Name:  Mykill Doomslayer
Age:  approx. 35 to 40
race:  human
hair color:  multi-colored brown
complexion: olive-brown
eye-color:  steel-grey
home planet:  Osgolad
height:  6 ft
weight:  !80 lbs.
piloting style:  ace

Pyshical Desription:  Mykill is not the type of character to be weighed or measured.  However upon his induction to the Vast Empirial Navy,  it was found that he is just about 6 foot tall and around 180 lbs. .  Many scars he has from living a harsh life on the fridgid Outer world of Osgolad.  None of this has stopped him from trying oh so hard to become a part of the New Empire where he feels he may become part of the greater universe.

Story: Please see previous and put them together.PLEASSSSSSE

Emotional description:  Mykil is a chacacter that survives.  He has been born and grown to be a chieftain on a veryy harsh world.  He has leadership capabilities, along with  knowing how to get along with people, who know how to get along with him.  He will not put up with being down-trodded as he would not down-trod someone else.  He is known to stick up for the little guy and be a Savior of all who are DOGGED OUT by any means. He is a man of few words.  However what words he says become VERY significant in the lives of those who surround him.  Although at many times he seems cold and calculating,  he is actually the best friend anyone could ever have.  He is mentally advanced,  through the Empirial Sciences Dept.,  but still lacks certain skills needed to advance in his chosen field of Empirial Navy.  He hopes to gain those skills through further interation with his fellow companions.


Is this what you were looking for? Mykill
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

Kadann doesn't do the Navy stuff. You should be talking to Shazam or Japheth. And for your actions before your chances are mighty slim you'll be given a warm response.
 
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NazgulSquadron

FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~

Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)

Why does Darth Vader want cookies?

I thought it might help if you could see a good bio from around here.  This is one I picked up off of a guy a while back and I kind of wish he would have stuck around, but its just a pretty complete bio to me.  Anywho- hopefully this'll help a little.

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Name: Azpeth Piett
Callsign: Azpeth
Age: 21
Height :6"2
Hair Colour: White
Eye Colour: Red
Skin Colour: White  Albino
Planet of Birth: Corellia - grew up on Imperial Centre

Appearance:

Azpeth is just over 6" with a slim build. Hardened from years of training within the Academy and later with COMP FORCE, Azpeth has a gymnasts figure, strong but without huge bulk which can sometimes be deceptive.
Born Albino, Azpeth has white skin and short white hair with piercing red eyes, his features made all  the more noticeable by his preference for black clothes which are always finely tailored in a minimalist military style.
Azpeth's walks with a courtiers grace and has the affectations and speech patterns of the Corusant nobility, he can sometimes appear effete but this is only a front to keep others guessing.
Azpeth has a keen interest in technology and gadgets and has had his brain cybernetically enhanced, a small node behind his ear allowing him to access and process data almost instantly, this enhancement has added to his image of being emotionless and logical, and one he has not discouraged.
He is also rarely without his Data Slate

Personality:
The death of both his parents and his austere 'New Order' upbringing have had a strong effect on Azpeth. Even as a baby he was quiet and withdrawn but now as man he comes across logical and emotionless.
Azpeth models himself as one of Corusants gentleman elite, with all the mannerisms and social affectations of his adopted home world. With his distant uncle as role model, Azpeth studied the rare Holotapes he received as if they were from the Emperor himself; taking in every lesson that Sorel gave him.
Azpeth is calm and self-controlled, only becoming animated in discussions of military or political nature or in the heat of battle where he takes on a sort of restrained manic appearance.
Azpeth is a natural leader and manipulator, every action he takes is carefully considered and can be very selfless if it serves the greater good.
Azpeth is careful not to make enemies as they may be of some use later, but he has a long memory and is very unforgiving. Patient and controlled, he will wait however long it takes should he feel he his justified in revenge.
Despite the many actions he took part in for COMP FORCE and with the Palpatine Counterinsurgency Front, and his loyalty to the New Order, Azpeth does not hate aliens, but sees them as lesser species with their place within the Empire. 

Goals and Motivation:
Azpeth is utterly Loyal to the New Order and Empire. A firm believer in 'The end justifies the means' he will take whatever actions are necessary to survive and successed.
A product of the New Order he sees his own success as part of its, his own opponents as opponents to the New Order.
A supporter of Grand Moff Tarkin's teachings, Azpeth sees all those killed by the Death Star as mere numbers, a justifiable cost to pay for peace.
Azpeth sees the Imperial Military as the New Orders best weapon, and the Imperial Navy the best opportunity to develop himself and succeed, following in the footsteps of uncle and continuing the work of the man he most admired, Grand Moff Tarkin.

History:
Azpeth piett was born on the planet Correllia in the last years of the Galactic Republic he was the only son of Horel and Arcadia Piett.
A wealthy family with pro-Palpatine connections, Horels older brother, Sorel, had already distinguished himself within the soon to be Imperial Navy and would one day be an admiral and serve under Lord Vader himself.
For Horel, life on Corellia was enough, looking after the families shipping interests and serving as an occasional advisor to the Corellian Diktat, a position that afforded him some access to further the aims of the emerging New Order.
But a future os one of Corellia's elite was not to be for Azpeth when during a tour aboard the Piett family's newest spaceliner, 'The Corellian Orbiter' turn to disaster when it was attacked by Seperatists and left a dead in space.
Everyone on board had been killed as the air escaped from the ships many blast holes, but with their last breaths Azpeths parents had managed to get him to an escape pod. The pod had malfunctioned and not jettesioned, but the boy had lived and was rescued when CORSEC police investigated the drifting hulk after it had been reported missing.

Barely a year old, with most of his family now dead, Azpeth was sent into the care of his Uncle, now Captain Piett, who was stationed at Corusant and was enrolled in one of the first of the New Orders new academies, run by COMPNOR (The Committee for the Preservation of the New Order) and committed to bringing up the next generation of imperials.

Azpeth spent the next sixteen years growing up within the Academy, bereft of his parents his only personal contact was with his uncle through Holotapes that he received intermittently, but even theses were not personal letters, rather the Captains own lessons and lectures on how to be a good imperial citizen, how to be a good tactician and how to serve the New Order.
Despite this austere and indoctrinating upbringing, or more importantly because of it, Azpeth thrived. Cutting himself off from his emotions, he threw himself into his studies and majored in Military History, Strategy and Political Science one year early.
At eighteen Azpeth had completed his doctorate, the final paper 'Justification for Military force: the political Blade' which flag waved Imperial aggression, becoming a standard text.
Finishing at the Academy Azpeth spent his first year as chairman of the local SAGroup (Sub-Adult Group) unit, the youth wing of COMPNOR, which he had been active in during his academy years, and then transferred to the newly formed COMP FORCE which had been set up by COMPNOR to be its military branch.

For the next two years Azpeth remained in COMP FORCE where he rose to the rank of Sector Force Group Leader and was responsible for several 'spontaneous anti-alien riots'. Azpeth was also involved in the infamous 'Calamari spire incident' when a whole sector Spire of Calamari were killed when they were trapped inside and the temperature controls were 'accidentally 'set to boil.

The death of the Emperor and his uncle at Endor was a big shock to Azpeth and although he recovered it had changed him, leaving him less naive but still convinced in the ultimate rightness and success of the New Order.
Throwing himself back into his work, Azpeth worked on the defence of Imperial Centre and eventually became part of Director Ysanne Isards Palpatine Counterinsurgency Front.
With the fall of Imperial Centre Azpeth went underground and with the PCF begun a campaign of terror and sabotage, but soon realised that it was a war that could not be won. Sickened by the fall of his home and in his eyes Ysanne Isards betrayal, Azpeth fled just as the Krytos virus began to spread and returned to Corellia where he went into hiding.
Still loyal to the Ideals of the New Order, Azpeth surveyed the fracturing Empire and saw in the Vast Empire remnant the hope of a fully restored Galactic Empire. Making his way to Vast Empire space Azpeth signed up to the Imperial Navy, recommitting himself to the Imperial Cause and a new future following in the footsteps of his uncle, eager for revenge on the rebellion for all their crimes and to one day see the liberation of Imperial Centre from their unworthy hands.

 
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*Flash Was Here...*

CMDR/LtC Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

I am going to try with all my heart, to comply with what you want. I understand some of the things you are trying to tell me, however,  I have been writing for years and can't understand why you are all so critical. I have had a lot of fun chatting in Yoder's bar, if you care to look?And here in general . I personally think we all,minus a few comments,have a book going on there. Not only that  but I as much as anyone, just like good conversation. Please don't give up on me yet. I really don't get on the computer that much and when I do I have 15 million things to do before I can even start here, so thank you for your patience AND I CAN'T HELP IT, signed MYKILL
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

Give up on you?  Lol- we don't do that.  Allow me to help you further with your bio without actually doing it for you- that I can't do.

This is the two bios combined without me actually editing anything:

Name:  Mykill Doomslayer
Age:  approx. 35 to 40
race:  human
hair color:  multi-colored brown
complexion: olive-brown
eye-color:  steel-grey
home planet:  Osgolad
height:  6 ft
weight:  !80 lbs.
piloting style:  ace

Pyshical Desription:  Mykill is not the type of character to be weighed or measured.  However upon his induction to the Vast Empirial Navy,  it was found that he is just about 6 foot tall and around 180 lbs. .  Many scars he has from living a harsh life on the fridgid Outer world of Osgolad.  None of this has stopped him from trying oh so hard to become a part of the New Empire where he feels he may become part of the greater universe.

(Beginning of inserted story)

Story: Life on the worlds of the Outer Rim is known to be harsh.However,none are as harsh as the fridgid world of Osgolad.The people there are not indigenous to that world.Stranded there for more than a thousand years,they have no memory of thier ancestrial beginings.Perhaps a wrecked frieghter or even a lost colony,they do not know.

They are basically a nomadic people,movings to warmer climates in the colder months and following the thaws to better hunting in the warmer months.They are a rugged people,herding cattle and sheep and riding something similar to a horse with horns.

Mykill Doomslayer is thier cheiftan for he is the greatest warrior and hunter of thier tribe.Every once in a while a young strong warrior will arise to challenge his position as he did so many years ago to his chieftan,yet so far he has risen to all challenges to maintain his position.As thier leader he has all the perks that go with with that position.However,there a many drawbacks too.When accosted by the wandering hordes of Lardians,a hungry hunting wolf like creature,it is his decision to either stand and fight or perhaps take losses in thier herds and run.

While on a hunt on one clear night,Mykill looked to the skies and seeing all the glorious stars that shone there,he glimpse a star that was not the same as the usual stars.This star seemed to be heading toward him.It grew brighter and brighter.Soon it was almost upon him.He momentarily cowarded as it passed right over his head.It continue on for just a little ways before crashing to the ground within walking distance.As Mykill aproached the fallen star,two figures began to emerge from an apparent hole in it.He drew nearer.Suddenly,a voice said unto him" phcert.Can you help us with shelter in exchange for food till a rescue team arrive.phcert"Mykill nodded in agreement.Although,he could understand the strangers language,his people were a people of very few words.

Mykill lead the strangers to the caves his tribe were currently residing in for the colder months.There they warmed themselves by the fire,shared the strangers food and held quite a long conversation.It was over the next couple of days that Mykill learned about the empire and the fate of the galaxy as it now stood.During this time he had begun to think that maybe he could persue a better life than he had thus far lived."Do you think there might be a place for me Leon in this empire of yours?"he asked the what he came to know as a stormtrooper."I don't know.What do you think Atrius?Any room for a big strapping man like this in Our empire?"Leon snickered to his pilot companion."I suppose we might find some job for him to do.I tell you what when our rescue team arrives you can leave with us and when we get back I'll let you wash my new tie fighter."Atrius laughed.Within a few days the rescue shuttle that had homed in upon the fallen stars homing beacon had picked up Leon,Atrius and Mykil where Mykil was transported to a Naval recruitment office.The End for now or the Beginning?

(End of inserted story)

Emotional description:  Mykil is a chacacter that survives.  He has been born and grown to be a chieftain on a veryy harsh world.  He has leadership capabilities, along with  knowing how to get along with people, who know how to get along with him.  He will not put up with being down-trodded as he would not down-trod someone else.  He is known to stick up for the little guy and be a Savior of all who are DOGGED OUT by any means. He is a man of few words.  However what words he says become VERY significant in the lives of those who surround him.  Although at many times he seems cold and calculating,  he is actually the best friend anyone could ever have.  He is mentally advanced,  through the Empirial Sciences Dept.,  but still lacks certain skills needed to advance in his chosen field of Empirial Navy.  He hopes to gain those skills through further interation with his fellow companions.

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Alright- that's a pretty good sized bio, do we agree?  I have a couple of things that are actually kind of minor, and then I think we can finally move you onto Chapter 2. 

My comments are as such- you need to make that 'story' part as well written as the newest bio you just presented us with.  One of my many ethos is to never go as far as to edit a recruits bio- if they can't do it themselves they can't be expected to write here.  Since you know where the edit button is, that shouldn't be hard.  You can do one of two things- copy and paste this into a new post and edit it up so that it looks good, or go back to your original bio there and use the edit button, then copy and paste your 'story' into the bio.  Either way, I just want to see this completed bio done by you.

Things I'd like you to mess with or change in your bio- your character sounds like a caveman, lol.  That's just the way he comes off to me, though you do use a more indian term by calling him a 'cheiftan.'  I suppose my big thing is that they have to fight for supremacy and yet they speak coherantly and logically- does that fit to you?  I mean, if he is getting some kind of education somewhere- that's different.  In fact, that would make it far more likely for some people to take your character back to the Naval Academy.  I mean- he's going to be flying a TIE Fighter right?  Somehow, I don't think making fire by use of lint and stones will get him into the Academy.  So- you need to show a place where he has somekind of intelligence, or say that they don't take him directly to the Vast Empire Navy.  If you want to keep him inferior, you could say that they took him to a special center to teach him the ways of the galaxy and common knowledge- reading, writing, science and mathematics.  That could actually be kind of interesting because it'd be like bringing the wild child into humanity and teaching him how to fly a ship!  We just need to make it obvious that he's been well educated along the line somewhere, because you can't just become> a pilot.  The Academy is supposed to make you one essentially, but good understanding of the basics is necessary- something your character seems to lack.  Oh- and get those names corrected in for who comes and picks you up- that'd be Leon and Atrick, btw.  Also, I dunno why they'd be crash landing down there, but if you could supplement a reason there as well, because the both of them wouldn't ever meet in their recruits phase...  That's getting a bit technical, but perhaps you could just make some people up for now if you don't want to put a story behind it.

Fix those things (the look and feel of your bio so it can be read smoothly and there are no spelling errors as well as the bit on how Mykill was educated and made able to fly a TIE Fighter), and I think we can move you on to Chapter two.  Can't wait to see where you go with this, man- keep rockin.
 
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CMDR/LtC Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

Also, I do read and reread my writings. That is the only way it has come across as well as it has.  I do miss somethings though and this is where I'm going to start using the tools you all have provided me. I tried going back to the WIKI site and editing what little I have written and well,  I know you told me before to just post here, but like I said before, I'm slow enough dude do I really have to retype all this stuff again?  I wish I could just go back to your combined posts of my bios and edit it. Give me a clue,because I have some ideas on how to make it better along with making the changes you have already asked for i.e. While on a hunt on a cold clear night should be, While hunting on one cold clear night.  And I liked using stormtrooper Leon and, yes it should be pilot Attrick, and I even messaged them that I was using thier names in my bios and they haven't  messaged me back to tell me not to. So I took that as them being my sponsers sortta. How they got there? I might be able to explain later. For now I just wanna concentrate on some of those ideas you have already given me. Should I go back to the WIKI site and just start over? I almost did that as a new entry but it gave me a warning to not repeat myself and I couldn't find my old stuff so I just got outta there. You have already warned me not to mess around in there too much and I won't. Just kind of read this and I already have several ideas exploding in my head about what you have said.  I just need an easy way of conveying it. thanks Shazaam
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

up by the date, the e-mail, the person info, and the pm buttons.
 
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There is nothing wrong with fear.
You need never be ashamed of it, as long as it dosen't stop you functioning.
Fear is your natural warning system; it keeps you alive so that you can can fight.
Show me a man who isn't afraid, and i'll show you a fool who is a danger to his entire ship.
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92% of teens have moved onto rap. If you are part of the 8% that still listen to real music,
copy and paste this into your signature.
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TRN /CRW C-3PX2 /Train'n Sqd , Not Placed /No Wing /No Ship /Train'n Flt /VEN /VE /(aviation certificates) , No Medals
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I'm not really sure what you mean by all of that.  I think I told you before I don't know much about cut paste and edit but I was able to edit  MY  BIOGRAPHY after you put it all together. Thank you Shazaam. It's late and Iv'e been working very hard at work and then on my bios tonite sorry,but thank you for your time. I hope you are pleased with the changes I have made . Lemme know if I need to tweak it a lil. I'm kinda pleased so don't be too harsh
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

Mykill, I'm taking over for Shazam for the time being.

Look over your Bio once more, correct any spelling errors and make sure you have 1 space between words and two spaces between periods and words.

Also, about Copy and pasting.  When your finished with a post or your bio, remember to copy and paste it so that if you loose it, you can always paste it back and it will work.  It helps when you spell check after posting also.

Also, if you could, please edit your last posts instead of double posting, that really helps out when reading man.

Move on to the following when you have completed the above.

'Chapter 2: Pilot Procedure' .  There's an assignment there, so make sure you post it here so we can see it.  After that, I'll critique it quick, but in the meantime, you can start looking over the third and final chapter 'The Post.'  Those can all be found off
of the site below.

Flight School

P.S. I'm also part of the training Staff, basically the Executive officer, so your questions can be directed towards both of us now, depending on which you choose.


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Jaden Khaar
Aegis Squadron

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CMDR/WO1 Jaden Khaar/Aegis 1-1 (Aegis 1)/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:S] (SV) (CBVx2)

Commander of Aegis Squadron

The assignment for 'Pilot Procedure' isn't like a normal story post; instead, you're required to pick two maneuvers and explain their offensive and defensive purposes.  This is to give you a simple base for your writing when you make story post in your squadron, but it also helps to build your tactical vocabulary.  So- pick two that you think you understand pretty well, or maybe pick some harder ones and see if you can get them in as well.  Either way- if you have questions, just ask and we'll go into detail for you.

As for the story post in chapter three- yes, those are like normal story post except that you'll be writing on your own, so those may take a little more time. 

I gotta say man- its really good to see you're keeping a good attitude through all of this, I'm really proud of ya.  Now- lets get through this and make sure you come out one hell of a pilot.  Keep Rockin.
 
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SC/CMD Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

plus if some on could get on real time with me and explain cut and paste and such ,that  would be cool . sorry for tyhe informality tonite but i'm tired don't even feel like capitalizing ttyl
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

I'd rather not because I like to keep things under really good record- I'm just pessimistic like that, so, if you'd like to continously edit versions of your bio- just make a new thread.  Say "Mykill DoomSlayer Biography".  That way you don't have to interfere with any other post at all and people can critique you on that alone- does that sound alright or is it important enough that you'd like to keep your bio in here for some reason?

For Pilot Procedure- you need to explain two Basic Fighter Maneuvers (BFM) to me in your own words.  You describe their offensive and defensive capabilities, so I'll still need that to make sure you know what you're talking about- don't just copy and paste.  Then we move on to Chapter 3, which I'm getting the idea is going to take a while, so I think we should get a few things cleared up-

Though BT is supposed to be done at one's leisure, I think it sets a bit of a bad example for your future career in the VEN.  Why?  Activity requires a bit of speed, and you are kind of lacking in that department, but don't get me wrong- you're doing awesome.  What I mean is that you only give out a message about every four days when we could be through this in about that time.  So, what I'd like to do is have you really work hard on this next section so we can get you through, and for you to send me a report this Thursday as to what you've been doing.  As a part of Venom squadron you should really be reporting as well as the rest of the recruits, so I'll start doing that.

What should a report look like- for now: just tell me what you've been up to and lemme know if you have any questions, comments or concerns outside of what we're up to now. 

So lets review- two basic flight maneuvers in your own words, a report this thursday and a little more checking up on your thread so we can get through this next chapter.  That doesn't mean rush things, I'm just saying check up on this thread to see my comments so you can get to work right away rather than four days later.  Does that make sense, or no?  Keep Rockin.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

SC/CMD Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

Also just to start things off right , Mykill Doomslayer Venom Squadron reporting sir . It's Monday Aug. 28th 2006 . I have been working hard on my bio along with reading chapter II pilot procedure and trying to complete my assignment there . I hope my assignment is completed . Lemme know if it isn't .I will report later this week . At least again by Thursday as instructed . signing off Mykill Doomslayer

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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6

Thanks for being so active man- good to see you working hard.  If you feel that people are being to uptight around you, its probably because of the general ideology behind the term 'noob'- meaning that you supposebly have no authority in or around our forums until you gain a certain reputation- preferably one that asserts optimism and other gains for the VEN rather than immature, close-minded or overall naive thinking.  Now- see which describes you and then maybe you can redefine yourself: I actually don't know because I haven't seen where you've been posting.

Anywho- those two maneuvers look great- lets move you on to Chapter 3 then.  I actually thought that I'd mentioned I'd be away until Wednesday Night and that you could start on Chapter 3, but if not- sorry.  If so: read closer.  Either way- we need to get Chapter 3 done for ya so we can move you on to the final phase.  I think you've made huge strides, but if you have any problems with members or you think you're being treated unfairly- lemme know.  I'll check it out.  But hey, man: don't become a tattle-tail either: you know perfectly well what I mean so just be cool and have some fun. 

Note: Awesome to have some real air-force people around here, though you can't much prove that in our realm, unfortunetly.  Never the less, you should excell in our flight department then!  Keep Rockin.
 
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SC/CMD Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

It's Thursday August 31st . Mykill Doomslayer reporting as ordered sirs . I still have unfinished business in the lounge and then Friday , Saturday nights , along with Sunday morns are harsh at my work so if I can get a little reprieve here I thank you .
I think , you Shazam , might be called upon to mediate a discussion me and your #1 writer Mr. Trevor Evenson are currently having .
I look forward to your unbiased opinions . I will report again by Tuesday at the latest . This is a big holiday cook-out weekend for me .
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6