Looks good Cosmic. Though, they need some little saying on them to say what we do. People will look at the banner more than they will the text; so it's like an advertisement.
Something like:
"Free Star Wars Role Playing Club"
"Free Star Wars Role Playing Club. Join now to claim your free 1,000 Imperial Credits to use in the Imperial Network."
"We take Star Wars Role Playing to the Next Level"
"We take Star Wars Role Playing to the Next Level. Suction Cup Ewoks are now available at the Imperial Center Store, get yours Today!"
"Discover your story in the Star Wars Universe by joining the Imperial Forces and helping restore order to the Galaxy once again."
"Battle the Forces of evil in the Galaxy while your character develops into a stronger individual, able to take on greater tasks and feats."
Could be just about anything. The main thing we is for people to click on the banner to get them to the site.
Also, it might also need to have our domain name on there as well. That way, people will see the domain and remember it; and perhaps even come back later.