Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1550 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:00:28 AM | | Just for reference sake. These stories was written, posted and passed back when I was Hellra. Riqimo said it was okay to pick things up again as Aeos.
Combat Engineer
EDIT: Holy ####, looking back at these, what I n0000b I was^^ Btw, pretend I made use of bold and italics HTML, I was too lazy to insert them in these posts. I'll fix it prolly later. Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [This message has been edited by Aeos (edited February 7, 2008 11:19:23 AM)] | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1551 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:05:56 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 1: Electrical Systems Story 1: Basic Electronics/Wiring
Hellra sat on the floor cursing as she sucked her injured thumb. A small smell of burned plastic filled the air. "Bluddy wires" said Hellra out loud not paying heed to her surroundings. "All well, no problems here I presume?" asked an officer over her shoulder. Hellra silently cursed as she jumped to attention. "No problems here Sir" she said with confidence. "Oh, good, can I expect this to be finished soon than?" asked the officer. "Oh yes sir, no difficulties at all" answered Hellra, inwardly panicking. "Carry on" with that said the officer walked out of the small room that Hellra was busy in. It wasn't a room exactly. It was one of the training simulators used for training pilots. At the moment however it could not used for training, as one pilot got so frustrated at the simulator for being so difficult, that he pulled out his hand blaster and shot it at the steering stick. His trainer was not impressed. And now Hellra was stuck with the tiring task of fixing the mess. Her commanding officer said she should have no problem with this, as it was only basic wiring and electronics. The room was dimly lit, so Hellra was forced bring a small portable light with her. Hellra raised the flashlight to have another look at what she is supposed to, the blue light flashed in the metal that was exposed to it. She will have to cut the burned plastic out first in order to get to the inner workings of the wiring of the stick. Hellra scratched her head. Was she supposed to unscrew the whole outer panel or just cut out the damaged bit? "I knew I should have listened in class when we were talking about this" grumbled Hellra. She ran a thumb across the melted pieces. A piercing pain made its way yet again across her thumb. "Ouch!" Hellra let out a few words that didn't fit her. She lifted her thumb closer for inspection. "Great, now I am qualified to say both my thumbs an injured" Hellra slouched against the wall. She ran her one hand through her hair out off nature. Realizing her glasses were dirty she took them off. She winced at the sudden light penetrating her eyes. Closing her eyes she quickly cleaned her dark glasses before sliding them back over her eyes. Hearing someone nearing Hellra quickly rushed back to working, a few minutes later a droid entered the room Hellra turned around to look who it is. "Droid C1, how nice of you to join me" said Hellra sarcastic as she continued to fiddle with the wires peeling from the steer sticks inside. The droid was small build, and had two small wheels to get around. "That. Looks. Very. Easy." Said the droid in his start-stop formed sentences. "Oh yes, it should be easy for you since you are made of wires!" said Hellra getting angry. "Look here Droid C1--" Hellra was however cut short when the droid suddenly interrupted her. "I. Am. Not. Droid. C. 1" said the driod, Hellra swore she could see the driod smirk, but that is impossible since droids can't smirk. Hellra peered closely at the inscriptions that were printed on the driod. "Oh your name is G7...oops" said Hellra unfazed; she turned back to her work. As Hellra worked she could feel the droid's penetrating stare on her back. She couldn't concentrate; she wasn't really concentrating before anyway but still... "Do you mind?" said Hellra with irritation in her voice. "Mind?" asked the droid confused "Yeah, like leaving me alone?" Asked Hellra almost pleadingly now without a sound the droid left leaving Hellra the sore business of untangling the wires. Once again Hellra leaned against the wall sighing in boredom. Her hand went up running through her hair once more. She sighed again. She looked over to the mess she made with the wires. She hated working with wires. There was a time when she would have loved it. Her thoughts drifted to her past, she was only ten. Two years before she ran away from home. She and her friends who were mostly boys made bets that could endure electrical shocks best. They had a big competition and she thought it would be best to train for it, improve her stamina. She decided she must electrify herself. One problem, she didn't own one of those little machines to shock herself. Hellra made a very foolish decision. She will electrify herself through the plugs. The plugs had one hole where she pushed a wet piece of wire through. The pain was unbearable; she felt numb and couldn't move at all. Her father found her and pulled her away from the plug and wire. The doctors of the hospital where her father had rushed her said it was a miracle she survived. After this electrifying incident Hellra lost her sense of touch, not completely but she wasn't so sensitive when she got burned or hurt anymore. "Aren't you suppose to be working?" asked a voice interrupting Hellra's thoughts. Hellra looked up alert. She relaxed when she saw it was only a secretary but got up none the less. "Yes I properly should, answered Hellra miserably. Just looking at the wires and thinking about the basic rules of electrons made her want to scream. The secretary crouched on the floor to have a look at the wires. "Oh my, quite a mess you made, said the secretary worriedly, she wasn’t worried about the wires. That could be fixed easily. She was worried about Hellra. If her commanding officer found this he won't be pleased. "Have looked at your instruction manual, there is a chapter about basic wiring and electronics" suggested the secretary; Hellra gave her a thankful look as she stormed out of the room to find her manual. Out of breath Hellra arrived at her small closet. She opened it and begun to rummaged through it. Her closet was a mess, a bigger mess than her wires. After a few minutes of fruitless searching, Hellra remembered that she packed it with her other books in her bedside cabinet. She shared a room with two other girls. Hellra jerked her small bedside cabinet door open, crammed full of books. She couldn't get luckier; it was right on top of all her books. Before Hellra exited her room she had one lost look around. While her other two roommates sides were neat and tidy, Hellra's side represented complete chaos. "The sergeant will kill me, mumbled Hellra to herself. Indeed he would, her bed was not made, and she overslept as usual and didn't even have time to pack her clothes in her closet. "Connect the blue wire to port D" Hellra was mumbling the instructions as she untangled the wires from each other. She felt much more confident in what she was doing now. About two hours flew by. Hellra was on the brim off finishing. She still had to connect one last wire. "That. Took. You. Very. Long" Hellra turned from her crouched position from the floor to the droid "Oh it’s you again" she said to Droid G7, G7 turned its half moon head looking around the room. "You know why it took so long?" asked Hellra happily, nothing could spoil her mood. She didn't give G7 a chance to answer her& "Because it has bigger brains that you" The driod ignored her comment as he moved closer to her. Hellra watched him out of the corner of her eye. "That. Port. Should. Be. Connected. To. The. Blue. Wire. Not. The. Red. Wire." Said G7 as he inspected the neatly placed wires that lined each other now. Hellra felt her self-control slipping once more. She flipped her book open to see if he was right, he was. This meant she would have to unplug at least fifteen wires to correct this one mistake. A small yell went through the air, and blue sparks filled it. Hellra looked down smugly at her handiwork. She punched G7 in his weak spot, the area where his stomach is supposed to be. Good thing he wasn't a fighting droid, or she would have been in big trouble and wouldn't have been able to punch hi. Hellra rubbed her sore fist& "Wow even the messenger droids are made of stronger materials today" mumbled Hellra. Another few hours later Hellra's commanding officer checked in where she was working. He saw her sitting against the wall writing something on a notepad. Hellra saw his shadow. She jumped from her sitting position against the wall in attention. "You are finished?" asked the officer "Yes Sir, I am just finishing my report to you" said Hellra The officer took the notepad from Hellra's hand. His eyes glided over it. "Good" said the officer as he walked over to the dashboard with its melted steering stick. "Sir we will need to replace some parts though, I could only connected and sort the wires for a real mechanic to work here, I reconnected the holographs and also the head sets with the speakers in the other control room, some wires will have to be replaced, I could fix a few ones who weren't damaged enough" said Hellra. "Yes I see, the damage is much worse than I thought, said officer, he stepped around in the small room. He stopped at the still sparking body of Driod G7 "And this?" asked the officer curiously "He malfunctioned Sir, answered Hellra; well he did in a very indirect manner. Even though she was scared if he found out the truth she couldn't help but feeling satisfied with the droid's demise. "I don't want to know, said the officer, when he saw a small smirk tugging at Hellra's lips. The officer stepped to the door, just as he was about to leave he turned around "Since you made such good job with the simulator tough we will have to replace some parts, could you repair Droid G7?" Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1552 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:18:50 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 1: Electrical Systems Story 2: Electrical Systems
Hellra grunted as her alarm went off. Her hand shot expertly out and grabbed the alarm. A few seconds later a loud crash could be heard as the alarm made contact with the wall opposite of her bed. Hellra smirked in satisfaction. She continued her sleep. Hellra jolted awake at the sound of a door closing. She glanced around the room. Looks like her two roommates just left. A small yet high pitched sound emitted from Hellra's mouth as she yawned. She swung her legs from the bed to the ground. She gazed around looking for her DC-15 blaster pistol. Hellra panicked for a second when she couldn't find it. She lifted her covers; she looked in her bedside cabinet. She sprung from her bed to the floor. She crouched on all fours looking under her bed. She stood up and winced as her legs protested of all the sudden movements. She bent over bed and grabbed her pillow, not that she used it actually. Most times she would sleep on the ground, if she could sleep. Hellra sighed in relief when she saw her blaster pistol. Although it was pitch black in the room, she had no problem seeing. Hellra quickly showered and dressed for the day. She quickly slid her glasses over eyes before opening door. Hellra searched for her droid as she headed over to her designated destination. Rooms for acquiring basic skills. Most called it RABS. "Morning. Hellra" "Morning G7, what is the time and plans for today?" asked Hellra, when she fixed G7 she grew quite attached to him. She talked with her roommates and they agreed on letting her request G7 as the room's assisting droid. Each room had a droid that helped its occupants with their time table of the day or reminding them. "It. Is. Now. Thirty. Minutes. Past. Eight. Your. Schedule. For. The. Day. Is. breakfast. At eight forty. five. Your. Are. Writing. Theoretical. Test. About. Electrical. Systems. Two. O. clock. Your. Last. Preparation. Before. your. practical. Examination." Answered the bot. Hellra paled... "I am writing an exam today..." Holy shi" Hellra got interrupted "Good day Hellra, don't let me interrupt your sentence" Hellra spun around. "Holy ships, yeah alota ships coming in today Sir" said Hellra nervously The officer stared at her not sure if he should believe her or what to say& "Sir may I be excused?" asked Hellra. The officer nodded& Hellra quickly rushed away, "Okay let’s see, do I have my books...Crud" Hellra stormed back to her room, G7 trying to follow her. She flipped her book open and began reading. "Many third world planets still uses gas, or oil powered ships and machines" Mumbled Hellra as her eyes darted across the pages. "You. Missed breakfast." Interrupted G7 her. "G7, thanks for reminding me, but firstly, yes I skipped breakfast, so what. There is always lunch and secondly I am late for my test...ciao!" Hellra sped away. "You idiot, you should have studied!" scolded Hellra herself as she skidded in front of her class. She rubbed her head out of nervousness, and opened the door. Hellra stared in disbelief at the screen in front of her. This was it? Hellra glanced at the questions. Which planet makes the best use of hydro electricity? Who is the only planet in the northern quadrant to use the wind as part of their daily life basis. Hellra smirked, this test was a breeze, well it did help that she had a photographic mind. Although Hellra was used to writing on paper, she had to do her exams on the computer in front of her. After she filled in the answers, Hellra faced death match. The computer would shot any question out to her randomly. She had to give her answer within the time limit. She was just good at memorizing things. Hellra quickly filled in most of her answers. She knew she will get an average score at least and she wasn't worried that. She glared at the drawings in front of her. She hated when they gave diagrams. "Okay, so if the blue port is connected to wire C that would mean the hydro pipe's wire, wire D should be connected to the white port" mumbled Hellra, she looked up to see the overseer clearing his. "Sorry" Hellra apologized. A few minutes later Hellra stood up, this was her first test she has ever written at the VE and she didn't know how the systems worked. The overseer who knew she was new quickly showed her what to do. Hellra left the room with guilt at the pit of her stomach, she always finished before other people did. Hellra met up with G7 outside the RABS. "What is the time?" asked Hellra "Lunch." Replied the bot. "Lunch can wait, and mind leaving me alone?" said Hellra walking back to her room. She opened her door and stepped inside. Hellra let out a sigh of content as she took her glasses of. The room's lights were off, some machines and alarms beeped with little lights showing their activity, casting small green or red shadows on the floor. Hellra bent on the ground, she picked up what used to be her alarm. She quickly found all the broken bits and pieces and dumped it in the room's instant disposal bin. She plopped herself on her bed and took her book out about electrical systems. A silence followed only to be interrupted by the flipping pages of a book. Another few minute past. Hellra sighed as she threw her book down. She knew the material. Hellra checked her watch. She had one hour free, might as well do something worthwhile. She quickly ran out of her room to the training centers. She peered through the doors to see what rooms were occupied. She wanted to train alone. She grumbled, the usual hand to hand combat rooms were all occupied. She will have to do with a gravity simulator. She pushed the door open and locked it when she was inside. "What is designated level?" asked the computer operator. "Medium" answered Hellra, immediately she felt the gravity pull at her. It took her half her strength to just lift her legs. Hellra walked or rather stumbled around as she got used to the gravity. When she felt more used to the gravity Hellra began performing a simple kata. She frowned when she looked at her feet. Her right foot was a few centimeters in front of her left. "Looks like I will have to start again all over" mumbled Hellra lost in thought/ She continued for another thirty minutes before her timer went off. She glanced at her watch. "Bugger" Hellra loved doing these kinds of tests. They had given her a really easy task. All she had to do was connect the right wires to its matching port. She pushed her buzz button indicating she was finished. The examiner walked over. "Good job PFC, you finished in three minutes well follow me to your next level" exclaimed the examiner. "There is another level?" asked Hellra confused. "Of course, when you finish your level in a certain time, you go to the next level each time you have to work faster” answered the examiner. "My life is over before it even began" Hellra as she was led to the next level. Hellra sat in the waiting room. Most of her fellow troopers received their results from their bots. But her examiner wanted to see her personally. "Ah yes, PFC Hellra, please come in" said the examiner. "Thank you Mister?" "Smooth" answered the man, he held his three fingered hand to shake. Hellra shook it nervously. "You wanted to see me?" asked Hellra curiously. "Yes, your results it’s average, I didn't expect that from you" Hellra's face flamed up, as she blushed embarrassed. She opened her mouth but quickly shut it as the man held up his hand. "I expect more from you, you are sharp and skilful, but if you want to excel you will have to work more. You passed this exam with your common knowledge and a bit of studying. Do try harder and...you are excused" Hellra quickly rushed out. "Okay, next time I will, next time I will" grumbled Hellra to herself as she walked to her room. Comments: All right, decent job. This story was VERY hard to follow for me, but from what I can make of it: you seem to have the theory down. This isn't all that easy a course, it’s not really doing anything: it understands the theory behind what you're doing. Good work for a course not all that great, but watch your Grammar, or next time I won't be so generous... Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1553 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:28:30 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 2: Fortifications and Defense Story 1: Field Fortifications
"Approaches: Approaching enemies on the ground, is most likely by watercourses and roads. It is very difficult to judge when soldiers will take the road, soldiers may want to avoid it purposefully with the risk of an ambush, but it is still one of the fastest way to gain ground over days" Hellra groaned, who needs to know what fortification is? She sighed and got up from her comfortable spot on the bed. Her hand pressed the deactivation button. The droid's fluent voice softened out. Hellra had the urge of punching something. She resisted remembering the second of glee it was to destroy G7 and the hours she spent repairing him. Hellra opened her bedside cabinet to get something eat. A small sugary thing wouldn't hurt. Her hands grazed over the broken alarm parts. Damn, how is she going to explain this one? She can't repair it like she normally does after destroying an alarm since she can't see, and explaining she threw it.... well that might have some consequences. She cursed silently at her bandages that covered her eyes. Since Killhouse she hasn't been able to see. "Why I ever started wearing glasses, is beyond wondering" Hellra mused. She felt her way around the room to the door, silently she opened it. It seems not silent enough. "L.C.P.L Hellra. You. Are. Suppose. To. Take. G.7.B with. You" Hellra groaned at the room's assisting bot. "Why I ever fixed you is another question" Hellra plopped herself back on her bed. She was given extra time studying for her Demo and fort. Since she was blind. She flipped the button that activates the droid to read the data out and slumped back on her bed. The droid's mechanical voice only drew her into sleep. Hellra woke hours later with a jolt. She could hear droid G7's normally silent wheels rounding as he neared her. Her hearing senses improved a lot since she lost her sight. "One. Message. L.C.P.L Hellra." Hellra sighed as G7 played the message. "LCPL Hellra, please report to my office, from your squad leader Sergeant TK" Hellra sighed again. "What the hell does he want?" she grumbled, angered to get up. Hellra walked through the halls in long strides. The small droid leading her were going haywire. He was trying to point out each individual's height, age etc. She scowled. Her usually expressionless face was contorted in a deep frown. She just got back from another 'special team meeting' she and ASL Yillis have to escort the new trooper Splinter-Cell. She stopped in front of the door she thought where the examination will take place. As usual she only knew her work half way. She opened the door with her usual knock. A strong female voice greeted her. "Private First Class Hellra?" "Lance Corporal now, " corrected Hellra her while trying to hide her grin. "Your sheets--" "Ya, I know, I haven't filled my tracking sheets in again as usual, and I am having rather difficulties seeing," said Hellra. Hellra heard the shuffling of datapads, paper and other various objects. A sharp intake of breath indicated the woman was about to speak again. "Oh, yes. Injury from your last training& please be seated, I am going to ask question and you will answer it" the voice were professional yet kind with a twang of pity in it;. Hellra grumbled inwardly at this. Her droid who were miraculously silent, lead her to a chair in front of a desk. She took her seat and waited expectantly for the questions to start raining. "Well, let’s get this started, only provide answers for my question" Hellra braced herself for the first question nervously. "What is the definition of fortification?" She relaxed. This was an easy question. "It is what the armed force can make most of by it surrounding terrain to enhance its defenses" Hellra dropped her shoulders; to be relaxed was the best way to be prepared sometimes. "Name the two different types of fortification: Hellra was silent for a second before she answered "Natural and Artificial fortifications" "What is Natural and Artificial fortification?" "Natural fortification, is woods, marshes, watercourses, and any other natural recourse that could be used for fortification&" Minutes stretched in eternity by. They handled topics that stretched from ditches and trenches to bomb proof fortifications. Questions upon question came down on Hellra, she answered without ease. Though she struggled several times. Most of the answers were logical questions. As long as she gave a professional answer it would at least looked like she studied. After about thirty or more of these question the examiner shut her book. Hellra looked up surprised, she was expecting more. "Time for demolitions" said the examiner. Hellra heard her dragging a book over desk, the soft metal cover scraping over the table. She sighed as the more questions came. "What is your general idea of demolitions?" Hellra looked up yet again surprised. Though she couldn't see, the examiner was smiling slightly before she answered. "Part of the test, is to test your logic, and also, you didn't study as you should have" Hellra frowned, interested at the turn of events. "So, what is your general sum up of demolitions?" Hellra took a big breath "Demolishing is ways and means of breaking forts And other buildings down to the ground with explosives and bombs. It is used several times to destroy enemy fortification in weakening their defenses...um...um. ya, I know there is more, just hold a sec" Hellra paused to think. What was am I missing? Her thoughts were jumbling around from one spot to the other. A few minutes passed, Hellra could feel the impatience radiating from the examiner. Although it couldn't be seen under the bandages covering her eyes, her face was frowned, she squeezed her eyes as she answer silently praying it was correct. "Ah, ya, also it can be sued to destroy old fortifications to build new ones." Hellra continued to explain for a few more minutes till at last she ran out of thoughts& Silence passed for a few minutes. Hellra cleared her throat. The examiner looked up irritated. "Go to the next room for practical practice, it on your left as you walk" Hellra thanked her and walked out. Hellra was still amazed at all the sounds that filled the halls. Now that she couldn't see, saw more of her surroundings by ear. She continued to the next room. "It is not important to know how to build fortifications, but also where to do it, what type of fort to build in which conditions at what approximate stability it has to last. The same goes for demolitions" Hellra said in a bored manner to the instructor. Yet again more logical crap. A guilty feeling coursed through her. She should be thankful they were making special arrangements for her to pass. She pushed her distracted thoughts away, when she heard the man's voice being directed to her. "Hellra, we have a simulator that acts on your brainwaves enabling you to see. In a few minutes you will be able to take your practical exam" There was silence as the man paused, only the soft humming of the active simulators could be heard. "You will literally experience the weather conditions, the terrain etc." he continued. Hellra nodded excited. Soon afterwards she found her self-sitting in a round sphere-like object, she could feel something heavy covering the upper half of her head. Some tubes and monitoring devices were also connected to her. Blackness overwhelming her thoughts. Soon afterwards she gained focus of her surroundings, her eyes still closed though, she shuddered. Instinctively she opened her eyes, but quickly shut it again at the unexpected light and sight that she was blessed with suddenly. Slowly she opened her eyes again. She was lying in a tent on a small bunk. She could hear small explosions from a distance. It sounded like she was in the middle of a war or battle. She noticed the dark brown material the tent was made of... wait material? Since when did the Stormtrooper corps use tents? Her question was soon answered as the tent flap opened. It bought a chilly wind in. She shuddered again. "Hellra, you are awake at last, we need your confirmation about..." he trailed off. Hellra looked at him confused. She gazed at everything around her. Everything looked so old and ancient… then it her. Sometimes, a trooper has to adapt to what he is given to survey, and wouldn't be able to rely constantly on the comfort of his inventories. "Yes, let me just get refreshed up" she answered to the man. He wore a weird uniform. It wasn't like normal armor. It was shining, and he was holding a weird helmet in his hand and at his waist hung a sword sheathed in some hard brown looking material decorated with golden threads. Hellra groaned, now she knew why they had to study the different races and the historical culture. After a few minutes she existed the tent. There was a blazing storm around her, people were screaming over the howling wind, while snow flecks fell from above. A few tents stood around her, small walls of snow were surrounding them. Hellra studied the ancient and primitive maps that lay in front her. She ordered out commands, and pointed faults and weaknesses. It seems she had to organize the plans of a war that was raging in a region not from her. "We will have to improve these snow wall, they may help camouflaging us, but it’s not protecting us" said Hellra as she studied her surrounding in details, she quickly ordered them to dug around the wall for traps and ditches while she led out a scout team, to search for boulders or any form of hard rock they can use. Hellra returned her tent hours later, stiff and tired. This exam was testing her limits and it seems, she was long past her limit. She went to the outer rim of enemy camps, looking for faults in their camps, however she was spotted and had to leave her riding creature behind. She struggled to find her way back to the base for a few hours. A few hours passed, Hellra was resting in her tent when she got a rude awakening. Hellra, Hellra!" Hellra jolted out of the tent to the source of the voice. She froze for a second, a bloodied soldier was standing in front f her, and He was leaning on another soldier. "We won, but the fight drained us of our forces, I received word that another enemy is approaching us as we speak" Hellra glanced worriedly around her. “We couldn't possibly-“ suddenly the soldier in front of her started blurring. She squinted her eyes to see him better, but to no avail. Minutes later she woke up in blackness again. "Well done Hellra, you didn't do too badly, your exam results will be sent to your room in a few hours" Hellra was pacing up and down in her room. She was a nervous wreck. Today she will receive her results Hellra thought back of her experience in the simulator. She scathed her head; The bandage was making her itch. She was still blind in this world. She guessed why they always also gave them a practical test was also for character and leadership developing. A knock interrupted her thoughts. "Your results are here," said a voice from behind the door. Comment:
Dez: Thin line, but failed. There's no need to redo from scratch, just add more simu
Comments: at the start, it's quite good, but became confusing later on. Do fix the typo and grammar error.
Rizzit: All right, it seems you've changed the story a bit since Dez read it over. I'm going to pass you, but keep in mind: this places you on the other side of the "thin line" dez was talking about. The Grammar is still very poor, but the story is less confusing (to me at least). Good work. Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1554 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:35:20 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 2: Fortifications and Defense Story 2: Explosives deployment.
Hellra stared lazily at the building in front of her. It seemed old and ancient littered with the years, and of previous generation's training. "We are supposed to bring that down?" she looked at her instructor curiously. "Well, this is not your real test yet" he replied. A few seconds passed in which Hellra stole to study the lands around them. Barely reaching twenty meters, the building seemed small compared to the city; the area around it was battered and bruised. The sunbeams that slipped through the clutches of the tightly knitted clouds seemed to lighten it designated spots. Hellra's hair stirred as a breeze picked up. It was a dry wind filled with nothing but empty promises of rain and a bitter cold. "Den you go first" Den looked up nervously. He grinned slightly and stepped forward. "You are going to plant one explosive and then return, mind where you plant it, if it is planted in the wrong place, the training fails for everyone, also you have five minutes" said the training instructor. Den's smile faltered. He took the explosives from its small pile, heaped on the ground. Hellra inspected her view further. Things really looked different without her glasses. It was peaceful even if the wind was yapping at her face, and rushing all creatures into hiding. It was nature. How long she stood there she didn't know, but someone tapped her on her shoulder. She spun around her fist ready. "Whoa, chill man" said Den. Den's comment seemed to draw the instructor's curiosity. "Hellra, since I can obviously see you were much more inspired by this beautiful surrounding rather than my lecture, I will explain especially for you since I now have your undivided attention" said the instructor sarcastic with good humor. Hellra blushed, her ears turned red, it didn't do much for her face, as her face was already a rosy color of the cold. She mumbled something shifting her feet nervously at being in the spot light. "You fellow class mates planted explosives inside the building at certain points, you have to choose the best spot to plant one, and hope it succeeds in bringing down the building, you have to make sure you connected it correctly, now off you go" Hellra trudged over the rocky and bare landscape with a rhythmic pace. She jumped ever so often over gaps that opened in the ground. She grasped her explosives tightly in her hands as she studied the building; it was resting on four pillars that stretched over a meter. The front of the building was resting a once magnificent white-now grey staircase. Hellra ducked under the stairs. She crouched to have a look around. She smiled relieved to see no explosives were planted here yet. She taped the explosive in the centre of the stair attaching it firmly to the bottom of it. She checked the timing as she connected the wiring. She frowned, and seemed to be thinking of something, she quickly stole a glance to the timer on her wrist. One minute thirty seconds left. With the wires connected, Hellra started fiddling with the controls, and settings of the explosive. Without even making sure it was correct she darted away from the building as fast she could go. She gasped for breath and water. Her instructor looked at her, his eyebrows lifted. She grabbed the water bottle from her backpack and gulped it as fast as she could down. The instructor looked at her disapprovingly. He shook his head. "Hellra, you took ten seconds past the limit. You lose thirty percent as penalty" Hellra merely nodded. "Now, time to see what you guys did, when I press the activation button on this detonator, the explosives you planted will go off in ten seconds" continued the instructor with a stern expression. The students waited tensely as he pressed the detonator. Hellra could hear the seconds tick by in her head. When it hit eight seconds the first explosive went off& followed by four other explosions two seconds later. Silence stretched as the dust settled. Hellra fumbled her fingers nervously. "Who configured their settings?" asked the instructor with a silent yet deafening tone. "Hellra still fumbling stepped forward from where she stood at her dust covered backpack. "Why?" he demanded. "I wanted to test something Sir," she answered. "Enlighten us," he demanded again. "I thought that if the stairs was destroyed before the building was destroyed it would tip the building, and not have it merely give way. I just wanted to test my theory as I saw that the building relies very heavily on the stairs. It has a weak point there actually, with the triangular bulks tha---" Hellra was cut short, she silenced immediately as he held up his hand. "No bad Hellra, didn't expect that sharpness from you," commented the instructor suddenly impressed although he putted and emphasis on 'that'. He turned towards the rest of the class. "Sometimes we want to tip the building to a particular side instead of just destroying it, by removing one of it supportive points, it immediately weakens the stability of the building in that point" said the instructor, he dusted his uniform. "You guys should get to the exams tomorrow, and by the way, this was your exam" he turned around to pack up his things when Hellra confronted him. "You told us it was training!" "Hellra, exams is also training, and what difference would there have been except that you would all be a nervous jumble?" he asked. Hellra bit her tongue to refrain from making a smart-ass comment. He was right though, she shook her head, and gazed a last time at the nature in front of her. It lost its beauty as the building collapse disturbed it unnaturally. "So, what happened after you left home?" asked Emi excited. Hellra groaned, she tried to escape from Emi's clutches, but Emi knew her well enough to keep her from doing so. "Oh, no Hell, you stay in this room till we are finished," ordered Emi, Hellra meekly obeyed, she knew how persuasive Emi could be sometimes and how angry she could get. "Well, I ran away from home as you noticed" started Hellra. "No duh" answered Emi sarcastic. Hellra scowled as she continued. "I became a racer for three years, in that three years I learned to street race and fight, then I joined VE after an accident" Emi stared Hellra suspicious. "You are hiding something Hell, what is it?" her voice was dangerously low Hellra glanced at anything that could save her; the time on her digital clock caught her eyes, "Merde!" she cursed. "Emi, I have to go, exams in a few minutes!" exclaimed Hellra out relieved, she got away with a decent excuse. "Fine, good luck, I was thinking of starting a medic by the way" Hellra's eyes widened in surprise. "Medic...whoa, most people don't choose medic, good luck with that too" Emi nodded, she gave Hellra another death hug. Hellra rolled her eyes in annoyance. Hellra laughed at the questions that they were asked, she knew them without even studding, and maybe it was her small time in Lancer Squad that taught her so much. They asking question about different grenades and what their uses were, and why it couldn't be used on buildings, bridges and etc. She struggled a bit with her exam when they started asking question about the different bridges you get, since the style varies from rope bridges to the historical bridges, the frames and stone used to build one, what stone should be used to build, and how can it be destroyed in three different methods of planting explosives. "Did you know the answer to question three? Point. Five?" asked some student her friend as they passed. Hellra blocked these sounds as she walked back to her room. She will receive her results in an hour, so no stress. With a soft hiss the door opened, her soft footsteps filled the room, but ended shortly as she threw herself on her bunk. She lay there for a while just staring to the ceiling when a knock interrupted her thoughts. "My results?" she asked jumping from her bead excited. The man nodded, he handed her the paper with the results, while Hellra read it excited, and he studied her. After a while she noticed him still standing there. "What?" she asked rudely and annoyed. "You seem familiar" he commented. "I do, well that's nice, but would you kindly leave me alone?" The man nodded his head, and swiftly walked from the room. A few minutes later the door opened again, followed with Emi's laughter. Since their one roommate moved to another room, Emi was sharing rooms with her. "So it went Hell?" she asked. "Passed, seventy percent," muttered Hellra an answer. Interesting take on things. Nice to see you added a bit of a side story in. You pass. Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1555 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:44:16 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 3: Construction Story 1: bridging and rigging
It seemed like the typical day to lounge around, as the merry rays of the sun baked down on the prosperous planet of Tadath. With no wind to rustle the leaves, and not even a cloud in the sky the weather seemed perfect. Caverns and canyons provided a cool shade to its inhabitants. Even the morning dew that usually dropped from the leaves in the late mourning seemed to hasten early not to be caught in the oncoming heat wave. "GO!" Birds flew away in fright at the loud sounds that suddenly disrupted the peace. Blasts could be heard from afar. Some troopers were being taught the basics of shooting a rifle while other was doing fitness exercises of all sorts. A girl with shoulder length dark blonde hair held back by a black bandanna was waiting impatiently, her feet tapping against the ground. Her face was dirty with all the dust layers it covered. Sweat trickles made their path through the thin dust, a hand wiped it away, smearing the dirt in long swipes across her face. She looked around uncomfortable and hot in her training outfit, seems her classmates were suffering the same thing. "Hellra, you first. Seems you have too much energy to cope with today" called and good hearted man out. The girl responded to her name by looking up and then following the direction of his finger to something behind him. Hellra braced herself for the course in front of her. She was stood at the ledge; gazing at what she had to do. Seems she had to cross a bridge of some sort over water, what didn't make sense to her was, why there were ropes hanging above the bridge& "Can I start, sir?" she inquired politely yet impatient. He nodded. Hellra smirked; this course was way too easy, might as well show the new recruits what a trooper is made off. Hellra glanced to her right; a few recruits were standing there looking in awe at her group. In the whole training area her group was the highest-level class there, naturally attracting attention with their orderly lines, and backpacks accompanied with rifles. Hellra sprinted forward to cross the sic meter bridge. As she crossed the first meter she could feel how unstable the bridge was although it showed otherwise, yet again she should never be fooled by looks. Instead of taking it slowing Hellra broke in a sprint jump like in attempt to trudge it as lightly as possible. But it seems her luck was otherwise, at the three meter check point, she felt the bridge gave way, instinctively she grabbed for the ropes she saw earlier. She felt something brush through her slender fingers. She grasped it firmly. It stopped her fall, Hellra hung for a few minutes before she felt the rope ripping higher above her head. Her eyes widened in surprise, she swung quickly to another rope, to avoid clinging to her current one before it tears. The same happened with her next rope, Hellra swung from one rope to another in desperate attempt to cross to the other side, but she found her self-splashing in the cool water. As the water-cooled her body, it didn't help cooling her embarrassed face that turned red. Blushingly Hellra trudged out of the water, her uniform clinging to her body uncomfortably. Inside her pride took a blow remembering how she wanted to show off in front of the recruits. "What happened here?" asked the instructor towards his class, ignoring the recruits who were snickering at Hellra. The instructor didn't wait for an answer, and continued. "Never cross a bridge no matter how sturdy it looks, test it out by throwing rocks on it or walking across tied to a rope, the same goes for the ropes" Hellra's thoughts got distracted by the droids who currently in the process of repairing the bridge she walked on. She wanted to kick herself, she always quoted 'Always expect the unexpected' She snorted inwardly. "You are dismissed!" Hellra glanced up bewildered. She tugged one of her classmates hard. "Den what we must do?" she whispered hastily scared of what her instructor's comment will be on her lax attitude. "Research ways to enforce bridges, practical exam tomorrow,. Also go through your rigging notes," he answered. Hellra asked no further questions instead she thanked him, and went on her way. Hellra was humming a soft tune to herself as she studied. Having taken a shower, eating some refreshed her up mightily. Her fingers were pressed in her ears, blocking or trying to block any sounds that might disturb her. She cursed, as it didn't seem to work. Not soon after her com. Wristwatch went off, a familiar voice sounded through her room. "Hell, up for a spar?" "Nah, not today Darr, I am studying fir my exam tomorrow" answered Hellra her fellow Lancer and friend back. The COM link between them died, Hellra sighed and plugged her ears with fingers again, trying to start up her studying. Next morning ----------------- "So, I have to build a sturdy bridge with the given materials to pass?" asked Hellra to be sure. Her instructor nodded. Without a second look for assurance Hellra jumped to work. She had to build a one-meter long bridge with wood; some quarter circle pipes mostly, nails, ropes, six poles and two long cables. She jumped in a hole dug in the fresh ground. Her body came half way in if she stood straight. She firmly planted two poles across each other in the width. Hellra wiped the sweat from her head. The skeleton of her bridge were forming, three poles were standing in line with each other, the middle one being the longest above the ground, opposite of them stood similar poles, their lengths in the same fashion. The quarter circle pipes mostly. were resting in the ground, the upper half upholding the walking area that consisted of wood. A few more hours passed, the sun sunk low, barely visible, Hellra didn't notice this, as lights were turned on gently. She dusted her hands and looked in pride at her bridge. The quarter circle pipes supported it mostly. But ropes and cables that were fastened to the poles upheld the top. Hellra called the instructor over. He studied her structure for a few minutes in silence. "To fancy" he commented, Hellra gaped at him surprise. "I worked a whole day on that Sir!" she exclaimed. "Exactly, you have to make one in an hour when you are out there" the instructor replied. He walked over to the bridge and started crossing it. He stepped to the middle of it and jumped on it, making the wood strain under his weight. Hellra watched tensely as the ropes and cables seemed to drill like musical springs. "Not bad, but try and make it faster next time, which is tomorrow" Hellra said nothing realizing he was right. "Well, at least I tried" Next day ---------- "So what do we have here Hellra?" Hellra looked in pride at her new bridge. In front of them were a bridge held up by ropes on two opposing trees. Triangular beams supported the walking area on the end of each end. it pressuring into the sides of the small cliff. The other end of the bridge crossed the small gap and went over the ledge on the other side. The two ropes that held it upright were fastened in the exact middle balancing the two halves of the bridge. "Excellent work Hellra, but we will have to test you some time also in making bridges for larger objects and creatures for example and vehicle, but I think that will fell under construction skills" said the instructor. Hellra beamed with happiness. She had to rebuild her bridge, but at least she learned something of it. "Anything else Sir?" she asked. "No, you are dismissed" said the instructor. Comment: Comments: Your notes will go on this post seeing as how this is where the screenshots are. Good work on the story, and the screenshots are welcome: but don't go out of your way to do it. I think this is an improvement over your past stories, keep up the good work. Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1556 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 10:50:18 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 3: Construction Story 2: construction skills
Hellra's face was frowned as an officer walked past her. Her whole posture was bought in a crisp salute. She waited impatiently for the officer to pass before she relaxed to her usual stance. She scowled at the itch that irritated her between her shoulder blades beneath her stormtrooper armor as she started walking in her designated direction. She walked pass her old office where she spent her days as Platoon adjutant. Hell she was barely a few weeks PA, and she didn't do much work even. But with her new platoon commander, TJ, she is relieved of her PA position. She didn't know if she should be relieved, or embarrassed, embarrassed for thinking she could do it, when she didn't even have the necessary skills or qualifications for it. Hellra tried to push these thoughts aside, the itch on her back forgotten as well. She looked up alarmed as a loud thunder vibrated through the area even penetrating the sound proof windows. She crossed the wide hall to the window. Blustery winds were picking up, and those few troopers who were outside quickly scrambled back inside the building. She sighed warily, this was her most favorite type of weather, and she wasn't even feeling happy with it. "Hi, Hell, class is about to start you know" interrupted a voice her distracted mind. She looked up to the smiling Den. His perfect set of teeth broadened in a smile. "Yeah, guess so" she muttered and joined him on their way. "So, what is your full name?" she asked trying to make a conversation as they walked to the class. "Dennis Vayien, and yours?" "Hellen Le Clerique...how old are you?" "Hmm, about twenty or nineteen, I guess" answered Den truthfully. He laughed at Hellra's confused face. "My earliest memory is joining the army, I don't know anything about my past, except my name, and the only way I knew my name was because it was engraved on a name plate, pinned on my clothes" "Why don't you try to find out who you are?" asked Hellra. "Why, maybe I am better off not knowing" answered Den, they halted in front of a door. "Okay, well good luck with your class," said Hellra, as her hand grazed over the activation pad. "Same, to you Hell" he said, disappearing through the narrow doorway. She followed him shortly. She took her usual seat at the back of the classroom in the left corner. Students were murmuring quietly among each other waiting for their lecturer who hasn't arrived yet. Hellra scoffed at the windowless room. She liked to look through windows, maybe that is why the room didn't have any, to keep the students focused on their work. "Welcome to level three, repairing defaces construction skills" stated a loud booming voice. A large man stepped through the doorway, he had trimmed moustache, and his neck as thick as Hellra's head. He slammed his bag on the desk, creating a small crater in the cheap wood. The students who sat in front carefully tried to move their seats backwards unnoticed obviously scared of this lecturer. "I am Sergeant Carl, your new lecturer" he said through clenched teeth as if he was forced against his will here. He started walking fast and quickly through the many rows of seats, with each step he took he spoke a word. "I do not tolerate fools, and I do not tolerate average students, trooper what did I just SAY!" he slammed both his hands on the desk of a student, creating once again some damage, making the student look up in fright. He smirked at the evident fear on the student's face and walked back to his slightly damaged desk. "I want each and every one of you to write an essay of what you think you will learn in level three, and what there is to learn" ordered Giant as Hellra nicknamed him to the class. *Much Later* "So, how was class today?" Hellra looked at her best friend's usually chirpy face. "It was okay I guess, we only did an essay" Emi snorted, and snickered. "Aw, you had to write an essay just like you did back when you were ten years old" she taunted Hellra. "Yeah, I guess, pretty useless though" Hellra shook her head at Emi's antics, since Emi joined the VEA things have been much more interesting then it was. She and Emi were practically sisters. "Hmm, when is the last time you had something to eat?" asked Emi thoughtfully. "Why?" asked Hellra confused at Emi's question of her eating habits. "Come on, I have known you since diapers, you have a knack for skipping meals too caught up in your own little word to remember that you need food" said Emi, as she grabbed Hellra's hand and dragged her towards the café. *Next day* "Could the following people please report to my desk now?" thundered Giant's voice through the silent classroom. "Dennis Vayien, Hellen Le clerique, Evan Wak" Giant droned another few names out before he stopped and looked at the people who haven't been called. "The rest are all dismissed" Steel scraped against the tiled floor and feet shuffled on the floor as the students left. Giant stared at the handful of students in front of him. "You passed the essays, I will read you essays out loud for you" he said pleasantly startling Hellra. "What is with his new attitude?" she wondered to herself. "We will start with Hellra's essay&" he paused for a second to search her face before he continued reading her essay out loud. "Level three is about repairing defenses such as field fortifications that failed to with held the attack, failed to withstand the weather, or that wasn't build strong enough in general. The repairs can be applied naturally, or artificial. Natural resources include woods, boulders and ETC Usually these repairs can only hold temporarily since a fortification had to have a strong structure from the beginning. Artificial repairs can be the following: durasteel, enforced plastic, ropes, and beams. Natural repairs are usually the best to use since they provide a much more natural look, adding more camouflage as well, while artificial repairs is much more stronger" Hellra looked up to see what Giant would say, but he didn't say anything as he instead started reading the next essays as well. *Twenty minutes later* "The objective of this simulator, works together in a group, and survives...good luck, you have one hour to survive before the sim ends. You have to find a way to repair the fort that will serve as your base," said Giant, as he adjusted a buttons and switched on the computer. Hellra opened her mouth to ask a question, but quickly shut it as the scenery around them changed. The polished floor became rough sand, and the walls turned in a battle scene. Hellra coughed at the strong smell of blood that suddenly penetrated her senses. They didn't do anything for a few minutes except observe. To their left stood the fort they had to repair if damaged. "Come on guys, we will only get killed here" said Hellra starting to sprint through the mass of troopers that were fighting each other. Before they even reached their fort, a massive blast missed them heading direct for the fort. "shi-" They were thrown backwards as the shock waves of the blast bounced back as it hit and ripped a part of the wall from the fort apart. Hellra was lying on her back, a dull pain aching in her shoulder. She propped her self up on her elbows. "Merde!" she cursed. "Come on Hell, enough lounging around," said Den extending his hand towards her to help up. "Okay, so what is the damage?" she asked as they stepped through the hole that was just created. "A lot" snorted Den as he tried calculating what exactly they had to do. "Hmm, the whole is simply too big to repair" muttered Hellra. She took her helmet off to breathe properly. The other's followed her example. "Lets just start and see what there is to work with" suggested Den. Nobody said anything and spread out through the building to find materials that were left lying around that could help them. They met each other back at the open gap. "Okay, we have some explosives, ropes and? nothing else" counted Hellra. "We need to get rid of the gap with these materials?" asked Evan in disbelief. "Yes, and I have an idea that just might work" said Hellra happily. She looked at their faces, most were already smudged with sweat and dirt, and Hellra had the feeling she didn't look any better. "We blow the roof up, the debris and rubble of ceiling, will fill this gap, and yes I know it will leave a gap in the roof, but it better than having a gap this size in the side" she suggested. "But that will make the fort smaller." protested Evan. "Any other idea?" Hellra raised her eyebrows in his direction. "Well, why don't we just fill it with rubble that's lying around in the battle field?" suggested Evan. "Hello...there is troopers dying, well virtual troopers dying at the moment, it will take too much time, and we have to fill a gap, one meter wide, and on and a half meter long, and do you know how heavy the stuff is we will carry?" argued Hellra. "I vote for Hellra's idea," said Den. "Same here" murmured the others. Seeing as the majority voted for Hellra's suggestion Evan nodded in agreement. "Well, let get working then!" shouted Hellra. "Evan, set this pair of explosives about one meter inwards, try to find some crack, a spot that is already weakened by the blasts" ordered Hellra as she stuffed explosives in Evan's hands. She turned towards Den. "Den, you will have to go a floor up and set the explosives there, the ceiling will need pressure from both sides" Den just grabbed the explosives and sprinted up the stairs that were at the back of the damaged room. She pointed to the remaining two guys& "Boys, let’s move the rubble here to the whole and start filling it, the roof might not be enough" they all quickly started moving boulders and rubble to the gap. Evan joined them after he set his own explosives. "Okay guys, get up the stairs, this might get ugly!" called Den from above. The small group rushed up the stairs. Hellra stopped at Den's side that was standing as far as possible from the planted explosives. The wind rushed in her face mixed with the sound of screams and machines that were fighting not far away. "We should get somewhere safe where we wouldn't be also included in this explosion" shouted Den over the blasts that have neared the fort. "Evan, you still have that ropes?" asked Hellra to Evan, he held his hand up, strangled with the ropes. "Good, guys helmets on, we going to get to the ground, then Den can activate the detonator," ordered Hellra, she quickly pushed her helmet over her head, and grabbed the rope from Evan. "Den, help me tighten this" asked Hellra for help. Den quickly helped her tighten the ropes and then they both rushed the rest to the ground. Den landed with a thump at her side, his army boots sinking in the soft sands, leaving a clear imprint on the ground. "Ready guys? Asked Den, his hands ready to push the button. "Yup" replied Hellra happily that the mission was almost on it end, they still had another five minutes left of the sim anyway. Den pressed the activation button with a click that was soon followed by a loud explosion. Hellra's eyes were squeezed tight, with her fingers in her ears. Some poked her on her shoulder, dazed she looked up, and they were back with Sergeant Giant. He was making notes on a reply he recorded from the sim. Shortly afterward, he turned to them clearing his throat. "Well done people, seems you have brain after all, you didn't repair it as I would have liked you to do, but it was creative thinking you did there Hellra" Hellra nodded. "So, do we pass?" asked Hellra impatiently. Her fingers tapping one the helmet she held in her right hand. "You will receive your results later" barked the sergeant back to his old self. ------------------------------------------- Comments: Congratulations! You passed! While there are still grammatical errors, and the word to comnet error still shows: it does show that you put time and effort into this story. It also seems apparent that you know what you're talking about. Good work. Oh, please keep your ID Line in the post in the future. Thanks! Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1557 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 11:01:14 AM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 4: Material Manipulation Story 1: Materials Science
------------------------------------------------------------------ Hellra lazily tracked her finger across the datapad, her eyes barely following the slow movement. Her head was nestled in the crook of a large branch, in large tree miles away from the academy. Hellra sighed and gazed around her. It was a wind-still night with the atmosphere static and thick, a sure sign of an approaching storm. She unconsciously formed pictures of the grey-clouded sky, beams of the crescent moon could barely slip through the tight-knitted cloud formations, casting small whimpering shadows of the objects gracing the vast lands. "Damn Specs, good grief, its irritating" she mumbled to herself as she nestled her neck back in the crook of the branch. The datapad glowed a faint blue and white light, illuminating her face. Her usual mischievous eyes were frowned displaying unusual maturity and seriousness. She was studying the science of materials, but in reality she didn't have a clue what it was about. There were thousands of types of materials. And they were covering only the important ones. "Ok, so sand and ground is good for scrubbing hardened food and blood from stuff, and durasteel is good for building...bluddy useless crap of information," grumbled Hellra as she shifted her weight to be more comfortable on the rough texture of the tree. She has noticed one important factor in her time at the academy though. Most lessons and army related objects could be divided in two categories: Natural and Artificial. She quickly jammed her datapad in her slung bag before she proceeded to her speeder. Next day Groggily Hellra walked down the corridors to her class. Her usually messy hair was even messier then usual as she barely had time to comb her hair properly. She broke her alarm for a third time this month. Her stomach was hollering at her for skipping breakfast when she hasn't even had dinner. If her classroom had a swinging door she would have slammed it open, but she impatiently had to wait her time as it hissed open in a painfully slow manner. "You are lat---" started Giant in his usual robust voice. "No need to spell it out, I can read time" she snapped angrily. For the first time in a long time Hellra let her temper get hold of her. She stomped off to her usual desk even ignoring Den's greeting on her way. Giant didn't say anything but continued his lesson and increasing the intensity of boredom in the class. For the first time Hellra didn't even try to listen what her lecturer was droning on about. She just wanted to get out of this hellhole they called the Academy. She wanted to get out of the white armor she was forced to wear. She wanted to get rid of her Stormtrooper insignia on her clothes. She was sick of this place. She wanted to go into space and just be the free bird she was before she joined the Vast Empire. Now she was a Raider, once a Lancer, a stormtrooper trapped in some silly amour doing some silly Specialties classes and tests. With a sudden shock she realized what she was thinking and pushed her anger back. Guiltily she glanced at her lecturer, she might as well make the most of this. For a while she hasn't been thinking of this. But her time was drawing to an end in the Vast Empire; it depended on what will happen. She just hoped for her own sake she would survive the guilt because she didn't intend to make friends. Hellra shook her head clear of these very disturbing thoughts and tried to concentrate with a greater determination. "NOW, only certain material is only used for certain purposes, for example durasteel is one of the most common used metals to build buildings with," rumbled Giant. Hellra sighed in boredom. She really wanted to get this over and done with. She could feel tiredness creeping up on her. "Your test today will be theory, if you have studied and listened as you should have, this won't be difficult at all then, reorder the type of materials displayed on your test in the correct groups and give an example of where it can be used on what. Your test begins now!" Hellra sighed again and looked at her test. 1.Place materials under the correct groups and tables. Hellra stared at all the materials she had to place:
Wood Durasteel Rubber Plastic Sand Bone Glass Steel Copper Aluminum Concrete...
The list seemed forever to Hellra, and her impatience was thin, but started filling out the answers out anyway. She quickly drew up an table in which she grouped and listed the materials. Metals -Durasteel -Steel -Copper -Aluminum
Ceramics -Glass
Polymers -Rubber -Plastic
Biomaterials -Wood Bone
Composites Concrete
Hellra sat up; she stretched herself and continued with more intensity than ever. Question2. Define 4 materials named in the above question and what they can be used for Hellra stared dumbfounded at the question. She really didn't understand the logic of asking such easy question. But then again everything always happened the exact opposite of what she thinks. Wood : Most commonly material, used for making rough and primitive bridges. Durasteel: Used to enforce buildings Sand: Good use for blinding enemy, cleaning, and providing as obstacles to a floods, or enemies. Copper: a good conductor for electricity and heat. Could be used in forts if light is needed. Also to be used in electronical devices and objects Aluminum : A light type of metal, usually used for fast vehicles, if needed to build a quick fortification it is easy to carry and use since it weighs so light. The list of questions most similar to the first one continued, Hellra rubbed her eyes tiredly, on the verge of falling asleep. Her almost electric blue eyes drooped as she folded her arms to form a pillow for her head. She was at least finished with this part of the specs, or she hoped she was. "Next up, the practical exam!" shouted Giant, although there was no need to shout. A few minutes later feet shuffled in the classroom as chairs scraped against the floor, a clear indication that the exam was finally over. Hellra trudged on her way out sleepily. But froze in her tracks as Gaint called her. "Hellra a moment" coughed Giant. Hellra stayed behind ignoring Den's curious glances, not really caring what Giant would say. She felt the weight of a large hand settling on her shoulder. She looked up to find her self-staring in the steel grey eyes of Giant. Her reflection glistened coldly back to her. "I don't want you ever to throw an attitude, don't blow things for yourself" said Giant in an unusual eerie voice. Hellra's eyes widened slightly. Before she could protest she found being herself pushed out of the classroom in the direction leading to the outsides of the academy. Hellra shrugged it off, her previous fury, temper and frustrations also gone, though it still didn't lift her mood. She noticed the winds rippling through the uncut grass, and trees leaning with the wind, leaves twirling from the branches to the ground. She stopped abruptly; the only reason she stopped was because the people in front of her stopped. She stretched her neck trying to see what was going on in front of them. She noticed that Giant was standing between small heaps of what like to her rubbish and several beams made of different materials. "I want each of you to take a pile, and start sorting the objects out. Quality beams on the left, rubbish on the right. I offered the army some help today with this, since they are preparing some stocks for future fortifications." said Gaint, he gazed around for a few seconds. "Well, GET TO IT PEOPLE!" he shouted angrily. It was a good idea to follow his order because if looks could kill they would all be sitting on the other line of life. Hellra trudged to the pile nearest to her and started sorting it out. The first beam she picked up was made from wood, and was definitely going to the rubbish pile, huge chunk of wood just seemed to vanish creating large black holes in the beam. It was clearly too long in the water. The next beam she picked up was a plain steel beam, covered with almost bronze-colored like spots. Pieces of rusts seemed to peel of the sides. She shook her head dragging it towards the rubbish; clearly it was also too long in the water as it has started rusting. Hellra shoveled her hand deep in the pile just grabbing at something in randomness. Her hand closed around a first full of copper wires. The type used for electronically wiring. She inspected each individually. Some of them could still be used, others not. The danger with rusted metal was, if you cut yourself open it could cause some serious infection, and it would be a bad investment for the buildings it would be used on. Stable building required quality materials, and not some rusted beams. She picked up another beam made of wood, clearly of good quality. But was it the right type of wood to use on fortification? She inspected it closer. Most wood that was dark was heavy weighted while the lighter colored beams were light. Making it easy to carry. She dug her hands back to the pile, she felt her hand closing around something soft and elastic...rubber. She bought it up to inspect closer. It was deftly going to the rubbish pile. Once rubber started tearing it was useless because it won't stop tearing. Hellra continued sorting through the pile a bit more before she could finish. She quickly rid the area of her presence by returning to her barracks. Hellra grumbled as she passed the kitchens and sniffing the wonderful food scents that emitted from it. Two hours till lunch. Comments: Very good work, this isn't the easiest topic to work with though. See me on IRC though, there are a couple notes I'd rather pass on in person. Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [This message has been edited by Aeos (edited February 7, 2008 11:07:23 AM)] | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Senior Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1558 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 7, 2008 5:58:56 PM | | - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 4: Material Manipulation Story 2: Metal Fabrication Course Description: Troopers are expected to demonstrate what they learned it their Materials Science course by taking a welding torch and manipulating various metallic materials. Troopers will also learn how to apply this skill to the skills they have already learned. For example, they will now be able to create metallic structures such as walls, bridges, and so on.“And so on?” “Yup, that’s about it,” Aeos stared Raki dumbfounded. She dropped the datapad to her bed. They were currently in Raki’s cramped living quarters, sharing some breakfast and news gossip with each other. “Me? And a welding Torch? Helloooo!” Aeos flailed her arms in akimbo frantically before pointing at herself. “City girl alert, lady in training here,” Raki stifled a snicker while trying to calm her classmate down to a level of sanity. “As far as I know, you’ve been a farm girl your whole life, and you’re a killing machine in the making, not some damn lady,” Aeos sighed before a wide grin broke across her face. “Oh stuff the damn specs, wanna grab a drink before class?” “Uh…sure, let’s stay sober this time, okay?” “Of course, how you know me?” “Exactly,” Raki muttered as Aeos yanked her by the arm through the door of the room. Aeos dropped herself from the Heavy Weapon specialist classes, stubbornly upright refusing to follow in her brother’s oh-so-noble footsteps. Despite that, she enlisted herself to Combat Engineering, and it’s been a few weeks since she started it, and already she was flying through the classes. *** “Sit down people!” Aeos along with the rest of the class sat down, wide-eyed at the velocity in the man’s voice. I am Giant, I’m the Level Four lecturer for your Cee-Ee specialty, excuse me for not attending your last class, had the flu,” the man coughed. Whether he was embarrassed about the flu or simply trying to emphasize the truth, Aeos couldn’t figure it out. “Right, I’m sure most of you don ‘t have the brain the size of a pencil cap and would’ve read the briefings about this class. I’m only going to explain a few pointers about the welder; the welding torch is a simple little mechanism, you make use of a slide plate which will activate it, with that same plate you will adjust the strength of the torch,” Yay, Aeos thought dryly while nodding off to other thoughts spinning around in her head. She snapped out from it as the scraping of chairs on a cold cement floor bought her back to this world. She was the last to get up and naturally she was the last to leave the class among Giant, their lecturer. Their eyes met briefly. She continued to glaze past him, but he on the other gasped as he clamped a large calloused hand down on her shoulder. She paused in her footsteps. “Sergeant Hellra?” Not again…“No, I’m not her, and I know. We look alike, but no, now. If you’ll excuse me,” She brushed passed him making use of the personal vibe that suddenly existed between them. ***On the Field*** “Right, so. Take your torch, the datapad and begin. You have nine hours to complete this,” Giant was back to his old self, though Aeos caught him glancing at her ever so often. Her hand grazed across the black plastic cover of her datapad. On his sign her fingers curled around the edge and Aeos flipped it around. Her eyes darting across the keywords of the briefing. Several minutes passed when she finished reading the sky-blue hued datapad’s surface. She heaved the welder from the small wooden desk in front of her and swung it through the air onto her shoulder along with a small pouch of different welding tips and spare valves. “Right, let’s get to the location,” she muttered to herself. She glanced at her briefing again. She was assigned to point A, her station which she needed to complete in order to pass this class. “Ah, Welcome Sergeant, this is point A, “ muttered a young hot-shot male attendant as he flippantly saluted. “Yeah, yeah, what’s the objective specifically?” “We need you to enforce a wall for the barricade, finish it,” he replied pointing to half-completed petite barricade not too far from them. “Right” muttered Aeos, her eyes already catching sight of several smallish slightly-longer-than-a-meter durasteel beams which lied about, four in total, obviously at her disposal along with a big turning mechanism filled with wet fluid cement. “Where’s the form?” “Form?” he blinked at her, a blank expression surfacing in his deep emerald eyes. “Nevermind!,” she barked as she dropped her pouch along with the welder. Aeos marched across the shrubbery terrain to where the durasteel beams were located. Slightly peeking out from underneath one of those beams, was a thin plate of durasteel three meter square. The small junk yard was finally rounded off with mesh wires and plates of steel lying about as well. “Guess, I’m thinking right here,” she muttered to herself while grabbing the plate from underneath the beams. After tugging a good while, she finally managed to yank it out from underneath the heavy weight of the beams. Aeos dragged the plate away and after creating a fire-free zone in the field, she placed the plating there. She squatted down to the ground, and with a gloved hand, dug her fingers through the ground. “Soft enough I guess,” Aeos quickly bolted back for her welder. She set the flame type to a neutral based flame and activated it. A sharp blue cone formed at the mouth of the fire spewing barrel which in ended in a soft feathery form. She darted back to the open space of durasteel and quickly cut a thirty centimeter square form from the plate at the one corner after nearly burning her hand in the process. Next to follow was a half-a-meter square of plating being severed off from the rest of the plating. “Careful now,” Aeos muttered to herself as she took the piece she just managed to cut off and tipped it to the ground. Keeping it upright with the balancing act of her left hand. Instead of thrusting the flame into the plate, she instead held it at bay. Just grazing it. Not melting it. Simply softening the durasteel. Aeos thanked the Sith for her gloves as she felt the heat penetrate the thick fabric. At least these new models of welders were a lot more sensitive than it used to be. The welder she was used to, was a simple mixture of fuel and oxygen. Or was it? The current welder she held had an automatic identification system to the alloy and thus setting itself to new levels of pressure to use. Finally the durasteel plate was starting to give way if she pressed it from above on the edge downward. Not wasting time, Aeos quickly deactivated the welder and laid the soft smaller plate of durasteel flat. Carefully she started rolling it like a rug or a piece of paper. “There, done,” she grinned to herself happily as she kept her hand curled around the rolled up plate and allowed it to cool and harden. It was sad, they couldn’t provide five poles. Saved her a lot of her time. “Right, let’s see,” “You always talk to yourself?” “Yup, now shut-up, “ “Friendly gal you are,” “Shhh!” She grabbed the thirty centimeter square plate of durasteel and lied it down on top of the newly and roughly formed pole she just formed. Swiftly she activated her welder again, and in no time she welded the two pieces together. I’m a genius in the making! she beamed to herself as she hugged her newly formed spade. She was lucky she welded it in the manner that she did with the plating on top of the pole and not the other way around. Digging up that ground would need some support. Aeos spun around, spade in her hand. Her eyes ready as it targeted itself a digging spot on the ground. Slowly she started walking while dropping the spade to the ground causing it to drag lines as she walked. Four hours have already passed. After finally marking of her square, Aeos grabbed the spade firmly and started digging the square meter marked ground. It took another hour of digging till she found herself knee deep in a perfectly man made hole. Clapping to herself in a child-like manner of guileless excitement, Aeos returned to her leftover scrap of durasteel plate and carefully measured out four strips each one meter in length, a size that would match the seize of the wall of her pit. When she finally managed to cut and measure out four perfect strips, she placed them on top of each other. Grouping them to the sides like a stack of papers in her skilled hands. She grabbed her welder again, smiling softly, welcoming a soft breeze playing again her sweaty forehead. She picked her target near the end of the plate in the middle and Aeos set the strength of the welder to maximum, placing the barrel of the torch at the plating leaving only a centimeter of space between the mechanism and the alloy in order to avoid pressure building up. After burning a hole clear through the strips, she repeated the process again at the other end of the plates. With two holes torched right through, which took quite a while as well, Aeos picked the plating from the ground, staggering under the surprising weight and took them to the hole. She meshed them carefully into walls of the hole and secured the plates with each other by means of welding together the corners where the durasteel plates met up. “At last…” Time for them damn poles,She strode over to the beams which remained untouched until now. Grabbing one by the end, Aeos managed in a miraculous manner to drag it over to hole. Confidently, she plugged the one end into the hole of the durasteel wall in her pit. With a lot of wiggling she finally managed to penetrate the ground deep enough to place the remaining end of the beam into the opposing hole of the durasteel wall. She repeated this process several times with the rest of beams till, finally it form a cross hatch form. Now to weld them togetherAeos quickly set to work on welding the beams where they crossed each other in mind-air. Heaving from all the activity she ventured to the attendant who studied her, amused. “Tell me, is that quick dry cement?” “Yep,” “Good, good,” muttered Aeos dragging herself to where the turning mechanism was toiling cement about. Preparing herself again for another session of hard labor, Aeos started tugging at the cement container, and slowly managed to drag it over to her durasteel pit jailed in a cross-hatch. “Easy, does it,” Neatly yet with difficulty she managed to tilt the container and empty the cement into the pit. Aeos sighed loudly, as she dropped herself back onto her rear in the ground. The attendant neared her. “Wow,” he muttered, not shamed of showing his surprise. “Yes, girls do know how to work, hot-shot,” “I didn’t say so,” he smirked in odd manner of being coy. Cute“But I know you thought so,” Now it was her turn to be coy. ***1 Hour later***The cement has settled. What now lied in that pit was a piece of wall. Ready to be use for war. “Oh shit, “ “What?” asked Chawl curiously while wiping an onyx bang of hair away from his face. “I can’t move this wall,” “I’m sorry Sergeant, I’m not allowed to help you with this, “ Chawl replied curtly suddenly turning blank again, returning to his role as the station attendant. Aeos eyed his collar which was wrinkled and unbuttoned. Slight stiff with hot anger, she straightened out her own uniform. Smiling innocently she tip-toed across the small distance separating them. Smirking slightly she dragged a finger lazily across his torso. “You do know…who my brothers are?” “No….” “Oh, just want you to meet them sometime, Platoon Sergeant Racus, and Radge from the Navy…” “R-R-Ra-Racus?” The two brothers were quite notorious, constantly and fiercely protecting their baby sister from the sins of the world. “He’ll throw me in the brig!” “Help me move the wall, and he won’t know,” muttered Aeos while smiling impishly. When they finally managed to move the wall into position, Aeos glanced about. Something’s still amiss, she thought to herself as she allowed her eyes to travel across the area. Scanning for imperfections. “Of course!” Chawl stifled a comment into his fist. Rather not talk. Aeos bolted from her seated position next to him and grabbed her welder. She quickly neared her left-over junk and randomly grabbed the wires. She tried bending them. “Damn, stiff as a twig,” she murmured activating her welder again. She repeated the same process to the long piece of wire, the same as when she started forming a grip for her space. Softening the metal instead of melting it. When it was soft enough Aeos started twisting the wire while dragging it out in length around an invisible form. Pretty soon she had a one meter spill of twirling wire thinned out from being so soft. Finally it hardened again after Aeos allowed it to set. She grabbed left over pieces of steel plating and quickly set to softening it as well. When it was soft enough, Aeos cast her welder aside, dropped to the ground, and with difficulty started tearing at the plate in her gloved hands. With small two-inch long strips of the copper-steel plates, Aeos managed to collect as she kept welding and tearing, she finally started bending and tying it around the wire she fashioned into a twirling twister of art display. The jagged edges that formed along the wire cut into her face as she got entangled into her creation, but finally it was ready. “Barbed wired?” Chawl asked quirking his eyebrow in slight surprise. “Yep,” replied Aeos who was now in the care process of dragging the wire over to the wall and placing it around the barricade. ***Thirty minutes later***Giant eyed the barricade which was now completed. Without warning however, he suddenly pulled out a blaster pistol and aimed it at the wall. Aeos and Chawl kept their distance far out of the way of the lecturer’s way. Giant released the trigger, and without waiting for the smoke and debris to clear, he continued firing. Only when his energy meter ran empty did Giant stop. His eyes caught the cross of the beams between the chipped, cracked and broken cement of her wall. He walked over to the barbed wire mesh, pulled his one glove off and flicked his index finger across the jagged tear of plating that protruded stubbornly from the wire. Blood oozed slowly from the broken skin. “Very impressive Sergeant, though…I’d assume you made some good use of your connections in and off the field to move the wall?” his eyes traveled from the pit, back to the barricade and finally landing on Chawl’s nervous face as he executed a crisp salute. “More or less,” smirked Aeos - OOC:
- Passed. Well done, although my eyes may beg to differ. Perhaps you could space it out a little more in the future? Just an extra return after some of the paragraphs will help a lot. Doesn't hurt your quality there though. Looking forward to the next one.
Jester Squad
SL/SSGT Aeos/3SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/Tadath[LoR][ES2C][CoR]
DI/SSGT Aeos/STC Academy/Hellgate/Tadath/VEA/VE
CPO_Aeos/(=*A*=)][MC1](=*SA*=)
TRN/AD_Aeos/Training 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [This message has been edited by Aeos (edited February 7, 2008 6:00:29 PM)] [This message has been edited by Riqimo (edited February 21, 2008 9:43:18 AM)] | Aeos ComNet Expert  [VE-ARMY] Gunnery Sergeant [VE-DJO] Krath Adept [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 1621 Total Posts: 1842 Joined: May 2005 Status: Online | RE: Aeos(Combat Engineer) | February 24, 2008 7:05:30 PM | | Level 5: Advanced Explosives Use You will now learn more advance use of explosives other than in defense. You will now be trained to use explosives to slow enemy forces. Skills Earned: -Lay mines -Clear minefields -Use explosives to sabotage enemy defenses -Create advanced explosives from basic materials (requires level 7) Story 1: Sabotage and Demolitions Course: Sabotage and Demolitions Course Type: Practical Course Description: Troopers will be shown how to use explosives to obliterate enemy defences. They will be expected to know where weak points are in structures, and how to identify them. After future lessons, troopers will eventually be able to create their own explosives for advanced sabotage methods. - OOC:
- Aeos
Combat Engineer Level 5: Advanced Explosives Use Story 1: Sabotage and Demolitions
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- “It’s the start of a new day for all you lazy bums still sleeping at six AM, now’s the time to-“ “Shut up,” a voice muttered, smothered by the fabric of her pillow. Bleary eyed Aeos’s fingers fumbled around on the radio alarm for the snooze button. “Come now, lazy girl,” Raki giggled at her roomie who crept deeper into the thin covers of her bed. “Why should I get out?” Aeos moaned in a muffled response. “Because our practical exam’s gonna start in a bit silly, “ “Right, right, I’m up, I’m up,” she tumbled from her bed with a crash to the ground, tangled in sheets. “Silly rabit,” Aeos’ head finally poked about from underneath the sheets on the ground grinning impishly. ***1 Hour Later*** “This sucks,” Aeos mumbled, her eyes scanning the datapad for her name. They’ve been assigned individual exam times in order not to clog up the simulator rooms. Meaning she might have to wait till the end of the day for her practical exam to take place. Currently, they were waiting for an order at the café they decided to visit outside the Academy. Seated under big flaring canary yellow umbrellas. “Ah, got it, you’re exam is in three hours time,” Raki muttered already jumping the gun for Aeos. So I aint gonna wait all day,“How about you?” Aeos asked as she followed Raki’s pointed finger for her name and the time. “At the end of the day,” the girl grumbled. My gain, her loss, I guess Aeos though with a little guilt stabbing her in the stomach. ***Two hours and fifty-five minutes later*** “At ease Sergeant,” the lecturer muttered as Aeos reported with a crisp salute. He beckoned her to step through the door of the simulator, which she followed with no hesitant thoughts. The doors closed behind her with a pressurized hiss. A few seconds after Aeos nearly jumped from her skin as his voice boomed through unseen speakers in the room. “You’re objective is simple, sabotage and neutralization of enemy and enemy defenses with whatever means at your disposal, in this exam, you will be marked according to your ability in making use of explosives, the creation, use and tactics of it,” “Right, you lot sure know to increase the stress factors, don’t you?” Aeos remarked as she pulled her shoulders back and loosened them. “Are you ready?” “Yes,” The room brightened in a flash of white before it started dissolving into different sets of various colours. Eventually it formed into realistic planes of depth, composing into a new reality for Aeos’ brain to process. She stood on the outcrop of a small cliff which dipped sharply into a small valley filled mostly with fresh river water. Donned in standard stormtrooper gear. Out of habit, she removed her helmet. Next to her, were a backpack and a bit further on, a mere few yards away was a 660 utility lander speeder. Two simulated troopers stood next to her, waving while they were in the process of loading cargo. Aeos stooped down and gripped the bag on the one side with her hand while tearing down the strap on the other side. The bag fell open on the grass displaying an interesting collection of junk and actual explosive products. A soft whistled escaped through her teeth while she grinned impishly as she managed to identify some of the detonators. Some these blokes you couldn’t even buy in the store at times. Clipped to the bag was a basic compass. “No fancy hmh?” She quickly brought the straps together and fastened the display back into the backpack it was. She managed to launch it onto her shoulder with a bit of a heave before she finally turned to the horizon, compass in view. “Right-enemies located forty-five degrees to the north,” she read out loud to herself , her eyes darting across the onyx and emerald tiled screen. Bit old-school technology as it did the job for her. She turned to the direction from which the screen blinked. A smirk etched across her face as she realized exactly where they located. A few miles downstream next to the river. She glanced back at the utility speeder, and cocked her head to the side. “Oi!” “Yes, Ma’am?” one trooper replied. She dubbed him Red one. “What do we have here?” “We’re not sure Ma’am, to be honest,” the other one replied as his hand scratched the back of his helmeted head. Red Two. Frowning, she cast her helmet aside and stepped up to one of the containers. She removed the cap. A very distinct smell rose from the open lid, “Lighter fluid,” She continued looking through the heavy junk already weighing down on the flat surface of the speeder. Shrugging, Aeos clambered aboard and gestured to the troopers to make a move on. A few minutes later and the threesome found themselves enjoying a country roadtrip as Aeos steered through the flora of the land, heading down to the river. She was pretty much sure that the enemy would make some use of the river’s energy as resource, whether it was for creating hydro electricity, or as a delivery canal, or even just a resource as food and water. “So, what’s the plan?” Red Two asked, while keeping his eye on the tracker of her compass. “Blow up the river,” she muttered smirking. “I’m assuming we’ll split up?” “Yep, well, you lot will be handling the river thingy, I’m hoping they rely on the river for a source power, meaning if you cut it, it will neutralize their defenses, I’ll sneak in plant some nifty booms and mission accomplish this dam task,” She grinned. After a while of switching back and forth between the best options and plans, Aeos finally split away from the two troopers on foot with a few of the basic equipment in her backpack. Much to her own regret, she had to give up most of the nifty little explosive buggers in order to bring the river sides down. “Right, not a big outpost, -“ A whirring noise emitted from the microbinoculars when she zoomed in. “Ah!, Only one turret, east fence…electrical fence, yes, one, two, three fence linies, lets see—“ she traveled the focus of the binoculars to the rivers and let out a small gasp as the peak of a large turning wheel was spotted right above the flora at river banks. She could only assume that the wheel was somehow in tune with the power for the small camp serving as a basic yet cheap generator for power. Well, once the river was crashed closed per order to her simulated assistant troopers, then hopefully… “In position?” “Give me a minute,” Aeos relied back as she got back to her feet from behind the boulder and set off in a quick jog nearing the camp from the shrouded side of the forest with speed and caution. “Right, you lot ready?” “Yes Ma’am” “One my count…three…two…one-“ A boom vibrated through the ground as the rumbles of falling boulder, rocks, and debris echoed through the nestled valley. “What was that?” One of the guards lining down the fence on the enemy line looked up alarmed. “No-Yes, I’ll come over,” he spoke through what Aeos assumed was his Comlink. “It was gonna take a minute or two for the river to come to an complete halt, in which Aeos bided her time, edging ever so close to the fence which was quickly losing its generated power. She opened her hand wide, palm facing the fence and patted it a few times in quick jerks of movements. Doing what she was best at, Aeos took a leap at the fence, and with an unaturual understanding for the laws of gravity, she clambered across the thin yet strong wires of the fence. She reached the top in sheer seconds, and balanced herself for a moment, while readying her joints for a hard crash to the ground when she jumped down to the other side. Just as her hands manage to steady her fall, she heard a snap!, her head bolted to the source and her eyes widened when a bolt of blue ran in lightspeed down the length of the fence curling around each pole in emphasis. Shit! They have a back-up generator? She didn’t have a lot of time and started sprinting to where she calculated the turret was. There was one problem though…the sensors. If this was a fresh-out-of-the box turret, it would mean it was programmed with the latest software as well. Ability to distinguish between enemy heat signatures and friendly ones. There was no way to make even use of the enemy guards’ bodies as shield in order to near the turret. Unless… Aeos smirked, as she pulled the two flasks from her utility belt along with two strips of fabric. She emptied it almost an hour ago and filled both with light fluid. She proceeded to tap some of the little fuel the utility speeder made use of and mixed it with the fluids in her flasks. Now for the results. She was still jogging, missing all three of the guards miraculously at each point and turn of the small camp with its three makeshift building as she inspected the layout. She paused at the corner of the building which obscured the turret from current view. She stole a quick glance around the corner, trying to identify the model. Right…this one is light she thought to herself. A mere ten meters was its sensing range for hostilities. The three guards have finished inspecting the cause of the rumble, and were actually now slightly alerted aware of the river sabotage. She bided her time at the corner of the building while the guards kept nearing her, still unaware. She ignited her zippo carefully and silently. As soon as the nearest one was in range Aeos set the strip now inserted through the top of the flask on fire and threw it through, and smack right into his torso. “What the-“ He didn’t finish his sentence as Aeos who had her DC-15 ready shot at the flask throwing the male into a fit of flames. The other two were soon forced into his position as Aeos neatly managed to hit the last lit flask on target as it zoomed through the air pass their heads. The trio very much alive yet burning couldn’t comprehend the pain running through nerves as the flames licked at the armour, the lghter fluids seepings through the nooks and crannies of the armour. Aeos was now not on their list of priorities. Of course this was all still a simulation. She grabbed her helmet which was strung around her neck with a piece of steel string and pulled it over her head. She sped to the nearest burning guard, and ignoring the head, grabbed him by his neck, proton grenade ready in the other hand. Hopefully, the fire burning at the guards would have changed their heat signatures, even if slightly for the turret to misplace in identifying them and shoot at them. Sure enough, just as she or they came in range the turret ripped open in a barrage of open fire. One blast scorches into her exposed shoulder from behind the burning and screaming male. Not sure whether the turret was going hay-wire at her, or the guard, Aeos pushed the man in front her while keeping behind him the whole time, when she was within range she pulled the proton grenade into an active state of duty and launched it through the air before dropping to the ground sharply, not knowing what to expect and suddenly the world flashed away in a white light. Her eyes blinking rapidly, her breathing ragged, Aeos woke into a stupor state of anxiety on the floor of the simulator room. “You’re dismissed Sergeant,” “Right, Sir,” she muttered at the voiceless embodiment of her lecturer who was most likely gazing at her through those black mirrors lining the walls in the now darkened room. “When do I get my results?” “As soon as I’m done reviewing through the recordings of your mission,” “Err….right, sure” she relied to the speakers while executing a crispy salute. “Dismissed,” - OOC:
- Well, I hope its better paragraphed this time, I'm gonna blame my Word processor this time if the paragraphs are still weird^^
Sorry if it was a bit long
- OOC:
- Long isn't an issue at all Ae, and passed as well. Love the little cute map as well. And paragaph spacing is good, don't worry about it too much, if it bothers me, I can always space it out myself, a little extra work can't really kill me... I hope
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