Hi I am new at this game and I need some help

1. how do you change the password ?
2. how do you change your Bio ?
3. how do you get to the place where you change you Bio ?

Any help you give will be very helpful to me thank you
 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

ty man thanks for the help
 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

ok I wrote down a  new bio now please tell me what ou think

Name: Mounder Gardal Skardon
Callsign: Demion_Skar
Race: Zabrak
Eyes: Dark Red
Hair: None Warrior horns instead of hair
Skin Colour: unknown since he has got war tattoo's over his body
Weight: 55Kg +/-
Height: 5"8'
Personality: Vicious when fighting but usually keeps to him self at times
Skills: Hand to Hand combat, brilliant Fighter pilot, brilliant at war tactics
Planet: Iridonia
History:
    Mounder Skardon was always training on hand-to-hand combat or flying his fighter.  He also studied war tactics, which he was fascinated in them.  One day Mounder and a friend where training with each other and then it started ether the Rebels or space pirates came down and started firing at his village where is parents where.  But there was nothing he could do to help so he staid in hiding until they went away but they never went.  So that fateful night he sneaked down to where his ship was but it was under guard so he went in and killed the 4 guards that where guarding the ship then he flew away.
      Now that he had no home to go to and no family to go to he was enraged by what happened he wanted revenge and he knew that he might get revenge if he joined the Empire then he could kill Rebels and pirates alike.  But before he joined the Empire he trained non-stop in his skills of hand-to-hand combat and his fighter pilot skills to get them top-notch so that he could get in to the Empire. 
  Then one day he heard that there was a battle between the Empire and the Rebels and the rebels destroyed the Empires space station called the Death Star then he thought it must have been the Rebels that attacked my village so he went to enrol into the Empire's Imperial Navy hoping that he might get to fight the rebels.

Now:
      Now Mounder is training in the Imperial Navy Academy to make sure he gets a place in a Squadron so that he might finally manage to take out his vengeance on the Rebels.  People think he is mad because he is always training but he thinks they are fools because they are not training when ever they can.  Because that is what will make him great training and then when it comes to the real thing he will be ready.

 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

he is very caring and would protect someone with his life
he is someone that would have a laugh if you managed to make him open up to you
what drove him to train so much to be prepared for what ever happens he would make sure he is ready
he loved his family very much
his family where murdered by the attackers so he wants to avenge them
the tattoo's well they where done because he did the same as Darth Maul he wanted to strike fear in to his opponents
his tattoo's background colour is ........ is a crimsion red
and main tattoo's are are like a really dark blue almost black but not black
I guess they attacked the planet to take over but not a slave trade since all in his village where killed

I forgot to put this is he is easy to interact with he can be easy going (when not training)
  he gets on with most people after a while of getting to know them
I have to admit when he is in battle rage takes over and controls him so he might not listen to orders like fall back because he wants to give the enemys a taste of what his village receved
 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

Name: Mounder Gardal Skardon
Call-sign: Demion_Skar
Race: Zabrak
Eyes: Dark Red
Hair: None- Warrior horns instead of hair
Skin Colour: Unknown since he has war tattoos all over his body; background tattoo colour is crimson red and main tattoo colour is dark blue.  Almost black but not black.
Weight: 55Kg +/-
Height: 5"8'
Scars: He has a scar going down the left side of his face and he has scars across his chest as well.
Personality: Vicious when fighting but usually keeps to himself; gets along with other people after getting to know them.
Skills: Hand-to-hand combat, brilliant fighter pilot, brilliant at war tactics.
Planet: Iridonia

History:

Mounder Skardon was always training in hand-to-hand combat or flying his fighter.  He also studied war tactics, which he was fascinated with.  One day Mounder and a friend were training with each other and then it started; either the Rebels or pirates came down and started firing at his village where his parents where. 

But there was nothing he could do to help so he stayed in hiding until they went away but they never went.  So that fateful night he snook down to where his ship was but it was under guard so he went in and killed the four guards that where guarding the ship.  He got the scars on his face and chest during the fight with the four guards.  After he'd killed them, he got in his ship and flew to safety although there was no where he could really be safe, he thought.

Now that he had no home to go to and no family, he became enraged by what had happened and he wanted revenge.  He knew that he might get revenge if he joined the Empire then he could kill Rebels and pirates alike...  But before he joined the Empire he trained non-stop in his skills of hand-to-hand combat and his fighter pilot skills to get them top-notch so that he could get in to the Empire.

Then one day he heard that there was a battle between the Empire and the Rebels.  He heard the Rebels destroyed the Empire's space station...  The Death Star.  Then he thought it must have been the Rebels that attacked his village.  So he went to enroll into the Empire's Imperial Navy hoping that he might get to fight the Rebels.

Now:

Now Mounder is training at the Imperial Naval Academy to make sure he gets a place in a squadron so that he might finally manage to take out his vengeance on the Rebels.  People think he is mad because he is always training but he thinks they are fools because they are not training whenever they can.

He trains because he knows that when the time comes, if he prepares- he'll be ready.  He trains constantly on various things, but when he does have time he is normally found with his freinds in the Imperial Navy.

Personality (Extended):

Mounder (Demion_Skar) is a bit foolish because he does a lot of things out or hatred and anger.  When it comes to fighting the rebels he wants to do as much damage to them as possible, even if it means getting himself killed; he hates the Rebels.

But he isn't sure that it was the Rebels that attacked his village because he noticed they use different fighting techniques than those that where used to attack his village.  He doesn't care any more because he wants revenge, but it could be controlled with help, then he would be an excellent pilot to work with.
 
But even he admits it will be hard to get the need for revenge out of him.

(OOC: I hope this is better than the last one)

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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

I kind of messed with your bio to show you what it would look like in the 'superior presentable fashion.'  As for how you would do that in your profile part- I think you have to use html.  So before every paragraph you put in a <.p> and after <./p>  Without the dots of course.

Now- I beleive you are ready to move onto the next step- I suggest you just get it out of the way so you aren't wanting to wait and pull this training process out any longer than it has to be.  So, post your assignement here when you're done.

The link to the next portion is below- the best to you. 

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Pilot_Procedure
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Sir I hope you don't mind me helping some of the new recruits ?
I just like to help them with stuff that I know. 
So I hope you don't mind. It is very intersting what I have been reading though.
 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

Alright, you asked about how you would go about writing your story post?  I don't entirelly understand your question- most, if not all of the instructions are there.  Are you fishing for ideas or do you just flat out not understand?  I might be able to provide you with some example post if you need them.  Please indulge me though- thankyou.

Any other problems, questions or concerns (maybe comments?), feel free to state them.  Keep rockin.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Well- did you see the part about 'Space Flight.'  That has all the instructions you need man-  you go out into space with some random people from the training roster and your commander (which you get to choose), and then write about you guys doing basic flight manuevers for the first time.  It'll be out in space so no G's or anything- real simple stuff.  It should give you an opportunity to explain things like the barrel roll in a more detailed fashion because you'll be talking about your character's emotions as you go through it.  If you need some examples of these training post, you can go to Goltred's Training post, somewhere below this one.  It's by Goltred obviously, and his post are somewhere near the bottom (quite a bit longer than these here, so you should see them.)  Any further questions or problems, just give me a ring.

I'd really like to see you just go for it and try it- we can edit if we have to.  Rock on.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Before I get goin, I just wanna say that you really, really need to post everything for training in here.  If you don't, we get delayed because I have to go looking around for it- we want this to be as quick and painless as possible but beneficial to you guys so you'll have a smooth transition into a squadron and be ready for activity.

Now- for your post:

You need to stay in one tense- you can't be jumpin around from third to first person all of the time and then second even...  Thas a little funky writing in second person at all, lol.  Also, I noticed your post was very bare- you barelly mentioned anything outside of exactly what you did.  Sure, you don't have to be all detailed and such, but you need to add a little more than 'he flew out of the hanger.'  I suppose I can't really keep you here because I don't think you're the best writer, but I'll point out as many flaws as possible and do my best to get you in good shape for posting.

Also, you need to seperate paragraphs so there's a space in between them like mine or you need to indent some how so the spacing in front of each paragraph is equal.  This just makes it easier on the eyes and is also smoother.

Your actual story post- I suppose you did what you were supposed to and as much as was expected, but I really think you can do better.  Like- how does this effect your character?  Has your character been looking up to this moment for an incredibly long time?  Why?  What drives you to go in get into a fighter anyways?  This seems to be very trivial in your post like you are just out there flying- like its an every day occurance.  While people in the SW universe are going to be far more affluent in the ways of flight and ships, they aren't necessarilly capable of flying.  You need to remember that your character has gone through intense training and learning just to get to this point- think of it as the real navy.  Do they just decide, alright, lets going flying today.  You'll have a naval instructer there I suppose, but probably not in the cockpit.  Probably in another fighter escorting you around.

Also, you neglected to mention who your trainer was- I'm wondering if you read the section entitled 'The Post'.  I mean, you must have because your doing this right now, but you need to choose a training officer from that list of VENA NPC's.  Also, you can pick people to fly with you in other fighters from the Naval Training Roster.  Make sure they are on the Naval 'TRAINING' Roster though...

So- I'd like you to fix up that bio the best you can and then post it in this thread so we can view it.  Anyone else who has comments- shoot.  So, don't go on to the atmospheric one just yet, I want you to get this post you've already done cleaned up and figured out so we can prevent mistakes and error correction in the next one.  Does that sound alright and do you understand what I've been saying above?  If not, just ask but do try to fix up your post the best you can with or without me- no need to waste precious time :>

Post it here when you're ready- the best to you.  Rock On.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

How can I help people if I can't help my self,  the only thing I am good for is war, War is my way, War is my life, War is the thing thast makes me whole, War is my self, War is what keeps me alive,
  War is what I will die by, By the Empire, With the Empire, As the Empire, By the gun, With the gun, As the gun, By the fighter, With the fighter, As the fighter, for the is all I am, I a War munger always hungry for war.

Fear attracts the fearful, The strong, The weak, The innocent,
Fear, What is it, I'll tell you, Fear Is My Allie.

 
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Peace is a Lie, There is only Anger
Through Anger, comes Strength
Through Strength, comes Power
Through Power, comes Victory
Through Victory my Chains are Broken
For the Dark Side will Set me FREE
Give in to your anger, let the hate Flow through you

Simply put- I did not say it was conversive to English theory, I stated it was more or less unnacceptable to my terms as your trainer.  I would like to see you more ready and reliable before even thinking of putting you in a squadron.  While you may say," I'd be perfectly fine on my own, just running around the VE...'  I would have to disagree.  While that may be substantial for a time, eventually you will become bored and the only thing to fall back on is your squadron- which you won't have unless you finish training.  I'm sorry, but that is my final word.  Part of this process (in its refined form of course) is to weed out those who will not support their groups when necessary- if you can not make a post make sense and carry your group's story forward...  Lets just say I'm more than willing to help out in any way possible- this would prove as a perfect opportunity to beta-test a tutor system suggested to me by a colleague. 

If you don't think you'll be able to make the post I'm suggesting them out to be (as I've done in my above post), I would appreciate you telling me so now.  Then I will begin the tutor style of training.  Let me know- rock on.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Mmmmkay- so is that a yes or no for the training?
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

I'll give you official word of my plans tonight- I have to work so that also means I need to appropriate our schedule to it.  Tonight I'll know that schedule and be able to give you directions. 

What I think we're going to do is some posting back and forth.  Like I'll pull you and another person or two in with us (NPCs of course) and I'll simulate a mission for you guys.  I'll fly as commander and you'll have to follow through with the necessaries I give you.  I think your problem for the most part in those post is that you weren't sure what to do- I can't really cure that but hopefully this'll give you a feel.  What I really wanna do is get you into the Star Wars way of story telling- get some of you easy grammer mistakes out of the way as well as story-telling mis-conjectures.  I'll edit this post or report back later tonight.  I hope this'll work for you.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

Sorry I couldn't get on to tell you last night, (little bro was doing some massive assignment), but now I can tell you that I don't have work for the rest of the week.  I don't really get paid that much, but this is cool too

I'll have a story post up for you by today- I'll edit this post or make another one behind the one you'll probably make in reply to this telling you where to go and what to do.  See you in a bit.
 
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CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]