working on flow and structure."

He was right. I had. Here, in the VE.

This club might just seem like a hobby, or a little but of fun on the side, and for years that was how I perceived it. The truth is that even if you only log on here every few weeks, or contribute sporadically, you are not only having fun, and socializing with some incredibly fabulous people from around the world: you're writing. And you're learning about how to write well.

When I joined this club six years ago I was as about as green as they come. I had far too much enthusiasm and little to no clue as to how to convert the crazy concepts milling about in my head into words in a semi-coherent fashion. But I stuck around (despite a few long-term vacations), I read a lot of other members work, and I actively sought to improve my writing via feedback from other members. I've now reached a stage where I can say that I am confident in my writing ability. And for someone who is incredibly self-critical, that seemingly simple statement offers me a great deal of reassurance.

I guess what I want to say to new VE members is take full advantage of this club. It has an amazing collection of stories available for you to read, and some absolutely outstanding writers around that can help guide and direct you if you're struggling. Don't be afraid of taking risks: start run-ons just for the hell of it, chat about authors and stories you love, post personal work up here for others to reflect on. Offer your opinion on other members work. You never know, your suggestions/criticisms/support may be critical in helping others as much as they have helped you over the process of your time in the club.

I know the VE might just seem like a geeky, Star Wars clique, but everyone here is a writer, and the majority of us have the potential to be great writers. I know that I still have an awful lot to learn. But I'm looking forward to continue doing so in such a welcoming and supportive environment
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 1:17:15 AM    View the profile of Jegora 
I've been meaning to post something to this effect for a while now, but it seems Kami is channeling my thoughts. Which is kind of creepy.

So, instead of writing out the same thing all over again...

"That's what she said."
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 3:03:32 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
But have you submitted your DJK journey for university grading yet?
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 3:48:28 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Thanks, Kami, for so eloquently expressing something I've been thinking about for a while.  The VE is a lot of fun, and the people are awesome, but maybe the most remarkable thing hereabouts is that we all get to enjoy those aspects of the club while simultaneously learning a valuable skill set over the course of our time here: we're learning how to write well, how to read critically, and how to tell stories.

That's pretty cool.
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 3:49:00 PM    View the profile of Havock 
Well said indeed Kami, I've personally felt the same way and even been trying to come up with a way to use a similar writing club atmosphere for my classroom (if they would stop making me teach bloody math).

I think Kami's post should be added to the main page honestly, since the endorsements there now are a decade old.

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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 3:55:25 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Hear, hear!  I wholeheartedly second the motion to post Kami's words on the main page!
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May 19, 2011 4:25:21 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 5:42:24 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Sounds like a plan to me. There's no better advertisement than the truth.

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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 19, 2011 8:07:38 PM    View the profile of Slasher 
I agree as well, let's see those words on the front page!
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 20, 2011 8:13:46 PM    View the profile of Yillis 
And to think, movies are to blame for self improvement.

I wish I could think along the same lines Kami, but your dedication outweighs mine by the tons.

Keep on trucking
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  RE: The VE: Not just a hobby.
May 22, 2011 5:47:10 AM    View the profile of Aeos 
Thumbs up Kami

As many of you know, I'm not a native English speaker, and I can only attribute my current efficiency with the language to the Vast Empire.

Essay writing has become a breeze for me, and I even outclass my fellow English speakers in writing. (Which doesnt say much unfortunately :P)

But we should definitely update our front page for a change.

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