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  Paladin Specialty Stories
March 29, 2007 3:38:29 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
Post them here. I should have created this awhile ago, but I figured if you were working on one, you could post it on the NS topic. Anyways, start using this at you discretion.
 
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Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it will always haunt your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
April 5, 2007 3:51:49 PM    View the profile of Tanus Solvona 
Tanus Solvona, LCPL
Squad specialty story: Combat Engineer
Story: Electrical Systems

Tanus awoke in his room, a pale gray and white cubicle with a refresher at one end and a closet at the other. Tanus got up and walked over to the small computer in his room to see if he had any messages, and it appeared he did:

Lance Corporal Tanus Solvona,
                    You have been scheduled for the Electrical System exam as per your request set two standard weeks ago. The test will begin at 1200 hours. Failure to appear at test time will result in a failing grade and a make-up test will NOT be made.

Tanus closed out the window and got up to go to the bathrooms and take a shower. When he got there, he turned on the water and let the hot water stream down his face. After nearly falling asleep in the showers, Tanus got dressed and headed back to his room and picked up his datapad and began to read the files on electrical systems.  After nearly two hours of studying, Tanus got up and went down to the testing rooms.

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Tanus sat down at one of the desks in the room. In the room with his were two Sullustans and a single Twi'lek. Tanus saw that they were all doing some last minute studying, and Tanus thought that he should follow suit. After nearly twenty minutes, four instructors entered the room, two males and two females. One of their number, a female, stepped forward.

"Hello," she said, "my name is Stella Wor'dosh, and I will be one of your instructors today. Along with me are three of my colleagues."

She gestured to the two men and the woman behind her. Then they stepped forward as well.

"My name is Jaff Boresh," said one of the men.

"My name is Herew Diskar," said the other man.

"My name is Dea Thurmakin," said the woman.

They all stepped back simultaneously, except for Stella, who stood in front of the class.

"You are all on your way to becoming Combat Engineers, and may I say, congratulations. But, there are no easy lessons, especially this one."

Tanus looked at her with the utmost concentration, hanging on every word she said. He was waiting for the lecture to end and for the real test to begin.

"This lesson will focus on Electrical systems and their many properties. After this lecture, a short practical exam will be administered by one of the four of us to see where your strengths truly lie. Now, as you know, electricity flows in a current. Now you all know what your conductors and insulators are, right?"

All four of the students nodded in sequence.

"Good. Now with that being said, can anybody name for me some conductors?"

Tanus raised his hand. Stella pointed to him.

"Water, metal coils, especially gold or silver."

"Excellent. Now who can tell me what some insulators are?"

The Twi'lek raised her hand, and Stella gestured to her.

"Plastics and glass make very good insulators."

"Very good," Stella said. "Now, so we can move on, please go next to, or in front of, the person you want for the practical exam."

Tanus got up and walked up to Stella.

"Oh-ho, it seems we have a daring one."

Tanus nodded, and Stella gave a small smile.

"Follow me."

With that, Tanus followed Stella out the door.

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Tanus was lead by Stella to a workroom not far from where they had begun. Once inside, Tanus saw a small shield generator, a datapad and a lighting fixture.

"These items," Stella said, "are crucial when in the battlefield; you can't do without them. Due to this, it is imperative that you learn how to wire these devices. What I want you to do with each device you see before you is diagnose the problem and fix it. There is no time limit, so take as long as you like. You may begin."

Tanus grabbed a hyprospanner, fusion cutter and goggles from a nearby rack and got to work. He moved to the shield generator first, and saw it was sealed shut. Tanus took the fusion cutter and started to torch the sides of the generator with the red plasma beam. After nearly five minutes of cutting, the plasma finally got through and Tanus pried off the plate. What he found inside was some busted wires that had been fried or cut, and a broken energy motivator. Tanus looked around and found the spare wires he needed and a motivator lying around.

Tanus took out the old motivator with the hydrospanner and installed the new one in just under a minute and a half. He then stripped it of the wiring it had had, and began to place the wires in. First he connected the blue wire from the motivator to the phase converter. Next, he took the yellow and green wired and connect them from the power cell to the cooling devices and the motivator. Finally, he took the red, black and purple wires and connected them from the phase converter and the motivator to the energy distribution pads. He then closed up the generator and flicked it on. The generator blared to life with a hazy blue bubble forming around the table. He turned it off after about 15 seconds and moved on to the datapad.

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Tanus picked up the datapad and flipped it over to begin unscrewing the backing with the hydrospanner. When it was off, he laid it down on the table and saw that the wires were frayed, which may have led to its non-functioning condition. Tanus cut the wires carefully and then took them out, one at a time. After they were out, he took the wires he had found and put them in the exact same manner, much like what he did with the shield generator. After that, he screwed the back onto the device and turned it on, and was happy to see it was working.

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Tanus went over to the final piece, the light fixture. Tanus took it apart and found that the metal discs on the fixture were completely burned. Tanus took of the tops of the fixture and got the discs out. He then found, after much searching three metal discs with which to use. After placing them in and screwing the top back on, he put a light rod into the base of one of the sockets. He flipped the switch and the light blared to life. He turned it off and replaced his tools.

"Finished," Tanus said with enthusiasm.

Stella put down her datapad and walked over to each device. She ran her hand along them and turned around and smiled at Tanus.

"Congratulations, Tanus Solvona, you passed this exam. You can go now."

Tanus sighed in relief and went back to his room. When he got back it was nearly 1500 hours. Tanus went to his room and put his stuff down. Then he went to the showers to get all the grime and sweat off. After that, He went to his room and just sat and read for a while. With an hour, he was asleep with a smile on his face.

Second Story: COMPLETE
Tanus Solvona, LCPL, CE in training

Nice job. It definitely shows you can write about electrical systems and such. It did seem to be just a bit too centered around the facts. Basically, try to liven it up just a tiny bit in your next one. It just seemed like you were basically saying the same thing over and over again. Just check a bit of grammar here and there as well. Nice work again though.

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
April 9, 2007 1:35:53 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
Luckystar, LCPL,
Squad Specialty Story: Combat Engineer
Story: Basic Electronics and Wiring (Blaster and Computer Maintenance)

Lucky woke up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat. What if I fail my training? She was very nervous, because that morning she would attend her first lesson in the course of Combat Engineering. She went to her computer, turned it on, and checked her messages. She had one from her trainer, Mr.Clate . It said that she was expected at 01100 hours that morning in room 204. She was very nervous, she knew that all would be well, but that didn't stop her from being  nervous . Pull yourself together woman! You're a trooper. You were in worse situations than this. She got in uniform and reviewed her notes.

An hour later, after doing a bit pf studying, she went to the gym. She liked to be in tip-top shape. She had the strength of a man  a slim, muscular body and a sharp mind.

While she was doing some weight training she reviewed her notes again to make sure she had everything right. She went to the locker rooms , changed, and walked towards the section of the complex reserved for classes.  She went to the reception area and saw a short, plump, receptionist sitting at her desk.

"Excuse me, can you tell me where room 204 is?"

"Yes, of course. Go down this hallway and turn left. Room 204 is the third door on the right."

"Thanks" said Lucky nervously.

She followed the directions the receptionist had given her  and two minutes later was standing in front of room 204. Here goes. She knocked softly before opening the door.  There were two more people sitting behind desks in the room. She gulped and sat at a desk in a corner of the classroom.

A minute later three instructors walked in. The tallest of them took two steps forwards and presented himself.

"Welcome Troopers. My name is Mr. Clate. This, is Daryn". He pointed to his left. "And this, is Carn" .
Both men raised their hands as their names were announced .
"We will test your knowledge of Blasters and your effectiveness in Computer Maintenance."

Each Instructor went to sit beside a student. Mr.Clate sat beside Lucky.
"Lance Corporal Luckystar, show me what you can do."

Lucky's hands were slippery with sweat. But she kept calm, she disassembled a Blaster that was given to her and started the diagnostic to determine the problem. She took the pistol apart, careful not to damage any components that would affect its performance. She examined each section and its chambers carefully. When she came to the middle section, the sction that created the beam of energy, she found the problem. The wires were twisted and some of them were not connected properly. She untwisted the wires, and reconnected them to their apropriate connectors. She heard a soft beep and a green light flashed on.

'Congratulations Lance Corporal, you have fixed the blaster. Now let's move on to computers shall we?"

A computer was placed in front of her. It was a mini-computer. It was more a computer chip than anything else. It was the type of computer you implant into a Trooper's helmet.  She slid the tiny, fragile chip into a hand-held computer she had at her disposition. She tested it and saw that its general functions did not work. She took out a small, portable microscope and looked at the chip. It was dusty, so she took out a specialized cleaner and cleaned it, carefully, thoroughly. She checked its connectors, they were all in the right connectors and well plugged in.

She then proceeded to putting it back in the portable computer. She loaded a program that would allow her access to the computer chip's content. She scanned it for viruses and impurites. Found a couple. Tested them. And tries to use the chip. It worked perfectly now. Another green light flashed on and Mr.Clate announced.

"Congratulations, you fixed both the blaster and the computer in an almost record-breaking amount of time. Please exit the classroom and wait outsdie."

Lucky did as she was told and waited for what seemed like hours. While she waited, she looked around the hallway and a few minutes after she had gone out, the two other students came out looking very nervous. They spoke very little while they waited and a short while later, daryn opened the door and said.
"You will come into the classroom when we call your name. Afterwards you can  leave."

Lucky's name was the first to be called. She went into the classroom and closed the door behimd her. Mr. Clate looked at her and announced .

"Lance Corporal Luckystar, you pass with an excellent mark. Congratulations."

She left the room in silence and walked back to her quarters. She was glad the day was over. She was even more glad that she had passed.

She went up to her room, sat on the bed, tried to mechanically pull the bars up but it would not work. What's wrong with this? Something must be affecting the mechanism.

She unscrewed the lid on a box at the foot of her bed. It housed the main electrical panel for the mechanically enhanced bed. She found no problem there. let's check the system for the bars.

She moved to a small box which was under the bed. The system in this box made the bars go up and down like they were supposed to. There was also a switch to lock the bars in place. She checked everything. Did a bit of fine-tuning and tried to raise the hospital bed bars again.  This time it actually worked perfectly. Better. She climbed in bed, did a bit of reading and went to sleep.

Nicely improved. I'm keeping this yellow, since you asked for it so you could see it better. The use of italics helped, plus you fixed a few of the errors. On a side note, you used "nervous" a lot. In future stories, try to switch out adjectives and adverbs. It gives a nicer feel to it. Oh, and just to make sure, you pass.


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-Paladin-
To Embrace the Darkness is to bring about the Light

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
April 10, 2007 4:04:37 PM    View the profile of Tanus Solvona 
Tanus Solvona, LCPL
Squad specialty story: Combat Engineer
Story: Field Fortifications

Tanus awoke one night with a beeping coming from his datapad. He walked over to it, still groggy eyed; he looked at his chrono on the nightstand, which read 0400 hours. He picked up the datapad and looked at the message:

You are to report to room 397 at 0900 hours for your next exam. Have a nice day.

Tanus threw his head back in exasperation. Wonderful, he thought, two more glorious hours of sleep. Tanus went back to his bed and laid there for less than thirty seconds before falling back to sleep.

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Tanus got up when his chrono blared the wake-up alarm at 0700. He went down to the showers and took a nice, hot shower and went back to his room to dress. After that he grabbed some caf and a roll from the cafeteria and went to the front desk.

"Excuse me, where is room 397?"

The receptionist hit the keyboard once, and the screen showed the entire schematic of the building.

"Down the hall, take the first right then the second left. It will be the third door to your right."

Tanus nodded and walked down the hall to the training room.

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Tanus walked into the room to find a set of large double doors opened at the back. When he walked near them, a man stepped out of the shadows.

"Greetings," he said. "You must be Tanus Solvona. I'm Delva Skorn. It's a pleasure to meet you."

Tanus nodded. "Likewise, sir. Now I take it I'm to go outside and build up a fortification?"

Delva nodded. "Right you are. But, there'll be a twist: I'll be inside that bunker launching small chemical grenades at you. They're harmless, but they should simulate a battle very nicely."

Tanus nodded and followed Delva out to the field; it was a nice day, with the sun shining and not a cloud in the sky. Delva then led Tanus to a trench, which was surrounded with long planks of thick wood and various metal sheets. Delva then gestured to the trench.

"Do you see that trench? Your test is to build up a strong fortification that can at least withstand a hit from a heavy blaster cannon, which I have set up over there," and Delva gestured the cannon, which was 100 meters away, pointed at the trench. "When you're done, I'll stop lobbing grenades and we'll see how well you did. If your wall withstands the hit, you pass. If it doesn't, you have to repeat the test at a later date until you pass it. All your materials are over there, but you can improvise if you want. You may begin when I start lobbing grenades. I'll give you five minutes to get ready."

Tanus jogged over to the trench and hopped down to find a fusion cutter and other tools waiting for him. After five minutes, an alarm sounded and small chemical grenades began raining out of the sky. Tanus then got to work.

The first thing Tanus did was grabbed a piece of wood and a vibro-cutter, and activated the tool. The low hum of the blade told him it was activated. He then began cutting through the wood like butter. Tanus did this several times and began to stick the planks into the ground. Next, he cut more of the planks and began to place them along the front of the others. He took his nail gun and stuck the planks in place. Tanus then took his fusion cutter began cutting through the metal sheets. When he had some sized pieces, he laid them along the back of the wooden stakes for more support when the cannon would be fired at it.

After he did that, he took more of the metal and cut more of it to make large sheets to drape over the top of the barricade. When he had three 2 meter long sheets, he went in front of the barricade as grenades continued to rain down on him. As the deafening explosions sent dirt and debris toward him, Tanus took his nail-gun and secured to sheets of metal to the planks of wood. When he had done that, he went back to the metal and got an idea: he began cutting more of the metal. When he had about the same amount as before, he nailed those into place as well, then took his fusion cutter and stuck them together along the edges, thus creating a double strength metal wall.

When he got behind the barricade to see what he had done, Tanus found that the back looked almost ready to collapse. Tanus then saw what he might need: some blocks of duracrete sitting out of the way. Tanus grabbed to blocks and placed them behind the metal wall for extra support. He then cut more metal (at this point he only had about ten meters left) and placed it behind the duracrete blocks and fused them together. When he finished the barricade, it was about 5 meters long and roughly 1.75 meters high, along with the trench, which was another meter deep; perfect for troop engagements. Tanus radioed in to Delva to stop the bombardment. Seconds later, the chemical bombs stopped raining out of the sky.

Delve came trotting over and looked at the barricade.

"Hmmmm, looks sturdy enough. Now let's see how well it holds."

Tanus and Delva walked over to the cannon, and Delve got behind its controls  and set it to maximum power. Tanus saw in the targeting computer that the cannon had selected the barricade as a target. When the charge was at its maximum, Delva fired a single blast from the blaster's muzzle. The large red bolt sailed through air, and smacked the barricade with tremendous force, throwing up a wall of dust, rock and debris. After ten seconds or so, when the smoke finally cleared, Tanus saw that his barricade, while scarred and dented, was still in working condition. Delva looked over at Tanus and shook his hand.

"Congratulations, Tanus Solvona. Your barricade survived the hit. You may go on to the next exam."

Tanus ran back to the base, with a smile from ear to ear.

Third Story: COMPLETE
Tanus Solvona, LCPL, CE in training

Nice job Tanus. You proved you know how to build a fortification. I just a minor note to the whole thing. You barely mentioned the grenades during your process of building the small wall. It would have been interesting to see how your character reacted to simulated explosions around him. Maybe you could have had the examiner lob a real grenade to sprawl you off your feat for staying in the open too long. Also, that's a lot of metal laying around. I think it came to about 22 meters. That's a lot of metal to be hauling around, and you probably wouldn't get that much on a battlefield. These are just things to keep in mind for later stories. Also, make sure you type the difference between to and two. You have a couple places where you mixed them up.

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
April 21, 2007 2:28:18 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
Luckystar, LCPL
Squad specialty story: Combat Engineer
Story: Electrical Systems

Luckystar awoke from an uneasy sleep when she heard a faint sound. It was a scratching sound. It was faint, almost inaudible. She looked around her room. It was tiny and dark. She saw nothing out of the ordinary. Everything was as she had left it, something always made her think her stuff was being moved around. A sudden loud beep was heard.

She knew that sound. She got out of bed and slowly, cautiously made her way towards her computer. It was sitting on the only work desk She turned the screen on and noticed the New Message icon flashing. She opened her in box and looked at the short message. I

It read:
To: Lance Corporal Luckystar
Following your request to continue your training you will show up to hangar 12 at 1100 hours today. I do not take lightly students who show up late. You are expected to be on time. I am anxious to meet you.

When Lucky finished reading she closed the window and looked at her large clock.
It read 0500 hours. She was not tired. She was too nervous to be tired. She got up, went to the bathroom, showered, got dressed and made herself a cup of steaming coffee. She sat down at the small table she used for multiple purposes and sipped her coffee thoughtfully. What electrical systems will I be working on this morning?

When she finished her cup of coffee she got up, and got ready to start her day. When she was fully dressed and didn't feel she needed any more caffeine to lead a normal day she grabbed her gym bag and went to the gym. She trained for two hours before heading towards the hangars.

Hangar 12 was one of the largest in the lot. It could hold up to 3 Starships or 20 Personal Craft. When she activated the switch that would open the large steel door and looked inside. It was empty except for a lot of wires and components. In the middle of the mess was standing a tall, muscular, young man.

She walked forwards and stood at attention. "At ease, Lance Corporal" said the man. "My name is Damian Kosnik. I will be your instructor for today. " Lucky looked around her at all that was there and was about to ask what they would be doing today when Damian spoke up. "Today you will be building a vehicle dashboard. It will be used for a vehicle that is currently being constructed a the factory." I can do this. Courage my friend, I can do this she slowly walked forwards and stood in front of the pile of metal. She picked up a few pieces of metal, found a welding torch and started welding them together. She heard footsteps coming towards her and looked up in time to see Damian come stand beside her. "One more thing. This dashboard actually has to work. I will test it once you are finished." With that he walked off to the far right corne rof the hangar. He stood there watching her every move. She felt a wave of worry wash over her. She quickly shook it away and got back to work on the dashboard.

Twenty minutes later she had finished welding the top half of the dashboard together. She took some wires and connected them according to their colour. An hour later the frame was completed and six wires were now installed. She was moving slowly she knew. But she couldn't help it. She took some more wires and connected them like she had done with the first six. The thing was soon a big handful of colourful wires.

When she had finished she connected the section of wire that was not yet connected to anything to a large panel with dials , buttons and switches on the other side. When everything was secured she looked up and signalled to the instructor that she had finished her work.

He came over and hooked up the dashboard to a handheld machine which looked like a datapad. Once turned on it tested everything that was hooked up on there. Lucky was able to see lights come on and off and hear the clicking of mechanisms. She assumed those were all good signs.

When Damian was done his inspection of the brand-new piece of equipment he looked at Lucky and for a moment she thought that he was going to ask her to start it over.

" You have finished this piece of handiwork in a respectable amount of time , and yoy have done it well."

"Thank you sir" Luckystar said softly.

"Soldier, you pass and I think You are well enough trained to move on to the next training session. I believe it's Field Fortification."

Lucky looked at him with surprise. She hadn't expected to pass the test with such flying colours.

'Thank you ,sir. Do you have any suggestions you wish to give me for future construction processes?"

"Yes, Lance Corporal Luckystar . I do. Aleays take someone else's advie if you have that option and accept help from others. That will sped up the building of the electrical components and you may have better results that way."

"Thank you, sir" responded Lucky.

She packed up her things and headed towards her quarters. She was proud of the work she had accomplished . After dropping off her things in her room she headed towards the mess hall for supper.

In the mess-hall she sat down at a table only occupied by tanus. Who was her friend, and also happened to know about the lesson she had today.

"So, how did it go?"

"It went well" she replied and told him everything that she had done that day.

Pass. Again, it's in yellow upon request. It was decently done. No real criticism except for minor grammar and capitalization.

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-Paladin-
To Embrace the Darkness is to bring about the Light

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May 25, 2007 2:03:09 PM    View the profile of Tanus Solvona 
Tanus Solvona, CPL
Squad specialty story: Combat Engineer
Story: Explosives Deployment

Tanus got up from the floor from his workout routine and started going into his Neija combat stances. It'd been a while since he'd tested them on a living target, but then again, it been a while since he'd done anything to a living target. He got up when got a message on his datapad. He walked over to it and clicked the screen. The message stated, "You've been cleared for your next exam." Tanus looked own to see if there was more. When he saw that there wasn't, he went to take a shower. He let the cool water stream down his body for a while, realizing that this was the first specialty exam he had done on some time. Then he got into a meditative state, and stood under the cooling stream from the showerhead for about twenty minutes or so. When he came back, the steam was billowing everywhere. Tanus finished up and got dressed, then headed out the door.


Tanus headed to the explosives depot, as was instructed by the receptionist for his appointment. He walked in to a massive warehouse, with boxes of every type of explosive stacked, launching fifty meters into the sky. He walked forward, walking around the Binary Loadlifters and Industrial Lifts as he walked towards the back of the depot. When he got there, a man of about fifty turned around to face him. He had jagged scars all along his jaw line and face, and had a severe case of five o'clock shadow. On his left hand was a metallic claw, with five appendages attached. He extended the organic hand to Tanus and shook his hand.

"Greetings, Trooper. My name's Doj Yerrins, and I'll be your instructor for today's exam. Now, when in the field, there are various types of explosives used, both for traps and for construction. The two most common for construction are Thermite detonators, which are used for bringing down concrete walls and such, and CryoBan grenades, which are excellent fire suppressants. However, these two types of explosive devices can be used in open warfare. Thermite detonators are brilliant at blasting through enemy fortifications and armor emplacements, as well as traps. CryoBan grenades create a wave of cold that freezes the nerves in the body, causing severe frostbite; this weapon is in many ways similar to a Disruptor. But any way, we're here to see how you can use these devices in both terms of construction and traps."

Doj Yerrins turned on his heel and walked out the door with two boxes of explosives, one marked "CryoBan" and the other marked "Thermite." They left the warehouse and went to a large patch of land with a sign that read "Test Site A" in big red lettering. Doj set down the crates of explosives and walked forward to a computer and started punching in some commands. Tanus stood there under what seemed to be a hollowed out business building, which rose for floors, with durasteel beams going every angle imaginable. When Tanus looked back, Doj was walking back towards him.

"OK, what we're going to do is go through some trials to see if you know how to set up these explosives properly and use them in a construction situation safely. After that, we'll get the trap portion of the exam. Now, we're going to do the CryoBan grenades first. I left some engine fuel in a pool over there. I'm going to get a flame carbine and light it up. Your job is to put it out. I'm going to keep lighting the fires until you out them all out. Understand?"

Tanus nodded as he started slinging bandoliers with CryoBan grenades in each of it sleeves. When he had to full bandoliers, he nodded to Doj. Doj walked away and fitted himself with a flame carbine and walked up to the second floor. Doj nodded to Tanus and aimed the carbine at the pool of engine fuel. He pulled the trigger, and a jet of crimson flame shot out of the carbine's tip. The engine fuel ignited in a fantastic display, spouting flames 5 meters into the sky. Tanus withdrew one of the CryoBan grenades and set the timer for three seconds. He lobbed the explosive into the fire and ran behind a pile of girders. He then heard the hiss of the CryoBan grenade releasing its chemical agent. When Tanus looked up again, the engine fuel was frozen, and no fire remained. Tanus went to the next site, and did the same thing. At one point on the second to last fire, Tanus caught his arm on fire. He thought of using a CryoBan grenade, but decided not to. No need to lose any limbs, Tanus thought. He dropped to the ground, and when he saw that he wasn't burned seriously, he lobbed the grenade and went on to the final fire.

When all was said and done, Tanus had put out nine fires, and still had about six grenades left. Doj came up behind him with a slight grin on his face.

"Good job, kid. Now, lets move on to the Thermite detonators."

Tanus followed Doj back to the site where they began, and handed Tanus a bag of Thermite detonators. They were about15 cm across, with a red dot in the center that was the activation device. It had an adhesive backing. Tanus looked it over as Doj gave him instructions.

"There is a structure about 20 meters away. That structure has been built specifically for this exam. Basically, you're going to go there and take it down. This is the activation stick. Click it once the detonators are in place. But stand back when you're all done, at least 50 meters away; these things pack a punch. I'll be back here with a pair of binoculars, monitoring you. You can go any time your ready."

Tanus started to head out towards the building, which was effectively a spare with holes where windows should be. Tanus shrugged and put explosives along all of the stress fractures he could find in the building's frame. After he set up eight detonators, he started to head back towards the main site. At 60 meters, he pushed the ignition switch. There was a click, and the building went up in a storm of fire and raining debris. Doj was looking through the binoculars as he came back.

"Nice job. That building didn't have much of a chance anyway; too old and too many fractures. Anyway, let's move on to how these two devices can be used in traps.


Doj walked out with a small computer and two grenades, one CryoBan and one Thermite. He set down the computer and handed each grenade to Tanus.

"OK, now let's rap this up. You now know how to use both of these grenades in an industrial setting. Now its time to test them in a combat setting. CryoBan grenades work well against infantry units, as in humans and such, but they also make great droid neutralizers when ion weapons aren't available. They freeze the components in droids to temperatures well beyond safety zones, making them completely inoperable. Here, take this spade, and dig a hole; you know how to set them off by now so there's no real lecture beyond this. Just when you see the droid walking over the spot where you dug, set off the grenade."

Tanus grabbed the spade and started at a patch of earth roughly ten meters from where he was standing. He then set the CryoBan grenade to the frequency of the remote and put it in the ground, covering it with earth and patting the earth into place. Tanus then got back and waited for his target to arrive. It took several seconds, but from out of the shadows came an old B-2 super battle droid. The behemoth clanked forward, its arm cannon in the safety position. Tanus waited for it to step over the patch he had just dug... and hit the switch. The hiss of the agent releasing caused the droid to step back. Mist rose from the ground where the device went off, blanketing the ground in a bluish-white cloud of cold. When the mist cleared, the frozen husk of a once functional machine laid cold and dead at Tanus' feet. Doj walked over and examined the droid.

"Yeah, that droid won't be working anytime soon. But, we can always use it for scrap. Moving on, the Thermite detonator can be a great anti-personnel and anti-vehicle improv trap, because of its power. Think of it this way: the Thermite detonator is essentially what goes into a Golan Arms KE-6b mine, except its made with 'civilian' use in mind. But, we know that isn't always the case. I'm going to bring out another battle droid. Basically, do what you did for the CryoBan, but just set the remote to the detonators frequency. I'll bring out the droid once you're about 30 meters away or so."

Tanus went back to another patch of earth, doing what he did for the CryoBan grenade, and tuned the detonator to the frequency of the remote. Tanus stepped back and got behind a large rock and waited for the battle droid to come out. Seconds later, another SBD came out of the shadows and lurched forward, heavy footfalls leaving footprint in the earth. Tanus waited until the SBD was over the detonator, and pressed the button. The droid was swallowed in a massive fireball. When the smoke cleared, parts of the droid lay all over the ground, smoking at the joints. Doj walked forward, nodding.

"Excellent job, soldier. You passed the exam. With this knowledge, you shouldn't have that much trouble in the field now. Good luck and Godspeed."

Tanus saluted the man, and Doj returned it. Tanus then turned on his heel and headed back through the depot, immersing himself in the sites and sounds of war.

Fourth Story: COMPLETE
Tanus Solvona, CPL, CE in training

Definite Pass. This was well done, and actually was creative as opposed to some stories I've read recently. Great job.

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-Paladin-

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May 28, 2007 9:18:17 AM    View the profile of AlanRJ 
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Specialise Training: Heavy Weapon Specialist
Course 2: Indirect Fire Operations

Another day dawned on the training facility and Alan had been ordered to report to the proving ground by Sergeant Bentar.  It was a cold day and the wind was blowing quite strongly as Alan headed to the training area.  Upon arriving, Alan noticed that Bentar had already arrived and was standing beside some sort of missile launcher.

"Reporting as ordered Sir" said Alan as he approached Bentar.

Bentar glanced up at him, "ah, it's about time, do you know what this is?" he asked as he pointed at the weapon.

Alan looked at it thoroughly but was not familiar with the exact weapon.  He shook his head slightly and replied "a rocket launcher Sir"

Bentar sighed, "This is the Merr-Sonn PLX-2M Portable Missile System and today you will be learning how to wield such a powerful weapon".

Alan looked at the weapon, taking in its detail and thinking to himself this is going to be fun.

"First, let me show you the assembly and loading of this weapon" said Bentar as he started disassembling the weapon.

Oh joy thought Alan as he looked on, smiling and nodding to Bentar as he learned the finer points of the weapon.  First comes the boring stuff and then comes the shooting.

Bentar proceeded to show Alan how the weapon was assembled and how the weapon itself was loaded and then how it was disassembled.  Bentar then handed the weapon over to Alan and watched as Alan proceeded to assemble it himself.  Bentar then showed Alan the various different firing options.  The first which causes the missile to home in on the magnetic emissions from the repulsorlifts of speeders and tanks, the second causing the torpedo to home in on infrared heat sources, allowing the user to attack landspeeders, airspeeders, and even low-flying spacecraft.  Lastly, Bentar showed that the launcher also has an unguided 'dumb' firing mode for manual aim.

Bentar led Alan into a training simulator and immediately nodded at the technician upon entering.  The technician moved over to a nearby console and started pressing several buttons.  The room shimmered and Alan found himself standing on grass and looking around at nothing, for miles around he saw nothing but grass.  Several seconds later, four human male soldiers materialised in front of him and each of them saluting and saying "Sir".  Alan felt slightly weird by having fake soldiers salute him but he saluted them back.

Bentar looked at Alan and started to explain what the simulation was about, "alright, listen up soldier.  Your troops have just carried out a very high risk operation and have blown up a nearby rebel installation."

"Way to go troops" said Alan before Bentar could finish.

"Yes, quite" replied Bentar, "however"

Why is there always an 'however' why can there never be 'the end' to these tales thought Alan as he listened on.

"However, the rebels are none too pleased and have sent a full contingent of personnel to apprehend or annihilate your squad.  This contingent of rebels will be full of tanks and troops, you will be vastly outnumbered and your troops will not assist you"

"Not assist" blurted out Alan as soon as he heard this "and why the hell not, they are soldiers after all".  Alan could hear the soldiers snickering slightly "button it you" he said to them.

Bentar smiled and continued "these soldiers have been specially trained and are not expendable, you are.  Your task is to ensure that you provide cover for them and ensure that they get to their rendezvous point intact.  It will of course be a benefit if you yourself survive.  One thing to understand is that sometimes direct fire is not always the best solution".

Alan did not like this mission at all, completely outnumbered and only himself to fight the oncoming horde of rebels and what kind of a sentence was that to say thought Alan as he went over in his head the seemingly meaningless information about direct fire.  Alan listened on as Bentar continued talking, he had been in simulators all too well to know that if he got shot then he would receive similar pain but not be injured and that if he died then the simulation would terminate.  I just hope this simulator doesn't malfunction like the last one thought Alan as he remembered back to the time when a simulator malfunctioned nearly costing the lives of him and several of his squad mates.

Bentar handed Alan a datapad and told him that it contained a map of the planet and highlighted where the rendezvous point was.  With that, Bentar left the simulator room uttering a single word, 'begin'.

The troops looked at Alan, waiting for his orders.  Yes, orders thought Alan as he started to look at the datapad to find out where they where and where their destination should be.  Whilst looking, he suddenly felt the ground beneath him start to shudder, looking around.  He suddenly noticed six tanks emerging from a slope.

"Ok guys, you start running that way" he said, pointing in the direction of the rendezvous point, "I'll take care of this"

Alan watched the troops double time it, looking back to the tanks he muttered to himself "I'll take care of this, oh boy, only six tanks Bentar, you could've done better than that"

As soon as he muttered those words, a seventh tank emerged.  Must stop talking thought Alan as he kneeled and loaded up his missile launcher.  Setting the firing mechanism to home in on magnetic emissions, he let fire a rocket.  A trail of smoke followed the rocket and it homed in to the nearest tank.  The rocket detonated directly on target totally destroying one of the tanks.  The remaining tanks, upon seeing the trail of smoke, knew exactly the location to target and immediately opened fire.  Oh hell thought Alan as he stood up and started running after the troops.  The ground exploded around him and he was flung high in the air and came crashing down hard.  This is impossible thought Alan as he got up and started running.  His mind raced there must be a solution to this, what did Bentar say again, something about direct fire is not always the best solution.  Making sure he was out of range of the tanks for the moment, he scanned the map again.  Just south of his location he noticed an abandoned city.  Could come in handy thought Alan.  Alan got on his comlink and told his squad to go to the city and stay there.

Running at full pace, Alan knew that the tanks were hot on his heels and that soldiers would not be far behind them.  Arriving at the city he soon found the squad.  Accessing the datapad, Alan quickly drew up a more detailed layout of the city and picked a narrow winding street and ordered the squad to the far end of the street.

"Now to get someone's attention" he muttered as he moved to the start of the street to see the tanks advancing slowly, searching for their target.  "Over here you son of a" muttered Alan as he fired.  The rest of his muttering was muted over the noise of a rocket firing straight at a tank, exploding it.  The remaining tanks soon acquired their target and started advancing down the street.  Now I got you thought Alan as he smiled and ran further down the street.  The remaining five tanks moved further down the street, advancing on Alan, blasters shot tearing up the ground around Alan as he ran.  He knew that he was far enough down the street, he turned round and quickly reset the firing mechanism of his rocket launcher to its 'dumb' firing mode for manual aim.  Alan crouched down and let loose two rockets.  They spun towards the nearest tank but missed and slammed into a building.

The squad looked on from their location and muttered in disbelief at the miss.  "Damn guy can't even shoot straight" said one of the soldiers, the rest of the squad nodded in agreement..

Alan looked on and fired another missile.  This also missed the target and slammed into another building.

"Oh god" said another of the troops "we've been sent a moron who can't shoot straight to protect us".

Alan looked on as the explosions from his rockets destabilised the buildings and they came crashing down at the front of the tank.  The tanks moved forward but it was soon evident that the rubble in front of it was too steep to traverse.  The tank started to reverse, the tanks behind it seen what was going on and started reversing also.

"No you don't" said Alan as he rushed down an adjoining side street.  He saw the tank that had been at the rear and which was now the lead tank due to the convoy reversing.  He quickly let loose another round of rockets and brought the buildings crashing around the tank.

"That should hold them" said Alan to himself.  He smiled at his handiwork thinking this is actually quite easy.  His smile soon faded as blaster bolts sped past him narrowly missing him.  He looked around and saw hundreds of rebel soldiers advancing on him fast, thankfully they were still too far away to get a proper lock on him but that would not last long.  Really must stop talking he thought as he sped towards his squad.

He reached the squad who now looked at him with an appreciation of his clever thinking concerning the tanks.  Alan soon told them of the advancing rebel army and directed the squad to a large bridge, the rendezvous point being not too far away from it.  The squad moved hastily onward.  Alan looked back at the advancing troops and let fly a couple of rockets which exploded some more buildings, causing them to fall on and around the army killing many and slowing down others.

He ran until he came to the bridge.  It crossed a very deep and very violent section of water and he soon spied his squad on the other side of it.  Blaster bolts bounced around him as he raced over the bridge, knowing that the oncoming army was not far behind.  He arrived at the other side and told the squad to find cover.  Finding cover himself he waited and watched as the army slowly advanced onto the bridge.  Wait for it thought Alan as he raised his weapon, his finger twitching slightly over the firing mechanism.  "Now" he said as he let loose a rocket, then another and another.  The rockets sped forward but instead of exploding around the army, they destroyed the beams supporting the bridge.  The bridge buckled and the army realised too late what was happening.  Buckling some more, the bridge finally gave in and collapsed into the water.  What few soldiers survived the fall into the water where quickly killed by the raging water itself.  Several soldiers that had not made it onto the bridge fired several blaster bolts over at Alan but they were too far out of range and came nowhere near.

Alan soon escorted the squad to their rendezvous point with no further incident.

"Thank you Sir" said one of the troops when they arrived "how did you think of that?" he enquired.
Alan looked at the soldier and simply replied "just something someone said to me".  He smiled as he noticed Bentar arrive.

The simulation came to an end and soon the surrounding area was replaced with just the bare simulator room".

"I see you survived then" commented Bentar as he scribbled on his pad.
"You seem surprised" replied Alan as he smiled.
Bentar merely made some noise and said "well done, you have passed this course but I promise you that I will not make the next one so easy" and with that he walked away.

Alan watched him leave and thought to himself oh goody!

Very well done Alan. I just have one complaint. That was a lot of missiles you shot during the simulation. I believe the magazine only holds two at a time, so you were carrying a lot of extra missiles there on the run. It isn't impossible what you did, but you would be really exerting yourself. This is just something to remember if you do stories with the tool. As far as everything else goes, I loved the creativity. Someone finally got what I believe Indirect Fire means. Good job.

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-Paladin-
Army of the Vast Empire

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June 19, 2007 1:18:26 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
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Story 1

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Squad Specialty Story: Combat Engineer
Story: Field Fortification


Luckystar was lying in bed, staring at the ceiling, wondering what kind of lesson the Field Fortification course would be. She had spoken to her mother Elena a few hours earlier. Her father was on a business trip somewhere on Onderon. She had been surprised by the quality of the TeleComm channel connection. She had expected it to be low-quality given the distance between Onderon and Tadath.

They had talked for what seemed like hours, having not seen or heard from each other in many years because of the bad times on Onderon. Luckystar mentioned her Field Fortification course, which made her mother ask a bunch of questions, most of which she could not answer. She didn't really know what it would be about. All she knew was that she had to build a temporary shelter, from materials she would find on the field. The goal was to make a sort of temporary shield . A few minutes later they said their good byes and good nights before Lucky cut the connection.

Luckystar was wondering what her mother was doing at the moment when her computer emitted a loud beeping sound. She took it off standby mode and pressed the screen's power button. In front of her was a message that had to do with the next day's course. It read :

To: Corporal Luckystar
From: Captain Melnick, CE Trainer
Object: Field Fortification Course

You are to report to the shipyards at 1100 hours tomorrow morning.  Failure to show up at the specified time will result in a failing mark.
Hope to see you shortly
Captain Melnick, CE Trainer

When Lucky finished reading this, she felt a knot form in her throat. What kind of work would he make her do? I will not screw up. I will not screw up she kept repeating to herself.

She quietly climbed back into bed, but only managed to doze as her stress level climbed a little higher. She woke up at 300 hours , wide awake and did not feel like she needed coffee . She slowly got out of bed, greeted R7 and started doing a quick military-style workout.  She knew it was early to begin the day, but she wanted to be ready

After downing a cup of coffee which she had decided to drink for the hell of it, she went down to the gym and did some weight training. Two hours later she headed back to her quarters , opened the door and opened a locker, which served as a temporary armoury. . She took out her armor and undersuit, and  laid them on a work table in the centre of her workroom. She headed towards the livingroom, took her datapad off its stand and looked at the clock. It read 094500 hours. She decided to head out to the shipyards (she did not like to be late), even though she knew she would be a little early.

She exited her quarters , entered the lock code on the door keypad and walked down the hall towards the bank of turbo lifts.  She entered the command to go to the main floor , and,two minutes later ,was heading out to the shipyards.

She walked across the compound to the area where the shipyards were located.  It was a vast area , but she found the spot where she was supposed to be in a very short amount of time. The area had been cleared of ship parts except for a few medium-sized mounds at the centre of the space. They were part of what was once a starship.  The instructor was standing in the middle of the piles of materials , waiting patiently for her .

She approached him slowly and wearily . Looking around her she was glad she had her armour on. The place looked like a real danger zone, but this she assumed was part of training. He saluted her and spoke up after what seemed to Lucky like an eternity.

"You are twenty minutes early, soldier." His face was blank, very much like all the instructors she had  in the past.

" I like that in a soldier. Well then let's get started." He clapped his hands together as he said these words and stood a few feet away from the nearest pile of shipwreck.  "The objective is to build a barricade strong enough to give you and your squad at least a few minutes of cover. You will have thirty minutes to build the barricade. You can start...Now!"

He started his chron., and stepped back off the site. She looked around her at what she had to work with. There were some fibreglass pieces, large slabs of armour plating and other components of a ship that could be very useful to her. She noticed a hole which looked like a crater . I can use that at my advantage  

She took a few large pieces of metal and laid them around the large uneven hole. Next, she cut them into smaller pieces with her vibroblade and jabbed them into the sides of the crater. She let a small gap at the back of her barricade, large enough to let a few soldiers in, yet small enough so that no vehicle could go through.

Next, she made the wall a little higher by attaching long slabs of metal on top of the ones already in place. She attached them with long, slim pieces of a tubular scrap of metal which she twisted quite easily for a perfect fit. She made sure the attachments were strong and that they wouldn't fall off if ever there was an attack on the makeshift shelter.

Aware that the minutes were ticking by , she went to the front of the barricade and started reenforcing it by first , putting a layer of fibreglass and a layer of metal afterwards.

"Fifteen minutes left!" shouted the instructor from one side of the debris field. Lucky quickly but efficiently finished putting the four layers of metal and fibreglass carefully and strategically placing a thick layer of Titanium -A armour plating over the front of the barricade.  She stepped back looked over her handiwork.

"Time's up!" shouted the instructor before walking over and looking at her work.

"Well" he said after a close and critical inspection. "It looks good , now let's see what it can stand up to."

With that he left her standing there while he went to get a Blaster Cannon which he set up and brought halfway across the field.

Lucky jogged towards hm and looked at the barricade again. From this distance it loooked all right to her.

"I'll launch a slug and we'll see if your barricade will crumple to the ground or if it will remain standing."

Lucky gulped as he loaded the Blaster, she stood back to leave him some firing room and looked  straight ahead. A few seconds later a Blaster Bolt was fired directly at the barricade's centre. Lucky watched with uneasiness as it hit the barricade dead centre.

When the smoke had dissipated they walked to the barricade and Captain Melnick carefully inspected the damage the bolt had caused. To her astonishment , there was only a long, shallow dent in the metal.

"I'm impressed" said the Captain. "I haven't seen a job so well done in quite awhile. , you're definitely ready ro move on into your training."

"Thank you, Sir" responded Lucky. She was surprised that she had done so well.

"You are dismissed" She nodded to the captain , then left the shipyards to go to her apartment.  Before heading to her apartment though, she went to the mess hall for a late lunch., before heading up and working on her armoury.

She undid her armour and undersuit, put them back in the locker, then studied up  on her next course which she learned would be Explosives Deployment.     

Yellow by request. You passed. Good job Lucky.



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-Paladin-
To Embrace the Darkness is to bring about the Light

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
June 30, 2007 3:35:06 PM    View the profile of AlanRJ 
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Paladin
Specialise Training: Heavy Weapon Specialist
Course 2: Precision Range Shooting

Alan had gotten up early that day and had made his way down to the firing range as ordered.  His smile was clearly evident on his journey.  Since signing onto the Heavy Weapon Specialist course, the one thing he had been looking forward to the most was the precision range shooting.  Alan was expecting to do well as he had served with the Nightstalkers squad and now the Paladin squad and his shooting had always been exemplary.

He arrived at the firing range to find Bentar pacing back and forth.  Alan checked his watch, noticing that he had arrived slightly early but still did not like the look of the pacing officer.

"Ah, so nice of you to join me today" said Bentar as Alan arrived.

Oh great thought Alan he's already in a wonderful mood

"Today you will be learning how to fire a variety of weapons with precision accuracy" said Bentar.

Like I don't know how to do that already thought Alan as he listened to Bentar let's get this show on the road

"First up is the BlasTech LJ-90 Sniper Blaster rifle"

Excellent thought Alan.  Alan had purchased one of those weapons a long time ago but had never actually used it on any of his missions.

Bentar then handed Alan the rifle and told him to look through the viewfinder to locate the targets in the distance.  Picking up the rifle, Alan adjusted the viewfinder and acquired a target.  With a steady hand, Alan zeroed in on the target and fired.  Through the viewfinder, Alan watched as the blaster bolt singed the edge of the target only. 

What the hell? thought Alan, he knew he had the target in his sights.

"The sight must be off" said Alan as he looked closely at the weapon.

Before Alan could investigate further, Bentar took the weapon, looking it over before replying "looks fine to me, let me try".  Handing Alan a viewfinder, Bentar took aim and fired.  Alan's gaze focused on the target and he was very surprised when Bentar hit the target dead centre.

Alan couldn't understand why he had failed to hit the target and that Bentar had hit it dead centre.  Bentar then started to explain how the wind affected the shooting and that you had to compensate for such matters.  Alan then spent a good portion of the day shooting target after target.  He soon figured out how to adjust his firing according to how windy it was.  Soon he was an experienced marksman, able to shoot targets far off into the distance no matter what the weather was like.

Next, Bentar took Alan to a new firing range and told him he could use whatever blaster he was the most comfortable with.  Alan picked his trustworthy DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol.  Bentar then told Alan to walk through the course and shoot the appropriate targets.

Blaster in hand, Alan started to walk slowly through the course.  Targets popped up frequently, some with little children in it, some with unarmed women and some with people with weapons drawn on you.  Alan was very selective and made sure that only the targets with the weapons raised were shot.

Alan made it to the end of the course with no errors made.  A last target appeared and Alan recognised it immediately as Bentar holding a clipboard.  Knowing he couldn't resist, Alan fired several shots into the target before holstering his weapon.

Bentar rushed over to him "well, nearly a perfect score, shame about the last target, what happened?"

"What do you mean by nearly" replied Alan.

"You shot me" said Bentar "an unarmed Imperial officer and you shot me".

"But you were looking at me in a threatening manner.  I figured I had no choice" replied Alan, smiling slightly as he said it.

Bentar was not impressed and made Alan run the course a second time.  Alan had to use a lot of self control when the Bentar target appeared by not shooting it even though every fibre of his being wanted to.

The rest of the day was spent with shooting various targets with various weapons.  Alan loved every second of it and shot his targets perfectly.  Bentar stood to the side with his clipboard always taking notes.

The day drew to a close and Bentar strode over to Alan to inform him of his results.

"Well, it seems you are quite a marksman" said Bentar

"Why thank you" replied Alan.

"I hope you had fun out their soldier, you're next mission I assure will be no fun, no fun at all".

With that Bentar strode quickly from the firing range.

Oh joy thought Alan as he returned back to his quarters I can hardly wait.

I'll pass it. I realize target practice isn't the best thing to write about. Only thing I can say is the wind thing. Make sure the weapon isn't a blaster type. I mean, a bolt will go straight really no matter what. Now if it is a weapon with a solid shell, then it's fine. Anyways, Pass.


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-Paladin-
Army of the Vast Empire

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
August 2, 2007 8:23:17 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
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Story 2

SGT, Luckystar
Squad Specllaty Story: Combat Engineer
Story: Explosives Deployment


Luckystar was studying on the general things to know if you’re gonna be using explosives. She had also studied volumes on how to make explosives (both solid and liquid) , what types of explosives there were and their uses. She heard a knock at her door. She went to answer it, saw it was only Alan. She invited him inside , they chatted a little and Alan helped her study for her next exam.

He left about an hour later. Lucky kept studying until her computer beeped , indicating a new message . The message was from her next trainer. He congratulated her for how great she had done on her last exam. And he gave her the details for this exam.

It was going to be in a rocky region a little ways away from the complex. She was to meet him there the next day at 900 hours. Wow, that’s early. Oh well.

That night she went to bed early, to get an early start on the trek to the spot where she would have her exam. She went to bed at 800 hours , and woke up at 400 hours in the morning.

She did a few exercises before filling a bottle full of ice-cold water and heading out. She knew it was very early, but she would stay in the complex until the time was 600 hours, then leave for her exam.

At about 5400 , she decided to leave and walked out of the cool lobby. The air was warm, and there was a light breeze. It was silent , you could easily hear a pin drop. She walked swiftly outside of the compound and headed to a shuttle that was waiting for her. She was to go to one of Tadath’s rocky regions.

On the short flight there, she quickly reviewed her notes , and talked a bit with the pilot. There wasn’t much else to do, given that the flight was short. An hour after lifting off from the Stormtrooper Corps complex, they saw where Lucky would have her exam.

It was a large, flat piece of land with a few small mountains, but many deep caves. The ship slowly descended, and as the ramp lowered itself, a man stepped out of one of the caves and waved to her. He looked very cheerful, too cheerful to be an instructor in her opinion.

After the pilot told her that he would be waiting on the other side of the valley, as to sustain no damage to his ship while she was passing her exam, she walked over to the smiling , middle-aged man, and firmly shook his hand.

They walked back to where he had come from. It was a small shallow cave-like hole. In it was a comfortable chair and a large screen holodisplay.

"I will be watching your progress from here. The place where you will do your exam is in a small , empty city a little ways away from here. There will be a few men watching your progress on site. Any questions?"

Lucky shook her head , speechless. She thought she would be doing it here. and her instructors had always been close to where she did her exams. Oh well .

She walked out of the instructor's makeshift viewing center and started walking towards the coordinates she had been given. She was in full armor , so it was very hot.

As she walked , she made sure she had all she needed. Mainly an array of Thermal Detonators.  She could hear creatures of the dry lands buzzing around her.

A half hour later she arrived to a small, deserted city. She knew what she had to do, so she set to work. She took out 2
Merr-Sonn Munitions Class-A thermal Detonators and 6 Merr-Sonn Munitions V-1 Thermal Detonators. She also grabs two Class-C Thermal Detonators.

The city was five miles wide and 10 miles long. Which was relatively small compared to some cities she had visited. Lucky walked toward the biggest building in the city and placed a
Merr-Sonn Munitions Class-A thermal Detonator at the east corner of the building. It would take put the three buildings nearest to it in addition to the building it was placed beside.

She ran as quickly as she could away from the designated buildings. according to the set time on the detonator she still had a minute left before it detonated.


When it fnally did, there was a small sonic wave which depleted her shields to 90 %. Next on her list was a few smaller buildings for which she used up all of her Merr-Sonn Munitions V-1 Thermal
Detonators.

There was only the seond largest building left to destroy. She jogged to it, avoiding the ruins that were left by the blasts. This one was four stories high. Which was half the size of the first building.

She went inside and planted her detonator on the second floor , in the middle of the hallway nearest the two most important stairwells. this last detonator was set to detonate in four minutes.

She ran out of the building and stopped when she was on its outskirts. She turned around just in time to see a plume of smoke , but mostly dust float up into the sunny sky.

She walked back to look at the damage she had caused , the building was no more. Its foundations were non-existent. Proud of her work, she walked back to the viewing center where her instrucor was waiting.

When she enetered, she noticed taht he wasn't sitting in his chair, but that he was in front of the screen with his back turned to it. on it, she could still see dust floating lazily away from the destruction.

He was smiling. She knew he was a smily person, but she wasn't sure why he was smiling this time.

"Well, you did exactly as you were instructed. That gives you a few more points than if you hadn't."

Not sure what that meant, she started to ak when he stopped her with his hand.

"You passed this exam."


Her face lit up with joy, and she permitted herself a small smile. “Good work, soldier.” he went over to her, and gave her a pat on the shoulder. "I’ll alert the pilot who brought you here to come and get you.”

She stood there, unable to move or say anything. A few minutes passed, and she heard the sound of the small ship approaching. She turned around, just in time to see it land, and lower its access ramp.

She quickly jogged aboard, and sat in the co-pilot’s seat. “Congrats” said the pilot. She just nodded, still unable to believe that she had passed, exhausted she fell asleep, and only woke when she felt the engines rumble , and the ship descend. She opened her eyes to see the Stormtrooper Complex coming closer and closer.

Finally, the engines died, the pilot lowered the ramp , waved while saying “See you nest time.” She did not have the energy to reply, so she just walked out of the ship , and to her barracks. There, she went to her apartment and plopped on her bed, instantly falling asleep.

You passed. Much better use of explosives. Not quite detailed, but you at least know which explosives there are and what they can do. The beginning still felt a little blocky and stiff, so try to work on it sounding smoother next time.
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To Embrace the Darkness is to bring about the Light


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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
August 9, 2007 10:05:14 PM    View the profile of Durandal 
Level 2: Precision Marksmanship
Precision Range Shooting


Durandal had learned the basics in heavy weapons, and was proud to hear that he would be taught how to control the specialized weapons and make them deadly utensils, where he would be able to literally touch someone, from miles away. The idea of learning how to bring such powerful weapons to such a useful purpose.

He had come a long way, and his heart was still heavy from the secrets of his past, and as he sat in his dorm alone, he couldn’t help but remember the pain of the past and how it ate at his heart. The ones he loved were lost and he felt as though the world was crashing down on him. But as soon as the feeling came, he summoned the strength to banish it, and he placed on his armor. It was his shield, and as he flexed his arm and fist he crushed the emptiness away, leaving only the power of the soldier in him.

He made his way through the twist of hallways in the Chawla Training base, toward the rear entrance. As he walked out into the heat the suit started to kick in, keeping the temperature at a comfortable 85 degrees.

He made his way to one of the few imperial shuttles out on the air field and as he strapped himself in he heard the pilots murmur and the engines start to whine as they came to life.

After a few moments the shuttle lifted off the pad and sped off in a northern direction. For a good fifteen minutes Durandal did nothing more than stare into empty space as the shuttle made its way to the ranging field.

The shuttle finally landed, and after a moment Durandal stepped out and the shuttle took off again, hinting that he would be here for quite a while. He moved up to where he saw a Gunnery Sergeant, standing at a small table, no one else was there but himself. And as Durandal walked up he saluted and stood at attention.

“At ease son, it’s just you and me here, and we’ve got a lot of work to do.” said the Gunnery Sergeant.

Durandal relaxed and looked upon the table to see only two weapons, an E11/R Sniper rifle, and an E-Web. “Your exercise today will include improving your accuracy with these weapons, and making you a deadly man from a mile away.” Said the Sergeant, smiling, “and you won’t leave here, till you pass my standards.”

Durandal frowned behind his helmet, a slight amount of worry coming to him. How high were these man’s standards? He asked himself.

“So son, lets set up that E-Web over there,” he pointed to a small clearing that opened to an open field of dirt, and on the other end were small pillars of rocks, with enough space for a couple men to fit in.” and we’ll get you working with that, after which you will move on to the sniper rifle.”

Durandal nodded and began the set-up of the E-Web, he set the battery down and laid out the tripod, hooking the battery to the gun. And he fired the test shot out into the rocks, to make sure it worked. After that he stood up and turned to the Sergeant, who nodded and smiled grimly. Out in the rocks are droids, old war droids from the clone wars. Your job is to get a hundred points, the Droidekas are worth two points, and the battle droids are worth five.

Durandal nodded to himself, thinking this was too easy, and just as he thought that the sergeant chose to make his insecurity a reality, “and every miss is minus ten points, so aim carefully son, or you’ll be here forever.” He said, turning back to the table.

Durandal sighed and eased his way in the gunner’s spot and made himself comfortable, feeling the gun as if it were molding with him, becoming a part of him. He looked down the barrel and aligned the gun to his H.U.D. a small number appeared at the top right of his H.U.D. and it read -10. He turned in confusion and looked at the sergeant.

“The -10 is because you shot once at the rocks.” He said, and Durandal fumed for only a slight moment, before looking back down the gun, and he saw the first of his targets, a lithe battle droid, the paint chipped and rotted, wires sticking out of the back and a small stun gun in his hands.

Durandal gently pulled the trigger and watched with pleasure as the droid exploded, and the counter started to go up. It was a rough time, watching the counter go up and down and finally after what seemed like hours he reached the goal of a hundred points. His arms were shaky and he couldn’t control his muscles as they would slightly spasm. He stood up and patted his hands against his legs and recovered for a moment.

The sergeant looked up from his datapad and pointed to the sniper rifle, “Carry that, we’re moving” he said, and got up and started to walk east, up a trail that led up a mountainside.

After another twenty minutes of walking, after which Durandal felt exhausted, the first firing range had taken a lot more out of him than he had thought. He stopped behind the Sergeant and watched him turn around.

“This one is simple, there are 25 targets, 25, most are in plain sight, others are slightly hidden; you must get a bulls-eye on ALL of them to pass this one, so again… take your time.”

Durandal nodded and breathed deeply. And he kneeled down, bringing the sniper rifle up to his shoulder, and he tightly packed it. He searched the grounds below him and he saw the first targets come to view. He quickly dispatched them, perfectly hitting the bulls-eye.

He moved slowly going further and further out, the counter on the top of his H.U.D. As he hit the 24th mark he slowly kept scanning around the area. He looked as far the rifle would allow him to no avail, the last target seemed to be lost, and just as he was about to remove the rifle he looked down, and saw the target, a mere 30 feet away and to the right. He moved the rifle and shot it.

A low trick to have the target so close, but he found it, and had gotten all 25 of the targets.

He nodded to himself, pleased with his work, he would pass, and that’s all that mattered.
Without our rifles and our brothers, we are nothing.

All right, they're on our left, they're on our right, they're in front of us, they're behind us... they can't get away this time. -Lieutenant General Lewis B."Chesty" Puller (when surrounded by 8 enemy divisions)
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August 14, 2007 12:59:59 AM    View the profile of Luckystar 
Level 3
Story 1

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Squad Specialty Story: Combat Engineer
Story: Bridging and Rigging


Lucky knew this one was going to be complicated. She knew exactly what she had to do, but she was afraid of what the results would be. Today, in four hours to be precise. She would be having her Bridging and Rigging exam. She couldn’t wait, she loved challenges.

For this specific one though, if possible, she planned to do her bridge over a ravine. She put a few things she would possibly need in a pack, which she slung over one shoulder before heading out of her apartment.

She stood outside the Stormtrooper complex , and while she waited for the shuttle, she opened her pack and made sure she had everything. The items it contained included : Fusion cutters, a vibroblade , a blowtorch and a portable weldin ggun.. She knew most of these items were considered primitive, but they were very reliable.

There was a whirring sound that could be heard as the shuttle slowed and came to a stop in front of her. The door opened to reveal a Wookie driving the vehicle. She smiled at him and sat in the front seat, at the right side of the vehicle.

As the shuttle sped silently away from the complex, lucky wondered what kind of challenges this exam would pose.  Sure, there’s be the part where you’d have to try and pass over either a precipice or a hole full of matter. But still....she liked to wonder what lies ahead of her.

They turned out onto a rocky road, where it led them, she was going to find out soon enough. They rode on for a few minutes before the shuttle stopped and the driver opened the door. He motioned to her to get out. She assumed her stop was here.

She climbed down from the shuttle and started walking towards the woods, which were right in front of them. A strong, mean- looking man was waiting for her there. He didn’t say anything. Just nodded , turned around and started walking away.  Lucky hastily  followed him into the dense woods.

They soon came to a clearing , and in that clearing was situated a deep ravine and scattered all around them werre bits and pieces of what was once a brdige. Now all that remained were the front and back ends of it. What was missing was the middle parts. "Your job today soldier , is to reconstruct this bridge. Or atleast make it so a squad and an AT-ST can pass over it."

He moved away , and she guessed she could begin. She  started by going under the pieces that remained standing , and looking at the state of the supports. When she saw the level of damage they had, which was quite minimal , she decided that it was a good sign.

Going back up the steep incline to where the bridge pieces were lying , she took a piece that measured a fair size and a metal plate , went back down to where she had been standing a few minutes previously , and welded the two pieces of support together before putting the plate in place and using the fusion cutters to make it stay in place.

Once she was satisfied with the results, she set her mind on putting the metal supports back together with the welding gun.  as she worked wit hthe gun , strengthening the pieces with the welding torch as she assembled the supports piece by piece , she started to look at the spots where the few concrete pieces went.

Once she located the metal sections for the plating  on the still-hot supports, she grabbed a concrete block and aligned the pieces of metal from the block to the correct side of the supports and fused them together.

When all of the bridge's concrete parts were well in place and the supports had cooled, she got the thick pieces of wood taht would complete the bridge.  using some old technology she had brought with her, she took a portable drill and a box of screws , clipped them to her belt and went down under the bridge one more to locate the holes where the screw would be put in.

After about five minutes of doing this , she was satisfied with her search and went back up. she grabbed a long , thick piece of wood and stepped on the recently-fitted concrete slabs.

She aligned the slab of wood, and omce it was positioned correctly atop the supports, she drilled the screws in wit hthe drill.  A few minutes later, the baord was securely in place and she tested its strength by putting her full weight on it.

She did the same thing with all the other wooden pieces, and was finished an hour later. Her bridge looked allright. It was quite strong , and no pieces of metal were sticking out or getting in their way. She looked toward where the instructor was standing and signaled to him that she was done.

He nodded, but didn't aproach her. Instead  he spoke into a handheld radio , and a few minutes later , the ground shook as an AT-ST approached. It stepped onto the bridge and walked across without any problems. The wood had softened a bit after it had passed over it, but nothing else seemed wrong with it.

The instructor finally approached, looked at what she had managed to do , and simply nodded his approval. he made a hand gesture which signaled taht she was dismissed.  with growing frustration , she walked back to where the shuttle had dropped her off and waited a few minutes before it reappeared.

On the ride back to base ,  it was a different Officer who was driving, but they didn't speak to each other. Once back at the complex, she went to the squad barracks , enetred her small apartment and switched on her computer. A message popped-up as the modem started up. It was about her lesson , she had passed. With a sigh of relief, she checked for any new messages , shut down the computer, and went straight to bed without bothering about a meal.

Much better. You pass. There were some errors in grammar and things here and there, but the info you needed to show was all there. Plus, it seemed feasible.
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-Paladin-

To Embrace the Darkness is to bring About the Light...

Clearly Canadian!
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 4, 2007 4:27:45 AM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
Baretz Sonok, PFC
Squad Specialty Story: Heavy Weapons Specialist
Course: Precision Marksmanship
Story: Precision Range Shooting

Weapons List:
BlasTech E-11/M Sharpshooter Blaster Rifle
BlasTech E-11/H Selective Fire Blaster Rifle

I woke up at O-Five Hundred, like most days.  I had time for my morning workout routine, which was basically just running to keep my endurance up to counter act the Lung Busters, but a man has to have something to do with perpetual boredom.  That’s another story, entirely, so I’ll get back on track.
I showed up to the range at 0945, and just waited while the current occupants were finishing up.  My instructor approached me, in time, and nodded his head to me.

“You ready?”

“Yes, sir.”

          I’m a cocky bastard, by nature, and well I nothing ever seemed like a big deal, in the moment.  Worst I can do is fail, right?  So, I walked to position, and stood my eyes quickly running over the range, and picking out the targets that were placed.  I also noted the hologram emitter circles, and fields.  The three weapons that were to test my proficiency lied on the ground along with a four by scope.

“Start with the Eleven-M, Private.”

So, I picked up the E-11/M, and the scope, and with a quick application putting the scope atop the blaster’s frame, it was fixed into place.  I then looked at him, as he sat down at the nearby controls of the training equipment.  He pressed some buttons and a range marker at four hundred meters lit up, and I nodded my head.

“Standing position?”

“Yes.”

Shooting straight while standing was iffy, you had to time the shot with all the uncontrollable processes of your body: breathing, heart beat, muscle tensing, just to name a few.  So, yeah, I placed to stock against my right peck, and leaned my eye to the scope, this would have been much easier if I didn’t have to wear the helmet, but alas, at least today, I do.

    The cobanna gas shot differently than projectile bullets, it didn’t drop as much, due to it was just a tad heavier than oxygen, and it was a molten gas, so it pretty much went straight, until the limit on the particular model gun just dissipated or hit something more resilient than itself.  So, ranging for drop wasn’t nearly as hard as it would have been, but let’s cut to the chase.

     I let my right eye seek out the target, and it readied, held my breath, counted heart beats, and squeezed the trigger.  The red bolt seared through the air, and landed in the bulls eye.  Without missing a beat the next target popped up, and my sights moved over it, repeating the same process.  In my days as a criminal I had gotten this down to a science, so shooting targets was never hard. 

    After hitting five stationary targets at the varying ranges of 400 meters to 800 meters then he started the moving targets all in a line.  Some of them had green lights in the center, and that meant friendly, the one at the six hundred yard mark had a crimson glow around it, meaning hostile.  So, I fixed my sights on it, and got used to the moving pattern that was in it, the only problem is when it was directly in my line of fire, at least, one green marker was in front of it, which means I had to move with it, and follow it on it’s course, and wait for the clear shot.

    I followed it for half a minute before it was clear, and I led it just enough popping the shot off to watch the red blast sear into the middle, and the instructor spoke his support.  All of them turned red, and kept moving now, I started at the front, and upon shooting the first it turned grey, and my sight worked its way down the range, stopping them in a stair stepped pattern, to keep my view as open as possible, my fingers squeezed off shot after shot.

    Sharp shooting, and long range fire was always my personal favorite type of shooting.  I prefer medium to long range, in combat, but that’s merely a preference.  At that range I have relatively low fear of grenades reaching me, and all I have to worry about is being the better shot, which is something I never worry about, personally, but as I mentioned before, I’m a conceited bastard.

After that the instructor would say.

“Now, swap for the E-11/H.  Don’t use the sights, usually, you won’t use them in combat situations.”


The E-11 /H was made to be able to put down a multitude of enemies, having a one hundred shot ammo cartridge, but bolt cohesion being what it was, the best you could hope for was a good two hundred fifty meters, give or take, for a shot that could actually work against any sort of real armor.  That’s why he told me not to use the scope, it was because none of my targets would be outside the two hundred fifty meter range, and shooting without scope at that range was quite the test of knowledge of the machine.

    So, I hefted the large gun to my shoulder again, using the iron sights this time, as my first target showed up at the one hundred meter mark, and these bolts, designed to fit into this frame, had more drop, because they were created to be heavier, and more energy in a bolt, so the energy broke apart easier.  It usually resulted in a slight drop, but not as bad as projectiles, at one hundred meters aim two feet high, and at two hundred aim four.  Anything in between was a rough calculation of that. 

    My finger squeezed off the first blast, and it seared through the air, it was in the bulls eye, but it was towards the ring, and that didn’t bode well with me.  I aimed to low, and almost missed the point.  So, I had to slow down a little for the disadvantage of not using the scope, but I could still do damage to real units, but these weren’t this was a marker that gaged your skill, and it worked with time, as well. 

    The rifle raised as the next was further back by fifty meters, and that shot ripped through the air to hit dead bulls eye, I wondered for a second, if I really am as talented as I thought, or if it were just some outside thing that guided my actions, quickly I knew that it was me, and confirmed it as I lifted my lights to two hundred meters, and sent the bolt to the middle of the circle once more.

    I couldn’t even make out the ring on the last target, I could only do vague calculations, I aimed as high as I thought it was, and clenched my jaws.  I closed my eyes, and my hand dropped a little, as I pulled the trigger.  My instructor was in as much shock as I was, but I didn’t let it show.

“Very few people have hit that last target dead center.”

    I didn’t reply, nor did I take credit for the fluke, but it was automatically assumed to be my fault, perhaps, I’m lucky after all.  Closer targets would then pop up, almost the identical drill, but I was instructed to shoot all ten targets spacing all the way back to the hundred meter mark within twenty seconds.  Two seconds per target, I didn’t get to line up individual shots, my sights moved to the targets, and I opened fire, then sought out the next one.  With each sweep to the next target, I fired two shots just in case the first one went astray.

        At the end of twenty seconds I had barely made the deadline, but I made it, after all, and really that was all I could hope for.  I had a lot more practice to do, but I didn’t think it was too horrible.

Very well done, you showed a very good concept grasp for the subject and excellent tie in of your character's personality.  Certainly one of the best spec stories I have read.  Normally we don't write in first person, but I think in spec stories, which are personal stories after all, they work excellently, feel free to continue with that.

Passed, and keep it up to progress along your sheet to Indirect Fire Operations then you finish level one.  I look forward to reading it.
-Paladin-
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 4, 2007 3:23:41 PM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
Baretz Sonok PFC
Course: Heavy Weapons Specialist
Story: Indirect Fire Operations

    I arrived at the training facility at the correct designated time of O-Seven Hundred.  I walked inside, and saw that my instructor was already standing, anticipating my arrival.  So, I walked to him, offering a salute, and stood in front of him, at attention.

“Are you ready, Private?”

“Sir, Yes, Sir.”

“Then suit up.”

    I strode forward to the virtual simulator that was placed in a cornor of the room, and I took a seat, strapping myself into the body covering apparati and, lastly, adorning the helmet, and the sensors automatically locking in on my temples and over my eyes. 
   
    Within moments my senses and mental person submerged into the virtual realism that my exam would be conducted in.  I stood on a war tattered planet, most of the forests around me still remained, but on the nearest horizon I could see fallen trees and bodies.  The radioed command from my instructor came to me.

“In two minutes the scouts aiming circle will fall upon the designated moving force, it is up to you to anticipate the strike, and drop artillery in front of them, or the infantry will surely be killed without a chance.”

    I hustled to the  artillery control unit, and it had been preset coordinations, that streamed across the Field Operative’s helmet.  The two minutes passed, and I prepared to alter the azimuth and elevation of the sights.  Right on time.

“Azimuth, Negative Two point three degrees.  Elevation, Positive, One degree. “

“Affirmative.”

    I responded, then punched in the new angles on the control panel.  Each of the five artillery pieces responded by correcting to the left two point five degrees, and raising by one degree.  It seemed like a small misfire, but at the range of several kilometers it made a very large difference.

“Units on the move, abort fire, moving forty three kmph, thirty degrees south of west.”

“Affirmitave.”

    I pulled up the holographic imaging from my helmet, and looked at the terrain.  To hit a spot five kilometers from their current location the elevation would be changed by two degrees, and the azimuth would have to change twenty three point four degrees, almost the edge of the parallel firing sequence capable by the artillery unity.

    I punched in the new sequence, and waited enough time to allow them to be under the fire when it was falling, and then my finger confirmed the firing sequence on the screen, and the noise suppression on my helmet activated, as each of the five artillery pieces rocketed the explosive shells high into the planet’s atmosphere, just to have them crashing down on the earth, and, hopefully, the enemy convoy.

    The FO was provided with a light land speeder to keep up with the designated targets, but he had to maneuver around the forest line to stay out of their direct line of site.  So, once he arrived I would get a confirmation on hit, or a word of my failure.

    I had time to roll all the lessons through my head, thinking to see if I forgot anything.  I hadn’t, to my knowledge; I was one of the top students on all the paper tests that were given.  The artillery that had been provided already corrected for wind resistance and any moisture in the air that could slow down the shells.

    Moments passed, I doubted myself, for a moment, and I hated the doubt, but when the voice wrang through all doubt left my mind.

“All targets disabled, requesting second volley to silence living soldiers, and demolish disabled enemy vehicles.”

    I sighed with relief

“Roger.”

    My hand happily hit the fire command once more, and the sound of the vicious volley was dulled down once more. I dropped my head low with a sigh, and the false world disappeared from existence as I removed the helmet and suit.  I stood up to face my instructor once more.

“Good Work, Private.”

    I have to be one of the luckiest guys in the Stormtrooper Corps.  Something loves me…a lot.  Not to mention the limitless possibility I have, I mean luck and talent, what a combo?

Well done as well, seemed short, but then I know this is one of the limited subject material topics in the Heavy Weapons field.  Not much you can do with it unless you repeat the same stuff over.  Passed, your next one, Precision Range Shooting should give more content possibilites, good luck.
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 5, 2007 11:52:31 AM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Course: Cover Tactics
Story: Fire Support Tactics

Today at O-Eight Hundred was my Support Fire exam.  During my morning jog all I did was think about Suppression Fire patterns, targeting with Mortars, Sweeps with repeaters, and every other tactic I had gone over in the class for the recent class.

I showed up to the class fifteen minutes early, as per my usual routine, and walked inside to the virtual testing center, and leaned on the wall until the instructor came to me.  He would arrive looking as stern and hardened as always, and I could simply nod my head to him, and stand at attention and salute.

“Are you ready, Soldier?”

“Sir, Yes, Sir.”

He then waved me into the virtual testing center, and I nodded my head, and climbed inside.  I strapped the helmet on my head, and put on the body suit, and then he loaded the false scenario.  I was in cover under some foliage with a T-22 Light Repeater lying beside me, the back pack already strapped to my back, all I had to do was reach over and lift that stock right onto my shoulder, supported by my left arm, while my right held the trigger. 

In my helmet I heard the words from what would have been my squad reporting their location to me, all I had to do was look through the forested terrain, and their images would be put in dark blobs on my helmet my helmet able to keep track of their locations.

“We’re moving through the next clearing, Republic Soldiers are heavy in the general area.”

“Roger, I got it covered.”

I could see a slight mark of orange that would have been on a helmet of sorts, but my job wasn’t to kill as much as it was to assure that my Squad reached their target area.  I’d suppress, they’d run, then I’d resume suppression, and make it across myself.  I squinted my eyes then reopened them getting the area laid out in my mind.  Republic Soldiers usually operated in squads much like our own, so there was a potential soldier whom was not in the exact area with his squad.  We didn’t have his location, so I couldn’t even begin to guess.  The forest kept the light relatively low, and it was very cool, my thermal vision might of given me a better read, so I toggled it to thermals, and sure enough I could see a few units where I had initially saw the orange mark. 

“Opening Fire.”

My right finger squeezed down on the trigger unleashing the bright white shots from the end of the Repeater, I moved it over the clearings, in a slow pattern to make sure all the Republics’ heads were down, and then my Squad ran across the clearing at full speed, in that moment I saw the lone unit.  He had moved forward, and was closer to my unit than his.  I swung the repeater wide, and started to shoot around him to lock him down in place.

“Enemy just west of your position, proceed with caution.”

“Roger.”

As they made it into the forest, my repeater swung back to the major group of enemies, and I kept the same sweeping pattern across their location, I didn’t know if I had scored any hits, but I could only hope.  I then kept the trigger held down; confident that the generator on my back would keep them suppressed, and moved across myself, keeping a wary eye open for the rogue unit.

I made it to the rest of my squad, and found a mark before the continued advance, and I spotted the small base that was half a kilometer away from us, it was a subtle sign, just a tower to receive incoming radio frequencies, but we were trained to look for such things.  We then got a word from high command.

“We picked up a Republic Frequency.  The base is alert to our attack, and will be moving into defensive positions. “

My squad captain cursed, but not on comm, it was just an understood thing.  I nodded my head as I ran to the end of this next clearing, and for four hundred meters it was a clear sprint to the base.  Suddenly, I realized I had two mortar shells on both legs, and the canister to launch them as horizontal under the generator pack.  I pulled off the launcher and one of the shells dropping it inside.  I  set it up at my position, and adjusted the azimuth and elevation appropriate to hit the largest opening, that appeared to be a hangar.

Just as I got it readied, I replaced the repeater on my shoulder, and looked to my squad, in the area there were four more squads of ten men, so forty of our soldiers would advance in different directions all together.  I only had to worry about my squad, they were my priority, and I nodded ready to my squad captain.  I waited, he was communicating to each Squad Leader as well, and soon they all had their marks, and priorities.  Each squad would be moving from a different cardinal direction, we had the one facing the hangar, you couldn’t imagine my enthusiasm.

The ‘rebels’ moved into the hangar strong, and one was carrying a deployable E-Web Blaster.  I thanked whatever it was that told me that hangar was a good target, and I launched the first mortar.  It landed on the right side of the hangar, just outside the opening, but it cast a flame that would conceal most of the door, and then I loaded the other, and shot again, concealing the rest at ground level, now I could only see the heads running around inside, and I hoped they could only see that much of us.  My squad headed out, I could see two other squads, as well.  At once, almost in unison, our repeaters all started up, and my sweeping path was through the flames I had created. 

I then picked up my repeater once my squad had made it two hundred meters in, and continued forward, making full unrelenting sweeps over every opening in the middle, my main priority still being the hangar, but I kept an observant eye cast elsewhere.  In a doorway  three republics pop out afew meters from the hangars location, and my fire moved across them, and I swung around releasing the trigger, as the squad behind us emerged to flank, and my blasts continued across them as my finger embraced the trigger it loved so dearly.  My amazing shooting skills had leveled the squad, whom hadn’t expected me to check our back, and then I spun again, continuing the sweeps over the hangar entrance.  The Republic had just extinquished the flame, but my squad was already closer than they had anticipated, and with afew quick shots from the E-11s they were downed, and then I sprinted to catch up.

My eyes open from a blink, and my knee lurches forward, as I hear my foot land on concrete, and I realize the exam ended with the entrance of the base, and I looked around, and released myself from the confines of the helmet and suit.  I stood up, and my instructor nodded his head to me.

“You used the most efficient tactics for the situation; You pass the exam, private.”

“Thank you, Sir.”

Excellent work, one or two spelling errors, but nothing that really jumped out.  Passed.
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 5, 2007 9:44:20 PM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Range & Vector Calculation

Once again I found myself with a projectile sniper rifle on my shoulders, an attachable bipod underneath.  I was just starting my exam for Range and Vector Calculation.  My eyes were fixed on the target, and the scope I had had the reading scale.  I had a laser on it, that would give me the exact range, but I was suppose to calculate the range myself, first.  So, I read the marks on the scope.  The bars on the scope measured the chest width of the target, and for every bar that could cover from shoulder to shoulder it ranged approximately One Hundred Ten Meters.  The current target could be covered almost entirely by the second, so I wrote down my estimate at One Hundred Ninety Meters, and then I calculated the angle from which the shot would be taken.  This shot solid .50 cal projectiles.  So, the angle from which to take the shot would have a lot to do with drop. 

A fifty caliber bullet moves four thousand feet per second, so the drop is relatively small, when compared to shooting smaller powered projectiles, but it is still relevant, but very small relevancy at two hundred meters, if I fired straight from the bipod it would be aimed at the target’s knee, and would probably hit him in the tendon just under it.  So, I tilted the gun upward toward the brim of the target’s helmet, so that the bullet would fall in the middle of the target’s eyes with the yellow protective goggles being useless.

I then punched the angle onto the datapad, and hit enter.  The angle was called 0 degrees when straight, and adjusted up to ninety for shooting straight into the air, but no shot would ever be taken at that angle, lest a ship were flying over head, and if that were the case, well, I don’t think you’d get a good shot off, but who knows.

I called the angle eleven degrees, and then once I had entered the information, and lined the shot up once more, my finger leased the bullet towards the hologram target, and just as I suspected in a mere instant the head was relieved from the body, and the body was sent flying backwards before it dissipated from existence.  I then hit the laser, as the target appeared back, and the digital reading came across my vision at 

“…196m….13°.....”

I was within allowed error, so, the shot counted, and the vector and range calculation counted.  Each target appeared further back, and eventually I had found myself facing a target that was at the peak of the scopes limits, and I could barely see his head, hidden by a steel wall, I figured, if I missed this shot, I’d still pass, but I wanted the extra say so of being able to say that I hit the impossible shot in the testing center.  It wasn’t a fair range, we had knowledge that the end of the range was located one hundred seventy meters away.  Fifty caliber rounds could go just about that far before losing effectiveness and velocity quickly, but the shot was within the one second limit, the conversion left a bullet traveling approximately 1219 meters per second, so, I could shoot the bullet on a flat plain at head level to me, and it would land that far away, with no wind resistance.  This shot was going to be taken to the north, and synthetic wind was traveling thirty four miles per hour north west, so I was going to have to turn the shot to the right some, and if you were looking through my scope, you’d ask me, what the hell am I shooting at nothing for.

I aimed the shot an entire two meters high of the head that stuck out over the synthetic wall, and just a hair to the right, the head rested near the bottom left of my scope, and I punched the angle in at twenty one degrees, having gotten better at the angles each time I typed one in, and typed in the range at 1.64km.  I realigned the shot to spec, and closed my eyes one last time, as I held my breath.  My finger squeezed, and the head disappeared, and a voice echoed through my helmet

“Excellent Shot, Soldier.  Uploading Phase two.”

The world around me morphed, I was still lying prone, but I was on top of a mountain, the projectile rifle had been replaced with a mortar cannon, folded up, and three mortar shells lined my belt.  Mortars were a lot harder to learn to place in the correct vector, but they all had the guide markers at the base, and the swivel for angels on the frames.  He had three chances to hit whatever target it maybe.  The maximum range on a mortar is reached at a forty five degree angle, enough arch, highest peak, and more room to fall.  The maximum range on the given mortar was just over six kilometers in no wind environments.

With these facts in mind, I looked for the target and it was three point one kilometers away.  It was placed in a mathematically simple angle, and the wind in the area was nonexistent, this wouldn’t be as hard as I had originally anticipated that it might be, but it was showing knowledge for bombing at that range, even though guided missiles, strafing via ship, or orbital bombardment were usually used first. 

I set the  angle to sixty two point five degrees, and lined up the shot with the target.  I smiled at this, and bit my lip.  In every situations that weren’t at max range there were two correct shots, each being the same number plus or minus forty five lest obstructions be in the way, which is why adding the number was used more often than not. 

I thumbed the button, making sure one last time everything was okay, and then my thumb pushed the plunger to the igniter, and the mortar rocketed high into the air, and reigned fire down on the target, and I was happy with my accuracy.

“Only took you one shot, good.”

I heard the voice of my instructor, and then the world faded back to true realism, and once again I took the sensors from my body, so I could return to the barracks, and prepare for the next lessons.

Well done, concepts shown, details.  Passed as well.  Keep the good work up.
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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 6, 2007 4:21:25 PM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Small Arms Repair

I found myself at a large table, an assembled E-11 blaster rifle on the table in front of me, and the small tool kit at my side.  The kit, supposedly, had everything you needed to fix any sort of malfunction, at least, in a jury-rigged fashion.  I had to show my knowledge to diagnose the blaster’s malfunction, fix it completely, or at least, adequately with what I had.  So, I pulled out a small screwdriver and a pair of needle nose pliers.  Then I began field stripping the rifle.  I screwed the barrel off, popped the energy cell out, when that was done the snap was a little off, we were suppose to recognize everything about our weapons, and apparently my familiarization had paid off early.  I had a theory where the problem was coming from now.  I then looked down the barrel, and the mechanisim that controlled bolt cohesion looked perfectly fine, the square casing just on the edge was perfectly intact.

I looked inside the body of the rifle, and everything looked to be perfect.  I then flipped it up to look at the energy chip, and sure enough, one was cutting from the end of the gun a little further than usually.  So, I took out the small screwdriver and pulled off the side of the handle, popping the metal hand piece away.  The wire inside had overheated and snapped apart.  I pulled out the small battery powered saudering device, and cut off a little extra wire from the kit, and moved it into place.  I then put the hot device to the end of both wires, tracing around the entire piece.  Mimicking my last action, I attached it to the lower side, and put a small piece of black electrical tape around it to act as a mock coating. 

I then replaced the wire in the proper place among the rest of the inner working of the E-11.  Then I placed the cover back into place, and screwed the bolt back into place.  I loaded the energy cell back into place, and it made the correct noise, but I was almost certain that wasn’t all that had to be done for this exam, so I continued braking apart the machine.  I thought back to the lecture, about the small chip inside a blaster that had to be reset after every malfunction, so that it would hook up to a diagnostic machine, and read correctly.  It wasn’t meant to be done in combat, but after a soldier had returned to a safe place. 

The screwdriver then placed along the back side of working down the top where a scope might have been placed, in certain situations, and soon the large metal piece pulled off, and I located the chip, gently, prying it out of place with my screwdriver, and flipping it over.  I then took a small casing that fit a chip of this side in it perfectly, and placed it inside, closing it for fifteen seconds, then I would remove it and place the chip back into the gun properly.

I retightened the bolts into place, and then held up the gun towards the instructor, he nodded his head some, and then placed a common Republic rifle in front of me.  It was prep for my next exam, somewhat, being familiar with all the factions weapons, knowing what kind of ammo it shot, and the like, but whatever the case, I just needed to fix it.  I couldn’t think of the model name, but it was a .45 calibur projectile rifle.  So, I imagined the layout would be most like any other projectile shooters.

Field stripping this gun was much less complicated, taking the ammo clip from the bottom sliding off the top half of the firing column, unfasten the handle grip, and take of the side casing off, and then it lied before me.  My inspective eye roamed over the naked frame of the gun, and I noticed the build up of GSR in the barrel, but other than that nothing jumped out to catch my attention, and I got out a magnifying glass to move over the frame, and after much scrutiny I found the problem.  The firing pin had a miniscule bend in it, but not one very noticeable, but still enough to not ignite the round on contact.

I picked up the needle nose pliers, and slowly moved to hold the firing pin.  Slowly I applied pressure, this thing only needed to bend millimeters, so asserting to much pressure could bend it completely out of shape, so I had to do this extremely carefully, so that the rifle would function properly after I was completed.

When I thought it was a perfect I began reassembeling the rifle.  After everything was fastened or bolted back into place, I reloaded the bullets into the chamber, and held them forward to my instructor.  We walked out the door to the left, and he pulled the trigger firing off one round into the air, and I smiled with accomplishment.

Good work once again.  Keep trying to improve each time a little more, either in details, length, or character development.  Passed.
-Paladin-


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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 6, 2007 7:07:13 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
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Story 2

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Squad Specialty Story: Combat Engineer
Story: Construction Skills


Lucky woke up early the morning of her next Specialty exam and decided to eat a breakfast very high in nutrition. Her exam would take place in one of the simulation rooms this time, and she couldn’t wait to start. Next she did her usual military workout before heading two floors down to the floor where the simulations took place.

Once the turbo-lift doors opened, on the simulation floor, she headed to the receptionist’s desk which was located at the very end of the corridor. As she walked, she noted the two rows of doors which lined the hallway. The plaques beside them told her the numbers of the simulation rooms. There were thirty in total.

When she reached the desk, the receptionist gave her a smile which looked like it could be used in one of those  Colgate commercials.

“How can I help you?” she asked Lucky.

“I have an exam in sim room 10.” Lucky replied in turn.

“You can go right in. The instructor for that exam should be with you shortly.”

Lucky thanked her and walked to room 10. She felt like she was at a doctor’s appointment or something. This was different than the simulation she had done with her squad once. Once in front of the door, she punched in her security code and walked in. She looked around the room, it was dark and had a large screen at the front. There were a few rows of seats with some gear to interact with objects on the screen.

She took a seat in the first row and waited for her instructor to arrive. Luckily she didn’t have to wait long. Five minutes later, a man in his mid-fifties walked through the door , and looked around the room, before setting his eyes on her.

“So, you’re the Trooper I’ll be training?” Lucky simply nodded, not wanting to say anything in fear that she would sound stupid.

“Great! Let’s get to it then shall we?”

And just like that, she would begin her exam. She seated herself in the third row, and put on the interactive equipment, while the instructor was logging into a computer and setting up the simulation.
A small screen winked on in her visor, at the same time , the same image appeared on a much larger screen at the front of the room. Her goal was to fix one of the items there on the screen that needed fixing. Her choices were : a bridge, a facade and a small shelter of which the armour on it had gone out of existence, and in other places was damaged. She chose to fix the facade.

It had a long , deep dent in the middle , the sides were shrivelled a bit as though the metals used on it had been fried , and it looked as though it was going to collapse at any minute. She walked towards it , and looked around her. Right behind it , was a deep trench and in it were scattered pieces of metal.

She made her character walk forwards and interact with the objects. The computer whirred , but that’s all you heard in the room. That , and her steady breathing. With one gloved hand , she reached forward and took pieces of metal that she thought would be useful before making her simulated self walk back and look in a pack for the tools that she would need.

She took , a welding gun , some pliers and a hammer out of the pack and set them beside her while she zipped up the pack. When all her tools were with the spare , metal parts , she began sorting them by size and damage percentage.

When she was finished, she had three piles in front of her. She started with the pile that had the biggest pieces: she would weld them to the facade to strengthen it. With those pieces , she strengthened the back and made some structural adjustments so that it would stand better on the ground.

Next , came the medium-sized pieces of metal. With those, she mainly used to strengthen the front of the facade , but she also used some to provide support to some of the bigger pieces.

Finally came the pile that had the smallest pieces. She would use those pieces to reinforce the shrivelled sides , and to cover the bigger holes.

Once she had welded everything , she waited for the little wisps of smoke to dissipate before truly admiring her work. She found taht it looked good.

“Take off the equipment” the man instructed her. She had forgotten where she was , and was startled when he had first spoken. The screens in her visor winked out , and she took off the headset , the gloves and all the other interactive components.

The man looked at some data on the screen of a computer terminal at the other side of the room. Lucky sat and waited for him to speak. After what seemed like an eternity to her , he dismissed her.

She walked out of the sim room , her face covered in sweat, but she was smiling. She wa sproud of the work she had done in there. She started walking away , when the receptionist at the other end of the hall called her.

She walked towards her, wondering if there was anything wrong. The friendly receptionist motioned for her to take a seat , and Lucky did so , not knowing what was to come.  Five minutes later , her instructor walked out of a room and into the hall. She jumped out of her seat and saluted crisply as he approached her.

“At ease” he said as he held out his hand , smiling.

“I wanted to congratulate you personally. You did great work in there”

“Thank you , Sir!” said Lucky , not daring herself to believe what she was hearing.

He dismissed her , and she walked out of the wing and headed to the mess hall for a weel-deserved lunch.

Haven't been able to read your writting for a while, but you clearly improved tremendously since I last read one of your posts.  Still room for improvement as always for everyone, but passes nonetheless.  Don't be afraid to be creative and have a little fun with them.
ASL/SSGT Luckystar/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/ Tadath/VEA [ES1][EW1] [SC] [BoH]

-Paladin-

To Embrace the Darkness is to bring About the Light...

Combat Engineer

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  RE: Paladin Specialty Stories
November 7, 2007 11:57:26 AM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Armament Maintenance and Repair

“A soldier is more or less useless on a battlefield if their equipment brakes, and cannot be repaired.  You are here today to learn how to fix every weapon you might possibly encounter in a combat situation, so that you will not be an unnecessary casualty due to weapon malfunctions. “  The instructor spoke adamantly.

“At the end of this course you will be expected to be able to repair even jury rigged guns made by such people as Tusken Raiders, Black Sun, and any small time crime organizations to name a few, not to mention, Republic and other major threats weaponry.  If you know how to fix something, effectively, then you may also apply it to cause necessary damage to targets that could be used for questioning, or might be otherwise more useful alive.  Even though we frown upon keeping prisoners, we all know sometimes, it has to be done.”  He continued.

“For your final exam you’ll have to repair, show proper maintenance of, and show how to apply the three basic modules for the DC-17M Interchangeable Combat System.  That is all, soldiers, good luck.”


I sat infront of the DC-17M Interchangeable Combat System.  It lied on the table in front of me, and I inhaled gently through my nose, letting a slow breath out of my mouth.  We hadn’t been taught specifics on the gun, we were suppose to figure out how it worked, since all blasters had the same primary units the only variance being bolt cohesion and density.  The denser the bolt was the ‘stronger’ it was, and it could potientally pierce armor.  The more cohesion a bolt had the longer the bolt held together, thus upping the maximum range from each shot.  Cohesion and Density were also based on the power packs that were supposed to be used for certain weapons.  If an elite top of the line sharpshooter that had enough energy in the cell to shoot forty shots were put into the E-11, for example, it would over load the rifle, and possibly melt the entire inside of the barrell along with every important piece of machinery inside of it, but that wasn’t the test today.  This was supposed to be something able to be, at very least, jury rigged, and something to that scale would be irreversible, and only remedied with the ICs shelled out to buy another one.

Alright, So, I knew I had this pretty much from the start, because I always know.  I’m still alive, and still taking life a step at a time, so, I’ve not been wrong yet.  My faith in myself had always helped me through rough situations like this, because I’d always depended on doing things myself to get things done.  I didn’t join the military to learn how to repair weapons, and I had no prior expierence as a handyman.  Destruction is a form of creation, and in that field I consider myself a artist capable of the most wonderful masterpieces, but I could see where this trick would just add a new ‘shading pattern’ to my repertoire. 

My hands commenced forth in a rythem already drilled into my head from the countless drills of braking down weapons, and reassembeling them in the fastest times possible.  My right hand held the frame in place.  The DC-17M, currently, had the blaster attachment to it, and my hands pulled off the entire back compartment, with curiosity, it appeared the entire cohesion and density calculators were held inside the back compartment, just behind the barrell.  I then lied it down facing it sideways, incase some random surge would shoot a bolt from it, I’d rather it hit someone else.  My hands moved back to the frame, my right holding down the handle, as my left strained to push the barell lose, and then two quick twists, and it popped in my hand, and I placed it near the back piece that for my own reference I’m just going to refer to as the module.

My left moved up to hold down the frame of the gun, while my right moved across to flip open the prepared tool kits they supplied for the exam, and I found , the only tools inside were electrical tape, needle nose pliers, bolt pliers, wire cutters, and a flat head screw driver.  They provided the one that could double one way or another, at least.  The screw driver came out into my hand, and pushed down towards the phillips head hole, and to my frusteration the flat head was too big for the plating over the handle, which meant, it was utterly useless for the inside fittings of the Weapons System.  I dropped the screwdriver to the table, and tore off a small piece of electrical tape while picking up the needle nose pliers.  I put it down on the screw to add friction, and then tried to wedge the needle nose points into the groves of the screw, and it worked, sort of.  With every turn I had to readjust the pliers in place, but the electrical tape, and half grip of the pliers was turning the bolt, and that is all I could ask for.  The only thing I had to be thankful for was that the DC-17M was made to be quick to perform maintance and repairs too.  Upon getting the bolt loose I found an amazing piece of technology that made me want to make love to the designer of this weapon, metaphorically speaking, of course.  A small diagnostic machine was hooked inside the handle, and seemed to run off the energy cells that provided the power for the bolt.  The screen read

“COH MISCAL”

Cohesion Miscalculation.  I didn’t have a proper diagnostic machine, to reupload the correct Cohesion numbers to the thing, but their were ways to make it work for a period of time, and with this gun, in combat, you could just plug in a different module, and you weren’t a sitting duck, anymore.  I knew they wanted this module to work though, so I thought about all my possibly options, and the most efficient one was to pop out the chip that controls the cohesion data, and to place electrical tape under the part that held the actual ‘functions’ while hoping it stilll got current, so it would work off of what cohesion it had in it.  This could, potientally, work, but in combat your gun could overheat, the bolts could be rendered inaffective, but it was either the gun overheat, or die, I’d pick the gun anyday. 

With the electrical tape and plier screwdriver, the module eventually opened, and I popped the chip off.  We were well versed on these particular chips since it, the density chip, and the power chip were virtually the most important parts of a given weapon.  Everything else just ran to keep them safe from the power, or to channel it in the right direction.  I always seem to veer off topic, somehow,  I was dead into this thing. I ripped free two miniscule pieces of electical tape, and slid them over the exact area that controlled the cohesions regulation, and I took the pliers, and pulled up hard, after several minutes I had pulled free the five key connections.  I then slid a second piece of electrical tape over, so that I could avoid any further damage to the weapon, and so that those key elements could still ‘lock in’ to the gun, but they wouldn’t be receiving their signals.

I then replaced the cover to the module, and fastened it, and the rest of the dissassembled pieces back into place, after pressing the reset button on the small diagnostic machine.  I then stood up and marched towards my instructor with a smile, extending it forward. 




We had just swapped guns, and he sent me into a room with a new one, that was really fixed, first I had to go over the routine maintenance of the system, and then I had to switch out each module to the rifle. 

I also retrieved a proper wiring kit, diagnostic machine, and tool kit, so I was much happier with my supplies this time around.  Miscellanous supplies lied aroudn this room, and the rest of my exam was going to be via a recording, since I didn’t see my instructor follow me into the room.  I hooked the diagnostic machine up to where the energy cell would be plugged up, while I walked to the side of the room to retrieve a fresh energy cell.  I then sat down, lying it down on the table, and saw that the threading on the barrel wasn’t tightened all the way down, and it looked to be cross threaded, that could of eventually become bad enough that the rifle as a whole would misfire, or the barrel wouldn’t fit on it at all, so I pulled the barrel off, and took a small emory grinder, and made sure all the groves in the thing were only as curved as they needed to be.  Then, I picked up the diagnostic machine,  the screws looked relatively new, so none of them were in fear of being stripped, and the diagnostic machine came back with no signs, it had been a simple routine maintance demonstrating the simplicity they were trying to tell us about.

Now for the other modules of the Weapon System.  They came all packed in a thing that doubled as a back pack, and after unzipping it two backs were inside, an attachable scope, and an attachable iron sight.  Along with two different barrels to the gun. 

Firstly, I would look at the barrels, and each module, it was apparent which one went where, the sharpshooter module had a longer barrel threading for the more bolt cohesion, and a thinner wall since a sharpshooter would not be shooting as rapidly as a blaster. 

I slipped the blaster module into place, and picked up the thicker, shorter barrel with relative ease.  Each one had different energy cells that were ideal, but each one could be used inerchangably.  I then slid the long ironsight attachment to the front of the gun, and nodded my head, pleased with the quick assembly. 

I then took all the things back off, and replaced them inside the organized back pack.  Pulling out the sharpshooter mods, and clipping in the module and barrel same as before, but this time sliding the scope in place, and offering a gentle grin.  I’d have to get me one of these, someday.

The next module I hadn’t quite figured out from looking at it, but upong lifting it up, I realized exactly how it was designed to work. The module clipped in much like the others, but had another handle on it for added leverage.  This was the anti-vehicle moudle, and it had no barrel, it was suppose to only get four shots, and my guesses it was just a portable four shot plasma cannon.  This weapon is amazing.  An army in one.  Just like me.  I’m definatly going to have to get one of these.

Sorry about my delay here in getting around to this, glad to see you moved on to the next spec, I'll read that one right after.  Oh, and passed, good work, watch the typos though.
-Paladin-


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November 8, 2007 1:11:11 PM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Weapons and Electronic Repair
Military Electronics Repair



“When in a tight situation and the blast door protecting you from squads of the Republic’s soldiers has malfunctioned, someone needs to be able to repair the door, and make sure your unit is safe until needed to engage the threat.  That is what this course if for.  If a comlink brakes it will render you alone amongst all of our troopers, and you have to fix it to provide most efficient battle tactics.  This is a course that will make sure that we are never on the losing end of a fight because of outside circumstances such as faulty wiring in comlinks, door malfunctions, or any other random occurrences that could happen in a battle situation.  Good luck, Soldiers.” 


This entire course made me dizzy from all the eye rolling I might have been doing, but I did it, none the less.  I felt like a highly dangerous…janitor.  It took every ounce of my being to not ask why we didn’t have them in our squads already, but I didn’t.  With every day that passed during the course I did gain the knowledge, how comlinks could short out when ion waves passed through them via blaster, grenade, or just randomly.  It was easy to restart a comlink at that point, all that had to be done was simply opening the thing up, pulling out the main unit, and then replacing it, and it allowed the energy to flow through it again, upon releasing the ions trapped inside of it.  The same thing could be said with most droids, when shut down with an ion blast, all that had to be done was to remove the power core, and replace it, but I was no where near the technician to do anything, but the most basic of battle droids, and the lowest maintenance droids.  I couldn’t even begin to start any sort of maintenance to an astromech, or anything of that grade.

When blast doors malfunctioned the most common reason was a stray blaster bolt, and then all that had to be done was to reconnect the wires with the small portable saudering guns we were provided in our repair kits.  Then, it should be, at least, functional afterwards. 

Somehow, I still felt all this random repair knowledge was somehow useless, but I’ve been wrong before.  Not often, mind you, but I have been wrong.  In a combat situation would I really have the time to do these quick field repairs on things?  In the heat of a fire fight, I’d not want to be the guy standing behind to fix a door.  Necessity would  be the guideline.  Did the door need to be fixed now to provide a tactical advantage, or could it be dealt with later?  All of these questions were able to be interpreted personally, and that was the only deciding factor in battle.


So, I showed up the last day of this course, for my final exam on the subject, and I was thankful that it was so close to ending.  I wore both the wiring kit and repair kit on my belt, and walked into class, it was all they told us to come with today.  I walked inside, and took a seat at the large workbench, in front of my instructor, and he nodded his head, and then pointed towards a battle ready E-Web blaster, and I stood up.

“Imminent danger is approaching you and your squad, and your E-Web has suddenly stopped firing.  The enemy isn’t able to be seen, and its your only chance at keeping them pinned down enough not to be overwhelmed.”

Given the course, I had a good idea where to start.  Working on the E Web blaster would have been considered Arms Repair, but the E-Web’s generator that was hooked up under it was exactly the kind of thing that was going to test every knowledge I had of military grade equipment repair.  These were the kind of repairs that didn’t make me feel like a janitor.  I felt like the same artist I had referred to prior, mixing and refining a blend of materials just so that my self expression could be rendered in such a more spectacular way. 

I dropped to my knees, and opened both kits; the tool kit to my left and the wiring kit to my right.  I flipped out the long hydrospanner, and a flat metal rod.  My right hand drove the rod into the metal plate on the front of the generator, and popped off the protective durasteel shielding.  I kept the hydrospanner close, and positioned the small saudering gun close to it.  I checked the inside of the generator, and all the coils looked to be in shape, but I made sure to look every centimeter of it over.  I then shifted my view upwards towards the top of the generator coils, and just where the coils came together and ran upwards into the E Web.  The thing had been fired without cease, and had strained the generator, causing it to overheat, and the heat had separated the three now loose ends.  I also was taught to expect with any overheating device, that the coils probably needed a jump of some sort.  So, I also took the small back up generator from the wiring kit, it was a wonderfully designed mini-generator that looked a lot like the defibulators  medics carried, but this was to revive machines, not people.  I hooked it to either coil, and let it begin charging, while I worked.

I, quickly, picked up the saudering gun, and lifted it to the wires, in a matter of seconds I had reconnected the three of them, and they were making a full circuit.  I then replaced the saudering gun into the repair kit, and pressed the ‘share’ button on the mini generator.  The electricity could almost be felt as the massive amount of stored energy was released into the large generator, and I would the take the insulated gloves to remove both hook ups.  I then stood up, flipping the E-Web back into the ready position, and it powered up as hoped.  All I could do was nod my head with the silent appreciation for the skill I had resented at the beginning of this course. 

“Good Job, Private Sonok, I have a feeling your going to cause the Republic a lot of hell.”

“Thank you, Sir.”

I had passed the last repair exam, and, reluctantly, I have to admit that they are all useful skills to have.  I’m glad I know all of them, and I don’t see why I was so blind to the facts when I first began the course, but I suppose everyone has to make a stupid assumption once in their lives.

Excellent work, love some of the hints of sarcasm in there, and the development of your character from reluctant to accepting.  Passed.
-Paladin-


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Weapons Emplacement

My eyes snapped open at O-Five Hundred, as per usual.  I had to meet the instructor along with several more troopers for a lecture on the next course I had to complete, Weapons Emplacement.  The idea of the course was stale to me, it seemed like this had what we been training all along, with or without knowledge of it.  We had to know where to aim already, how to give squad support, how to provide maximum fire power, and a vast amount of other things, so what could today’s lecture possibly be over?  I couldn’t quite make up my mind what the instructor was going to say today, and it was leaving me with a sense of staleness, just like something he had gone over a thousand times before.

I arrived to the classroom, and found myself in a random seat near the front of the class.  The Instructor was already sitting behind the large desk at the front of the room, and I waited for the remaining fifteen minutes for the lecture to begin.  Even now I had no idea what to expect.

“Soldiers,”  The instructor started right at O-Eight Hundred.

“We have taught you a variety of things in this course.  Everything from cover tactics to electronic repair, but now you start the final phase of the training, Weapons Systems.  This point forward you only have three major courses left, and they all fall into this category.  Today, you will be shown multiple examples of how to hold a pistol, rifle, or repeater for different affects; maximum fire power, best movement, most efficient cover fire, accuracy, ammunition conservation, among many other things.  The knowledge to use your weapon to achieve every means most efficiently is what gives the Stormtrooper Corps the most leverage over our enemies.  You each will go over several position drills, and be expected to replicate them versus holographic enemies using the best position possible.”

The idea, that moving the weapon a little to achieve a much greater outcome was far fetched. The more accurate an individual was the better they yielded in situations to kill.  Suppression required the knowledge of individuals placement, and with a heavy repeater only a few real positions were available.

I stood in drill, a heavy repeater on my hip, for movement and firepower we were suppose to hold it between our legs and straddle the back of the mechanism while holding the handle in our hands.  Thus our body weight kept the weapon pointed forwards, but this was still slow.  For faster movement over firepower, we were to place the weapon on the outside of our dominant hip.  It seemed like all of this would be up to individuals and how they preferred moving about, but maybe that was the whole thing.  Tactics designed to brake individuals, and turn them into the common mold of the trooper.  I knew I’d never use these tactics in combat, well, I would, but not for the same reasons.  I would use them when they felt right, but I also had been handling blasters since I was thirteen.  I had my own ways of doing things with any type of weapon.  All of the forms they were teaching me I had used, at least, once before in my life, but they were committing them to memory, so each could be replicated.  I’d remember them, for exam sake, but they were not melting me down to their mold, that I had determined.  Individuals rise up to be more.  The generic trooper spends his whole life in the armor suit.  I’m not going to be a trooper the rest of my career, there is something out there, and I’m going to have it.  I’m going to be an instrument of destruction on such a higher scale, I’m going to be one of the greatest assets the Empire has ever seen.  It is my will, and with a strong enough will, anything can be accomplished, so I’ve heard.

Time for the exam came, and I was ready.  All their positions stored away in my mind, I was ready to discard them, as fast as possible, but that’d not be until after this day.  My eyes stared at the partially real, partially holographic field in front of me.  I held a heavy blaster in my arms, and had it pointed to where the enemies would take shape.  A single enemy appeared, and I kept it stationary in front of my body, and launched a volley of shots sweeping from its head to feet.   

The next holograms would appear, a squad of three.  Still, I remained stationary and just swept the blaster fire slowly across each of them.  I had learned the bounce of a heavy repeater long ago, so directing it had became second nature.  The bounce was small compared to heavy turret projectile firers, their was only a small jump because of the cohesion of the particles.  They disappeared quickly, and then a group of ten appeared, two heavy repeaters amongst them, and instantly I swung the thing to my right hip, and started to retreat towards the ‘cover’ zone.  Once behind the blast shield I sat the heavy repeater atop it, and fired it from above my head, looking through the small wholes in the blast shield, and using the leverage it gave me to only have to guide it’s course, but in no time at all the cover had given me the upper hand, and the holographic squad was downed.  I moved back to the open before the next holograms appeared, it was two Republic Commandos with heavy repeaters.  The gun swung between my thighs, and I backed slowly towards cover, keeping the fire angled towards them, sweeping their area.  I made it to cover once again, although, in a real situation two repeaters, probably, would of mowed me down if I hadn’t took extreme evasive procedures, such as dropping the weapon, and diving for cover, and then still it was debatable how much of me might survive, although, the armor would take the brunt of the damage.

Anyway, I made it back to open range, and foliage and soldiers appeared again through it, and I took sweeping modes, not lining up shots, but slowing down rate of my sweep as I passed over clear targets, and soon it disappeared.  I nodded my head, turning around as I heard my Instructor call out

“Good Job, Soldier.”

“Thank you, Sir.”

I responded as I walked over dropping the blaster in its rightful place, and someone picked it up to take my place.  I then left walking back to my barracks debating how many of these students would retain their individuality, and not become the generic expendable Stormtrooper.  I lied down, and these thoughts son left my mind, and I feel into a light mid afternoon nap.

Passed, good work with this one.  You are almost to the exams, and as advice try making the next couple specs a little longer as practice.  Exams are expected to be a wee bit harder to pass.
-Paladin-


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Weapon Systems
Integrated Combined Arms Fire Control Placement

“Troopers, there are hundreds of weapons in this galaxy, and it’d be a shame to limit yourself to using only one at a time.  Sometimes wielding two weapons simultaneously can yield a greater result than wielding one, but never sacrifice quality for quantity.  If you have a sufficient weapon for a given task, then do not cut your accuracy to wield two weapons at once, if it cuts into the accuracy you have with your main weapon.  If you’re in a tight situation wielding two weapons might be necessary to suppress all the units around you, or even to kill multiple opponents at once.  Two blaster pistols are the most well known weapon to use two of in one situation, but other weapons can be used, this way.  Two light repeaters can be used at the same time, if supported by your legs, and you will achieve twice the firepower, however some accuracy will be lost, but not enough to completely forget about the possibility.  One light repeater and a blaster pistol is a great combination, as well.  The repeater could be used to fire suppression and the pistol to sight out enemies and pick them off.  Blaster Rifles can be used only if you have the strength in your arms to keep both straight enough not to be totally inaccurate.  You’ll learn a great number of techniques to provide you with an edge, be sure to keep them in mind, troopers. “

Finally, another field test virtual simulation.  I loved these things, they put me right into the fray of battle, allowing me to have actual field practice without actually having to risk my life to do so. I was already strapped up, and being loaded in.  It was a solo mission this time, no squad to speak or think of, and I was in the middle of a almost coverless planet, with only large boulders every ten meters or so jutting up from the ground.  I was full dressed in the Stormtrooper attire, and making my way gradually towards an extraction point.

The back story was that our squad had gotten split up in a fire fight with a crime syndicate whom was using gorilla warfare from small caverns that lead all through the underside of the planet, because the native species dwelled beneath the planet’s surface.  The empire had sent in diplomats to work out a deal for buying resources, but the crime syndicate wanted to move in on the planet first, so to protect our investments we were sent in to solve the dispute by force, but the Syndicate had a greater knowledge of those caverns, and out numbered our five man squad five to one, at least. 

I moved at a hustle pace, we were all to meet up at a specific coordinate, and by some unbelievable means, our coms were all completely jammed.  Two blaster rifles were in my hand; a T-21 Rifle and an E-11 /H Heavy Blaster Rifle.  With each hurried footstep, my eyes swept back and forth through my vision.  It was night time on this planet now, and my night vision lit up the entire arid surface to a dull green.  Several times I almost unleashed fire on skittering creatures, but I managed not too.  The hike from my coordinates was another standard hour worth of walking, and occasionally I heard broken com attempts, but they always sounded little more than buzzes and white noise.

In the distance I could see the tree line starting to rise, when I reached it there was only forty five minutes worth of walking to do, and we’d be home free to meet up with the ship to take us off world, and regroup. 

Hope never lasts.  As soon as I got to closer I could see the faces of a group of gang members, but they weren’t able to see me yet, either they weren’t provided necessary night time equipment, or they were sent there to die, either case I didn’t have much to worry about.  I corrected my pace to keep me in line of sight of as few as possible.  I held up each blaster pressing each stock to my shoulder, and lining up each shot approximately to the lower left of the two creature’s faces that I could see, and then I pulled off the burst fire shot, and slowly turned right to drag each shot over their faces, and each one would fall with the plasma burn through their heads.  I had activated the sound enhancement, and I could hear the squeaking of Rodian voices on the other side of the trees, and I quickly moved inside the forest, for the cover it provided.

I could hear the scuffling of the underbrush, and I estimated four more people, roughly.  Two taking forward positions towards me, and two remaining back turning on flashlights.  I assumed they were mounted on the rifles, where scopes would be, so I didn’t have to worry about getting picked off between my armor slats, as much.  I kneeled low, as carefully as possible, and slowly slid my head out behind the tree, activating the lowlight vision, so the flashlights wouldn’t utterly blind me.

I held one rifle around the left side of the tree, and the other to mirror it.  I spotted one of the creatures moving towards me, and waited to see his buddy, but the first was closing in quicker than I had hoped, and I had to take the shot, and move further through the trees.  The T-21 rattled off a single shot putting a bottle cap sized whole through his head, and searing his wound closed, blaster fire rained towards my position, and I sprung to my left, deeper into the forest.  I landed on my side, and quickly turned over, remaining prone, under a small bush, after positioning underneath it.  My breath was heavy, but with the com toggled off, it would not be transmitted out of my helmet. With the lowlight vision on, and none of them moving closer to me, that I could hear, everything had gotten almost pitch black, only a smoky outline for most of the trees.  My wrists moved, holding the stock of the guns atop my shoulders, and grasping the triggers with my fingers, I inched through the forest, my eyes still aimed where they were coming from. 

I figured I could take all three of these guys out without much of a hassle, but I couldn’t be sure they didn’t have more people.  I also knew that my armor would protect me from the majority of their blaster shots, but if they did manage to hit one spot several times, it’d eventually brake through.  It had come down to debate how to take these three on, and I was never one for an argument with myself, the first idea came to take them out, and I was going to risk it, I didn’t have time to lie here and think. 

Pure instinct took over, the fear of being killed swarming the mind, and then refocused to a passion for life and hatred of my unknown enemy.  I got up slowly, and flipped night vision back on.  I leaned from behind the tree, and took aim at the brightest spot, that was concealing my vision.  The light faded as the blot had been sent through the flashlight, and into the chest of the man carrying it.  I then spun into the open blasters on both arms, and I pulled the triggers rapidly only half aiming around the other lights, and soon after the flurry of shots, the other two’s bodies pooled on the ground.  I looked down, and a large grey blemish was held on the left of my chest plate.  I had been hit, but only once.  I’d never of done that if I hadn’t been wearing the armor, but, regardless, I had faced down four to my one, and I started my long hustle through the forest, but in my movement, my foot came up and hit a metal object, and the vision seemed to have messed up, but I realized the course was over, and I got up dropping my helmet onto the seat, and looked to my instructor, he nodded his head, and smiled.

“You did quite well with those two rifles, better the first time through than any I’ve seen since I’ve given the course.”

“Thank You, Sir.”

“Dismissed.”

I didn’t respond, I simply took a pace towards the door, towards my barrack, I was nearing the completion of my classes, and a small smile danced over my lips in excitement, for that very fact.  I knew I’d start more classes once I was finished, but every success deserves private celebration.

My bad about the delay in your grade.  This one was extremely well done, and not only details the topic, it explains it clearly an in not complete jargon.
-Paladin-


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I had spent long hours in the classroom studying the differences between each manufactured guns used by large priority enemies of the Empire.  It came down to the day where I had to prove my knowledge of each, first was the written test, which was easily done, and then the field simulation.  The simulation was a far fetched idea, but it was used to incorporate the most of what was taught to each of us.

------------------The Briefing-------------------------------------------

"In this situation, Lance Corporal, you'll be deep in enemy territory in a squad of five.  The area belongs to a well known crime lord, and he has mercenaries and bounty hunters looking for each and every government affiliated soldier imaginable, and the Republic is trying to arrest this guy at the same time you are.  Around the area a total of twenty of our own troopers will be there, as well as many enemies; Republic and Mercenary.  Situations will occur that force you to change weaponry, and you will decide the best weapons to use, and if here is none available show your knowledge of how to best fix a hostile weapon."


----------------------------Simulation-------------------------------------

As I descended into the simulation four other troopers marched around me in pattern.  I took point while two others were behind me on either side.  I held a standard E-11 Blaster Rifle in my arms, and  my sights scanning the area.  It was an urban slums area, so some of the people that I could see would be nonhostile, and this only caused a greater disadvantage wearing the Stormtrooper armor, but I hadn't seen their forces yet,and I could only hope they wore something to show their intentions... Drawn weapons would do. I thought, as I saw a Gran with a Bryar Pistol aimed at us, me, to be more precise, since I was at point.  Before I could move a searing shot came from his pistol, but luckily hit the alloy in my hand, and melted my barrel shut.  Bolts flew and gunned the alien down, and I quickly took the pistol for my own. 

The first random even to cause my weapon change.  Then, armed with the quite powerful, accurate pistol favored by most mercenaries, I paced forward it extended, and ready to fire.  We made it into an alleyway, as Republic Soldiers were in a fire fight with a group of mercenaries.  I grinned waving my squad to stand down for a moment, but to keep their eyes open on the targets, when one fail the targets would be righted to the next standing opponent, and soon enough only two republic and three criminals were standing, I motioned to fire, and the bryar pistol bolt cut behind the Rodian's bulbous eyes, and burned a whole in his brain, for a moment I thought of the saying 'in one ear and out the other.' It was a flash though, and my targets re sighted on the armored republic, that had already been hit with three blaster bolts, so his armor was failing, more than likely.  The bolt cut through the sealer on his neck to keep his protective helmet on, and burned right through his esophagus, and again I silently wondered if he was a smoker.  My squad had downed the other three without much problem, and I moved to apprehend anything I could find, with more fire power, and I found a DH-17 Blaster Rifle.  This thing could shoot charged bolts for more armor penetration, or in burst fire for suppression or wild shots. 

We marched twenty more minutes further, nearing the estate in which the Bothan crime lord we were seeking lived.  It was an opulent mansion that stood three stories high, and looked like it could house upwards of one hundred people, for this scenario, so we all moved forward, cautiously.  A shot from a Twi'lek thug narrowly missed me, as I had a guess for an ambush.  I stepped in and immediately doubled back as the shot fired forward, I wagered it was suppose to render my current weapon ineffective, but I had avoided the shot.  We kept in, and I had it on burst fire, and I fired five wild shots strafing the area the thug had been in, and he fell to the ground tattered with wholes, one in the left of his chest, and it was his undoing.  I picked up his Bryar Rifle, unmoddified, and popped out the energy clip, I only had, roughly ten shots left with this rifle, wagering the thugs shot several, and the Bryar Rifle and the DH-17 used the same power cell.  I clipped the new one in, to run out later rather than sooner. 

We marched slowly, kicking each door down as we passed, checking for hidden enemies, and clearing each hallway, until we worked our way to the foyer, where, to my estimation, thirty mercenaries were, and fifteen republic soldiers were having a shoot out, the republic was gaining ground on their suppressors, but not at a fast enough rate to keep up the pace.  We flanked the mercenaries from the Republic's position, so they could of been completely wiped out. 

"Bravo, Delta, Gamma, Alpha in position, requesting immediate back up." I'd radio to the other five man squads.  Each one reporting back their locations

"Fifteen minutes before full support." I told my squad, and I waved us all backwards, I saw the small device fly from the republic, and I lleapt backwards, knocking all but one of my squad prone, and he had stood to far from my left to be in my grasp.  The small fragmentation grenade went off, and he was peppered, the clanging could be heard on his armor, and he was wounded, but not dead. 

"Take him to safety, we will provide counter fire, until back up arrives... hurry."  I picked out one of my squad, and they listened making their way out of the building with the badly injured trooper.  I turned aiming my sights, looking for any of the Republic with more grenades.  The criminals, now had ten standing men, five leveled by the grenade, and the republics were down to four.  Which made us still outnumbered by each group, but our superior training, and my superior being could make up for that.  The Republic wasn't alert to us yet, but the mercenaries had seen the fiasco of us falling, and only waist up seemed to be revealed to the Republic.

"Aim at their inner thighs, bleed them out, send them into shock, they'll start firing at us, and if we aim low the Republic won't know, until they continue forward, and we can cut them down from the back." 

Taking aim, and following my orders all of us aimed at the mercenaries.  Blaster bolts still flew, and Republican and criminals alike fell, but we had tilted the odds to the Republic thinking they won.  Once all of the criminals had fallen, the Republic advanced, and we were on there left flank.  Shots opened up, and the three standing Republicans were soon no more than odorous piles.  I quickly moved to an unactivated grenade, and pulled the pin, tossing it to where we had taken down the criminals, and any that had survived their shots to the legs, would now have rethought their previous arguments.  We paced forward, and into a room of fifteen men, along with the Bothan we were to arrest, but no sooner than we entered did back up arrive, through the windows, through the rough with a small explosive charge, they were surrounded, and the mercenaries didn't like credits enough to foolishly die. 

---------------------------Conclusion---------------------------

"You showed a good knowledge of their weaponry, and the most effective means to use what you had to.  You have passed the test, Baretz. "

I felt satisfied with my activity, and then turned to walk forward out of the room towards my barracks.  I was in need of a nap, from the previous night's goings on.


Once again sorry for the delay.  Excellent work, and if you can do similar for you exams, you will be just fine.  Good luck with those
-Paladin-


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Light Weapons Qualification

SSR-10 Squad Support Rifle – Giovanni.12-11
DL-87 Deck Clearing Blaster – Riqimo. 2-10
BlasTech A280 Blaster Rifle – Myself.  6-6


It was my first qualification exam, and I was antsy.  Not able to contain my jittery excitement.  I had performed my morning run, taken a shower, and did all of my morning hygenics; shave, brush teeth, do, etc.  Still, I was looking forward to the test, and I wondered which weapons my SL and PL would choose for me.

I walked through the base to the simulation training center, and walked past all the normal doors to the door that said “Exam Room.”  My hand reached forward and turned the knob, and the excitement in my face was suppressed immediately.  Professional, I kept thinking. 

“There you are, Soldier.”

“Yes, Sir.”

“We’re already for you to go.  Suit up.”

I walked to the simulation suit and helmet once again, attaching all the pieces to my body, and in record time.  In a matter of minutes all the wires and armor was attached to me, and I sat ready to walk forward into the false reality once again.


I opened my eyes after a slow pause waiting for my nerves to calm, and I appeared on a mountain ridge.  From my position to the side of a small base appeared to be one kilometer, approximately.  I checked my right hand, and it held the weapon, I had chosen.  The A280 Blaster Rifle it was known to be the best armor piercing blaster available, and I had never had an opportunity to use it prior to today, so I would see what damage it could do.  My left hand moved to where a sidearm would normally be, and it latched around the thick handle of a gun, and I brought it up in front of me, examining it.

I noticed it as the DL-87 Deck Clearing Blaster, as it was dubbed.  It fired shots like a projectile shotgun.  In a forty five degree angle with it’s back edge in the middle of the barrel of the gun everyone inside that arc for ten meters would be hit. 

I then reached to my back, and pulled the rifle in front of me, it took me a second long to remember it, because it wasn’t in my last course, because it wasn’t made or used readily among any major enemies, but in my private reading I had seen it, and this made me grin, widely.  It was the SSR-10 Squad Support Rifle.  It was a sniper rifle, scope already attached.  The zoom on this scope could go up to twenty times magnification, and the rifle could shoot upwards of two kilometers before the bolts were rendered ineffective. 

The com transmission came through, and I paused replacing my weapons where they were, but keeping the SSR-10 out. 

“You are raiding the base that you have, more than likely, seen in the distance.  Your mission is to kill all resistance and take their leader, a twi’lek, into custody.  Approximately, fifty soldiers are inside this building, and you have a datapad with an encryption to shut down security, but to upload it you have to get to the main control room which is on the east wing of the building.  Good Luck, Soldier.”

I checked the energy cells on my belt, and I had two refills for the DL-87 and one for the A280, but the SSR-10 I had none, but the twenty shots I got with it should be sufficient.

I didn’t even move from my position, only lowered myself to one knee placing my left elbow on my right, elevated knee, for support, and dropped the barrel of the SSR-10 into my left palm, and placed my right hand around the handle, and, more specifically, my index finger over the trigger.  This thing could rip a full suited Stormtrooper in half at a kilometer and a half, so my guesses led me to believe, that at a kilometer whatever ground troops I saw were easy pickins.    I didn’t shoot the first three patrols, that I saw.  I let them walk their entire circles, just so I could spot entrance, exit, and most concealed places they moved. 

The second patrol came five minutes after the first, and on the opposite side of the building, and the third came at the same time.  I felt, in my gut, that I was missing a clear fact.  I zoomed the scope back out to five times, rather than ten, and scanned the area.  Then it was obvious, what my gut was telling me.  I had missed three crow’s nests.  Two guards were in each one, and three flash canisters sat at their feet.  I watched them all, waiting to see them speak into their coms, and soon enough it happened, and they replaced it to their side.  I took my first shot, and didn’t wait to confirm the kill moving to the second soldier in the nest with them, and squeezed the shot off.  I then swung to the nest nearest, and fired the same two shots, and repeated it for the third, as well.  Six down and I moved east to take a look at the base from a different angle, it would take me out of view of two of the nests, and probably one of the patrol routes, so my position wouldn’t be as well known, but if I didn’t get in soon they’d know I was here before I wanted them too.  The first patrol came again, and I assumed the same kneeling position and fired the shot towards his unsuspecting right, uncovered eye. 

The shot went through and he fell, just where I wanted him to, it was just after the first turn on the patrol route, and another could round the corner before they saw him, and then I’d take the next shot.  I then moved my sight to the second patrol route, and five minutes later, like clock work, the next patrol came around, and this one was going to be tricky.  With my changed position, it placed a wall in front of him, after his first turn, and then for his third turn I had a shot as he passed between buildings, and I lined the shot up, waiting for his head to pass through my sights, and soon enough it did.  I shot, and the superior bolt seared through the armor covering each ear, and would open them up as they passed through causing a millisecond headache before his life blinked out of existence.  I continued moving to get a better position for the third patrol, that was out of my sights, currently, and I came around seeing one more crow’s nest.  I didn’t wait this time, they had their scope out, browsing the hillside, and I took a shot right through the middle of one’s scope giving him a new nostril that connected to the back top of his spine.  The next shot took longer to line up, as the body had fallen to cover the man from my view, and I saw a foot move towards the flash canister, and I turned my head closing my eyes, and moving straight.  I turned back three seconds later, aiming and taking a shot at the man whom was angled right at me.  My shot went first, and I had hastily shot, hitting him in the right shoulder, so he gun was dropped from the pain, and I fired the follow up shot, through his left pectoral muscle, and he dropped.  It broke his heart that I shot first, I’m sure of it.

I angled for the next patrol now, and he was just coming from the door, and I took the shot early, in my adrenaline fueled state of mind, but he did fall to the ground.  I was moving in now.  I quickly hustled to the second patrol door, swapping the SSR-10 to the DL-87, and I made my way through the hallway.  I found the guard post it housed five men, and I quickly slammed back around the corner with my back to the wall.  My chest heaved with a sigh and I ran around the corner towards them, and, apparently they hadn’t been alerted to my approach, prior.  I got within fifteen feet of them, made sure my gun was pointed towards the center of them, and I fired.  The DL-87 sent shots in every direction, and each of the weak armored guards fell, at least, wounded.  I made short work of them, moving to them, and stomping on their chins, towards their shoulders, and snapping the necks of the ones whom survived the shot, and then I looked over the weapons, and none of them had energy cells that would fit any of my weapons, so I moved on down the hallway.  I took the A280 out in my right hand, and held the DL-87 in my left.  I moved towards the control room, which was said to be positioned on the east wing, which is why I picked this side of the building for my entrance.  I saw a blast door, and figured what I was looking for was on the other side of it.  I ran up to it, and then backed up to the wall across from it.  Duracreet walls were behind me, so I could only strafe left to right.  I had the A280 on my shoulder pressed back.  The DL-87 was pointed towards the middle of the door. 

I waited there for twenty minutes before the doors open, and two men in lab coats opened it.  The DL-87 went off as soon as the air compressors went off, and the men had fallen before anyone realized what was going on.  My A280 zipped across the room, as I marched in, and two guards on either side of the room righted to point their guns at me, but with a shot ninety degree spin, and a second shot I was able to subdue their blasts.  I then saw the five other scientists, and I tongue toggled my com to let my voice be heard.

“Everyone line up there. “  I barked with the static chaser on my voice.

They  were, obviously, frightened and willing to follow my every command, and when they lined up, I stood five meters in front of them, and fired towards the center, they were all killed by the shot from the DL-87 in my left arm, and I then placed it back on my left side harness.  I then moved my hand around towards my back to get the datapad out of the airtight locking pocket, and I then ran wires to the computer, and hit the appropriate buttons for it to run the security program.  Soon enough, the blast doors through out the building would be all reset to only open with the code 6438, and only I knew it.  I trapped every soldier and my target, as well, in rooms that could end up being their graves if they didn’t have something that could brake through the new encrypted pass code, and to my best guesses, they didn’t.  This was a minor bomb facility for some crack job criminal, there wasn’t a decent hacking droid for miles, and the way they memory whipped the droids now a days, they were lucky if it’d listen to them before it would me. 

I then started the trek upwards in the building, taking the DL-87 back out, and holding it in my left arm once again.  I took each step with the racket of my boots against the stone.  I made my way to the highest point of the building, with relative ease, and I found four guards trying to get through the blast doors that protected my prisoner.  I dropped the DL-87 getting their attention, and then with four precise, quick blasts there was four dead guards, and one door that I knew the pass code too.  So, I picked up the DL-87 once again, and marched to the door, I punched in the code with my thumb, and held the DL-87 on the center of the room.  Three men inside, all looked to be ‘important’ figures here, but only one twi’lek, and he was all I cared about.  Two more shots, two more corpses, and I marched in to my twi’lek

“You are under arrest.”

He had the sick desperate fear in his eyes, and I kicked the desk in front of me.

“If you would like to go for the weapon, and die here, fine with me.  If not, then move your ass.”

“Yess, S-s-orry.”

He spoke broken basic, what an uneducated piece of garbage.  All good criminals have to know basic, what was this guy playing.  He was either stupid, or trying to play me for a fool, his accent didn’t mean shit to me.  I dropped the A280 on my right side harness, and my right hand grabbed his leeku, and I guided him through the hallways by them, until I came to my hill again.  I grinned, and then opened my eyes to the subtle black vision of the simulation helmet. 
I moved my hands to unfasten it, and set it back in its place.  That had been a lot of fun, and I looked to my instructor, and stood.

“Good Job, your evaluation will be reported soon.”

“Thank you, Sir.”

Passed, good work on this one.  You should be doing good for the rest of them if you keep this up.  Some personal char stuff, the actual content, etc, all good.
-Paladin-


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OOC:
Doc, would it be possible to grade my specs in yellow please? Thanks.


Level 4
Story 1

Luckystar , SSGT

Squad Specialty: Combat Engineer
Story: Materials Science


Lucky was reading up on the compositions of different metals for the twentieth time since she learned of the date of her next exam. She wasn’t that good in science, and she didn’t think she would pass the exam. Lucky, stop thinking that way she chastised herself. If she kept that up, she wouldn’t have much to show for herself when she would go into the class. The good part, was that there was to be a short lecture just before the exam.

She knew that aluminum was composed of aluminum alloys , carbons and oxides. It was the same story for most materials . The metals are mined, still into the rock , they go to a factory where they are machined or melted o extract the mineral. And then the minerals were melted and either mixed in with another one , or simply mixed in with some added substances.

Since the metals were already minerals , the other composites of the finished metal was in powdered form seeing as the minerals were liquid. They were liquified at some point in a production of metals , only to be rehardened later on in the metal-making process.

In any case , all metals went through the process of being mined, liquified , then solidified once more into the finished product. Once she had flooded her mind with all this information, she turned off her datapad and just in time too. An instructor had just walked in and had asked everyone’s attention.

“Today , there will be a short lecture followed by a written exam , so I hope you have studied well.”

The instructor wrote a lot of notes on the blackboard while talking at a very dizzying speed. Lucky guessed that they had a lot of ground to cover. But, from the occasional discernable words , and the stuff the that was being written on many blackboards , she was able to tell that she was talking about everything that she had studied.

After writing fifteen pages worth of notes , which she would keep for future reference in a small safe she had in her room , they were handed out papers on which she guessed were the contents of the exam.

And it turned out that she had guessed correctly. When they were allowed to flip the papers over , she found that one page had multiple choice questions, and that you answered by darkening a circle on the second page.  The third page was composed of a sentence which gave the directive to an exercise , and the rest of the page was full out blanks.

As the instructor gave final instructions for the exam , Lucky started reading through the page. The exam looked like it was medium difficulty , which was alright. She needed to exercise her brain at the moment.

As she read through the questions a second time, she realized that they were worded differently, than in the texts , but it was still taken out of the study manuals. With a smile, she started to darken the circles on the second page . Fifteen minutes later , after using up some of her brain cells raw , she came across a short paragraph , which basically asked where you could find the mines for different metals. Her answer too kup all of the spaces given , she read over her answer twice before turning to the last page , the one with the blanks.

A minute later , the instructor came out with a few bottles with different sorts of powders . She motioned for everyone’s attention once more, and said “for those of you that are ready to move on to the last page , in silence, come stand at this table and fill in the blanks by writing the correct composite material . The labels are on the bottles, so I don’t want any excuses.”

Lucky got up from her desk and moved to the table . Looking at the labelled bottles, she filled in the blanks that were beside each nae of each metal. The only one she had difficulty with , was for Titanium-A. At that last one, she paused and thought for a bit. Titanium-a contained titanium , of course , oxides and sulfates. Unsure if the answer was the right one, she wrote down her answers and handed in the papers.

‘You may leave , you will be massaged wit your grade later on today. Thank you.”

With that , the woman turned her head back so that it faced the classroom, and Lucky walked out the door, not waiting to be dismissed since that had already been done, indirectly.

She went to her quarters , and just as she went in her small office , the computer beeped. She turned the screen on , and right there, in front of her, in big , bold letters, was written:

“Senior Sergeant Luckystar , congratulations on passing your Materials Science exam. Your grade is an 80.”

Smiling with happiness, Lucky saved the message in the folder designated for tose kinds of messages , and went down to the mess hall for a well-deserved meal.
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November 23, 2007 12:54:16 AM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
LCPL Baretz Sonok
Medium Squad Support Weapon Qualification

MerrSonn Munitions MRB-10 Medium Repeating Blaster- Riqimo
BlasTech DLT-20a Light Repeating Blaster- Giovanni
BlasTech T-21 Light Repeating Blaster- Myself

If I weren’t in the kind of shape I was in, which is strong for a Stormtrooper, I’d of been weighed down to a hutt’s pace, but I managed to move on at about half speed.  I had a generator back pack on, currently, hooked to the MRB-10 that I carried on my hip.  Either of my other two weapons were strapped, and thrown over each shoulder so they made a decorative ‘x’ on my back.  They had uploaded four separate scenarios, this one being the first.  This was to become accustom to the weight of all three weapons, and then each one individually, as I proved I could use each one at a time.

They let me move at my slow hustle encumbered by the three weapons, that weren’t light in weight or class.  Each one heavier than the last, and then the training officer decided it were time I start the fire fights.

The scenery changed, and I held the MRB-10 in both arms, it was fed from a generator, and this would save my worry about it only getting fifty shots per energy cell, but firing fifty shots in a small ten seconds, if I unloaded it.  I would get, a minimum, of one thousand shots with the generator, and that was if it were low on power when I received it, but I didn’t know the specifics of the generator, so I assumed I had, close to two thousand shots, and would try my best to keep my shots to that few if I could.

As always, I waited just where they put me for the com to tell me my mission parameters, and soon enough the unseen man would answer my wishes, but I’d have time to observe my surrounding first.  I hadn’t conducted a  mission in a true urban environment, the only mission like this before was the slum environment, but I seemed to be dead in the center of Coruscant, and I had only ventured there once, and that was once too much for my tastes.  Coruscant was so busy, and it was hard to keep your eyes on one person, much less know what was happening to you in the indigestion of traffic, pedestrians, and criminals. 

The voice came, finally.

“You are in the district most known for crime on Coruscant, the empire has regained control of the core worlds, and you are going to take care of the planetary disturbances, along with thirty other soldiers.  We estimate that this crime syndicate is over one hundred men strong, but they are ill equipped compared to our forces.  Make your moves wisely, Soldier, their superior numbers could swarm you if you don’t act smart, and efficiently.  You will storm their spice trade operations, and arrest those whom surrender, destroy those whom do not.”

“Roger.”

I moved forward over the rooftop of the building I started on, and looked over the edge of the building.  I could see a fire fight almost a kilometer below me, and I made my way to the turbolift as quickly as I could.  I hit ground level soon, and then rounded a corner, following the green marked units forward.  I circled to flank their attackers, and as soon as the two troopers, and their ten attackers were in view, I held the trigger of the MRB-10 against the back of the metal trigger guard, and burning white plasma launched from the end of the medium repeater in scores, and I guided it  over the criminals, and just like that, the fire fight was over.  They hadn’t been expecting their side to be flanked so soon, and they were trying to pick off our units before back up came.  Luckily, the soldiers were unharmed, because they were fighting evasive waiting for a better equipped soldier to do what I had done. 

I looked to them, and tongue toggled my com to the local frequency, and I looked at them.

“Advancing.”

“Roger, we’ll cover your back.”

“Affirmative.”

I headed the direction the goons had been covering, at a quickened pace, with the weapon on my knee it was no more than a slow jog.  I kept cautious, I had learned in my own days dealing with spice and crime, that caution and cowardice were separated by a small line, and I made sure I stayed on the correct side of it, at all times, but as a great man had once said “Honor has no place among the dead.”

I raised my hand to slow the troopers behind me, as I continued forward, slowly.  I had expected a patrol unit, and I heard their footsteps, I talked on the com.

“At least two men rounding corner in fifteen.”

I raised the repeater once again, aiming towards the chest area where they would emerge, and after the first two came by, two followers walked behind them, they were walking in a diamond pattern, and they were easy targets, but they managed to turn and shoot sooner than my unconcealed followers had anticipated, and I let loose into their ranks, but I heard the gasp of pain in my helmet. 

They were felled rather easily, but I turned and one of my troopers was on the ground favoring his leg, and I walked towards him, and then back to the other, I always sent back the wounded, the wounded weren’t good for much rather than to take more shots, because pain clouded the eyes of normal men. 

“Get him back to the base, I’ll meet up with another group.”

“Roger.”

“Take this.”

The wounded man held the DLT-20a he had towards me, and I looked at him with disbelieving eyes that he couldn’t hit his targets earlier with that.  I nodded my head with gratitude, even though my mind was filled with how inferior I thought him at the moment.

I then remembered what Mooga had said to me once, my hutt boss when I was a smuggler, enforcer, hitman, whatever.

“Never keep all your eggs in one basket.”

It was an old expression, but many smugglers lived by it, and I had an epiphany.  Mooga used to have guards patrol useless roads just to draw the attention of the law enforcement, or bounty hunters.  He unlaced the boot of one of the patrol men, and took the string with him, he had a brilliant idea, toting in the MRB-10 and the DLT-20a

I made it to the road near this one, but not too far off, and I smiled.  I had hoped to find a building like this, and I did.  A large white warehouse, it had plasisteel sliding hangar doors, and looked like upwards of one hundred men could comfortably fit inside, and it was a perfect place for a large smuggeling operation.  The top of the building read

“CORUSCANTI ANTIQUES.”

Yeah…right.

I found a cinderblock, and sat it in front of the door, and then propped my MRB-10 on it so it was angled about torso level, and then I tied the string around the trigger, and left it on the back, so I could pull it with my left hand.  I walked up to the door, and knocked, in code the usual smuggler sequence for buyers.

I then moved back to my rigged cinderblock and repeater.  I flipped the DLT-20a up onto my right shoulder, and pressed the stock to my collar, my finger on the trigger, and my eye to the scope, the string on the repeater in my left hand, and my foot slid under so I could direct the fire of the repeater. 

The door opened, and I was pleased, and now they could all die.  They came expecting a buyer, and they would find a one man army.  My left hand pulled back, and my foot lifted the repeater upwards, the plasma flew, and I saw people with blaster rifles move so they could barely see me, before they shot.  I then picked off both with a well placed shot to the head with my own DLT-20a.  I dropped the string, and hefted the repeater up walking inside, to be with the workers, most of them would be unarmed, but some probably had hold out blasters.  I looked around, no one was heavily armed, and a hold out blaster would never pierce this armor with less then ten direct shots, I assumed, since most blasters took the average of five, and a holdout did less. 

I spoke on comm.

“Command put a beacon at my position, I found the Spice Den.”

My tongue flicked

“EVERYONE UP AGIANST THE WALL, OR I SHOOT ALL OF YOU.”

They complied, I was nine inches taller than the average height amongst them, and I looked mad, only because the Stormtrooper armor has that affect on people. 

In hardly any time at all, the troopers were filling in, and by the time reinforcement criminals could arrive, we’d already arrested the workers, and loaded the spice into crates, that droids were soon to be moving. 

“The Six of you will now hunt down the three men in charge of this operation, by working in pairs of two.  We have estimated locations, and we will create a guide for you.  “

Me and five others in the crowd moved out, the com had triggered only on our frequencies, which could be controlled at headquarters, so, I thought nothing of it.  Me and another man, by my assumption, moved directly North East from our previous position. A picture of an old human showed up in my view.

“VIGOR CLOD
1.6 m
GRAY HAIR
EYES GREEN
167 POUNDS”

Read out underneath his picture.  I had left the medium repeater, in exchange for the T-21 that someone doing the loading had lied down, and I attached it to the generator that still adorned my back. 
In most situations I would of favored the DLT-20a, but I kept in mind this was gauging my use of each of the three weapons, so I had left the DLT on my back, and moved with the T-21 out front.  The criminals that didn’t make it to the spice den before they were aware of our overwhelming presence there, would now be guarding our targets.  This was going to be the hard part, I was willing to wager.

I moved into the streets, my feet carried me in a quick run, and my partner was right behind me.  Our eyes were never uncaring, taking in the slightest details as we ran.  We came to the beacon building, and moved through the door of the forty story apartment building, with one opulent looking penthouse above it, in the slums, all you could assume was rich scum. 

We moved noticed in front of the turbolift were ten men, armed.  My T-21 unleashed before they noticed up, thank goodness.  They were sitting ducks, the quick shots blazing right through them, and with a quick turn, the hallway was rid of any living hostiles.  We moved to the Turbolift, and hit the top floor.

When it opened thirty blasters were aimed right at us, so we pushed back against the wall, and blaster fired shot through the door.  I managed to ease my T-21 around the edge, and just blast randomly, without much danger, and some of the blaster fire thinned down.  Then stopped, completely.  I looked to my comrade, and we nodded charging out of the elevator just as a grenade landed inside,  I shot strafing an entire half of the soldiers, only worried about my half.  We could be dead.  The T-21 was great though, blasting through life and limb alike.  When the blasters had all died down, I had four black stains on my armor where the energy from the gun didn’t penetrate, but had hit.  I should be dead, but this armor was amazing.  I looked to the target, and tongue toggled my voice.

“You’re under arrest.”

Silence fell over and the black of the real world, and the empty helmet came back.  I sat there, hoping that the stunt I pulled hadn’t gotten me a failing grade, but who know, I had survived, at least.

Much apologies on the delay again, anywho passed once again, well done.
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Level 1: Equipment and Procedures
Story 1: Installation, Utilization, & Operation of Basic Comm Equipment

0400 Tadath Time; Stormtrooper Academy; Speciality Facility

It was a stormy day, the moisture lifted from the ground creating an almost cluttered fog above the tempest. As the day got bright, the sunshine penetrated the hinges of the nearby camp where Brock and the others slumbered. In the shift of the hour, the alarms up-roared the corridors of the facility, letting its troops know it was time for the early briefing of a new year at the academy. Brock shrugged his eyes from the light that was bothering his vision, and as he got up he stretched his limbs like he never did before. Proudly wearing his Imperial underwear, he took a moment to rehabilitate his vision. 

“Good morning sunshine” A trooper shouted from across the corridors…

Brock took a moment to acknowledge where the voice was coming from, and as his head turned on all directions, a female trooper waved at his presence, with an un-forgetful smile that uplifted a grin on Brock's face. The female trooper got closer to his location, and stood at his right, making it seem like he knew Brock from before.

“Hey there sunshine, you might be wondering why I shouted your name….. Well one is because I though you look quite cute in those Imperial underwear, and two is because I’m your helper for your training course. Now have some courtesy and throw me a salute will ya…” The trooper smiled as she compiled a quick salute to the trooper herself.

Brock stood firm and saluted the female trooper as he gazed at her rank and tag located on her officer uniform.

“I’ve heard about you Captain Cassandra…" Brock whispered while returning to at ease and putting on some clothes he had located under his bed.

The Captain smiled and smirked at his comments, but she wasn’t about to stand there and chit-chat while the clock was moving onto the next few minutes. She grabbed her luggage and threw it on her shoulder, and ordered Brock to get ready and grab all the stuff he had with him.

Brock hurried to his equipment compartment on his personal closet, and grabbed his stormtrooper armor and a few manuals he had been given at the academy assembly the night before. At 0430 both troopers took off into the storm. While outside of camp, the rain cluttered the streets and the wind blew ferociously. However the buildings blocked much of the incoming prevailing winds, which allowed both troopers to continue safetly through the streets. Hesitating to get to the other side of the facility, both troopers hasten rapidly, letting the water from the ground splash as each step got deeper. Not long before minutes passed, they arrived to their destination which was a building nearby the camp.

Brock looked as his watch, and with only a few minutes to spare until class started, they sprinted towards the second floor where his class was located.  With the paper with his class number at hand, he looked with desperation around the halls, trying to find his class. At the other end of the hall, Captain Cassandra stood in front of Brock's classroom who yelled “Having trouble finding your class?” and waved at Brock who hurried to her position.

Upon entering the classroom, the Captain walked and engaged in a conversation with the instructor while Brock took a seat alongside the instructor desk that was all the way in the front of the room.

As daylight grew brighter, and fortified the visibility of the room, the instructor gave a salute that was later followed up with a briefing.

“Good morning to all, I’m known around these parts as 2nd Lieutenant Josmel. I specialize in Communication/Infiltration for the Stormtrooper Corps. Today I’ll be instructing you on the basics of being a Communication Technician. This course is probably the easiest that you will encounter during these years of training. But believe me, if you don’t pay attention, you will find yourself in deep trouble for your career. Half of you won’t have the chance to pass this course with excellent scores, but I’m expecting a few of your to bring back a smile to my face by exceeding the expectations.

Without further or due, underneath your desk you have three sets of books. These books are your reference for the remainder of the year. Please take care of them, or you’ll be paying some Imperial Credit’s for those. The first book will contain all the equipment, repairs, and operation on the battlefield. The other two books are for more advanced courses that will require some proficient knowledge on all other previous course. But you won’t be using those until the next two lessons, so put those away for now.

Focusing on the first book, I want you to read the first chapter and identify each equipment and their operations. Then you’ll be given a test. You’ll be given up to an hour to study and make sure you get all the information into your head.”

Brock lifted his hands and cracked them forward, and pondered to himself…. This is a peace of cake. His eyes got closer to the text as he examined each section of the chapter, and began to take notes on each important subject.


                                                                                          ****************************


ALS: Active Long-range Sensors.

System of Communication to acquire waves of sound from long rage distances while maintaining the quality of sound for long periods of time. Primarily used for long range-reconnaissance operations on the battlefield.

> Infiltration to any building first comes by listening inside the walls of the enemy. A trooper is able to acquire information or listen to key movements that can be beneficial to the squad or platoon. This device is one of the few that is able to receive wave lengths from long distances, which is key to discovering suspicious activities behind enemy territory.

DER: Dedicated Energy Receptors.

This tool is used mostly in special operations that require of an equipment that is able to track down energy fields such as radiation, and unknown electrical or chemicals.

> When searching a building, the Communication Technician must identify of any energy level radiation or electrical currents that can be disastrous against his allies. This equipment is often used the stormtrooper radiation suit that is rarely used, but is defently a live saver along with this tool.

EPR: Electro-Photo Receptors.

Instead of capturing sound waves, these receptors are able to capture visual-graphic waves from electrical waves using the sun as its life battery. Meaning it is one of the most prominent tools used to see beyond the human eyes, into walls, and vast amounts of miles during the day.

FST: Full Spectrum Transceiver.

Like the EPR & the ALS, this transceiver is able to capture both; sound and visual-graphic waves. It is able to do both: transmission and reception. This tool is a 2 in 1, meaning that is has the ASL & then EPR together bonded into one tool. However, this tool doesn’t work with sun particles as life battery, and its not more prominent at receiving and capturing imagery and sound waves like the EPR & the ALS.

PLS: Passive Long-range Sensor.

Like the EPR, the PLS is able to use the sun’s heat without the use of mechanical devices.  Now the only different between these two tools, is that this tool is able to capture sound waves.

STS: Short-range Target-acquiring Sensor.

The STS cannot be used in long rage reception or transmission. Its uses are for close range-reconnaissance operations on the battlefield. This tool is able to capture detailed images from close range. It can penetrate almost any basic enemy jammer, and receive images around the perimeter it allows you to.

SJP: Sensor Jamming Projector.

This device is used for jamming any image-acquiring sensor at large distances. It is mainly used for mid-distance jamming, and is most prominent when closer to the object it is trying to jam. This tool is used outside ally bases, installed into the ground, and on secret uncovered locations that covers a wide rage perimeter of jamming.




                                                                                                  ********************



Having spent nearly an hour on studying each equipment and operations on the first chapter, he closed the already old book and gently placed it under his desk. Within few minutes, the instructor gave everyone the the usual words that always come out of a teacher’s mouth… “Put your books away, and clear your desks..” He uttered, projecting his voice throughout the room.

“Now, I’m gonna give you a test on each equipment and the different possibilities of uses on the battlefield. You may begin as soon as you have your test. Good luck.” The instructor shouted as he handed out the papers to each row.

Being on the first row and seat, Brock was fortunate enough to be first. Upon entering his ID line, Brock skimmed through the first question and nodded his head, making it seem like the questions where too easy. Nevertheless after half of the test was completed, he moved onto a more complicated section, that he quite found very difficult to answer, since it required detailed knowledge on the operations of the equipment. Nonetheless, he wasn’t about to give up, and answered each question to the best of his ability. Soon after his examination, the time was called, and everyone passed the test up the row, allowing Brock to take a quick glimpse at their answers and comparing them to his. Not having enough time to compare, the instructor took the tests and passed them through a droid that was designed to grade them.

The Lieutenant then headed towards his desk and called each trooper individually. This time, he went opposite direction, letting the last row see their results first. This made Brock even more anxious, as he bit off peaces of his fingernails as each trooper passed and nodded their head as they leaned them forward in disappointment. Seconds turned into minutes, and it was finally Brock’s turn to see his results.

He arrived at the table with his hands sweating and his face turning pale, but when he saw the scores of each section of the test, an upbringing grin lighted up his face, and not to mention his instructors face as well. According to his instructor, Brock had the 3rd highest score out of the entire classroom which consisted of 50 plus troopers.

With his cocky but proud self, Brock turned his back to the instructor facing the other students, he elegantly took his hand and brushed off his left shoulder. Letting the other know, he was the real deal…

Passed, and I actually learned something today, despite being a dang tired fella and you are going to read this excessively long review cause I felt bored and whatever.  Might be wanting sleep since I am rambling off like this...  oh well, ya umm, you pass
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November 25, 2007 1:17:43 PM    View the profile of Luckystar 
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Story 2

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Squad Specialty: Combat Engineer
Story: Metal Fabrication


Lucky woke up two hours before she was supposed to leave for her Metal Fabrication course. She got out of bed, dressed into her uniform , and headed out of her quarters  to go eat a light breakfast in the mess hall. When she arrived, there were already a fair amount of people there. She decided to go sit at a table by herself .

When she had finished eating, she put the tray on the rack and put the dishes away , waved good-heartedly at some of her friends , before heading out to the small forest behind the building. 

Once she had crossed the security gate , and was outside , she turned to the northeast and walked a mile before she saw some tress off in the distance. As she kept walking towards them , they got closer and bigger, fast.

When she reached the nearest tree, she situated herself as best she could before walking on towards the clearing.  Ten minutes later , she had reached her destination. It was a large , wide clearing. The sun shone through the big gap above her head, and warmed the lush , green grass.

She sat on the ground and waited for an instructor to show up. He did so twenty minutes later , he was tall , slim , had a shaved head and a serious look on his face. “Gunnery Sergeant Luckystar” he said with a nod of his head. “Follow me.”

He led her a little further , on the outskirts of the forest , and there on the ground were some familiar looking piles of metal . Beside it were some fusion cutters , a welding torch and some  wire mesh and barbed wire. And then , she knew what she would be doing before he said it.

“You will be building a temporary shelter using what you have displayed in front of you. Good luck.” With that, he walked away to sit on a boulder a few hundred yards away. She knew that this was her cue to start working.

She swiftly moved towards one of the piles of metal and carefully looked at what she had. There wasn’t much she could really work with , but then she had an idea.  Using a few curved pieces of metal , she fabricated a rudimentary shovel and started to dig a hole two feet deep and eight feet wide. Just enough to hide at least three men with all their gear.

Twenty minutes later , when she had finished digging , she looked at the nearly perfect square and moved on to the next step for building her shelter. Dropping the pieces of metal back into the pile, she took the wire mesh and the cutters and jumped into the hole.

Working carefully , she unrolled the roll of mesh and made it cover the sides of the pit completely. The soil was soft because of the recent rain storm they had had, which made it both easier and more difficult to work. After all four side were covered with the mesh, she used the cutters to cut off the excess before covering the floor with the remainder of the roll of mesh.

With the excess material , she jumped back out, set the material on the floor and went to go get the barbed wire. She would use the last of the mesh to make the barbed wire and the wire mesh to bond them both together.

Taking the welding torch , she pit on special goggles and set to work welding the two metals together. Ten minutes later, she had accomplished the task of welding the two metals all around the hole.  She now ha no fear that her work would collapse while she put the rest of the metal sheeting on top of the earthy hole.

She proceeded to walk to and fro the pile , bringing a fair amount of metal each time until she had all the metal she needed. Dividing the huge pile into ones according to size, she was able to tell which ones she would be using to cover the hole , and the smaller pieces she would weld together to strengthen the shelter altogether.

She started by taking the longest sheets of metal , and started to build a cover for protection. She left a hole at the front just big enough for soldiers to peek through and shoot, and a larger one at the back so that they could crawl in with their gear and bulky armour.

Once the biggest and largest pile was cleared , she went to the other ones were only the smaller pieces remained. She took them all and welded the sides of the shelter before moving on to the metal where the two halves of the roof joined.  A half hour later , welding torch hot in her hand, she looked at the finished product , satisfied.

The instructor moved towards her and her creation and scrutinized it with the same grave look on his face.

“It frustrates me how creative the soldiers of the new generation can get.  You passed soldier.”

After a final salute, they both parted ways and she headed back to Base for lunch at the mess hall with her fellow soldiers.

Yellow as per request.  Passed and nice job taking me step by step with details.  Good length as well.
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Story 1

GSGT Luckystar,

Squad Specialty: Combat Engineer
Story: Sabotage and Demolition


Lucky had passed her Materials Fabrication course with a good grade. She was happy about that , but now she was going to go on to the interesting stuff. Sabotaging and demolishing defences. She had studied on different defensive artillery to learn about their weak points. A gun turret’s weak points for example lie in its base where ammunition is positioned into the turret.
It’s the same for an AT/ST. Its long “legs” give it its balance , if one of them is damaged, it wobbles , and if one is completely destroyed, it collapse, making the vehicle crash to the ground front first , with its back end sticking up depending on which one of its walker limbs was hit.

She had a book full of all the information she needed to study. She couldn't’t wait for the exam day to come. Just as she was thinking about that , a message was sent to her datapad and it beeped once it had received all the data..


***********INCOMING TRANSMISSION*****************

Gunnery Sergeant Luckystar, you are to report at the hangars for your Sabotage and Demolition exam at 400 hours this afternoon. Failure to appear at that time will result in a failing grade. Looking forward to seeing you there.

General Vols’off
**************END TRANSMISSION**********************

The General seemed like a very strict person , so she decided to get there early. Then again , she was always there early to try and make them happy. Knowing that things were now getting harder and potentially dangerous , she took out her old Standard Stormtrooper armour and put it on her bed, lifting each armoured part, remembering its light weight. She had gone through a lot with the costume as she sometimes called it. It was scratched and dented in some places, but other wise shiny and intact.

She went down to the mess hall for a small meal at half past noon. She didn’t want to eat too much just in case. This was just like missions. When she was done her meal, she headed back to her living quarters and put the armour on , looking at each piece of armour carefully before putting it on. There was a story permanently written onto this armour. The scratches and dents told a lot.



She marched out into the hallways and walked outside. At the entrance to the Stormtrooper Complex , she turned right toward the hangars. She knew that beyond the hangars , were launching and landing fields.

There, she saw a burly , clean-shaven man. He looked old, but she knew not to underestimate people , especially her superiors. She walked up to him , and executed a crisp salute.

“Good afternoon , Gunnery Sergeant. If you would come this way , we will begin your exam.”

The moved away from any landing pads, and she surprised herself thinking about how desert the landscape looked. She carefully looked around her, and spotted a gun turret in the distance. She had researched extensively on those. She knew its inner workings, its weaknesses, and the sections that were the most armoured.

“Now to get down to business” the General interrupted the steady stream of thoughts. “Your job is to disable that turret over there” he said pointing to what she had been looking at. ‘The catch: it will be shooting blanks at you while you try and get close to it. I trust you have all you’ll need with you?”

Lucky could simply nod, waiting for him to let her get started.

“You may begin” General Vols’off watched as she silently sprinted towards the turret while taking her pack off her shoulders. As she approached , the turret activated itself and started shooting. The first shot hit her in the chest , but she managed to dodge the rest as it started shooting in random directions, unable to correctly follow her signature.

When she finally got to its base, she heard it whir as it remained motionless, knowing that the soldier was not in its shooting range any longer. Lucky took a glob of C-4 out of her pack and set a small amount of what she had in strategic points on the turret. As she backed away , the turret started searching for its target once more.

As she took a grenade out of her belt, its infrared sensor spotted her and it let out two shots. She managed to avoid one, but the other one hit her in the leg. She stumbled as it stung her skin but did not let go of the grenade. She started to move and at the same time, pulled the pin and threw the grenade with all her might. It hit the turret and fell right beside one of the patches of explosive.

A second later , a deep boom was heard and a soft rumble in the ground was felt. When she looked up at the turret , sparks were coming out of the barrel. Knowing that it could still be functional , she quickly approached it and popped a shot into the barrel with her DC-15 Blaster Pistol.

She heard a soft Tick! as the bullet lodged itself at the very back of the barrel , and just like that it was over.

With a sigh , she took off her helmet and wiped her sweaty forehead. The general was walking towards her with an impressed look on his face. ‘I’ve never seen someone work so quickly and efficiently in five years.”

He looked at her dented armour and smiled “go take a hot bath. You’ll be pretty bruised tonight.”

He saluted at the same time as she did , and both of them marched back towards the Complex in silence.

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Apologize for the delay.  Passed and I can see your writing clearly improving with each specialty.  So let's try to keep that trend up   You are doing an excellent use of detail without overdoing it.  Be sure to post your next specialty in the new format, namely a separate topic.  Good work, and good luck.
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November 28, 2007 12:41:59 AM    View the profile of baretz_sonok 
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Heavy Weapons Qualification
•  BlasTech V-Web Portable Artillery Piece
•  BlasTech V-90 Blaster Cannon
•  MerrSonn Munitions EWHB-10 Heavy Repeating Blaster

I looked over the area the V-90 Blaster Cannon on my shoulder.  I didn’t see the artillery piece that was suppose to be along this path.  I was ordered to brake rank, and scout this thing out so that it couldn’t bombard the squad any longer with it’s pesky attack.  I stood in full stormtrooper armor, waiting to see it on the horizon, while my squad mate drove the speeder we both occupied.

Then my eyes fell on it, and my finger initiated the nova that would bring the machine, its early demise.  Then, I’d find those operating it, and they’d meet the same fate.  The cannon launched its first blast, and I noticed guards were taking defensive positions.  I dropped the cannon to the ground.  The shield already being peppered with blaster fire, as I spun the EWHB around to take aim on those whom assaulted us.  My fury of blasts cut their ranks, suppressing them until they could be of no more real use, and I looked back to the artillery piece, peppering its own shields with the EWHB, waiting until my shots penetrated to pull out the V-Web, which lied close behind me. 

There was no opposition whom dared raise his head while the EWHB was firing, and that was wise of them.  The speeder pulled to a halt, and my arms quickly moved to the V-Web throwing it over my left shoulder, as I leapt from the back of the speeder, it in my arms.  I dropped to my right knee, taking aim on the generator of the artillery piece, and the flare of the rocket was all anyone could see before the storm arose.  With the destruction of the generator thunder echoed around us, and electricity pierced the sky.  I grinned with my success.

Another blast, and the plasisteel that used to be the artillery piece could only be called debris, and then I dropped the V-Web back into the Speeder.  I lifted the Blaster Cannon, and charged forward towards their base. I didn’t even look back to see what my support was doing, I assumed he’d be watching the vehicle.  My eyes moved, and with the EWHB’s fire gone, the soldiers were standing back up, and I had nine more shots with this cannon in my arms before I had to reload. 

The first soldier I saw, they seemed to be mimicking our armor style, but this beauty in my hands would deliver a molten death, that could only be on par with being hit by a sun.  He’d be dead faster than he knew what was happening, and sure enough the large red plasma of the gun seared through the air, and relieved the man of the worst looking part of him.

The next was a tad smarter, and immediately opened fire, but he wasn’t skilled at all, the bursts missing me, I’m not sure by how much, but a centimeter and kilometer are all the same when they miss.  These bastards didn’t have a choice in the matter, I was here to kill them, and there wasn’t a thing they could do about it. 
I topped the hill, and those morons were standing in form.  I took aim, and with one blast the first was obliterated, and the right side of two was seared from their bodies, and a second shot would put a whole through their other side.  I charged forward, my lust for battle driving me.  I got to the blast door, but they had left it open, I headed in, with death fueling my drive.  It reminded me of the old days, blaster fire, the scent of spice, the intensity of taking on the ‘authorities.’  I am that authority now, but my blaster skills have not deteriorated to the skills of those I had long since lied to rest.

People tell me, something is looking out for me, something has given me an edge when there was nothing but death to look forward too, and I know something is looking out for me.  I am.

I stormed the hallways with unbelievable skill, and my blaster cannon fired its unbiased shots, stealing life from alien, human, men, and women with no regret.  The click of my energy cell was heard as it fell to the ground, my left hand brought the next to feed the hungry weapon, and then my route continued. 

I had emptied their base with only two energy cells, and then battle called, and I ran back to the speeder, my squad mate starting the coils, and off we went towards the battle field.  I dropped the weapon, and grabbed the mounted EWHB blaster.  We arrived to see the fight had started, and we were out numbered by the hundred, but the shields on this thing could take several blaster bolts, I wasn’t worried.

My finger held down the trigger, and divine wrath would bring them all to their demise, my wrath.  I kept the trigger squeezed firmly, as I directed the fire across their numerous ranks. Bolts flew at my direction, but I was keeping them suppressed, I was still away from the battle, I was suppressing from afar, and in that time my squad was picking them off.

Once I got a little closer the targeting could pick up on the hostiles, and it was simply locking on one, firing a burst, and moving to find a new target.  Heavy Weapons were by far the easiest kills, with the exception of sniper rifles, for me.  They packed the power and stamina to shoot for enough of eternity to get the job done, and I could spray relentlessly on my enemies. 

I knew wars weren’t fought on open ground, and never again would I get the privilege of taking almost a hundred men down in laser fire, but it was a wonderful feeling, and maybe one day I could do it again, if the enemies were stupid.  The speeder slit to a halt, just as the enemies armor was topping the hill, and I changed weapons again.  I hefted V-Web onto my shoulder again, and waited for a lock.  I aimed up, and fired.  The shot flew true as the entrance of the repulsor tank was crushed by the massive blow. 

Nothing like some fireworks.  Shot number two, I lowered several inches, and the shot hit just under the tank, letting the explosion throw the repulsors off, and the explosion ricocheted through the machine, until it dropped, unfunctional to the ground.  The rest of the squad was picking off more people, as I took aim at the last repulsor tank, and I grinned, this time I wouldn’t waste the extra ammunition.  I thought back to my familiarizations, and remember that the CSA tanks had a weak spot inside the small turrets, it was so close to the cockpit and the main computer of the craft that if you could get a shell in their, or a blast from any sort of high stopping anti-vehicle blast it would kill the driver, or fry the computer enough you didn’t need to kill him. 

My next shot took a moment to line up, and I anticipated it’s speed, setting my corsairs a fraction above the turret, now moving down a hill.  My shot launched, and I grinned as I saw it.

“Hole in one.”

I spoke, just after the rocket had made its way into the turret, and the shell went off inside of the guts of the machine.  It had got its shots, my virtual squad members might have been killed, but I did my best. 

“Very Gung Ho.”

The voice rang in my ears, and I looked up towards my instructor, as my hands pushed the helmet off.

“You would have been killed in the field.”

“No sir.”

“You would of.”

“I have to disagree.”

“You pass, Barely.”

“I can accept that.”

I turned and headed towards the exit.  Getting closer, and soon this class would be resolved.  I was getting excited.

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